nubery/Renigar's Revised Mod
nubery wrote:
hi, renigar outsourced his job, so now im here
[Easy][Normal]
- HOS' Easy for english correctness :^) actually no it is HOS's for English* cor
- 00:24:150 (1) - nc for emphasis on the unique sound
- 00:40:950 (1,1) - you had 1/1 gaps throughout the map, this is the only instance of a 1/2 gap being used. this is something you see in normal diffs, and the bpm isnt low enough to justify this. reduce 00:40:950 (1) - to 1/1 slider
- 00:46:150 (2) - nc, because the gap between this and previous note is so large
- 00:36:950 (3) - the slider end should be clickable since it's much louder and prominent than previous white tick. I recommend this rhythm: http://puu.sh/rLuuy/033e4086be.jpg
[Hard]
- 00:07:750 (3,4,5,6) - looks cleaner and flows better as a zigzag imo http://puu.sh/rLuIp/942797a0c1.jpg or curved like what you did here 00:11:350 (3,4,5) -
be consistent to support the structure and aesthetics of your map d: what- 00:09:350 (6,1) - the perfectly vertical sliders dont fit the aesthetics of this map imo, try to slant them a bit or something what
- 00:19:350 (1,2,3,4) - umm, I dont recommend these repeat on a normal diff, it's hard to read for beginners. something like this http://puu.sh/rLv0I/14a3538b74.jpg seems more fair kinda
- 00:21:750 (4) - this should be 2 repeats like the rest, it's the same music kinda
- 00:25:750 this sv change: 1x -> 0.75x is too big for a relatively easy diff imo idk
- 00:26:550 (3) - try to be consistent with your DS, it's a normal after all, the exception to this is if there's a stack what
- 00:27:750 (2) - ^ what
- 00:30:950 (4) - and all the rest what
- 00:26:950 (4) - dont need the nc here whatever
- 00:31:350 (1,3) - swap nc whatever
- 00:33:350 (1) - dont need the nc here k
- 00:42:950 (1) - dont need nc. ncing on the strong downbeats ONLY should be sufficient for this song k
- 00:42:950 (1) - this perfectly vertical slider doesn't fit the aesthetics of this map imo. try to slant it a bit no
- 00:44:150 (1,3) - swap nc k
- 00:46:150 (1) - dont need nc wghfdhsg
easy is fine, normal and hard could use some work. gl!
- same nc philosophy as normal. try to nc on notes with a worthy sound to emphasize it
- 00:26:150 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - can probably use a better rhythm for this section :p 2x circle + 1/2 slider spam is a little monotonous imo. listen carefully to the music and you should be fine :p nothx
here's the m4m map renigar told me to link: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/998816