siwu320 wrote:

Hello~ from my queue~

[Hard]

1. 00:25:818 (1) - 00:26:618 (3) - Consider adding 2 notes between those two sliders with 1/6 division to fit with rhythm? I think this won't change the overall difficulty at all and make this part more playable for dt players. Also the same for 00:29:018 (1) - 00:29:818 (3) - as well. no these are already fit with rhythm if you listen carefully
2. 02:17:818 (1,2,3) - Why not try to add SV slightly at this part? Since the lyrics go with "oh oh~" You may try to emphasize it. You can refer to Natsu's map Girls' Generation - Gee. In the hardest diff, SV turns from 1.1x to 1.8x when thee song goes to "no no no no no" and this makes the whole map much interesting. i prefer this and be consistent with SV 1.5 all of this diff, so nothing changed
3. 02:37:018 (1) - Suggest make this spinner shorter and add few notes; (But that actually doesn't matter much lol) loll okayy still the same

Also, consider compress the video size to within 24MB? Too big~ video size is 21 MB, looks fine

Good map and this looks very cool!

PyroBear wrote:

[Advanced]

1. 00:23:418 (3,4) - make them the same sliders as 00:22:618 (1,2) looks fine nothing to fix. can you explain more ?
2. 00:38:618 (1) - Too short recovery time according to ranking criteria naa that's enough
3. 01:12:218 (5) - Make it the same slider as 01:11:418 (3) loll that was bad idea since i made these to be a triangle 01:11:418 (3,4,5) -
4. 01:33:018 (1) - Spinner recovery too short. reason same as 00:38:618 (1)
5. 02:09:818 (1) - ^ ^^
6. 02:25:618 (1) - ^ ^^
7. 02:37:018 (1) - ^ ^^

My 20 mins are over.

Juiceys wrote:

Just a small blanket mod

Normal:
02:50:218 (2,3) - Blanket is off it's not necessary just a bit
00:21:018 (3,4) - ^ Move 4 a bit to the right looks fine
02:41:018 (1,2) - ^ Lower the right side of 2 fine~

Advanced:
01:24:218 (3,5) - move the tail of 5 a bit to the right still the same

Hard: Now we talk about emphasis uhuhuhuhu
00:14:618 (1) - This note has a strong beat and is a downbeat and I feel like a stack doesnt emphasize the beat right I think it could be emphasized using a small jump and maybe a flow break i prefer this sorry t_t
00:17:818 (1) - ^ ^^
00:21:018 (1) - ^ ^^
00:40:218 (1) - Here for sure as it marks the start of the kiai and a change in intensity still the same
00:59:418 (1) - ^ still the same
01:04:618 (2,3) - Lower the tail of 3 to blanket better fixed

Thank you guys and happy new year

Strategas wrote:

[hard]

02:46:418 (4) - maybe you don't want to overlap here, because it's nearing the end and you didn't use overlaps like this before might be lead to annoying combo breaks fixed

[advanced]

00:35:418 (1,2,3) - this overlap doesn't look that nice tbh imo is very pretty shape and flowing, so still the same
01:01:018 (5,6,7) - same reason same as above

01:41:818 (3,5) - can you um... make them not touch? here i did it on propose, as you can see many sliders previous i always made it touch, also this is my style

01:43:218 (6,7) - blanket off fixed

01:48:018 (2,3) - flow is pretty poor here, better if you ctrl+h 01:48:218 (3) - slider http://i.imgur.com/p8NCcEm.png good point, fixed

can call me when ready

Strategas wrote:

whatta man, whatta man, whatta man, *something in korean* , good man.

whose the man tho, I only see women

arnoldusj wrote:

but who the man in mv, so curious?

Lapis Aoki wrote:

My sis and I think that it's someone from Boys24, but we don't even know who. xP

Also, grats on getting bubbled and good luck on getting it ranked soon. ^^

Regraz wrote:

M4M from queue.

[Normal]
I think you need to re-arrange the spacing to avoid such slightly overlaps: 00:21:818 (4,5) - . Make them overlap more: https://puu.sh/tm3oP/2ca934ae2f.png You need to adjust the spacing of all hit objects! fixed some points.
01:51:818 (3,5) - I think such overlaps ought not to appear in low difficulties. fixed.

[Advanced]
00:35:418 (1,2,3) - This layout should be improved. As you could see, the sldieredge of 1 overlaps with 2, which looks really sad. fixed. https://puu.sh/tm3Fa/f384805487.png
01:01:018 (5,6) - Same. Please avoid this overlap. fixed.
01:41:818 (3,5) - Please avoid this overlap. Like a previous BN said, here i did it on purpose, as you can see many sliders previous i always made it touch, also this is my style.

[Hard]
02:15:018 (2,3) - Please avoid this slight overlap. The reason same as a previous BN said, here i did it on purpose, as you can see many sliders previous i always made it touch, also this is my style.


Call me back.

Regraz wrote:

I should point out that naver could not be regarded as a source of metadata, since it is like a music retailer like Apple Music.
You need to find an official source.

Regraz wrote:

OK rebubbled since Metadata has been changed, You could call previous BN for nomination!

Feerum wrote:

Yep, missed the 24h waiting time after bubble.

Please wait 8 more hours before qualify this beatmap again
Reverted to bubble

Strategas wrote:

#4

Nuolong wrote:

woo congrats!!

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Grats on getting it ranked without getting it dq.