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Gundam Wing (German) - Just Communication

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Card N'FoRcE
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Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE
Timing seems fine.

Easy:
00:18:14 (2) - is too close
00:29:00 - why does this break start late?
00:34:95 (3) - is too close
00:41:77 (1) - is too close
00:50:00 - why does this break end early?
01:07:68 (2) - move it to fix spacing of the combo

Normal:
00:16:32 (1) - is too close, mind the spacing
00:17:69 (1) - same
I noticed you fixed these in 1:07:00, where you made the same combos. So, fix them in the beginning also :P

Hard:
00:23:37 (1,2) - are confusiong. the previous slider seems longer and the user brakes combo. Fix spacing, pls.
00:26:77 (8,10,11) - just place them a little better. (Use grid level 3)
00:47:00 (4) - same
00:56:77 add a beat here, it sounds better
01:01:54 (4,5,6) - just place them a little better. (Use grid level 3)
01:11:54 (2,3) - put them a little to the right to fix spacing
I think there are other spacing issues but they're minor.
AgentSieg
196 posts
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AgentSieg

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Timing seems fine.

Easy:
00:18:14 (2) - is too close
00:29:00 - why does this break start late?
00:34:95 (3) - is too close
00:41:77 (1) - is too close
00:50:00 - why does this break end early?
01:07:68 (2) - move it to fix spacing of the combo

Normal:
00:16:32 (1) - is too close, mind the spacing
00:17:69 (1) - same
I noticed you fixed these in 1:07:00, where you made the same combos. So, fix them in the beginning also :P

Hard:
00:23:37 (1,2) - are confusiong. the previous slider seems longer and the user brakes combo. Fix spacing, pls.
00:26:77 (8,10,11) - just place them a little better. (Use grid level 3)
00:47:00 (4) - same
00:56:77 add a beat here, it sounds better
01:01:54 (4,5,6) - just place them a little better. (Use grid level 3)
01:11:54 (2,3) - put them a little to the right to fix spacing
I think there are other spacing issues but they're minor.
Fix'd as suggested.
lukewarmholiday
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Joined June 2008
lukewarmholiday
Nothing tripped me up,

I SS'd easy and normal, this is ready for a bubble IMO
Sinistro
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Sinistro

lukewarmholiday wrote:

this is ready for a bubble IMO
I concur. Nice job.
AgentSieg
196 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
AgentSieg

Sinistro wrote:

lukewarmholiday wrote:

this is ready for a bubble IMO
I concur. Nice job.
Thanks.
AgentSieg
196 posts
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AgentSieg
Wait, the thoughtbubble disappeared or is it just me?
Sinistro
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Sinistro
Restored. It was determined that the bubble was lost because of OP editing by the mapper.
James
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Joined January 2008
James
hard:
00:17:34 - closer to 2
00:39:73 - make the spacing between this note even (2 and 4)
01:00:63 - make the spacing between this note even (1 and 3)

GO.
AgentSieg
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AgentSieg
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Sinistro
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Sinistro
Normal
00:24:05 (3) - Move 1/4 backwards. Change spacing accordingly.
00:42:23 (2) - Move 1/8 (uh huh) backwards.
00:44:04 (3) - Move 1/8 backwards.
01:14:72 (3) - Move 1/4 forward. Change spacing accordingly.

Hard
The above changes for Normal, also:
Have the first spinner start on a white tick so the countdown sounds better.
00:38:14 (3) - Lengthen 1/4. Change spacing accordingly.
AgentSieg
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AgentSieg
Thanks Sinistro.
AgentSieg
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AgentSieg
Bump
James
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James
hard:
00:17:69 (1) - spacing
00:41:77 (1) - delete 2 and 3, then change 1 to a slider that ends in 00:42:45
00:43:36 (1) - same as above, well not really, but same concept.
00:55:296 - remove this shi-- i mean break
01:02:681 - place a circle here

normal:
00:29:165 - remove the break and put it again, see what happens
00:41:77 (1) - same thing
00:43:36 (1) - same thing, you dont need to follow the vocals throughout the song. sometimes its better not to.
00:49:956 - remove the break and put it again, see what happens
00:55:864 - same

easy:
nothing, but i dont like those 1/2 note notnewbiefriendly notes.
AgentSieg
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AgentSieg
Fix'd (hopefully)
James
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James
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
AgentSieg
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AgentSieg
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
James
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James
like i said i dont like weird-snapped notes so make it a slider take it or leave it.
AgentSieg
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AgentSieg

James wrote:

like i said i dont like weird-snapped notes so make it a slider take it or leave it.
Done.
James
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James
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AgentSieg
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AgentSieg

James wrote:

bubbled
Thanks.
Sinistro
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Sinistro
I see no technical issues with this beatmap set. Ranked.

I must also commend your patience and determination in this. :)
AgentSieg
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AgentSieg

Sinistro wrote:

I see no technical issues with this beatmap set. Ranked.

I must also commend your patience and determination in this. :)
And I must thank you for being patient with all the fixes I had to introduce each time.
Still, I've learned some lessons from this I hope will help me do it better next time without having to fix it 20 times ^^;;
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