Overall
- Do we really need that 'Crazy!!!' SB in every diff? In 'Hard', that part is particulary hard but others are not.
Short
00:21:924 (2) - Well, if you follow the lyrics, Maybe slider from 00:21:744 ~ 00:22:647 might work.
00:33:491 (2) - Same as above.
00:37:105 (1) - Add finish in the start of the slider?
00:48:671 (1) - ^
Normal
- Generally, I think you can add more hitsound in this one. (Consider using normal-normal with soft-normal or custom hitsound sound similar with drum in this song?)
00:31:684 (2) - Clap in the start of the slider? (This applies to every counterpart in this difficulty.)
01:46:503 (1,2,3) - As drum beats are quite strong here, how about somewhat 'stronger' hitsound than now?
01:47:226 (3) - shorthen this by 1/2?
01:47:769 (1) - How about finish instead of clap?
02:07:828 (X) - Add circle here?
02:34:936 (3) - Remove repeat of this slider, then add a slider from 02:35:298 ~ 02:35:659?
03:49:393 (1) - Remove new combo?
Taiko Stage
- Nobody likes sudden, especially long 1/4 streams. (Actually it's not that serious in this map, but it's occurs quite too much these days.)
00:15:489 (9,10) - When I first here this, I thought this two 1/4 notes are somewhat strange, well, I'm not that sure though. (This applies to every counterpart in this difficulty.)
00:21:272 (9) - Remove?
00:22:356 (20) - Remove, then add 'ddd' (d means red note so this is triple 1/4 dons, a. k. a red notes.) in 00:22:446.
00:24:073 (32~40) - I think it would be better if you split these. (This apears again in 00:35:638 and you don't need to split this one.)
00:32:838 (9~20) - Same as 00:21:272 (9) & 00:22:356 (20).
00:37:446 (2,4,8) - Remove? (Or remove only 4,8?)
00:38:712 (4) - Add k? (Kat, a. k. a. blue note.)
00:48:651 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as 00:37:446 (2,4,8) & 00:38:712 (4).
00:58:139 (21,22,23,1) - Misplaced by 1/4.
00:58:681 (1) - Shorthen this by 1/4.
01:01:663 (9~17) - This is kinda too 'radical' pattern for here, try something others, like, uh... ddddk ddk?
01:02:928 (19) - Change to k?
01:04:555 (32,33,34,35) - Remove 33, 34, 35 and change 32 to drum roll lasting for 3 beats.
01:13:230 (7~15) - Same as 01:01:663 (9~17).
01:16:121 (31,32,33,34) - Same as 01:04:555 (32,33,34,35).
01:34:916 ~ 02:45:398 - This is almost same with first part. All of my suggestions are applied to here too.
02:21:904 (3,4,5,1) - ddddk?
02:22:447 (2) - Remove?
03:04:193 (41) - Change to d?
03:05:278 (50) - ^
03:15:127 (4) - move to 03:15:037.
03:33:109 ~ 03:55:880 - This part is almost same as previous kiai parts. All of my suggestion above about kiai part is also applied to here.
Hard
- Why volumes are so low particulary in this diff?
- More hitsound, as I said in 'Normal'?
00:19:722 (1) - Spacing?
00:48:094 (4) - How about moving a grid right?
00:48:275 (5) - How about moving a grid down?
01:10:685 (X) - Add a circle here?
01:22:252 (X) - ^
01:37:794 (1,2) - Remove clap in return point of 1 and add clap in 2?
01:46:469 (1) - Add finish in the start of the slider?
01:46:830 (2) - ^
01:47:192 (3,4) - Add finish?
01:47:553 (5) - Add finish in the end of the slider?
01:58:035 (X) - add a circle?
02:09:058 (4,5) - Same as 00:48:094 (4) & 00:48:275 (5).
00:48:275 (X) - add a circle?
02:44:661 (X) - ^
02:45:746 (X) - ^
04:19:451 (3,4) - Remove?
Well, suggestion is just suggestion. (Some misplaced note issues in Taiko map are exceptions. I'm serious about those.)
Standard maps don't have serious problem, I think.
About Taiko map, well, you are at least better than someone I know, but still...
没有的话打开重新排版一次吧，不然你这图就好似
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