Well, let's see
[General]
I think the current diff name isn't rankable as of now. because "home" and "away" doesn't clearly represent the diff progression here, unless if you add "lv." here.
I'm thinking that "home" means safe in the house, while "away" is going out facing many other new things. maybe it shows progression, but it just doesn't clear and implying the meaning quite vague imo.
in the current diff name, you need to change "home" diff to "Normal" diff.
About the HS, Normal-Hitnormal and Stapler have huge beginning delay.. (rip mp3)
use this:
http://puu.sh/sTGNo.wav for Hitnormal.
and
http://puu.sh/sTHL4/73194ce12a.wav for Stapler.
[Normal]
00:02:395 (2395|1,3195|1) - i'm not sure why are these the only LN which has this kind of 1/4 gap in normal diff, It would be good if it got arranged in a way that it won't be have that 1/4 LN gap within the same column.. my suggestion would be :
http://puu.sh/sTFhM/3f477b9fa2.png (started from 00:02:995 - )
00:08:795 - i will just move this to col 4 so that the snare have an actualy differentiation with 00:07:995 (7995|0) - which is a deep kick sound.. and the way it consistently approach col 1 makes it unbalanced considering the current LN pattern there.
[Hard]
00:02:661 - 00:02:795 - i find that it would be fit that you start map the krik sound here..
00:16:395 (16395|0) - probably try to move this to col.3? it just feels a bit uneasy with those 00:16:261 (16261|1,16395|0,16661|1,16795|0,17061|1,17195|0) - when the pattern could be tweaked a "bit" like other section.
00:31:195 (31195|3) - just my personal opinion, but this note itself actually really fitting if you put it at col 3, because the violin instrument at this note already "dissapear", leave only krik sound present, that's why it would be more match if it got put in the col.3
00:31:995 (31995|1,32261|0) - if you accept my suggestion above, you can try switch column between these notes? because the violin bg sound already exist again at 00:31:995 - , which makes me think it would be more fit if 00:31:995 (31995|1) - be at col.1
well, more or like will be like :
http://puu.sh/sTKNh/e0e5ec77a3.pngNot really sure how to mod this tbh..
some of LN in normal maybe can be a bit different with hard, but it's just preferences.
call me back.