hi
- [insane]
- 00:03:593 (2,3) - you might did this blanket more tidy i guess, like here http://puu.sh/pUIMI/77ca6db273.jpg
- 00:03:243 - starting from here the hs volume is hard to hear, I would recommend you to add 30% green volume here, and 40% at 00:03:944.
- 00:13:243 (1,2) - I'd increase the spacing between them cuz 00:13:769 (2) - has clap on head as well and seems really underspaced
- 00:13:769 (2,3) - the 00:14:120 (3,4) - sound similar, so increase the distance here would be great as well. Reason is similar as i said above
- 00:23:243 (2) - you could make the flow really better if move it to 145 197
- 00:24:295 (6) - 142 60, to make it much aesthetically
- 00:25:172 (3,1) - blanket is off
- 00:27:102 (6) - 299 226
- 00:26:576 (4) - i'd move it to 364 170 for a straight flow like at this slider
- 00:28:155 (4) - I would move it farther cuz strong vocal, but up to you
- 00:30:085 (1,2) - smth like i said before
- 00:35:348 (5,2) - wrong stacked I guess
- 00:32:541 (6) - nc should be here?
- 00:44:471 (2,4) - also wrong stacked
- 00:46:050 (3) - rotate it a bit clockwise to make a nice linear flow http://puu.sh/pUKlK/9d97422812.jpg
- 00:50:611 (8,1) - actually I would be made something like this http://puu.sh/pUKXn/fecf585093.jpg. So then I did better the flow between 00:50:435 (7,8) - , but it's only my preference, so do as you want
- 00:53:593 (5,1) - Actually don't like types of flow like here, at least if you do an obtuse angle between circles try to keep the regular spacing. Anyway I would move 00:53:944 (2) - to 322 248 or at smth other similar place
- 00:56:050 (1,2) - they sound same as 00:53:769 (1,2) - but don't spaced as before, looks kinda odd for me. So if you applied my previous suggestion (or even no, it irrelevant actually), you might make the reverse jump with regard to 00:53:769 (1,2) - (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5564931)
- 00:57:804 (5,1) - increase the distance cuz nc and clap
- 01:29:032 (2,3,4,5,6) - weird to see that you did 1.0x distance here, but at 00:16:225 (2,3,4,5,6) - you stacked same drums. Of couse, maybe it has some logic but anyway, make more spacing at 00:16:225 (2,3,4,5,6) - (0.3 or smth) would be have more sense
- 01:59:383 (4,2,4) - that 3x stack looks really messy, idk what to say more
- 02:00:786 (6,1) - the blanket could be improved
- 02:06:751 (1,2,1,2) - same as i said before
- okay, actually I think you might make this diff more aesthetically through my nazi points (they are also relate to second part, just I too lazy to focus at same points again). Also in my opinion your spacing and flow could be improved. The rest looks fine, so good luck with this