YoNiko wrote:
can I make a extra gd?
Someone is doing an extra atm . You can do a normal if you want
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Someone is doing an extra atm . You can do a normal if you want
How about 2 extra?TwillghtSparkle wrote:
YoNiko wrote:
can I make a extra gd?
Someone is doing an extra atm . You can do a normal if you want
If no, I can make Normal
insane:
i cant find any defect
another:
01:33:849 (4) - - move further away
Master:
00:56:886 (1) - not good
01:40:636 (4) - separate from 01:40:814 (5) -
this map probablely can be qualified
cheer!
i cant find any defect
another:
01:33:849 (4) - - move further away
Master:
00:56:886 (1) - not good
01:40:636 (4) - separate from 01:40:814 (5) -
this map probablely can be qualified
cheer!
It's me Luma, from my queue o/
Kami's courages:
For sounds like this I would suggest mapping them like http://puu.sh/tNLLp/7abb22c890.jpg or like you did here 00:08:850 (4,5) -
The main point I saw on you map was that you mapped stuff kinda incosistenly. For example this combo 01:31:171 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - would fit better if it's mapped the way the others around it are (http://puu.sh/tNMAY/62700f26ba.jpg)
Minor thing, but I would suggest you making these "corner-slider" ( 01:32:957 (2,2) ) to be round or straight since I don't see the point in introducing a new slider shape
Rest was fine :3
Left's Master:
The flow felt kinda chaotic at first but after some time I liked it :3
00:35:457 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part should be more consistent it's basically 3 times the same music wise execept the noice that pops up here 00:40:993 (1,2,3)
Metaku's Another:
Probably the best diff on the set, good job really nice map :3
Insane:
00:56:707 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these have similar spacing to 00:58:135 (1,2,3) - you did this at various points across the map and it could be confusing
00:20:457 (1,2,3,4) - make these similar to these 00:17:600 (1,2,1,2) - so it gets a bit more consitent
Well that's it, hope I could help you guys (^.^)/
Kami's courages:
For sounds like this I would suggest mapping them like http://puu.sh/tNLLp/7abb22c890.jpg or like you did here 00:08:850 (4,5) -
The main point I saw on you map was that you mapped stuff kinda incosistenly. For example this combo 01:31:171 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - would fit better if it's mapped the way the others around it are (http://puu.sh/tNMAY/62700f26ba.jpg)
Minor thing, but I would suggest you making these "corner-slider" ( 01:32:957 (2,2) ) to be round or straight since I don't see the point in introducing a new slider shape
Rest was fine :3
Left's Master:
The flow felt kinda chaotic at first but after some time I liked it :3
00:35:457 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part should be more consistent it's basically 3 times the same music wise execept the noice that pops up here 00:40:993 (1,2,3)
Metaku's Another:
Probably the best diff on the set, good job really nice map :3
Insane:
00:56:707 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these have similar spacing to 00:58:135 (1,2,3) - you did this at various points across the map and it could be confusing
00:20:457 (1,2,3,4) - make these similar to these 00:17:600 (1,2,1,2) - so it gets a bit more consitent
Well that's it, hope I could help you guys (^.^)/
I Hate Smoothie wrote:
another:
01:33:849 (4) - - move further away There's nothing at this timestamp... :thinking: And if you meant 01:33:850 (6) - Then it's fine as it is imo
Not changing anything as that mod was kinda vagueLumario wrote:
Metaku's Another:
Probably the best diff on the set, good job really nice map :3 Thanks, I don't know why everyone like it so much >.<
fixed normal ds
http://puu.sh/tO308/a1cc1d3b7c.osu
http://puu.sh/tO308/a1cc1d3b7c.osu
Topic Starter
Lumario wrote:
It's me Luma, from my queue o/
Kami's courages:
For sounds like this I would suggest mapping them like http://puu.sh/tNLLp/7abb22c890.jpg or like you did here 00:08:850 (4,5) -
The main point I saw on you map was that you mapped stuff kinda incosistenly. For example this combo 01:31:171 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - would fit better if it's mapped the way the others around it are (http://puu.sh/tNMAY/62700f26ba.jpg)
Minor thing, but I would suggest you making these "corner-slider" ( 01:32:957 (2,2) ) to be round or straight since I don't see the point in introducing a new slider shape
Rest was fine :3
Left's Master:
The flow felt kinda chaotic at first but after some time I liked it :3
00:35:457 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part should be more consistent it's basically 3 times the same music wise execept the noice that pops up here 00:40:993 (1,2,3)
Metaku's Another:
Probably the best diff on the set, good job really nice map :3
Insane:
00:56:707 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these have similar spacing to 00:58:135 (1,2,3) - you did this at various points across the map and it could be confusing - Added more distance
00:20:457 (1,2,3,4) - make these similar to these 00:17:600 (1,2,1,2) - so it gets a bit more consitent - Change a little bit
Well that's it, hope I could help you guys (^.^)/
Thanks for mod
hi returning M4M, gonna mod the first three diffs
[Yo's Normal]
Check AIMod
00:38:314 (1) - Ctrl J for better flow
01:44:743 (2,3,4) - This flow isn't really good for a normal, I suggest to ctrl H 2 and 3 seperately
01:50:457 (3) - Again, the flow here doesn't make sense, sliders should follow the flow in easier diffs. I know you want to make the patterns pretty and symmetrical but flow is important
01:52:600 (1) - Position this beside 7 rather than below it
[Hard]
00:21:886 (2,3,4) - This triplet is a pretty huge difficulty spike, there is big spacing and it's 1/4 unlike the 1/1 previously. Stacking the triplet would be easier
00:23:493 (3) - I feel like you could extend this because of the sound that continues
00:51:529 (2,1) - Flow could be improved here
00:51:886 (1) - Remove NC
00:58:136 (1,2,3) - Again, this could be a bit difficult but it might be okay since this part is more intense
01:40:458 (1) - Remove NC
01:37:600 (1) - ^
01:53:314 (1) - ^
01:54:029 (3) - NC
[Insane]
00:20:814 (3) - NC
00:35:099 (4) - This is slightly too far from the previous object compared to the rest of the pattern
00:55:099 (8,1) - The gap could be confused with a 1/2 jump
00:56:885 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make the spacing equal
01:13:314 (7,1) - Jump wayy too big
01:14:028 (1,2,3) - Same spacing but different timing, too difficult imo
01:54:028 (3) - NC
Also for Hard and Insane I don't personally agree with the NC pattern, I think downbeats are pretty strong so I would do it on that. You probably have your own reason so just ignore this if you do
gl!
[Yo's Normal]
Check AIMod
00:38:314 (1) - Ctrl J for better flow
01:44:743 (2,3,4) - This flow isn't really good for a normal, I suggest to ctrl H 2 and 3 seperately
01:50:457 (3) - Again, the flow here doesn't make sense, sliders should follow the flow in easier diffs. I know you want to make the patterns pretty and symmetrical but flow is important
01:52:600 (1) - Position this beside 7 rather than below it
[Hard]
00:21:886 (2,3,4) - This triplet is a pretty huge difficulty spike, there is big spacing and it's 1/4 unlike the 1/1 previously. Stacking the triplet would be easier
00:23:493 (3) - I feel like you could extend this because of the sound that continues
00:51:529 (2,1) - Flow could be improved here
00:51:886 (1) - Remove NC
00:58:136 (1,2,3) - Again, this could be a bit difficult but it might be okay since this part is more intense
01:40:458 (1) - Remove NC
01:37:600 (1) - ^
01:53:314 (1) - ^
01:54:029 (3) - NC
[Insane]
00:20:814 (3) - NC
00:35:099 (4) - This is slightly too far from the previous object compared to the rest of the pattern
00:55:099 (8,1) - The gap could be confused with a 1/2 jump
00:56:885 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make the spacing equal
01:13:314 (7,1) - Jump wayy too big
01:14:028 (1,2,3) - Same spacing but different timing, too difficult imo
01:54:028 (3) - NC
Also for Hard and Insane I don't personally agree with the NC pattern, I think downbeats are pretty strong so I would do it on that. You probably have your own reason so just ignore this if you do
gl!
Topic Starter
_orange wrote:
hi returning M4M, gonna mod the first three diffs
[Yo's Normal]
Check AIMod
00:38:314 (1) - Ctrl J for better flow
01:44:743 (2,3,4) - This flow isn't really good for a normal, I suggest to ctrl H 2 and 3 seperately
01:50:457 (3) - Again, the flow here doesn't make sense, sliders should follow the flow in easier diffs. I know you want to make the patterns pretty and symmetrical but flow is important
01:52:600 (1) - Position this beside 7 rather than below it
Yo will change what is needed
[Hard]
00:21:886 (2,3,4) - This triplet is a pretty huge difficulty spike, there is big spacing and it's 1/4 unlike the 1/1 previously. Stacking the triplet would be easier
00:23:493 (3) - I feel like you could extend this because of the sound that continues - prefer mine pattern
00:51:529 (2,1) - Flow could be improved here - ye , i will do it
00:51:886 (1) - Remove NC - ok
00:58:136 (1,2,3) - Again, this could be a bit difficult but it might be okay since this part is more intense - prefer mine
01:40:458 (1) - Remove NC -ok
01:37:600 (1) - ^ ^
01:53:314 (1) - ^ ^
01:54:029 (3) - NC ^
[Insane]
00:20:814 (3) - NC ^
00:35:099 (4) - This is slightly too far from the previous object compared to the rest of the pattern -ok
00:55:099 (8,1) - The gap could be confused with a 1/2 jump - ok
00:56:885 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make the spacing equal -ok
01:13:314 (7,1) - Jump wayy too big - ok
01:14:028 (1,2,3) - Same spacing but different timing, too difficult imo -ok
01:54:028 (3) - NC ^
Also for Hard and Insane I don't personally agree with the NC pattern, I think downbeats are pretty strong so I would do it on that. You probably have your own reason so just ignore this if you do
gl! thanks
almost all changed ty for mod !
hi for M4M if this counts
General:
Check AiMod
[Insane]
hitsounds:
00:23:135 (2) - delete the clap hitsound
hitsounds doesnt have a regular pattern and is added a bit randomly from 00:24:028 (1) - to 00:35:457 -
patterns:
00:25:100 (4,5) - ctrl g
00:36:885 (5) - NC here instead of 00:37:421 (1) -
00:39:742 (3,1) - ^
00:42:599 (3,1) - ^
00:45:635 (4,1) - ^
00:39:028 (1) - delete nc
00:41:885 (1) - ^
01:15:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use same spacing
01:18:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use a similar pattern like 01:15:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)?
01:20:814 (4) - use a circle
01:21:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use similar pattern
01:37:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - a difficulty spike imo, make it easier?
01:48:314 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
[Metaku's Another]
patterns:
00:47:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - scale it to 0.8x?
01:07:421 (1,2,3,4) - make them co-linear
01:53:314 (1,2,3,4,5) - put the order as 1,5,4,3,2
hope im not in blacklist for that little visual mistakeCheck AiMod
[Insane]
hitsounds:
00:23:135 (2) - delete the clap hitsound
hitsounds doesnt have a regular pattern and is added a bit randomly from 00:24:028 (1) - to 00:35:457 -
patterns:
00:25:100 (4,5) - ctrl g
00:36:885 (5) - NC here instead of 00:37:421 (1) -
00:39:742 (3,1) - ^
00:42:599 (3,1) - ^
00:45:635 (4,1) - ^
00:39:028 (1) - delete nc
00:41:885 (1) - ^
01:15:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use same spacing
01:18:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use a similar pattern like 01:15:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)?
01:20:814 (4) - use a circle
01:21:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use similar pattern
01:37:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - a difficulty spike imo, make it easier?
01:48:314 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
[Metaku's Another]
patterns:
00:47:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - scale it to 0.8x?
01:07:421 (1,2,3,4) - make them co-linear
01:53:314 (1,2,3,4,5) - put the order as 1,5,4,3,2
Rejected everything oopsnika mika wrote:
[Metaku's Another]
patterns:
00:47:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - scale it to 0.8x? Hmm I don't see the point tho as it uses pretty much the same spacing between notes as my most patterns 00:46:350 (1,2,3) - 00:50:457 (2,3,4,5) - etc
01:07:421 (1,2,3,4) - make them co-linear I prefer it the way it is tbh and it's pretty much the same as here anyway 01:00:279 (1,2,3,4) -
01:53:314 (1,2,3,4,5) - put the order as 1,5,4,3,2 Meh...That would cause too much back and forth jump in the same place with 01:52:600 (1,2,3,4) - imo and it would also cause overlap with 01:52:957 (3) - and 01:53:850 (4) - - so I rather keep it the way it is
Thanks for the mod though!
Topic Starter
Thanks for mod!nika mika wrote:
hi for M4Mif this countsGeneral:hope im not in blacklist for that little visual mistake - Uhm what ?
Check AiMod
[Insane]
hitsounds:
00:23:135 (2) - delete the clap hitsound
hitsounds doesnt have a regular pattern and is added a bit randomly from 00:24:028 (1) - to 00:35:457 -
patterns: - No idea about hitsounds , i will let as this
00:25:100 (4,5) - ctrl g
00:36:885 (5) - NC here instead of 00:37:421 (1) - Fixed all nc things ty
00:39:742 (3,1) - ^
00:42:599 (3,1) - ^
00:45:635 (4,1) - ^
00:39:028 (1) - delete nc
00:41:885 (1) - ^
01:15:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use same spacing - done
01:18:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use a similar pattern like 01:15:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)? - done
01:20:814 (4) - use a circle
01:21:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use similar pattern - idk i will think about it , don't want to be repititive
01:37:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - a difficulty spike imo, make it easier? - I think fits very well with song intensity
01:48:314 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ - same as here
[Metaku's Another]
patterns:
00:47:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - scale it to 0.8x?
01:07:421 (1,2,3,4) - make them co-linear
01:53:314 (1,2,3,4,5) - put the order as 1,5,4,3,2
[Hard]
00:57:600 (6) - rotate slider like this http://i.imgur.com/d2o3Cg9.png and stack 00:58:136 (1,2) - on 00:58:314 (3) - . Easier to play on a 3.3* map. But I see you have done it spaced like that all over the map. Just my opinion.
01:32:957 (1) - Put it a bit lower so slider end is pointing at next circle. http://i.imgur.com/MdT9Mdy.png
01:41:529 (1) - ^
00:32:243 (6) - ^ only this time it's circle. Was realy awkward to play
01:33:850 (4,1) - Why so big spacing all of a sudden?
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[Insane]
01:13:671 (2) - Why not same spacing as 01:12:957 (4,5,6,7,1) - ? I'd just either move it same distance away or stack it on 01:13:492 (1) -
01:21:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This whole pattern feels really bad when playing. I'd change it to something like 01:52:599 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - but smaller
01:24:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:43:314 (3) - make blanket on 01:43:671 (1) - better
01:54:028 (1) - a longer slider instead of kickslider
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Small mod, hope it helps.
00:57:600 (6) - rotate slider like this http://i.imgur.com/d2o3Cg9.png and stack 00:58:136 (1,2) - on 00:58:314 (3) - . Easier to play on a 3.3* map. But I see you have done it spaced like that all over the map. Just my opinion.
01:32:957 (1) - Put it a bit lower so slider end is pointing at next circle. http://i.imgur.com/MdT9Mdy.png
01:41:529 (1) - ^
00:32:243 (6) - ^ only this time it's circle. Was realy awkward to play
01:33:850 (4,1) - Why so big spacing all of a sudden?
[]
[Insane]
01:13:671 (2) - Why not same spacing as 01:12:957 (4,5,6,7,1) - ? I'd just either move it same distance away or stack it on 01:13:492 (1) -
01:21:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This whole pattern feels really bad when playing. I'd change it to something like 01:52:599 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - but smaller
01:24:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:43:314 (3) - make blanket on 01:43:671 (1) - better
01:54:028 (1) - a longer slider instead of kickslider
[]
Small mod, hope it helps.
Topic Starter
Thanks for mod!SquareTude wrote:
[Hard]
00:57:600 (6) - rotate slider like this http://i.imgur.com/d2o3Cg9.png and stack 00:58:136 (1,2) - on 00:58:314 (3) - . Easier to play on a 3.3* map. But I see you have done it spaced like that all over the map. Just my opinion. - prefer spaced
01:32:957 (1) - Put it a bit lower so slider end is pointing at next circle. http://i.imgur.com/MdT9Mdy.png - Fixed
01:41:529 (1) - ^ - Fixed
00:32:243 (6) - ^ only this time it's circle. Was realy awkward to play - Fixed
01:33:850 (4,1) - Why so big spacing all of a sudden? - True , need to reduce
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[Insane]
01:13:671 (2) - Why not same spacing as 01:12:957 (4,5,6,7,1) - ? I'd just either move it same distance away or stack it on 01:13:492 (1) - Fixed
01:21:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This whole pattern feels really bad when playing. I'd change it to something like 01:52:599 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - but smaller
01:24:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Looks bad yeah , changed into something else
01:43:314 (3) - make blanket on 01:43:671 (1) - Changed , but no blanket . I want to keep the same as 01:28:314 (1,2,3) -
01:54:028 (1) - a longer slider instead of kickslider - Since is last note , i want to act like a circle , with slider looks uglier
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Small mod, hope it helps. Be sure will help ^^
thanks a lot_orange wrote:
hi returning M4M, gonna mod the first three diffs
[Yo's Normal]
Check AIModok
00:38:314 (1) - Ctrl J for better flow
01:44:743 (2,3,4) - This flow isn't really good for a normal, I suggest to ctrl H 2 and 3 seperately
01:50:457 (3) - Again, the flow here doesn't make sense, sliders should follow the flow in easier diffs. I know you want to make the patterns pretty and symmetrical but flow is important
01:52:600 (1) - Position this beside 7 rather than below it
all fixed
Also for Hard and Insane I don't personally agree with the NC pattern, I think downbeats are pretty strong so I would do it on that. You probably have your own reason so just ignore this if you do
gl!
for Sparkle:
and what's wrong with the timing of insane?
do I need to add countdown?@@
update:
http://puu.sh/tQD2m/8a64edd229.osu
DeletedUser_6181859
Just some notices.
No kudosu, please.
[General]
Oh... This diff is really unrankable. At first, it's higher than 2* and doesn't match for Ranking Criteria. At second, this diff is really hard for normal-icon for several reasons: high SV (compared with next diff) => wrong flow in 90% diff; a lot of overlaps which not preferable in all diffs; hard rhythm (since it's first diff in set, it should be mapped with rules from easy, check ranking-criteria again); bad blankets in some moments; jumps which really not preferrable in easier diffs more than overlaps. It's better for Advanced, but not for Normal.
[Hard]
Really better, but your main problem is with very linear flow and different sliders. For example,you have a lot of different sliders which can be more identical: 00:12:600 (1,2) - 00:30:457 (3,5) - etc.
You skip a lot of of rhythm. If you don't know - Hard is like Insane, but a bit easier and without jumps. 00:15:993 - 00:17:421 - etc. Listen track with 25% and hear beats. In hard-diffs you can highlight middle-beats.
Also in most cases you use patterns wrong. For example, 00:25:814 (5,6,1) - looks very strange. For variability you can make 00:25:457 (4,5) - by slider. And diff really need more jumps... within a reasonable of course. Now if you reduce SV and DS, you get something-like Normal diff.
[Insane]
Rhythm is really better, but new problem appear: jumps. And again, in 90% cases it's so randomly. For example, 00:13:314 (3,4,5) - looks random because it have very different rhythms that 00:13:850 (4,5) - don't really need stack. Flow like 00:14:742 (1,2,1,2) - can be trianglethx mr. Monstrata. You almost never use custom DS, and it's strange.
[Overlall]
Suggest to read something about patterns: flow, sliders (and sliderarts) and Ranking Criteria... just in case.
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Good luck!
{end of the mod}
No kudosu, please.
[General]
- Full HD BG fully acceptable.
- Remove "Saraba, Itoshiki Kanashimi-tachi Yo MOMOIRO CLOVER Z" from tags, it's really don't needed, and add other GD-makers and some additional info:
Metaku Kami-senpai YoNiko Farewell, My Dear Sorrows cut short ver
- Check for coultdown/preview-point/timing-points will be identical in all diffs.
- Set combo-colours.
Oh... This diff is really unrankable. At first, it's higher than 2* and doesn't match for Ranking Criteria. At second, this diff is really hard for normal-icon for several reasons: high SV (compared with next diff) => wrong flow in 90% diff; a lot of overlaps which not preferable in all diffs; hard rhythm (since it's first diff in set, it should be mapped with rules from easy, check ranking-criteria again); bad blankets in some moments; jumps which really not preferrable in easier diffs more than overlaps. It's better for Advanced, but not for Normal.
[Hard]
Really better, but your main problem is with very linear flow and different sliders. For example,you have a lot of different sliders which can be more identical: 00:12:600 (1,2) - 00:30:457 (3,5) - etc.
You skip a lot of of rhythm. If you don't know - Hard is like Insane, but a bit easier and without jumps. 00:15:993 - 00:17:421 - etc. Listen track with 25% and hear beats. In hard-diffs you can highlight middle-beats.
Also in most cases you use patterns wrong. For example, 00:25:814 (5,6,1) - looks very strange. For variability you can make 00:25:457 (4,5) - by slider. And diff really need more jumps... within a reasonable of course. Now if you reduce SV and DS, you get something-like Normal diff.
[Insane]
Rhythm is really better, but new problem appear: jumps. And again, in 90% cases it's so randomly. For example, 00:13:314 (3,4,5) - looks random because it have very different rhythms that 00:13:850 (4,5) - don't really need stack. Flow like 00:14:742 (1,2,1,2) - can be triangle
[Overlall]
Suggest to read something about patterns: flow, sliders (and sliderarts) and Ranking Criteria... just in case.
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Good luck!
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Topic Starter
Wow , thanks ! very useful100bit wrote:
Just some notices.
No kudosu, please.
[General][Normal]
- Full HD BG fully acceptable.
- Remove "Saraba, Itoshiki Kanashimi-tachi Yo MOMOIRO CLOVER Z" from tags, it's really don't needed, and add other GD-makers and some additional info:
Metaku Kami-senpai YoNiko Farewell, My Dear Sorrows cut short ver- Check for coultdown/preview-point/timing-points will be identical in all diffs.
- Set combo-colours.
Oh... This diff is really unrankable. At first, it's higher than 2* and doesn't match for Ranking Criteria. At second, this diff is really hard for normal-icon for several reasons: high SV (compared with next diff) => wrong flow in 90% diff; a lot of overlaps which not preferable in all diffs; hard rhythm (since it's first diff in set, it should be mapped with rules from easy, check ranking-criteria again); bad blankets in some moments; jumps which really not preferrable in easier diffs more than overlaps. It's better for Advanced, but not for Normal.
[Hard]
Really better, but your main problem is with very linear flow and different sliders. For example,you have a lot of different sliders which can be more identical: 00:12:600 (1,2) - 00:30:457 (3,5) - etc.
You skip a lot of of rhythm. If you don't know - Hard is like Insane, but a bit easier and without jumps. 00:15:993 - 00:17:421 - etc. Listen track with 25% and hear beats. In hard-diffs you can highlight middle-beats.
Also in most cases you use patterns wrong. For example, 00:25:814 (5,6,1) - looks very strange. For variability you can make 00:25:457 (4,5) - by slider. And diff really need more jumps... within a reasonable of course. Now if you reduce SV and DS, you get something-like Normal diff.
[Insane]
Rhythm is really better, but new problem appear: jumps. And again, in 90% cases it's so randomly. For example, 00:13:314 (3,4,5) - looks random because it have very different rhythms that 00:13:850 (4,5) - don't really need stack. Flow like 00:14:742 (1,2,1,2) - can be trianglethx mr. Monstrata. You almost never use custom SV, and it's strange.
[Overlall]
Suggest to read something about patterns: flow, sliders (and sliderarts) and Ranking Criteria... just in case.
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Good luck!
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I will fix them
is my diff perfect or am i just hated by the community ;-;
Topic Starter
KawaiiKami-senpai wrote:
is my diff perfect or am i just hated by the community ;-;
Insane
00:25:278 (5,1) - Could improve flow here if slider was more CCW
00:57:242 (4,5,6) - Same thing about slider flow
01:04:385 (1,2) - Slider flow, should be left side
Not sure why you're swapping between different spacings so much. 01:05:635 (1,2,3,4) - Isn't that important but is jumpy, 01:02:599 (1,2,3,4) - is a sound you could do jumps on but is small.
01:23:671 (4,1) - Spacing is way smaller than the last pattern, keep the same
01:31:885 (3) - Rotate CCW to flow to next circle
01:32:599 (3,1) - Slider tail overlaps the next slider too much, make it more like 01:29:742 (3,1) -
01:33:671 (3,4,1) - This flow does not work, should be ctrl-h around x320 y300 to keep the back and forth movement
01:34:028 (1,2) - The change in spacing is too drastic compared to the last sliders. There should be at least 1.2-1.5x space between these, or reduce previous jumps. Same at 01:45:457 (1) -
01:36:528 (3,1,2) - Jumps themselves are less than half the size of the jump leading into them, really messes up flow here
01:38:671 (1,2) - Why not use the 1/1 slider like last time, worked well back there
01:39:564 (6,1) - Slider flow doesn't work here
01:44:921 (2,3,4,1) - ok this time you're using circular flow instead, it would flow better if you changed this shape into a hexagon
01:48:314 (4,5,6,7,8) - Issues cause this is way harder than the rest of the map, 4,5,6,7 jumps don't have any angle changes, and are hard as f to do because of this. Remember Pishifat's flow/circles vid pls
01:52:242 (4,1) - This does not work either, flow on this leader can only lead above it right now.
Hard
00:40:457 (1) - Just as a general thing, these tap streams are overused in this diff and should be cut down a bit for a hard. That + the distance spacing between all of them have slightly different spacing within the stream. Use slider to stream to fix this.
00:58:314 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - This section really lacks any structure
sorry don't feel like modding the whole set
00:25:278 (5,1) - Could improve flow here if slider was more CCW
00:57:242 (4,5,6) - Same thing about slider flow
01:04:385 (1,2) - Slider flow, should be left side
Not sure why you're swapping between different spacings so much. 01:05:635 (1,2,3,4) - Isn't that important but is jumpy, 01:02:599 (1,2,3,4) - is a sound you could do jumps on but is small.
01:23:671 (4,1) - Spacing is way smaller than the last pattern, keep the same
01:31:885 (3) - Rotate CCW to flow to next circle
01:32:599 (3,1) - Slider tail overlaps the next slider too much, make it more like 01:29:742 (3,1) -
01:33:671 (3,4,1) - This flow does not work, should be ctrl-h around x320 y300 to keep the back and forth movement
01:34:028 (1,2) - The change in spacing is too drastic compared to the last sliders. There should be at least 1.2-1.5x space between these, or reduce previous jumps. Same at 01:45:457 (1) -
01:36:528 (3,1,2) - Jumps themselves are less than half the size of the jump leading into them, really messes up flow here
01:38:671 (1,2) - Why not use the 1/1 slider like last time, worked well back there
01:39:564 (6,1) - Slider flow doesn't work here
01:44:921 (2,3,4,1) - ok this time you're using circular flow instead, it would flow better if you changed this shape into a hexagon
01:48:314 (4,5,6,7,8) - Issues cause this is way harder than the rest of the map, 4,5,6,7 jumps don't have any angle changes, and are hard as f to do because of this. Remember Pishifat's flow/circles vid pls
01:52:242 (4,1) - This does not work either, flow on this leader can only lead above it right now.
Hard
00:40:457 (1) - Just as a general thing, these tap streams are overused in this diff and should be cut down a bit for a hard. That + the distance spacing between all of them have slightly different spacing within the stream. Use slider to stream to fix this.
00:58:314 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - This section really lacks any structure
sorry don't feel like modding the whole set
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mod , i tried to change all for a better flow!Sinnoh wrote:
Insane
00:25:278 (5,1) - Could improve flow here if slider was more CCW
00:57:242 (4,5,6) - Same thing about slider flow
01:04:385 (1,2) - Slider flow, should be left side
Not sure why you're swapping between different spacings so much. 01:05:635 (1,2,3,4) - Isn't that important but is jumpy, 01:02:599 (1,2,3,4) - is a sound you could do jumps on but is small.
01:23:671 (4,1) - Spacing is way smaller than the last pattern, keep the same
01:31:885 (3) - Rotate CCW to flow to next circle
01:32:599 (3,1) - Slider tail overlaps the next slider too much, make it more like 01:29:742 (3,1) -
01:33:671 (3,4,1) - This flow does not work, should be ctrl-h around x320 y300 to keep the back and forth movement
01:34:028 (1,2) - The change in spacing is too drastic compared to the last sliders. There should be at least 1.2-1.5x space between these, or reduce previous jumps. Same at 01:45:457 (1) -
01:36:528 (3,1,2) - Jumps themselves are less than half the size of the jump leading into them, really messes up flow here
01:38:671 (1,2) - Why not use the 1/1 slider like last time, worked well back there
01:39:564 (6,1) - Slider flow doesn't work here
01:44:921 (2,3,4,1) - ok this time you're using circular flow instead, it would flow better if you changed this shape into a hexagon
01:48:314 (4,5,6,7,8) - Issues cause this is way harder than the rest of the map, 4,5,6,7 jumps don't have any angle changes, and are hard as f to do because of this. Remember Pishifat's flow/circles vid pls
01:52:242 (4,1) - This does not work either, flow on this leader can only lead above it right now.
Hard
00:40:457 (1) - Just as a general thing, these tap streams are overused in this diff and should be cut down a bit for a hard. That + the distance spacing between all of them have slightly different spacing within the stream. Use slider to stream to fix this.
00:58:314 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - This section really lacks any structure
sorry don't feel like modding the whole set
TwillghtSparkle wrote:
thanks a lot !100bit wrote:
Just some notices.
No kudosu, please.
[General][Normal]
- Full HD BG fully acceptable.
- Remove "Saraba, Itoshiki Kanashimi-tachi Yo MOMOIRO CLOVER Z" from tags, it's really don't needed, and add other GD-makers and some additional info:
Metaku Kami-senpai YoNiko Farewell, My Dear Sorrows cut short ver- Check for coultdown/preview-point/timing-points will be identical in all diffs.
- Set combo-colours.
Oh... This diff is really unrankable. At first, it's higher than 2* and doesn't match for Ranking Criteria. At second, this diff is really hard for normal-icon for several reasons: high SV (compared with next diff) => wrong flow in 90% diff; a lot of overlaps which not preferable in all diffs; hard rhythm (since it's first diff in set, it should be mapped with rules from easy, check ranking-criteria again); bad blankets in some moments; jumps which really not preferrable in easier diffs more than overlaps. It's better for Advanced, but not for Normal.
ok I will fix them all, but I don't think my blankets are bad in some moments.
[Overlall]
Suggest to read something about patterns: flow, sliders (and sliderarts) and Ranking Criteria... just in case.
===
Good luck!
{end of the mod}
Hello, a little mod
Yo's Normal
00:26:886 (1,2) - 2 is too close to 1, separate them a little, probably make them like 00:51:171 (3,4) -
Hard
00:51:529 (2,3) - Too close, something like this probably looks better:
01:07:779 (4,5) - This doesn't looks very good, I suggest to make the shapes simmetrical or smth like that
01:12:600 (3) - Fix this shape, looks weird. Make it more like:
Metaku's Another
00:05:100 (5) - Move it to x:186 y:168 so its distanced the same to all the objects around it? xD It's just random small idea:
00:58:493 - How about curving and blanket 00:58:850 (3) - ? Like:
I think it would look cool
Left's Master
00:22:243 (2) - Add a clap (with the auto sampleset) on that first circle so the hitsound sequence doesn't end so abruptly
01:41:886 (3) - Add a whistle there, wouldn't that be nice? :O
I don't think I can find anything on the other diffs, good luck!
Yo's Normal
00:26:886 (1,2) - 2 is too close to 1, separate them a little, probably make them like 00:51:171 (3,4) -
Hard
00:51:529 (2,3) - Too close, something like this probably looks better:
01:07:779 (4,5) - This doesn't looks very good, I suggest to make the shapes simmetrical or smth like that
01:12:600 (3) - Fix this shape, looks weird. Make it more like:
Metaku's Another
00:05:100 (5) - Move it to x:186 y:168 so its distanced the same to all the objects around it? xD It's just random small idea:
00:58:493 - How about curving and blanket 00:58:850 (3) - ? Like:
I think it would look cool
Left's Master
00:22:243 (2) - Add a clap (with the auto sampleset) on that first circle so the hitsound sequence doesn't end so abruptly
01:41:886 (3) - Add a whistle there, wouldn't that be nice? :O
I don't think I can find anything on the other diffs, good luck!
Topic Starter
Thanks for mod!HallidayASR wrote:
Hello, a little mod
Yo's Normal
00:26:886 (1,2) - 2 is too close to 1, separate them a little, probably make them like 00:51:171 (3,4) -
Hard
00:51:529 (2,3) - Too close, something like this probably looks better:
01:07:779 (4,5) - This doesn't looks very good, I suggest to make the shapes simmetrical or smth like that - Fix
01:12:600 (3) - Fix this shape, looks weird. Make it more like:
Metaku's Another
00:05:100 (5) - Move it to x:186 y:168 so its distanced the same to all the objects around it? xD It's just random small idea:
00:58:493 - How about curving and blanket 00:58:850 (3) - ? Like:
I think it would look cool
Left's Master
00:22:243 (2) - Add a clap (with the auto sampleset) on that first circle so the hitsound sequence doesn't end so abruptly
01:41:886 (3) - Add a whistle there, wouldn't that be nice? :O
I don't think I can find anything on the other diffs, good luck!
from my q
[general]
nu ar trebui sa schimbi numele creatorului de la 'Twillght Sparkle' la 'Alex3i2'? tocmai ti-ai schimbat numele dupa cum vad eu
MOMOIRO CLOVER Z nu ar trebui sa fie la tags deoarece e deja trecut la artist. de asemenea adauga la tags Kami-senpai si Mentai deoarece au contribuit la crearea acestei mape p.s.: Mentai's Extreme are la tags 'Yo' in loc de 'Emonal'. ar fi bine sa inlocuiesti acel Yo cu Emonal
Saraba, Itoshiki Kanashimi-tachi fac parte din titlul melodiei deci cred ca ar trebui sa le stergi de la tags
opreste acel countdown de la Hard deoarece la celelate dificultati countdown-ul nu este pornit
am vazut ca ai hitsounds numite in felul urmator: soft-___2, 5 si 7. de ce nu le numesti mai bine asa: soft-____, 2 si 3? asa o sa fie mai usor dupa parerea mea
[yo's normal]
please decrease the ar to 4. ar 6 would be pretty harsh for advanced players
http://puu.sh/vpMOH/52f458f7a8.png wait a minute is this manually edited???
00:12:600 (1,2) - unfortunately the polarity doesn't work here and it looks a bit weird because there's no an extension at all. would be better if you'll have 00:12:600 (1) - as an ordinary 1/1 slider instead. same goes for 00:15:457 (1,2) - 00:18:314 (1,2) - 00:21:171 (1,2) - and so on
00:36:529 (3,4) - 00:56:886 (3,4) - 00:57:243 (4,5) - check the spacing on these points. seems like you've got some spacing issues there
00:22:421 - - 00:23:863 - really weird to see how you left this whole 2/4 section....empty. the trumpets are even more stronger in comparison with the intro imo so for example you can map an upbeat slider with reverse arrow on 00:22:779 - like in this picture https://puu.sh/vpNr9/1759800496.jpg
00:29:743 (1,2,3,4) - seems like you started to change the rhythm at the second measure of this whole pattern so why don't you replace 00:30:457 (2) - with an 1/1 slider instead as you did for 00:31:886 (4) - ?
00:34:029 (4) - maybe split this 1/1 slider into 2 notes? just to be consistent with the first measure of 00:32:600 (1,2,3,4) -
00:35:457 (1,2,3,4) - if you listen carefully this whole part you'll see that the rhythms sounds pretty weird tbh and also the polarity from 00:36:529 (3,4) - looks and sounds pretty weird because 00:36:529 (3) - ignores that big 1/1 tick from 00:36:886 - so you can remap this part like in this image https://puu.sh/vpOgg/86d0efce48.jpg in order to follow the music and the vocals more properly. same goes for 00:38:314 (1,2,3,4) - 00:41:171 (1,2,3,4) - 00:44:029 (1,2,3,4) -
01:06:707 (1) - weird polarity imo try this rhythm instead in order to follow the vocals properly http://puu.sh/vpPay/325282537f.jpg
01:15:457 - - 01:26:707 - idk why did you left a break here because there is something to emphasize so why don't map the break instead?
01:37:064 - please don't leave this whole 2/3 section empty. at least add an 1/1 slider with reverse arrow on 01:37:243 - instead of leaving this whole section empty
01:48:493 - same as above but this time add just an 1/1 slider starting from 01:48:671 - in order to fullfill a bit this section
01:52:243 (1) - seems like you have to swap the ncs here since the new stanza is on 01:52:600 (2) - and not on this note tbh
looks promising but pay more attention on aesthetics tho
[hard]
combo colours are not set
hp la 5 si ar la 6 te rog xD ar 8 nu prea merge bine la un hard. aceeasi explicatie si pentru hp
00:12:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - nu crezi ca partea asta este putin mai dens in comparatie cu celelalte sectiuni ca de exemplu 00:35:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -? In sectiunea asta, instrumentele sunt foarte puternice si merita sa fie scoase in evidenta mult de atat deci nu ar strica sa faci aceasta sectiune mult mai dens la fel cum ai facut la celelalte sectiuni
00:21:886 (3) - acest hitclap n-ar trebui sa fie la inceputul slider-ului ar trebui sa fie la capatul acestuia in schimb exact cum ai facut la 00:13:314 (3) - 00:16:171 (3) - si asa mai departe
00:23:136 (2) - chiar daca aici e un fel de cymbal ar fi bine sa pui un hitwhistle in schimb s-ar potrivi mult mai bine dupa parerea mea
00:23:493 (3,4,5,1) - un fel de sudden jump sau unexpectable jump deoarece in aceasta dificultate este numai antijump in mare parte iar unii jucatori s-ar incurca aici deoarece nu s-ar astepta la un jump 'pe nepusa masa'. cred ca ar fi bine sa mai micsorezi spatiul aici
00:25:279 - 00:28:136 - 00:33:850 - nu-mi prea place cum ai lasat aceste 1/2 ticks...cam pustii deoarece acolo sunt vocalurile iar in loc sa le scoti in evidenta unde ai facut numai la 00:30:993(4)- pur si simplu le ignori. ar trebui sa pui niste 1/2 notes ca sa scoti vocalele in evidenta asa muzica s-ar auzi mult mai bine decat inainte sa fiu sincera
00:39:207 - cred ca ai pierdut un 1/2 note aici dupa cum se vede deoarece vocalele sunt puternice aici si merita scoase in evidenta aici cum ai facut si la 00:36:350 (4) -
00:40:457 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 00:41:886 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - nu stiu cum sa spun dar aici zici ca e prea pustiu cand asculti. mi-a placut cum ai facut la 00:35:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - dar apoi ai schimbat cursul ritmului de tot si din pacate nu ti-a iesit deloc deoarece ignori niste beat-uri sau mai bine zis vocalele si acele trompete si mai ales chitara care sunt tare puternice si care merita sa fie scoase in evidenta decat doar sa le ignori. it sugerez sa refaci ritmul la ambele sectiuni cum ai facut si la 00:35:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - http://puu.sh/vqOUt/7fcc91aa2f.jpg http://puu.sh/vqOWv/418611f540.jpg
00:44:921 - iar ai ratat un 1/2 note...aceeasi explicatie ca si 00:39:207 -
00:45:457 - aici poti sa adaugi un 1/1 note deoarece aici muzica se opreste si ar scoate foarte bine in evidenta oprirea muzicii pentru un moment
00:45:636 (1,2) - cred ca acest pattern ar fi trebuit sa arate cam asa http://puu.sh/vqPgM/54e816a1c8.jpg
00:46:886 (1) - aici flow-ul se simte cam abrupt din punctul meu de vedere dar partea cea mai rea este ca aceata parte este putin mai dens fata de 00:49:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - si asa mai departe...oarecum. poti sa refaci ritmul facand aceasta sectiune mult mai intensa asa cum sunt si vocalele si tobele din melodie ca sa le poti scoate in evidenta mult mai bine cam de genul asa. poti sa aplici acelasi ritm si pentru 00:49:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - si 00:52:600 (1,2,3,4) -
00:56:350 (1) - remove nc there's no new stanza and same for 00:56:707 (1) -
aici necesita multa munca la ncs, ritm, aesthetics si asa mai departe. sunt mai multe sectiuni unde se simte tare pustiu unde vocalele sunt atat de intense incat merita sa fie scoase in evidenta: 00:59:029 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - 01:04:386 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:09:654 (2,3,4,5,6) - si asa mai departe
[metaku's another]
combo colours are not set
shouldn't be metaku's insane? just to have a linear spread naming lol
ar 9? doesn't feel a bit too harsh? set the ar to 8 for instance
00:01:886 (3,4,5) - pretty weird to see that the jump between 00:01:886 (3) - and 00:02:064 (4) - is bigger than the one between 00:02:064 (4) - and 00:02:243 (5) - because between 00:01:886 (3) - and 00:02:064 (4) - the instruments are not really intense in comparison with 00:02:064 (4) - and 00:02:243 (5) - so i guess the jump between 00:02:064 (4) - and 00:02:243 (5) - should be bigger than 00:01:886 (3) - and 00:02:064 (4) -. same goes for 00:04:743 (3,4,5) - and 00:10:457 (3,4,5) -
00:02:600 (1) - i know that 00:02:064 (4)- doesn't cover all the reverse arrow of it but better move this slider a bit up to avoid any possible issues
00:03:136 (2,3) - blanket looks pretty off visually. just move 00:03:671 (3) - like 6 grids down in order to fix the blanket
00:47:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - tbh after many plays this one plays a bit unconfortable to me i suggest to make the pattern less confusing if possible
01:00:279 (1,2,3) - because of the high intensity of the song these won't be readable enough because many players will play this one like they're clicking triplets and they'll get misses because of the low readability. it would better if you will make jumps between these all 3 notes in order to make them more readable. same goes for 01:07:421 (1,2,3) -
01:50:636 (3,4) - this would play better if you will ctrl+g 01:50:814 (4) - imo
definitely a fun diff to play you've just became one of my favourites mappers! *cough* welp nice diff here
[left's master]
combo colours are not set
should be left's insane instead is not a bms song or whatever
00:08:136 (5) - the previous sliders like this one for example 00:01:529 (3) - 00:04:386 (3) - and so on are just 1/2 sliders not 3/4 sliders. you literally break the consistency with the previous sliders like this one so why don't you make the 3/4 slider into 1/2 slider instead? here's no any extension here as i can see moreover don't forget to remove that green line from 00:08:404 - if you're going to fix this point
00:09:386 (3,4) - no jump? the instruments are pretty intense here imo
00:10:457 (4) - same as i said at 00:08:136 (5) - the music stops on the 1/2 tick
00:15:814 - tbh i would make this one clickable instead of a sliderend so you have to ctrl+g 00:15:457 (1,2) -
00:21:529 (3) - did you put the nc accidentally? if yes, i guess you have to remove it
00:38:314 (1,2,1,2) - i don't get here what you did because on 00:35:814 (3,1,2,1,2,3) - the 1/2s are more spaced because of the intensity of music and here you just spaced them but not so much as you did with other patterns like this one so spacing these 1/2s for the sake of the intesity of song wouldn't hurt
01:08:136 (4,1) - you missed a triplet here for a proper emphasis of the guitar
01:15:814 (2,3) - would prefer to ctrl+g this one for making 01:16:171 - clickable for a proper emphasis of the stronger vocals
01:18:671 (2,3) - same as above^
[kami's courageous]
ar 9 or 8.5 - 8.7 would be better than 9.3 imo
00:01:886 (4,5,6,7) - this one plays pretty lame imo because the pattern itself is pretty sloopy imo. try to remake the pattern like this one https://puu.sh/vtX77/c9f2d10016.jpg you can increase the spacing afterwards for a better flow and playability imo
00:07:243 (3,4) - no jump here? would be good a jump for a build-up effect fo the intensive intruments tbh same applies for 00:10:636 (6,7) - 00:27:600 (4,5) - and so on
00:34:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this section would be nice for a stream because the vocals are calling after streams or just use this rhythm https://puu.sh/vu0hL/6fbbfb68df.jpg
00:50:189 - this one sounds overmapped xd
00:52:957 (3) - would prefer to have this 1/4 slider as an 1/1 note instead
00:57:600 (1) - try to avoid these wiggle sliders they affect the speed of the sliders just in the middle of it...sort of..
01:09:207 (1) - having just a long upbeat slider is the worst idea because it slightly ignores the instruments imo having a rhythm like this one http://puu.sh/vu1fh/efcef9656c.jpg would work much better tbh
01:21:796 (4) - this 1/4 slider feels pretty overmapped because there's no sound in there
01:52:243 (5) - here the triplets doesn't fit at all because in the music bg there's no any triplets as i can see so you have to delete 01:52:332 (6) - since that 1/4 note feels overmapped imo
needs more rework on jumps rhythm and so on...i'm sorry if i didn't mention all of them would be pretty boring to repeat the same stuff...
as a last note, the spread between Hard and Metaku's Another is pretty huge because the Hard diff is an antijump difficulty and a big amount of upbeat sliders and 1/1 sliders while Metaku's Another is a jumpy diff and fullfilled with many triplets...kinda you have to increase the note density of Hard or mapping an Light Insane is your choice after all
a good map but needs more rework on some places
bafta!
[general]
nu ar trebui sa schimbi numele creatorului de la 'Twillght Sparkle' la 'Alex3i2'? tocmai ti-ai schimbat numele dupa cum vad eu
MOMOIRO CLOVER Z nu ar trebui sa fie la tags deoarece e deja trecut la artist. de asemenea adauga la tags Kami-senpai si Mentai deoarece au contribuit la crearea acestei mape p.s.: Mentai's Extreme are la tags 'Yo' in loc de 'Emonal'. ar fi bine sa inlocuiesti acel Yo cu Emonal
Saraba, Itoshiki Kanashimi-tachi fac parte din titlul melodiei deci cred ca ar trebui sa le stergi de la tags
opreste acel countdown de la Hard deoarece la celelate dificultati countdown-ul nu este pornit
am vazut ca ai hitsounds numite in felul urmator: soft-___2, 5 si 7. de ce nu le numesti mai bine asa: soft-____, 2 si 3? asa o sa fie mai usor dupa parerea mea
[yo's normal]
please decrease the ar to 4. ar 6 would be pretty harsh for advanced players
http://puu.sh/vpMOH/52f458f7a8.png wait a minute is this manually edited???
00:12:600 (1,2) - unfortunately the polarity doesn't work here and it looks a bit weird because there's no an extension at all. would be better if you'll have 00:12:600 (1) - as an ordinary 1/1 slider instead. same goes for 00:15:457 (1,2) - 00:18:314 (1,2) - 00:21:171 (1,2) - and so on
00:36:529 (3,4) - 00:56:886 (3,4) - 00:57:243 (4,5) - check the spacing on these points. seems like you've got some spacing issues there
00:22:421 - - 00:23:863 - really weird to see how you left this whole 2/4 section....empty. the trumpets are even more stronger in comparison with the intro imo so for example you can map an upbeat slider with reverse arrow on 00:22:779 - like in this picture https://puu.sh/vpNr9/1759800496.jpg
00:29:743 (1,2,3,4) - seems like you started to change the rhythm at the second measure of this whole pattern so why don't you replace 00:30:457 (2) - with an 1/1 slider instead as you did for 00:31:886 (4) - ?
00:34:029 (4) - maybe split this 1/1 slider into 2 notes? just to be consistent with the first measure of 00:32:600 (1,2,3,4) -
00:35:457 (1,2,3,4) - if you listen carefully this whole part you'll see that the rhythms sounds pretty weird tbh and also the polarity from 00:36:529 (3,4) - looks and sounds pretty weird because 00:36:529 (3) - ignores that big 1/1 tick from 00:36:886 - so you can remap this part like in this image https://puu.sh/vpOgg/86d0efce48.jpg in order to follow the music and the vocals more properly. same goes for 00:38:314 (1,2,3,4) - 00:41:171 (1,2,3,4) - 00:44:029 (1,2,3,4) -
01:06:707 (1) - weird polarity imo try this rhythm instead in order to follow the vocals properly http://puu.sh/vpPay/325282537f.jpg
01:15:457 - - 01:26:707 - idk why did you left a break here because there is something to emphasize so why don't map the break instead?
01:37:064 - please don't leave this whole 2/3 section empty. at least add an 1/1 slider with reverse arrow on 01:37:243 - instead of leaving this whole section empty
01:48:493 - same as above but this time add just an 1/1 slider starting from 01:48:671 - in order to fullfill a bit this section
01:52:243 (1) - seems like you have to swap the ncs here since the new stanza is on 01:52:600 (2) - and not on this note tbh
looks promising but pay more attention on aesthetics tho
[hard]
combo colours are not set
hp la 5 si ar la 6 te rog xD ar 8 nu prea merge bine la un hard. aceeasi explicatie si pentru hp
00:12:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - nu crezi ca partea asta este putin mai dens in comparatie cu celelalte sectiuni ca de exemplu 00:35:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -? In sectiunea asta, instrumentele sunt foarte puternice si merita sa fie scoase in evidenta mult de atat deci nu ar strica sa faci aceasta sectiune mult mai dens la fel cum ai facut la celelalte sectiuni
00:21:886 (3) - acest hitclap n-ar trebui sa fie la inceputul slider-ului ar trebui sa fie la capatul acestuia in schimb exact cum ai facut la 00:13:314 (3) - 00:16:171 (3) - si asa mai departe
00:23:136 (2) - chiar daca aici e un fel de cymbal ar fi bine sa pui un hitwhistle in schimb s-ar potrivi mult mai bine dupa parerea mea
00:23:493 (3,4,5,1) - un fel de sudden jump sau unexpectable jump deoarece in aceasta dificultate este numai antijump in mare parte iar unii jucatori s-ar incurca aici deoarece nu s-ar astepta la un jump 'pe nepusa masa'. cred ca ar fi bine sa mai micsorezi spatiul aici
00:25:279 - 00:28:136 - 00:33:850 - nu-mi prea place cum ai lasat aceste 1/2 ticks...cam pustii deoarece acolo sunt vocalurile iar in loc sa le scoti in evidenta unde ai facut numai la 00:30:993(4)- pur si simplu le ignori. ar trebui sa pui niste 1/2 notes ca sa scoti vocalele in evidenta asa muzica s-ar auzi mult mai bine decat inainte sa fiu sincera
00:39:207 - cred ca ai pierdut un 1/2 note aici dupa cum se vede deoarece vocalele sunt puternice aici si merita scoase in evidenta aici cum ai facut si la 00:36:350 (4) -
00:40:457 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 00:41:886 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - nu stiu cum sa spun dar aici zici ca e prea pustiu cand asculti. mi-a placut cum ai facut la 00:35:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - dar apoi ai schimbat cursul ritmului de tot si din pacate nu ti-a iesit deloc deoarece ignori niste beat-uri sau mai bine zis vocalele si acele trompete si mai ales chitara care sunt tare puternice si care merita sa fie scoase in evidenta decat doar sa le ignori. it sugerez sa refaci ritmul la ambele sectiuni cum ai facut si la 00:35:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - http://puu.sh/vqOUt/7fcc91aa2f.jpg http://puu.sh/vqOWv/418611f540.jpg
00:44:921 - iar ai ratat un 1/2 note...aceeasi explicatie ca si 00:39:207 -
00:45:457 - aici poti sa adaugi un 1/1 note deoarece aici muzica se opreste si ar scoate foarte bine in evidenta oprirea muzicii pentru un moment
00:45:636 (1,2) - cred ca acest pattern ar fi trebuit sa arate cam asa http://puu.sh/vqPgM/54e816a1c8.jpg
00:46:886 (1) - aici flow-ul se simte cam abrupt din punctul meu de vedere dar partea cea mai rea este ca aceata parte este putin mai dens fata de 00:49:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - si asa mai departe...oarecum. poti sa refaci ritmul facand aceasta sectiune mult mai intensa asa cum sunt si vocalele si tobele din melodie ca sa le poti scoate in evidenta mult mai bine cam de genul asa. poti sa aplici acelasi ritm si pentru 00:49:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - si 00:52:600 (1,2,3,4) -
00:56:350 (1) - remove nc there's no new stanza and same for 00:56:707 (1) -
aici necesita multa munca la ncs, ritm, aesthetics si asa mai departe. sunt mai multe sectiuni unde se simte tare pustiu unde vocalele sunt atat de intense incat merita sa fie scoase in evidenta: 00:59:029 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - 01:04:386 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:09:654 (2,3,4,5,6) - si asa mai departe
[metaku's another]
combo colours are not set
shouldn't be metaku's insane? just to have a linear spread naming lol
ar 9? doesn't feel a bit too harsh? set the ar to 8 for instance
00:01:886 (3,4,5) - pretty weird to see that the jump between 00:01:886 (3) - and 00:02:064 (4) - is bigger than the one between 00:02:064 (4) - and 00:02:243 (5) - because between 00:01:886 (3) - and 00:02:064 (4) - the instruments are not really intense in comparison with 00:02:064 (4) - and 00:02:243 (5) - so i guess the jump between 00:02:064 (4) - and 00:02:243 (5) - should be bigger than 00:01:886 (3) - and 00:02:064 (4) -. same goes for 00:04:743 (3,4,5) - and 00:10:457 (3,4,5) -
00:02:600 (1) - i know that 00:02:064 (4)- doesn't cover all the reverse arrow of it but better move this slider a bit up to avoid any possible issues
00:03:136 (2,3) - blanket looks pretty off visually. just move 00:03:671 (3) - like 6 grids down in order to fix the blanket
00:47:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - tbh after many plays this one plays a bit unconfortable to me i suggest to make the pattern less confusing if possible
01:00:279 (1,2,3) - because of the high intensity of the song these won't be readable enough because many players will play this one like they're clicking triplets and they'll get misses because of the low readability. it would better if you will make jumps between these all 3 notes in order to make them more readable. same goes for 01:07:421 (1,2,3) -
01:50:636 (3,4) - this would play better if you will ctrl+g 01:50:814 (4) - imo
definitely a fun diff to play you've just became one of my favourites mappers! *cough* welp nice diff here
[left's master]
combo colours are not set
should be left's insane instead is not a bms song or whatever
00:08:136 (5) - the previous sliders like this one for example 00:01:529 (3) - 00:04:386 (3) - and so on are just 1/2 sliders not 3/4 sliders. you literally break the consistency with the previous sliders like this one so why don't you make the 3/4 slider into 1/2 slider instead? here's no any extension here as i can see moreover don't forget to remove that green line from 00:08:404 - if you're going to fix this point
00:09:386 (3,4) - no jump? the instruments are pretty intense here imo
00:10:457 (4) - same as i said at 00:08:136 (5) - the music stops on the 1/2 tick
00:15:814 - tbh i would make this one clickable instead of a sliderend so you have to ctrl+g 00:15:457 (1,2) -
00:21:529 (3) - did you put the nc accidentally? if yes, i guess you have to remove it
00:38:314 (1,2,1,2) - i don't get here what you did because on 00:35:814 (3,1,2,1,2,3) - the 1/2s are more spaced because of the intensity of music and here you just spaced them but not so much as you did with other patterns like this one so spacing these 1/2s for the sake of the intesity of song wouldn't hurt
01:08:136 (4,1) - you missed a triplet here for a proper emphasis of the guitar
01:15:814 (2,3) - would prefer to ctrl+g this one for making 01:16:171 - clickable for a proper emphasis of the stronger vocals
01:18:671 (2,3) - same as above^
[kami's courageous]
so name it to Kami's Extra since this is not the highest diffRanking Criteria wrote:
A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to a username. Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player. Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming.
ar 9 or 8.5 - 8.7 would be better than 9.3 imo
00:01:886 (4,5,6,7) - this one plays pretty lame imo because the pattern itself is pretty sloopy imo. try to remake the pattern like this one https://puu.sh/vtX77/c9f2d10016.jpg you can increase the spacing afterwards for a better flow and playability imo
00:07:243 (3,4) - no jump here? would be good a jump for a build-up effect fo the intensive intruments tbh same applies for 00:10:636 (6,7) - 00:27:600 (4,5) - and so on
00:34:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this section would be nice for a stream because the vocals are calling after streams or just use this rhythm https://puu.sh/vu0hL/6fbbfb68df.jpg
00:50:189 - this one sounds overmapped xd
00:52:957 (3) - would prefer to have this 1/4 slider as an 1/1 note instead
00:57:600 (1) - try to avoid these wiggle sliders they affect the speed of the sliders just in the middle of it...sort of..
01:09:207 (1) - having just a long upbeat slider is the worst idea because it slightly ignores the instruments imo having a rhythm like this one http://puu.sh/vu1fh/efcef9656c.jpg would work much better tbh
01:21:796 (4) - this 1/4 slider feels pretty overmapped because there's no sound in there
01:52:243 (5) - here the triplets doesn't fit at all because in the music bg there's no any triplets as i can see so you have to delete 01:52:332 (6) - since that 1/4 note feels overmapped imo
needs more rework on jumps rhythm and so on...i'm sorry if i didn't mention all of them would be pretty boring to repeat the same stuff...
as a last note, the spread between Hard and Metaku's Another is pretty huge because the Hard diff is an antijump difficulty and a big amount of upbeat sliders and 1/1 sliders while Metaku's Another is a jumpy diff and fullfilled with many triplets...kinda you have to increase the note density of Hard or mapping an Light Insane is your choice after all
a good map but needs more rework on some places
bafta!
Topic Starter
Multumesc mult Byby , o sa dau reply cat de curand , sa vorbesc cu creatorii gd-urilor
Thanks for the mod!ByBy wrote:
[kami's courageous]Ranking Criteria wrote:
A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to a username. Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player. Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming.
so name it to Kami's Extra since this is not the highest diffyea when i made it, it was the highest and we weren't expecting another diff so
ar 9 or 8.5 - 8.7 would be better than 9.3 imo
00:01:886 (4,5,6,7) - this one plays pretty lame imo because the pattern itself is pretty sloopy imo. try to remake the pattern like this one https://puu.sh/vtX77/c9f2d10016.jpg you can increase the spacing afterwards for a better flow and playability imo
00:07:243 (3,4) - no jump here? would be good a jump for a build-up effect fo the intensive intruments tbh same applies for 00:10:636 (6,7) - 00:27:600 (4,5) - and so on
00:34:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this section would be nice for a stream because the vocals are calling after streams or just use this rhythm https://puu.sh/vu0hL/6fbbfb68df.jpg personally i don't hear your rhythm so im not going to map to that, but i do hear some more triples so ill do something about that
00:50:189 - this one sounds overmapped xd it's not, if you listen to the music, it is mapped to that
00:52:957 (3) - would prefer to have this 1/4 slider as an 1/1 note instead uhhhh 1/1 note? lol i don't see the reasoning behind that, and even if there was reasoning, i still believe this fits music
00:57:600 (1) - try to avoid these wiggle sliders they affect the speed of the sliders just in the middle of it...sort of.. that was the point
01:09:207 (1) - having just a long upbeat slider is the worst idea because it slightly ignores the instruments imo having a rhythm like this one http://puu.sh/vu1fh/efcef9656c.jpg would work much better tbh i mean, i wouldn't say it's the WORST idea, and I would be careful about saying that on other mods, but i will consider your mod. The reason I am hesitant to change this right now is because of aesthetics. I do agree that there is something else I could map to, but your suggestion is in itself incorrect, since there is a sound at 01:09:386 - that you are missing as well, so in turn, you are skipping out on intruments as well
01:21:796 (4) - this 1/4 slider feels pretty overmapped because there's no sound in there
01:52:243 (5) - here the triplets doesn't fit at all because in the music bg there's no any triplets as i can see so you have to delete 01:52:332 (6) - since that 1/4 note feels overmapped imo
needs more rework on jumps rhythm and so on...i'm sorry if i didn't mention all of them would be pretty boring to repeat the same stuff...i agree that some jumps need some changes, but after looking over it many times, I believe I can justify all of my rhythm choices. Also, just as a quick tip on modding, when you say "and so on" you imply the same changes on the same types of parts in the song. However, when you used it, the three timestamps you posted were of completely different sounds and different sections, making it very hard to discern what pattern you're even trying to have me notice.
While I did agree with your points, I still don't understand what general issue you have with the map as a whole that you say needs a rework, but only those specific parts you pointed out
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Halliday wrote:
Hello, a little mod
Metaku's Another
00:05:100 (5) - Move it to x:186 y:168 so its distanced the same to all the objects around it? xD It's just random small idea: Adjusted all objects slightly here
00:58:493 - How about curving and blanket 00:58:850 (3) - ? Like:
I think it would look cool
I don't think I can find anything on the other diffs, good luck!
ByBy wrote:
[metaku's another]
combo colours are not set I'll just leave this to Alex3i2
shouldn't be metaku's insane? just to have a linear spread naming lol Yeah there used to be a lower insane but might as well change this now
ar 9? doesn't feel a bit too harsh? set the ar to 8 for instance AR 9 is pretty standard for maps of this level tho, I don't like changing ar after finishing a map too much so it'll stay as I have no reason to change it
00:01:886 (3,4,5) - pretty weird to see that the jump between 00:01:886 (3) - and 00:02:064 (4) - is bigger than the one between 00:02:064 (4) - and 00:02:243 (5) - because between 00:01:886 (3) - and 00:02:064 (4) - the instruments are not really intense in comparison with 00:02:064 (4) - and 00:02:243 (5) - so i guess the jump between 00:02:064 (4) - and 00:02:243 (5) - should be bigger than 00:01:886 (3) - and 00:02:064 (4) -. same goes for 00:04:743 (3,4,5) - and 00:10:457 (3,4,5) -
Uhh first of all try to format your mods a bit better, stuff like this with bunch of timestamps and text mixed is really painful to read... Also I think they are fine as the flow changes and big changes in movement due to the small spacing already emphasize them enough which was the point there
00:02:600 (1) - i know that 00:02:064 (4)- doesn't cover all the reverse arrow of it but better move this slider a bit up to avoid any possible issues The note is barely visible at the point the reverse comes in so it's not an issue
00:03:136 (2,3) - blanket looks pretty off visually. just move 00:03:671 (3) - like 6 grids down in order to fix the blanket barely noticeable thanks to the high spacing between them but adjusted slightly
00:47:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - tbh after many plays this one plays a bit unconfortable to me i suggest to make the pattern less confusing if possible Nah I like that pattern
01:00:279 (1,2,3) - because of the high intensity of the song these won't be readable enough because many players will play this one like they're clicking triplets and they'll get misses because of the low readability. it would better if you will make jumps between these all 3 notes in order to make them more readable. same goes for 01:07:421 (1,2,3) - Nah the NCs should give the hint that there's something different there, also they are clearly more spaced than my triplets so it's not that bad as you say it is
01:50:636 (3,4) - this would play better if you will ctrl+g 01:50:814 (4) - imo Hmm I like the way it is now more
definitely a fun diff to play you've just became one of my favourites mappers! *cough* welp nice diff here thanks
Thanks for mods!
box of update
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Topic Starter
Updated . Waiting for Emonal and left to respond too
Topic Starter
Neptunee wrote:
Time to help get this goingHard00:22:332 4,5 - this would be better as a stack on the sliderend - I prefer mine , mb i will change if someone points it
01:38:225 - ^ -^
00:58:136 - blanket this to the slider from before - Done
01:09:564 1,2,3 - this would flow better if you moved it down tot the right - Done
thats it from me i guess
GL w
Thanks for mod^^
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