K-Run feat. kuripurin - Inyeongeurim · forum

KantanDez

Joined February 2015

KantanDez 2017-01-29T09:49:38+00:00

ewe

[corrin]
00:08:512 (1) - rotate this by -15 on selection centre for circular flow ewe
00:24:511 (1) - no sound - dont do drugs

fuck you

[normal]
01:04:678 (1) - move this to x:140 y:112
01:18:511 (3) - adjust this slider's curve to go lower so that the following objects arent at the edge of the grid, also 01:19:678 (2) - bad angle, lower its angle ewe
01:21:344 (2) - do this instead:

01:23:844 (4) - make this into a 1/1 slider(end at the red tick)
ewe

[im hard]
00:11:345 (1,2) - do this instead http://puu.sh/tF50J/1a725453f9.jpg
01:14:678 (3,4) - this is too much for this diff ewe, do this instead:

[left insen]
00:19:178 (2) - willl confuse players
00:19:511 (2) - move this to the right so that it wont touch 5(and also triangular pattern with 1 and 3) http://puu.sh/tF5SJ/59fbd22f14.jpg
01:06:678 (4,5) - turn 4 into a 1/2 slider and remove 5, a slider fits better on this part(the slider sympathizes with the vocal better than a hit circle)
01:17:178 (2,3) - the vocal starts on the red tick, so the slider should start on the red tick
ewe

[rite insen]
haha no

[gilgamesh]
01:15:345 (1) - mas panget pa eto sa mama mo
01:34:512 (3) - ewww red tick fuck you, prioritize mo ang mga beat hmph
i love markyun

I love Shishou

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-01-29T16:08:38+00:00

KantanDez wrote:
[corrin]
00:08:512 (1) - rotate this by -15 on selection centre for circular flow ewe diagonal flow yakk
00:24:511 (1) - no sound - dont do drugs there is - stop succ a dicc
fuck you >Thanks!

i did sth uwu

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Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Finshie 2017-01-29T18:27:49+00:00

KantanDez wrote:
ewe

[normal]
01:04:678 (1) - move this to x:140 y:112
01:18:511 (3) - adjust this slider's curve to go lower so that the following objects arent at the edge of the grid, also 01:19:678 (2) - bad angle, lower its angle ewe
01:21:344 (2) - do this instead:

01:23:844 (4) - make this into a 1/1 slider(end at the red tick)
all fixed
ewe uwu

[im hard]
00:11:345 (1,2) - do this instead http://puu.sh/tF50J/1a725453f9.jpg
01:14:678 (3,4) - this is too much for this diff ewe, do this instead:

all fixed

[rite insen]
haha no ok

I love Shishou ah

salamat

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-30T03:37:21+00:00

hi. from my q

insane

00:07:178 (3,4) - Those flow are too high even sound headslider was no sound here. Reduce them
00:28:011 (6,7,8) - A circle (8) is fine, but the rest were too huge jumps. Possibly hard to aim. Mayb decrease jump?
00:36:344 (7,1,2) - Those things were too down and i sees like going to offscreen. Move them a little up
00:37:678 (8,1) - Bad emphasize :p. Mayb you didn't follow the rhythm. Stop a slider (8) at red tick and keep a slider (1) stay here.
00:44:011 (4,5,6) - Decrease those jumps.
01:20:011 (5) - Nc here bcs the vocals sang 1/2 sound here
01:22:678 (3,4) - Reduce those flow

misaka

00:41:511 (6,2) - Avoid those overlap
00:53:344 (2,3,4,5) - Bad pattern i sees. Change it to be geometry pattern
00:56:011 (4) - Nc here bcs the jump
00:57:344 (2,2) - Adjust and stack them but it's not completely stack
00:58:011 (1,2) - How about stack them or decreasing them bcs slow part need slow emphasis
01:20:011 (5) - Nc here

That's all from me
Good Luck!

Left

2,156 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2017-01-30T05:33:00+00:00

KantanDez wrote:
ewe
[left insen]
00:19:178 (2) - willl confuse players maybe ok cuz insane
00:19:511 (2) - move this to the right so that it wont touch 5(and also triangular pattern with 1 and 3) http://puu.sh/tF5SJ/59fbd22f14.jpg no intention, and actually no one will notice it while playing
01:06:678 (4,5) - turn 4 into a 1/2 slider and remove 5, a slider fits better on this part(the slider sympathizes with the vocal better than a hit circle) not funny rhythm
01:17:178 (2,3) - the vocal starts on the red tick, so the slider should start on the red tick following drum so no, but I fixed easily
ewe

I love Shishou

thx!

Left

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Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Finshie 2017-01-30T13:39:00+00:00

Chibi Maruko wrote:
hi. from my q

insane
00:07:178 (3,4) - Those flow are too high even sound headslider was no sound here. Reduce them fixed
00:28:011 (6,7,8) - A circle (8) is fine, but the rest were too huge jumps. Possibly hard to aim. Mayb decrease jump? fixed maybe
00:36:344 (7,1,2) - Those things were too down and i sees like going to offscreen. Move them a little up fixed
00:37:678 (8,1) - Bad emphasize :p. Mayb you didn't follow the rhythm. Stop a slider (8) at red tick and keep a slider (1) stay here. fixed. had to move (1) cause its too close.
00:44:011 (4,5,6) - Decrease those jumps. fixed
01:20:011 (5) - Nc here bcs the vocals sang 1/2 sound here fixed
01:22:678 (3,4) - Reduce those flow fixed

That's all from me
Good Luck!

thanks for mod!

Venix

Global Moderator

1,927 posts

Joined February 2015

Venix 2017-01-30T13:52:55+00:00

from queue

Akitoshi's Easy.
When you look for other shapes 00:37:844 (1) - this shape look a bit randomness. I prefer remake it more smoothly to obtain good consistency and aesthetics.

Normal.
nth to point out

Hard.
I think you can move 00:21:345 (4) - this slider a bit to left to avoid overlap with score on 4:3 resoulions.

Flow 00:25:844 (5,6) - here is a bit harsh to play, because 00:26:345 (6) - this slider don't continue movement maked by 00:25:844 (5) - this shape. I prefer Ctrl+g for 00:26:345 (6) - this slider. Too keep fine look of pattern you can apply ctrl+g for 00:26:678 (7,8) - these sliders too. It will work nice and look better.

To keep consistancy you should put NC 00:25:844 (5) - here, because you placed it on every big tick, but not here.

I think 01:08:511 (5) - this slider brokes aesthetics a bit, because it's other in comparison with rest of sliders. I prefer replace it with used previously or subsequently shape, like 01:15:344 (1) - this.

Flow between 01:27:511 (3,4) - these objects can be better, because this movement maked by 01:27:511 (3) - this slider is opposite to 01:27:844 (4) - this slider. You can fix it by doing Ctrl+g on 01:27:844 (4) - this slider.

Left's Insane.
op diff, but 01:37:886 (1) - this spinner can be finished earlier (on noticable sound) to emphasise music better.

Insane.
00:28:011 (6,7) - This spacing is too big and very uncomforable to play. I prefer decrease distance snap ~3 here. Mby try it? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7190106 It should work better.

00:37:844 - This rythm should be used, because it's very important. You should change 00:37:678 (8) - this slider to 1/2

00:38:011 (1) - This slider is overmapped. You haven't any rythm 00:38:011 - here. You should delete 00:38:011 (1) - this slider and place circle stacked with end of slider 00:38:178 - here.

Misaka's Extra.
no problems here

[]
Nice mapset! You should find BN and rank it, GL~!

TyrantsEye2014

430 posts

Joined June 2014

TyrantsEye2014 2017-01-30T14:31:12+00:00

KantanDez wrote:
[gilgamesh]
01:15:345 (1) - mas panget pa eto sa mama mo mas maganda ka
01:34:512 (3) - ewww red tick fuck you, prioritize mo ang mga beat hmph hai
i love markyun

I love Shishou

fuck you

Chibi Maruko wrote:
misaka
00:41:511 (6,2) - Avoid those overlap fixed
00:53:344 (2,3,4,5) - Bad pattern i sees. Change it to be geometry pattern no changes here uwu
00:56:011 (4) - Nc here bcs the jump ok
00:57:344 (2,2) - Adjust and stack them but it's not completely stack ok
00:58:011 (1,2) - How about stack them or decreasing them bcs slow part need slow emphasis nah
01:20:011 (5) - Nc here fixed

That's all from me
Good Luck!

thanks

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Finshie 2017-01-30T19:07:11+00:00

Venix wrote:
from queue

Hard.
I think you can move 00:21:345 (4) - this slider a bit to left to avoid overlap with score on 4:3 resoulions.

Flow 00:25:844 (5,6) - here is a bit harsh to play, because 00:26:345 (6) - this slider don't continue movement maked by 00:25:844 (5) - this shape. I prefer Ctrl+g for 00:26:345 (6) - this slider. Too keep fine look of pattern you can apply ctrl+g for 00:26:678 (7,8) - these sliders too. It will work nice and look better.

To keep consistancy you should put NC 00:25:844 (5) - here, because you placed it on every big tick, but not here.

I think 01:08:511 (5) - this slider brokes aesthetics a bit, because it's other in comparison with rest of sliders. I prefer replace it with used previously or subsequently shape, like 01:15:344 (1) - this.

Flow between 01:27:511 (3,4) - these objects can be better, because this movement maked by 01:27:511 (3) - this slider is opposite to 01:27:844 (4) - this slider. You can fix it by doing Ctrl+g on 01:27:844 (4) - this slider.

All fixed

Insane.
00:28:011 (6,7) - This spacing is too big and very uncomforable to play. I prefer decrease distance snap ~3 here. Mby try it? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7190106 It should work better.

00:37:844 - This rythm should be used, because it's very important. You should change 00:37:678 (8) - this slider to 1/2

00:38:011 (1) - This slider is overmapped. You haven't any rythm 00:38:011 - here. You should delete 00:38:011 (1) - this slider and place circle stacked with end of slider 00:38:178 - here.

All fixed

[]
Nice mapset! You should find BN and rank it, GL~! xd

Thanks for mod!

stUwUpid

608 posts

Joined January 2015

stUwUpid 2017-01-31T17:50:51+00:00

from watashi no sugoi queue desu

Left's Insane

00:09:178 (2) - I think the end should be clickable since it's so emphasized in vocals
00:36:678 (1,2) - Spacing makes it seem like its 1/2
01:35:344 (5,6,7,8) - Maybe make equal distance

Insane

00:09:845 (3,4) - Since the pitches and musical direction are so different, it would be better to change the directional flow of sliders, or maybe even to change the shapes
00:28:512 (8) - NC?
00:53:262 (6) - I would just make this a stack triple because the snare drum is on the slider end for this, which is not emphasized enough the way you're doing it
01:20:678 (1) - SV change seems a bit too drastic. Maybe make it just a tad faster.
01:29:678 (7,1) - I think these shouldn't be stacked because one has a clap sound and one has a finish sound. The finish should be really emphasized and have a bigger jump imo
01:34:011 (9) - NC
01:37:345 (6) - NC here for change of musical and flow direction

Misaka's Extra

00:37:012 (2) - The whistle hitsound is on the sliderslide portion of this slider, could throw some people off who have custom sounds for that
01:07:844 (1) - Make this an extended slider and make the slider end clickable because of emphasized vocals at the end?
01:07:844 (1) - Also inherited point here is 1 ms off
01:14:844 (4,5,6) - I think would be cooler if you ctrl-g this, would play awesome :3
01:17:345 (5,6,7) - Make equilateral triangle?
01:20:512 (4) - Since this note isn't as emphasized as 01:20:012 (1,2,3) - , maybe make distance 01:20:345 (3,4) - here a little smaller?

gud lukku

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Finshie 2017-01-31T18:25:32+00:00

Kami-senpai wrote:
from watashi no sugoi queue desu

[Insane]

00:09:845 (3,4) - Since the pitches and musical direction are so different, it would be better to change the directional flow of sliders, or maybe even to change the shapes
00:28:512 (8) - NC?
00:53:262 (6) - I would just make this a stack triple because the snare drum is on the slider end for this, which is not emphasized enough the way you're doing it
01:20:678 (1) - SV change seems a bit too drastic. Maybe make it just a tad faster.
01:29:678 (7,1) - I think these shouldn't be stacked because one has a clap sound and one has a finish sound. The finish should be really emphasized and have a bigger jump imo
01:34:011 (9) - NC
01:37:345 (6) - NC here for change of musical and flow direction

Fixed everything

gud lukku ty desu uwu

thanks! for mod

TyrantsEye2014

430 posts

Joined June 2014

TyrantsEye2014 2017-02-01T12:21:44+00:00

Kami-senpai wrote:
from watashi no sugoi queue desu

Misaka's Extra
00:37:012 (2) - The whistle hitsound is on the sliderslide portion of this slider, could throw some people off who have custom sounds for that fixed
01:07:844 (1) - Make this an extended slider and make the slider end clickable because of emphasized vocals at the end? nah.
01:07:844 (1) - Also inherited point here is 1 ms off fixed
01:14:844 (4,5,6) - I think would be cooler if you ctrl-g this, would play awesome :3 cool
01:17:345 (5,6,7) - Make equilateral triangle? fixed
01:20:512 (4) - Since this note isn't as emphasized as 01:20:012 (1,2,3) - , maybe make distance 01:20:345 (3,4) - here a little smaller? oki

gud lukku

thank you

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-02-01T14:44:55+00:00

lol the shape is fine,
thanks for looking my diff~

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Irohas 2017-02-04T17:30:27+00:00

bgggggggggggg

extra

00:28:178 (6,7) - a bit overmapped tbh
01:04:011 (1,2,1,2) - such a jump overdone is not necessary here imo D: since there's only on 01:04:177 (2) - where is necessary to be emphasized
01:25:845 (9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2) - same as above but overmapped
01:09:012 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pattern looks not good, try to improve it

insane

00:23:844 (3,4) - what about unstack these notes? it feels a bit weird when playing imo
00:29:844 (1) - try to decrease the SV from here, it'll be better
00:45:344 (6,7) - such a huge spacing here, we don't expect a spacing as that
01:19:012 (7,1) - it would be great if you unstack and emphasize more (1)

[]
that's all for me no kd if no change xd gl

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Finshie 2017-02-04T18:30:13+00:00

Irohas wrote:
bgggggggggggg

insane
00:23:844 (3,4) - what about unstack these notes? it feels a bit weird when playing imo
00:29:844 (1) - try to decrease the SV from here, it'll be better
00:45:344 (6,7) - such a huge spacing here, we don't expect a spacing as that
01:19:012 (7,1) - it would be great if you unstack and emphasize more (1)
All applied
[]
that's all for me no kd if no change xd gl

Thanks for mod!

TyrantsEye2014

430 posts

Joined June 2014

TyrantsEye2014 2017-02-05T07:17:09+00:00

Irohas wrote:
bgggggggggggg

extra
00:28:178 (6,7) - a bit overmapped tbh
01:04:011 (1,2,1,2) - such a jump overdone is not necessary here imo D: since there's only on 01:04:177 (2) - where is necessary to be emphasized
01:25:845 (9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2) - same as above but overmapped
01:09:012 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pattern looks not good, try to improve it but it looks fine to me
all applied

thank you

Izzywing

osu! Alumni

2,248 posts

Joined March 2016

Izzywing 2017-02-09T07:27:37+00:00

hi

[General]

Idk if its just me but the audio really sounds like poop around here 00:10:012 - when she's yelling

[Hard]
00:07:012 (2) - whys the spacing so small to here?
00:27:845 (2) - I think its more imporant to map the 1/4 here, you could do a kickslider from 00:27:844 - to the blue tick then circle on 00:28:178 -
00:28:511 (1) - less jarring if you end this on 00:28:511 (1) -
00:32:178 (5,3) - overlap doesnt look good
00:41:012 (2,3,4) - Blanket these? looks better than the current pattern if you do that
00:50:344 (2,3) - quite an excessive jump for a hard
00:51:178 - green line isnt snapped to this red tick, i assume it should have been
01:01:344 (2,3,4,5) - spacing 1/2 objects like this in a hard is a bit much, its better to use equal and smaller spacing
01:07:678 (2,3) - Blanket?
01:32:344 - is the stronger sound than 01:32:178 - so it doesnt make sense to have it be a slidertail. it should be clickable in this case.

[Insane]

00:21:344 (4,5) - Spacing here doesn't really fit the song imo, I think it should spaced more.
00:25:511 (4) - this slider in particular doesnt fit, since the sound on the tail is stronger than the sound on the head. 00:25:678 - should be clickable here.
00:44:928 - feel like you could something neat with this piano, either with kicksliders or by making a stream
00:51:178 - the timing line here isnt snapped to the red tick, it is supposed to be?
00:52:678 (1) - drum in the middle of this slider should probably be clickable
01:25:844 - unsnapped green line

[Misaka]

00:08:345 - map this? piano sound
00:19:179 (1,2,3) - its no big deal but usually triplets over downbeat objects will have the NC on the downbeat instead of the start of the triplet. Usually mappers will say its their style one way or the other so if that's your style it's fine, but do consider moving the NC to the downbeat.
00:24:844 - theres a notably sharp guitar sound here so I think its worth mapping. maybe do circle on 00:24:678 - and 1/2 slider on 00:24:844 -
00:38:511 (3) - could be a triplet here over 00:38:678 (4) - to follow the piano
01:31:012 (3,1) - looks kinda weird with how they're almost touching, i suggest moving 1 a bit farther away

gl!

TyrantsEye2014

430 posts

Joined June 2014

TyrantsEye2014 2017-02-09T11:53:11+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
hi

[Misaka]

00:08:345 - map this? piano sound i only following the vocals on this part
00:19:179 (1,2,3) - its no big deal but usually triplets over downbeat objects will have the NC on the downbeat instead of the start of the triplet. Usually mappers will say its their style one way or the other so if that's your style it's fine, but do consider moving the NC to the downbeat. so no changes here
00:24:844 - theres a notably sharp guitar sound here so I think its worth mapping. maybe do circle on 00:24:678 - and 1/2 slider on 00:24:844 - i tried to play with that pattern but it feels really weird for some reason
00:38:511 (3) - could be a triplet here over 00:38:678 (4) - to follow the piano nah
01:31:012 (3,1) - looks kinda weird with how they're almost touching, i suggest moving 1 a bit farther away fixed

gl!

thanks for checking
also sorry for my bad english :c

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Finshie 2017-02-09T15:50:38+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
hi

[General]

Idk if its just me but the audio really sounds like poop around here 00:10:012 - when she's yelling rude . idk about that

[Hard]
00:07:012 (2) - whys the spacing so small to here? fixed spacing
00:27:845 (2) - I think its more imporant to map the 1/4 here, you could do a kickslider from 00:27:844 - to the blue tick then circle on 00:28:178 - did 1/2 slider instead. 1/4 might be too brutal for hard
00:28:511 (1) - less jarring if you end this on 00:28:511 (1) - what
00:32:178 (5,3) - overlap doesnt look good fixed
00:41:012 (2,3,4) - Blanket these? looks better than the current pattern if you do that thats the way i used to do blankets uwu fixed
00:50:344 (2,3) - quite an excessive jump for a hard fixed
00:51:178 - green line isnt snapped to this red tick, i assume it should have been fixed wtf i didnt even change offset of this this how does this even happen :V
01:01:344 (2,3,4,5) - spacing 1/2 objects like this in a hard is a bit much, its better to use equal and smaller spacing switched 01:01:678 (4,5) - . Should be less hard now
01:07:678 (2,3) - Blanket? fixed
01:32:344 - is the stronger sound than 01:32:178 - so it doesnt make sense to have it be a slidertail. it should be clickable in this case. changed to circle

[Insane]

00:21:344 (4,5) - Spacing here doesn't really fit the song imo, I think it should spaced more. fixed
00:25:511 (4) - this slider in particular doesnt fit, since the sound on the tail is stronger than the sound on the head. 00:25:678 - should be clickable here. fixed
00:44:928 - feel like you could something neat with this piano, either with kicksliders or by making a stream made 00:44:844 (3) - kickslider instead. hope that fixes it
00:51:178 - the timing line here isnt snapped to the red tick, it is supposed to be? AiMod plz.. ruining my slider ;w; fixed
00:52:678 (1) - drum in the middle of this slider should probably be clickable fixed
01:25:844 - unsnapped green line why the f didnt AiMod say anything about these. fixed

gl!

Thanks for mod!

SLM

462 posts

Joined February 2015

SLM 2017-02-10T03:27:56+00:00

Hello~ from this post

[Hard]

* 00:07:012 (2,3) - too much spaced imo, compared to the very slow movement before.
maybe stack 00:07:012 (2) - with 00:08:345 (5) - ?

* 00:13:512 (1,2) - swap NC

* 00:18:678 (1) - ^ same as above, maybe ctrl+g 00:18:178 (4) - this?
http://puu.sh/tWf3i/3a112615ce.jpg

* 01:16:678 (5) - NC

* 01:24:678 (3) - 01:27:511 (3) - ^

* 01:37:844 (6) - this is confusing as a 1/1, since you used 1/2 stacks right before this. 01:34:844 (3,4) - 01:35:678 (2,3) -
maybe you could space them more http://puu.sh/tWfx6/6171869a2a.jpg

[Left's Insane]

* 00:13:678 (3) - 음 이거 00:13:845 - 여기와야하는거 아닌가영

* 01:27:844 (3) - 그건ㅇㅔ쁜동그라미?

[Insane]

* 01:31:011 (7) - this feels a bit awkward cuz of small spacing while the music is intense.

[Misaka's Extra]

* 00:18:678 - kinda weird to have this strong sound not clickable, maybe consider making 00:18:512 (3) - this into 2 circles

* 00:48:761 - add a circle?

* 01:09:845 (8,1) - the flow here is kinda awkward to me, maybe 01:10:012 (1) - ctrl+g this?

* 01:19:012 (6) - this feels like it lacks movement compared to the intensity of the music, maybe stack with 01:17:679 (7) - ?

* 01:24:678 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not sure the music contains this much 1/4s here.

* 01:32:345 (1) - unnecessary NC

* 01:33:678 (1) - ^ imo, cuz you didn't NC 01:33:012 (3) - this

* 01:35:678 (1) - ^

Good lucck

TyrantsEye2014

430 posts

Joined June 2014

TyrantsEye2014 2017-02-10T07:48:18+00:00

SLM wrote:
Hello~ from this post

[Misaka's Extra]

* 00:18:678 - kinda weird to have this strong sound not clickable, maybe consider making 00:18:512 (3) - this into 2 circles okay

* 00:48:761 - add a circle? okay

* 01:09:845 (8,1) - the flow here is kinda awkward to me, maybe 01:10:012 (1) - ctrl+g this? okay

* 01:19:012 (6) - this feels like it lacks movement compared to the intensity of the music, maybe stack with 01:17:679 (7) - ? okay

* 01:24:678 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not sure the music contains this much 1/4s here.

* 01:32:345 (1) - unnecessary NC fixed

* 01:33:678 (1) - ^ imo, cuz you didn't NC 01:33:012 (3) - this fixed

* 01:35:678 (1) - ^fixed

Good lucck

thank you

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Finshie 2017-02-10T14:16:33+00:00

SLM wrote:
Hello~ from this post

[Hard]

* 00:07:012 (2,3) - too much spaced imo, compared to the very slow movement before.
maybe stack 00:07:012 (2) - with 00:08:345 (5) - ? fixed distance

* 00:13:512 (1,2) - swap NC fixed

* 00:18:678 (1) - ^ same as above, maybe ctrl+g 00:18:178 (4) - this?
http://puu.sh/tWf3i/3a112615ce.jpg spacing should be fine because of bpm change. making it close might get confusing

* 01:16:678 (5) - NC fixed

* 01:24:678 (3) - 01:27:511 (3) - ^ fixed

* 01:37:844 (6) - this is confusing as a 1/1, since you used 1/2 stacks right before this. 01:34:844 (3,4) - 01:35:678 (2,3) - applied
maybe you could space them more http://puu.sh/tWfx6/6171869a2a.jpg

[Insane]

* 01:31:011 (7) - this feels a bit awkward cuz of small spacing while the music is intense. ctrl+g'd 01:30:844 (6,7) - position. hope it fixes it

Good lucck

Thanks for mod!

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-02-17T18:53:54+00:00

ah

03:18 Akitoshi: ah
03:18 Finshie: hi mapper
03:19 Akitoshi: 00:27:844 (5,6) - overmap ?
03:19 Akitoshi: 00:31:344 (1,2) - swap nc for visual
03:19 Finshie: ah
03:20 Finshie: gnaya ko lng kasi kay giru dati
03:20 Finshie: di naman gano overmap
03:20 Akitoshi: ewe
03:21 Akitoshi: 00:44:511 (1,2,3) - mahirap 2 laruin ih
03:21 Finshie: panong mahirap uwu
03:21 Akitoshi: 00:47:594 (2,3) - gg jump from 00:47:344 (1) - 
03:22 Akitoshi: so they usually plays same as triples on 00:44:511 (1,2,3) - 
03:22 Akitoshi: but u placed 1/4 slider on 00:44:844 (3) - which is they need to go downward
03:22 Finshie: wag daw kc ignore ung piano
03:22 Finshie: ah
03:22 Akitoshi: but ur 00:45:011 (4) - is on top
03:22 Akitoshi: = rip flow
03:23 Akitoshi: mahirap irecover ung aim
03:23 Finshie: hm
03:23 Akitoshi: 00:48:678 (1,2,3) - unnecessary triples tbh
03:23 Finshie: e
03:24 Finshie: drums
03:24 Akitoshi: ah
03:24 Finshie: sabi ni dom ewew
03:25 Akitoshi: 01:04:512 (7,1) - rip emphasis
03:25 Akitoshi: 01:08:512 (7) - NC should b here instead of 01:08:844 (1) - idk
03:26 Finshie: ah
03:26 Akitoshi: 01:28:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ok
03:26 Finshie: >:(
03:26 Akitoshi: 01:29:844 (1,2,3) - >:(
03:26 Akitoshi: asan n jumps q
03:27 Finshie: hah
03:27 Akitoshi: halos parehas lang yung intensity
03:27 Akitoshi: pero sinikipan yung pangalawa ewe
03:27 Finshie: sorry :(
03:27 Akitoshi: 01:30:345 (3) - remove whistle
03:28 Akitoshi: 01:29:178 (4,3) - stack
03:28 Akitoshi: 01:31:011 (7) - unstack from 01:30:844 (6) - cuz it's clap
03:29 Akitoshi: 01:34:012 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - inb4 salts from nominators
03:29 Finshie: 4month old mapping
03:29 Finshie: kakaiba
03:29 Finshie: wala naman pumapancn kasi ewe
03:31 Akitoshi: ewe
03:31 Akitoshi: wala din naman nagturo sakin dati
03:32 Finshie: ano problema dun sa huling timestamp mo
03:32 Akitoshi: 1-2
03:33 Akitoshi: wala naman kasing ganyan sa ibang part
03:33 Finshie: ah
03:33 Akitoshi: tsaka marami nang umaayaw dyan sa 1-2 ewe
03:35 Akitoshi: 00:27:511 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:37:011 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:38:845 (6,7,8) - 00:44:761 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:48:678 (1,2,3) - 01:37:178 (4,5,1) - listahan ng mukhang overlap uwu
03:35 Akitoshi: overmap*
03:37 Finshie: ung una
03:37 Finshie: 00:28:011 (6) - eto lng pero ung isang kick ndi
03:38 Akitoshi: 00:28:094 - ito lang ata ung audible 1/4 ih
03:39 Akitoshi: ewan lang kung pwede magpalusot ng synth sa guitar or sth
03:39 Finshie: cge palitan ko
03:39 Finshie: pangit dn naman ewe
03:40 Akitoshi: marami din overmap kay misaka uwu
03:41 Finshie: nabawasan na nga yan e :v
03:41 Akitoshi: yung sa huli
03:41 Akitoshi: wala akong narinig na 1/4 sa instru pero spam kick ewe
03:42 Akitoshi: and some reason mas madali laruin yung chorus kesa sa ibang part lmao
03:43 Finshie: ewe
03:43 Finshie: buti pala d ko muna pm c mr serio
03:44 Akitoshi: 00:52:511 (3,1) - for rhythm http://puu.sh/u7AX1/8254509a79.jpg
03:45 Finshie: `ah
03:45 Finshie: siksikan
03:45 Finshie: magkakajump kc kung d slider
03:46 Akitoshi: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7349588
03:46 Akitoshi: ewe
03:47 Akitoshi: tutal may whis naman 00:52:678 - 
03:48 Finshie: ah
03:50 Akitoshi: bn na bahala ung iba
03:52 Finshie: salamat bn aki uwu
03:52 Akitoshi: >:(

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2017-02-22T09:00:03+00:00

Misaka's Extra

holy, how do you map with the timeline zoomed in that far lmao.
00:11:345 (1,2) - You could probably blanket this better. 00:12:678 (1,2) - etc..
00:18:762 (5) - You could try using 1/8 repeat sliders here instead to capture the drums better, a slider seems really simplistic for an Extra
00:37:844 (1,2) - This jump doesn't feel very called for. 2 isn't that strong that it should need that big of a jump right now.
00:50:678 (6,7) - ^Same applies here. I don't think this needs that big of a jump especially since theres no instrument on 7, just a vocal.
00:53:678 (4,5,1) - Put the jump onto 1 instead of 5?
00:55:678 (2,3,1) - Sae, here, 1 instead of 3?
00:56:345 (3,4,1) - 4>1 could be bigger instead for better emphasis, but I guess here you could argue the anti jump + sharp angle is being used instead.
00:59:178 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Nice!
01:26:845 (2,3,1) - Could be arranged more neatly, in order to emphasize the highest pitch 1 better.

idea

01:27:844 (3) - This slider looks like an appendix

would be neater like this

01:33:678 (3,4) - This jump isn't called for imo...
01:36:345 (3,4) - Same. these are red ticks so they aren't even musically as stron as the white ticks.

Insane

00:14:511 (2,3) - Arrangements like this resemble 1/4 jumps from earlier, but here it's actually 1/2 so the spacing can confuse players.
00:17:178 (2,3,1) - Same here. 2>3 looks like 3>1 but they are different rhythm gaps.
00:24:678 (1,2) - The jump onto 2 doesn't seem that necessary imo. I think you want to emphasize 00:25:178 (3) - especially since you dedicate a jump to the guitar on 00:25:678 (5,1) - .
00:35:511 (2,3,4,5) - Same thing as earlier about spacing. I would move 00:35:928 (4,5) - closer to slider 3's end.
00:38:344 (3,4,5) - This spacing looks quite inconsistent/
00:40:845 (2,3,4,5) - This is a lto better in term of spacing for 1/4'
01:19:178 (1,1) - Stacks are kinda off.
01:29:844 (1,2) - Sounds better Ctrl+G'ed in rhythm. The down beat on 01:30:011 - contains the pitch of the guitar + a kick so you should really map it imo,
01:32:178 (5,1) - This could be a bigger jump for the guitar on 1 imo.
01:34:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This could be more even in terms of patterning. 1>3>5 could be a pattern themselves going up linearly.

Hard

00:11:845 (2,3,4) - Same as Insane about spacing being confusing due to 1/4 and 1/2.
00:14:512 (2,3) - ^
00:35:678 (2,3) - Spacing could be even. I don't think 3 needs the jump here.
00:42:345 (2,3,4,5) - Structurally, this could be more even. Look at the spacing between 2's slider end, 3> and 4. It's not that even.
00:53:678 (4,5,1,2,3) - Please avoid this ;c It's very hard to read due to all the overlaps you use.

[]

The set has potential. Other diffs look ready. Those 3 could use like 2-3 more mods to polish things off. Also, for Insane and Hard, please apply my spacing recommendations to the rest of the map as you see fit. I tried mentioning all the points I saw, but I might have missed one or two (alternatively, maybe the modders after me can catch them out).

You can call me back once you feel confident in your map!

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Finshie 2017-02-22T15:10:50+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
Insane

00:14:511 (2,3) - Arrangements like this resemble 1/4 jumps from earlier, but here it's actually 1/2 so the spacing can confuse players. made 1 closer to 2 to make 2>3 distance less confusing
00:17:178 (2,3,1) - Same here. 2>3 looks like 3>1 but they are different rhythm gaps. Made 2 a 1/2 and a note since its kinda hard to work with that slider without getting the flow or distance not ruined. Also made 2 closer to 1 and stack the note to 4 to make it obvious
00:24:678 (1,2) - The jump onto 2 doesn't seem that necessary imo. I think you want to emphasize 00:25:178 (3) - especially since you dedicate a jump to the guitar on 00:25:678 (5,1) - . lowered the distance between 00:24:678 (1,2) - and empasized 3 as what you said.
00:35:511 (2,3,4,5) - Same thing as earlier about spacing. I would move 00:35:928 (4,5) - closer to slider 3's end. moved 00:35:511 (2,3) - closer instead.
00:38:344 (3,4,5) - This spacing looks quite inconsistent made it closer to 2 to make it all the same from previous ones. (about 2x ds)
00:40:845 (2,3,4,5) - This is a lto better in term of spacing for 1/4'
01:19:178 (1,1) - Stacks are kinda off. fixed
01:29:844 (1,2) - Sounds better Ctrl+G'ed in rhythm. The down beat on 01:30:011 - contains the pitch of the guitar + a kick so you should really map it imo, moved the slider to downbeat and placed stack before it for the guitar too.
01:32:178 (5,1) - This could be a bigger jump for the guitar on 1 imo. made the previous slider into 2 notes to amke a jump
01:34:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This could be more even in terms of patterning. 1>3>5 could be a pattern themselves going up linearly. applied

Hard

00:11:845 (2,3,4) - Same as Insane about spacing being confusing due to 1/4 and 1/2. fixed
00:14:512 (2,3) - ^ fixed
00:35:678 (2,3) - Spacing could be even. I don't think 3 needs the jump here. fixed
00:42:345 (2,3,4,5) - Structurally, this could be more even. Look at the spacing between 2's slider end, 3> and 4. It's not that even. amde it as even as i can do
00:53:678 (4,5,1,2,3) - Please avoid this ;c It's very hard to read due to all the overlaps you use. removed all the overlaps and changed the slider

[]

The set has potential. Other diffs look ready. Those 3 could use like 2-3 more mods to polish things off. Also, for Insane and Hard, please apply my spacing recommendations to the rest of the map as you see fit. I tried mentioning all the points I saw, but I might have missed one or two (alternatively, maybe the modders after me can catch them out). Did spot some on insane and hard but not that many. Also tried to reduce the overlaps on Hard to make it not hard to read.

You can call me back once you feel confident in your map!

Thanks for mod and icon Monstrata

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-02-23T11:29:03+00:00

Q
@left이거 한국애니?

[Inane]
00:13:178 (4,5) - unstack?
00:27:011 (6) - put other way? could be better.
00:33:678 - finist the slider here since you didn't use 3/4 beats well
00:45:511 (7,8) - unstack,
00:49:012 (4,5,6) - looks hard to read 5.
00:52:011 (2) - don't stack at slider body, looks hard to read

GL

Left

2,156 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2017-02-23T15:39:37+00:00

@Neoskylove 아마 국산 라노벨 사운드트랙일걸여

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Finshie 2017-02-23T16:34:33+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[Inane]
00:13:178 (4,5) - unstack? its fine i think.
00:27:011 (6) - put other way? could be better. did something to make it look better
00:33:678 - finist the slider here since you didn't use 3/4 beats well following vocals
00:45:511 (7,8) - unstack, fixed
00:49:012 (4,5,6) - looks hard to read 5. same thing with what i did here 01:13:678 (5,6,1) - so i dont see why that is a problem to read and why this doesnt.
00:52:011 (2) - don't stack at slider body, looks hard to read changed the 1 and 2 sliders since it kinda ruins the flow anyway.

GL

Thanks for mod!

Pandano

447 posts

Joined January 2016

Pandano 2017-02-24T04:44:04+00:00

Hi, from my queue.

Let's get right into it.

[Akitoshi's Easy]
00:24:511 (1) - The sound actually starts here: 00:24:678 . So I suggest shortening the current slider
The rest seems okay. Nice diff

[Normal]
00:55:178 - How about a circle here?
00:56:011 - And a 1-time-repeated slider here? Because there's a sound on the red tick. Should look something like this:

01:19:678 (5,6) - Should make it like this since it supports the song better:

01:36:678 (1) - Fix blanket.

[Hard]
00:10:678 - 1-time-repeated slider?
01:12:011 - Could be better presented:

Good luck on your map :3

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Finshie 2017-02-24T15:26:26+00:00

Pandano wrote:
Hi, from my queue. Let's get right into it.

[Normal]
00:55:178 - How about a circle here? nah
00:56:011 - And a 1-time-repeated slider here? Because there's a sound on the red tick. Should look something like this: 1/2 reverse slider is too much for my normal i think.
01:19:678 (5,6) - Should make it like this since it supports the song better: same above
01:36:678 (1) - Fix blanket. fixed

[Hard]
00:10:678 - 1-time-repeated slider? too much for a slow part
01:12:011 - Could be better presented: i think its fine this way. the stack is gonna get ruined too.

Good luck on your map :3

Thanks for mod!

TyrantsEye2014

430 posts

Joined June 2014

TyrantsEye2014 2017-02-24T15:28:35+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
Misaka's Extra

holy, how do you map with the timeline zoomed in that far lmao.
00:11:345 (1,2) - You could probably blanket this better. 00:12:678 (1,2) - etc.. fixed
00:18:762 (5) - You could try using 1/8 repeat sliders here instead to capture the drums better, a slider seems really simplistic for an Extra okay
00:37:844 (1,2) - This jump doesn't feel very called for. 2 isn't that strong that it should need that big of a jump right now. fixed
00:50:678 (6,7) - ^Same applies here. I don't think this needs that big of a jump especially since theres no instrument on 7, just a vocal. fixed
00:53:678 (4,5,1) - Put the jump onto 1 instead of 5? okay
00:55:678 (2,3,1) - Sae, here, 1 instead of 3? okay
00:56:345 (3,4,1) - 4>1 could be bigger instead for better emphasis, but I guess here you could argue the anti jump + sharp angle is being used instead. changed a little bit the pattern. i hope i did well
00:59:178 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Nice! :o
01:26:845 (2,3,1) - Could be arranged more neatly, in order to emphasize the highest pitch 1 better. okay
idea
01:27:844 (3) - This slider looks like an appendix XD okay
would be neater like this
01:33:678 (3,4) - This jump isn't called for imo... lowered the jumps in 00:56:012 (1,2) -
01:36:345 (3,4) - Same. these are red ticks so they aren't even musically as stron as the white ticks. same here

thanks for mod!!

Gokateigo

289 posts

Joined April 2016

Gokateigo 2017-02-25T20:29:16+00:00

Hello from carpal tunnel comrades q o/
First, I can't mod hard maps so I won't mod this one. And this map has a lot of mods so it'll be hard to mod it for me sorry ^^

Insane

00:09:178 (2,3) - flow can be better here
00:26:678 (4) - overlap the slider (6) with this circle
00:51:178 (1,2) - Flow can be better here

Sorry again, Miskaa's one is too hard to mod for me, I hope it'll be helpful
Gl

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Finshie 2017-02-25T21:25:09+00:00

Gokateigo wrote:
Hello from carpal tunnel comrades q o/
First, I can't mod hard maps so I won't mod this one. And this map has a lot of mods so it'll be hard to mod it for me sorry ^^
Insane
00:09:178 (2,3) - flow can be better here flow seems fine
00:26:678 (4) - overlap the slider (6) with this circle applied. also did stack 00:26:511 (3,5) - to make it the same
00:51:178 (1,2) - Flow can be better here ~~flow feels ok to me though.I might change i might not.~~ fixed flow. Also changed the slider before it
Sorry again, Miskaa's one is too hard to mod for me, I hope it'll be helpful Its ok. Any help is always appreciated!
Gl

Thanks for mod!

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[Inane]
00:49:012 (4,5,6) - looks hard to read 5. ~~same thing with what i did here 01:13:678 (5,6,1) - so i dont see why that is a problem to read and why this doesnt.~~ made 4>5 closer now instead of jump so its not confusing anymore
00:52:011 (2) - don't stack at slider body, looks hard to read changed the 1 and 2 sliders since it kinda ruins the flow anyway.

GL

Blobbability

126 posts

Joined November 2015

Blobbability 2017-02-26T02:23:30+00:00

m4m

Hard

00:34:178 (1, 2): Although the guitar starts here, I think it might be better to move sliders (1, 2) to 00:34:011 and add a hitcircle at 00:34:678. It simplifies the beat and overmaps a little, but is less awkward.

00:39:178 (5, 1) The stack here is prompting me to click at a 1/2 beat rate (2nd click at big white tick), but the beat separation is 1 whole beat (2nd click at red tick). Space (5, 1) a little bit.

00:56:344: Missing note? Feels like something should go here.

00:59:344: Imo, the slider velocity should increase a little more. The drums start from here again, so it might look a little better.

01:01:511 (3, 4): I'd prefer for these to be the same spacing as the entire combo.

01:01:844: NC

Very short mod for this difficulty, but some of the spacing here and there don't match the beat. Fix those, and it should be fine.

Insane

00:25:428: Not visible. You might want to move this a little to the right of slider 3.

00:28:011: Might be better to do a triple.

00:29:844 (1, 2): This is the same issue from your hard difficulty. I'm expecting to click on the large white tick, but note 2 is mapped to the red tick. Don't stack note 1. Like this: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B34dX3Pb8MDLN1BaNHh6QXRFXzg/view?usp=sharing

00:35:678 (3, 4): Overlap these two elements. That way, the 1-4 tick division will be more intuitive.

01:15:844: Make it visible and not hiding under slider 1.

Misaka's Extra

00:29:844 (1, 2, 3): Spacing too small.

00:47:011: Slightly invisible due to overlap.

00:58:011: Very awkward jump in relation to the two sliders before that encourages slow cursor motion.

01:03:594: Messy overlap.

01:25:844 - 01:27:178: Several kick slider jumps seem a little uncharacteristic for 5.3 stars. May need a little bit of simplification. imo.

01:37:178 - 01:37:678: Woah. Careful. ^ Those are decent sized jumps for this difficulty.

Just scared about the concepts being used in this difficulty. Otherwise, looks pretty good.

Interesting song. It's got a complex rhythm, and the mapping goes well with it.

Good luck mapping!!!

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Finshie 2017-02-26T03:05:19+00:00

srijanfromsd wrote:
m4m

Hard
00:34:178 (1, 2): Although the guitar starts here, I think it might be better to move sliders (1, 2) to 00:34:011 and add a hitcircle at 00:34:678. It simplifies the beat and overmaps a little, but is less awkward. As you said. thats where the guitar starts so im not gonna move it 1 tick backward. If i did i have to map the paused part too.

00:39:178 (5, 1) The stack here is prompting me to click at a 1/2 beat rate (2nd click at big white tick), but the beat separation is 1 whole beat (2nd click at red tick). Space (5, 1) a little bit. fixed rhythm

00:56:344: Missing note? Feels like something should go here. nah its fine

00:59:344: Imo, the slider velocity should increase a little more. The drums start from here again, so it might look a little better. .80x > .85x

01:01:511 (3, 4): I'd prefer for these to be the same spacing as the entire combo. shuffled the notes to make it less jumpy and kinda same as the rest of the map

01:01:844: NC no need to

Very short mod for this difficulty, but some of the spacing here and there don't match the beat. Fix those, and it should be fine.

Insane
00:25:428: Not visible. You might want to move this a little to the right of slider 3. ~~???~~ fixed

00:28:011: Might be better to do a triple. nah

00:29:844 (1, 2): This is the same issue from your hard difficulty. I'm expecting to click on the large white tick, but note 2 is mapped to the red tick. Don't stack note 1. Like this: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B34dX3Pb8MDLN1BaNHh6QXRFXzg/view?usp=sharing applied

00:35:678 (3, 4): Overlap these two elements. That way, the 1-4 tick division will be more intuitive. applied

01:15:844: Make it visible and not hiding under slider 1. fixed

Good luck mapping!!!

Thanks for mod!

TyrantsEye2014

430 posts

Joined June 2014

TyrantsEye2014 2017-02-26T08:40:25+00:00

srijanfromsd wrote:
Misaka's Extra
00:29:844 (1, 2, 3): Spacing too small. fixed

00:47:011: Slightly invisible due to overlap. fixed

00:58:011: Very awkward jump in relation to the two sliders before that encourages slow cursor its fine

01:03:594: Messy overlap. fixed

01:25:844 - 01:27:178: Several kick slider jumps seem a little uncharacteristic for 5.3 stars. May need a little bit of simplification. imo. okay

01:37:178 - 01:37:678: Woah. Careful. ^ Those are decent sized jumps for this difficulty.

Just scared about the concepts being used in this difficulty. Otherwise, looks pretty good.

thanks for modding!

update

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:인연그림
Artist:K-Run feat. kuripurin
ArtistUnicode:K-Run feat. 밤푸딩
Creator:Finshie
Version:Misaka's Extra
Source:그래도 봄은 온다
Tags:Akitoshi Misaka 10032 가랑 시노바 정해권 light novel Left Corinn
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UndeadCapulet

1,100 posts

Joined April 2013

UndeadCapulet 2017-02-26T21:41:54+00:00

irc log

2017-02-26 15:10 Finshie: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1106773 K-Run feat. kuripurin - Inyeongeurim]
2017-02-26 15:11 UndeadCapulet: ok, i'll just irc for your diffs and when i post the log i'll include modding for the others :3
2017-02-26 15:12 Finshie: oki
2017-02-26 15:12 Finshie: just hard insane and misaka's extra
2017-02-26 15:12 Finshie: others are ready
2017-02-26 15:12 UndeadCapulet: lol alright
2017-02-26 15:12 UndeadCapulet: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1092380 K-Run feat. kuripurin - Inyeongeurim [Insane]]
2017-02-26 15:13 UndeadCapulet: 00:27:595 (3) - this note isn't mapped to a beat, seems weird for it to be here when you don't make the 00:28:094 - drum a clickable object
2017-02-26 15:15 UndeadCapulet: 01:17:844 - add kiai to this green line? seems weird for it to cut out here
2017-02-26 15:17 Finshie: it kinda slows down on that part so i kinda cut down there the kiai
2017-02-26 15:18 UndeadCapulet: right, but i think the effect works better if the kiai ends at 01:20:678 - instead
2017-02-26 15:18 UndeadCapulet: 01:18:511 (3,4,5,6,1) - is still intense kiai vocals imo
2017-02-26 15:19 Finshie: hm yea i guess so
2017-02-26 15:20 UndeadCapulet: if you do add kiai there, dont forget to add it to the other diffs too~
2017-02-26 15:21 Finshie: oki
2017-02-26 15:21 UndeadCapulet: 01:29:345 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - spacing here is a lot bigger than the other jump patterns in this kiai, even though stuff like the 01:34:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - guitar is more intense
2017-02-26 15:23 Finshie: nerfing
2017-02-26 15:24 UndeadCapulet: and then last thing for this diff, maybe silence the 01:37:928 (1) - and 00:28:595 (1) - spinnerends?
2017-02-26 15:24 UndeadCapulet: they dont really have a strong beat for the hitsound to play on
2017-02-26 15:25 Finshie: yea i could do that
2017-02-26 15:25 UndeadCapulet: cool

2017-02-26 15:25 UndeadCapulet: let me know when you're ready to move on to hard
2017-02-26 15:26 Finshie: yea trying to figure out where to put those jumps im gonna nerf
2017-02-26 15:26 UndeadCapulet: yeah, your style's so structured it's hard to find places to rearrange
2017-02-26 15:27 UndeadCapulet: i'd give suggestions but i never map w/ structured style so they'd probably all suck ^^'
2017-02-26 15:29 Finshie: we can go on to hard now
2017-02-26 15:29 Finshie: ill just do it later once were done
2017-02-26 15:29 UndeadCapulet: lol ok
2017-02-26 15:30 UndeadCapulet: 00:28:511 (1) - you can end this spinner at 00:29:844 - to map that beat, and it's still enough recovery time for a hard diff
2017-02-26 15:31 Finshie: ye[[
2017-02-26 15:31 Finshie: yep
2017-02-26 15:32 Finshie: hm but it kinda sounds like it ends on white tick
2017-02-26 15:33 UndeadCapulet: yeah i see what you mean
2017-02-26 15:33 UndeadCapulet: Hard players would probably find it weirder for 00:29:844 - to be totally empty though
2017-02-26 15:34 UndeadCapulet: both ways work though
2017-02-26 15:36 UndeadCapulet: 00:37:011 (1,2) - the rhythm should probably be http://puu.sh/ulbHv/d91b5d5670.jpg to properly follow the drum beats
2017-02-26 15:38 Finshie: yea youre rgiht
2017-02-26 15:38 UndeadCapulet: hm i think that's all, this diff is really polished
2017-02-26 15:38 UndeadCapulet: i like how you use spacing in places likee 01:01:344 (2,3,4,5) -

2017-02-26 15:39 Finshie: thanks :d
2017-02-26 15:39 UndeadCapulet: ah, silence the 01:37:928 (1) - end as well
2017-02-26 15:39 Finshie: had to nerf that recently actually
2017-02-26 15:39 Finshie: yea already did
2017-02-26 15:39 UndeadCapulet: cool

~~will edit with a mod for the highest diff once i've finished it~~

Misaka's Extra

00:18:678 (4) - This should just be a 1/8 slider, there aren't any beats on the grey ticks here.
00:27:678 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - You map blue ticks here where no sounds play, but you also skip the 00:28:102 - beat which has a clear sound. This rhythm is really unfitting to the song imo
00:51:178 (1) - unsnapped sliderend
01:03:178 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - This rhythm also maps extra beats at 01:03:594 (2) - while skipping actual beats at 01:03:928 - . I also don't think the jump to 01:04:011 (1) - fits the drum beats very well. I think you should instead use a rhythm closer to this for this part of the song.
01:06:012 (1,2,3,1) - These 3/4 sliders seem really out of place in this diff imo since they only exist to draw attention to vocals, which is something you don't ever do anywhere else in the map, and these vocals honestly aren't strong enough for this kind of thing imo..

I wish overall you based spacing and rhythm more on the guitar than the drums, in places like 00:24:679 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - , etc., but I guess your way also works.

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TyrantsEye2014

430 posts

Joined June 2014

TyrantsEye2014 2017-02-27T06:25:05+00:00

UndeadCapulet wrote:
Misaka's Extra
00:18:678 (4) - This should just be a 1/8 slider, there aren't any beats on the grey ticks here. okay
00:27:678 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - You map blue ticks here where no sounds play, but you also skip the 00:28:102 - beat which has a clear sound. This rhythm is really unfitting to the song imo okay
00:51:178 (1) - unsnapped sliderend fixed
01:03:178 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - This rhythm also maps extra beats at 01:03:594 (2) - while skipping actual beats at 01:03:928 - . I also don't think the jump to 01:04:011 (1) - fits the drum beats very well. I think you should instead use a rhythm closer to this for this part of the song. okay
01:06:012 (1,2,3,1) - These 3/4 sliders seem really out of place in this diff imo since they only exist to draw attention to vocals, which is something you don't ever do anywhere else in the map, and these vocals honestly aren't strong enough for this kind of thing imo.. changed it to 1/2 sliders
I wish overall you based spacing and rhythm more on the guitar than the drums, in places like 00:24:679 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - , etc., but I guess your way also works.

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thanks for modding

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Title:Inyeongeurim
TitleUnicode:인연그림
Artist:K-Run feat. kuripurin
ArtistUnicode:K-Run feat. 밤푸딩
Creator:Finshie
Version:Misaka's Extra
Source:그래도 봄은 온다
Tags:Akitoshi Misaka 10032 가랑 시노바 정해권 light novel Left Corinn
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Abe Nana

1,148 posts

Joined March 2011

Abe Nana 2017-02-27T12:45:52+00:00

Hi. From Usamin's STD modding queue

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]

there is a fatal error in this beatmap. Korean siblings are not cute. It's a fatal error.I want to adjust the volume of the last spinner except the easy and extra.

[Easy]

00:24:511 (1,2,3) - this sounds very unnatural. it is better to adopt 1/1 beat

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00:28:678 (1) - is not this spinner length too short?(1166ms) It's too short for easy players. There is no content of the criteria, but I want you to consider it.

[Normal]

00:34:178 (1,2) - like this?

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sudden repetition of 1/2 beat is hard for normal players. also it begins with a red tic. it's hard to catch the timing00:37:844 (4,5,1) - same as just above. the circle of (5) on top of a downbeat. you need to make it visually and easily.

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as you can see in the picture, you can make it easier to playing by making it closer to the x-axis.00:39:178 (1) - move this a little to the right 01:05:178 - how about adding a note here? 00:58:678 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - in this part, the tempo is too intricate, but this kiai part is very well divided.01:24:344 (1,2) - I want this

img

01:31:678 (2) - Let's give a little more tempo

img

[Hard]

00:07:012 (2,3,4) - this pattern(. ..) has a bad tempo. it is hard to hit. I think that I like this kind of thing

img

00:22:511 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I think this map has too many stacks. is may be easy to click but it's boring. this difficulty has a good flow and you have the ability to make it. good luck 00:37:011 (1,2,3,4) - It's a little bit difficult. It's just an example.

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00:39:178 (5,1) - swap new combo01:07:844 (3) - move this a little to the right

[Left's Insane]

00:10:345 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 이 부분에 히트사운딩이 안되서 심심하네요. 그 전부분은 되어있으니 이곳에도 해주세요.00:19:178 (2) - 언랭커블은 아닐지라도 리딩이 어렵게 보입니다. 00:19:345 (1,2,3) - 이부분까지의 flow가 어려운 편이다보이 조금만 더 시야가 확보되도 좋을거같네요. 이건 그냥 예시입니다.

img

01:27:844 (3) - 동그라미

your Insane and Misaka's Extra are have not problem

good luck :3

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Finshie 2017-02-27T18:02:39+00:00

Abe Nana wrote:
[b]
Hi. From Usamin's STD modding queue

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
there is a fatal error in this beatmap. Korean siblings are not cute. It's a fatal error. is this a meme
I want to adjust the volume of the last spinner except the easy and extra. it is fine now though?

[Normal]
00:34:178 (1,2) - like this? neither of the vocals or the music are following that rhythm? no changes
img
sudden repetition of 1/2 beat is hard for normal players. also it begins with a red tic. it's hard to catch the timing made the first 1/2 slider a reverse slider 00:37:011 (1) - then moved the slider after it 1 tick. the frist 2 1/2 slider seems fine though
00:37:844 (4,5,1) - same as just above. the circle of (5) on top of a downbeat. you need to make it visually and easily. applied
img
as you can see in the picture, you can make it easier to playing by making it closer to the x-axis.
00:39:178 (1) - move this a little to the right
01:05:178 - how about adding a note here? 00:58:678 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - in this part, the tempo is too intricate, but this kiai part is very well divided.
01:24:344 (1,2) - I want this
img
if did then 01:05:344 (2,3) - is gonna be awkward. trying to keep a balance to both
01:31:678 (2) - Let's give a little more tempo applied
img
[Hard]
00:07:012 (2,3,4) - this pattern(. ..) has a bad tempo. it is hard to hit. I think that I like this kind of thing
img
applied
00:22:511 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I think this map has too many stacks. is may be easy to click but it's boring. this difficulty has a good flow and you have the ability to make it. good luck
00:37:011 (1,2,3,4) - It's a little bit difficult. It's just an example.
img
that jump lol. got an idea from this. fixed
00:39:178 (5,1) - swap new combo I only do nc on red tick before the downbeat when the slider exceeds the 1 measure
01:07:844 (3) - move this a little to the right fixed

your Insane and Misaka's Extra are have not problem

good luck :3

Thanks for mod!

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