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snowball112
Bubbled~
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Final IRC check
22:26 gaston_2199: Hey! I applied the changes you sent me on the forum. When you can check it
22:28 snowball112: i'll check now I think
22:34 snowball112: alright, 02:44:577 - this could be a k
22:34 snowball112: mono is fine for the piano I think
22:35 gaston_2199: 02:45:949 (2) - d?
22:35 snowball112: no, just leave as k
22:35 snowball112: it's better if you just mono k for piano
22:36 snowball112: and then start using d and k for long instruments later
22:36 gaston_2199: Ok
22:36 snowball112: just make 02:44:577 - k, rest is fine here
22:36 gaston_2199: Well, fixed
22:40 snowball112: ok, 04:42:520 - the part starting here
22:41 snowball112: I think 04:48:006 - this one should be the same as 04:45:263 (232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239) -
22:42 snowball112: 04:48:006 - http://puu.sh/sFsdR/5bd99b3154.jpg
22:42 snowball112: just looks neater that way
22:46 snowball112: i'm still a bit unhappy about 04:20:920 (74,75) - 04:22:292 (82,83) - 04:23:663 (90,91) - that these are not dk :< because the pitch is different to 04:25:035 (98,99) - for example
22:48 snowball112: 04:26:406 (107,108) - dk and 04:27:777 (115,116) - dk too, so you transition better
22:48 snowball112: it would make dk_dk_dk_kd and dk_dk_kd_kd, could be nice for transition in this part
22:50 gaston_2199: Mmm, sounds good
22:51 snowball112: 04:37:377 (175,176) - and 04:38:749 (184,185) - would be dk too, indicator to transition
22:51 snowball112: so there you would have dk_dk_kk_kk
22:54 gaston_2199: I try to follow on the drums throughout the song and i think that d is not sound good
22:55 gaston_2199: Since here 04:32:235 (141) - for example, is k
22:55 gaston_2199: And I want to constantly follow that
22:55 snowball112: then you can leave these
22:55 snowball112: the ones I mentioned first are the more important ones
22:58 snowball112: can you update? that should be everything
22:59 gaston_2199: Ok
23:00 gaston_2199: done
23:00 snowball112: alright, last recheck
23:02 gaston_2199: I thins change this 04:37:892 (176,185) - for k
23:02 gaston_2199: think*
23:04 snowball112: you also forgot a finish on 01:05:835 -
23:04 snowball112: 01:16:806 - maybe too, but that one is optional
23:05 snowball112: and 03:50:577 - should be a d
23:05 gaston_2199: I forgot lol
23:05 gaston_2199: Ok
23:06 snowball112: maybe 03:57:435 - d as well, for better structure
23:06 gaston_2199: 03:57:263 (193) - Remove finish?
23:07 snowball112: probably, other sounds like this don't have finish either
23:08 gaston_2199: Ok, it's better to remove it
23:10 snowball112: I'm thinking that you could maybe change 04:40:292 - to d
23:10 snowball112: maybe 04:41:663 - as well
23:10 snowball112: to buildup more closely to the ddk_d_kdk from previous parts
23:12 gaston_2199: r Ok
23:12 gaston_2199: Ok*
23:13 snowball112: how about 04:44:149 - and 04:45:092 - d as well? very optional, but so much k is a bit loud
23:14 gaston_2199: You're right, it sounds better as you said it
23:15 snowball112: ok, last thing
23:15 snowball112: maybe 05:30:520 - and 05:36:006 - k
23:17 snowball112: because you used ddkkd before at 05:29:663 - for example, and 05:30:349 (156,157,158) - is stronger, so maybe dkk here
23:17 gaston_2199: I had thought about it
23:18 snowball112: i think it would work well :P
23:18 gaston_2199: The same in 05:41:492 - and 05:46:977 (54) - ¿
23:18 gaston_2199: ?*
23:19 snowball112: yes
23:19 gaston_2199: Beatmap updated
RuinedChicken
Took me a while, huh?

The issues I saw at a first glace are no longer there. I've played your map a gooooood amount of times. No inconsistencies within your own style that I can see. Even the one part I didn't like is still mapped consistently.

To sum up, it's pretty good. I'm shooting a star here and wish you good luck. Hope to see it ranked : D
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

RuinedChicken wrote:

Took me a while, huh?

The issues I saw at a first glace are no longer there. I've played your map a gooooood amount of times. No inconsistencies within your own style that I can see. Even the one part I didn't like is still mapped consistently.

To sum up, it's pretty good. I'm shooting a star here and wish you good luck. Hope to see it ranked : D
Me alegro de que le haya gustado.
Muchas gracias por la estrella :)
Saludos!
Secretpipe
Awesome!
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Secretpipe wrote:

Awesome!
:) :D
Vulkin
wtf am i doing modding a bubbled map
also im sorry for modding at the last minute :( , been busy with so many exams and stuffs.

-Continue?-
im not sure if the HP is ok, since its a marathon and they tend to have a much lower HP for their length, might need to recheck this

01:37:206 (233,234) - Ctrl+G?
02:07:292 (108) - k for consistency?
02:12:777 (150) - dont feel like this is needed

im really sorry for modding this thing at the last minute of being ranked ;A;
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Vulkin wrote:

wtf am i doing modding a bubbled map
also im sorry for modding at the last minute :( , been busy with so many exams and stuffs.

-Continue?-
im not sure if the HP is ok, since its a marathon and they tend to have a much lower HP for their length, might need to recheck this Para mi está bien ya que no tiene patrones complicados, se puede reponer rápido el HP en algunos momentos. De igual manera lo pensaré

01:37:206 (233,234) - Ctrl+G? Cambiado, es el mismo sonido nada más que con volumen más fuerte.
02:07:292 (108) - k for consistency? Me gusta, cambiado.
02:12:777 (150) - dont feel like this is needed Sigo el electro sound

im really sorry for modding this thing at the last minute of being ranked ;A; No importa, todo cuenta aunque sea en el último momento :D
Gracias por tu mod!
Beatmap updated~ (bubble popped)
Vulkin

gaston_2199 wrote:

Beatmap updated~ (bubble popped)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
snowball112
Rebubbled.
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Vulkin
ok that was fast o-o
DakeDekaane
Hola, vi tu mapa por pura curiosidad y me gustó bastante a pesar de que este tipo de música casi no es de mi agrado.

Solo unos pequeños comentarios:
El kiai de 01:28:806 - debería comenzar en 01:29:149 -, que es donde realmente empieza el "climax".

01:29:149 - 01:46:977 - Esta parte la sentí un poco inconsistente, al parecer te enfocas más en el sintetizador, con los dons acorde al ritmo de las percusiones, pero hay unas cuantas notas que rompen esto.
Por ejemplo, empiezas con un kat en 01:29:149 (177) - pero tienes dons en 01:31:892 (198) - y 01:34:635 (218) - , podrías hacer 01:29:149 (177) - un don para mantener la consistencia.
De igual manera para 01:38:749 (240) - (don) y 01:41:492 (258) - 01:44:235 (279) - (kats), volver los kats, dons.

02:49:035 - Te sugeriría subir el volumen al menos a 25% aquí, esta sección no es tan calmada como parece ser, y las notas se escuchan muy bajo (en mi opinión).
03:29:835 (33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48) - Esta sección sonaría mejor como ddkkkddkkkddkkkd, reflejaría mejor el cambio en el ritmo.
03:54:520 - Esta sección teniendo 100% de volumen es un poco raro considerando que donde reduces a 80% es relativamente más intenso, te sugeriría que tu cambio de volumen fuera algo así.

Sería todo de mi parte, puedes llamarme para dar la 2da burbuja.
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hola, vi tu mapa por pura curiosidad y me gustó bastante a pesar de que este tipo de música casi no es de mi agrado.

Solo unos pequeños comentarios:
El kiai de 01:28:806 - debería comenzar en 01:29:149 -, que es donde realmente empieza el "climax".

01:29:149 - 01:46:977 - Esta parte la sentí un poco inconsistente, al parecer te enfocas más en el sintetizador, con los dons acorde al ritmo de las percusiones, pero hay unas cuantas notas que rompen esto.
Por ejemplo, empiezas con un kat en 01:29:149 (177) - pero tienes dons en 01:31:892 (198) - y 01:34:635 (218) - , podrías hacer 01:29:149 (177) - un don para mantener la consistencia.
De igual manera para 01:38:749 (240) - (don) y 01:41:492 (258) - 01:44:235 (279) - (kats), volver los kats, dons.

02:49:035 - Te sugeriría subir el volumen al menos a 25% aquí, esta sección no es tan calmada como parece ser, y las notas se escuchan muy bajo (en mi opinión).
03:29:835 (33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48) - Esta sección sonaría mejor como ddkkkddkkkddkkkd, reflejaría mejor el cambio en el ritmo.
03:54:520 - Esta sección teniendo 100% de volumen es un poco raro considerando que donde reduces a 80% es relativamente más intenso, te sugeriría que tu cambio de volumen fuera algo así.

Sería todo de mi parte, puedes llamarme para dar la 2da burbuja.
Apliqué todo lo que me has marcado. Aquí 01:29:149 - y aquí 01:39:092 - tuve que cambiar algunos patrones para modificar lo que me marcaste, no me había percatado de esos dons. Creo que ahora está mucho más consistente que antes.

Muchas gracias por ver mi mapa!
Beatmap updated~
DakeDekaane
Me gustaron las modificaciones que realizaste.

¡Buena suerte!

#2
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

DakeDekaane wrote:

Me gustaron las modificaciones que realizaste.

¡Buena suerte!

#2
Muchas gracias!! :)
Nwolf
weff

From 02:40:463 - til 04:09:606 - I'd suggest having 0.75x SV, with possible increasing SV on the already existing green lines (03:24:349 - maybe have slow SV increase similar to 05:15:435 - ). This should make it more distinguishable from more intense parts!

04:23:663 - Don't wanna have two 1/4 triplets again in the 1/2 7-plets, like 04:12:692 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - ?

05:42:349 (17) - Inconsistent with previous versions of this in the kiai, should be a don (05:28:635 (143) - )

call me back~
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Ntiger wrote:

weff weff

From 02:40:463 - til 04:09:606 - I'd suggest having 0.75x SV, with possible increasing SV on the already existing green lines (03:24:349 - maybe have slow SV increase similar to 05:15:435 - ). This should make it more distinguishable from more intense parts! I applied this from here 03:24:349 - until 04:09:606 -. Here 02:40:463 - I think it does not go here because there is not much intensity, but I changed the SV for 0.85/0x

04:23:663 - Don't wanna have two 1/4 triplets again in the 1/2 7-plets, like 04:12:692 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - ? Sure!I think it got better

05:42:349 (17) - Inconsistent with previous versions of this in the kiai, should be a don (05:28:635 (143) - ) I have not noticed, fixed

call me back~ HYPE
I thought you were not going to see him, thank you very much! :D
Beatmap updated~
Nwolf
Since this SHOULD be ranked on the 25th:

Merry Christmas!

Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Ntiger wrote:

Since this SHOULD be ranked on the 25th:

Merry Christmas!

Finally!!
Ooh yeah, thanks to all! I really happy :)

¡Merry christmas and happy new year!
SYAHME
Congrats >L_<
Kyouren

SYAHME wrote:

Congrats >L_<
Raediaufar
Woow gratz man!!! Really love this :3
Topic Starter
gaston_2199
Thanks all for support. I hope I can continue making more maps to qualified :)
toara_fict
GJ
Mercurial
Why Taiko? :c
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Mercurial wrote:

Why Taiko? :c
Porque es más fácil mapearlo :c
Secretpipe
2hard4me ;_;

gratz!
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