kuyukiP wrote:
And also, Darcsol and Lanttu, are you guys going to map until the end of the song?
I wouldn't worry about that unless there are score/difficulty issues since they are guest difficulties.
Oh, and I'm haunting all of the Mozaik Role maps~
[Skin]
The center of the spinner circle is ever-so-slightly off-center. It's hardly noticeable, but I figure that I'll mention it.
[Scissors]
00:52:769 (1,2) - Check your spacing here
In the beginning here, you switch around from adhering strictly to following the vocal, then go to a loose version of the rhythm. It can be rather confusing for newer players, so I would suggest that you stick to one rhythm or the other. Also applies to the second verse.
Example: Compare 00:56:080 (1,2) - to 00:59:597 (1,2,3,4) - to 01:03:321 (1,2) -
01:03:735 (2) - This whistle doesn't sound good to me.
01:06:218 (1) - This spinner feels like it starts a little early for the music, but if you started it where it would feel best, it feels a little short for the difficulty. You may be best off mapping through it.
01:09:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Do you think you could configure these more pleasant-looking? Right now it's just kind of straight lines that are kind of positioned slightly off. Maybe go for something more curvy?
01:16:562 (6) - New combo here, remove new combo from the next note
01:19:873 (5) - ^
01:41:804 (4) - This whistle doesn't sound good to me.
01:43:045 (1) - Soft finish on start of slider?
01:45:942 (4) - New combo
02:31:769 - Move this green timing section to the end of the spinner. You don't need it slightly off any more, and the way it is now, you get a blast of the spinner sound right before the big "nante!" (and don't forget to move the one currently on the end of the spinner a bit forward as well)
02:42:631 (5) - New combo here, remove new combo from the next note
02:46:356 - Just map through this break.
02:58:356 (1) - Really felt like this slider would be better starting on 02:58:149 - but it would be too close to the spinner... which is also fairly short. I don't know if you want to map through that, or just delete these last notes and extend the final spinner all the way to the last note at 02:58:976 - for a better effect, imo.
[Glasses]
The beginning of this kind of has the same thing happening from the beginning of Scissors, though comparing 00:26:907 (1,2,3,4,5) - to 00:33:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , the latter plays muuuch better.
00:38:080 (4) - This kept catching me off guard considering that you were trying to follow the lyrics pretty heavily up to here, so I was expecting this to hit where the 5 slider starts. I guess this is continuing from the consistency thing though.
01:41:390 (1) - Remove new combo
02:00:838 (1,2,3) - This felt a little crowded.
02:02:907 - Spinner feels like it should start here.
02:05:390 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a normal. End it at 02:04:562 -
02:19:459 (1) - Add a finish
02:22:769 (5) - New combo
02:46:045 (1) - Start this on the red tick. Feels artificially soon for this OD.
02:58:873 - Unneeded timing section.
[Darcsol's Imitation]
00:23:183 (7,1) - This spacing intentional? It read okay, but the pattern that you have doesn't suggest an anti jump
00:40:149 (1) - Add a soft finish on this
01:19:045 (8,1) - Spacing?
01:22:356 (1,2) - Maybe use the soft hit sound set for these so you don't that that little popping sound that normal does at that low of volume?
02:32:700 - Take off the .5x bpm section here and restore it to 1x. Doesn't make sense having it slow for the first two beats of the intense ending.
[lovhin's Mirrored Self]
00:28:562 (1) - Remove new combo
00:29:804 (4) - New combo
00:39:425 (1) - This feels better starting at 00:40:149 -
01:02:907 (1,2,3,4,5) - These feel out of place with how you mapped this part of the song up until now.
01:16:562 (1) - Finish on start of slider
01:54:218 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Can you spruce this part up rhythmically? It's just that it turns into just on the beat hits for awhile and is kinda boring for this level of difficulty.
02:02:493 (1) - This feels like it would be better starting at 02:02:907 - and maybe have a silenced end, or a soft-hitnormal
02:31:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I foresee a lot of deaths at this part considering the level of difficulty up until here. :<
02:39:114 (8,9,1,2,3) - This part... might be better with a small stream of 3 instead of 5.
[Lan's Evil Self]
I think the only complaint I have is that the verses seem to be a lot more intense than the choruses. Otherwise, finely mapped.