Chata - Precious Wing (Movie ver) · forum

Log Off Now

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-01-07T18:56:14+00:00

Xexxar wrote:

smh

[General]
Based on the video used having MoeNovel in the background, I believe the source should be If My Heart Had Wings since either is official metadata. If My Heart Had Wings is MoeNovel's localization of the game and I believe if thats the BG video you're going to use you might as well use that as your source. will double check, i thought japanese source > english source was always the case but i think both are fine.

[Taking Flight]
00:13:125 (1) - slider has a bit of an ugly angle, might want ot bring up the head more. yup
00:18:562 (5,6,7) - move 6-7 up a bit more so it doesnt look so tight? yup
00:37:125 (1) - same here with slider angles yup
00:46:687 (4,7) - angle could be more vertical yup

[Easy]
ya fixed missing hitsounds

Thanks for the mod!

_Meep_

1,707 posts

Joined April 2014

_Meep_ 2017-01-07T19:49:37+00:00

Xexxar wrote:
[Meep's Hard]
Hi mentee!
00:07:125 (1,2) - i would avoid the overlap here from the slider bodies, it doesnt really look balanced and looks kind of ugly. I don't see a reason to delete this because I've done this many other times in this difficulty,and it's simply aesthetics and looks ok to me XD
00:19:500 (2) - i think you should either give this slider curve or make it more vertical Fixed
00:34:687 (7) - make this a normal curved slider Fixed
01:16:125 (1) - no and 01:19:125 (1) - no. This is less dense than the normal difficulty. You can use a long slider for the beginning of her voice, but it doesnt need to be this long, it feels awkward and out of place with the rest of the difficulty. pls Fixed
01:34:687 (1,1,1) - overlapping here makes this difficult to read for new players i believe, consider changing this pattern Fixed

[/quote]
thanks erogevick225

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2017-01-07T20:58:34+00:00

all fixed tank u

graves op

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Source:この大空に、翼をひろげて
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Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-01-07T21:08:57+00:00

Updated, just waiting for mochi's update now

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2017-01-08T00:52:30+00:00

Xexxar wrote:
[Mochi's Insane]
Your diff currently has Kiai Inconsistencies with the others, I would talk to Log Off Now and decide what you want to do for consistency. gd is fine with different kiai, i want to keep it
00:07:125 (1,2) - this pattern is a bit ugly, maybe do something like htis? http://puu.sh/ter7u/deaa297de8.jpg nope, this one was did on purpose 00:07:125 (1,2,1) - pattern
00:41:625 (3,4) - you might want to have a bit more overlap to avoid misreading
01:06:937 (5) - ya i rly dont recommend this, control g with 5 and 6. or something and adjust pattern
01:08:250 (3,5) - visual overlap can be avoided.
01:36:750 (4) - final beat should be clickable instead of a slider end prefer to keep it as 2 symmetrical slider

others fixed thanks
ageha's route is bad tbh lol, asa is my fav

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Source:この大空に、翼をひろげて
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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2017-01-08T16:25:29+00:00

hitsounding
(all based on highest diff)
you really should add some more soft whistles as right now your hitsounding feels pretty empty
you could for example add to 00:05:250 (1,2,1) - sliderheads, 00:07:500 (4) - etc to follow the guitar for this part
things like 00:17:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - are nice hitsounding wise
or take a look at how mochi utilized whistles

flight
somehow the quality of this bg seems way worse than others, see if you can do sth about that
00:13:125 (1) - could change shape a bit to get more distance to it and have it feel more emphasized cause it's a pretty strong beat http://i.imgur.com/cdBf4zA.jpg might also want to stack 00:13:500 (2) - 00:12:375 (5) - cause that seems cleaner and makes the overlap on 00:13:500 (2,4) - look nicer
00:53:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - sv change could be a bit stronger here considering how much the song intensity goes up, why not ~1.2x?
00:57:750 (5) - might be nice to have a little change in the stream here cause of that sound and all, how about nc and a little spacing incease? http://i.imgur.com/poHVgGs.jpg
01:08:062 (1) - seems a bit weird to have the nc on here, if you wanted to match the change in sounds and rhythm it should be http://i.imgur.com/UZ40jYQ.jpg though I think not having it at all here would be fine too
01:08:625 (2) - could be deleted or a sliderend to start the new taping rhythm on 01:08:812 - to fit the melody

for future maps: you could try making more use of sv changes based on sections, like 00:06:042 - and 00:20:625 - are quite different musically, but you still mapped them in way that makes them feel really similar

mochi
00:57:750 (1) - looks so forced between all these circles. think you could rearrange things a little here to make this neater as it seems so strange seeing how clean other things are
01:09:750 (4) - how about sv change here as the sound stands out so much? you did it 01:24:750 (3) - which is pretty similar
yeah having different kiai settings is fine for a GD, but do you really want to have it on the ending spinner lol ending kiai on 01:36:937 - would be nicer I think

meep
00:25:687 (6,7,8,9) - one of the hardest jump patterns on the whole map in one of the calmest parts of the song? please don't, especially considering how weak beats are here
also so many 1/1 gaps seem strange for 00:26:250 (9,1,2) - as the music doens't really change from 00:25:687 (6,7,8,9) -
00:28:687 (6,7,8,9,1) - would look create if you used the rotate tool here to make triangles or something http://i.imgur.com/2Xdy5zs.jpg
00:33:750 (4) - random single vocal 3/4 slider you never use anywhere else and piano is pretty strong on the red tick. would just make this 1/2 tbh
00:48:187 (2,3,4,5,6) - should consider what stacking does to this and move things a bit so you don't get http://i.imgur.com/WusbW7q.jpg
01:04:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - basically just a single circular movement for so long, could be way more interesting also stack on 01:06:937 (7,1) - seems really unfitting emphasis wise

hb
00:05:250 (1) - why not make this a 1/2 slider? would fit the song much better
01:17:625 (2) - yes it follow the song fine, but together with the ones before and after + vocal starting on the middle it feels to undermapped here. how about something like http://i.imgur.com/YhO0dPG.jpg ?

easy
01:34:125 (1,1,1,1) - don't think you have to nc spam this

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set seems alright, feel free to poke me after bubble

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2017-01-08T17:03:17+00:00

Lasse wrote:
hb
00:05:250 (1) - why not make this a 1/2 slider? would fit the song much better // i want the big down beat to be clickable, seems more logic to me
01:17:625 (2) - yes it follow the song fine, but together with the ones before and after + vocal starting on the middle it feels to undermapped here. how about something like http://i.imgur.com/YhO0dPG.jpg ? //changed on my way hope its better

set seems alright, feel free to poke me after bubble

1gb wallpaper ftw

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Log Off Now

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Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-01-08T17:08:26+00:00

Lasse wrote:
hitsounding
(all based on highest diff)
you really should add some more soft whistles as right now your hitsounding feels pretty empty
you could for example add to 00:05:250 (1,2,1) - sliderheads, 00:07:500 (4) - etc to follow the guitar for this part
things like 00:17:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - are nice hitsounding wise
or take a look at how mochi utilized whistles

i did some more hitsounding following the guitar at the start and towards the end, i've left the middle section as is since i dont want to overload this simple section of basically just drums + vocals with whistles, and i feel having less is more for that part of the map.

flight
somehow the quality of this bg seems way worse than others, see if you can do sth about that ill see what i can do but idk if i can find a better one since this is downscaled from 1080
00:13:125 (1) - could change shape a bit to get more distance to it and have it feel more emphasized cause it's a pretty strong beat http://i.imgur.com/cdBf4zA.jpg might also want to stack 00:13:500 (2) - 00:12:375 (5) - cause that seems cleaner and makes the overlap on 00:13:500 (2,4) - look nicer yes and yes
00:53:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - sv change could be a bit stronger here considering how much the song intensity goes up, why not ~1.2x? good idea
00:57:750 (5) - might be nice to have a little change in the stream here cause of that sound and all, how about nc and a little spacing incease? http://i.imgur.com/poHVgGs.jpg nc yes, im not sure about increasing the spacing since if i do it just a little it looks a bit harder to notice
01:08:062 (1) - seems a bit weird to have the nc on here, if you wanted to match the change in sounds and rhythm it should be http://i.imgur.com/UZ40jYQ.jpg though I think not having it at all here would be fine too followed your suggestion
01:08:625 (2) - could be deleted or a sliderend to start the new taping rhythm on 01:08:812 - to fit the melody i understand but i really like how the cross pattern fits the violins pitch movements and i think each note on the violin is worth playing

for future maps: you could try making more use of sv changes based on sections, like 00:06:042 - and 00:20:625 - are quite different musically, but you still mapped them in way that makes them feel really similar thanks for the tip ^^ i didn't really think too much about sv in this since the song is pretty calm in general, so i only changed it when there was a drastic change

easy
01:34:125 (1,1,1,1) - don't think you have to nc spam this this is nc spammed because its a totally different rhythm to the entirety of the map and uses 1/2, so to make it super obvious i nc'd each one

[]
set seems alright, feel free to poke me after bubble

Thanks for the mod!

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2017-01-08T23:52:16+00:00

Fixed except the kiai stuff, i want the last spinner to have the flashy effect that's only available when the kiai is active. so yeah

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_Meep_

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_Meep_ 2017-01-09T09:35:40+00:00

Lasse wrote:
hitsounding
(all based on highest diff)

meep
00:25:687 (6,7,8,9) - one of the hardest jump patterns on the whole map in one of the calmest parts of the song? please don't, especially considering how weak beats are here Fixed
also so many 1/1 gaps seem strange for 00:26:250 (9,1,2) - as the music doens't really change from 00:25:687 (6,7,8,9) - Kinda mapped to how I wanted the map/song to be potrayed
00:28:687 (6,7,8,9,1) - would look create if you used the rotate tool here to make triangles or something http://i.imgur.com/2Xdy5zs.jpg Fixed
00:33:750 (4) - random single vocal 3/4 slider you never use anywhere else and piano is pretty strong on the red tick. would just make this 1/2 tbh Wanted to add some variety + vocals call for it
00:48:187 (2,3,4,5,6) - should consider what stacking does to this and move things a bit so you don't get http://i.imgur.com/WusbW7q.jpg Fixed i think
01:04:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - basically just a single circular movement for so long, could be way more interesting also stack on 01:06:937 (7,1) - seems really unfitting emphasis wise I mean,its a very smooth flow,then suddenly at 01:07:125 (1,2,3,4) - the flow totally stops,thats where the emphasis comes in,thats why Im choosing to keep this. I feel that the current stack fits my style and I don't see a reason to change it imo

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set seems alright, feel free to poke me after bubble

thanks ;o

http://puu.sh/tgiyP/cb013dd17c.osu

rehitsound cuz i forgot if i changed hitsounds myself or not

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Log Off Now 2017-01-10T10:35:36+00:00

Xexxar wrote:
[General]
Based on the video used having MoeNovel in the background, I believe the source should be If My Heart Had Wings since either is official metadata. If My Heart Had Wings is MoeNovel's localization of the game and I believe if thats the BG video you're going to use you might as well use that as your source.

Update on this, I've PM'd KwaN and both sources are ok to use, so I'm just going to stick with the original JP source.

I Must Decrease

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I Must Decrease 2017-01-10T19:03:40+00:00

mweow

tfw best girl isnt in this picture

ErunamoJAZZ

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ErunamoJAZZ 2017-01-10T19:08:24+00:00

yey!, gogoogogo!

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Log Off Now 2017-01-10T19:09:09+00:00

first ever bubble

thank you!

Starset

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Starset 2017-01-10T19:32:05+00:00

delete my diff thanks

I Must Decrease

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I Must Decrease 2017-01-10T20:30:33+00:00

upon further inspection i noticed that the ending of Mochi's Diff still suffers from problems.

01:34:125 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - the stacking during this part is ugly and I feel could be alot better. I recommend atleast not directly stacking the objects underneath slider ends to promote easier reading. The structure could also be improved to showcase how this the same sound being repeated, rather than arbitrary angles of sliders design.

01:36:750 (4) - Please make this two circles and not a slider.

Momochikun

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Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2017-01-11T04:49:00+00:00

u better check replies before bubbling
well if its still insisted

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Artist:Chata
ArtistUnicode:茶太
Creator:Log Off Now
Version:Mochi's Insane
Source:この大空に、翼をひろげて
Tags:if my heart had wings Kono Oozora Ni Tsubasa Wo Hirogete moenovel pulltop eroge visual novel short version _meep_ hb24 momochikun
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I Must Decrease

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Xexxar wrote:

no oppai no waifu

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Xexxar wrote:

best topic to talk about in that situation

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Vivyanne 2017-01-12T16:41:58+00:00

woow congrats!

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gratz, now delete my diff

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Misure 2017-01-12T17:31:53+00:00

wow such an old song, love it <3
gratz!

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thanks guys

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Okoratu 2017-01-12T18:26:53+00:00

@_Meep_ is

supposed to be some sort of pattern or something, given that the rest of the diff looks pretty ok this looks like a mistake

Lasse

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Lasse 2017-01-12T18:59:32+00:00

lol
I thought that got fixed with my mod and apparently I missed it while rechecking

_Meep_ wrote:
Lasse wrote:
meep

00:48:187 (2,3,4,5,6) - should consider what stacking does to this and move things a bit so you don't get http://i.imgur.com/WusbW7q.jpg Fixed i think
thanks ;o

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WHAT THE HELL IS THIS MEEP

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zhuxiaoyan 2017-01-12T21:02:16+00:00

good map

zhuxiaoyan

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just kidding DQ PLEASE

I Must Decrease

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lmao rip

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well then

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oreru

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Frostwich wrote:
oreru

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Frostwich wrote:
good map

Okoratu

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Okoratu 2017-01-12T22:46:28+00:00

lol taking this down as requested

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Okorin wrote:
lol taking this down as requested

Fixed the whatever happened to the stack thing in meeps diff

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Okoratu 2017-01-12T23:49:26+00:00

[mochi]
00:17:625 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this is a kind of weird representation of what's happening, the melody is strongest and you follow like half of it, i think a rhythm like http://i.imgur.com/gLFF9TK.png would represent the song way better
00:21:187 (2,3,4) - 00:27:187 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:33:187 (2,3,4) - 00:39:187 (2,3,4,5) - fundamentally all of these sections are the same thing and you do the same thing twice and different things 3 times in them and i just don't see how / why you'd need 3 differently intense variations to represent the same thing, especially the most intense one being in the second spot seems weird.

would either make 00:39:187 (2,3,4,5) - have more circles or 00:27:187 (2,3,4,5,6) - less

[hb]
00:18:187 (3,4) - switching from melody to whatever is on 4 is kinda weird, would see if http://i.imgur.com/ySyYD49.png or http://i.imgur.com/fB1UcZJ.png work better for rhythm here
01:17:625 (2) - having one of these vocals be passive is kinda odd (the one on the sliderend) considering how you did the rest i think that should have a circle
01:22:687 (2,3) - these look like they're supposed to be symmetrical but aren't

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Made easy diff less object heavy and changed a couple of patterns in top diff (from IRC w/ Okorin) (i lost the log

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Xexxar wrote:

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Lasse wrote:

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_Meep_ wrote:

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