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EastNewSound - Hana wa Gensou no Hate Ni [For Approval]

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Topic Starter
Leorda
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 18 April 2011 at 14:27:51

Artist: EastNewSound
Title: Hana wa Gensou no Hate Ni (Full Ver.)
Source: Touhou
Tags: phantasmagoria of flower view ending theme tsubaki ayey sallad4ever nivalis awell -SiN- hakeru prismriver hitmantutor ain053 peaceful melody 3UNI youngdow yukey [Shalon] shalon arien666 arien666 samiljul
BPM: 130
Filesize: 10238kb
Play Time: 05:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab Flower View (4,86 stars, 744 notes)
  2. Leo's Flower View (4,88 stars, 732 notes)
  3. Taiko Collab Flower View (5 stars, 1390 notes)
Download: EastNewSound - Hana wa Gensou no Hate Ni (Full Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This song for approval, due the music is long and the score is long. Don't ask me to make an easy diff! If this overmapped, please point it please. I must to make a not-so-insane diff, because I don't want this map is impossible to approved.

Leo's Flower View : Leorda
Collab Flower View : Leorda, ayey, Sallad4ever, Nivalis, awell, -SiN-, Hakeru Prismriver, hitmantutor, Ain053, Peaceful Melody
Taiko Flower View : 3UNI, yukey, [Shalon], arien666, samiljul

Update in 05 October, 2010 : Add a collab diff and IceBeam's Mod
Update in 06 October, 2010 : Liss' and Chris' Mod
Update in 09 October, 2010 : Collab updated, added Taiko diff
Update in 13 October, 2010 : Collab updated, change Endless Flower View to Leo's Flower View
Update in 15 October, 2010 : Lyric SB added, Collab updated
Update in 19 October, 2010 : Add (Full Ver.) in title, collab updated
Update in 26 October, 2010 : SB updated and collab updated
Update in 29 October, 2010 : SB Updated and COLLAB IS COMPLETE!!!
Update in 01 November, 2010 : Carrot's Mod
Update in 05 November, 2010 : CNF's Mod
Update in 07 November, 2010 : Selee's Mod and Kurai's Mod
Update in 13 November, 2010 : Some updates
Update in 15 November, 2010 : Soap-chan's Mod
Update in 09 December, 2010 : Fix the kiai at [Collab Flower View] and [Taiko Collab Flower View]
Update in 10 December, 2010 : Remove the letterboxes, remove Taiko BG due the wrong spelling on black bar, yongtw's Mod
Update in 11 December, 2010 : Add a object at hitmantutor's Part
Update in 28 December, 2010 : rust45's Mod, change the SB things and add the Speed UP.png. Redownload please
Update in 03 January, 2011 : CNF's Mod again
Update in 09 January, 2011 : Larto's Mod
Update in 21 February, 2011 : Kirby's Mod (my daddy). Redownload required
Update in 18 April, 2011 : Beuchi's Mod
Topic Starter
Leorda
[Collab Flower View]

Rules :
  1. You can only pick 1 or 2 parts only
  2. Your parts SHOULD be hard not insane
  3. Do not use 0,5 and 2x BPM Adjustment
  4. Slider Velocity : 2.00
  5. If you map your part, make sure other part is empty. This part would be easier to add it *NEW*
  6. Please point out, if I am doing wrong
00:00:000 ~ 00:32:729 - Start
00:32:729 ~ 01:17:036 - ayey
01:17:036 ~ 01:46:575 - Nivalis
01:46:575 ~ 02:16:113 - Sallad4ever
02:16:113 ~ 02:45:652 - -SiN-
02:45:652 ~ 03:00:421 - Peaceful Melody
03:00:421 ~ 03:15:190 - Break
03:15:190 ~ 03:44:729 - Hakeru Prismriver
03:44:729 ~ 04:14:267 - awell
04:14:267 ~ 04:29:036 - Break
04:29:036 ~ 04:43:806 - Ain053
04:43:806 ~ 05:13:344 - Leorda
05:13:344 ~ 05:28:113 - Leorda
05:13:344 ~ 05:46:575 - hitmantutor

COLLAB IS COMPLETE!!!!
IceBeam
Hi.

The first thing I noticed is New Combo.They're placed randomly to me.
I was trying to map something in collab(I failed,however),but I was placing New Combo after each 2 long white ticks.And it perfectly followed the new rhytm and lyrics.Mind on fixing it like this.

P.S Is lots of 0,5x slider is unrankable?
Yes.
At least the don't make much sense to me.Good luck anyway.

01:04:576 (1,2,3) - Reverse Selection?
01:08:268 (1) - ^
01:24:422 (1) - I haven't heard any finishes before,so it sounds a bit lonely.Maybe add more finishes through the map?
01:42:883 (1,2,3) - It's way suddenly and unexpected.I'd removed this.
01:47:267 (5) - Remove this note?
01:48:191 (5) - ^
01:51:883 (6) - Place it somewhere between 01:51:421 (5) and 01:52:345 (1) please.
02:10:576 (2) - Add finish?
02:31:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Stream after spinner?
02:35:152 (2) - Remove this note,sounds better w/o it.
03:11:499 (1) - Why it's so close to 03:11:268 (7)? Fix distance or stack them instead?
03:37:344 - Finish?
04:06:883 (1) - ^
05:24:652 - Add a note?
05:31:806 - Finish.

Star~
wmfchris
need ellipsy warning? *_* <- my eyes

0:32:729 (1) down 1 grid
0:55:459 (4) up 1 grid
1:20:729 (1) left 1 grid
2:40:575 (7,8,9) down 1 grid
3:41:267 (2,3) down 1 grid

nice map and moe BG, star~
Lissette
Hihi~

Endless Flower View
01:34:345 (6,7) - sound kinda noisy those hitsounds on those notes, you should lower the volume a bit (same to the other like this)
03:22:115 (4) - unsnapped note
05:13:345 (17) - put it a bit near to prev note ><
05:13:575 to 05:25:806 - kinda surprised the x2 section, i don't think the song calls for this, imo, but its your choice

Pretty nice map, i like it :3

Star!
youngdow
Topic Starter
Leorda

3UNI wrote:

Done ;)
Thank you, and thx Liss, IceBeam and WMF ^^
ayey
Niva
Selesai :D
Namanya gw ganti ke "Collab Flower View 2" supaya beda sama punya ayey, di-rename aja
NOTE FOR FUTURE MAPPERS : Me and ayey use 1.0x distance snap (NOT 0.8x)

Download: EastNewSound - Hana wa Gensou no Hate Ni (Leorda) [Collab Flower View 2].osu
Hyguys
Can i make a part?
Topic Starter
Leorda

Hyguys wrote:

Can i make a part?
sure
Mapper 31
Taiko Flower View : 3UNI, yukey, [Shalon], arien666


Where's my name
Topic Starter
Leorda

samiljul wrote:

Taiko Flower View : 3UNI, yukey, [Shalon], arien666


Where's my name
opss idk that you mapped that part, sorry
eru
Hakeru
-SiN-
[attachment=0:bb762]EastNewSound - Hana wa Gensou no Hate Ni (Leorda) [Collab Flower View].osu[/attachment:bb762]
Hyguys
00:00:000 ~ 00:32:729 - Start
00:32:729 ~ 01:17:036 - ayey
01:17:036 ~ 01:46:575 - Nivalis
01:46:575 ~ 02:16:113 - Sallad4ever
02:16:113 ~ 02:45:652 - -SiN-
02:45:652 ~ 03:00:421 - Hyguys
03:00:421 ~ 03:15:190 - Break
03:15:190 ~ 03:44:729 - Hakeru Prismriver
03:44:729 ~ 04:14:267 -
04:14:267 ~ 04:29:036 - Break
04:29:036 ~ 04:43:806 -
04:43:806 ~ 05:13:344 -
05:13:344 ~ 05:28:113 - Leorda
05:13:344 ~ 05:46:575 - hitmantutor

What an shit part i made...
Add it if you want.

Download: EastNewSound - Hana wa Gensou no Hate Ni (Leorda) [Collab Flower View].osu
Topic Starter
Leorda

Hyguys wrote:

00:00:000 ~ 00:32:729 - Start
00:32:729 ~ 01:17:036 - ayey
01:17:036 ~ 01:46:575 - Nivalis
01:46:575 ~ 02:16:113 - Sallad4ever
02:16:113 ~ 02:45:652 - -SiN-
02:45:652 ~ 03:00:421 - Hyguys
03:00:421 ~ 03:15:190 - Break
03:15:190 ~ 03:44:729 - Hakeru Prismriver
03:44:729 ~ 04:14:267 -
04:14:267 ~ 04:29:036 - Break
04:29:036 ~ 04:43:806 -
04:43:806 ~ 05:13:344 -
05:13:344 ~ 05:28:113 - Leorda
05:13:344 ~ 05:46:575 - hitmantutor.
What an shit part i made...
Add it if you want.
I'm sorry, this collab for indonesian and malay, sorry
Niva
Leo : Jujur gw agak ngerasa aneh kalau part gw slider pertamanya dipindah
Coba versi yang ini deh:

link

Cross slidernya itu udah satu pattern soalnya :D
ayey : Slider yang terakhirnya gw pendekin 2 repeat supaya pas, tapi kalau nggak setuju pakai partnya yang diedit Leo juga gpp kok ^_^
EDIT: Hasil gabungan

Download: EastNewSound - Hana wa Gensou no Hate Ni (Leorda) [Collab Flower View].osu
eru

Leorda wrote:

Hyguys wrote:

00:00:000 ~ 00:32:729 - Start
00:32:729 ~ 01:17:036 - ayey
01:17:036 ~ 01:46:575 - Nivalis
01:46:575 ~ 02:16:113 - Sallad4ever
02:16:113 ~ 02:45:652 - -SiN-
02:45:652 ~ 03:00:421 - Hyguys
03:00:421 ~ 03:15:190 - Break
03:15:190 ~ 03:44:729 - Hakeru Prismriver
03:44:729 ~ 04:14:267 -
04:14:267 ~ 04:29:036 - Break
04:29:036 ~ 04:43:806 -
04:43:806 ~ 05:13:344 -
05:13:344 ~ 05:28:113 - Leorda
05:13:344 ~ 05:46:575 - hitmantutor.
What an shit part i made...
Add it if you want.
I'm sorry, this collab for indonesian and malay, sorry
err leor i think u should put the disclaimer on the 1st post, like "Collab Flower View is for indonesian only"
or sumthin liek dat.
ayey
4 tempat lagi ;3

@Nivalis terserah yg mana aja gpp kok :P
Topic Starter
Leorda

hitmantutor wrote:

err leor i think u should put the disclaimer on the 1st post, like "Collab Flower View is for indonesian only"
or sumthin liek dat.
ok
-SiN-
yg lebih sulit dong :( hardnya ga kerasa

EDIT: kok blm update o.O
dNextGen
:O

O:
Hakeru

-SiN- wrote:

yg lebih sulit dong :( hardnya ga kerasa

EDIT: kok blm update o.O
wogh..Leordanya sibuk sekolah kyknya :o
Topic Starter
Leorda
sorry for late update
BTW, can you guys invite mekadon, aquabluu, alvisto, Crimson_SoulZ, and other mapper in Malay to join collab? I think it's would be nice if the collab from Indonesian and Malaysian........
awell
boleh ikutan gak ? :hammer:
kalo boleh minta ijin ngambil yang ini yaaa :
03:44:729 ~ 04:14:267 - awell
syalala
Hakeru

Leorda wrote:

sorry for late update
BTW, can you guys invite mekadon, aquabluu, alvisto, Crimson_SoulZ, and other mapper in Malay to join collab? I think it's would be nice if the collab from Indonesian and Malaysian........
then , i'll invite mekadon
its osu standard collab or taiko collab ?
dNextGen
no malaysian please :(
Topic Starter
Leorda

dNextGen wrote:

no malaysian please :(
oh come on
Topic Starter
Leorda

dNextGen wrote:

no malaysian please :(
oh come on

Hakeru Prismriver wrote:

then , i'll invite mekadon
its osu standard collab or taiko collab ?
osu standard collab
eru

dNextGen wrote:

no malaysian please :(
lol
Colin Hou
this is a star
-SiN-
wateper lah
Hakeru

-SiN- wrote:

wateper lah
ayey
Kok jadi gak jelas gini -_-"
Topic Starter
Leorda

ayey wrote:

Kok jadi gak jelas gini -_-"
stop make me more sensitive please :(
ayey

Leorda wrote:

ayey wrote:

Kok jadi gak jelas gini -_-"
stop make me more sensitive please :(
Okay okay , sorry leo
Meow ^-.-^
awell
hey Leo
this is my part :D
add it if you want >.>

Download: EastNewSound - Hana wa Gensou no Hate Ni (Leorda) [Collab Flower View].osu
Sallad4ever
Maaf lama, nih lagu aga susah juga mapnya :?
wa masih kurang puas ama hitsoundnya jadi tunggu modder aja
Download: EastNewSound - Hana wa Gensou no Hate Ni (Leorda) [Bagiannya Sallad].osu
awesomewithin
maap ndak bisa ikutan collab soalnya dongo ngemap
Aoitenshi
04:29:036 ~ 04:43:806 - I AM SO GOING TO CLAIM THIS PART

Green is nuff' for me '_'

Edit: Done! Easy yet Streamy.

Download: EastNewSound - Hana wa Gensou no Hate Ni (Leorda) [Collab Flower View Ain053].osu
lovhin456
This beatmap has not been uploaded correctly!
Umm, fix ?? I really like this song so I want to download it and possibly help you if I can :3
Hakeru
where's leorda ?
full submit coba :D

sundul ~
Topic Starter
Leorda

lovhin456 wrote:

This beatmap has not been uploaded correctly!
Umm, fix ?? I really like this song so I want to download it and possibly help you if I can :3
Full-submitted, and please mod my map endlessly (don't take a break), until you die~
Aoitenshi
lovhin456

Leorda wrote:

Full-submitted, and please mod my map endlessly (don't take a break), until you die~
Oh hey ~ Let's start with this :3

General;
- Umm, I don't really know if the countdown fits the song but I guess is okk ~
- You have 2 osb files are both necessary ?? If not, delete one
- Do you use inverted.jpg ?? If not, delete it or use it ~
- I don't really like your soft-hitclap, maybe use this one Download: soft-hitclap.rar
instead ??

Info of the Song;
- Tags; Collab right ?? Add the name of every person that is participating in the Collab ?? Add crouka and The Flower Like the Fantasy since that's the original name of the ending theme

SB;
- Looks great !!
- Show who mapped the parts of te Collab with their names appearing in the part ??

Looks;
- Try to use this colors ??
Combo1 : 255,125,252
Combo2 : 255,204,128
Combo3 : 230,26,31
Combo4 : 254,129,163
- Disable letterboxing on all diffs, the SB looks better like that ~

Collab Flower View;
- No kiai time ?? :< Oh well, that’s okk
- 00:54:190 (5,7) >> Add clap to (5) and finish to (7)
- 01:34:344 >> Remove new combo then add new combo at 01:34:806
- 01:56:729 >> Add clap to the end of the slider
- 02:04:113 >> ^
- 02:11:498 >> ^
- 02:15:625 >> Remove new combo ??
- 02:21:190 >> New combo
- 04:02:498 >> Add clap at the start and on the reverse arrow
- 04:11:036 (2,4) >> Add clap
- 05:29:959 >> End at 05:30:652
- 05:33:652 (1,2,3,4) >> Place them like this ??

- 05:42:883 >> Make this spinner gradually lower the volume ?? But is fine if you leave it like this too

Leo’s Flower View;
- 00:32:729 >> This timing section is not ON the tick, it has to be ON the tick :3
- 00:34:113 >> New combo then remove new combo to the next note
- 00:35:498 >> Remove new combo
- 00:37:344 >> ^
- 00:39:883 >> ^
- 00:42:883 >> ^
- 01:02:267 >> This timing section is not ON the tick, it has to be ON the tick :3
- 01:18:421 (4,5,6) >> Align these 3 better with each other
- 01:57:536 >> Without grid snap on, align better with (3)
- 02:16:113 >> This timing section is not ON the tick, it has to be ON the tick :3
- 02:45:652 >> ^
- 03:18:421 >> New combo then remove the new combo at 03:18:883
- 04:43:806 >> 3rd kiai time starts here ~
- OH SH- so you are using inverted.jpg but why does this diff has a different SB than the Collab one ?? :<
- 05:28:113 >> This timing section is not ON the tick, it has to be ON the tick :3
- 05:29:959 >> Could you curve this better ??
- 05:33:652 >> ^
- 05:37:344 >> Oh, curve those I suggested you to curve better using this as an example ~
- 05:42:883 >> Lower the volume gradually ?? But is okk as how it is now too ~

Taiko Collab Flower View;
- Yay a Taiko Collab ~ Sounds great, just … why did you use a different kiai time ?? Use the one from Leo’s Flower View ??

* Star ~

-SiN-
SB

01:02:729 ~ 01:16:921 - jgn di padetin, tp numpuk gpp trus muncul 1-1nya dipisah lbh bagus.. misalnya: keluar di kanan 1, kiri yg agak jauh 1 trus atas, etc etc

lalu sama kata mod atas kasi SB nama mapper :<

satu lagi: clap yg gw dihapus smua dong, keknya ga sengaja deh itu.. haha
Topic Starter
Leorda

lovhin456 wrote:

Leorda wrote:

- OH SH- so you are using inverted.jpg but why does this diff has a different SB than the Collab one ?? :<
I use inverted.jpg for 2x speed warning, now get the fuck out you idiot
lovhin456

Leorda wrote:

I use inverted.jpg for 2x speed warning, now get the fuck out you idiot
Oh, I see, sorry, my bad orz, sorry if I sound rude or anything I was surprised, just saying it'd look nice if you had the same SB for all diffs, but it looks good as it is too, good luck getting this approved :3
Aoitenshi
Style Commenting '_' (KUDOS THIS NO BECAUSE IT'S JUST COMMENT)

Collab Flower View

00:32:729 ~ 01:17:036 - ayey
Mapnya udah bagus! Cuman entah kenapa aku nggak puas ama Beatnya. (Maksudku Hitsoundnya kurang srek)

01:17:036 ~ 01:46:575 - Nivalis
Part ini... Kinda boring? (Bagus tapi boring @_@)

01:46:575 ~ 02:16:113 - Sallad4ever
Hitsoundnya kurang srek. Mapnya bagus juga sih.

02:16:113 ~ 02:45:652 - -SiN-
Just... Perfect.

02:45:652 ~ 03:00:421 -

03:00:421 ~ 03:15:190 - Break

03:15:190 ~ 03:44:729 - Hakeru Prismriver
Meski ada spacing yg ga inituitive, tapi masih bisa dibaca, Good Job! Beberapa Linear Slider ugly @_@ pake beizer coba '_'

03:44:729 ~ 04:14:267 - awell
Much better than last map~ Kurang Hitsound nih '_'

04:14:267 ~ 04:29:036 - Break

04:29:036 ~ 04:43:806 - Ain053
Err... (Woohoo~ 1/8 usage @_@)

04:43:806 ~ 05:13:344 - Leorda
Belum selesai? '_'

05:13:344 ~ 05:28:113 - Leorda

05:13:344 ~ 05:46:575 - hitmantutor
Terlalu Simpel dan ugly overlapping?

Edit: Posted: Fri Oct 22, 2010 5:00 pm WOOHOO
[Shalon]
:3
Meiri
Topic Starter
Leorda

- Peaceful Melody - wrote:

My Part, Hope You Like It :D
thx

and COMPLETE!!!!
Meiri
Wew . .

Yang Lama Yah Kk Leo ?

Udah Ada Yang Baru Tuh Kemaren LoL . .
Sorry Ga Kasi Tau ~.~
peppercatastrop
hmm
Meiri

AeroRange wrote:

hmm
Ehem
Sure
Delete old osb file if it isn't used. 'EastNewSound - Hana wa Gensou no Hate Ni (Leorda).osb'


[Collab]
02:25:806 (6,7) - stack it at previous end of slider correctly.
03:20:959 (5) - No...
05:41:036 (1) - Move down a little bit. It hits HP bar.


[Leo's]
Nice map. Fine to me. :D


Sorry, I can't mod Taiko diff. :(
STAR~* ^^
Meiri
Ternyata ada yang salah versi kemaren ~.~
untung kk leo belum dl itu

ini aja kk :D
udah bener" FINISH

Download: EastNewSound - Hana wa Gensou no Hate Ni (Full Ver.) (Leorda) [Collab Flower View].osu
Cyril Scarlet
(゚Д゚)
Topic Starter
Leorda

S i R i R u wrote:

(゚Д゚)
(((((っ´Θ`)っ
Card N'FoRcE
- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
  • Does "ending" really need to be on tags? (i mean, if it's just the ending theme of the game i think it is unnecessary)
- Collab Flower View:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    05:33:652 (1)(hitmantutor) - quite ugly shape D:
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    02:53:036 (1)(Peaceful Melody) - remove new combo to have followpoints help the player? It's quite hard to see right now
    03:47:959 (10)(awell) - move one square to the left (i swear i noticed it while playing)
    04:42:998 (1)(AinO53) - why the new combo?
- Leo's Flower View:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    03:52:114 (1) - this one is readable only thanks to the Approach rate.
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    01:18:653 (6) - move one square right and up
    01:48:421 (1) - add a repetition? (it feels so natural to have it that i think you forgot to add it or maybe it was removed by a mistake)
- Taiko Collab Flower View:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    The KIAI at the ~60% seems out of place to me.
    If this is a collab, is the SB missing the mappers' names?
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    04:18:767 (14,15) - unintuitive, i guess. Move 04:18:767 (14) 1/4 before? Nevermind, i get what they're following now.
Selee
[General]
  • Add all mapper's name into tags?
    Reduce spinner volume for 20%? The 100% volume spinner bonus is annoying...
[Collab Flower View]

Just some suggestions. :P

  • 00:32:729 (1,3) - Whistle?
    01:15:652 (1) - Remove new combo? (or is it for some particular reason?
    02:15:652 (1) - ^
    02:23:267 (4) - Clap rather than finish?
    02:43:806 (2) - Remove the sliderbody whistle?
    02:43:806 (2) -
    03:29:036 (6) - Whistle for slider end?...wait...no hitsound after this part?
    03:55:806 (1) - ^
    04:55:806 (1,2,3,4) - Nazi spacing...04:56:267 (3,4) - 1 grid left 04:57:190 (3,4) - 1 grid down 1 grid left
    05:29:959 --- Hitsound for last part?
[Leo's Flower View]

The new combo pattern in beginning part makes me confused.
Mapset is fine.

  • 00:45:653 (1) – Remove new combo? Neither spacing nor vocal changes.
    02:37:345 (4) – Reverse this due to the 1 2 pattern?
    05:17:037 (1,2,3,4…) –strange spacing @.@, I prefer a new patter rather thank nazi these.
Kurai
:)

[General]
Like Selee said, Add all mapper's name in the tag ?

[Leo's Flower View]

00:55:576 (5,6,7) - Move them 1 grid down
02:20:267 (2,3) - Move 1/4 earlier, Remove clap on (2) and add clap on (3)
03:09:190 (2) - That would be better if you drive it away from the bottom border
03:50:268 (5) - New combo ?
03:52:114 (1) - Add clap on the first reverse and at the end
04:05:037 (5) - Too much reverses :<
04:27:191 (1) - Move 1/1 earlier and end it at the same spot it was
05:13:575 - Add a warning for 2x part

[Collab Flower View]

02:37:344 (3,4,5,6) - Arg... These jump are bad DD:
03:09:883 (3) - New combo
03:30:421 (3) - Add clap
03:31:344 (6) - Add clap at the beginning
03:33:190 (5) - Add clap
03:33:652 (7) - Add clap at end
03:35:036 (2) - Add clap
03:36:883 (8) - Add clap
03:37:806 (3) - Add clap
03:38:729 (6) - Add clap
03:39:190 (8) - Add clap at end
03:40:575 (2,6) - Add claps
03:42:421 (2) - Add clap
03:42:883 (4) - Add clap at end
03:44:267 (6) - Add clap
03:48:421 (1) - Extand by 1/2
04:10:575 (1,2,3,4) - Add claps

Star :D
Soaprman
Collab Flower View
02:26:036 (7,8,9) - the space between them is equal but the time is not. normally not a big issue but when you're doing it with jumps like this it's a cruel trick. space these properly; it doesn't matter how you do it.

02:37:344 (3,4,5,6) - narrow these jumps a bit. they're such a difficulty spike next to everything around them.

03:13:575 (1...) - kind of hard to read the sliders in this part but it's not a huge deal. you can leave it if you want.

04:43:344 (1) - move this out from underneath the circles before it. mainly beacuse it's covered by the hitbursts and it's not clear at all that it's a repeating slider.

Leo's Flower View

Nothing really to point out here. Good job.

Taiko Collab Flower View

I really need to get good at taiko so I can mod maps like this :(



Nice map here. Sorry I was so slow to mod it. Have a star. Good luck with approval!
Topic Starter
Leorda
Fix some few mod, thx Soap-chan
PEPOTTI
nice map!!
mekadon_old
Found your request on Twitter. Go ahead, take a star first.
yongtw123
Hi hi~

Btw I am bad at hitsound so if it sounds good to me, then it's good. :D
Spinners at the end are a bit loud though.

[Collab Flower View]
I had great fun with this. Not too hard, but accessible to good osu! players.

00:33:651 (3) - up one grid
00:55:575 (4) - not really aligned with (2,3)

[Leo's Flower View]
Personally I think there are some streams that may be unnecessary. Ex. 03:38:037 (3,4,5,6,7).
I won't point others out because they aren't too bad either.

04:29:037 (1,1) - @@ I can't see the approach circles lol
05:13:576 (1..) - x2 BPM... hmmm. I'd say something like x1.5 but meh. Just caught me off-guard.

[Taiko Collab Flower View]
Sorry can't mod taiko (sad face)


Good mapset!
I played fine through them (except taiko of course lol)
Star~
Aoitenshi

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

04:42:998 (1)(AinO53) - why the new combo?[/list]
I think Leorda Accidentally changed it D:
Topic Starter
Leorda

yongtw123 wrote:

Hi hi~

Btw I am bad at hitsound so if it sounds good to me, then it's good. :D
Spinners at the end are a bit loud though. That isn't loud for me

[Collab Flower View]
I had great fun with this. Not too hard, but accessible to good osu! players.

00:33:651 (3) - up one grid OK
00:55:575 (4) - not really aligned with (2,3) NO

[Leo's Flower View]
Personally I think there are some streams that may be unnecessary. Ex. 03:38:037 (3,4,5,6,7). It's not unnecessary. I put the stream to make a hitsound pattern
I won't point others out because they aren't too bad either.

04:29:037 (1,1) - @@ I can't see the approach circles lol Then memorize
05:13:576 (1..) - x2 BPM... hmmm. I'd say something like x1.5 but meh. Just caught me off-guard. *facepalm*

[Taiko Collab Flower View]
Sorry can't mod taiko (sad face)


Good mapset!
I played fine through them (except taiko of course lol)
Star~
Thx yong
narakucrimson
You know... I didn't find any issues at all :D

But why would you want this for ranking? I know you don't want people to ask you to make an easy diff, but I'd this could be a ranked map if it had one. Just saying, though...

Anyway, here's my star for the perfect work!
Topic Starter
Leorda

narakucrimson wrote:

You know... I didn't find any issues at all :D

But why would you want this for ranking? I know you don't want people to ask you to make an easy diff, but I'd this could be a ranked map if it had one. Just saying, though...

Anyway, here's my star for the perfect work!
I just want this to approved, not ranking. I don't want ask people to make a easy diff, because this map it's for approval.
rust45
Christmas Mod!

[SB]
I don't really see why you need that negative image.

[Collab Flower]
00:33:190 (1) - Why does this have a new combo?
00:46:575 (5,6,7,8) - Don't like the anti-jumps, but if you want to keep them, at least put on a new combo.
04:54:883 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Just seems like a clusterfuck that's hard to follow to me.
05:09:652 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^

[Leo's Flower]
04:47:499 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Return of the clusterfuck.
04:54:883 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
No warning for 2x (The Negative Image strobing doesn't tell you anything), and I don't really think the 2x fits.

[Taiko]
Fine

I'll shoot a star, and don't ask me to come back for a bubble cause I can't bubble approval maps.
Topic Starter
Leorda

rust45 wrote:

Christmas Mod!

[SB]
I don't really see why you need that negative image. In collab, negative image is for my second part of collab

[Collab Flower]
00:33:190 (1) - Why does this have a new combo? Opss, sorry
00:46:575 (5,6,7,8) - Don't like the anti-jumps, but if you want to keep them, at least put on a new combo. Ok
04:54:883 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Just seems like a clusterfuck that's hard to follow to me. It's fine for me >.<
05:09:652 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ It's fine for me >.<

[Leo's Flower]
04:47:499 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Return of the clusterfuck. It's fine for me >.<
04:54:883 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ It's fine for me >.<
No warning for 2x (The Negative Image strobing doesn't tell you anything), and I don't really think the 2x fits. Added the Speed up!

[Taiko]
Fine

I'll shoot a star, and don't ask me to come back for a bubble cause I can't bubble approval maps. I know that MAT can't bubble the approval map, but It's too hard to find a BAT for that
dNextGen
saran nama diff boleh gak ya :)

Leorda
Collab
Taiko

better imo
Topic Starter
Leorda

dNextGen wrote:

saran nama diff boleh gak ya :)

Leorda
Collab
Taiko

better imo
no thx

P.S. I need a BAT to approve this map ;_;
Card N'FoRcE
-Storyboard:
  • Please remove the "Speed up" warning from the Collab Flower View Difficulty.
- Collab Flower View:
  1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    02:26:036 (7,8,9) - playable, but a really unbalanced jump
- Leo's Flower View:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Nothing to say.
- Taiko Collab Flower View:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    If it's a Collab, where are the mappers' names? :X
Let me know and i'll bubble.
Topic Starter
Leorda

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

-Storyboard:
  • Please remove the "Speed up" warning from the Collab Flower View Difficulty. Ok
- Collab Flower View:
  1. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    02:26:036 (7,8,9) - playable, but a really unbalanced jump Fixed


- Leo's Flower View:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Nothing to say.
- Taiko Collab Flower View:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    If it's a Collab, where are the mappers' names? :X The problem is, I don't know the part where the mapper fills.... That's why I don't add the mapper names. Only 3UNI is know, but I think he is busy during at school
Let me know and i'll bubble.
Card N'FoRcE
Ok then.

Bubble #1
Topic Starter
Leorda

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Ok then.

Bubble #1
thx >.<
Larto
Leo's Flower View:
04:47:499 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I find that kind of hard to read. I hit it while playing, but had my problems with it. If you really want to keep it, do so, but I just want to note that this is quite hard to play/read, to me anyways.
04:54:883 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
05:13:344 - Eh, do you really have to use 2.0 sections? Now that we have custom slider speeds you could just use 1.5 or so, that wouldn't be so extreme. Though, as you have a warning, it still works. Keep if you must, change if you can.

Collab Flower View:
02:58:113 (4) - Add new combo? =P
03:17:959 (3,4,5,6,7) - This spacing change looks a bit weird, but iiiiiiiiiit's playable... if you want to keep it.
04:42:883 (1,1,2,3,1) - These new combos are a bit ugly and don't quite make sense
04:54:883 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again, these overlaps are hard to read.
05:10:806 (1) - Remove New Combo?
05:09:652 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again, these overlaps are hard to read.

I guess none of this is compulsory, but it'd certainly improve the map quality to look into some of these issues. Nice mapset though.
Topic Starter
Leorda

Larto wrote:

Leo's Flower View:
04:47:499 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I find that kind of hard to read. I hit it while playing, but had my problems with it. If you really want to keep it, do so, but I just want to note that this is quite hard to play/read, to me anyways. It's easy to read for me~
04:54:883 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
05:13:344 - Eh, do you really have to use 2.0 sections? Now that we have custom slider speeds you could just use 1.5 or so, that wouldn't be so extreme. Though, as you have a warning, it still works. Keep if you must, change if you can. Change to 1.5x sections

Collab Flower View:
02:58:113 (4) - Add new combo? =P OK
03:17:959 (3,4,5,6,7) - This spacing change looks a bit weird, but iiiiiiiiiit's playable... if you want to keep it. It's easy to read for me~
04:42:883 (1,1,2,3,1) - These new combos are a bit ugly and don't quite make sense Fixed, I think Ain053 is make a combo nonsense :o
04:54:883 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again, these overlaps are hard to read. OK
05:10:806 (1) - Remove New Combo? OK
05:09:652 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Again, these overlaps are hard to read. OK

I guess none of this is compulsory, but it'd certainly improve the map quality to look into some of these issues. Nice mapset though.
Thx Larto, bubble please >.<
Dai
star :)
Topic Starter
Leorda

lufi10 wrote:

star :)
thx

Pleaseeeeeeeeeee, CNF and Larto! Bubble my map (。ಥˇωಥ)!!!!
Larto
Oh, woops. Sorry. Rebubbled. (EDIT: #1 I suppose, sorry)
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