Chata - Precious Wing (Movie ver) · forum

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-12-18T07:32:33+00:00

i love chata

[Easy]

00:05:625 (1) - i dont think that nc is really necessary
sv is too high for my taste

[HB's Normal]

00:05:625 (1) - same as easy
00:21:375 (2) - tail might be offscreen. not sure tho
01:24:375 - maybe add a 1/2 slider

[Meep's Hard]

cute bg
00:05:625 (1) - 00:10:875 (1) - remove nc zz
01:04:418 - 01:04:606 - unsnapped greenlines. they arent changing anything tho so better remove them
overall spacing too large for my taste. 1.2 would've been cool

cool mapset. i love mochi's diff w

gl

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2016-12-18T11:45:38+00:00

powder

osu file format v14

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Title:Precious Wing (Movie ver)
TitleUnicode:Precious Wing (Movie ver)
Artist:Chata
ArtistUnicode:茶太
Creator:Log Off Now
Version:HB's Normal
Source:この大空に、翼をひろげて
Tags:if my heart had wings Kono Oozora Ni Tsubasa Wo Hirogete moenovel pulltop eroge visual novel short version _meep_ hb24 momochikun
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Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2016-12-18T18:13:08+00:00

pkhg wrote:
i love chata

[Easy]
00:05:625 (1) - i dont think that nc is really necessary its there since it's the start of the actual bar, the first combo is an anacrusis so the 2nd nc is to set the consistency
sv is too high for my taste ee i think its ok
cool mapset. i love mochi's diff w

gl

Thanks for the mod!

micchi_chi

764 posts

Joined July 2013

micchi_chi 2016-12-20T09:59:31+00:00

Hey, pretty late mod from my modding Q
I didn't feel like doing anything recently...
Let's see if I'll be able to mod properly...

Red : unrankable (or might be unrankable) issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[Easy]

SPOILER

00:05:625 (1,2) - Nazi, lol. Blanket properly
00:13:875 (4) - Little tip. If you have sliders that change direction like this 00:13:125 (3,4) - don't put the second slider right after the tail of the first slider, the flow would be pointy http://puu.sh/sVl5B/b8f4aa765a.jpg . Instead, try to make use of slider leniency and put it slightly to the way the second slider facing which is the left in this case, that way, it would flow slightly better that way http://puu.sh/sVl8t/d9fd0e2403.jpg . tl;dr, Move (4) slightly to the left for better flow. This is my personal technique, you may use it if you want, but feel free to ignore.
00:42:750 (3) - I'm kinda concerned because the sound is actually bigger here 00:42:937 than here 00:42:750 so I thought it should be at least covered. But I'm not sure how to... Maybe you could try something like this http://puu.sh/sVljJ/6fcca1bf37.jpg I don't know tho, feel equally weird tbh, lol.
00:47:625 (1,2) - Maybe copy this rhythm 00:46:125 (2) - one more time since the vocal rhythm is still similar as the previous? I mean there's a vocal sound here too 00:48:187 Just trying it won't hurt
00:53:625 (3,1) - I think it's actually fine if you add reverse to (3) and move the spinner 1/2 beat behind. I mean the concern is the break after spinner that must be min 4 beats. I don't know if there any rules about beats before spinner tho. But maybe you better consult it to someone more experienced.
01:07:125 (1,2,3) - I think you'll need a little remake at this part. The sliders don't emphasize the big sound correctly... Try something like this http://puu.sh/sVluY/8e26b8f0e2.jpg or something so. Just make sure the sounds here 01:08:062 01:08:437 are covered.
01:17:625 (3,4) - I think you better make some change in the rhythm here because of the vocal change. Doing something like this 01:20:625 (3,4) - would be pretty nice tho. It keeps thing simple yet indicate a little change.
01:22:125 (1,2) - This part too, similar to the other part, the big sound is not emphasized correctly. Try something like this http://puu.sh/sVlDy/196639be2f.jpg should fit much better.
General thing actually. Maybe you could consider ending the kiai here 01:25:125 because it's the end of the chorus' vocal. The part after that is more like outro.
Small stuffs actually, the rest are pretty nice and solid

[Meep's Hard]

SPOILER

00:06:375 (4,1) - They are somehow almost touching and it bugs me a lot, lol. Try to move (4) a little bit downward because (6) is just at perfect position.
00:42:562 (4) - Maybe you could change this into two circles because the big sound with cymbal is here 00:42:750 and currently it's only emphasized with slider tail... Or maybe if you want to limit the number of notes, you can simply ctrl+g these 00:42:375 (3,4) - but I totally prefer the first because the sound here 00:42:562 is not less big.
00:44:156 actually triplets is more audible here...
01:16:125 (1) - Are you sure you want to ignore the BIG sound here 01:17:625 ? I know you're following vocal, but it's like... VERY big.
Seems fine enough

[Taking Flight]

SPOILER

00:10:875 (5) - Don't you want to emphasize this sound with slider? There's no really sound at 00:11:062 tbh and mapping the big sound and small sound the same way like this 00:10:875 (5,6) - kinda ruin the emphasize imo...
01:08:625 (2) - Remove this, similar case as above ^ actually. It's unnecessary and kinda ruin the emphasize.
The rest are pretty much fine

Sorry for bad mod, not really in the mood actually, lol
This map is already good anyway.
Good luck ^^
Have a star~

edit : woah, quick kudos

_Meep_

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Joined April 2014

_Meep_ 2016-12-21T18:01:20+00:00

Osuology wrote:
hi

[Meep's Hard]

00:26:625 (1) - Starting here, you stop putting overlaps like you did, preferably for sake of aesthetics you probably should. Fixed

Also very good diff

Also I think I can tell that you are a male person judging from where you placed a lot of the hitcircles :joking: u god,i can tell ur killua because you made this comment :joking:

OK good luck! Pretty good map I would say, probably about time you get some BNs to take a look.

[Meep's Hard]

01:19:125 (1) - Nice, but at least you make the curve at the top look more tidier Fixed
:::
01:34:125 (1,1,1,1) - I like that you're trying to empress your creativity on this diff, but having 1/2 and 1/1 the same distance might be weird, especially this is a hard level, you can try to align them into a straight line so it indicate the rhythm difference better Will consider~
pkhg wrote:
i love chata

If i were able to pass the BN test, call me back.
pkhg wrote:
i love chata

[Meep's Hard]
1. cute bg
2. 00:05:625 (1) - 00:10:875 (1) - remove nc zz first one will remove,2nd one wont since I'm NCing to dem bell sound things
3. 01:04:418 - 01:04:606 - unsnapped greenlines. they arent changing anything tho so better remove them Fixed
4. overall spacing too large for my taste. 1.2 would've been cool :/ idk whether to change or not,lets see in the future ;x
gl
hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:
Hey, pretty late mod from my modding Q
I didn't feel like doing anything recently...
Let's see if I'll be able to mod properly...

Red : unrankable (or might be unrankable) issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[Meep's Hard]
SPOILER
[notice]
1. 00:06:375 (4,1) - They are somehow almost touching and it bugs me a lot, lol. Try to move (4) a little bit downward because (6) is just at perfect position. they aren't even near each other ;w;
2. 00:42:562 (4) - Maybe you could change this into two circles because the big sound with cymbal is here 00:42:750 and currently it's only emphasized with slider tail... Or maybe if you want to limit the number of notes, you can simply ctrl+g these 00:42:375 (3,4) - but I totally prefer the first because the sound here 00:42:562 is not less big. Fixed
3. 00:44:156 actually triplets is more audible here... I know its there,but the main intensity of the song somewhat 'covers' the triple sound,and its not that audible
4. 01:16:125 (1) - Are you sure you want to ignore the BIG sound here 01:17:625 ? I know you're following vocal, but it's like... VERY big. chata's voice is bae,so im keeping it
5. Seems fine enough

Sorry for bad mod, not really in the mood actually, lol
This map is already good anyway.
Good luck ^^
Have a star~

edit : woah, quick kudosthx 4 ze mods

rehitsound 00:42:375 -

http://puu.sh/sWKpI/ccd017112b.osu

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Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2016-12-22T18:33:52+00:00

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:
Hey, pretty late mod from my modding Q
I didn't feel like doing anything recently...
Let's see if I'll be able to mod properly...

Red : unrankable (or might be unrankable) issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[Easy]
SPOILER
00:05:625 (1,2) - Nazi, lol. Blanket properly ok
00:13:875 (4) - Little tip. If you have sliders that change direction like this 00:13:125 (3,4) - don't put the second slider right after the tail of the first slider, the flow would be pointy http://puu.sh/sVl5B/b8f4aa765a.jpg . Instead, try to make use of slider leniency and put it slightly to the way the second slider facing which is the left in this case, that way, it would flow slightly better that way http://puu.sh/sVl8t/d9fd0e2403.jpg . tl;dr, Move (4) slightly to the left for better flow. This is my personal technique, you may use it if you want, but feel free to ignore. that was where it was meant to be xd, idk how it got there
00:42:750 (3) - I'm kinda concerned because the sound is actually bigger here 00:42:937 than here 00:42:750 so I thought it should be at least covered. But I'm not sure how to... Maybe you could try something like this http://puu.sh/sVljJ/6fcca1bf37.jpg I don't know tho, feel equally weird tbh, lol. i disagree, can you hear the almost gun like sound on the (4)?, thats more important imo
00:47:625 (1,2) - Maybe copy this rhythm 00:46:125 (2) - one more time since the vocal rhythm is still similar as the previous? I mean there's a vocal sound here too 00:48:187 Just trying it won't hurt i think its fine, also if i do this i will either be stuck in the right corner or have poor flow coming into the next section
00:53:625 (3,1) - I think it's actually fine if you add reverse to (3) and move the spinner 1/2 beat behind. I mean the concern is the break after spinner that must be min 4 beats. I don't know if there any rules about beats before spinner tho. But maybe you better consult it to someone more experienced. maybe if more people suggest it, i like the player having to click on the start of the vocal. there is no rule about how soon a spinner can be after a note (1/2 is general consensus for easy diff) but i think making it clickable (even if there is no sound) is more fun for players on this diff
01:07:125 (1,2,3) - I think you'll need a little remake at this part. The sliders don't emphasize the big sound correctly... Try something like this http://puu.sh/sVluY/8e26b8f0e2.jpg or something so. Just make sure the sounds here 01:08:062 01:08:437 are covered. i think having those rhythms there would be really complicated and somewhat unexpected since its in the middle of a chorus, it would emphasise the cymabal/guitar better but at the cost of playability, i think i have a good enough compromise here
01:17:625 (3,4) - I think you better make some change in the rhythm here because of the vocal change. Doing something like this 01:20:625 (3,4) - would be pretty nice tho. It keeps thing simple yet indicate a little change. will consider
01:22:125 (1,2) - This part too, similar to the other part, the big sound is not emphasized correctly. Try something like this http://puu.sh/sVlDy/196639be2f.jpg should fit much better. same as above for the other blue suggestion, i think its too complicated and unexpected. and I think i have a pretty decent emphasis on the notes 01:22:125 (1) - does hit
General thing actually. Maybe you could consider ending the kiai here 01:25:125 because it's the end of the chorus' vocal. The part after that is more like outro. maybe, i kept it on because its a really strong ending
Small stuffs actually, the rest are pretty nice and solid

[Taking Flight]
SPOILER
00:10:875 (5) - Don't you want to emphasize this sound with slider? There's no really sound at 00:11:062 tbh and mapping the big sound and small sound the same way like this 00:10:875 (5,6) - kinda ruin the emphasize imo... i have circle jumps here because there are more crash cymbals in this combo, and guitar keeps rising in pitch and intensity. it would work to have a slider, but i prefer my form of emphasis to yours in this case
01:08:625 (2) - Remove this, similar case as above ^ actually. It's unnecessary and kinda ruin the emphasize. disagree, this emphasises the violins very well with the back and forth movement imo and provides i good build up into the direction change going into the vocals
The rest are pretty much fine

Sorry for bad mod, not really in the mood actually, lol
This map is already good anyway.
Good luck ^^
Have a star~

edit : woah, quick kudos

Thanks for the mod!

I Must Decrease

908 posts

Joined June 2013

I Must Decrease 2017-01-06T23:17:28+00:00

pop quiz guess whos best girl

oh ya the one thats not a route.

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Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-01-06T23:22:29+00:00

Xexxar wrote:
pop quiz guess whos best girl

oh ya the one thats not a route.

kanako unplayable feelsbadman

ty for star!

_Meep_

1,707 posts

Joined April 2014

_Meep_ 2017-01-06T23:24:14+00:00

ageha is best girl fuk off

_Meep_

1,707 posts

Joined April 2014

_Meep_ 2017-01-07T05:44:46+00:00

Xexxar wrote:

pop quiz guess whos best girl

oh ya the one thats not a route.

And I thought u liked lolis? :mindfuck:

I Must Decrease

908 posts

Joined June 2013

I Must Decrease 2017-01-07T18:49:45+00:00

_Meep_ wrote:
Xexxar wrote:

pop quiz guess whos best girl

oh ya the one thats not a route.
And I thought u liked lolis? :mindfuck:

smh

[General]
Based on the video used having MoeNovel in the background, I believe the source should be If My Heart Had Wings since either is official metadata. If My Heart Had Wings is MoeNovel's localization of the game and I believe if thats the BG video you're going to use you might as well use that as your source.

[Taking Flight]
00:13:125 (1) - slider has a bit of an ugly angle, might want ot bring up the head more.
00:18:562 (5,6,7) - move 6-7 up a bit more so it doesnt look so tight?
00:37:125 (1) - same here with slider angles
00:46:687 (4,7) - angle could be more vertical

[Mochi's Insane]
Your diff currently has Kiai Inconsistencies with the others, I would talk to Log Off Now and decide what you want to do for consistency.
00:07:125 (1,2) - this pattern is a bit ugly, maybe do something like htis? http://puu.sh/ter7u/deaa297de8.jpg
00:41:625 (3,4) - you might want to have a bit more overlap to avoid misreading
01:06:937 (5) - ya i rly dont recommend this, control g with 5 and 6. or something and adjust pattern
01:08:250 (3,5) - visual overlap can be avoided.
01:36:750 (4) - final beat should be clickable instead of a slider end

[Meep's Hard]
Hi mentee!
00:07:125 (1,2) - i would avoid the overlap here from the slider bodies, it doesnt really look balanced and looks kind of ugly.
00:19:500 (2) - i think you should either give this slider curve or make it more vertical
00:34:687 (7) - make this a normal curved slider
01:16:125 (1) - no and 01:19:125 (1) - no. This is less dense than the normal difficulty. You can use a long slider for the beginning of her voice, but it doesnt need to be this long, it feels awkward and out of place with the rest of the difficulty. pls
01:34:687 (1,1,1) - overlapping here makes this difficult to read for new players i believe, consider changing this pattern

[HB's Normal]
00:36:375 (2) - kinda awkward slider in my opinion
00:24:375 (2) - and 00:39:375 (2) - should be consistent visually in my opinion
00:45:187 (2,3) - this rhythm feels awkward to me, either vocals or white tick should be clickable in my opinion.

[Easy]
ya

Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-01-07T18:56:14+00:00

Xexxar wrote:

smh

[General]
Based on the video used having MoeNovel in the background, I believe the source should be If My Heart Had Wings since either is official metadata. If My Heart Had Wings is MoeNovel's localization of the game and I believe if thats the BG video you're going to use you might as well use that as your source. will double check, i thought japanese source > english source was always the case but i think both are fine.

[Taking Flight]
00:13:125 (1) - slider has a bit of an ugly angle, might want ot bring up the head more. yup
00:18:562 (5,6,7) - move 6-7 up a bit more so it doesnt look so tight? yup
00:37:125 (1) - same here with slider angles yup
00:46:687 (4,7) - angle could be more vertical yup

[Easy]
ya fixed missing hitsounds

Thanks for the mod!

_Meep_

1,707 posts

Joined April 2014

_Meep_ 2017-01-07T19:49:37+00:00

Xexxar wrote:
[Meep's Hard]
Hi mentee!
00:07:125 (1,2) - i would avoid the overlap here from the slider bodies, it doesnt really look balanced and looks kind of ugly. I don't see a reason to delete this because I've done this many other times in this difficulty,and it's simply aesthetics and looks ok to me XD
00:19:500 (2) - i think you should either give this slider curve or make it more vertical Fixed
00:34:687 (7) - make this a normal curved slider Fixed
01:16:125 (1) - no and 01:19:125 (1) - no. This is less dense than the normal difficulty. You can use a long slider for the beginning of her voice, but it doesnt need to be this long, it feels awkward and out of place with the rest of the difficulty. pls Fixed
01:34:687 (1,1,1) - overlapping here makes this difficult to read for new players i believe, consider changing this pattern Fixed

[/quote]
thanks erogevick225

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2017-01-07T20:58:34+00:00

all fixed tank u

graves op

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56718
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Precious Wing (Movie ver)
TitleUnicode:Precious Wing (Movie ver)
Artist:Chata
ArtistUnicode:茶太
Creator:Log Off Now
Version:HB's Normal
Source:この大空に、翼をひろげて
Tags:if my heart had wings Kono Oozora Ni Tsubasa Wo Hirogete moenovel pulltop eroge visual novel short version _meep_ hb24 momochikun
BeatmapID:1151474
BeatmapSetID:542186

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,0,"preciouswingop.avi"
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Log Off Now

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Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-01-07T21:08:57+00:00

Updated, just waiting for mochi's update now

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2017-01-08T00:52:30+00:00

Xexxar wrote:
[Mochi's Insane]
Your diff currently has Kiai Inconsistencies with the others, I would talk to Log Off Now and decide what you want to do for consistency. gd is fine with different kiai, i want to keep it
00:07:125 (1,2) - this pattern is a bit ugly, maybe do something like htis? http://puu.sh/ter7u/deaa297de8.jpg nope, this one was did on purpose 00:07:125 (1,2,1) - pattern
00:41:625 (3,4) - you might want to have a bit more overlap to avoid misreading
01:06:937 (5) - ya i rly dont recommend this, control g with 5 and 6. or something and adjust pattern
01:08:250 (3,5) - visual overlap can be avoided.
01:36:750 (4) - final beat should be clickable instead of a slider end prefer to keep it as 2 symmetrical slider

others fixed thanks
ageha's route is bad tbh lol, asa is my fav

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Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2017-01-08T16:25:29+00:00

hitsounding
(all based on highest diff)
you really should add some more soft whistles as right now your hitsounding feels pretty empty
you could for example add to 00:05:250 (1,2,1) - sliderheads, 00:07:500 (4) - etc to follow the guitar for this part
things like 00:17:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - are nice hitsounding wise
or take a look at how mochi utilized whistles

flight
somehow the quality of this bg seems way worse than others, see if you can do sth about that
00:13:125 (1) - could change shape a bit to get more distance to it and have it feel more emphasized cause it's a pretty strong beat http://i.imgur.com/cdBf4zA.jpg might also want to stack 00:13:500 (2) - 00:12:375 (5) - cause that seems cleaner and makes the overlap on 00:13:500 (2,4) - look nicer
00:53:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - sv change could be a bit stronger here considering how much the song intensity goes up, why not ~1.2x?
00:57:750 (5) - might be nice to have a little change in the stream here cause of that sound and all, how about nc and a little spacing incease? http://i.imgur.com/poHVgGs.jpg
01:08:062 (1) - seems a bit weird to have the nc on here, if you wanted to match the change in sounds and rhythm it should be http://i.imgur.com/UZ40jYQ.jpg though I think not having it at all here would be fine too
01:08:625 (2) - could be deleted or a sliderend to start the new taping rhythm on 01:08:812 - to fit the melody

for future maps: you could try making more use of sv changes based on sections, like 00:06:042 - and 00:20:625 - are quite different musically, but you still mapped them in way that makes them feel really similar

mochi
00:57:750 (1) - looks so forced between all these circles. think you could rearrange things a little here to make this neater as it seems so strange seeing how clean other things are
01:09:750 (4) - how about sv change here as the sound stands out so much? you did it 01:24:750 (3) - which is pretty similar
yeah having different kiai settings is fine for a GD, but do you really want to have it on the ending spinner lol ending kiai on 01:36:937 - would be nicer I think

meep
00:25:687 (6,7,8,9) - one of the hardest jump patterns on the whole map in one of the calmest parts of the song? please don't, especially considering how weak beats are here
also so many 1/1 gaps seem strange for 00:26:250 (9,1,2) - as the music doens't really change from 00:25:687 (6,7,8,9) -
00:28:687 (6,7,8,9,1) - would look create if you used the rotate tool here to make triangles or something http://i.imgur.com/2Xdy5zs.jpg
00:33:750 (4) - random single vocal 3/4 slider you never use anywhere else and piano is pretty strong on the red tick. would just make this 1/2 tbh
00:48:187 (2,3,4,5,6) - should consider what stacking does to this and move things a bit so you don't get http://i.imgur.com/WusbW7q.jpg
01:04:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - basically just a single circular movement for so long, could be way more interesting also stack on 01:06:937 (7,1) - seems really unfitting emphasis wise

hb
00:05:250 (1) - why not make this a 1/2 slider? would fit the song much better
01:17:625 (2) - yes it follow the song fine, but together with the ones before and after + vocal starting on the middle it feels to undermapped here. how about something like http://i.imgur.com/YhO0dPG.jpg ?

easy
01:34:125 (1,1,1,1) - don't think you have to nc spam this

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set seems alright, feel free to poke me after bubble

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2017-01-08T17:03:17+00:00

Lasse wrote:
hb
00:05:250 (1) - why not make this a 1/2 slider? would fit the song much better // i want the big down beat to be clickable, seems more logic to me
01:17:625 (2) - yes it follow the song fine, but together with the ones before and after + vocal starting on the middle it feels to undermapped here. how about something like http://i.imgur.com/YhO0dPG.jpg ? //changed on my way hope its better

set seems alright, feel free to poke me after bubble

1gb wallpaper ftw

osu file format v14

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Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-01-08T17:08:26+00:00

Lasse wrote:
hitsounding
(all based on highest diff)
you really should add some more soft whistles as right now your hitsounding feels pretty empty
you could for example add to 00:05:250 (1,2,1) - sliderheads, 00:07:500 (4) - etc to follow the guitar for this part
things like 00:17:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - are nice hitsounding wise
or take a look at how mochi utilized whistles

i did some more hitsounding following the guitar at the start and towards the end, i've left the middle section as is since i dont want to overload this simple section of basically just drums + vocals with whistles, and i feel having less is more for that part of the map.

flight
somehow the quality of this bg seems way worse than others, see if you can do sth about that ill see what i can do but idk if i can find a better one since this is downscaled from 1080
00:13:125 (1) - could change shape a bit to get more distance to it and have it feel more emphasized cause it's a pretty strong beat http://i.imgur.com/cdBf4zA.jpg might also want to stack 00:13:500 (2) - 00:12:375 (5) - cause that seems cleaner and makes the overlap on 00:13:500 (2,4) - look nicer yes and yes
00:53:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - sv change could be a bit stronger here considering how much the song intensity goes up, why not ~1.2x? good idea
00:57:750 (5) - might be nice to have a little change in the stream here cause of that sound and all, how about nc and a little spacing incease? http://i.imgur.com/poHVgGs.jpg nc yes, im not sure about increasing the spacing since if i do it just a little it looks a bit harder to notice
01:08:062 (1) - seems a bit weird to have the nc on here, if you wanted to match the change in sounds and rhythm it should be http://i.imgur.com/UZ40jYQ.jpg though I think not having it at all here would be fine too followed your suggestion
01:08:625 (2) - could be deleted or a sliderend to start the new taping rhythm on 01:08:812 - to fit the melody i understand but i really like how the cross pattern fits the violins pitch movements and i think each note on the violin is worth playing

for future maps: you could try making more use of sv changes based on sections, like 00:06:042 - and 00:20:625 - are quite different musically, but you still mapped them in way that makes them feel really similar thanks for the tip ^^ i didn't really think too much about sv in this since the song is pretty calm in general, so i only changed it when there was a drastic change

easy
01:34:125 (1,1,1,1) - don't think you have to nc spam this this is nc spammed because its a totally different rhythm to the entirety of the map and uses 1/2, so to make it super obvious i nc'd each one

[]
set seems alright, feel free to poke me after bubble

Thanks for the mod!

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2017-01-08T23:52:16+00:00

Fixed except the kiai stuff, i want the last spinner to have the flashy effect that's only available when the kiai is active. so yeah

SPOILER

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ArtistUnicode:茶太
Creator:Log Off Now
Version:Mochi's Insane
Source:この大空に、翼をひろげて
Tags:if my heart had wings Kono Oozora Ni Tsubasa Wo Hirogete moenovel pulltop eroge visual novel short version _meep_ hb24 momochikun
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_Meep_

1,707 posts

Joined April 2014

_Meep_ 2017-01-09T09:35:40+00:00

Lasse wrote:
hitsounding
(all based on highest diff)

meep
00:25:687 (6,7,8,9) - one of the hardest jump patterns on the whole map in one of the calmest parts of the song? please don't, especially considering how weak beats are here Fixed
also so many 1/1 gaps seem strange for 00:26:250 (9,1,2) - as the music doens't really change from 00:25:687 (6,7,8,9) - Kinda mapped to how I wanted the map/song to be potrayed
00:28:687 (6,7,8,9,1) - would look create if you used the rotate tool here to make triangles or something http://i.imgur.com/2Xdy5zs.jpg Fixed
00:33:750 (4) - random single vocal 3/4 slider you never use anywhere else and piano is pretty strong on the red tick. would just make this 1/2 tbh Wanted to add some variety + vocals call for it
00:48:187 (2,3,4,5,6) - should consider what stacking does to this and move things a bit so you don't get http://i.imgur.com/WusbW7q.jpg Fixed i think
01:04:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - basically just a single circular movement for so long, could be way more interesting also stack on 01:06:937 (7,1) - seems really unfitting emphasis wise I mean,its a very smooth flow,then suddenly at 01:07:125 (1,2,3,4) - the flow totally stops,thats where the emphasis comes in,thats why Im choosing to keep this. I feel that the current stack fits my style and I don't see a reason to change it imo

[]
set seems alright, feel free to poke me after bubble

thanks ;o

http://puu.sh/tgiyP/cb013dd17c.osu

rehitsound cuz i forgot if i changed hitsounds myself or not

Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-01-10T10:35:36+00:00

Xexxar wrote:
[General]
Based on the video used having MoeNovel in the background, I believe the source should be If My Heart Had Wings since either is official metadata. If My Heart Had Wings is MoeNovel's localization of the game and I believe if thats the BG video you're going to use you might as well use that as your source.

Update on this, I've PM'd KwaN and both sources are ok to use, so I'm just going to stick with the original JP source.

I Must Decrease

908 posts

Joined June 2013

I Must Decrease 2017-01-10T19:03:40+00:00

mweow

tfw best girl isnt in this picture

ErunamoJAZZ

osu! Alumni

2,693 posts

Joined August 2012

ErunamoJAZZ 2017-01-10T19:08:24+00:00

yey!, gogoogogo!

Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-01-10T19:09:09+00:00

first ever bubble

thank you!

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2017-01-10T19:32:05+00:00

delete my diff thanks

I Must Decrease

908 posts

Joined June 2013

I Must Decrease 2017-01-10T20:30:33+00:00

upon further inspection i noticed that the ending of Mochi's Diff still suffers from problems.

01:34:125 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - the stacking during this part is ugly and I feel could be alot better. I recommend atleast not directly stacking the objects underneath slider ends to promote easier reading. The structure could also be improved to showcase how this the same sound being repeated, rather than arbitrary angles of sliders design.

01:36:750 (4) - Please make this two circles and not a slider.

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2017-01-11T04:49:00+00:00

u better check replies before bubbling
well if its still insisted

SPOILER

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I Must Decrease

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_Meep_

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Xexxar wrote:

no oppai no waifu

Starset

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Xexxar wrote:

best topic to talk about in that situation

Lasse

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Lasse 2017-01-12T16:36:22+00:00

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Vivyanne

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Vivyanne 2017-01-12T16:41:58+00:00

woow congrats!

Starset

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Starset 2017-01-12T17:02:23+00:00

gratz, now delete my diff

Misure

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Misure 2017-01-12T17:31:53+00:00

wow such an old song, love it <3
gratz!

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Log Off Now 2017-01-12T17:32:30+00:00

thanks guys

Okoratu

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Okoratu 2017-01-12T18:26:53+00:00

@_Meep_ is

supposed to be some sort of pattern or something, given that the rest of the diff looks pretty ok this looks like a mistake

Lasse

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Lasse 2017-01-12T18:59:32+00:00

lol
I thought that got fixed with my mod and apparently I missed it while rechecking

_Meep_ wrote:
Lasse wrote:
meep

00:48:187 (2,3,4,5,6) - should consider what stacking does to this and move things a bit so you don't get http://i.imgur.com/WusbW7q.jpg Fixed i think
thanks ;o

zhuxiaoyan

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zhuxiaoyan 2017-01-12T21:01:07+00:00

WHAT THE HELL IS THIS MEEP

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