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Zetsubou Sensei
Hey...Mod4Mod just as you stated in my queue : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/14425 =3

- Delete osb file & fully submit

[Easy]
Check spacing...Some parts seem off.
Some notes with Whistle + Clap sound horrible...I'd consider choosing just one hitsound...or make one hit sound begin and a different one end or so...
02:06:023 (4) - remove repeat...i think it sounds better without repeat
02:13:849 (4) - ^


[Hard]
I dont like how Easy and Hard have both the same slider velocity...I'd consider reducing it on Easy and remapping a little...
Seems fine.

[360's Insane]
Seems fine...But could use more hitsounds at the beginning and end of the song...

~STAR
Fenya
Amo esta cancion <333

Star~
Topic Starter
vivere

FPRC16 wrote:

Amo esta cancion <333

Star~

Gracias <3
Krisom
Ok, aquí vamos, este modpost lo hago pensando en burbuja, así que va en inglés...

General-
· You need an approach circle to get this ranked~! Use the default one if you don't want to create another skin element
· Beep! Offset should be the same on all diffs! darck's diff has 581 as the offset. If you change it, remember to resnap all notes and timing sections.
· For quality, please make the kiai time the same on all diffs! Recomended Kiai Time by me is 01:05:276 to 01:21:972 And from 02:03:711 to 02:20:407. I strongly suggest you to follow this closely for each diff since, well, some Kiai Times are starting on blue ticks and stuff, trust me, you wan't to avoid that.
· Hitsounds, they do not fit the music at all. Use the image below as a guide to hitsound your diffs again (by the way, use soft hitsounds through all the song). If you're confused, ask darck360, I alredy told him a bit about hitsounds...
(w means whistle) I'll do a modpost on where you should place finish hitsounds after you're done with this.
· Use grid lvl 3!! You should recheck spacing after this, but I'll point out spacing errors anyway


Easy+ -
· The name is fugly. Just rename it to normal or another creative name, like relaxing o such. This is nto mandatory, but the diff spread will look better that way.
00:44:892 (6) - Spacing
00:45:675 (7,8,9) - Spacing
00:47:762 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, this is the easiest diff, you don't want jumps here
00:51:153 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing, they are too close
00:54:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing, they are too far away
01:03:675 (1) - Make this one start at 01:03:414 ?
01:14:110 (1) - Spacing, they are too close
01:19:327 (3,1,2) - Spacing, they are too far away
01:34:979 (2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
01:53:240 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
02:06:023 (4) - This slider is not snapped correctly, its too short, check it on the timeline
02:11:240 (3,1,2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
02:18:544 (1,2,3) - Spacing, too far away

Hard -
00:23:240 (1,2) - Move the new combo to (2)
00:43:588 (4,1) - Spacing, they are too close
01:05:501 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing on this pattern feels odd
01:12:805 (3,1) - Spacing, they are WAY too far away
01:21:153 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Unstack these ones please
01:52:458 (9,1) - Spacing, they are too close
Way too many spacing issues to point them all out, please recheck this diff (or ask someone else to do it)

darck360's insane-
Seems fine, some patterns could get prettier, but it's okay like that, I could nazi-mod it when I recheck.


Needs more work before a bubble, I suggest you finding more modders and asking me for a recheck later. Also, ask darck360 to mod your diffs, he should be able to find more stuff~
Kiddo-Kun
[Easy+]
01:00:545 (3) - Lazy map?
01:03:675 - Add finish?
Lots of spacing problems with the 1/2 beats. Too far apart.

[Hard]

Some more inconsistent spacing.


[Darck360's Insane]
Make it the same timing.

Overall: My ears!!! These hitsounds don't fit well. Plus the spacing. I don't wanna star this yet....but Darck360's diff is good enough.

.....A very sad, Star.
niqoo_old
[b]Ee :D re piola el mapa :D

Ojala te la rankeen :D Nos vemos 8-) [/b]
Guzzzzm4n

Krisom wrote:

Ok, aquí vamos, este modpost lo hago pensando en burbuja, así que va en inglés...

General-
· You need an approach circle to get this ranked~! Use the default one if you don't want to create another skin element
· Beep! Offset should be the same on all diffs! darck's diff has 581 as the offset. If you change it, remember to resnap all notes and timing sections. Fixed
· For quality, please make the kiai time the same on all diffs! Recomended Kiai Time by me is 01:05:276 to 01:21:972 And from 02:03:711 to 02:20:407. I strongly suggest you to follow this closely for each diff since, well, some Kiai Times are starting on blue ticks and stuff, trust me, you wan't to avoid that.
· Hitsounds, they do not fit the music at all. Use the image below as a guide to hitsound your diffs again (by the way, use soft hitsounds through all the song). If you're confused, ask darck360, I alredy told him a bit about hitsounds...
(w means whistle) I'll do a modpost on where you should place finish hitsounds after you're done with this. Fixed
· Use grid lvl 3!! You should recheck spacing after this, but I'll point out spacing errors anyway


Easy+ -
· The name is fugly. Just rename it to normal or another creative name, like relaxing o such. This is nto mandatory, but the diff spread will look better that way.
00:44:892 (6) - Spacing
00:45:675 (7,8,9) - Spacing
00:47:762 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, this is the easiest diff, you don't want jumps here
00:51:153 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing, they are too close
00:54:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing, they are too far away
01:03:675 (1) - Make this one start at 01:03:414 ?
01:14:110 (1) - Spacing, they are too close
01:19:327 (3,1,2) - Spacing, they are too far away
01:34:979 (2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
01:53:240 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
02:06:023 (4) - This slider is not snapped correctly, its too short, check it on the timeline
02:11:240 (3,1,2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
02:18:544 (1,2,3) - Spacing, too far away

Hard -
00:23:240 (1,2) - Move the new combo to (2)
00:43:588 (4,1) - Spacing, they are too close
01:05:501 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing on this pattern feels odd
01:12:805 (3,1) - Spacing, they are WAY too far away
01:21:153 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Unstack these ones please
01:52:458 (9,1) - Spacing, they are too close
Way too many spacing issues to point them all out, please recheck this diff (or ask someone else to do it)

darck360's insane-
Seems fine, some patterns could get prettier, but it's okay like that, I could nazi-mod it when I recheck.


Needs more work before a bubble, I suggest you finding more modders and asking me for a recheck later. Also, ask darck360 to mod your diffs, he should be able to find more stuff~
Hitsounds Agregados & Corregido el Offset ;)

Download: Enrique Iglesias - Dimelo (vivere) [darck360's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
vivere

Krisom wrote:

Ok, aquí vamos, este modpost lo hago pensando en burbuja, así que va en inglés...

General-
· You need an approach circle to get this ranked~! Use the default one if you don't want to create another skin element
· Beep! Offset should be the same on all diffs! darck's diff has 581 as the offset. If you change it, remember to resnap all notes and timing sections.
· For quality, please make the kiai time the same on all diffs! Recomended Kiai Time by me is 01:05:276 to 01:21:972 And from 02:03:711 to 02:20:407. I strongly suggest you to follow this closely for each diff since, well, some Kiai Times are starting on blue ticks and stuff, trust me, you wan't to avoid that.
· Hitsounds, they do not fit the music at all. Use the image below as a guide to hitsound your diffs again (by the way, use soft hitsounds through all the song). If you're confused, ask darck360, I alredy told him a bit about hitsounds...
(w means whistle) I'll do a modpost on where you should place finish hitsounds after you're done with this.
· Use grid lvl 3!! You should recheck spacing after this, but I'll point out spacing errors anyway


Easy+ -
· The name is fugly. Just rename it to normal or another creative name, like relaxing o such. This is nto mandatory, but the diff spread will look better that way.
00:44:892 (6) - Spacing
00:45:675 (7,8,9) - Spacing
00:47:762 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, this is the easiest diff, you don't want jumps here
00:51:153 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing, they are too close
00:54:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing, they are too far away
01:03:675 (1) - Make this one start at 01:03:414 ?
01:14:110 (1) - Spacing, they are too close
01:19:327 (3,1,2) - Spacing, they are too far away
01:34:979 (2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
01:53:240 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
02:06:023 (4) - This slider is not snapped correctly, its too short, check it on the timeline
02:11:240 (3,1,2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
02:18:544 (1,2,3) - Spacing, too far away

Hard -
00:23:240 (1,2) - Move the new combo to (2)
00:43:588 (4,1) - Spacing, they are too close
01:05:501 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing on this pattern feels odd
01:12:805 (3,1) - Spacing, they are WAY too far away
01:21:153 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Unstack these ones please
01:52:458 (9,1) - Spacing, they are too close
Way too many spacing issues to point them all out, please recheck this diff (or ask someone else to do it)

darck360's insane-
Seems fine, some patterns could get prettier, but it's okay like that, I could nazi-mod it when I recheck.


Needs more work before a bubble, I suggest you finding more modders and asking me for a recheck later. Also, ask darck360 to mod your diffs, he should be able to find more stuff~
Thanks Kri, all Fixed~

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[Easy+]
01:00:545 (3) - Lazy map? No.
01:03:675 - Add finish? mmm... ok
Lots of spacing problems with the 1/2 beats. Too far apart.

[Hard]

Some more inconsistent spacing.


[Darck360's Insane]
Make it the same timing.

Overall: My ears!!! These hitsounds don't fit well. Plus the spacing. I don't wanna star this yet....but Darck360's diff is good enough.

.....A very sad, Star.
Thank for u mod~
Topic Starter
vivere
Updated 8-) ~
Verdisphena
Hi ~~

darck360's Insane :

00:30:284 (3) - Add a clap
00:31:066 (7) - Add a clap at the end of the slider
01:26:110 (1) - Silence the spinner ;<
02:10:458 (3) - Add a clap
02:11:240 (7) - Add a clap at the end of the slider
02:18:802 (3) - Add a clap
02:19:588 (7) - Add a clap at the end of the slider
02:35:501 (3) - Add a clap
02:36:545 (7) - ^


Hard :

Approach rate +1

00:52:979 (9) - Delete the finish
01:13:849 (1) - Wtf slider
01:16:979 (4) - ^
01:37:849 (1) - Remove the new combo
01:40:458 (1) - ^
01:40:718 (6) - New combo where
01:42:805 (5) - Delete the note
01:43:588 (1) - The spinner begins in 01:42:805 and finish in 01:46:979 ~
02:18:545 (1) - Silence the spinner :3
02:28:979 (4,5,6,7,8) - Wtf


Fugly :

00:20:892 (7) - Wtf, please edit the slider o-o
01:05:762 (1,2,3,4) - Delete the clap at the beginning of the slider
01:55:849 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Very hard for a easy
02:10:197 (1,2,3) - ^
02:13:849 (4) - ^


That is all ~
Luvdic
Insane:
Realmente no vi nada que no sea rankeable en el map (daria pena si lo tuviera con estos +60 priority >_>). Pero te puedo sugerir lo siguiente:

00:21:936 - Considera agregar un whistle aqui
00:22:458 - Considera agregar un whistle aqui
00:22:979 - Considera agregar un whistle aqui
Y así, igual para todos los demás

00:51:284 (2) - Mueve esto, de tal forma que empieze a partir de 00:51:545, y acortalo de tal forma que termine en 00:52:197 (aunque lo ideal es que termine en 00:51:936, pero es tu decision). Además, agrégale un nuevo circle en 00:51:414. Así fluye mejor con sus vocales...

Además, puedo observar que en algunas partes se nota que los diseños tienen un buen acabado, mientras que otras partes no... Me gustaría que todo el map fuera consistente con eso (más que todo son los diseños de tus sliders lo que no me gustan) . Ejemplo de ello:

00:16:197 (7,8,9) - Acabados feos. De hecho, haz esto. Borra estos 3 sliders. Luego copia el siguiente codigo:

192,288,16197,2,0,B|262:252|264:162|187:131,1,200,0|8
127,210,16979,2,0,B|57:174|55:84|132:53,1,200
192,133,17762,2,0,B|400:133,2,200,8|0|8

Abre tu archivo .osu (con tu block de notas), y pegas ese codigo justo despues de donde dice [HitObjects]. Si te gusta, quedatelo, si no te gusta, solo dale update. (Lo que hice fue darle un acabado mas bonito, sólo darte un ejemplo de lo que puedes hacer en los demás >_>)

Además, he de resaltar que son detalles como estos que hace que un map se vea mucho mejor. Por lo que realmente les aconsejo que les den buenos acabados. Y ojo, con esto no quiero decir que simetria perfecta = bonito >_>

Hard:

00:50:631 (2,3,4,5) - Suena horrible. Simplemente no fluye bien con la canción. Aconsejo que trates de seguir a los vocales :x
Umm... supongo que debería de decir lo mismo sobre los acabados.. pero ya este caso es algo diferente...

Además: No me gusta que tus kiai times sean algo inconsistentes:
00:21:545 - Hay un pequeño break de kiai al igual que alrededor de 01:11:501, pero mas o menos en 02:09:936 me esperaba ese pequeño break también

Normal:

01:20:110 (1,2) - Lol, yo que generalmente no modeo spacing, pero, usa distance snap 1.0x aqui.
02:28:718 - Kiai? Además, recomendaría que usaras los mismos kiai times que usaste en las otras dificultades para que sean consistentes.

Umm supongo que eso es todo.
IceBeam
I've modded it already,my star is under DC's one.

Good luck again.
Krisom
...


Hombre, cuando dije "The name is fugly" me referia a que el nombre era horrible y que lo cambiaras a "Normal", no que lo cambiaras a fugly o_o

Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
Revengexsoyah

Krisom wrote:

...


Hombre, cuando dije "The name is fugly" me referia a que el nombre era horrible y que lo cambiaras a "Normal", no que lo cambiaras a fugly o_o

Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

AHHAHAHAHA XD DIOS MIO MUERO DE RISA DISCULPEN
FAIIIL
Topic Starter
vivere

IceBeam wrote:

I've modded it already,my star is under DC's one.

Good luck again.
e.e
Topic Starter
vivere

Krisom wrote:

...


Hombre, cuando dije "The name is fugly" me referia a que el nombre era horrible y que lo cambiaras a "Normal", no que lo cambiaras a fugly o_o

Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

soyah wrote:

Krisom wrote:

...


Hombre, cuando dije "The name is fugly" me referia a que el nombre era horrible y que lo cambiaras a "Normal", no que lo cambiaras a fugly o_o

Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

AHHAHAHAHA XD DIOS MIO MUERO DE RISA DISCULPEN
FAIIIL
Verdisphena

Krisom wrote:

...


Hombre, cuando dije "The name is fugly" me referia a que el nombre era horrible y que lo cambiaras a "Normal", no que lo cambiaras a fugly o_o

Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
Best post 2010
Gonzvlo
Hey (:

Bueno iba a revisar el mapa , pero creo que ya tuvo suficiente modding. Lo único que no se ve muy bien es el wallpaper, porque las letras que agregaste no combinan bien con el fondo original, intenté mejorar eso.

Úsalo si te gusta:



Por cierto, volvi a descargar el mapa y el archivo "approachcircle.png" no se encuentra ahí, debes hacer un full submission.
Mion-Nya
Mod~

solo modeare lo exterior xD

1 Cambia los combo colours por estos xD

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 255,197,89
Combo3 : 183,124,81
Combo4 : 90,63,37


para hacerlo abre el .osu con el block de notas, por ejemplo abre primero este:

Enrique Iglesias - Dimelo (vivere) [Normal].osu

te fijas donde dice colours, y remplasas los que estan por los de arriba y asi
si te equivocas simplemente re-bajas esa diff que modificaste XD o haces copia de seguridad
acto seguido abres esa diff atraves del osu y ya tenes los colores
Topic Starter
vivere

Gonzvlo wrote:

Hey (:

Bueno iba a revisar el mapa , pero creo que ya tuvo suficiente modding. Lo único que no se ve muy bien es el wallpaper, porque las letras que agregaste no combinan bien con el fondo original, intenté mejorar eso.

Úsalo si te gusta:



Por cierto, volvi a descargar el mapa y el archivo "approachcircle.png" no se encuentra ahí, debes hacer un full submission.

Mion-Nya wrote:

Mod~

solo modeare lo exterior xD

1 Cambia los combo colours por estos xD

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 255,197,89
Combo3 : 183,124,81
Combo4 : 90,63,37


para hacerlo abre el .osu con el block de notas, por ejemplo abre primero este:

Enrique Iglesias - Dimelo (vivere) [Normal].osu

te fijas donde dice colours, y remplasas los que estan por los de arriba y asi
si te equivocas simplemente re-bajas esa diff que modificaste XD o haces copia de seguridad
acto seguido abres esa diff atraves del osu y ya tenes los colores
"Kwaaii!" <3
Mion-Nya
Antu Villegas
Hey!, Hola

Estaba probando y creo que posiblemente te guste usar este hitcircleoverlay ;)



Aunque tambien creo que seria mejor si fuese mas grueso el borde

vos decime ^^
Cristian
podrias poner una imagen asi como una parte de corazon en combo bursts
ademas tienes que cambiar esto del post:

Easy+: is finished. (Deberia ser "Normal")

Hard: is finished. (este esta bien)

360's insane: is finished. (este deberia ser "darck360's Insane")
Topic Starter
vivere

Kurisuchianu wrote:

podrias poner una imagen asi como una parte de corazon en combo bursts
ademas tienes que cambiar esto del post:

Easy+: is finished. (Deberia ser "Normal")

Hard: is finished. (este esta bien)

360's insane: is finished. (este deberia ser "darck360's Insane")
XDDD
Gonzvlo
General
  1. Usa los mismos colores para todas las diff, Los colores de Easy parecen ser los mejores por que se ven bien con los Skin Elements.
  2. "Star2" es muy grande, debería ser 52x50
  3. Agregar los Sliderb0,1... del skin default no son necesarios, sugiero que los elimines.
  4. Es necesario agregar "approachcircle"
Normal
  1. 00:16:753 (2) - Muevelo 2 grids a la derecha, para que el spacing sea el correcto. No olvides mover las siguientes notas también.
  2. 00:20:406 (6,7) - Unstack, Los stacks son muy difíciles para los principiantes.
  3. 00:23:536 (1) - Muevelo un poco para que no este en el mismo lugar que el borde del ultimo slider.
  4. 00:23:536 (1,2) - La misma sugerencia de los stacks.
  5. 00:25:101 (4,5) - El spacing no es el mismo es un poco mas amplio, reducelo 1/2 grids.
  6. 00:27:188 (7) - Probablemente muchos repeats para una dificultad como esta, Reduce a solo 2 repeats y agrega 2 circulos ó 1 slider.
  7. 00:41:536 (2,3) - Reduce el spacing un poco usando distance snap (Recuerda 0.8x)
  8. 00:44:927 (6) - Uh este está muy lejos reduce el spacing.
  9. 00:46:493 (8) - ^
  10. 00:47:797 (1,2,3,4) - Aunque los jumps son pequeños, las notas están posicionadas en 1/2 así que sugeriría que uses el spacing normal.
  11. 00:50:145 (2,3) - Sugiero eliminar este stack.
  12. 00:56:145 (4,5) - ^
  13. 01:00:580 (3) - Muchos repeats? Sugiero usar solo 2 y agregar circulos ó un slider.
  14. 01:20:927 (2) - Esto está muy lejos, acercalo más a la otra nota.
  15. 01:38:406 (3) - ^
  16. 01:40:232 (2) - Sugiero quitar el stack, especialmente por el slider anterior.
  17. 01:59:797 (1) - Sería bueno separa este slider y luego seguir con la secuencia (Por el New Combo)
  18. 45,805 - Este timing point no está bien posicionado por unos cuantos ms, posiciónalo justo en la linea blanca.
  19. Lo mismo pasa con los otros timing points, asegurate que están bien posicionados (Los que inician o terminan un Kiai)
  20. Asegurate que todo en la dificultad está correctamente espaciado con 0.8x, vi por ahí algunos errores menores que no los señalé pero están ahí , asi que si quieres los arreglas.

Hard
  1. Haz un re-snap a todas las notas ya que no están correctamente... "Snaped"
  2. 00:23:536 (1) - Remueve el New combo.
  3. 00:37:887 (1,2,3) - Distancialos un poco de acuerdo con distance snap.
  4. 00:53:017 (9,1) - Este stack se ve mal , recomiendo quitarlo.
  5. 01:37:884 (1) - Quita el New Combo.
  6. 02:08:145 (6) - New Combo.
  7. 02:10:232 (1) - Remueve el New Combo.
  8. 02:37:101 - Kiai time debería terminar aquí
  9. 45,805 - Este timing point no está bien posicionado por unos cuantos ms, posiciónalo justo en la linea blanca.
  10. Lo mismo pasa con los otros timing points, asegurate que están bien posicionados (Los que inician o terminan un Kiai)
Darck360's Insane
  1. 00:19:232 (2) - Muevelo a: 00:19:362, suena mejor.
  2. 00:50:666 (8,1) - Swap los New Combo.
  3. 01:02:927 (10) - Sería genial si bajaras el volumen poco a poco para este slider.
  4. 01:09:449 (4) - New Combo para mantener la consistencia.
  5. 02:14:666 (5) - ^
  6. 02:37:101 - Kiai time debería terminar aquí.
  7. 45,805 - Este timing point no está bien posicionado por unos cuantos ms, posiciónalo justo en la linea blanca.
  8. Lo mismo pasa con los otros timing points, asegurate que están bien posicionados (Los que inician o terminan un Kiai)
Cool (:
Anto
vivere <3333 :)
Cheedar
nice map.
Topic Starter
vivere
All fixed~

Edit: Updated (=
ZLOdeuka-
hello~



Normal

Slider Tick Rate ~ 2

00:20:927 (7,1) - spacing

01:00:580 (3) - remove a single return. spinner here and start 01:03:188 (1) and finish here 01:05:275

01:09:971 (5) - new combo

01:19:362 (3,1) - spasing

01:53:275 (1,2,3,4) - ^

02:28:(753) (1) - finish

02:30:319 (5,1) - spasing

02:37:101 - finish

Hard

02:00:840 (1) - move a 02:01:623 (1). 02:00:840 ~ 02:01:362 - slider mb?

02:37:101 - finish kiai time

[Insane]

00:51:319 (3) - move a 00:51:449 (3). 00:51:319 (2) - circle

Cool song ~

S T A R ~
Topic Starter
vivere
SPOILER

ZLOdeuka wrote:

hello~

[General]

Normal

Slider Tick Rate ~ 2

00:20:927 (7,1) - spacing

01:00:580 (3) - remove a single return. spinner here and start 01:03:188 (1) and finish here 01:05:275

01:09:971 (5) - new combo

01:19:362 (3,1) - spasing

01:53:275 (1,2,3,4) - ^

02:28:(753) (1) - finish

02:30:319 (5,1) - spasing

02:37:101 - finish

Hard

02:00:840 (1) - move a 02:01:623 (1). 02:00:840 ~ 02:01:362 - slider mb?

02:37:101 - finish kiai time

[Insane]

00:51:319 (3) - move a 00:51:449 (3). 00:51:319 (2) - circle

Cool song ~

S T A R ~

Thanks !

Edit: Updated ^^
Sallad4ever
Hi vivere

[General]
- in the song folder I saw the slideb set, but it's not complete. You need to add sliderb0 and sliderb1 so it'll show up. Or you can delete all the sliderb png, then full submit it
- add an approach circle, take it from the template skin if you want
- 1.8 mb for the bg? wow...
- the hitsound on both Normal and Hard is very few, try adding a 1/1 clap pattern like in darck's diff. That way your hitsound will be a lot better
- what is the viv in the tag means?

[Normal]
Make the kiai in this diff the same with Hard diff
00:15:188 (1) - shorten this slider 1/2 beat
00:27:188 (7) - ^
00:28:753 (8) - add finish at the end of the slider?
00:41:797 (3) - I don't see how this timing section is used, remove it if it's not used
00:56:666 (5) - unstack this?
01:20:145 (1) - spacing is too far, if this is a jump it's not a very good one
01:40:232 (2) - unstack this?
01:51:449 (2) - ^ or stack it perfectly under 01:48:058 (1)
02:08:927 (2) - fix the spacing please
02:30:840 (1) - this sounds better if you move it back 1/2 beat
02:31:884 (x) - add a note here if you do ^
I don't like the spacing inconsistencies here, try to use only 1 spacing, 1x distance snap is a good one

[Hard]
HP drain + 2 please
01:35:014 (2) - anti jump?
01:54:449 (4,5) - not a good stack, might as well stack them all or spread them
02:18:319 (10) - add finish?
02:29:014 (4,5,6,7) - hmm what are this notes following to? mapping the vocal is better here imo
in the harder diff, the spacing could be more variant, but try not to overuse them. Especially for the normal spacing between notes

[darck's Insane]
This is play more like a hard then an insane
00:52:493 (4) - remove this and lengthen 00:51:449 (3) by 1/4 beat
01:46:232 (10) - the whistle sounds weird imo, remove it?
Plays very nice, but the pattern are to flat. Next time try to make a more interesting pattern (symmetry, cutting slider, etc)

Good luck with your map ;)
~star
Topic Starter
vivere
SPOILER

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi vivere

[General]
- in the song folder I saw the slideb set, but it's not complete. You need to add sliderb0 and sliderb1 so it'll show up. Or you can delete all the sliderb png, then full submit it
- add an approach circle, take it from the template skin if you want
- 1.8 mb for the bg? wow...
- the hitsound on both Normal and Hard is very few, try adding a 1/1 clap pattern like in darck's diff. That way your hitsound will be a lot better
- what is the viv in the tag means?

[Normal]
Make the kiai in this diff the same with Hard diff
00:15:188 (1) - shorten this slider 1/2 beat
00:27:188 (7) - ^
00:28:753 (8) - add finish at the end of the slider?
00:41:797 (3) - I don't see how this timing section is used, remove it if it's not used
00:56:666 (5) - unstack this?
01:20:145 (1) - spacing is too far, if this is a jump it's not a very good one
01:40:232 (2) - unstack this?
01:51:449 (2) - ^ or stack it perfectly under 01:48:058 (1)
02:08:927 (2) - fix the spacing please
02:30:840 (1) - this sounds better if you move it back 1/2 beat
02:31:884 (x) - add a note here if you do ^
I don't like the spacing inconsistencies here, try to use only 1 spacing, 1x distance snap is a good one

[Hard]
HP drain + 2 please
01:35:014 (2) - anti jump?
01:54:449 (4,5) - not a good stack, might as well stack them all or spread them
02:18:319 (10) - add finish?
02:29:014 (4,5,6,7) - hmm what are this notes following to? mapping the vocal is better here imo
in the harder diff, the spacing could be more variant, but try not to overuse them. Especially for the normal spacing between notes

[darck's Insane]
This is play more like a hard then an insane
00:52:493 (4) - remove this and lengthen 00:51:449 (3) by 1/4 beat
01:46:232 (10) - the whistle sounds weird imo, remove it?
Plays very nice, but the pattern are to flat. Next time try to make a more interesting pattern (symmetry, cutting slider, etc)

Good luck with your map ;)
~star

Thanks :>

PS: Updated
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Hola

Tags:viv?

Normal
02:16:232(3) - remove whistle on the slider(not 02:16:232 and 02;18:319)

suggestions
00:48:319(3) - remove clap
00:56:145(4) - remove finish at the end of slider and add a whistle hitsound in the end
01:00:580(3) - add clap at the 2nd repeating arrow(01:01:623)
01:38:406(3) - remove finish
01:38:666(4) - add finish

Hard
3rd kiai time start at 01:05:275

00:33:917(6) - make symetric


suggestions
00:56:666(6) - remove clap
01:04:493(2) - finish at the end of the slider
01:06:319(2) - clap
01:06:580(3) - remove clap
01:38:406(7) - remove clap
01:07:362(4) - clap

darck360's Insane

suggestions
00:45:188(9) - remove clap at the beginning
00:51:449(3) - make symetric
00:56:406(1) - remove finish and add clap

star~
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. actually, when i saw 'by: Vivere' on the BG, i thought you were the singer
  2. and even in darck360's diff, there is still by: Vivere lol
[darck360]:
  1. use AR7, 8 is not the best choice and, this is a Hard diff +_+
[Hard]:
  1. 00:55:623 (4,5,6,7) - strange stack, set stack leniency +2 in this diff
star~
Topic Starter
vivere

H-boy wrote:

Hola

Tags:viv?

Normal
02:16:232(3) - remove whistle on the slider(not 02:16:232 and 02;18:319) 02:17:275 :P

suggestions
00:48:319(3) - remove clap ok
00:56:145(4) - remove finish at the end of slider and add a whistle hitsound in the end mmm... ok
01:00:580(3) - add clap at the 2nd repeating arrow(01:01:623) ^
01:38:406(3) - remove finish ^
01:38:666(4) - add finish ^

Hard
3rd kiai time start at 01:05:275 ~

00:33:917(6) - make symetric No
[attachment=0:3a5c6]3.png[/attachment:3a5c6]

suggestions
00:56:666(6) - remove clap ok
01:04:493(2) - finish at the end of the slider ^
01:06:319(2) - clap ^
01:06:580(3) - remove clap ^
01:38:406(7) - remove clap ^
01:07:362(4) - clap ^

darck360's Insane

suggestions
00:45:188(9) - remove clap at the beginning ok
00:51:449(3) - make symetric No :/
00:56:406(1) - remove finish and add clap ^

star~
Thanks for you mod ^^

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
actually, when i saw 'by: Vivere' on the BG, i thought you were the singer lol
and even in darck360's diff, there is still by: Vivere lol Changed xD

[darck360]:
use AR7, 8 is not the best choice and, this is a Hard diff +_+

[Hard]:
00:55:623 (4,5,6,7) - strange stack, set stack leniency +2 in this diff

star~
Ty ^^


Updated!
Topic Starter
vivere
need more mods :<
Xeno_old
Beat placement is good, for all the difficulties, but I personally feel, this map-set can be made a LOT better, if you focus a little more on your sliders.

[Normal]
00:44:927 (6,7) - Minor Spacing
00:56:666 (5,1) - ^
01:19:362 (3,1) - Critical Spacing!
01:55:884 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Shouldn't be in a normal, in my opinion =p

[Hard]
00:33:971 (6) - Ugly.
00:55:623 (4,5,6,7) - Combo Colors + Background, makes this hard to read.
01:13:884 (1) - My heart cries when I see sliders like this :<
01:35:014 (2) - ^

[darck360's Insane]

00:52:493 (4) - doesn't follow music, and makes no sense. recommend you delete it.

Apart from that, your sliders also make go :<
Topic Starter
vivere

Xeno32 wrote:

Beat placement is good, for all the difficulties, but I personally feel, this map-set can be made a LOT better, if you focus a little more on your sliders.

[Normal]
00:44:927 (6,7) - Minor Spacing
00:56:666 (5,1) - ^
01:19:362 (3,1) - Critical Spacing!
01:55:884 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Shouldn't be in a normal, in my opinion =p

[Hard]
00:33:971 (6) - Ugly. ?
00:55:623 (4,5,6,7) - Combo Colors + Background, makes this hard to read. No D:
01:13:884 (1) - My heart cries when I see sliders like this :< wth? I like this
01:35:014 (2) - ^ ^

[darck360's Insane]

00:52:493 (4) - doesn't follow music, and makes no sense. recommend you delete it. Ok :>

Apart from that, your sliders also make go :< :/


Ty :>

PS: Updated
Slowmotion_old
Normal
00:20:927 (7) - this sliders it's ugly a bit .. change it
00:30:319 (1) - why this spin here?
00:38:145 (1) - ^
00:47:797 (1,2,4) - very finishes isn't good IMO
01:09:971 (1,2,3) - i don't like of their sliders, it's so ugly IMO
01:40:753 (1) - why this spinner?
01:45:449 (1) - ^
01:48:058 (1) - IMO its a bad slider =/

Hard
00:53:275 (1,2,3,4) - be creative :D
01:40:753 (2,4,6) - ^
01:55:623 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:12:319 (1,2,3,4) - ^ O.o

darck360's Insane
it's perfect ;)

i like the song :D good look vivere


artpiggo
Normal

00:20:927 (7) - not good one
00 47 792 1,2,3,4 distance snap
01 32 406 ^
01 54 840 flip horizon and rotate clockwise 90
01 57 449 should use 1,2 template
02 32 406 should parallel to slider 1

Hard

I think kiai time should same in all diff
distance snap in many point isn't fixed I think it's around 1.3-1.2x fixed it.
00 18 580 flip horizon maybe
00 41 536 should straight to previous one
00 59 014 should parallel to 1,2,3
01 12 319 maybe reverse selection it
01 17 014 not beautiful one and should symmetry to 5
01 21 188 should be new combo and rotate it
02 05 797 should be equal to slider 1
02 10 753 should be same as 1,2,3 in reverse one

Insane is very smooth map ! I only miss at 00 57 840 ! Can you get rid of it? It'll be better I think : D

ah! one more thing, the brown combo color is too confuse , it's the same as background . Can you fix it, please? :(

Star !
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