Nekomata Master - Greening · forum

Lulu-

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Lulu- 2016-11-25T05:09:48+00:00

My internet connection is pretty much dead atm, but enough to reply to the mods, I reworked the hitsounding on my diff and Nokashi's diff, but I didn't get to upload yet

Peuniak wrote:
00:15:452 (5,6) - those too are kinda crooked, placing 00:15:658 (7) to make a straight line with them fits more, also most of your "1/4 circle + slider" patterns are straight so I guess you should fix it Wasn't sure if to keep it like that or not, fixed this now
00:15:658 (7) - if you accepted ^ also move the whole pattern that its sliderend overlaps with 00:16:377 (10) sliderend It already did tho, might be because I changed it offline
00:25:007 (3) - ctrl + shift + r for 10 degrees through selection centre Fixed
00:28:706 (4) - this one should be curved same as 00:27:473 (5,7,2,2,4) Done, I didn't even realize this tbh
00:39:185 (7,8,9) - not sure if you made this specially, but this is curved a little bit, should be straight imo Fixed
00:39:802 - break? the music is audibly here I don't feel like this would fit
00:42:678 - personally i don't like this part in your map, rythm section is still intense, but the map doesn't emphasize the music, for example 00:52:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) what are those objects emphasizing, listen on 25% speed this moment from 00:53:980 to 00:54:596 you can definitely hear that the bass line is going crazy here, a great place for any kind of short sliders or something, what I mean is that you can make your map more interesting with putting few objects, which will fit the rythm and the map concept itself (okay done with that, I'm talking too much, I guess you get it) I'll consider it
01:19:254 (6,7) - blanket this more properly, placing 7 a little bit higher (this will make like double blanket structure of 6 with beginning of 7, and this little curve of 7 with beginning of 6, something like thishttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6633376) This is what I originally did but people apparently hated this
01:28:500 (7,8) - same as first point of my mod, I kinda dont like it Fixed
01:31:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - wow, those jumps are unnecessary, you can at least overlap 01:31:993 (3,8) or smth How exactly are they? This is the most intense part of the song and if anything would be inappropriate it would be the first 3's spacing

smsh150 wrote:
M4M
General
Nice Touhou BG for non-Touhou song x) barely even noticable xd

Tranquility
00:05:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - You should use whistles with the same style as you did at the start. Reworked hitsounding
00:10:213 (4) - You can polish the slider a bit. Try this http://puu.sh/srOOy/8613303cc5.jpg Fixed in another way
00:19:665 - Take Kiai off here since this isn't the place where the chorus starts again. This should be fine, it's as strong as the beginning of the chorus and leads right into it
00:15:555 (6,7) - Wrong rhythm. If you don't know the rhythm properly, slow down music speed and listen closely. The stoppage start at 00:15:555 - , not at 00:15:658 (7) - I think it's fine because of the flute, but I'll change it once anybody else points this out
00:17:507 (4,5,6,7,8) - To my mind this looks messy. Try to make it clearer, for example, by adding distance to jumps. Fixed
00:32:747 (3) - Rhythm is wrong. The rhythm is 1/6. Here's the correct: http://puu.sh/srP4z/546defc639.jpg Fixed
00:33:158 (1) - This note should not be here, since there isn't any sound that could be mapped. Fixed
00:33:226 (2) - I think this note is too close to 00:32:815 (4) - since there is 1/2 gap. Fixed
Try to polish your pattern. For examble, sometimes a object overlaps with another object: 00:33:569 (3,4) - overlaps, 00:35:623 (1,2) - doesn't overlap, 00:36:034 (3,4) - doesn't overlap. You need to make them all look same, otherwise it looks messy. Fixed
00:40:932 - I don't think there is need to make break to end earlier. Just let it end normally/automaticly. I like putting the break there better. I've added this, because it felt off to me without the break
01:09:391 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Whistles sound here messy. I'm suggesting to remove them and find better places to put. For example: every 1/2 starting at 01:09:391 - Already fixed
01:55:418 (4) - Imo reverse is useless since there isn't any sound to map at 01:56:240 - I may change this when other people complain about this
Those are the biggest issues. I don't really get why you change distances so often. For example, you should use same distances often to make your map look clear and symmetric. I'll work on it

I hope my mod was useful!

Thank you very much for your mods, I'll mod one of your maps when my internet is fixed Peuniak!

Nokashi

304 posts

Joined December 2014

Nokashi 2016-11-25T15:30:23+00:00

wew my weekly weekend mod reply

Osu FLagstar wrote:
Hello, M4M from #modreqs

[Nokashi's Insane]

00:11:034 (1,2,3) - Maybe do a semiquaver triplet arrow slider. Would fit the rhythm better. removed circles and made it a straight up reverse instead, i dont see it being semiquaver ;w;

00:15:966 (5,6,7) - I don't think that this rhythm is justified considering you mapped the flute before. i didnt want to leave a promiment beat like that, plus all three circles land on beats, am i supposed to be entitled to only one instrument? :p

00:19:870 (7) - Why not 2 single notes here? I Agree, fixed!

00:26:034 (2,3,4) - A semiquaver triplet arrow slider would fit better. Like here 00:43:706 (4) That triplet was me undermapping but it sounds bad as a triplet after all, so ill take your suggestion!

00:39:185 (2,3,4) - See above. Fixed

00:59:528 (1) - Not a nice blanket. I Agree, i think its better now

01:26:651 (1,2) - Maybe ctrl+g for better flow and do something else with the 3. The whole pattern is remapped to accompany this and the next suggestion, im so blind for ignoring that triplet!!

01:28:089 (2,1) - I feel like this should be a triplet. Would make a nice pattern together with the following triplets. ^

01:31:993 (7) - This slider is placed in a weird direction imo. it is now curvy and more to the left

01:51:308 (3) - Blanket. Slow part has been remapped to better suit yours and Antares' suggestions

01:54:699 (4,5) - Make a triplet here. ^

Antares- wrote:
[Nokashi's Insane]
looks pretty cool actually, but spacing in kiai could be less spiky

00:02:199 (2) - drum additions, i guess it's not intended? Uhh i like the variety it gives
00:16:788 (1,2) - why stack here? previous pattern goes 0.75x ds here and it's pretty similar at both song-wise and play-wise true, fixed
00:20:897 (5) - blanket? Fixed!
00:21:514 (7) - NC ^
00:22:541 (1) - drop NC here then ^
00:23:363 (6) - NC ^
00:30:760 (4,5,6) - spacing could be equal here Fixed
00:33:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - be consistant with NCing to previous pattern: 00:26:651 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fixed!
00:42:062 (5,6) - this would work better as 3 kicksliders imho i agree, fixed
01:28:500 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - im not sure if spacing here isn't kinda overkilled, that also applies to most sudden ~2.5-3.0x jumps like 01:16:582 (4,5,6) - 01:23:363 (5,6,7) - honestly i'm above intended skilllevel of that difficulty, so i'm not sure how much it's a problem for insane-lvl player, but surely it's at least a bit Whole pattern has been remapped for better playability
01:23:954 (7,8,1) - fix ds to equal Fixed!
01:46:788 (5) - this is too far for that slower part IMO i'd do something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6618519 Slow part has been remapped to better fit your suggestions!
01:52:130 (1) - 01:55:418 (1) - jumps are too big. it's slow outro, let it be easy, because thats what player expects after such calming part ^
01:57:062 (2,3,4) - you can NC those, just suggestion Yep

smsh150 wrote:
Nokashi's Insane

00:26:034 (2,3,4) - The rhrythm is wrong. The correct rhythm is snapped to 1/6 and has one note more. Please change the rhythm since now you are undermapping it. It can be heard when you slow the speed to 25% and listen closely. Fixed in previous mod
00:39:185 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:46:171 (1) - To my mind, NC at 00:46:377 (2) - would look better. Fixed!
01:17:199 (7) - Stack is bit off with 01:15:966 (3) - Fixed!
01:27:267 (1,2,3) - Rhythm is 1/6 as earlier ^ Fixed
01:30:555 (1,2) - 1/6 ^ Fixed
01:32:610 (2) - Stack is bit off with 01:31:993 (7) - Fixed
01:58:808 (1) - Whistle at the end would be reaaaaally great :O Yeaaahhh!

I hope my mod was useful! it was!

thanks everyone for the mods!!!!

Updated diff!

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Steffen

85 posts

Joined March 2014

Steffen 2016-11-27T15:29:28+00:00

Hi! M4M ^^

Stan's Hard

AiMod was not happy about timing points. Conflicts with Tranquility and Nokashi's Insane!
00:14:733 (4) - Blanketing the sliderend with this slider a bit better?
00:39:185 (6) - How about putting this slightly more down and 00:39:596 (7) mirrored to 00:38:980 (5) ?
01:32:404 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think spacing these out would be nice, although, you decide!
01:14:939 (2) - Doesn't quite fit in the music (probably prefrence). Maybe something can be done about it?
01:18:637 (1,2) - Nice sliderblanket

Insane looks okay

Tranquility

Why are there different kiai times between the diffs? Merge them please
00:19:665 (4) - Kiai time has a gap here. I'd like it fixed. (because if you play with the default skin, the star fountains will spam the screen)
00:55:829 (1) - You can use the sounds here better. Remove the sliderrepeat and put some circles there maybe.

Well I guess I helped a bit. Good luck!
Also take a star cause I like the song

Lulu-

398 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Lulu- 2016-11-27T17:25:16+00:00

Steffen wrote:
Tranquility

Why are there different kiai times between the diffs? Merge them please I'll discuss this with the others
00:19:665 (4) - Kiai time has a gap here. I'd like it fixed. (because if you play with the default skin, the star fountains will spam the screen) That's the intention tho, and there are many other maps that do the same
00:55:829 (1) - You can use the sounds here better. Remove the sliderrepeat and put some circles there maybe. I like the reverse arrow, because the sound is looping and another object wouldn't fit well enough imo

Thanks a lot for your mod and for the star!

zev

462 posts

Joined September 2015

zev 2016-11-27T17:50:40+00:00

hello you wanted a mod.
bad hitsounds

general
*wheres your normal diff?

and ez
*bad hitsounds

[easy]
hello is anyone here?
no this is not mapped yet. WAt

[Stan]I think ar could be 8 note density is traumatizing
Hi Stan maybe you can help Nokashi with helping lulu- fix his aesthetics? this looks nice!
no hs?

[Nokashi' Insane]
Hi Nokashi
00:38:158 (1,2,3,4,1) - nice spacing aesthetics maybe you can explain lulu- how to place things neater on his Tranquility diff take a look at 01:31:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - please help him c;
this diff is also infected with the second point of general

[highest diff] the hitsounds you decided to steal are completely all over the place i would redo them all
they are really bad.

00:00:555 (2,3,4) - based on what i saw from 00:02:199 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

You are trying to hitsound the percussion sound with your clap from what i saw, well you did that but you managed to hitsound the cymbal ride sound(the sound that occurs every red tick) with it
That is really bad.
I would just soft whistle the cymbal ride so they are separated.
did you know people who live in large buildings have sometimes problems with their Wi-Fi its because their router might be using the same frequency signal as their neighbors? that's why these hitsounds are bad! i hope you understand!

I would just get someone to do to the hitsounds if you don't know you can even irc me! this song isn't even that hard to hitsound rhythm is really stable,
all these timing sections for the hitsounds.. its not really efficient, why not use the SampleSet and Additions?

00:15:144 (4) - new measure, new combo? i don't see a reason to skip the new combo
00:21:719 (1) - ^

00:39:185 (7,8,9,10) - linear flow unadvised,

00:38:055 (1) - this is definitely 1/4 why would the song suddenly go 1/6

00:38:158 (6,2) - have some distance between them it's ugly if you overlap

01:27:336 (2,3) - nice flute triplet!

01:30:760 (4) - the second half of the reverse sucks tho. ignoring the kick don't do that, the kick is too dominant

01:31:993 (3,8) - overlap.

01:42:062 (2,3,4) - sharper angle would be nice

song is calming me nice!

niyuji

529 posts

Joined November 2014

niyuji 2016-11-27T17:57:29+00:00

hey i'm back o/

from my m4m queue!

Tranquility

00:09:391 (2) - fix blanket 00:08:569 (1,2) -
00:12:165 (5,1,2,3,4) - ^
00:13:500 (1,2) - i see these 2 sliders are copy pasted but what about 00:13:911 (3) -
00:14:939 (1,2,3,4) - presonaly i would reduce ds here like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6672901
00:15:966 (8) - nc? or nc here 00:16:171 (1) - to emphasise the main instrument
00:18:740 (4,1,2,3,4) - blanket please
00:19:459 (3) - i would make this slider more curved
00:19:665 (4,1,2) - blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6672955
00:20:076 (1,2,3) - right after that i would make a better looking pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6672964
00:22:028 (5) - move to 50 27?
00:27:404 (4,6,1,3,1,3) - don't you think putting those on 1/4 blue tick would be better? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6672985
00:33:980 (1) - spacing 00:33:637 (8,1) -
00:42:678 (1) - 00:43:089 (1) - i would put another slider *
00:53:158 (2,3) - blanket
00:55:007 (3) - maybe ctrl+j and fix?
00:55:829 (1) - make two sliders? (again?) (ignore this *)
01:11:856 (1) - here is nc, ok; up there i've suggested you ( 00:15:966 (8) )
01:19:254 (6) - nc?
01:19:048 (5) - maybe move to 290 309 & 01:18:843 (4) - to where 01:19:048 (5) was (400 104)
01:30:760 (4) - hmm bad idead to put slider there, instead put smth like 01:11:343 (5,6,7) - or 01:12:678 (1,2,3) -
01:35:281 (11) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6673095 ?
01:48:021 (2,3) - blanket

Nokashi's Insane

00:36:514 (5,3) - fix blanket
00:48:432 (7,8) - ^
00:55:007 (2,3) - ^
00:56:240 (2) - nc because you've changed sv
01:01:993 (3,3) - blanket
01:12:062 (6,1) - ^
01:13:706 (4,5,6,1,2) - ^
01:18:637 (1,4) - ^
01:48:843 (1) - two timing points here, fix

Good luck!

Nokashi

304 posts

Joined December 2014

Nokashi 2016-11-27T19:04:47+00:00

zev wrote:
general
*bad hitsounds are they? oh well i didnt make them, lulu- made them, i thought they were really nice, i still do

[Nokashi' Insane]
Hi Nokashi
00:38:158 (1,2,3,4,1) - nice spacing aesthetics maybe you can explain lulu- how to place things neater on his Tranquility diff take a look at 01:31:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - please help him c; ;w;
this diff is also infected with the second point of general see above

_Kise wrote:
hey i'm back o/

Nokashi's Insane
00:36:514 (5,3) - fix blanket Fixed!
00:48:432 (7,8) - ^ ^
00:55:007 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:56:240 (2) - nc because you've changed sv its 2 NC Changes in a row i dont like NC Spam
01:01:993 (3,3) - blanket Kinda fixed
01:12:062 (6,1) - ^ ^
01:13:706 (4,5,6,1,2) - ^ ^
01:18:637 (1,4) - ^ ^
01:48:843 (1) - two timing points here, fix yee

Good luck! ty!

Lulu-

398 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Lulu- 2016-11-27T22:18:46+00:00

_Kise wrote:
Tranquility
00:09:391 (2) - fix blanket 00:08:569 (1,2) - Fixed
00:12:165 (5,1,2,3,4) - ^ Fixed in another way
00:13:500 (1,2) - i see these 2 sliders are copy pasted but what about 00:13:911 (3) - Fixed
00:14:939 (1,2,3,4) - presonaly i would reduce ds here like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6672901 I think this is still fine, 8 is a kickslider
00:15:966 (8) - nc? or nc here 00:16:171 (1) - to emphasise the main instrument I've had a NC there before, but it somehow got deleted
00:18:740 (4,1,2,3,4) - blanket please Redid that part
00:19:459 (3) - i would make this slider more curved Done
00:19:665 (4,1,2) - blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6672955 Fixed
00:20:076 (1,2,3) - right after that i would make a better looking pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6672964 Kinda done
00:22:028 (5) - move to 50 27? Alright
00:27:404 (4,6,1,3,1,3) - don't you think putting those on 1/4 blue tick would be better? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6672985 Nah, this is correct
00:33:980 (1) - spacing 00:33:637 (8,1) - Fixed
00:42:678 (1) - 00:43:089 (1) - i would put another slider * Fixed in another way
00:53:158 (2,3) - blanket I can't seem to make this work and didn't have the intention of creating a blanket there
00:55:007 (3) - maybe ctrl+j and fix? Can't make this play well either
00:55:829 (1) - make two sliders? (again?) (ignore this *)
01:11:856 (1) - here is nc, ok; up there i've suggested you ( 00:15:966 (8) ) Fixed that already
01:19:254 (6) - nc? I don't like this
01:19:048 (5) - maybe move to 290 309 & 01:18:843 (4) - to where 01:19:048 (5) was (400 104) Nice idea, but this jump leaves too much free space in the map imo
01:30:760 (4) - hmm bad idead to put slider there, instead put smth like 01:11:343 (5,6,7) - or 01:12:678 (1,2,3) - Fixed, but like this 00:16:788 (1,2,3)
01:35:281 (11) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6673095 ? Done
01:48:021 (2,3) - blanket Fixed

zev wrote:
[highest diff] the hitsounds you decided to steal are completely all over the place i would redo them all
they are really bad. I'll take another look at it

00:15:144 (4) - new measure, new combo? i don't see a reason to skip the new combo NCs aren't there to make stuff colorful, but to indicate new parts of the music
00:21:719 (1) - ^ ^

00:39:185 (7,8,9,10) - linear flow unadvised I'll change it if anybody else pointed it out, I was told to change this from a curve

00:38:055 (1) - this is definitely 1/4 why would the song suddenly go 1/6 Fixed

00:38:158 (6,2) - have some distance between them it's ugly if you overlap

01:27:336 (2,3) - nice flute triplet! xd

01:30:760 (4) - the second half of the reverse sucks tho. ignoring the kick don't do that, the kick is too dominant I'll try to come up with something

01:31:993 (3,8) - overlap. Fixed

01:42:062 (2,3,4) - sharper angle would be nice Fixed

Thanks for the mods!

_Stan

Beatmap Nominator

767 posts

Joined June 2012

_Stan 2016-11-29T05:20:38+00:00

Steffen wrote:
Hi! M4M ^^

Stan's Hard
AiMod was not happy about timing points. Conflicts with Tranquility and Nokashi's Insane! | will fix it soon
00:14:733 (4) - Blanketing the sliderend with this slider a bit better? | ok
00:39:185 (6) - How about putting this slightly more down and 00:39:596 (7) mirrored to 00:38:980 (5) ? | good idea
01:32:404 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think spacing these out would be nice, although, you decide! | ok
01:14:939 (2) - Doesn't quite fit in the music (probably prefrence). Maybe something can be done about it? | ok
01:18:637 (1,2) - Nice sliderblanket | thanks :3

thank you so much and updated

UPDATED 16/11/29

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Firetruck

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Firetruck 2016-11-29T17:35:00+00:00

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osu file format v14

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Title:Greening
TitleUnicode:Greening
Artist:Nekomata Master
ArtistUnicode:猫叉Master
Creator:Lulu-
Version:Firetruck's Normal
Source:pop'n music 12 Iroha
Tags:popn music 19 TUNE STREET portable Naoyuki Sato
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Nokashi

304 posts

Joined December 2014

Nokashi 2016-11-29T20:23:20+00:00

Oh shit its the normal!

Lulu-

398 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Lulu- 2016-11-30T02:04:35+00:00

Moving to Pending after Easy is here

Osuology

528 posts

Joined February 2014

Osuology 2016-11-30T03:16:54+00:00

[Global]
Timing is inconsistent across difficulties.

soft-hitclap2.wav is unused so far, so if you aren't going to use it, remove it.

soft-sliderslide.wav is not correct for blank, it will cause issues with some sound setups. http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav use this instead, it works way better for all setups.

soft-hitfinish.wav possibly has a delay that is greater than 5 ms, which is unrankable.

[Tranquility]
00:02:199 (2,3,4) - Starting position of this is wrong, should be directly under the hitcircle.

00:03:021 (7) - You probably should do this more in the map, otherwise it looks ugly by itself. (I'm talking about how it's a continuation of the triplet earlier)

00:16:377 (3) - If you are going to do this, you need to do it every time that rhythm comes up, otherwise it's not consistent with mapping style. Your style involves using same aesthetics, so you either need to drop this or continue it throughout this section.

00:21:308 (8) - Overlaps with the two, again if you want to make this a thing, keep it throughout this section.

00:22:439 (7) - Not very good, strong beat is on the end of the slider, and weak beat is on the start of the slider which is backwards. Essentially just put a double into slider. (hitcircle and slider 1/4 as a double, slider second)

00:28:226 (1,2) - wat is this NC, wtf. Downbeat should be NC here, makes most sense.

00:33:226 (6) - yeah you need to sort out your combos these are pretty bad tbh lol. It's pretty simple, just put a NC every new measure and it will work most of the time ~

00:44:528 (8,9,10,4,6) - this is not good, unless you keep it consistent which you don't so lol

00:50:281 (5,6) - What purpose do these slider serve? Not really much it seems like

00:56:856 (2,3,4) - No reason to space these like this, nothing in the song indicates something to be empathized.

01:07:952 (4,6,8) - Yes I see these, but I wasn't going to note them, because I've already told you what to do about these. You might think placing them randomly works but it really should be in the same location every time within a section that includes them.

01:10:007 (4,5,6) - Again please. No reason to have these so spaced, if you fix these two, fix the rest I won't note the rest of them.
That's for now all I'm going to say on this map, the thing with other diffs is just issues I saw in modding assistant.

[Nokashi's Insane]
01:48:843 (1) - This slider head has two green lines on top of it, remove one please.
Note that I didn't look through your diff, I just saw this in modding assistant and wanted to point it out.

Lulu-

398 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Lulu- 2016-11-30T05:27:51+00:00

Osuology wrote:
[Global]
Timing is inconsistent across difficulties. Fixing later this day

soft-hitclap2.wav is unused so far, so if you aren't going to use it, remove it. Redoing hitsounds atm, it's still a mess but will be fixed soon

soft-sliderslide.wav is not correct for blank, it will cause issues with some sound setups. http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav use this instead, it works way better for all setups. Pretty sure this is the exact same file, as I got this from LKs' pack but I'll change it

soft-hitfinish.wav possibly has a delay that is greater than 5 ms, which is unrankable. Will edit and upload when I have time

[Tranquility]
00:02:199 (2,3,4) - Starting position of this is wrong, should be directly under the hitcircle. Fixed

00:03:021 (7) - You probably should do this more in the map, otherwise it looks ugly by itself. (I'm talking about how it's a continuation of the triplet earlier) I'll see where I can reuse this

00:16:377 (3) - If you are going to do this, you need to do it every time that rhythm comes up, otherwise it's not consistent with mapping style. Your style involves using same aesthetics, so you either need to drop this or continue it throughout this section. Changed the other time I made this accordingly, I only want to keep this pattern for the exact same pitch

00:21:308 (8) - Overlaps with the two, again if you want to make this a thing, keep it throughout this section. I'll take a look at the overlaps

00:22:439 (7) - Not very good, strong beat is on the end of the slider, and weak beat is on the start of the slider which is backwards. Essentially just put a double into slider. (hitcircle and slider 1/4 as a double, slider second) Done

00:28:226 (1,2) - wat is this NC, wtf. Downbeat should be NC here, makes most sense. Confusing to read, but trying it out

00:33:226 (6) - yeah you need to sort out your combos these are pretty bad tbh lol. It's pretty simple, just put a NC every new measure and it will work most of the time ~ Alright

00:44:528 (8,9,10,4,6) - this is not good, unless you keep it consistent which you don't so lol Fixing the inconsistencies

00:50:281 (5,6) - What purpose do these slider serve? Not really much it seems like The main melody changes its pitch really fast here, so I emphasized it with kicksliders

00:56:856 (2,3,4) - No reason to space these like this, nothing in the song indicates something to be empathized. ^ but with the spacing

01:07:952 (4,6,8) - Yes I see these, but I wasn't going to note them, because I've already told you what to do about these. You might think placing them randomly works but it really should be in the same location every time within a section that includes them. Tried something out

01:10:007 (4,5,6) - Again please. No reason to have these so spaced, if you fix these two, fix the rest I won't note the rest of them. I've had this part of the flute in the same spacing for the entire map and to me, there's no reason why it shouldn't be this way

Thanks for the mod!

Mirash

Beatmap Nominator

705 posts

Joined June 2013

Mirash 2016-12-02T08:13:10+00:00

Kiais on Tranquility are different
Consider hitsounding Stan's Hard. (by copying or manually)
Tranquility
00:02:610 (5) - this can be spaced like 00:02:301 (3,4) -
00:03:226 (4) - crtl j
00:06:103 (6,8,10) - dont know what you hsing here, but sound is on 00:06:206 (7,9) -
00:06:514 (10,11) - imo too big ds
00:14:630 (7,8) - too close with 00:14:322 (6) - i think
00:15:452 (5,6,7) - id really make it like this http://i.imgur.com/0KVuNNK.png because of the sound
01:11:343 (5,6,7) - ^
00:15:966 (1) - replace this with circle so it differ from 00:16:171 (2,3,4) - which representing sound
01:11:856 (1) - ^ o and it has a clap on the tail
00:19:254 (1,2,3) - i'd make something like this http://i.imgur.com/ZRvNZfp.png because sound on the tail of 00:19:459 (3) - feels like it should be pressed with key
00:28:637 (2,3) - spacing between them is different and it can be seen visually
00:29:939 (1,2) - tbh it has same spacing as your 1/6 and can be mistaken by players
00:32:335 (1,2) - and this can be mistaken as 1/4. i'd make 1/6 be stacked on sliders and 1/4 not, but maybe it will ruin some aesteticks. o you can do 1/6 like 00:32:678 (3,4) - everywhere
00:35:623 (5,6) - really confusing. like you should do faster movement when aiming circle and slider, then slower down and folow slidercircle..
00:47:199 (1) - is it menat to be drum clap?
01:54:596 (2,3) - confusing spacing, can be mistaken as 1/4. stack it on slider or make linear jump i think
lovely slider arts

Nokashi's Insane
00:13:089 (6) - nc because of suddenly low sv
01:08:980 (5) - ^
01:04:459 (7) - maybe you want this on x:334 y:151
01:52:130 (4) - make it curve with to ancors http://i.imgur.com/v3vWK13.png imo looks better

Stan's hard
00:47:199 (3) - nc?
01:00:349 (3) - ^
Orz

Firetruck's Normal
01:48:432 (7,1) - it can be a blanket

Great mapset.

Lulu-

398 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Lulu- 2016-12-02T13:04:42+00:00

Mirash wrote:
Kiais on Tranquility are different After a long time finally removing the kiais
Consider hitsounding Stan's Hard. (by copying or manually) I wanted to add the hitsounds on E/N/H after Easy is done, so I can submit everything at once
Tranquility
00:02:610 (5) - this can be spaced like 00:02:301 (3,4) - I want to keep the jump for now
00:03:226 (4) - crtl j I don't like this flow tbh
00:06:103 (6,8,10) - dont know what you hsing here, but sound is on 00:06:206 (7,9) - Ah, looks like I forgot to remove some hitsounds here
00:06:514 (10,11) - imo too big ds Lowered it by a little bit here
00:14:630 (7,8) - too close with 00:14:322 (6) - i think It's an 1/4 interval, but I've already had it further away and people didn't like it, so this will stay
00:15:452 (5,6,7) - id really make it like this http://i.imgur.com/0KVuNNK.png because of the sound The flute is changing its pitch here and imo it's a bit undermapped like that
01:11:343 (5,6,7) - ^
00:15:966 (1) - replace this with circle so it differ from 00:16:171 (2,3,4) - which representing sound Put a double behind 2 now
01:11:856 (1) - ^ o and it has a clap on the tail ^
00:19:254 (1,2,3) - i'd make something like this http://i.imgur.com/ZRvNZfp.png because sound on the tail of 00:19:459 (3) - feels like it should be pressed with key Done
00:28:637 (2,3) - spacing between them is different and it can be seen visually Fixed
00:29:939 (1,2) - tbh it has same spacing as your 1/6 and can be mistaken by players Fixed
00:32:335 (1,2) - and this can be mistaken as 1/4. i'd make 1/6 be stacked on sliders and 1/4 not, but maybe it will ruin some aesteticks. o you can do 1/6 like 00:32:678 (3,4) - everywhere Stacked the 1/4 here, 1/6 didn't feel right to me
00:35:623 (5,6) - really confusing. like you should do faster movement when aiming circle and slider, then slower down and folow slidercircle.. Kinda fixed
00:47:199 (1) - is it menat to be drum clap? I'll fix it, messy hitsounding
01:54:596 (2,3) - confusing spacing, can be mistaken as 1/4. stack it on slider or make linear jump i think Forgot about changing this after remapping the part, fixed
lovely slider arts <3

Great mapset. Thanks! :d

Thanks for your mod!
Also changed the slider on Nokashi's diff on his request

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Firetruck 2016-12-02T18:06:10+00:00

yup xd

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Nekomata Greening.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68980
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13500
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Greening
TitleUnicode:Greening
Artist:Nekomata Master
ArtistUnicode:猫叉Master
Creator:Lulu-
Version:Firetruck's Normal
Source:pop'n music 12 Iroha
Tags:raindrops popn 19 TUNE STREET portable Naoyuki Sato Nokashi _Stan Firetruck
BeatmapID:1144567
BeatmapSetID:530173

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

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Aurele

osu! Alumni

7,408 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2016-12-05T00:01:52+00:00

~also add 'Gabe Veus' on the tags~

Gabe's Easy (Without hitsounds)

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68980
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Greening
TitleUnicode:Greening
Artist:Nekomata Master
ArtistUnicode:猫叉Master
Creator:Lulu-
Version:Gabe's Easy
Source:pop'n music 12 Iroha
Tags:popn music 19 TUNE STREET portable Naoyuki Sato Gabe Veus
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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alkalde

84 posts

Joined October 2015

alkalde 2016-12-07T03:56:33+00:00

yo, quick mod

Tranquility

replay of sightread 1millionxSB http://alkaldeosu.s-ul.eu/pWhM2nJh
screenshot https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6746642
General Notes

increase SV? seems really slow for this type of map
add kiai to 00:13:500 (1) - has same amount of musical intensity i thinks

Mods
00:15:452 (5,6,7) - this sounds like its a two note burst instead of a three
00:33:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sounds really off time/feels really weird
00:42:678 (1,2) - different SVs here for techy feel, different sounds in the music
00:52:541 (7), 00:53:363 (3) - have these sliders shorten and then add a circle on the end to add effect for the sound that you're trying to show with that slider end, sounds better imo
01:01:993 (5,6) - turn the six into a slider 1/4th after five, ends on where current six will be, sounds better imo

Beomsan

1,878 posts

Joined November 2013

Beomsan 2016-12-07T03:59:53+00:00

hey, direct mod from my queue.
sorry for terrible English heh
*Unrankable issue (or important) *Highly Recommended *Suggestions

General

Gabe's difficulty is missing the "raindrops" tag.
soft-sliderslide is not a proper blank file. 44kb won't cause issues. use this!
Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
soft-hitfinish.wav
I recommend unifying the ending time. (Stan's Hard, Tranquility.) 01:59:939 - ~ 02:00:350 - There is still sound between them. It is sad to ignore this sounds.

Gabe's Easy

01:22:541 (1) - This slider can be improved by fix the blanket. hmm roughly this much? http://puu.sh/sGNXw/69b4e9278e.png
is it old style? quite good

Firetruck's Normal

It looks like you copied hitsound. and copied hitsound doesn't seem to match your difficulty.

00:02:815 (6) - Head remove clap. (00:06:103 (6) - )
00:07:747 (3) - ^
00:08:569 (4) - ^ (00:00:350 (1) - 00:01:993 (4) - 00:03:637 (1) - )
00:09:391 (6) - Tail change to clap.
00:14:117 (2) - Tail remove clap.
00:16:377 (6) - add clap.
00:17:199 (2) - Tail change to whistle.
other things are fine.

Stan's Hard

01:19:254 (2,3) - This overlap looks a bit dirty. I think it would be nice if you could find 01:19:870 (3) - another place.
wow super neat

Nokashi's Insane

00:30:658 - Lower the volume to 5%.
00:33:534 - ^
00:35:692 (3,4) - ^
00:42:986 - ^ These are a little different from 00:17:096 - this.
00:58:295 (4,3) - Make a little more distance between them. http://puu.sh/sGP1C/c9f60f1bf6.png
01:21:719 (1) - similar with ^
01:17:610 (3) - It should be 3/4 slider. You already know why.
01:48:843 - No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point.

Tranquility

00:15:623 - delete 00:15:555 - change to 1/2 slider. Listen in detail with slow playback. (00:22:028 (5,6,7,8) - )
01:11:343 (5,6,7) - same as above
00:19:254 (1,2,1,2) - ehh,,,, I don't think this is bad. But I think that agreement is necessary, like this: http://puu.sh/sGPmo/3067401d84.png
00:33:569 (2) - unsnap.
00:33:226 (1,2,3) - again, try to move 00:33:534 (2,3) - these notes to x144 y206, and please see this picture. http://puu.sh/sGPx7/2ca0b209a1.png
00:33:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Actually It is a long train. We need something more creative.
00:39:802 - ~ w wait, Why using break time here?
01:04:665 (4) - nc 01:05:076 (4) - remove nc 01:05:281 (1) - nc 01:06:103 (1) - nc
01:08:569 (7) - nc 01:08:980 (1) - remove nc
01:32:404 (1) - nc 01:33:226 (1) - nc 01:33:843 (4) - remove nc
01:34:048 (1) - nc 01:34:870 (1) - nc
01:38:158 (1) - nc omg
01:39:802 (1) - nc
01:41:445 (5) - remove nc 01:41:856 (1) - remove 01:42:267 (5) - nc
01:42:884 (3) - remove nc 01:43:089 (1) - nc 01:43:911 (1) - nc
01:44:528 (5) - remove 01:44:733 (1) - nc 01:45:555 (1) - nc 01:46:171 (3) - remove 01:46:377 (1) - nc 01:46:377 (1) - nc 01:55:418 (1) - nc 01:57:884 (1) - 01:58:706 (2) - nc
00:10:213 (1) - nc 00:14:322 (1) - nc 00:14:939 (1) - remove 00:15:144 (7) - nc 00:17:610 (5) - nc 00:20:897 (1) - 00:22:541 (8) - oh my god I GAVE UP! I believe that you can do it yourself YOU HAVE TO DO ITTTTTTTTTTT (die)

I love Nekomata I love Nekomata I love Nekomata

Aurele

osu! Alumni

7,408 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2016-12-07T04:39:28+00:00

thank you! I fixed the slider and the tags.

http://puu.sh/sGRVG/9ea62e0170.txt

Beomsan wrote:
is it old style? quite good

I don't know what to say about this LOL

Lulu-

398 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Lulu- 2016-12-07T05:53:13+00:00

alkalde wrote:
Tranquility

General Notes

increase SV? seems really slow for this type of map I like it this way, and the BPM is pretty slow already. This isn't the typical dubstep tech map, so it's fitting imo
add kiai to 00:13:500 (1) - has same amount of musical intensity i thinks Originally put a kiai there, but people complained

Mods
00:15:452 (5,6,7) - this sounds like its a two note burst instead of a three The pitch changes like this here: high - low - high, so I want to keep this
00:33:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sounds really off time/feels really weird Might be because of the spacing, but the timing is correct
00:42:678 (1,2) - different SVs here for techy feel, different sounds in the music Alright
00:52:541 (7), 00:53:363 (3) - have these sliders shorten and then add a circle on the end to add effect for the sound that you're trying to show with that slider end, sounds better imo Done
01:01:993 (5,6) - turn the six into a slider 1/4th after five, ends on where current six will be, sounds better imo I'm not sure about this, the slider would end on the white tick and this one is pretty important imo, I'll think about it

Beomsan wrote:
General
Gabe's difficulty is missing the "raindrops" tag. Fixed
soft-sliderslide is not a proper blank file. 44kb won't cause issues. use this! Fixed, actually forgot to change it from a previous mod
Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms: Same as above
soft-hitfinish.wav
I recommend unifying the ending time. (Stan's Hard, Tranquility.) 01:59:939 - ~ 02:00:350 - There is still sound between them. It is sad to ignore this sounds. aaaaaa I can't really finish the map without removing the raindrop slider on my diff, I want to keep this as a small reference to the album title "Raindrops". I've asked the GDers about this and they wouldn't want to change the ending time either.

Tranquility
00:15:623 - delete 00:15:555 - change to 1/2 slider. Listen in detail with slow playback. (00:22:028 (5,6,7,8) - ) ok no fuck this i give up i'm changing it
01:11:343 (5,6,7) - same as above ^
00:19:254 (1,2,1,2) - ehh,,,, I don't think this is bad. But I think that agreement is necessary, like this: http://puu.sh/sGPmo/3067401d84.png I've had it like this before, still not sure what to do, but I'll revert it I guess
00:33:569 (2) - unsnap. Fixed
00:33:226 (1,2,3) - again, try to move 00:33:534 (2,3) - these notes to x144 y206, and please see this picture.http://puu.sh/sGPx7/2ca0b209a1.png I was going to do this
00:33:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Actually It is a long train. We need something more creative. Remapping
00:39:802 - ~ w wait, Why using break time here? I thought it would be pretty fitting, but apparently it's unrankable lol
01:04:665 (4) - nc 01:05:076 (4) - remove nc 01:05:281 (1) - nc 01:06:103 (1) - nc Fixed
01:08:569 (7) - nc 01:08:980 (1) - remove nc I actually don't agree with removing the NC here, SV change + kiai
01:32:404 (1) - nc 01:33:226 (1) - nc 01:33:843 (4) - remove nc
01:34:048 (1) - nc 01:34:870 (1) - nc Fixed
01:38:158 (1) - nc omg Fixed ;w;
01:39:802 (1) - nc Fixed
01:41:445 (5) - remove nc 01:41:856 (1) - remove 01:42:267 (5) - nc Fixed
01:42:884 (3) - remove nc 01:43:089 (1) - nc 01:43:911 (1) - nc Fixed
01:44:528 (5) - remove 01:44:733 (1) - nc 01:45:555 (1) - nc 01:46:171 (3) - remove 01:46:377 (1) - nc 01:46:377 (1) - nc 01:55:418 (1) - nc 01:57:884 (1) - 01:58:706 (2) - nc Fixed
00:10:213 (1) - nc 00:14:322 (1) - nc 00:14:939 (1) - remove 00:15:144 (7) - nc 00:17:610 (5) - nc 00:20:897 (1) - 00:22:541 (8) - oh my god I GAVE UP! I believe that you can do it yourself YOU HAVE TO DO ITTTTTTTTTTT (die) ;w;

I love Nekomata I love Nekomata I love Nekomata not loving him is a sin

_Stan

Beatmap Nominator

767 posts

Joined June 2012

_Stan 2016-12-07T08:53:01+00:00

Mirash wrote:
Stan's hard
00:47:199 (3) - nc? | I think is ok~
01:00:349 (3) - ^ | ^

Beomsan wrote:
Stan's Hard
01:19:254 (2,3) - This overlap looks a bit dirty. I think it would be nice if you could find 01:19:870 (3) - another place. | but other people thinks it's good so it's not so important ~ keep it now
wow super neat

no change but thanks ~

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Firetruck 2016-12-07T12:00:22+00:00

can you fix the hitsounds from the mod for me, thanks xd

edit:

update from some feedback

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Nekomata Greening.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68980
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13500
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Greening
TitleUnicode:Greening
Artist:Nekomata Master
ArtistUnicode:猫叉Master
Creator:Lulu-
Version:Firetruck's Normal
Source:pop'n music 12 Iroha
Tags:raindrops popn 19 TUNE STREET portable Naoyuki Sato Nokashi _Stan Firetruck Gabe Veus
BeatmapID:1144567
BeatmapSetID:530173

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,86029,87917
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo2 : 3,224,108
Combo3 : 113,225,0
Combo4 : 0,221,55
Combo5 : 77,255,77

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Last edited by Firetruck 2016-12-07T20:23:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Beomsan

1,878 posts

Joined November 2013

Beomsan 2016-12-07T17:00:31+00:00

take my star
you can do it, good luck

Izzz

265 posts

Joined July 2015

Izzz 2016-12-08T02:35:04+00:00

Hello from Rabbit Inc. modding queue! Saw this in modreqs and planned on getting to this anyway, too.

Not an expert at spread, but considering how dense the notes are in the normal compared with the easy, it looks like there is a huge jump in difficulty between the two, regardless of the star difficulty, which is fairly close together. Might want to increase the density of the Easy some, since the note density for the normal is pretty common in its diff range.

Easy

Holy low note density

Someone probably already mentioned this but the tags 'raindrops' 'Nokashi' '_Stan' and 'Firetruck' are missing in this difficulty. Also, the tag 'music' is included, which is unneccesary, since the source already includes 'music' in it.

00:11:856 (3) - I feel like this slider should probably be shortened to 00:13:089 to make room for a circle at 00:13:500 . That downbeat deserves to be clicked, even moreso than normal what with the cymbal there, and the synth noise the slider is mapped to gets overshadowed by the wood instrument(?) at 00:13:089 as well, which makes it a pretty good point to put a sliderend at.

01:15:966 (1) - If it weren't for the next slider I'd suggest you shorten this slider a beat, since the wood instrument stops there, but it'd ruin the symmetry D:

01:22:130 (3,1) - Probably could improve this blanket by moving the second anchor 1 grid to the right (to x=208)

01:22:644 - Unnecessary green line here doesn't change kiai/volume/sampleset/sv so you might as well remove it

01:45:555 (1) - Shouldn't this have the same hitsounds as 01:58:706 (4) - ?

01:50:281 - Unnecessary green line here doesn't effect any notes

01:51:103 - ^

01:51:308 - ^ because it changes the values back to before the unnecessary change before it

Normal

00:46:377 (1,2) - wouldn't this pattern make more sense if it was ctrl+g'd? Then it'd follow the primary instrument. As it is, its 'consistent' with 00:43:089 (1,2) - even though the music itself is not consistent between the two. Also since there isn't anything special to follow on the red tick the 'start sliders on white ticks over red ticks' thing would be in effect if you're just following the drums.

00:59:528 (1,2) - ^

01:50:281 - Unnecessary green line here doesn't effect any notes

01:51:103 - ^

01:54:802 (5) - This note should probably be removed. The percussion falls on the blue tick before and after this note, so unless you want to map on the blue tick, this 1/2 double doesn't make too much sense. Alternatively, you could move 01:55:007 (5,6) - both down 1/2 a beat, although I think this would bring a lot more attention to the fact that that 1/2 double on the blue ticks isn't mapped to.

Hard

00:01:993 (2,3) - This blanket seems a bit off, moving the second red anchor to x=281 y=80 might make it look a bit better

00:04:254 (2,1) - ^, moving the end anchor to x=233 y=122 might make it look a bit better

00:33:226 (1) - This cymbal noise seems a bit under emphasized, especially compared with the jump you used one note before. Maybe increase the spacing here?

00:59:528 (1,2) - I feel like this pattern should be ctrl+g'd. The sounds on the white and red ticks are fairly equal here, but due to the white ticks' inherit dominance, this tips the scale in the favor of the white ticks, so they should be clickable here over the red tick.

01:50:281 - Unnecessary green line here doesn't effect any notes

01:51:103 (2) - maybe move this a 1/2 beat later and make it 1/2 beat shorter, and add a circle here? I can see why you wanted to start the slider here, but the following white tick has a much more important noise that doesn't get any acknowledgement from the way this pattern is currently mapped. Also then it gives the currently unused green line at 01:51:308 - a purpose.

Insane

01:25:829 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Why is this section, which is notably calmer/quieter than the two kiais around it, stay just as hard as the kiai sections surrounding it despite being so much less intense?

01:33:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Not much mapped here on the 1/4

not that it really matters that much, its fine as is, it just seems like an insane would usually have a stream or at least 1/4 slider spam, idk

01:48:843 - Double green line here, remove one.

Tranquility

Seems p good to me, always nice to see 1/6 being mapped to!

The weird panning at the beginning kinda gives me a headache, but besides that, good song, as well as good map!

Last edited by Izzz 2016-12-08T19:54:11+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Firetruck 2016-12-08T04:23:13+00:00

fixed everythning in mod^ thanks

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: Nekomata Greening.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68980
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

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Title:Greening
TitleUnicode:Greening
Artist:Nekomata Master
ArtistUnicode:猫叉Master
Creator:Lulu-
Version:Firetruck's Normal
Source:pop'n music 12 Iroha
Tags:raindrops popn 19 TUNE STREET portable Naoyuki Sato Nokashi _Stan Firetruck Gabe Veus
BeatmapID:1144567
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OverallDifficulty:4
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[Kamiya]

637 posts

Joined November 2012

[Kamiya] 2016-12-08T07:01:37+00:00

Hey There~~　
For m4m~

[General]

I love this music so so so so much~!

[Gabe's Easy]

01:40:623 (2,1) - DS plz
01:43:911 (2,3,1) - ^
01:53:774 (1,1) - ^

[Firetruck's Normal]

Sound parts:

Sound effect is very confusing

00:01:993 (4,5,6,4,5,6) - eh..I think it's weird. maybe just like 00:03:637 (1,2,3) - or 00:06:103 (6) - delete clap.

00:07:747 (3) - End of slide use clap

00:10:213 (1,2,3) - End of slider1,note2 end of slider3 add clap

01:11:446 (5) - end of slider delete clap

01:14:323 (4,5) - why use some different sound part

slider5 just like slider4 will be ok

01:31:993 (6) - use clap

01:31:171 (5) - delete clap

00:13:500 (1) - I think this way just use finish was enough.

Rhythm parts:

01:54:802 (5,6) - Change the note into a slider

[Tranquility]

00:12:165 (5,4,4) - try to delete clap

00:14:904 (4,5,6) - those batter was accelerated or variable speed. So try to NC.

00:27:815 (6) - NC

00:28:295 (1) - delete NC

00:28:295 (1,6) - NC

00:50:281 (5) - NC

Last
Many of the sound effects in this beatmap are not properly used.(It's just my opinion.Sound effect is very confusing.）
Ex:00:08:980 (4,5,6,7) - why from 4 to 5 THE CLAP was over? （Every diffs look like this.)
So I think you should reconsider to change the sound effects.

And
Good Luck!

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2016-12-08T08:47:36+00:00

m4m

[tranquility?]
totally make NC consistency
00:01:993 (1,5) - don't overlap like this because looks bad,
00:14:939 (4,5,6,1) - even if you decreased DS, 1/6 could be difficult for players, Just make reverse slider.
00:19:356 (2,3) - why you made jump in this pary? I tdon't think this pary should be emphasized.
00:23:569 - 00:23:671 - 00:23:774 - add beats like others.
00:59:117 (7,8) - make same slider shape. could be better.
01:25:829 (6,7,8) - Decreased DS? It is hard to read. 01:25:007 (2,3,4,5) - you made jumpos in 1/4 term, but in 1/2 term, this Ds isreally awkward.
GL

Lulu-

398 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Lulu- 2016-12-09T10:32:12+00:00

[Kamiya] wrote:
[General]

I love this music so so so so much~! <3

[Tranquility]

00:12:165 (5,4,4) - try to delete clap Done

00:14:904 (4,5,6) - those batter was accelerated or variable speed. So try to NC. I had a NC there but somebody said it was bad, but I'll change it when anybody else complains

00:27:815 (6) - NC Done

00:28:295 (1) - delete NC Done

00:28:295 (1,6) - NC Done

00:50:281 (5) - NC Done

Last
Many of the sound effects in this beatmap are not properly used.(It's just my opinion.Sound effect is very confusing.
Ex:00:08:980 (4,5,6,7) - why from 4 to 5 THE CLAP was over? （Every diffs look like this.)
So I think you should reconsider to change the sound effects. I'm still thinking about how to change it, many people love this and some people don't like this
And
Good Luck!

Neoskylove wrote:
[tranquility?]
totally make NC consistency Still working on it
00:01:993 (1,5) - don't overlap like this because looks bad, Oops, fixed
00:14:939 (4,5,6,1) - even if you decreased DS, 1/6 could be difficult for players, Just make reverse slider. I don't want to change the 1/6 bursts, they're the main gimmick of the map
00:19:356 (2,3) - why you made jump in this pary? I tdon't think this pary should be emphasized. The flute is really intense on 3 and leading into the chorus again, while 2 is just a sound that's fading away. This was even suggested by another modder
00:23:569 - 00:23:671 - 00:23:774 - add beats like others. I'll keep this until somebody else points this out
00:59:117 (7,8) - make same slider shape. could be better. Idk I don't really like this
01:25:829 (6,7,8) - Decreased DS? It is hard to read. 01:25:007 (2,3,4,5) - you made jumpos in 1/4 term, but in 1/2 term, this Ds isreally awkward. Fixed
GL

Thanks for the mods!

Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Firetruck 2016-12-09T14:26:30+00:00

[Kamiya] wrote:
[Firetruck's Normal]

Sound parts:

Sound effect is very confusing

00:01:993 (4,5,6,4,5,6) - eh..I think it's weird. maybe just like 00:03:637 (1,2,3) - or 00:06:103 (6) - delete clap.

00:07:747 (3) - End of slide use clap

00:10:213 (1,2,3) - End of slider1,note2 end of slider3 add clap

01:11:446 (5) - end of slider delete clap

01:14:323 (4,5) - why use some different sound part slider5 just like slider4 will be ok

01:31:993 (6) - use clap

01:31:171 (5) - delete clap

00:13:500 (1) - I think this way just use finish was enough.

Rhythm parts:

01:54:802 (5,6) - Change the note into a slider yup

pls fix hitsounds for me xdddseofjseif

osu file format v14

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Nokashi

304 posts

Joined December 2014

Nokashi 2016-12-10T11:39:17+00:00

WEW mods!

Osuology wrote:
[Nokashi's Insane]
01:48:843 (1) - This slider head has two green lines on top of it, remove one please. Alright
Note that I didn't look through your diff, I just saw this in modding assistant and wanted to point it out.

Mirash wrote:
Nokashi's Insane
00:13:089 (6) - nc because of suddenly low sv Fixed
01:08:980 (5) - ^ ^
01:04:459 (7) - maybe you want this on x:334 y:151 I didnt move it exactly there but u were right about being in the wrong place nontheless, so it was moved!
01:52:130 (4) - make it curve with to ancors http://i.imgur.com/v3vWK13.png imo looks better Slider was remapped !

Beomsan wrote:
Nokashi's Insane

00:30:658 - Lower the volume to 5%. The pattern has been remapped and there is no beat at that tick anymore so..
00:33:534 - ^ i think there is a faint beat that can justify not lowering the volume, i tried it and it sounds nicer without the volume drop
00:35:692 (3,4) - ^ I agree here tho
00:42:986 - ^ These are a little different from 00:17:096 - this. its 2 different sounds, and to fit flow and space management there its better to be that spaced, plus i like the variety it gives
00:58:295 (4,3) - Make a little more distance between them. http://puu.sh/sGP1C/c9f60f1bf6.png yup much better now !
01:21:719 (1) - similar with ^ yup
01:17:610 (3) - It should be 3/4 slider. You already know why. i do i do thanks !
01:48:843 - No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. Fixed already!

Joezapy wrote:
01:25:829 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Why is this section, which is notably calmer/quieter than the two kiais around it, stay just as hard as the kiai sections surrounding it despite being so much less intense? Instead of giving a sudden stop to the intensity, i want it to start ''cooling down'' like the song is, so it becomes progressively less instense instead of just a random stop that would ruin the consistency

01:33:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Not much mapped here on the 1/4 not that it really matters that much, its fine as is, it just seems like an insane would usually have a stream or at least 1/4 slider spam, idk i like it the way it is sry

01:48:843 - Double green line here, remove one. Already done!

Thanks everyone for the mods!

ErunamoJAZZ

osu! Alumni

2,693 posts

Joined August 2012

ErunamoJAZZ 2016-12-10T18:27:59+00:00

Oh, the set is finally complete.

[Tranquility]

A replay before start: https://puu.sh/sKLvX/5f83a3a073.osr
I felt this like a lot of spam
Most of 1/6 were not intuitive
Flow will improve.
Aesthetic was.. mm.. i know this is very subjective, but I really think this will improve a lot.
Also, many rhythms were ignored, like bass in 00:54:082 - 00:54:288 - , or 00:56:240 - were big white tick is very strong. Or drums in 01:28:192 -
My recommendation is a remap >_<

[Nokashi's Insane]

First, a replay too!: https://puu.sh/sKMf1/eb8009b2ea.osr
00:12:678 (5) - this SV had not sense for me xD, why not keep the same like in 00:12:267 (4) -
00:27:884 - 00:28:706 - Why not make like in 00:29:528 (1) - ???
00:34:048 (3,6) - ^
00:50:281 (5) - that was difficult to red, please, consider a pattern like in 00:43:706 (4) - , ie:
00:56:856 (4) - similar:
01:23:980 (7) -
nice diff!

[Stan's Hard]

01:06:103 (1) - not a jump here?
01:08:569 (3,4) - That was bored , all are same ~_~
01:26:651 (1,2,3,4) - If you are using jumps here, use jumps in 01:25:829 (1,2,3,4) - too. Its feels out of place now :s
01:32:404 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm not sure of this patter in a hard diff xD
Good diff!

[Firetruck's Normal]

All section from start to 00:20:076 - is on clockwise xD (a good place to change to anticlockwise could be in 00:13:500 - )
In general, it is a good diff, but you will improve a lot of little things, by example in 00:29:939 (1,2,3,4) -
Before:

After:

There are a lot (seriously, a Lot xDD) of little stuffs, but I dont wanna make a nazi mod. Try to polish all little stuff that you can see :3
00:38:980 (6) - I feel this will feels better:
01:12:268 (6,1) - o.o, it is the unique stack in all this diff.
:3

[Gabe's Easy]

Hola Gabe ^^
00:11:856 (3) - omg this nodes xD
00:16:377 (3) - Disable grid snap, and fix the spacing, its very noticeable imo
01:40:623 (2,1) - 01:53:774 (1,1) - i understand you change DS to 0.8x here, but this overlap is ugly , consider use 1.0x there

Good luck!

Aurele

osu! Alumni

7,408 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2016-12-12T03:32:57+00:00

Holà ErunamoJAZZ, gracias por tu mod :3
I fixed the spacing @00:16:377 (3) - and I'm not going to change the last part's DS as if I'm changing them, the whole thing is really unbalanced and the song requires a shorter DS.

Gabe's Easy

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TitleUnicode:Greening
Artist:Nekomata Master
ArtistUnicode:猫叉Master
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Tags:raindrops popn 19 TUNE STREET portable Naoyuki Sato Nokashi _Stan Firetruck Gabe Veus
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_Stan

Beatmap Nominator

767 posts

Joined June 2012

_Stan 2016-12-15T04:16:50+00:00

Joezapy wrote:
Hard
00:01:993 (2,3) - This blanket seems a bit off, moving the second red anchor to x=281 y=80 might make it look a bit better | fix
00:04:254 (2,1) - ^, moving the end anchor to x=233 y=122 might make it look a bit better | fix
00:33:226 (1) - This cymbal noise seems a bit under emphasized, especially compared with the jump you used one note before. Maybe increase the spacing here? | fix
00:59:528 (1,2) - I feel like this pattern should be ctrl+g'd. The sounds on the white and red ticks are fairly equal here, but due to the white ticks' inherit dominance, this tips the scale in the favor of the white ticks, so they should be clickable here over the red tick. | fix
01:50:281 - Unnecessary green line here doesn't effect any notes | fix
01:51:103 (2) - maybe move this a 1/2 beat later and make it 1/2 beat shorter, and add a circle here? I can see why you wanted to start the slider here, but the following white tick has a much more important noise that doesn't get any acknowledgement from the way this pattern is currently mapped. Also then it gives the currently unused green line at 01:51:308 - a purpose. | keep it now

The weird panning at the beginning kinda gives me a headache, but besides that, good song, as well as good map!

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
[Stan's Hard]
01:06:103 (1) - not a jump here? | fix
01:08:569 (3,4) - That was bored , all are same ~_~ | fix
01:26:651 (1,2,3,4) - If you are using jumps here, use jumps in 01:25:829 (1,2,3,4) - too. Its feels out of place now :s | wanna keep it's fine
01:32:404 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm not sure of this patter in a hard diff xD | idk let's have a try
Good diff!
Good luck!

thank you two modders and update~

UPDATED 16/12/15

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Greening
Artist:Nekomata Master
ArtistUnicode:猫叉Master
Creator:Lulu-
Version:Stan's Hard
Source:pop'n music 12 Iroha
Tags:raindrops popn 19 TUNE STREET portable Naoyuki Sato Nokashi _Stan Firetruck Gabe Veus
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Nokashi

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Nokashi 2016-12-17T16:27:39+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
Oh, the set is finally complete.

[Nokashi's Insane]
First, a replay too!: https://puu.sh/sKMf1/eb8009b2ea.osr woo
00:12:678 (5) - this SV had not sense for me xD, why not keep the same like in 00:12:267 (4) - to me it sounds like the sounds gets more intense with every reverse and i wanted to compensate for that with a boost to sv. However if this is mentioned in more mods i will change it
00:27:884 - 00:28:706 - Why not make like in 00:29:528 (1) - ??? pattern has been remapped and improved further in a previous mod
00:34:048 (3,6) - ^ ^
00:50:281 (5) - that was difficult to red, please, consider a pattern like in 00:43:706 (4) - , ie: Fixed!
00:56:856 (4) - similar: ^
01:23:980 (7) - ^
nice diff!
Good luck!

Lulu-

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Topic Starter

Lulu- 2016-12-17T20:56:26+00:00

So uh, I'm gonna set this map on a hiatus until January, sorry guys

paranoid_old_1

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paranoid_old_1 2017-01-04T22:32:47+00:00

i would mod, but i have no time, here, take a star~ ᕦ( ͡⎚ ε ͡⎚)ᕥ

Nokashi

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Nokashi 2017-01-05T14:16:41+00:00

Thank you!

Lulu-

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Lulu- 2017-01-06T16:02:15+00:00

wait fuck i accidentally gave kds fml

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