choche wrote:

Cosas que debes cambiar
Sugerencias

[General]

Establece un previewpoint, por ejemplo (yo pondria): 14631
Intenta que todas las dificultades duren lo mismo (queda mejor aunque no sea indispensable xD)
Me gusta mucho, creo que le voy a poder encontrar pocos errores xD

[Easy]

00:40:723 (1,2,3) - En easy las notas "escondidas" no quedan muy bien, una escondida esta bien, pero 2 o mas ya no (se hacen dificiles para los principiantes) <--- Changed
00:46:464 (8) - ^ <--- Changed
01:21:689 (3,4) - ^ <--- Changed

No veo mas cosas en esta dificultad, esta muy bien hecho

[Normal]

yo seguiría más el ritmo de la voz, por ejemplo:
01:22:210 - 1:30:169 - En este break quedaria bien que siguieras la voz.


Me encanta, para mi esta perfecta

[360's Insane]

este no te lo modeo, porque soy malisimo modeando y jugando insane

*star*

Lizbeth wrote:

holas <3

360' Insane
00:58:336 - podrías agregar una nota aquí =3
01:07:077 (1) - no suelo hace nazi modding.. pero este slider puede ser mas bonito.. dale un mejor curva <3
01:51:043 (4) - creo que suena mejor si este slider empieza aquí: 01:51:173 y termina acá: 01:51:434 -
me gusto mucho esta dificultad, esta muy bien hecha, felicidades =3

Normal+
00:32:113 (1,2,3) - esto esta algo difícil... aunque supongo que se perdona porque es un normal +
01:52:478 (9) - esta muy cerca del 8, fallé esa, le di mas temprano xD
esta difícil la ultima nota.. que evil viv =O
ok aparte de esto, todo esta en orden, muy buena dificultad también =D

Easy
Este mas parece un normal >.<


Creo que estaría bien si cambiaras los nombres de las dificultades:
Normal+ = Hard
Easy = Normal

Dejo estrella =3
buen mapita <3

Lizbeth wrote:

rechekando por aqui, solo encontre una cosita =3

Normal
01:53:000 (1) - empieza este slider aqui: 01:53:261

Despues todo bien

Gonzvlo wrote:

Hey , nice map (:

I will mod it later but I noticed that the "hitcircle" overlaps with the numbers, that looks kinda bad ): I tried to save you some work and made some hitcircles or You can ask Beuchi to make the "star" of the hitcircle a little bigger

SPOILER

[attachment=2:3a28c]op1.jpg[/attachment:3a28c]

[attachment=1:3a28c]op3.jpg[/attachment:3a28c]

Oh and Star~

BattorA wrote:

Staaar :3

orioncomet wrote:

try Offset 545 and resnap all note ~ It's sound better to me

And If you don't like the offset that I give, but you still need to resnap all note all your diffculties

SadKangaroo wrote:

I was really pleasantly surprised by your post in my queue

But,you forgot that I've already modded it
Anyway,good luck again.

FPRC16 wrote:

Amo esta cancion <333

Star~

Krisom wrote:

Ok, aquí vamos, este modpost lo hago pensando en burbuja, así que va en inglés...

General-
· You need an approach circle to get this ranked~! Use the default one if you don't want to create another skin element
· Beep! Offset should be the same on all diffs! darck's diff has 581 as the offset. If you change it, remember to resnap all notes and timing sections. Fixed
· For quality, please make the kiai time the same on all diffs! Recomended Kiai Time by me is 01:05:276 to 01:21:972 And from 02:03:711 to 02:20:407. I strongly suggest you to follow this closely for each diff since, well, some Kiai Times are starting on blue ticks and stuff, trust me, you wan't to avoid that.
· Hitsounds, they do not fit the music at all. Use the image below as a guide to hitsound your diffs again (by the way, use soft hitsounds through all the song). If you're confused, ask darck360, I alredy told him a bit about hitsounds...
(w means whistle) I'll do a modpost on where you should place finish hitsounds after you're done with this. Fixed
· Use grid lvl 3!! You should recheck spacing after this, but I'll point out spacing errors anyway


Easy+ -
· The name is fugly. Just rename it to normal or another creative name, like relaxing o such. This is nto mandatory, but the diff spread will look better that way.
00:44:892 (6) - Spacing
00:45:675 (7,8,9) - Spacing
00:47:762 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, this is the easiest diff, you don't want jumps here
00:51:153 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing, they are too close
00:54:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing, they are too far away
01:03:675 (1) - Make this one start at 01:03:414 ?
01:14:110 (1) - Spacing, they are too close
01:19:327 (3,1,2) - Spacing, they are too far away
01:34:979 (2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
01:53:240 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
02:06:023 (4) - This slider is not snapped correctly, its too short, check it on the timeline
02:11:240 (3,1,2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
02:18:544 (1,2,3) - Spacing, too far away

Hard -
00:23:240 (1,2) - Move the new combo to (2)
00:43:588 (4,1) - Spacing, they are too close
01:05:501 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing on this pattern feels odd
01:12:805 (3,1) - Spacing, they are WAY too far away
01:21:153 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Unstack these ones please
01:52:458 (9,1) - Spacing, they are too close
Way too many spacing issues to point them all out, please recheck this diff (or ask someone else to do it)

darck360's insane-
Seems fine, some patterns could get prettier, but it's okay like that, I could nazi-mod it when I recheck.


Needs more work before a bubble, I suggest you finding more modders and asking me for a recheck later. Also, ask darck360 to mod your diffs, he should be able to find more stuff~

Hitsounds Agregados & Corregido el Offset

Krisom wrote:

Ok, aquí vamos, este modpost lo hago pensando en burbuja, así que va en inglés...

General-
· You need an approach circle to get this ranked~! Use the default one if you don't want to create another skin element
· Beep! Offset should be the same on all diffs! darck's diff has 581 as the offset. If you change it, remember to resnap all notes and timing sections.
· For quality, please make the kiai time the same on all diffs! Recomended Kiai Time by me is 01:05:276 to 01:21:972 And from 02:03:711 to 02:20:407. I strongly suggest you to follow this closely for each diff since, well, some Kiai Times are starting on blue ticks and stuff, trust me, you wan't to avoid that.
· Hitsounds, they do not fit the music at all. Use the image below as a guide to hitsound your diffs again (by the way, use soft hitsounds through all the song). If you're confused, ask darck360, I alredy told him a bit about hitsounds...
(w means whistle) I'll do a modpost on where you should place finish hitsounds after you're done with this.
· Use grid lvl 3!! You should recheck spacing after this, but I'll point out spacing errors anyway


Easy+ -
· The name is fugly. Just rename it to normal or another creative name, like relaxing o such. This is nto mandatory, but the diff spread will look better that way.
00:44:892 (6) - Spacing
00:45:675 (7,8,9) - Spacing
00:47:762 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, this is the easiest diff, you don't want jumps here
00:51:153 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing, they are too close
00:54:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing, they are too far away
01:03:675 (1) - Make this one start at 01:03:414 ?
01:14:110 (1) - Spacing, they are too close
01:19:327 (3,1,2) - Spacing, they are too far away
01:34:979 (2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
01:53:240 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
02:06:023 (4) - This slider is not snapped correctly, its too short, check it on the timeline
02:11:240 (3,1,2,3,4) - Spacing, too far away
02:18:544 (1,2,3) - Spacing, too far away

Hard -
00:23:240 (1,2) - Move the new combo to (2)
00:43:588 (4,1) - Spacing, they are too close
01:05:501 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing on this pattern feels odd
01:12:805 (3,1) - Spacing, they are WAY too far away
01:21:153 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Unstack these ones please
01:52:458 (9,1) - Spacing, they are too close
Way too many spacing issues to point them all out, please recheck this diff (or ask someone else to do it)

darck360's insane-
Seems fine, some patterns could get prettier, but it's okay like that, I could nazi-mod it when I recheck.


Needs more work before a bubble, I suggest you finding more modders and asking me for a recheck later. Also, ask darck360 to mod your diffs, he should be able to find more stuff~

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[Easy+]
01:00:545 (3) - Lazy map? No.
01:03:675 - Add finish? mmm... ok
Lots of spacing problems with the 1/2 beats. Too far apart.

[Hard]

Some more inconsistent spacing.


[Darck360's Insane]
Make it the same timing.

Overall: My ears!!! These hitsounds don't fit well. Plus the spacing. I don't wanna star this yet....but Darck360's diff is good enough.

.....A very sad, Star.

Krisom wrote:

...


Hombre, cuando dije "The name is fugly" me referia a que el nombre era horrible y que lo cambiaras a "Normal", no que lo cambiaras a fugly o_o

Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

IceBeam wrote:

I've modded it already,my star is under DC's one.

Good luck again.

Krisom wrote:

...


Hombre, cuando dije "The name is fugly" me referia a que el nombre era horrible y que lo cambiaras a "Normal", no que lo cambiaras a fugly o_o

Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

soyah wrote:

Krisom wrote:

...


Hombre, cuando dije "The name is fugly" me referia a que el nombre era horrible y que lo cambiaras a "Normal", no que lo cambiaras a fugly o_o

Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

AHHAHAHAHA XD DIOS MIO MUERO DE RISA DISCULPEN
FAIIIL

Krisom wrote:

...


Hombre, cuando dije "The name is fugly" me referia a que el nombre era horrible y que lo cambiaras a "Normal", no que lo cambiaras a fugly o_o

Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

Gonzvlo wrote:

Hey (:

Bueno iba a revisar el mapa , pero creo que ya tuvo suficiente modding. Lo único que no se ve muy bien es el wallpaper, porque las letras que agregaste no combinan bien con el fondo original, intenté mejorar eso.

Úsalo si te gusta:



Por cierto, volvi a descargar el mapa y el archivo "approachcircle.png" no se encuentra ahí, debes hacer un full submission.

Mion-Nya wrote:

Mod~

solo modeare lo exterior xD

1 Cambia los combo colours por estos xD

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 255,197,89
Combo3 : 183,124,81
Combo4 : 90,63,37

para hacerlo abre el .osu con el block de notas, por ejemplo abre primero este:

Enrique Iglesias - Dimelo (vivere) [Normal].osu

te fijas donde dice colours, y remplasas los que estan por los de arriba y asi
si te equivocas simplemente re-bajas esa diff que modificaste XD o haces copia de seguridad
acto seguido abres esa diff atraves del osu y ya tenes los colores

Kurisuchianu wrote:

podrias poner una imagen asi como una parte de corazon en combo bursts
ademas tienes que cambiar esto del post:

Easy+: is finished. (Deberia ser "Normal")

Hard: is finished. (este esta bien)

360's insane: is finished. (este deberia ser "darck360's Insane")

1. Usa los mismos colores para todas las diff, Los colores de Easy parecen ser los mejores por que se ven bien con los Skin Elements.
2. "Star2" es muy grande, debería ser 52x50
3. Agregar los Sliderb0,1... del skin default no son necesarios, sugiero que los elimines.
4. Es necesario agregar "approachcircle"

1. 00:16:753 (2) - Muevelo 2 grids a la derecha, para que el spacing sea el correcto. No olvides mover las siguientes notas también.
2. 00:20:406 (6,7) - Unstack, Los stacks son muy difíciles para los principiantes.
3. 00:23:536 (1) - Muevelo un poco para que no este en el mismo lugar que el borde del ultimo slider.
4. 00:23:536 (1,2) - La misma sugerencia de los stacks.
5. 00:25:101 (4,5) - El spacing no es el mismo es un poco mas amplio, reducelo 1/2 grids.
6. 00:27:188 (7) - Probablemente muchos repeats para una dificultad como esta, Reduce a solo 2 repeats y agrega 2 circulos ó 1 slider.
7. 00:41:536 (2,3) - Reduce el spacing un poco usando distance snap (Recuerda 0.8x)
8. 00:44:927 (6) - Uh este está muy lejos reduce el spacing.
9. 00:46:493 (8) - ^
10. 00:47:797 (1,2,3,4) - Aunque los jumps son pequeños, las notas están posicionadas en 1/2 así que sugeriría que uses el spacing normal.
11. 00:50:145 (2,3) - Sugiero eliminar este stack.
12. 00:56:145 (4,5) - ^
13. 01:00:580 (3) - Muchos repeats? Sugiero usar solo 2 y agregar circulos ó un slider.
14. 01:20:927 (2) - Esto está muy lejos, acercalo más a la otra nota.
15. 01:38:406 (3) - ^
16. 01:40:232 (2) - Sugiero quitar el stack, especialmente por el slider anterior.
17. 01:59:797 (1) - Sería bueno separa este slider y luego seguir con la secuencia (Por el New Combo)
18. 45,805 - Este timing point no está bien posicionado por unos cuantos ms, posiciónalo justo en la linea blanca.
19. Lo mismo pasa con los otros timing points, asegurate que están bien posicionados (Los que inician o terminan un Kiai)
20. Asegurate que todo en la dificultad está correctamente espaciado con 0.8x, vi por ahí algunos errores menores que no los señalé pero están ahí , asi que si quieres los arreglas.

1. Haz un re-snap a todas las notas ya que no están correctamente... "Snaped"
2. 00:23:536 (1) - Remueve el New combo.
3. 00:37:887 (1,2,3) - Distancialos un poco de acuerdo con distance snap.
4. 00:53:017 (9,1) - Este stack se ve mal , recomiendo quitarlo.
5. 01:37:884 (1) - Quita el New Combo.
6. 02:08:145 (6) - New Combo.
7. 02:10:232 (1) - Remueve el New Combo.
8. 02:37:101 - Kiai time debería terminar aquí
9. 45,805 - Este timing point no está bien posicionado por unos cuantos ms, posiciónalo justo en la linea blanca.
10. Lo mismo pasa con los otros timing points, asegurate que están bien posicionados (Los que inician o terminan un Kiai)

1. 00:19:232 (2) - Muevelo a: 00:19:362, suena mejor.
2. 00:50:666 (8,1) - Swap los New Combo.
3. 01:02:927 (10) - Sería genial si bajaras el volumen poco a poco para este slider.
4. 01:09:449 (4) - New Combo para mantener la consistencia.
5. 02:14:666 (5) - ^
6. 02:37:101 - Kiai time debería terminar aquí.
7. 45,805 - Este timing point no está bien posicionado por unos cuantos ms, posiciónalo justo en la linea blanca.
8. Lo mismo pasa con los otros timing points, asegurate que están bien posicionados (Los que inician o terminan un Kiai)

1. actually, when i saw 'by: Vivere' on the BG, i thought you were the singer
2. and even in darck360's diff, there is still by: Vivere lol

1. use AR7, 8 is not the best choice and, this is a Hard diff +_+

1. 00:55:623 (4,5,6,7) - strange stack, set stack leniency +2 in this diff

H-boy wrote:

Hola

Tags:viv?

Normal
02:16:232(3) - remove whistle on the slider(not 02:16:232 and 02;18:319) 02:17:275

suggestions
00:48:319(3) - remove clap ok
00:56:145(4) - remove finish at the end of slider and add a whistle hitsound in the end mmm... ok
01:00:580(3) - add clap at the 2nd repeating arrow(01:01:623) ^
01:38:406(3) - remove finish ^
01:38:666(4) - add finish ^

Hard
3rd kiai time start at 01:05:275 ~

00:33:917(6) - make symetric No
[attachment=0:3a5c6]3.png[/attachment:3a5c6]

suggestions
00:56:666(6) - remove clap ok
01:04:493(2) - finish at the end of the slider ^
01:06:319(2) - clap ^
01:06:580(3) - remove clap ^
01:38:406(7) - remove clap ^
01:07:362(4) - clap ^

darck360's Insane

suggestions
00:45:188(9) - remove clap at the beginning ok
00:51:449(3) - make symetric No :/
00:56:406(1) - remove finish and add clap ^

star~

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
actually, when i saw 'by: Vivere' on the BG, i thought you were the singer lol
and even in darck360's diff, there is still by: Vivere lol Changed xD

[darck360]:
use AR7, 8 is not the best choice and, this is a Hard diff +_+

[Hard]:
00:55:623 (4,5,6,7) - strange stack, set stack leniency +2 in this diff

star~

Xeno32 wrote:

Beat placement is good, for all the difficulties, but I personally feel, this map-set can be made a LOT better, if you focus a little more on your sliders.

[Normal]
00:44:927 (6,7) - Minor Spacing
00:56:666 (5,1) - ^
01:19:362 (3,1) - Critical Spacing!
01:55:884 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Shouldn't be in a normal, in my opinion =p

[Hard]
00:33:971 (6) - Ugly. ?
00:55:623 (4,5,6,7) - Combo Colors + Background, makes this hard to read. No D:
01:13:884 (1) - My heart cries when I see sliders like this :< wth? I like this
01:35:014 (2) - ^ ^

[darck360's Insane]

00:52:493 (4) - doesn't follow music, and makes no sense. recommend you delete it. Ok :>

Apart from that, your sliders also make go :< :/

vivere wrote:

BAT/MAT Request please. ^^

Weezy wrote:

vivere wrote:

BAT/MAT Request please. ^^

Guess I can't do much now >.<

what i can do is give a star
good luck :3

Hyguys wrote:

stared

Slowmotion wrote:

Normal
00:20:927 (7) - this sliders it's ugly a bit .. change it
00:30:319 (1) - why this spin here?
00:38:145 (1) - ^
00:47:797 (1,2,4) - very finishes isn't good IMO
01:09:971 (1,2,3) - i don't like of their sliders, it's so ugly IMO
01:40:753 (1) - why this spinner?
01:45:449 (1) - ^
01:48:058 (1) - IMO its a bad slider =/

Hard
00:53:275 (1,2,3,4) - be creative
01:40:753 (2,4,6) - ^
01:55:623 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:12:319 (1,2,3,4) - ^ O.o

darck360's Insane
it's perfect

i like the song good look vivere

artpiggo wrote:

Normal

00:20:927 (7) - not good one
00 47 792 1,2,3,4 distance snap
01 32 406 ^
01 54 840 flip horizon and rotate clockwise 90
01 57 449 should use 1,2 template
02 32 406 should parallel to slider 1

Hard

I think kiai time should same in all diff
distance snap in many point isn't fixed I think it's around 1.3-1.2x fixed it.
00 18 580 flip horizon maybe
00 41 536 should straight to previous one
00 59 014 should parallel to 1,2,3
01 12 319 maybe reverse selection it
01 17 014 not beautiful one and should symmetry to 5
01 21 188 should be new combo and rotate it
02 05 797 should be equal to slider 1
02 10 753 should be same as 1,2,3 in reverse one

Insane is very smooth map ! I only miss at 00 57 840 ! Can you get rid of it? It'll be better I think : D

ah! one more thing, the brown combo color is too confuse , it's the same as background . Can you fix it, please?

Star !

Krisom wrote:

General-
· El Kiai Time está hecho para darle énfasis a los coros en la canción. Los coros se mantienen iguales durante todas las dificultades, así que te recomiendo uses los mismos Kiai Time en todas las diff, incluso la de darck. Hecho.
· Los colores se confunden con el BG, en especial el café más oscuro. Utiliza un color que se distinga claramente del fondo Listo.
· Linda skin Gracias :$

Normal-
La verdad siento que el spacing está algo raro, la diferencia entre 1/2 y 1/1 sigue siendo muy poca, con cosas como esta.
00:21:710 (1,2,3) - Preocupado por que el spacing es similar a 1/1 de distancia. Trata de hacer que se vea así
01:19:362 (3,1) - Spacing. Acerca (1) a (3)

Hard-
00:52:232 (6,7) - Spacing. Este es bastante ovbio .-. No entiendo >.<!!, pero ya esta "corregido" y creo que esta bien lol
Wow, exclenete trabajo mejorando los sliders, estas son las cosas que me hacen sentir orgulloso, mejoras rápidas ! ¿Ves que si puedes hacer sliders agradables a la vista? Para que me vas a hacer poner colorado <.<

darck's-
Muy bien! Me sorprende lo que has mejorado con hitsounds!

Los mapas estan bien, re-revisa tu spacing una ultima vez y avisame cuando hayas hecho los mods.

Hyguys wrote:

Mod for you <33333
Normal
00:21:971 Whistle
00:22:493 ^
00:23:014 ^^
00:23:536 Spacing Ftw
00:43:882 New combo
01:02:666 (omfg 666) Clap
01:20:145 Spacing :VVVVVV
01:40:232 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51830 *trollface*
02:33:188 (all combo) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51831 *trollface* , if u didn't understand just pm me

Hard
00:49:623 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/51832 :V

Only this. btw

vivicat wrote:

☆ミ

KenezzEdward wrote:

Kenezz's Star~
Wajuu! :3

SilentAssasint wrote:

Star ^^

vivere wrote:

SilentAssasint wrote:

Star ^^

Para la proxima, no te retractes de lo que digas <3. Ah... y gracias por la star ^^

Antu Villegas wrote:

Yo lo "convencí" de que lo arreglara -.-"