HighTec wrote:

they told me that anything could be music
this song really proves that

HOS
00:21:750 (4) - can this slider please have the same shape as 00:20:150 (2) - ? would make a equal-slider pattern
00:40:950 (1,1) - idk about this gap, feels odd since before the biggest gaps were at least 1/1. i think this could still throw off the beginning players. change pls ?

normal

00:08:550 (4,5,6) - yea u better align these rn, this looks rly unstructured rn idk if I did or not I can't see on this weird pc
00:17:750 (1,2,3) - imo making this symmetrical to 00:16:150 (1,2,3) - would fit the song way better, it would show that the song repeats itself within the map!
00:20:150 (2,4) - fix stack xd ye
00:29:750 (2,4) - why didnt u stack instead of this weird overlap? i dont really see a good reason for it since it makes the map inconsistent becus u had the stacking before I meant to tbh idk why I didn't stack
00:40:950 - just has to be mapped, the beat is way too strong for it to be left out k
00:50:950 - ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ k ;w;

hard
00:06:550 (1,1,1) - why did u make this lighter mapped than the normal? doesnt rly fit yakonw, a harder difficulty with easier rythms idk
00:32:150 (1,2,3) - can u make this a perfect triangle pretty please? it looks so odd rn ye
00:40:950 (4,5) - tbh can u avoid this overlap? u didnt do it anywhere else in the map + it looks even worse than my face I think they're stacked now idk
00:46:350 (2,3) - these sliders sound rly awkward, consider changing them no bc they fit the claps

last diff
00:06:550 (1,1) - same as with the hard.. just map this if u did it in other diffs ugh
00:13:750 (2,3) - u cud space these out way more since (3) has a way stronger beat onto itself, and so you will emphasise that mhm
00:22:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - somehow ctrl+h on this stream feels way better,,, idk up to u maaaybe ;w;
00:32:950 (3,4,5) - id advice toning down the spacing, the song gets less intense with instruments that disappeared ;w;w;w idk
00:49:450 (1) - instead of a spinner, consider mapping more. to make a special difficult ending orz and just overall catch more of the song. it is the hardest diff so u are allowed to! ok

okbye

Sotarks wrote:

ok.
General

1. You might wanna change the "black combo" to a brighter one, it's readdy too dark dude. yo idk they were all different colour combos so I switched all of them lol
2. Last kiai is useless, i'd consider removing it. maybe ;w; I'll see
3. Preview point is unsnapped, change it. okie
4. Consider adding a muted slider-slide please. idk ;w; I'll see what other people say about it

HOS' easy
00:32:150 (1) - you can maybe replace this by a 1/1 reverse slider ?
00:41:750 (2) - remove nc, it's a bit useless.
00:44:950 (1) - ^ reverse here aswell?
00:49:350 (2,4) - i would avoid this overlap, since all your map hasn't got overlap like this, to make it clean.
nice easy!

normal
00:30:950 (4,5) - check ds
00:31:350 (5,6) - ^
00:46:150 (4,5) - ^
00:26:350 (2,3) - no, just no, too hard for a normal.
00:29:750 (2) - too many notes overlapped on the same note, is hard for newbies, better clean up this patern.
00:35:350 (1) - double reverse is pretty meh, try an alternative rythmn
00:41:750 (1) - useless nc
uhh the note placement on this normal is really messy and unpolished, this need more work, don't try and make gimmicks flowish stuff in a normal man, newbies don't like that. I completely remapped this


hard
00:14:550 (3) - what an ugly overlap please
00:41:350 (5,1) - feels so unpolished
same i really think you can polish that diff more, and fix those overlap, i'm too lazy to notice them all but yeah, same as normal the structure of this hard is all over the place. uhm I kinda re-mapped it sort of


last diff
00:37:750 (3,4) - this is ugly Changed a bit :3
00:50:950 (1) - 127|323 oh okay
well anyway same as other diffs lol

looks like you speed mapped this set, without even taking care about notes intensity/placement. I've literally re-mapped so many parts of this to raise emphasis and intensity and just the /beginning/ of this map at first stage took me like 2 days and after re-mapping I thought it was fine but I guess not. I am literally not a good enough mapper to "speed map".
gl

_DT3 wrote:

Here is the mod from my Lazy Queue o/
Sorry if I sound harsh at some points

[General]

1. The hitsounds at the start are very quiet. Even if you do have custom hitsounds, 20% is very quiet and I suggest bumping it up a little I agree
2. 00:09:750 - A finish sounds nice here, should apply to all diffs I think Agreed
3. 00:12:950 - Same as above ^
4. An advanced is definitely needed since the jump from Hard to Normal is really huge, in Normal you barely use 1/2 outside of the kiai but in Hard it is in the whole diff without overlapping unlike in normal. The jump from Easy to Normal is in comparison rather small I don't know how this will turn out because I got a GD from someone for a Hard. The jumps might change so I guess we just have to wait.

[HOS' Easy]

1. Hai HootOwlStar o/
2. This is a nice diff
3. 00:19:350 (1,3) - I'd just curve these too since there is no reason really to make them different from 00:20:150 (2,4) -
4. 00:32:150 (1,2) - 00:44:950 (1,2) - I really can't really say what to put here, but the break here sounds rather unfitting, it has rather strong sounds there
5. 00:40:950 (1,1) - A double NC could be confusing for beginners, besides 00:40:950 (1) - doesn't need too much emphasis anyway imo since the sounds aren't really too strong
6. 00:49:750 (3,4) - This overlap could have just been avoided by moving 00:50:950 (4) - a bit upwards and adjusting 00:49:750 (3) - a bit for visual flow. Even if it was intended to be in the middle, there is no specific reason for it to be there

[Normal]

1. Was the flow meant to be a bit edgy? because even if it compliments the song in a way, the flow definitely could be made more appropriate for this diff level hella edgy B^)
2. 00:12:950 (1,2) - 00:19:350 (1,3) - Eh, usually wouldn't complain but this overlap can be avoided
3. 00:07:750 (3) - 00:10:950 (3) - The downbeat should be clickable imo in this case since it does have a synth + clap on the same note
4. Ok, I feel like the kiai can be improved heavily, by flow, aesthetics and rhythm. Flow and aesthetics pretty much applies to the whole diff but I feel like gets a bit worse in the kiai. For example a point that includes both: 00:28:950 (1,2) - The flow is really jarred since beginners tend to follow the whole slider and thus this pattern includes heavy zigzag flow (antiflow) which in this case I don't think is very appropriate. the overlap with 00:29:750 (2,3) - could also be a bit hard to read especially with the antiflow. Rhythm-wise for example, this 00:35:350 (1) - comes to mind, beginners will have a hard time reading those repeats since they appear so fast, which is why a slider with more than one repeat isn't recommended in easier diffs. Another thing for example is 00:26:350 (3) - ending on a rather "strong" downbeat (which can be heard by the clap and the voice exhaling(?)). That should be clickable though since it is strong.
5. What I am trying to say is, this diff could be made more beginner-appropriate. Even if all of this was intentional, it doesn't suit a normal diff well. You can PM me if you disagree with this or have questions about this I re-mapped this without updating before you modded and all of this was fixed lol. The only thing I would disagree with is the repeat slider with the 2 repeats. I feel like having the second one is important for the sound

The same pretty much also goes for Hard. The flow looks really inappropriate in some points and could be improved visually.
While the highest diff also has some of these points, it was kinda fun at some points
Just PM me if you have any concerns Okie dokie ^^ thank you!

GL!

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Pittigbaasje wrote:

Hey!
On request

Overal: I strongly advise against the 15% hitsound volume. It triggers a lot of people. Getting a high accuracy on the map gets unneccessarily hard because of this. Play to the music, not the notes.

[Hard]
1) 00:23:550 (2,1,2,1,2,1) - this may be inappropriate for a hard difficulty. Hnngghh keeping it ;w; might change if BN *coughs* says I should

[Kris-Kris-Krispy Kreme!]
1) 00:37:150 (1,2,3,4,1) - I'm really not sure about how this part feels when playing the map. The shape of 00:38:150 (4) - almost guarantees a 100 on 00:38:550 (1) - for me. Same as above ;w;

2) I can see why you chose to not add a circle on 00:37:350 - for emphasizing but I'm not sure if it's the right choice since the beat is really strong. I like it this way

3) 00:24:150 (1) - consider changing this into a hitcircle for emphasis. This kickslider just feels odd. It should definitely be a circle idk why it's kick

Super small mod because I couldn't find more stuff, sorry!
Goodluck with the set. Ily <3
-Pittigbaasje

Kisses wrote:

Hyper
00:50:950 (1) - Double check with someone else but I'm pretty sure this is unrankable. The last slider ends after the mp3 is finished https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7012577
look at the bottom and how it's at 100% I'm not LGV but I agree. I changed it.

The diff is very well structured tho, well done

Kibbleru wrote:

combo colour 2 and 3 are wayy too similar, please change it to make it more differentiable oh okay sure

krispy krem
00:19:350 (1,2,3,4) - spacing it out a bit more rather than having the circles touching would look a bit more aesthetically pleasing ig
00:19:350 (1,2,3,4) - why not have these blanket? ????
00:28:550 (4,3) - it would be better not to have these 2 touch I swear every time I move an object anywhere in the mapthese two touch lmao
00:37:350 - i dont see much of a reason to skip this. theres vocals and drums on it Because that section is following the vocals explicitly.
00:39:150 (4) - NC for consistency with 00:40:750 (1) - oops okay
00:50:550 (5) - why not NC here instead of 00:50:950 (1) - I'll just NC it and leave the other one c:

LGV
00:23:750 (1,1) - more spacing here please, it looks like a 3/4 slider because 00:24:150 - is a fairly strong note and the spacing is really small
Use higher AR please (i would recommend 8.5) because some places get really cluttered like 00:28:150 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) -
also, 00:28:950 (1,2) - is easier to read with higher AR
00:48:150 (1) - is there even a sound on the 1/8?? pretty sure the only sound is on 00:48:250 - and the 1/8 is just a held sound, furthermore it doesnt seem necessary to use such a complicated rhythm in a hyper diff

hard
00:23:350 (1,2) - these kinds of rhythms are too complex for hard diff Uh... I changed a little something ^^;
00:32:350 - ...what? There are elements of the music being removed. To support this, I removed elements of the map.
00:38:750 - ^ why are u just randomly putting pauses in the map? ^ tru

normal
00:12:950 (1) - i think if u want to follow the feint redticks u could at least use this rhythm, its fine to use 1/2 in normal, or rather, you should be using more 1/2

SPOILER

00:33:750 (2) - ^

easy
00:40:950 (1,1) - why do u go out of ur way to add a random 1/2 rhythm when its not even necessary lol
00:44:950 (1,2) - not a very good idea to stack these since the next object appears before the 1 disappears
00:32:150 (1,2) - ^
otherwise, best diff in the set, gj

2017-01-15 20:15 Stingy: U-uhm...
2017-01-15 20:15 Stingy: How do I blanket jumps...?
2017-01-15 20:16 ezek: like that
2017-01-15 20:16 ezek: idk what r u trying to do~
2017-01-15 20:17 Stingy: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/490093
2017-01-15 20:17 Stingy: Mr. Kib said blanket 1,2,3,4
2017-01-15 20:17 Stingy: but they're all notes
2017-01-15 20:18 ezek: which diff?
2017-01-15 20:18 Stingy: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1055777 Atik - Itz Mr. Grim [Kris-Kris-Krispy Kreme!]]
2017-01-15 20:20 ezek: hmm
2017-01-15 20:21 ezek: better ask him, idk what he means either :v
2017-01-15 20:22 ezek: oh
2017-01-15 20:22 ezek: OHHHHHHHH
2017-01-15 20:22 ezek: I SEE WHAT HAPPENED NOW
2017-01-15 20:23 Stingy: He won't answe
2017-01-15 20:24 ezek: seems ctrl+c didn't work quite well cuz he pasted the same objects as the firsts suggestion, so he probably meant to blanket 00:25:750 (1,4) -  these
2017-01-15 20:25 Stingy: Oh ;w;w;w;
2017-01-15 20:25 ezek: similar stuff has happened to me :v
2017-01-15 20:46 ezek: btw, spread between Normal and Hard seems quite big bc of the 1/2 usage on hard and most of time Normal being constant 1/1
2017-01-15 20:46 ezek: so you better have an Advanced in your set
2017-01-15 20:48 Stingy: N-NO
2017-01-15 20:48 Stingy: NO NO NO
2017-01-15 20:48 ezek: Y-YES
2017-01-15 20:48 ezek: YES YES YES
2017-01-15 20:50 Stingy: ;w;
2017-01-15 21:00 ezek: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1153177 Atik - Itz Mr. Grim [Hard]]
2017-01-15 21:00 ezek: 00:32:350 - I see Mr. Kib mentioned this strange pause in your map as well as your reply on that. Nice way of thinking to represent the music, but still, this pause doesn't feel adequate for this song and map here. It is true that some musical elements dissapear for a moment but it's not VERY obvious and that makes the map feel awkward, so I suggest mapping it.
2017-01-15 21:00 ezek: To support the not so obvious removal of the elements while not pausing the map I would do [http://puu.sh/tnVNQ/4d5b0f31be.jpg this]. (note this slider starts at 00:32:150 - )
2017-01-15 21:04 ezek: 00:38:550 (1) - In this big gap I would suggest [http://puu.sh/tnW2D/314b85de79.jpg this] (note selected objects are the ones I added)
2017-01-15 21:05 ezek: 00:44:950 (1) - here basically the same as 00:32:150 (3) - 
2017-01-15 21:15 Stingy: ACTION nods
2017-01-15 21:15 Stingy: I fixed it all
2017-01-15 21:15 Stingy: Post on thread for kds please ;w;
2017-01-15 21:16 ezek: perhaps we're not done here~ update pls
2017-01-15 21:16 Stingy: Oh lord >w<
2017-01-15 21:17 Stingy: Updated, Mr. ezek
2017-01-15 21:21 ezek: 00:40:750 - I thought about not placing a note here too, but what made me suggest placing one here is that there's that ticking sound + that other weird sound that is being followed in the other notes, so I highly recommend to add a note here. Seems it will be quite challenging to rearrange some objects, but I hope you're not lazy to do that :v
2017-01-15 21:22 ezek: 00:39:150 - in this other case I think skipping this note is fine since none of the mentioned sounds are here, so yee, skipping it here is fine
2017-01-15 21:23 ezek: 00:45:950 - add note here, same reasoning as 00:40:750 - 
2017-01-15 21:25 ezek: just take your time to rearrange stuff wisely, there's plenty of time, no need to rush c:
2017-01-15 21:31 Stingy: ACTION nods
2017-01-15 21:31 Stingy: I adjusted a bit
2017-01-15 21:32 Stingy: Had to play with NCs a bit =w=
2017-01-15 21:33 ezek: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1055777 Atik - Itz Mr. Grim [Kris-Kris-Krispy Kreme!]]
2017-01-15 21:33 ezek: 00:38:150 (4) - you did a noticeable sv change here and you didn't add nc (you can keep the one at 00:38:550 (1) - )
2017-01-15 21:34 ezek: notice this is another diff
2017-01-15 21:34 Stingy: :o oh yes I see
2017-01-15 21:37 ezek: that's it~ map an advanced diff, (to fill the gap between Normal and Hard) get at least one mod on that new diff and you may call me back for a recheck~
2017-01-15 21:37 Stingy: I'
2017-01-15 21:37 Stingy: I'll try my absolute best

00:09 Stingy: mod my Advanced diff :p
00:09 Plaudible: :(
00:09 Plaudible: okey
00:09 Plaudible: sendsend
00:09 *Stingy is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1055777 Atik - Itz Mr. Grim]
00:13 Plaudible: ;-;
00:13 Plaudible: pain
00:13 Stingy: "pain"
00:13 Stingy: pls
00:13 Plaudible: aesthetics 101
00:13 Plaudible: symmetry, consistent angles
00:13 Plaudible: 00:06:550 (1,3,4) - 
00:13 Plaudible: nani
00:14 Stingy: hold on let me get there
00:14 *Stingy rolls eyes
00:14 Plaudible: sass
00:14 Plaudible: u got
00:14 Plaudible: a vertical slider no rotation
00:14 Plaudible: 15 degree ish rotation
00:14 Plaudible: then like a 1 degree rotation and a 45 degree rotaion
00:14 Plaudible: idk what life is anymore
00:14 Stingy: omg don't be fucking mean to me
00:14 Plaudible: xd
00:15 Plaudible: i will bash u all dey erry dey m8
00:15 Plaudible: cause if u meet me irl you could destroy me
00:15 Stingy: 6 is copied from 1 for consistency
00:15 Plaudible: yea but
00:15 Stingy: and it goes like that to support the "flower petal" flow
00:15 Plaudible: theres no consistency with 3/4 in respect to that
00:15 Stingy: yes there muthereffing is
00:17 Plaudible: tried tomess with it a bit
00:17 Plaudible: http://puu.sh/to1KR/324bd09964.jpg
00:17 Plaudible: used similar angles between jumps
00:17 Plaudible: 00:07:750 (3) - 90 degrees rotation from angle in  00:06:550 (1) - 
00:17 Stingy: but then 6 and 1 :c
00:17 Plaudible: re copy paste
00:17 Plaudible: ez
00:18 Stingy: also confused
00:18 Stingy: how did you find the sloe
00:18 Stingy: slope
00:18 Plaudible: 00:10:550 (3,4) - ctrl j doesnt really mean too much here imo, since you dont use these consistent angles
00:18 Stingy: 00:06:550 (1) -
00:18 Plaudible: just make the slider next to it
00:18 Plaudible: xd
00:18 Plaudible: then parallel as possible
00:18 Plaudible: when you make the slider
00:18 Stingy: omg
00:18 Stingy: you're so dumb
00:18 Plaudible: rotate it 15* afte rmaking straight part first
00:19 Plaudible: aesthetics get a bit better later on
00:19 Plaudible: but still just same overall issues
00:19 Plaudible: flow looks okay
00:20 Plaudible: od is higher than hard
00:20 Plaudible: nani
00:20 Plaudible: pp farm for 100ks
00:20 Stingy: thank you
00:21 Stingy: I didn't have anyone to check stats
00:21 Stingy: I'm not good at them
00:21 Stingy: please give me stats
00:21 Plaudible: 00:13:750 (2,3,4) -  vs 00:08:150 (4,5,6) - \
00:21 Plaudible: flowery vs square
00:22 Stingy: what
00:22 Plaudible: the angle between jumps
00:23 Stingy: ok I fixed uh
00:23 Stingy: 00:06:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:23 Plaudible: sweg
00:23 Plaudible: 00:11:350 (5) -  multiple repeats arent too swanky anymore :(
00:23 Plaudible: idk, just not very frequently used and catch ppl off these days
00:23 Plaudible: you represent rhythm in song without them fine before/after, you dont need to use this as a crutch
00:24 Stingy: no bc then I have to like
00:24 Stingy: move the entire rest of the map
00:24 Stingy: to compensate for an object
00:25 Stingy: :/
00:25 Plaudible: you have a lot of leeway though with 2 1/1's lol
00:25 Stingy: also I don't care what "year" the map is in
00:26 Plaudible: 00:26:750 - why skip rhythm here
00:27 Stingy: 00:25:750 (1) - this one is a kick
00:27 Plaudible: you use the full dense rhythm everywhere else in the kiai-y bits
00:27 Stingy: 00:26:950 (1) - so this one is too
00:27 Stingy: co n s istency
00:27 Plaudible: with all the kicks later tho you dont skip the rhythm
00:27 Stingy: mmmm
00:28 Stingy: 00:33:350 (1) -
00:28 Plaudible: talkin bout the empty red ticks
00:28 Plaudible: o-o
00:28 Stingy: yeah I know
00:28 Plaudible: between 00:25:750 (1) - and 00:31:950 (5) - 
00:28 Stingy: they're meant to be that way
00:28 Plaudible: then do that in the later bits too pls :(
00:29 Stingy: no
00:29 Stingy: it's the beginning of kiai time
00:29 Stingy: so less intense less rhythm
00:29 Stingy: ALSO
00:29 Stingy: 00:26:750 -
00:29 Stingy: This
00:29 Stingy: there is nothing here to map
00:29 Stingy: based on the instruments I'm following
00:29 Plaudible: its literally the same sound you map everywhere else
00:29 Plaudible: ;-;
00:29 Stingy: nope
00:29 Stingy: 00:26:350 - synth here
00:29 Plaudible: it has the same wunky sound
00:30 Stingy: 00:26:550 - clap here
00:30 Stingy: 00:25:750 (1) - oh hey a kick
00:30 Stingy: 00:26:750 - hi-hat
00:30 Stingy: hi-hat = lame for beginning of map
00:31 Plaudible: why map out end of 00:36:150 (3) - then
00:31 Plaudible: should jst be circle
00:31 Stingy: 00:35:350 (1,2,3,4) - following repeated synth
00:33 Plaudible: ur killin me sm0lls
00:34 Stingy: 3,4 was originally going to be repeat but I wanted to move the mapping over
00:35 Stingy: and also for rhythmic diversity
00:38 Stingy: is that it
00:38 Stingy: can I uplaod now
00:40 Plaudible: ee
00:40 Plaudible: idk besides that
00:40 Plaudible: just got overall aesthetics
00:40 Plaudible: twerk on it l8r
00:46 Stingy: o
00:46 Stingy: post for kdssss
00:46 Plaudible: ughh fine

Bakari wrote:

as requested by one of your friends, hope that helps!

[General]

1. Preview Tmes are inconsistent throughut the set. You might want to fix that. (The one on Easy is 100ms ahead for some reason)
2. Just to make searching for the song easier, add it's to the tags. In case someone tries to type "it's mr grim."
   Note: we could also add the word mister for the same reason, but that is probably unnecessary. Sure >^<

[HOS' Easy]

1. 00:19:350 (1,3) - I believe that using curved shapes here would work better, after all, the song has repetive patterns and making all the 4 sliders of the combo similar feels like a good idea. example
   Quite simplistic, yet lovable.

[Polka's Normal]

1. 00:22:550 (1) - not exactly sure of the spinner here, the music changes on 00:23:750 - 00:24:150 - and even the easiest difficulty has these beats mapped. Perhaps, you might want to replace the spinner with hitobjects.
2. 00:41:750 (1,3) - I don't normally complain about overlaps, but this one is very noticeable on an otherwise perfectly clean difficulty.
   
   One of the easiest normals I've seen in a while. Nonetheless, it's all good and works with the difficulty spread.

[Light Hard]
These days people often refer to such difficulties as [Advanced]. Perhaps, you could do the same since it's exactly in-between Normal and Hard. I had it as Advanced but someone suggested otherwise ;w;

1. 00:22:550 (1) - the music changes on 00:23:750 - 00:24:150 - and the easiest difficulty has these beats mapped. Perhaps, you might want to replace the spinner with hitobjects. Alternatively, you could ask HOS to use a spinner there to be more consistent. Mapped
2. 00:32:150 (1) - how about splitting the slider or using something like the pattern you have in Hard? The bass sound asks for more and the way bass fades on 00:32:550 - makes the long slider feel a bit out of place. The only reason I'm saying no is because when you listen to the music as a whole, it loses most of the elements. The slider covers the "silence".
3. 00:34:950 (5,2) - 00:38:550 (1,3) - minor - are the overlaps here intended? Since there only two for the whole difficulty I find it a bit untidy. I actually agree with you /w\. The reason I have these is because (5,2) is a blanket and there's nowhere to put it while keeping (3,1) stacked. I also think that (1,3) is fine because it's enough to look okay aesthetically, but it's also still very clear and readable. I understand it's not a common occurrence, but I think it will be fine.
4. 00:50:950 - what do you think about placing an individual clickable circle here? The sound here kind of stands out and a single circle would show that better while giving a lot more emphasis to this beat. Yeah
   
   Decent. It's not exactly outstanding, but given the fact that this could be your first map it is something every new mapper would be jealous of.

omg thank you so much it is actually my first "real" map that I tried really hard on. I've been mapping unsubmitted maps and showing them to a friend, and I think I've improved a ton.

[Hard]

1. 00:13:750 (3,5) - players will see the overlap and will not expect a reverse-arrow to pop up. How about something a bit friendlier to the player? example *nod nod*
2. 00:15:350 (7,1) - these are the only visibly overlapping sliders in this part. (apart from the 1/4 ones, but they are a different thing, so yeah). Therefore, they feel somewhat out of your style, can we void that overlap? triangles save the day I tried re-structuring but... ^^;
3. 00:38:150 (6) - gis is the only 3/4 slider in the difficulty, why not simplify it to be either a 1/2 or 1/1 slider? Or, alternatively, you can make 00:23:750 (4) - this into into a 1/4 slider as well. The key is to be consistent with the rhythm. Hmm.... Alright.
   
   Pretty good, I enjoyed this one.

[LGV's Hyper]

1. 00:09:350 (4,1) - consider adding a bigger jump here to stress the powerful drum beat?
   Note: 00:15:950 (7,1) - same. You can start with smaller jump on the first pattern and get the spacing bigger on each jump to represent the increasing temnsion of the track.
2. 00:14:600 (1) - shouldn't this beat be snapped on the downbeat? This is what the music tells and what players would naturally expect.
3. 00:17:750 (1,2,3,4) - the jump between 2-3 feels overdone, it also pretty much devalues 00:19:350 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - this whole pattern as none of the introduced here spacing changes nor the increase itself appear to be difficult in comparison to the previous pattern.
4. 00:48:150 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I generally disagree with the 1/8 beats here as I don't think they are necessary here and they don't seem to fit that well, yet, if you insist on keeping them, at least mute the slidertails, so, players don't get to hear 1/8 doubles like 00:49:500 - which sound quite strange.
   
   The 1/8 snaps kind of spoil my overall impression and I don't feel like I could agree with them. Apart from them everything lese was okayish.

[Kris-Kris-Krispy Kreme!]
I don't really get how the difficulty name is relevant to the idea/theme of the song. Can you comment on that to make it clear for me and future BNs/QATs? The song says "Kris-Kris-Kris-Kris-Krispy Kreme!" Right before the drop. I figured I would shorten it to just "Kris-Kris-Krispy Kreme!" So it's not super long :3

1. 00:16:150 (1,2,3) - the music gets more and more intense constantly, hence, lower DS between 2-3 did not feel appropriate here. Perhaps a stack could do the trick, or maybe a square-pattern? 00:16:150 (1) - Has a different kick sound than (2,3,4), so I put (2,3,4) in a group since their sounds matched.
   Note: 00:18:150 (2,3,4) - same here. Mhm.
2. 00:43:750 - the strong kick here is unclickable to a player and it could get quite confusing, consider using rhythm like this as to make sure that all the strong beats have clickable objects to represent them? "The key is to be consistent with the rhythm."
   
   Looks quite okay. I am not so sure of your spacing in a couple of patterns mentioned above, but it is very playable, so I guess it's just me.

Quite a decent set. Pretty impressive.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

There's no way for me to put into words how appreciative I am. Thank you so so so much.

osu file format v14

[General]
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PreviewTime: 23350
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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GridSize: 4
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Title:Itz Mr. Grim
TitleUnicode:Itz Mr. Grim
Artist:Atik
ArtistUnicode:Atik
Creator:Stingy
Version:Polka's Normal
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2,268,30950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
2,128,31350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,85,31750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,198,32150,6,0,B|292:216|292:160|376:192,2,150
157,71,33750,2,0,B|83:53|83:109|-1:77,2,150
268,156,35350,6,0,L|336:64,1,100
376,208,36150,2,0,L|428:304,1,100
288,260,36950,2,0,L|184:260,1,100
68,332,37750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,38550,6,0,B|376:140|376:140|424:116,2,150
172,40,40150,2,0,B|68:40|68:40|20:64,2,150
116,168,41750,6,0,P|104:216|124:280,1,100
228,348,42550,2,0,P|240:300|220:236,1,100
143,153,43350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
258,72,43750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
369,157,44150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,289,44550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,287,44950,6,0,L|96:348,2,100
300,208,46150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,160,46550,2,0,P|156:112|176:52,1,100
300,112,47350,2,0,P|312:160|292:220,1,100
218,322,48150,5,0,0:0:0:0:
84,278,48550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,138,48950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,95,49350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,208,49750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,49850,12,0,50950,0:0:0:0:

Gabe wrote:

krispi krime

[Advanced]
Is there a reason why the kiai time is not the same with the other difficulties? (Including the ones you mapped) ,w, fixed

1. 00:15:750 (7) - I'd move this circle to x:179 y:126 to keep a nice spacing consistency. It's quite off by ~0.05x AiMod has no issues ;w;
2. 00:36:550 (4) - The spacing with the previous and the next objects is not consistent. Try moving these around to keep a spacing consistency of 1,40x ^
3. 00:39:750 (3) - The overlap of this circle with the previous slider (3) looks quite horrible. I feel like it would be better to simply stack this circle with the end of the slider (1) instead. It will feel more natural also. I think it looks fine >.> This pattern also supports the look of the angled sliders
4. 00:40:150 (1,2,3,4,5) - The emplacement of these objects feels like they were very "squished" together. It would be better if you were giving some space between them! (If you look at the sliders (2,4,5), the space between the sliders 2 and 4 is very limited while the space of the sliders 4 and 5 is more wide. Keep a certain distance between them. True
5. 00:44:950 (1) - For this circle, the spacing is not consistent with the previous and the next object. Try playing around to keep it consistent with a spacing of 1,40x. ;w; But.. AiMod
6. 00:50:550 (3,1) - Either you align these two objects or you move the circle (1) a little higher up yeah not sure what was going on there

Good!

[Hard]

1. 00:18:950 (4) - Considering what you have done previously with 00:16:950 (3,4) - and the other patterns, this slider should be moved to x:272 y:256 because of the spacing between the jump and the sliders. Also, by doing this, the slider will be perfectly aligned with the next object! That was my intent ;w; Idk what what wrong here
2. 00:20:550 (6,1,2,3) - I love the flow here! Wouldn't it be better if the slider (3) was moved some grids up? The flow will be more interesting. ;w; I want to agree but I also think it's fine where it is
3. 00:23:750 (4) - If we look at the flow of the previous two sliders, this slider should be reversed with CTRL+H and moved at this point: (Look in the box)
   
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   omfg that's what I originally had but I didn't like it gljunqlefnlqef fixing

[LGV's Hyper]
Good ~

[Kris-Kris Krispy Kreme]

1. 00:50:950 (1) - Looking at the flow of the previous circles and this one, I believe it would be more interesting if you move it at x:320 y:360 nuh ;w;

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