Soraru x Mafumafu - Zen Zen Zense · forum

vrnl

Joined August 2014

vrnl 2017-01-01T02:55:24+00:00

hello from q

i can only do insane, extra so heres that

very well made maps, good job!

insane:
00:13:657 (6) - ctrl+g on this
00:25:815 (3,4,5,1) - kind of confusing, idk how u could fix if you wanted to
00:46:815 (1) - blanket this with 00:46:184 (5) -
01:10:499 (4,1) - stack maybe ?
01:34:815 (1) - this feels better at around x119 y119

extra:
00:13:973 (1,2) - this could be a triple
00:31:657 (1) - this is off from the stream, move it more like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6946276
00:55:657 (1,2) - think this looks better like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6946281
01:30:236 (2,3,4,5) - spaced differently??

sry for short mod. gl on rank /w/

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-01T03:23:37+00:00

will reply tommorrow

Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-01-01T04:02:19+00:00

m4m from queue~
modded an extra diff cuz you modded the whole set

General
at this section, 00:56:920 - you use claps in Extra but not Easy. I think you should make it consistent.

Easy
-change diff name to Normal
00:10:184 (3) - could use a little tweaking so that the red anchor is exactly on this beat 00:10:815
00:23:447 (4,1) - fix DS
00:31:026 (4) - change slider length to 1 beat then add a circle 00:31:657 so you can get a click on soraru's entrance
00:51:552 - missed a pretty loud note here, map it
00:55:342 (2,3) - ctrl+g the rhythm so you can get a click on 00:55:973 for finish sound
01:01:973 (1,2) - fix blanket
01:19:657 (1,2) - blanket?
01:32:289 - could map circle here instead for finish sound

Insane
00:05:447 (2,3,4,5) - why not use the same pattern as this? 00:02:920 (2,3,4)
00:07:973 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:22:815 (1,2) - why is DS so low here? i think it should be consistent with 00:21:236 (5,1) and 00:25:973 (4,5,1)
00:32:920 (1,2) - ^
00:35:763 (2,3,4) - ^ DS too large instead
00:25:815 (3,4,5,1) - this is really confusing because there is a jump into 3, then 4 is 1/2 spaced, then the next two circles are 1/1 spaced. i think you should space 3 from 4.
01:03:552 - put click for finish?
01:09:552 (1,2,3) - how about using the exact same slider shape for all these to illustrate the repeating "zen"?
01:19:657 (1,2,3) - ^
01:32:289 - put click for finish?

Extra
00:03:552 (4,1) - jump feels underwhelming, considering the finish hitsound
00:06:078 (4,1) - ^
00:16:342 (6) - this note isnt that significant, its probably around the same intensity as 00:16:026 (4) so make jump around same distance as 00:15:868 (3,4). if anything, the jump to 00:16:184 (5) should be bigger than the one to 6.
00:16:499 (1) - make jump bigger for finish+guitar
00:25:973 (4,1) - overlap doesnt look neat,separate the objects
00:29:605 (2) - note is pretty soft, decrease jump
00:33:473 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - overmapped, some sounds dont exist ( 00:33:789 (6) - 00:33:946 (8) ) and these ones ( 00:33:473 (3) - 00:34:105 (10) ) are only continuations of cymbals, they aren't hits
00:35:684 - 00:35:842 - since youve been mapping 1/4, you missed some notes here
00:39:236 (1) - increase jump?
00:41:289 (2) - this note isnt that loud but this note 00:41:605 (4) - has loud guitar entrance, so i would make 4 have a bigger jump than 2
00:45:394 - add finish?
01:03:552 - put click here instead for finish?
01:11:763 (5,6,1) - jump from 6-1 should be smaller than 5-6 because 1 is a very strong vocal
01:15:078 (3,4,5) - hold back on jump DS because the vocals are pretty soft here. 01:16:973 (7,1) - would be more suitable for huge jumps because of the sudden increase in vocal intensity.
01:18:868 (4,7) - overlap doesnt look good, separate objects
01:19:657 (1) - jump could be bigger
01:30:236 (2,3,4,5) - placement looks weird, how about using a more curvy arc instead? 3-4-5 looks like a straight line right now which makes 2 feel out of place

Good luck!

Mordred

532 posts

Joined October 2015

Mordred 2017-01-01T19:07:35+00:00

from my q

General:

white combo color is unrankable afaik

Easy:

hp5 is too high

Your DS is kinda high, as well as really inconsistent, fix this please

01:13:657 (3,4) - also this blanket can be improved

Hard:

ar8 might be a little high, maybe ar7?

00:30:868 (2,3,4,5) - this is too hard for new players, try to not overlap it like this

rest of the diff looks ok

Insane:

od6 hp8? Shouldn't it be the other way around?

00:13:342 (4,5,6) - there is no need for such a big jump

00:17:763 (1,2) - this overlap plays weird

00:25:815 (3,4,5,1) - don't use the same spacing for 1/2 and 1/1 like this

01:01:342 (3) - should be 1/2 imo

01:24:078 (5,6,7,1) - this flows really weird

01:32:368 (1) - why silence this spinner when there is a beat at the end of it?

Extra:

od6 hp8 again :thinking:

00:08:920 (1) - why is there no triple?

00:21:552 (1,2) - what even is this blanket

00:33:710 (5,6,7,8) - I don't hear anything 1/4 here

01:00:552 (5,2) - reverse arrow is kinda hidden, move (5) a bit

01:09:552 (1,2,3) - you have those as 1/2 in this diff but longer in insane?

01:17:131 (1) - should be faster imo

Good luck with the map

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-02T09:08:23+00:00

cute boy

cute boy wrote:
hello from q

i can only do insane, extra so heres that dat's fine

very well made maps, good job! thanks, m8!

insane:
00:13:657 (6) - ctrl+g on this mayb it's looks easier. no fix
00:25:815 (3,4,5,1) - kind of confusing, idk how u could fix if you wanted to lol it's not confusing even insane player can do this
00:46:815 (1) - blanket this with 00:46:184 (5) - looks bad aechieticts. no fix
01:10:499 (4,1) - stack maybe ? nope. I wanna to keep this ds
01:34:815 (1) - this feels better at around x119 y119 looks better now. fixed

extra:
00:13:973 (1,2) - this could be a triple fixed
00:31:657 (1) - this is off from the stream, move it more like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6946276 fixed
00:55:657 (1,2) - think this looks better like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6946281 look's more bad flows for me since sound slow is here and i wanted to keep this cause you know, cool right
01:30:236 (2,3,4,5) - spaced differently?? ikr

sry for short mod. gl on rank /w/

Yahuri

Yahuri wrote:
m4m from queue~
modded an extra diff cuz you modded the whole set

General
at this section, 00:56:920 - you use claps in Extra but not Easy. I think you should make it consistent. ikr bcs i'm feeling lazy. fixed

Easy
-change diff name to Normal lol, why. I'm still waiting for mapper to map normal or i'd reject a request and make it myself xd
00:10:184 (3) - could use a little tweaking so that the red anchor is exactly on this beat 00:10:815 ikr but i have no idea how to add this part like i copy battle's ez or i'd ignore this and remove but it would make hard for newbie players
00:23:447 (4,1) - fix DS fixed
00:31:026 (4) - change slider length to 1 beat then add a circle 00:31:657 so you can get a click on soraru's entrance fixed
00:51:552 - missed a pretty loud note here, map it mapped
00:55:342 (2,3) - ctrl+g the rhythm so you can get a click on 00:55:973 for finish sound will find another way to fix. it would make harder to read for newbie players
01:01:973 (1,2) - fix blanket fixed
01:19:657 (1,2) - blanket? fixed
01:32:289 - could map circle here instead for finish sound nope bcs newbie players are hard to reading an ar like this and could be ez since this is ez but move to normal lel.

Insane
00:05:447 (2,3,4,5) - why not use the same pattern as this? 00:02:920 (2,3,4) it would be ez for player. I'd keep this part are different instead of style
00:07:973 (2,3,4,5) - ^ same as above
00:22:815 (1,2) - why is DS so low here? i think it should be consistent with 00:21:236 (5,1) and 00:25:973 (4,5,1) ikr but it should be different as before this answer like first answer of this diff which means insane lel.
00:32:920 (1,2) - ^ same as above
00:35:763 (2,3,4) - ^ DS too large instead ikr but no fix for no reason lol
00:25:815 (3,4,5,1) - this is really confusing because there is a jump into 3, then 4 is 1/2 spaced, then the next two circles are 1/1 spaced. i think you should space 3 from 4. fixed at a circle (3) move a little bit bcs player playing this diff by attempt 1 are confusing
01:03:552 - put click for finish? look a reason at extra why i won't fix it
01:09:552 (1,2,3) - how about using the exact same slider shape for all these to illustrate the repeating "zen"? idk how to fix it, but it would make bad flows instead of ds
01:19:657 (1,2,3) - ^ same as above
01:32:289 - put click for finish? fixed since before this has no part like this

Extra
00:03:552 (4,1) - jump feels underwhelming, considering the finish hitsound hitsound looks fine imo bcs at slider (4) looks very slow sound, so, i'd put whistle here and the jump are fine coz i copy from monstarat's style lel
00:06:078 (4,1) - ^ same as above
00:16:342 (6) - this note isnt that significant, its probably around the same intensity as 00:16:026 (4) so make jump around same distance as 00:15:868 (3,4). if anything, the jump to 00:16:184 (5) should be bigger than the one to 6. well, fixed since this is extra but move to insane 5 stars lol. considering this is huge jumps
00:16:499 (1) - make jump bigger for finish+guitar fixed
00:25:973 (4,1) - overlap doesnt look neat,separate the objects fixed
00:29:605 (2) - note is pretty soft, decrease jump fixed
00:33:473 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - overmapped, some sounds dont exist ( 00:33:789 (6) - 00:33:946 (8) ) and these ones ( 00:33:473 (3) - 00:34:105 (10) ) are only continuations of cymbals, they aren't hits ikr this is overmapped you think. But you'd hear properly bcs you said those sounds aren't exist but those sounds are pretty soft. considering these as stream part
00:35:684 - 00:35:842 - since youve been mapping 1/4, you missed some notes here ikr but i want to not mapping stream here bcs sound are different before this
00:39:236 (1) - increase jump? i might move a circle (7)
00:41:289 (2) - this note isnt that loud but this note 00:41:605 (4) - has loud guitar entrance, so i would make 4 have a bigger jump than 2 fixed
00:45:394 - add finish? nope bcs sound hitsound are same like sound clap. so, i should be same
01:03:552 - put click here instead for finish? a finish are already added here but i want to keep this slider bcs a clap starts at red tick and should properly balanced such as 01:00:868 and 00:58:342
01:11:763 (5,6,1) - jump from 6-1 should be smaller than 5-6 because 1 is a very strong vocal i wanted to keep this bcs that part are not bad as you think
01:15:078 (3,4,5) - hold back on jump DS because the vocals are pretty soft here. 01:16:973 (7,1) - would be more suitable for huge jumps because of the sudden increase in vocal intensity. fixed since that part it would be star jump but feel not very complete
01:18:868 (4,7) - overlap doesnt look good, separate objects fixed
01:19:657 (1) - jump could be bigger meh, keep this bcs these are same like first part of kiai you know like zen zen zense soraru's part should be same or could be different
01:30:236 (2,3,4,5) - placement looks weird, how about using a more curvy arc instead? 3-4-5 looks like a straight line right now which makes 2 feel out of place fixed but a slider (3) should keep this

Good luck!

Yoshino--

Yoshino-- wrote:
from my q

General:

white combo color is unrankable afaik i don't have any colours to add another white lol based on colour of bg

Easy:

hp5 is too high oh, didn't notice dat. fixed

Your DS is kinda high, as well as really inconsistent, fix this please yeah, ikr but i feeling lazy to fix all part now. This map could not rank if not follow the rules of ranking criteria. Okorin said as 180bpm and above dat bpm should less ds such as 1.2 or 1.4 . So, i'd have free time to fix ds but tomorrow school starts lel.

01:13:657 (3,4) - also this blanket can be improved fixed

Hard:

ar8 might be a little high, maybe ar7? change to ar7.5 cause i like high ar :3

00:30:868 (2,3,4,5) - this is too hard for new players, try to not overlap it like this ikr but i'd follow the hitsounds. Otherwise, it would make more ez for player

rest of the diff looks ok

Insane:

od6 hp8? Shouldn't it be the other way around? fixed the hp to 7

00:13:342 (4,5,6) - there is no need for such a big jump ikr but i would keep this cause need to follow the emphasize

00:17:763 (1,2) - this overlap plays weird fixed a slider (1)

00:25:815 (3,4,5,1) - don't use the same spacing for 1/2 and 1/1 like this mayb already fix as yahuri's mod

01:01:342 (3) - should be 1/2 imo it's fine tho

01:24:078 (5,6,7,1) - this flows really weird fixed

01:32:368 (1) - why silence this spinner when there is a beat at the end of it? lol, don't confusing about this. considering this as end part. the last spinner should be silenced bcs the sound at red tick looks very soft i heard. So, i need to keep this

Extra:

od6 hp8 again :thinking: haha, no need to thinking. But thanks for the insane you noticed dat cause you know, i'm lazy right ;w;

00:08:920 (1) - why is there no triple? lol, this song aren't same like radwimps' song but this song are pretty different such as no triple or idk. so, you need to hear properly lol

00:21:552 (1,2) - what even is this blanket could be awesome flows. if follow the opposite direction, it would make bad flows

00:33:710 (5,6,7,8) - I don't hear anything 1/4 here I think you must have hearing problems i guess. Hear properly lol

01:00:552 (5,2) - reverse arrow is kinda hidden, move (5) a bit fixed

01:09:552 (1,2,3) - you have those as 1/2 in this diff but longer in insane? ikr but you know it's weird you looked extra and insane style are most completely different, right? consider extra as monst and insane as sotks but you know the mappers who they is

01:17:131 (1) - should be faster imo nope

Good luck with the map

thanks for mod, guys!

__Hatsune_Miku

598 posts

Joined July 2014

__Hatsune_Miku 2017-01-02T10:13:22+00:00

M4M

artist -> そらる x まふまふ / Romanised artist -> Soraru x Mafumafu
Trun off widdscreensupport
Check Aimod one More time
Wana new BG? use this https://www.miramarcinemas.com.tw/db/we ... 400105.jpg

[easy]

I think Ar5 is little fast down 4 or 3.5 ?
01:31:657 (4) - > http://puu.sh/t8wKY/4f225e0f77.jpg

[hard]

00:30:868 (2,3,4,5) - This part make people Confused

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-02T10:22:36+00:00

_ Hatsune Miku wrote:
M4M
artist -> そらる x まふまふ / Romanised artist -> Soraru x Mafumafu changed!
Trun off widdscreensupport done!
Check Aimod one More time ikr there's problem about audio. I'd call an expert cuted mp3 to fix it like pishi or sotarks
Wana new BG? use this https://www.miramarcinemas.com.tw/db/we ... 400105.jpg looks great but i don't want to use it
[easy]
I think Ar5 is little fast down 4 or 3.5 ? yeah, i looked it hard to read. changed to ar4!
01:31:657 (4) - > http://puu.sh/t8wKY/4f225e0f77.jpg more easier than old. fixed
[hard]
00:30:868 (2,3,4,5) - This part make people Confused It's fine tho. Hard players should be focus on stream ar now. no fix

thanks for mod!
will mod your map

Venix

Global Moderator

1,927 posts

Joined February 2015

Venix 2017-01-03T17:24:01+00:00

metadata from q
Red - Currently incorrect

Source: 君の名は。
Artist: そらる×まふまふ
Romanised Artist: Soraru x mafumafu
Title: 前前前世
Romanised Title: Zen Zen Zense
http://soraruru.jp/
http://uni-mafumafu.jp/
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCOTR1t ... g/featured
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm29703556
https://www.youtube.com/user/soraruYT

EDIT: Artist is correct

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-07T02:27:40+00:00

Venix wrote:
metadata from q
Red - Currently incorrect
Source: 君の名は。
Artist: そらる×まふまふ
Romanised Artist: Soraru x mafumafu done changed!
Title: 前前前世
Romanised Title: Zen Zen Zense
http://soraruru.jp/
http://uni-mafumafu.jp/
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCOTR1t ... g/featured
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm29703556
https://www.youtube.com/user/soraruYT
EDIT: Artist is correct

thanks for check!
idk i'd give kudosu or not

Noffy

Nomination Assessment Team

1,659 posts

Joined April 2012

Noffy 2017-01-08T21:48:05+00:00

Yo~ sorry for delay umu From queue o/

[General]

Your audio file is 286kbps, which is above the rankable limit of 192kbps. You will have to either compress the current mp3 or find a new one.

Combo colors: combo color 3 is pure white, which is hard on the eyes, especially during a kiai. Additionally, colors 5 and 6 are pretty similar and I don't see the need to have both.
Maybe some like this would be better instead? I simply removed 3 and 5.

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,0
Combo2 : 0,128,192
Combo3 : 0,128,0
Combo4 : 128,128,255

[Easy]
Edit:

Your spacing seems to variate a lot from 1.5-1.7, consider choosing a single ds and sticking with it, since this is an easy. Well, the spacing is pretty dang big for an easy in general too :C I suggest something like 1.0 or 1.2 since those are in the recommended range of distance snap settings for any easy. 1.5 is excessive. It causes too much difference between slider and movement speed, which can be confusing to a beginner.

00:10:184 (3) - Consider placing the red anchor in the center of the slider, on the slidertick.
00:17:131 (2,3) - Try to make these sliders parallel.
00:19:026 (1) - Possibly ctrl+J this to improve the flow for 00:18:710 (4,1,2) -
00:31:657 (1) - It's pretty confusing for an easy that this is stack on the tail of 00:30:394 (3) - . Moving it like this can maintain spacing and improve readability: http://puu.sh/tfEuf/0daea2f670.jpg
01:13:657 (3,4) - Maybe make (4) blanket (3) instead?
01:21:236 (3,4,5) - This nearly straight line feels a bit unnatural. I think a curved pattern like this could play better: http://puu.sh/tfERn/016f078b7d.jpg

[Hard]
00:20:289 (1,2,3) - This is visually weird because (2) is very close to (1)'s slider body but not (3)'s. suggestion.
00:42:394 (3,4,1) - The uneven spacing here doesn't even seem to be a jump. Consider making a bit more consistent >-<

[Insane and Extra]
I'm not very good at mapping harder difficulties in detail, so I'll just say some general things:

Generally, I feel that your extra was mapped more cleanly than the insane, where the jumps felt a bit messy and more difficult to play than the extra's because of that.
Some 1/4s in extra, like 00:33:710 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - , I couldn't figure out what they were following and they didn't make too much sense to play :<

>extra:
00:57:394 (2,3) - not perfectly stacked aa

Ayyffy's Normal

Please be sure to add Ayyri and Noffy to tags when/if you add the diff :3... (they're already added in the code)

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:前前前世
Artist:Soraru x mafumafu
ArtistUnicode:Soraru x mafumafu
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Version:Ayyffy's Normal
Source:君の名は。
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Last edited by Noffy 2017-01-11T04:31:44+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

_kotachi_

567 posts

Joined July 2014

_kotachi_ 2017-01-09T11:59:53+00:00

Hi from m4m
I'll mod Insane more maps
※Not good English※

Insane

00:03:552 - I think good put a slider
00:04:499 (3) - ctrl+G
00:21:236 - ^^
00:25:973 (4,5,1) - I think narrow
00:27:868 (1,2,3,4,5) - These aren't good. put at equal intervals
00:36:078 (3,4,1) - ^^
00:55:657 (1,2,3) - I think not nature. How about like this?
img
01:16:973 - I think need a circle here
01:19:342 (4,5) - I think narrow

Extra

I think OD is too low, please think change more 8
00:01:815 (2) - blanket?
00:16:973 (3) - stack 00:15:552 (2) -
00:45:868 (4,5,6,7) - I think good like this
img
01:09:552 (1,2,3) - i think it's waste, how about like this?
01:19:657 (1,2,3) - ^
01:30:236 (2,3,4,5) - Adjust distance

Good luck!

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-10T08:14:11+00:00

Noffy wrote:

Yo~ sorry for delay umu From queue o/

[General]

Your audio file is 286kbps, which is above the rankable limit of 192kbps. You will have to either compress the current mp3 or find a new one. ikr i must to decrease kbps audio but i can't find a way to fix this or mayb call someone to help this :c

Combo colors: combo color 3 is pure white, which is hard on the eyes, especially during a kiai. Additionally, colors 5 and 6 are pretty similar and I don't see the need to have both.
Maybe some like this would be better instead? I simply removed 3 and 5. wow, nice colours since i must add all combo colours and don't have any colours to choice. changed!

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,0
Combo2 : 0,128,192
Combo3 : 0,128,0
Combo4 : 128,128,255

[Easy]
Edit:

Your spacing seems to variate a lot from 1.5-1.7, consider choosing a single ds and sticking with it, since this is an easy. Well, the spacing is pretty dang big for an easy in general too :C I suggest something like 1.0 or 1.2 since those are in the recommended range of distance snap settings for any easy. 1.5 is excessive. It causes too much difference between slider and movement speed, which can be confusing to a beginner.
yeah, i saw that on forum. Trying to remap and decrease ds to 1.2 if i do decrease ds on old easy, that would be bad flows and patterns. So, don't worry bcs you look worried about my map can't be rank lol.

00:10:184 (3) - Consider placing the red anchor in the center of the slider, on the slidertick.
00:17:131 (2,3) - Try to make these sliders parallel.
00:19:026 (1) - Possibly ctrl+J this to improve the flow for 00:18:710 (4,1,2) -
00:31:657 (1) - It's pretty confusing for an easy that this is stack on the tail of 00:30:394 (3) - . Moving it like this can maintain spacing and improve readability: http://puu.sh/tfEuf/0daea2f670.jpg
01:13:657 (3,4) - Maybe make (4) blanket (3) instead?
01:21:236 (3,4,5) - This nearly straight line feels a bit unnatural. I think a curved pattern like this could play better: http://puu.sh/tfERn/016f078b7d.jpg
will response after you said at bottom

[Hard]
00:20:289 (1,2,3) - This is visually weird because (2) is very close to (1)'s slider body but not (3)'s. suggestion. fixed
00:42:394 (3,4,1) - The uneven spacing here doesn't even seem to be a jump. Consider making a bit more consistent >-< it's fine tho since you wanted me to fix like above cooment.

[Insane and Extra]
I'm not very good at mapping harder difficulties in detail, so I'll just say some general things:

Generally, I feel that your extra was mapped more cleanly than the insane, where the jumps felt a bit messy and more difficult to play than the extra's because of that.
Some 1/4s in extra, like 00:33:710 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - , I couldn't figure out what they were following and they didn't make too much sense to play :<

>extra:
00:57:394 (2,3) - not perfectly stacked aa lol, you think this only are not perfect stacked, you can see all others

Ayyffy's Normal

Please be sure to add Ayyri and Noffy to tags when/if you add the diff :3... (they're already added in the code)

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 68447
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[Metadata]
Title:Zen Zen Zense
TitleUnicode:前前前世
Artist:Soraru x mafumafu
ArtistUnicode:Soraru x mafumafu
Creator:Chibi Maruko
Version:Ayyffy's Normal
Source:君の名は。
Tags:kimi no na wa taki mitsuha your name movie soraru mafumafu zen zen zense Noffy Ayyri
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Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-10T08:27:16+00:00

_kotachi_ wrote:
Hi from m4m
I'll mod Insane more maps
※Not good English※ that's okay. You need to improve grammar

Insane
00:03:552 - I think good put a slider nope, player need to rest their aim for players who trying to play insane
00:04:499 (3) - ctrl+G nope, it would be go to opposite way lol
00:21:236 - ^^ ctrl + g for slider but no note at here you want to fix lol
00:25:973 (4,5,1) - I think narrow it's depend to hitsounds to consider making little different style
00:27:868 (1,2,3,4,5) - These aren't good. put at equal intervals fixed
00:36:078 (3,4,1) - ^^i think it's fine bcs look like geometry pattern
00:55:657 (1,2,3) - I think not nature. How about like this? you just make a little different but same pattern lol. no fix
img
01:16:973 - I think need a circle here i won't put note here for a some reason
01:19:342 (4,5) - I think narrow fixed bcs you looked like anti-jump :p
Extra
I think OD is too low, please think change more 8 changed
00:01:815 (2) - blanket? nope, i want to keep this to make balance style
00:16:973 (3) - stack 00:15:552 (2) - fixed to another stacked
00:45:868 (4,5,6,7) - I think good like this looks like nazi pattern :p. no fix
img
01:09:552 (1,2,3) - i think it's waste, how about like this? this is too, more like didn't follow this style. no fix
01:19:657 (1,2,3) - ^ same
01:30:236 (2,3,4,5) - Adjust distance fixed
Good luck!

thanks for mod, fiend!

MasterHerobrine

242 posts

Joined July 2016

MasterHerobrine 2017-01-12T05:12:34+00:00

Just wanted to give a new bg for this map.
https://puu.sh/tjsIO/a62e9762fa.png

GL~ for rank!

nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-01-16T16:22:45+00:00

Why not? lo

Normal
- Fix AiMod Stuff (i checked the Positions and I can say AiMod is this Time not Drunk Kappa)
1-2 Things to make this Diff a little bit easier
- 01:28:184 (2,3) I know the Circles fit it better but change it into an Slider
- 01:05:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) Change some from the Circles into 1/2 or 1/1 Sliders
Good Luck~

Noffy

Nomination Assessment Team

1,659 posts

Joined April 2012

Noffy 2017-01-16T17:44:40+00:00

nextplay wrote:
Why not? lo

Normal
- Fix AiMod Stuff (i checked the Positions and I can say AiMod is this Time not Drunk Kappa) only one of the three was actually incorrectly spaced, fixed.
1-2 Things to make this Diff a little bit easier
- 01:28:184 (2,3) I know the Circles fit it better but change it into an Slider uhm, why would I change them, if they fit? Changing this wouldn't really make the map easier, either. ayyri response
- 01:05:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) Change some from the Circles into 1/2 or 1/1 Sliders No change, while it may quite a few circles in a row, they're all 1/1, so less dense than a lot of the circles in the map, and they fit well with the build-up in the song.
Good Luck~

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Title:Zen Zen Zense
TitleUnicode:前前前世
Artist:Soraru x mafumafu
ArtistUnicode:Soraru x mafumafu
Creator:Chibi Maruko
Version:Ayyffy's Normal
Source:君の名は。
Tags:kimi no na wa taki mitsuha your name movie soraru mafumafu zen zen zense Noffy Ayyri
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Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2017-01-16T17:48:38+00:00

The first part of Extra somehow reminds me Monstrata's version xD

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-17T14:01:32+00:00

Will update soon..

Sonnyc wrote:
The first part of Extra somehow reminds me Monstrata's version xD

Not rly bcs the other part looks not similiar

nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-01-17T21:24:36+00:00

Chibi Maruko wrote:
i don't have any bg. Tell me if you have awesome bg from your name!

I serached BG's for you're Map :3
https://images6.alphacoders.com/737/thu ... 737496.png
https://images2.alphacoders.com/743/thu ... 743487.jpg
https://images8.alphacoders.com/737/thu ... 737485.png

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-17T22:58:50+00:00

nextplay wrote:
Chibi Maruko wrote:
i don't have any bg. Tell me if you have awesome bg from your name!
I serached BG's for you're Map :3
https://images6.alphacoders.com/737/thu ... 737496.png
https://images2.alphacoders.com/743/thu ... 743487.jpg
https://images8.alphacoders.com/737/thu ... 737485.png

wow, gud bg at top of the link. will change on weekend

Linada

994 posts

Joined November 2014

Linada 2017-01-21T03:26:35+00:00

hi from queue

[General]
Your mp3 is higher than 192kbps.

[Easy]

00:13:973 (1) - Maybe blanket ?
00:52:499 (2) - fix distance
00:55:657 (3) - ^
Diff seems to have some DS issues there and there, make sure to check

[Ayyffy's Normal]

01:28:815 (5) - i think you could add a circle here ?

[Hard]

00:35:368 (5) - add a note here ?
01:31:973 (4) - you should make the sliderend clickable for such a strong beat

[Insane]

01:17:131 (1) - You should space it more because it feel really cramped
01:18:236 (1) - Can you blanket this slider ? it's look terrible actually D: like this
01:19:499 (5) - is too close from 01:18:868 (3) - maybe stack to 01:18:236 (1) - or space it a little bit more

Sorry for short mod D:
Good luck !

Pituophis

859 posts

Joined January 2015

Pituophis 2017-01-21T07:02:27+00:00

From my queue. Short mod on Extra

The Audio bitrate is too high. Compress it to 192 kbps
Extra
00:05:447 (2) - Rotate 15 degrees Anti-clockwise selection center
00:06:078 (4) - Rotate 2 degrees Clockwise selection center so that it is parallel with 00:05:763 (3) -
00:08:920 (1,2) - maybe try this:

00:16:184 (5) - move to slider head of 00:15:552 (2) -
00:41:131 (1,2,3,4) - on this, maybe have greater DS, because of vocals and intensity,
and less DS on this 00:40:499 (1,2,3,4) -
00:52:973 (6) - this jump is so much bigger than the jump around it, and its not really intense.
00:56:920 (1) - Try this:

.^.

01:11:447 (4) - ctrl+g
01:28:342 (1) - looks sloppy
01:29:447 (3,4) - Switch these 2 slider. If you do this suggestion, do this:
--- 01:29:763 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl+J and put slider head on top of 01:29:447 (3) -

Might give a mod on Insane later

Really nice map.

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-21T08:26:48+00:00

linada

Linada wrote:
hi from queue

[General]
Your mp3 is higher than 192kbps. ikr, i must reduce kbps and idk how to do it :c

[Easy]
00:13:973 (1) - Maybe blanket ? mayb it's already blanket tho
00:52:499 (2) - fix distance just wanted to keep that slider, but change slider before dat slider
00:55:657 (3) - ^ fixed
Diff seems to have some DS issues there and there, make sure to check will do bcs lazy :p

[Hard]
00:35:368 (5) - add a note here ? added
01:31:973 (4) - you should make the sliderend clickable for such a strong beat fixed

[Insane]
01:17:131 (1) - You should space it more because it feel really cramped i think i's fine
01:18:236 (1) - Can you blanket this slider ? it's look terrible actually D: like this fixed
01:19:499 (5) - is too close from 01:18:868 (3) - maybe stack to 01:18:236 (1) - or space it a little bit more fixed another flow

Sorry for short mod D: dats okay!
Good luck !

pituofis

Pituophis wrote:
From my queue. Short mod on Extra

The Audio bitrate is too high. Compress it to 192 kbps ikr but same comment as linada's comment
Extra
00:05:447 (2) - Rotate 15 degrees Anti-clockwise selection center idk what are you said
00:06:078 (4) - Rotate 2 degrees Clockwise selection center so that it is parallel with 00:05:763 (3) - fix with another pattern and avoided overlap
00:08:920 (1,2) - maybe try this: nope, those are too hard.

00:16:184 (5) - move to slider head of 00:15:552 (2) - it would become anti jump
00:41:131 (1,2,3,4) - on this, maybe have greater DS, because of vocals and intensity,
and less DS on this 00:40:499 (1,2,3,4) - mayb your idea are interest than yahuri's idea. fixed
00:52:973 (6) - this jump is so much bigger than the jump around it, and its not really intense. mayb you said much bigger, but the others part are much biggest jump lol instead you mention this part. no fix
00:56:920 (1) - Try this: nope, it would become overlap

01:11:447 (4) - ctrl+g no
01:28:342 (1) - looks sloppy cool slider you know. i won't
01:29:447 (3,4) - Switch these 2 slider. If you do this suggestion, do this:
--- 01:29:763 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl+J and put slider head on top of 01:29:447 (3) - it would go wrong way

Might give a mod on Insane later just reply your mod bcs i don't want waste time bcs time is gold

Really nice map. Thanks, m8. i hope you enjoyed it!

thank, guys

Noffy

Nomination Assessment Team

1,659 posts

Joined April 2012

Noffy 2017-01-21T16:29:56+00:00

Hihi maruko here's a 192kpbs mp3-> http://puu.sh/tuuHA/7b45b1b857.mp3
new offset should be 1397

Linada wrote:
[Ayyffy's Normal]
01:28:815 (5) - i think you could add a circle here ? No change, because it would make the overall pattern too long without a 1/1 break, and very dense.

Last edited by Noffy 2017-01-21T21:03:14+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

AzureDoctor

196 posts

Joined January 2016

AzureDoctor 2017-01-21T20:21:21+00:00

Hello! NM from my Q

[General]
Looks good.

[Easy]
00:06:394 (1,1) - You could place a finish HS here to be consistent with the other diffs.
00:26:605 (1,3) - Ctrl+H to make these symmetrical
00:36:710 (1,2) - Ctrl+J
00:51:552 - A note could be added here, as you are missing a crash cymbal sound otherwise.
01:01:973 (1) - A finish HS would be more fitting here instead of a whistle.
01:32:289 (1,1) - I would recommend that you replace the spinner w/ a slider instead. The spinner allows for very little prep time and very little recovery time, and shortening the spinner would make it way too short for it to be reasonable.

[Ayyffy's Normal]
00:45:394 - You are missing a crash cymbal sound here. I would suggest that you extend 00:44:920 (2) - , or you could also add a circle there.
01:01:973 (1) - A finish HS would be more fitting here instead of a whistle.

[Hard]
00:09:394 (2,3) - I feel that what you currently have doesn't really emphasize any specific sound. I would suggest that you put more emphasis on the guitar:

smth like this:

00:34:815 (3) - You could make this the same as 00:34:184 (1) -
01:10:184 (3,1) - Ctrl+JH to make these symmetrical

I hope my mod is helpful. GL!

Noffy

Nomination Assessment Team

1,659 posts

Joined April 2012

Noffy 2017-01-21T21:08:12+00:00

AzureDoctor wrote:
Hello! NM from my Q heyo~

[Ayyffy's Normal]
00:45:394 - You are missing a crash cymbal sound here. I would suggest that you extend 00:44:920 (2) - , or you could also add a circle there. Fixed by adding a circle
01:01:973 (1) - A finish HS would be more fitting here instead of a whistle. changed the hitsound

code

I didn't change the offset in this difficulty yet as I'm not sure whether you'll use the new mp3 I gave you in my last post.

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio-1.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68447
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 1342,46815,94815
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Zen Zen Zense
TitleUnicode:前前前世
Artist:Soraru x mafumafu
ArtistUnicode:Soraru x mafumafu
Creator:Chibi Maruko
Version:Ayyffy's Normal
Source:君の名は。
Tags:kimi no na wa taki mitsuha your name movie soraru mafumafu zen zen zense Noffy Ayyri
BeatmapID:1179373
BeatmapSetID:547946

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"doesn't watch this movie.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo3 : 0,128,0
Combo4 : 128,128,255

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Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-22T05:10:18+00:00

AzureDoctor wrote:
Hello! NM from my Q

[General]
Looks good.

[Easy]
00:06:394 (1,1) - You could place a finish HS here to be consistent with the other diffs. wtf i forgot to add hitsounds for this part tho, thanks for noticed this! added
00:26:605 (1,3) - Ctrl+H to make these symmetrical same flow thought, no fix
00:36:710 (1,2) - Ctrl+J nope
00:51:552 - A note could be added here, as you are missing a crash cymbal sound otherwise. lol, added
01:01:973 (1) - A finish HS would be more fitting here instead of a whistle. i won't bcs sound like this are pretty2x soft you know, it's better to add whistle or shall i change to normalwhistle, that's enough. will change when many complain about this
01:32:289 (1,1) - I would recommend that you replace the spinner w/ a slider instead. The spinner allows for very little prep time and very little recovery time, and shortening the spinner would make it way too short for it to be reasonable. i'm just trying to make gud slider, but trying and trying are not gud. So, the eazy way are make spinner. idk i'm not good make long slider or someone should make a long slider. will change after someone can make long slider

[Hard]
00:09:394 (2,3) - I feel that what you currently have doesn't really emphasize any specific sound. I would suggest that you put more emphasis on the guitar: fixed, feels better now
smth like this:
00:34:815 (3) - You could make this the same as 00:34:184 (1) - nope bcs hard can do anything such as random slider. no fix
01:10:184 (3,1) - Ctrl+JH to make these symmetrical it would be bad flows. no fix

I hope my mod is helpful. GL!

thanks for mod!
updated noffy's gd, offset and mp3
really helpful

bezbashn

181 posts

Joined June 2015

bezbashn 2017-01-22T07:00:02+00:00

Hello from queue
Fast mapping mod

[Hard]
00:30:923 (2,3,4,5) - Are you shure this is for Hard diff ?
00:37:397 (4,5,1,2) - Strange overlap
01:32:502 - Start spinner here (listen to music)

[Insane]
00:01:397 - Listen to music. Should look like this

00:08:975 (1,2,3) - Music again. Like this

01:34:239 - That way

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-22T07:23:47+00:00

bezbashn wrote:
Hello from queue
Fast mapping mod the fastest mod is sanic :3 joke, right?

[Hard]
00:30:923 (2,3,4,5) - Are you shure this is for Hard diff ? yeah, i think it's look fine tho bcs players are need to know to accurate stream part, slider streams, etc. So, player should confident about these
00:37:397 (4,5,1,2) - Strange overlap will find another way to fix.
01:32:502 - Start spinner here (listen to music) fixed

[Insane]
00:01:397 - Listen to music. Should look like this i'm not going to change this

00:08:975 (1,2,3) - Music again. Like this i can hear too but this would be hard for ez part. no fix

01:34:239 - That way no sound on white tick. no add

thanks for mod!

Ryuusei Aika

Elite Mapper

1,086 posts

Joined January 2016

Ryuusei Aika 2017-01-22T08:40:59+00:00

from queue

General
imo artist should be something like そらる x まふまふ as soraru x mafumafu is their romanized name
remove kimi no na wa soraru mafumafu zen zen zense from your tags as those can already be serached by artist/title and source
and maybe you need to add cut ver to your tags
00:01:397 - green line should use same volume setting with red line

Easy
00:10:239 (2) - this sliderend should put at 00:11:186 - as i think it's better to make 00:11:502 - clickable
00:50:660 (3,4) - why not make a blanket?

Normal
01:29:028 (5,6,7) - i think this part can move to 01:28:870 - to follow the song (and maybe you need to do some change to keep the ds)

Insane
00:13:081 (3,4,5,6) - flow is quite weird, change to something like the pic bellow should be better:

Extra
00:01:397 (1) - the next green line is on a wrong position
00:06:449 (1,2) - how about a blanket?

dont quite agree the idea on your jumps but nvm xd
gl

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-22T09:31:11+00:00

Neanmoins wrote:
from queue

General
imo artist should be something like そらる x まふまふ as soraru x mafumafu is their romanized name added
remove kimi no na wa soraru mafumafu zen zen zense from your tags as those can already be serached by artist/title and source
and maybe you need to add cut ver to your tags
00:01:397 - green line should use same volume setting with red line i think all diffs already made it except ayyri and noffy's diff. It's depend to them.

Easy
00:10:239 (2) - this sliderend should put at 00:11:186 - as i think it's better to make 00:11:502 - clickable newb players could confusing where is rhythm and why are put note even no rhythm. I won't make newbie players thought. no fix
00:50:660 (3,4) - why not make a blanket? it's too much for blanket, need to decrease blanket for ez

Insane
00:13:081 (3,4,5,6) - flow is quite weird, change to something like the pic bellow should be better: it's not weird. i won't change for a some reason. no fix

Extra
00:01:397 (1) - the next green line is on a wrong position oh, didn't know about that, fixed
00:06:449 (1,2) - how about a blanket? nope

dont quite agree the idea on your jumps but nvm xd random jumps, right :p
gl

thanks for mod!

Remus

452 posts

Joined July 2015

Remus 2017-01-22T16:04:53+00:00

Hello.

First of all, check AIMod and fix tags problems.

[Easy]
00:10:239 (2) - bad aesthetics, you can improve that slider.
01:09:607 (1,2) - will be hard for players to read this moment.
01:14:660 (1,2) - ^. (newbies like the stable rhytm, without moments like these)
You got, what i wanted to say(check again all moments like these, maybe you decide to fix them).

[Ayyffy's Normal]
Check AIMod (Distance snap - on)
00:11:502 (1,2,3) - looks not so good, really, try to avoid structure like this.
00:27:765 - you can put here a tap, cause you did that before 00:27:133 (2) - here.
00:37:870 - ^
I can't properly say about fixes on this diff, because it looks more like advanced, not normal due to SV and some patterns. Think about renaming of this diff.

[Hard]
If you tried to do with DS, so check AIMod too.
00:31:081 (4,5) - meh, looks bad, because they are so near.

[Insane]
00:08:975 (1) - it's already insane, so better to not miss loud sounds like this.
00:12:449 (4) - ? fix it pls
00:25:870 (3,4,5,1) - yes, i know what you want ot do here, but maybe you'll do more spacing then?
00:49:397 (1) - fix shape of slider.
01:17:186 (1,2) - bad flow.
01:21:923 (5) - no need in that.
01:25:081 (2,3,4,5,6) - square-type flow is causing some problems to players, so you can try to improve jumps here.
01:30:923 (1,2) - too near.

[Extra]
ctrl+a = almost all objects are on the centr of the map. That's not so good at all.
00:30:923 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - overmapping. There is no stream here.
00:33:765 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
00:56:818 (7,1) - bad flow.
01:21:923 (5,6,7,8) - ^^
01:26:344 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i can't find the reason you increased spacing here. No need. Just no sound.

Good luck!

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-22T23:05:11+00:00

will check after school

Noffy

Nomination Assessment Team

1,659 posts

Joined April 2012

Noffy 2017-01-22T23:33:27+00:00

Remus wrote:
First of all, check AIMod and fix tags problems. eek fixed

[Ayyffy's Normal]
Check AIMod (Distance snap - on) double-checked again but the two points it reported were actually fine so uh
00:11:502 (1,2,3) - looks not so good, really, try to avoid structure like this. errr.. I think it looks fine?
00:27:765 - you can put here a tap, cause you did that before 00:27:133 (2) - here. I don't think those red ticks are as strong as the example ones that were mapped, and putting a circle on both would result in a really crowded and difficult pattern.
00:37:870 - ^
I can't properly say about fixes on this diff, because it looks more like advanced, not normal due to SV and some patterns. Think about renaming of this diff. It's definitely not an easier normal but spread wise it's fine o,o there isn't really a reason to call it advanced when it isn't made to be between a normal and a hard.

Neanmoins wrote:
Normal
01:29:028 (5,6,7) - i think this part can move to 01:28:870 - to follow the song (and maybe you need to do some change to keep the ds)

Chibi Maruko wrote:
Neanmoins wrote:
00:01:397 - green line should use same volume setting with red line i think all diffs already made it except ayyri and noffy's diff. It's depend to them. our diff doesn't have this green line as we're not using any slider velocity multipliers so this isn't an issue in our diff yay

code

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68447
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 1342,46815,94815
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Zen Zen Zense
TitleUnicode:前前前世
Artist:Soraru x mafumafu
ArtistUnicode:そらる x まふまふ
Creator:Chibi Maruko
Version:Ayyffy's Normal
Source:君の名は。
Tags:taki mitsuha your name movie cut ver Noffy Ayyri
BeatmapID:1179373
BeatmapSetID:547946

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Chibi Maruko

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Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-23T11:21:00+00:00

Remus wrote:
Hello. hello!

First of all, check AIMod and fix tags problems. ikr, ayyffi's diff, right?

[Easy]
00:10:239 (2) - bad aesthetics, you can improve that slider. so many complain about this. i just became to noob making long slider :c
01:09:607 (1,2) - will be hard for players to read this moment. ikr but i just copy battle from monstrata's map bcs there's no opportunity to make another flow. So, no fix
01:14:660 (1,2) - ^. (newbies like the stable rhytm, without moments like these) same comment as above
You got, what i wanted to say(check again all moments like these, maybe you decide to fix them). will check after i done for stuff.

[Hard]
If you tried to do with DS, so check AIMod too. no warning about ds.
00:31:081 (4,5) - meh, looks bad, because they are so near. so, what am i suppose to do. idk just need to increase spacing or idk.

[Insane]
00:08:975 (1) - it's already insane, so better to not miss loud sounds like this. you just saying about this except the other part. It same like this.
00:12:449 (4) - ? fix it pls nope, it's fine imo
00:25:870 (3,4,5,1) - yes, i know what you want ot do here, but maybe you'll do more spacing then? no, i want to keep these
00:49:397 (1) - fix shape of slider. fixed
01:17:186 (1,2) - bad flow. will fix another way. just need to thinking
01:21:923 (5) - no need in that. no, should added it bcs stream here instead extra diffs has no
01:25:081 (2,3,4,5,6) - square-type flow is causing some problems to players, so you can try to improve jumps here. yeah, i think it's looked bad flows :p . Fixed
01:30:923 (1,2) - too near. slow part are need to slow flow. no fix

[Extra]
ctrl+a = almost all objects are on the centr of the map. That's not so good at all.
00:30:923 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - overmapping. There is no stream here. why are so many complain about this. ikr you said it's no sound stream but possibly some of ppl can hear stream it. don't be confusing ^^. Just need to upgrade the ears.
00:33:765 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ same comment as above
00:56:818 (7,1) - bad flow. fixed ctrl + j
01:21:923 (5,6,7,8) - ^^ can't change these streams bcs too hard... and lazy. no fix
01:26:344 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i can't find the reason you increased spacing here. No need. Just no sound. first, i must need to increased those jumps bcs wanted to this diff more higher than all diffs. second, why no need sound here. idk what are you said

Good luck!

thanks for mod!
updated Ayyffy's diff

Namki

1,281 posts

Joined November 2014

Namki 2017-01-23T20:45:00+00:00

Just a reminder that you must follow Code of Conduct, which says you must be friendly and reply to the mods properly without any kind of misbehaviour and insulting. Thanks.

Edit: according to Mafumafu's official nicovideo account, it should be "Mafumafu"
Proof.

Cirno no Baka

130 posts

Joined May 2016

Cirno no Baka 2017-01-24T04:22:15+00:00

From q

[Metadata]

Add tags

そらる×まふまふそらまふ Cover RADWIMPS
web--> http://www.sunefansub.com/2016/09/zen-z ... letra.html
video more--> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2RQ9hXa6rjU

[Extra]

00:01:397 (1,2) - blanket
00:21:607 (1,2) - ^
00:26:818 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
00:27:923 (1,3) - ^
00:28:397 (4,5) - ^
00:39:765 (2) - Add whistle here

[Insane]

00:25:870 (3) - not have a sound why mapping?
00:52:397 (2,4) - Ctrl + G ?

01:09:923 (2,3) - Semi blanket

[Hard]

00:08:344 (3,4,5) - consistency with 00:05:502 (2,3) -

Great diff

[Easy]

00:16:554 (1,2) - please mirror, and used for make a perfect blanket in 00:17:186 (2,3) -

GL !

Ohwow

1,193 posts

Joined July 2013

Ohwow 2017-01-24T06:14:10+00:00

Sup, from my roastin queue
[Extra]
First impressions: I feel like you overused flow breaks, it makes them less emphasizing. I don't know if that's what you're going for in this difficulty, but the map should flow better imo.
00:03:291 (3) - ctrl+g for better flow?
00:15:607 (2) - ^
00:22:870 (1,2) - Flow better?

suggestion

00:39:923 (3,4) - similar ^
00:21:607 (1,2) - blanket like this?

blanket

00:24:607 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Ehh, doesn't really flow.
00:31:554 (11,12) - instead of these 2 notes, maybe a 1/4 slider?
00:33:765 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - inconsistent spacing. If you're going for the gradual increased spacing, at least the spacing between 00:34:160 (10,1) - should be the largest of the rest. But imo i think the spacing should be consistent to make it look cleaner.
00:33:844 (6) - delete circle? I think the little percussion stream starts at the white tick, not at the red tick.
00:35:264 (5) - ^ similar, the percussion starts at the red tick.
00:49:397 (1) - flip vertically? (flow better)
01:02:028 (1) - ^
01:04:554 (1) - ^
01:08:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - fancier stream?

better stream?

https://i.gyazo.com/a63efabf89452e0d23e985a2b850e6a2.jpg

01:19:239 (5,6,7) - ctrl+G
01:34:397 (2) - Make this into a 1/1 slider?

Yah flow was a bit lacking, lots of sharp movements.

Sorry for short mod, good luck with your map!

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-24T08:21:36+00:00

namki

Namki wrote:
Just a reminder that you must follow Code of Conduct, which says you must be friendly and reply to the mods properly without any kind of misbehaviour and insulting. Thanks.

Edit: according to Mafumafu's official nicovideo account, it should be "Mafumafu" Yeah, i didn't too much know about japanese metadata. Changed!
Proof.

sakurasaki

-Sakurasaki wrote:
From q

[Metadata]

Add tags そらる×まふまふそらまふ Cover RADWIMPS the vocals were already added in text but someone has told me to remove the vocals in tags. Added cover RADWIMPS
web--> http://www.sunefansub.com/2016/09/zen-z ... letra.html
video more--> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2RQ9hXa6rjU

[Extra]
00:01:397 (1,2) - blanket nope, many complain about this but i won't do it for a some reason
00:21:607 (1,2) - ^ no
00:26:818 (2,3) - Ctrl+G looks huge jumps :3, changed
00:27:923 (1,3) - ^ more increase jump i think, no fix
00:28:397 (4,5) - ^ same flow :p, but ok, fixed
00:39:765 (2) - Add whistle here no hitsound here lol, no add

[Insane]
00:25:870 (3) - not have a sound why mapping? players need to rest and rdy for 1/2 jumps. So, i need to not mapping the rhythm and follow a vocals.
00:52:397 (2,4) - Ctrl + G ? fixed
01:09:923 (2,3) - Semi blanket ikr but i wants to keep this bcs it's cool

[Hard]
00:08:344 (3,4,5) - consistency with 00:05:502 (2,3) - no, just need to follow the aechetics.

Great diff thanks, hard is always use ds :3

[Easy]

[box=]00:16:554 (1,2) - please mirror, and used for make a perfect blanket in 00:17:186 (2,3) - fixed, move a slider (1)

GL !

ohwow

Ohwow wrote:
Sup, from my roastin queue hai, dud
[Extra]
First impressions: I feel like you overused flow breaks, it makes them less emphasizing. I don't know if that's what you're going for in this difficulty, but the map should flow better imo.
00:03:291 (3) - ctrl+g for better flow? no, it would be not balance
00:15:607 (2) - ^ same as above comment
00:22:870 (1,2) - Flow better? i can't change this bcs need to keep the pattern on 00:23:502 (3,4,5,6) -

00:39:923 (3,4) - similar ^ no again
00:21:607 (1,2) - blanket like this? no, just need to keep these style. Otherwise, it not follow and not similar

00:24:607 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Ehh, doesn't really flow. you looked it's bad flow, but the players playing this part are fine to fc this. no fix
00:31:554 (11,12) - instead of these 2 notes, maybe a 1/4 slider? would be not good emphasize xd
00:33:765 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - inconsistent spacing. If you're going for the gradual increased spacing, at least the spacing between 00:34:160 (10,1) - should be the largest of the rest. But imo i think the spacing should be consistent to make it look cleaner. fixed bcs over 10 modders had complained about this.
00:33:844 (6) - delete circle? I think the little percussion stream starts at the white tick, not at the red tick. won't do it after you said above comment
00:35:264 (5) - ^ similar, the percussion starts at the red tick. i can hear 1/4 streams white tick to big white tick bcs the sound are pretty soft.
00:49:397 (1) - flip vertically? (flow better) fixed ctrl + j
01:02:028 (1) - ^ i think i don't have idea to change this slider, but it's look fine
01:04:554 (1) - ^ fixed ctrl + j
01:08:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - fancier stream? but almost to be triangle stream. but these are same too that i don't have idea to make flow stream but your idea kinda low fun.
https://i.gyazo.com/a63efabf89452e0d23e ... 50e6a2.jpg
01:19:239 (5,6,7) - ctrl+G more big jump, more pp that's not great :p. fixed
01:34:397 (2) - Make this into a 1/1 slider? no

Yah flow was a bit lacking, lots of sharp movements.

Sorry for short mod, good luck with your map!

thanks for mod, guys!
you're awesome
updated ayyffy's diff

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-01-26T05:32:17+00:00

Q

[Insane]
00:11:660 - I think you should add a beat in here
00:14:186 - ^
00:16:239 (6) - end at 00:16:397 -
00:26:028 (4,5,1) - really weird antijump, this map part doesn't match with antijump, I think.
00:29:818 (3,4) - avoid overlap since your map's concept is not overlap[
00:36:133 (3,4,1) -

[Extra]
00:09:054 - add a beat
00:32:660 (4) - ctrl G? flow could be better
00:56:028 (1) - unnecessary NC

GL

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