Leorda wrote:
Full-submitted, and please mod my map endlessly (don't take a break), until you die~
Oh hey ~ Let's start with this :3
General;
- Umm, I don't really know if the countdown fits the song but I guess is okk ~
- You have 2 osb files are both necessary ?? If not, delete one
- Do you use inverted.jpg ?? If not, delete it or use it ~
- I don't really like your soft-hitclap, maybe use this one Download:
soft-hitclap.rarinstead ??
Info of the Song;
- Tags; Collab right ?? Add the name of every person that is participating in the Collab ?? Add crouka and The Flower Like the Fantasy since that's the original name of the ending theme
SB;
- Looks great !!
- Show who mapped the parts of te Collab with their names appearing in the part ??
Looks;
- Try to use this colors ??
Combo1 : 255,125,252
Combo2 : 255,204,128
Combo3 : 230,26,31
Combo4 : 254,129,163
- Disable letterboxing on all diffs, the SB looks better like that ~
Collab Flower View;
- No kiai time ?? :< Oh well, that’s okk
- 00:54:190 (5,7) >> Add clap to (5) and finish to (7)
- 01:34:344 >> Remove new combo then add new combo at 01:34:806
- 01:56:729 >> Add clap to the end of the slider
- 02:04:113 >> ^
- 02:11:498 >> ^
- 02:15:625 >> Remove new combo ??
- 02:21:190 >> New combo
- 04:02:498 >> Add clap at the start and on the reverse arrow
- 04:11:036 (2,4) >> Add clap
- 05:29:959 >> End at 05:30:652
- 05:33:652 (1,2,3,4) >> Place them like this ??
- 05:42:883 >> Make this spinner gradually lower the volume ?? But is fine if you leave it like this too
Leo’s Flower View;
- 00:32:729 >> This timing section is not ON the tick, it has to be ON the tick :3
- 00:34:113 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note
- 00:35:498 >> Remove new combo
- 00:37:344 >> ^
- 00:39:883 >> ^
- 00:42:883 >> ^
- 01:02:267 >> This timing section is not ON the tick, it has to be ON the tick :3
- 01:18:421 (4,5,6) >> Align these 3 better with each other
- 01:57:536 >> Without grid snap on, align better with (3)
- 02:16:113 >> This timing section is not ON the tick, it has to be ON the tick :3
- 02:45:652 >> ^
- 03:18:421 >> New combo then remove the new combo at 03:18:883
- 04:43:806 >> 3rd kiai time starts here ~
- OH SH- so you are using inverted.jpg but why does this diff has a different SB than the Collab one ?? :<
- 05:28:113 >> This timing section is not ON the tick, it has to be ON the tick :3
- 05:29:959 >> Could you curve this better ??
- 05:33:652 >> ^
- 05:37:344 >> Oh, curve those I suggested you to curve better using this as an example ~
- 05:42:883 >> Lower the volume gradually ?? But is okk as how it is now too ~
Taiko Collab Flower View;
- Yay a Taiko Collab ~ Sounds great, just … why did you use a different kiai time ?? Use the one from Leo’s Flower View ??
* Star ~
hardnya ga kerasa
