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Cheesecake wrote:
[Cheesecake's Easy][Hard]
- mine has this too
I believe you can rank this!
- I see a lot of objects that are scarily close to the bottom of the screen! While this isn't unrankable, it feels more comfortable to have a sizable gap between the object and the edge of the playfield! Some examples are 00:05:980 (3) - 00:07:780 (4) - 01:16:780 (3) - i agree and i did my best to fix most of them, even if it meant moving the entire last 20 seconds upwards
- 00:07:780 (4) - This is quite a scary looking slider! It could be more appropriate to use a smoother slider shape to fit in with the music a bit better i can't find anything better to replace this one, so i'll keep it for now
- 00:12:580 (1,2,3) - If you ctrl+h this group and move it back to where it was, it improves the flow between the prior and later objects ya
- 00:22:180 (4) - If you consider the previous objects, the rotational flow is clockwise, then the repeat arrow changes it to anti-clockwise, but then this slider changes it back to clockwise! Having another rotation change in such a short time is not ideal and can be uncomfortable for the player, I recommend applying a ctrl+g to this slider or some other solution that you might be able to think of ctrl+g'd-- i think i meant to do this but forgot lol
- 00:29:980 (3) - Scary! did a cute little symmetry thing here, the original was super ugly
- 00:41:380 (7) - I definitely would not use a second repeat here, as these tend to be awkward to read and are counter-intuitive for a Hard difficulty
- 00:50:980 (7) - Eek! i like this one because the song says "corner" just before it hehehe
- 01:01:180 (5) - This is some quite extreme spacing.. idk, it looks cute and it's the beginning of the kiai, i'll get back to you if i find something better!
- 01:06:580 (1) - Somewhat similar to before, the change in rotational flow in such a way is not good! ctrl-g + ctrl-h'd, does that make it better?
- 01:36:430 (1) - Why not ctrl+j and move to the middle of the playfield? It would be pretty cute! moved this whole bit to the centre and did that thing
osuskrub wrote:
omg hi unko
General
your finish hitsounds are too loud, consider whenever you use a finish to set it to 30% with a green thingy xddd lowered all the hitsound volumes (did it to cheese's easy too)
Cheesecake's Easy that wasn't actually mapped by cheesecake
yea this is good its like cheesecake mapped it!!! sankyuu~~ uwu
Hard
00:07:780 (4) - having sharp sliders like this doesn't really match the softness of the song. maybe you could follow a similar pattern to 00:00:580 (1,2,3,4) cheese mentioned this too, i cant really figure out what to replace it with besides badly copying the first one
00:39:880 (4) - this slider is a little off.. move the middle point in the slider more to the middle (around x:88 y:108) ya
00:46:180 (7) - EEK how does this emphasize the music idk its pretty
01:24:580 (5) - why why why why is the middle slider point not centered i am a baby mapper ok
01:31:780 (3,4) - why do you double the distance ok i made it normal
cute map unko good look! thankies
#- Rain - wrote:
00:10:180 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I feel like the new combo spam might not be needed but is fine with it anyway halved them, not too fond of this pattern anyway maybe i'll do something with it
00:16:180 (1) - Slider ends on a beat stronger than what it starts on, maybe a 1/1 into a single makes sense ya
01:02:980 (1,2) - Nice use of the words through and using a bow and arrow, the bow and arrow isnt perfect tho sadly, rotate it slightly clockwise or move it down to fix i knew something looked weird with it, thanks!
01:36:430 (1) - I would recommend something other than this repeating slider as it ends on a really really strong note and doesnt really give it the emphasis it deserves imo i think paired with the hitsound it's fine, after all there's not much more i can do for a 2 star hard
Thanks!- Rain - wrote:
Cheesecake's Easy00:22:180 (3) - Not sure if you can see it cheese but this slider looks a little off :/ Not really sure what you mean but I changed it a little anyways
01:34:180 (4) - Maybe a spinner instead of a really long slider? I like the long slider a lot more
Otherwise really solid
hurray, i'm pretty sure this update made it a little harder but it's actually gone down by 0.01 starsNao Tomori wrote:
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[hard]
we talked a bit about some stuff so im just writing it down here with my observation
00:22:180 (4) - nazi blanket - move 4 slider end out left ya
00:28:180 - the end of this slider is super strong, i think it's better as a clickable object. that works, enjoy subtle overlap since that's my fetish
00:53:380 - this should really be the sliderstart imo. the vocal is a new word and it has emphasis on a downbeat and whatnot. i think this plays just fine and looks nice, so no change
00:59:080 (2,3) - inconsistent with 01:08:680 (2) - since you ignore the bell on the rest of the map, probably good to change the first one. mapped it to the vocals like everything else
01:05:380 (5) - vocal, strong downbeat, etc. not a jump? you made a jump at 01:01:180 (5) - on something i think is weaker i justify the first jump due to it being the first line of the chorus, i think a upwards curving slider is fine for here
01:10:780 (6) - same thing about slider end how's this? i'm not entirely sure what you found wrong
01:26:980 (1) - same thing about jump on downbeat too cute of an overlap to abandon
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thanks for the mod but try a bit harder next time... expected better from a semi-experienced mapper such as yourself.pkk wrote:
This 👏 Map 👏 Needs 👏To 👏 Be 👏 Modded 👏 Now! 👏 omg thats retarded tho
thx for mod!PyroBear wrote:
I'm P sure this needs a normal.
[Hard]That's all that I found, nice map. Fuck you Cheesecake for making me do this.
- 00:05:980 (3) - Blanket it around 00:07:780 (4) like this yay bye bye scary slider
- 00:14:980 (1,2,3) - ctrl-g? Way too natural flow compared to previous parts ya
- 01:24:580 (5) - flip vertically, better flow imo] i ctrl-g'd that one slider
thanks for mod!My Angel Eugen wrote:
Hey unkoHard:
00:46:180 (7) - I think that form looks so different from the overall design. How about this standard slider? . Like me, he seems to fit in better than yours hmm idk
00:50:980 (7) - Same it semi reflects the lyrics saying "corner" and i think its cute
00:52:780 (1) - The reverse isn't needed. In place of the beginning of slider put the circle and move slider forward. It will look something like this ya! that makes the pattern cuter
01:26:380 (2) - Maybe put it a little higher? ok
And...that's it. Good luck to rank it. ;3
Kaine wrote:
cheesecake's EasyYou know yesterday i had a bitchin cheesecake it has fuckin lemon in it but DAMN it was good okay mod ye
00:14:980 (5,1) - blanket is off, move the tail up a bit bruh
00:31:780 (3) - I think a slidershape like 00:22:180 (3) - would be more appropriate here than this one. i like this slider!
01:12:580 (1) - LOL THAT SLIDER AGS\JGDJAKDKA ©
01:22:180 (1) - finish here but none here 01:02:980 (1) - ? I think removing the finish from 01:22:180 (1) - is the best course of action as the BOOM sound isnt there i only copied hitsounds from hard! but i did remove the finish
too laze to reply did i do it right mommieKaine wrote:
Generalthe video's pretty uneventful, and afaik theres a storyboard incNo video?hard00:05:980 (3,4) - blanket is off
00:07:780 (4) - In all the other places you make the "Ly" of the "Family" a circle. Suggest you do the same here
00:34:180 (1,2,3) - not a perfect triangle
00:40:780 (5,6,7) - same
^There are a couple of places where the structure could be improved and the spacing made more consistent; aesthetics are very important in a set like this imo
GL on rank