1. ADRENALINE (6.14 stars, 1614 notes)

CypCypCyprian wrote:

storyboardFUCKINGCLUELESS ask exile

Arusamour wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on November 29, 2016 at 7:23:12 PM

Artist: Camellia
Title: introduction / NEURO-CLOUD-9
Tags: cameltek kamelcamellia かめるかめりあ CTCD-013 insane inflame neurofunk breakcore nano mortis byfar vert taku undeadcapulet spaghetti sing nerova riuz gx raikozen evilelvis -kevincela- grumd rohit6 bonzi ephermeralfetish
BPM: 172
Filesize: 13994kb
Play Time: 06:29
Difficulties Available:

1. ADRENALINE (6.05 stars, 1583 notes)

Download: Camellia - introduction / NEURO-CLOUD-9
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INSANE INFLAME [introduction/NEURO-CLOUD-9]

byfar・Vert・taku・UndeadCapulet・Arusamour・Spaghetti・Sing・Nerova Riuz GX・Raikozen・EvilElvis・-kevincela-・grumd・Rohit6・Bonzi・EphemeralFetish

beatmap progression

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hitsoundINCOMPLETE

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1. 00:09:397 (3) - In my case I will Ctrl + G
2. 00:11:141 (1,2,3) - I can not deal with it because I am too far away
3. 00:20:036 (1,1,2) - 00:20:124 (1,2) - How about using as a kick slider?
4. 02:05:472 - Can not you lower the volume?
   02:08:263 - 02:09:310 -
5. 02:25:094 (1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1) -
   I think this part is very nice!!
6. 04:36:257 (1,2,3) - Is it intentional that DS is different?
   
   good map!

Hollow Wings wrote:

1. 01:34:862 (1) - this maybe regarded as a bulai slider for overlapped itself's slider track too much, maybe replace the red dot there (with more track left after the red dot's place). it should be fine since it's not a complete overlap and the way to follow the sliderbody is obvious to the player

Haganenno wrote:

UndeadCapulet
01:37:478 - this could be a hitcircle, then the player has to click something to build-up into the shout. not getting rid of my doubled repeat slider rhythms, they emphasize the strong drums and the constant guitar in a great way for me, the repeat bouncing and sliderbody fit the vocals well for me too
01:46:025 - this is the strong sound. This is where the jump must be. on another thought, I actually don't know which way works better, just throwing this idea out for you to decide i emphasize basically every downbeat with an antijump the same way as here, consider the entire cursor motion when it comes to emphasis and not just "bigger spacing is stronger"

bor wrote:

01:38:699 (3,4) - these aren't stacked because?... they are same as 01:35:908 (3,4) - 01:37:653 (1) - to 01:40:356 (4) - are all one thought, I'd rather show how 01:35:908 (3,4) - and 01:41:489 (3,4) - are similar and keep this part feeling more distinct
for this section I don't believe double repeats most accurately depict the music, but they work well :/ ww never changing these

Kibbleru wrote:

arusamour do u have the longest drain time??

or are u planning to map a difficulty of your own

bor wrote:

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00:57:013 (4,1,2,3) - rhythm fits song better when ctrl g imo the current rhythm seems better to me
01:01:374 - I see what you are doing, but this seems to have a growth of intensity its kind of weird you took it down a notch rhythmically and motion-wise 01:01:374 - some strong beats begins here, i just follow them and ignored others

Haganenno wrote:

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Vert
00:51:432 - I would have the slider here, this guitar sound is definitely stronger and is the main theme here. Also, your collab partners are mapping this strong sounds like this, you should too (for consistency), at least in this occasion when there is nothing else to really emphasise. i think the slider is not necessary, i didnt hear anything to put a slider

Doormat wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

arusamour do u have the longest drain time??

or are u planning to map a difficulty of your own

following up on this, i did some basic maths and raikozen actually has the longest drain time. if you plan on hosting the set, fix this.



shhhh i know i made some typos on the notepad or i could've used excel instead of manually calculating everything but it was 3 am when i did this and my brain wasn't functioning properly

Kibbleru wrote:

well.. the RC does state that the host has to have contributed the most to the set.. and he mapped a rather basic calm part..

u can just map a break or something.

EphemeralFetish wrote:

IIRC As long as the rest of the mappers agree to one person having ownership of the map, then it doesnt matter if the owner has slightly less drain than others.