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OK, been away for a bit, decided to make a few edits on what DTM9 did previously...
[What I changed]
00:43:529 (5,6) - Hmm, I'd prefer this to be similar to 00:42:823 (2,3).
01:00:823 (3) - Ok, but tilt it by 5 degrees upward from horizontal. I would have prefered to follow this beat through with another slider but it seems that DTM9 really wants to cut it off. So I'll shut up on this one...
01:04:353 (5) - Reverse arrow please.
01:30:117 (5,1,2) - This is (in readability) weird. Firstly, the 5 repeats more than once, but this is the only slider that repeats more than once, so it can confuse some newer players. The 1 and the 2 have a small pause before hitting so this can also trick the player whom is wanting to play a flowing map.
00:33:294 (3) - This slider seems to fit in better with the map compared to what it looked like previously.
00:11:059 (4) - Ends switched. Looks better that way.
[]
Otherwise, I believe that my M8 DTM9 has done a very good job with taking my spot for the last five days.
[What I changed]
00:43:529 (5,6) - Hmm, I'd prefer this to be similar to 00:42:823 (2,3).
01:00:823 (3) - Ok, but tilt it by 5 degrees upward from horizontal. I would have prefered to follow this beat through with another slider but it seems that DTM9 really wants to cut it off. So I'll shut up on this one...
01:04:353 (5) - Reverse arrow please.
01:30:117 (5,1,2) - This is (in readability) weird. Firstly, the 5 repeats more than once, but this is the only slider that repeats more than once, so it can confuse some newer players. The 1 and the 2 have a small pause before hitting so this can also trick the player whom is wanting to play a flowing map.
00:33:294 (3) - This slider seems to fit in better with the map compared to what it looked like previously.
00:11:059 (4) - Ends switched. Looks better that way.
[]
Otherwise, I believe that my M8 DTM9 has done a very good job with taking my spot for the last five days.
UPDATE
osu file format v14
[General]
AudioFilename: WarpDrive.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67529
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1
[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6
[Metadata]
Title:Warp Drive
TitleUnicode:Warp Drive
Artist:Titancube
ArtistUnicode:Titancube
Creator:DTM9 Nowa
Version:Paydayz's Hard
Source:VOEZ
Tags:paydayzcool electro electronic techno ios android mobile Rayark
BeatmapID:1025111
BeatmapSetID:472890
[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
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SliderTickRate:1
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recheck
Another:
- 00:33:382 (2,3,1) - spacing is a bit misleading. Maybe move farther away 00:34:000 (1,2,3) - all this stuff from 00:33:647 (3) -
PayDay:
- 00:34:000 (1,2) - rhythm is a bit un-intuitive here. Basically, you have the strong beat on 00:34:353 - and then a jump (which means, putting emphasis) on a weak beat 00:34:529 - . If you want to keep 00:34:000 (1) - no matter what, I suggest removing the repeat from the next slider and starting to map again from 00:34:706 -
- 01:04:353 (5) - 2 circles work far better
- 01:30:470 (1) - I'd remove this and use just 01:30:647 (2,3) - to emphasize those last beats
Rest is cool for me
Poke me again
Another:
- 00:33:382 (2,3,1) - spacing is a bit misleading. Maybe move farther away 00:34:000 (1,2,3) - all this stuff from 00:33:647 (3) -
PayDay:
- 00:34:000 (1,2) - rhythm is a bit un-intuitive here. Basically, you have the strong beat on 00:34:353 - and then a jump (which means, putting emphasis) on a weak beat 00:34:529 - . If you want to keep 00:34:000 (1) - no matter what, I suggest removing the repeat from the next slider and starting to map again from 00:34:706 -
- 01:04:353 (5) - 2 circles work far better
- 01:30:470 (1) - I'd remove this and use just 01:30:647 (2,3) - to emphasize those last beats
Rest is cool for me
Poke me again
Topic Starter
Thanks a ton again, paydayz you may tweak your diff again if you feel like so (enjoy your thingy tho) :>MrSergio wrote:
recheck
Another:
- 00:33:382 (2,3,1) - spacing is a bit misleading. Maybe move farther away 00:34:000 (1,2,3) - all this stuff from 00:33:647 (3) - Done
PayDay:
- 00:34:000 (1,2) - rhythm is a bit un-intuitive here. Basically, you have the strong beat on 00:34:353 - and then a jump (which means, putting emphasis) on a weak beat 00:34:529 - . If you want to keep 00:34:000 (1) - no matter what, I suggest removing the repeat from the next slider and starting to map again from 00:34:706 - No one really suggested this so... I guess i'll tweak it by a bit now so i will shorten the slider to be 1/2 and i added a hitcircle to the cymbal hit (emphasized by a jump and clickable). It should work
- 01:04:353 (5) - 2 circles work far better I will respect paydayz's way to do it for now. So i think this way will work: I will remove the reverse from the slider and add a hitcircle to replace the old endpoint ( 01:04:706 - ). It still has the two clickables like you suggested but it keeps the slider aspect that paydayz appearently wants
- 01:30:470 (1) - I'd remove this and use just 01:30:647 (2,3) - to emphasize those last beats Edit : fixed :/
Rest is cool for me
Poke me again
fixed one typo in my mod above lol and discussed that last part of the Hard
Aesthetics may improve here and there, but it is a first map for both of the creators so let's give it a try.
Getting an icon or a qualified map is not the end of the road. Please keep working to improve your future maps.
Good luck~
Aesthetics may improve here and there, but it is a first map for both of the creators so let's give it a try.
Getting an icon or a qualified map is not the end of the road. Please keep working to improve your future maps.
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Gonna get popped most likely but let's see how this goes :>MrSergio wrote:
fixed one typo in my mod above lol and discussed that last part of the Hard
Aesthetics may improve here and there, but it is a first map for both of the creators so let's give it a try.
Getting an icon or a qualified map is not the end of the road. Please keep working to improve your future maps.
Good luck~
Thank you for everything though <3
Oh my god.
I WANNA GET THIS DONE AND OVER WITH!
PLEASE!
I WANNA GET THIS DONE AND OVER WITH!
PLEASE!
Soon™ xDDTM9 Nowa wrote:
Gonna get popped most likely but let's see how this goes :>MrSergio wrote:
fixed one typo in my mod above lol and discussed that last part of the Hard
Aesthetics may improve here and there, but it is a first map for both of the creators so let's give it a try.
Getting an icon or a qualified map is not the end of the road. Please keep working to improve your future maps.
Good luck~
Thank you for everything though <3
hello !
[General]
00:53:765 - any reason why this break ends so early? it doesn't snap to any particular sound either.. so it just feels really awkward
[Special]
00:20:235 (2,3) - stack's a bit off. try restacking this again
00:22:353 (1) - can you remove a reverse so it finishes on the blue tick? having a 1/8 jump like that is just asking for slider breaks
00:33:294 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - instead of keeping this as a stream, why not try following the kick drums? a rhythm like http://puu.sh/t6eCk/0a90d95893.jpg works well
01:13:882 (3,4,5) - white tick triplets are a little awkward to play here because 01:13:882 (3) - is so much more dominant than 01:14:059 (5) - i would just remove 01:13:970 (4) - and follow the 1/2
01:14:765 (10,11,1) - try restack this again, its a bit off
01:19:794 (5) - aaa why do you do this. using two circles instead would be a lot better. this kind of thing is good for offbeat rhythms but here the blue tick is really weak compared to the white
01:30:117 (2,3,4,5,6) - mm can you ctrl + shift + s this and bring the spacing down to something manageable? the pattern is ok but the spacing is too large in comparison to the rest of the map. something like this works http://puu.sh/t6fF5/1843940ee6.jpg
[Another]
00:24:294 - you normally put streams here for these sounds. maybe try a rhythm that matches the intensity so that it doesn't feel too imbalanced
00:44:588 - why not use a 1/8 reverse like you did in special?
[Insane]
00:16:706 (4,1) - 00:19:529 (5,1) - can you make the spacing between these visually consistent? it helps to recognise patterns
01:06:470 (3) - i think u should nc this so you keep 1,2 patterning
[Hard]
00:34:353 (2,3) - 00:34:529 - is relatively weak so it doesnt really deserved to be clicked. perhaps you could do a rhythm like http://puu.sh/t6gGZ/e59ea3ddd3.jpg instead
00:36:470 (4) - u should really try to make the downbeat 00:36:823 - clickable cos of how strong it is
00:56:588 - i really dislike this section.. having 0.5 sv in contrast to 1.25 is just too big of a difference. slider velocity changes in hard shouldn't be too drastic so maybe just stick with 0.75 sv throughout this part
01:13:529 (1,2,3) - spacing seems pretty big here. just stick with ur original distance snapping
01:30:117 (5) - hm you would expect this to end on the white tick like it does in the music so its kinda confusing to play. maybe add 2 more reverses to this and move around the last 2 circles
[Normal]
od 4?
flow generally stays the same for extended periods of time. see 00:08:588 - for example, it continues anti-clockwise for a while. this is ur first map tho so not going to be too picky on that, just in the future try mix it up a little
00:58:000 (1) - 01:00:823 (1) - 01:03:647 (1) - i dont think u need to nc every measure. just sticking to having an nc every 2 measures is fine
easy looks fine
call me back
[General]
00:53:765 - any reason why this break ends so early? it doesn't snap to any particular sound either.. so it just feels really awkward
[Special]
00:20:235 (2,3) - stack's a bit off. try restacking this again
00:22:353 (1) - can you remove a reverse so it finishes on the blue tick? having a 1/8 jump like that is just asking for slider breaks
00:33:294 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - instead of keeping this as a stream, why not try following the kick drums? a rhythm like http://puu.sh/t6eCk/0a90d95893.jpg works well
01:13:882 (3,4,5) - white tick triplets are a little awkward to play here because 01:13:882 (3) - is so much more dominant than 01:14:059 (5) - i would just remove 01:13:970 (4) - and follow the 1/2
01:14:765 (10,11,1) - try restack this again, its a bit off
01:19:794 (5) - aaa why do you do this. using two circles instead would be a lot better. this kind of thing is good for offbeat rhythms but here the blue tick is really weak compared to the white
01:30:117 (2,3,4,5,6) - mm can you ctrl + shift + s this and bring the spacing down to something manageable? the pattern is ok but the spacing is too large in comparison to the rest of the map. something like this works http://puu.sh/t6fF5/1843940ee6.jpg
[Another]
00:24:294 - you normally put streams here for these sounds. maybe try a rhythm that matches the intensity so that it doesn't feel too imbalanced
00:44:588 - why not use a 1/8 reverse like you did in special?
[Insane]
00:16:706 (4,1) - 00:19:529 (5,1) - can you make the spacing between these visually consistent? it helps to recognise patterns
01:06:470 (3) - i think u should nc this so you keep 1,2 patterning
[Hard]
00:34:353 (2,3) - 00:34:529 - is relatively weak so it doesnt really deserved to be clicked. perhaps you could do a rhythm like http://puu.sh/t6gGZ/e59ea3ddd3.jpg instead
00:36:470 (4) - u should really try to make the downbeat 00:36:823 - clickable cos of how strong it is
00:56:588 - i really dislike this section.. having 0.5 sv in contrast to 1.25 is just too big of a difference. slider velocity changes in hard shouldn't be too drastic so maybe just stick with 0.75 sv throughout this part
01:13:529 (1,2,3) - spacing seems pretty big here. just stick with ur original distance snapping
01:30:117 (5) - hm you would expect this to end on the white tick like it does in the music so its kinda confusing to play. maybe add 2 more reverses to this and move around the last 2 circles
[Normal]
od 4?
flow generally stays the same for extended periods of time. see 00:08:588 - for example, it continues anti-clockwise for a while. this is ur first map tho so not going to be too picky on that, just in the future try mix it up a little
00:58:000 (1) - 01:00:823 (1) - 01:03:647 (1) - i dont think u need to nc every measure. just sticking to having an nc every 2 measures is fine
easy looks fine
call me back
Excellent, thanks for modding Pentori!
Thank you so much for modding. Hope you can bubble this can get this done and over with. We've been working for more than 6 months now... O_OPentori wrote:
hello !
[Hard]
00:34:353 (2,3) - 00:34:529 - is relatively weak so it doesnt really deserved to be clicked. perhaps you could do a rhythm like http://puu.sh/t6gGZ/e59ea3ddd3.jpg instead I changed it, but I don't feel too great about it. Does it really need to change?
00:36:470 (4) - u should really try to make the downbeat 00:36:823 - clickable cos of how strong it is Changed
00:56:588 - i really dislike this section.. having 0.5 sv in contrast to 1.25 is just too big of a difference. slider velocity changes in hard shouldn't be too drastic so maybe just stick with 0.75 sv throughout this part M8, you're meant to dislike it cuz it isn't at the actual climax of the song, but I changed it.
01:13:529 (1,2,3) - spacing seems pretty big here. just stick with ur original distance snapping Lol, I thought I could trick the viewer's eyes with a slight jump, but I changed it
01:30:117 (5) - hm you would expect this to end on the white tick like it does in the music so its kinda confusing to play. maybe add 2 more reverses to this and move around the last 2 circles (Nowa... Nah m8,ur all good.) Changed
UPDATE!
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Topic Starter
Thanks a lot m80 :>Pentori wrote:
hello !
[General]
00:53:765 - any reason why this break ends so early? it doesn't snap to any particular sound either.. so it just feels really awkward Yeah i guess it doesn't really make sense... Originally i tought it would be cool to have the break end little bit earlier than the notes because of the change in tone on that point from the up and down stylish sounds over the break to whatever it is after that point
[Special]
00:20:235 (2,3) - stack's a bit off. try restacking this again ✓
00:22:353 (1) - can you remove a reverse so it finishes on the blue tick? having a 1/8 jump like that is just asking for slider breaks Yeah sure, had to rotate the kickslider a bit so it works better with the next slider
00:33:294 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - instead of keeping this as a stream, why not try following the kick drums? a rhythm like http://puu.sh/t6eCk/0a90d95893.jpg works well I have kinda mixed feelings about this one in general. I personally think both of the options if there well but i decided to go with the full stream without any polarity because i have mapped some of the less noticeable beats for example here 00:24:558 (5,2) - (The main synthesizer beats are in three-beat patterns 00:24:294 (2,3,4) - 00:24:646 (6,7,1) - ) and i generally like it more than a pattern with polarity
01:13:882 (3,4,5) - white tick triplets are a little awkward to play here because 01:13:882 (3) - is so much more dominant than 01:14:059 (5) - i would just remove 01:13:970 (4) - and follow the 1/2 Aaaaaaaaaa had rework few patterns because nothing really worked out .-. but the main point is dealt with now
01:14:765 (10,11,1) - try restack this again, its a bit off ✓
01:19:794 (5) - aaa why do you do this. using two circles instead would be a lot better. this kind of thing is good for offbeat rhythms but here the blue tick is really weak compared to the white I always though it was kinda out of place but never really did anything to it... fuck me sideways xd
01:30:117 (2,3,4,5,6) - mm can you ctrl + shift + s this and bring the spacing down to something manageable? the pattern is ok but the spacing is too large in comparison to the rest of the map. something like this works http://puu.sh/t6fF5/1843940ee6.jpg Lowered the DS little bit so it should be better now. (though the pattern wasn't that hard to play and it was the most hyped part of the song)
[Another]
00:24:294 - you normally put streams here for these sounds. maybe try a rhythm that matches the intensity so that it doesn't feel too imbalanced Sure, reworked the pattern and it should match the intensity better now
00:44:588 - why not use a 1/8 reverse like you did in special? I decided to follow the synthesizer which works out quite well right now. (Also the buzz is not that notable)
[Insane]
00:16:706 (4,1) - 00:19:529 (5,1) - can you make the spacing between these visually consistent? it helps to recognise patterns Done
01:06:470 (3) - i think u should nc this so you keep 1,2 patterning Yeah... Made a similiar change to another
[Normal]
od 4? Sure
flow generally stays the same for extended periods of time. see 00:08:588 - for example, it continues anti-clockwise for a while. this is ur first map tho so not going to be too picky on that, just in the future try mix it up a little I'll keep that in mind
00:58:000 (1) - 01:00:823 (1) - 01:03:647 (1) - i dont think u need to nc every measure. just sticking to having an nc every 2 measures is fine It's better to NC where it's needed instead of just every X measures (even though NCing every X measures usually fulfills that it does not mean it always does)
00:58:000 (1) - No, it's there to divide the similiar patterns 00:56:588 (1,2) - 00:58:000 (1,2) - 00:59:412 (1,2) -
01:00:823 (1) - Done, it's not really a part of the two slider pattern but it does not create a pattern by itself so it's better to be included to the pattern prior to it
01:03:647 (1) - Alright, these 01:02:235 (1,2,3,4) - can be seen as a single pattern
easy looks fine
call me back Ring ring~
recheck
special
01:29:059 (1) - sry i missed this can you remove a reverse?
hard
00:36:823 (1,1) - i think u forgot to remove the nc off 00:37:000 (1) - when you changed the pattern
normal
00:58:000 (1) - erm.. well since you removed the nc off the other sliders, it makes this nc inconsistent with the others, regardless of how you arranged the patterns. nc variation is normally ok but for a normal diff you want to try keep it simple, so i suggest removing the nc here as well
special
01:29:059 (1) - sry i missed this can you remove a reverse?
hard
00:36:823 (1,1) - i think u forgot to remove the nc off 00:37:000 (1) - when you changed the pattern
normal
00:58:000 (1) - erm.. well since you removed the nc off the other sliders, it makes this nc inconsistent with the others, regardless of how you arranged the patterns. nc variation is normally ok but for a normal diff you want to try keep it simple, so i suggest removing the nc here as well
Topic Starter
Thanks a lot again ^_^Pentori wrote:
recheck
special
01:29:059 (1) - sry i missed this can you remove a reverse? Yeah
hard
00:36:823 (1,1) - i think u forgot to remove the nc off 00:37:000 (1) - when you changed the pattern I'll fix this one for him
normal
00:58:000 (1) - erm.. well since you removed the nc off the other sliders, it makes this nc inconsistent with the others, regardless of how you arranged the patterns. nc variation is normally ok but for a normal diff you want to try keep it simple, so i suggest removing the nc here as well Meh...
qualified!
Topic Starter
\w/Pentori wrote:
qualified!
Gratzz :3
GG you finally did this !!!!
Omg Gratz Nowa!!!
lmao, I haven't gave you mod back already xD anyway gratz, and srry for died m4m ;w;
Topic Starter
Thanks a lot for the support guys ^_^
Dw about that fam xdShmiklak wrote:
lmao, I haven't gave you mod back already xD anyway gratz, and srry for died m4m ;w;
Work paid off \:D/ gratz!!!
grats!~
Congratulations! :3
Congratz!~
Wow...Finally!
congratz, Voez is epic.
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEAH!
as requested, a dq to fix the start of another
ummm...
I'm back
and this mapset should be back too :p
and this mapset should be back too :p
Topic Starter
Sank yu mr. sergio \w/MrSergio wrote:
I'm back
and this mapset should be back too :p
final touches to some patterns.
I do believe this is the last time I have to bubble this :p
I do believe this is the last time I have to bubble this :p
Topic Starter
<3 I promise it's good this time
Just opinion
the current mp3 is quite low quality with low bass sound I suppose, but how about change it to this mp3?
https://mega.nz/#!NBATRTxZ!eGuhXQRjoCwn ... _Xhc-ijlug
current
new
just my opinion, it's up to you
Nice map, I like it
the current mp3 is quite low quality with low bass sound I suppose, but how about change it to this mp3?
https://mega.nz/#!NBATRTxZ!eGuhXQRjoCwn ... _Xhc-ijlug
current
new
just my opinion, it's up to you
Nice map, I like it
Regratzz :3