Nivrad00 wrote:

re-PUPA ^^

Hyper

SPOILER

Normal

Beginner

Beginner

Hyper

Another

White Another

Evening wrote:

Hyper

00:26:551 (26551|0,26551|3,26699|1) - Think you can emphasize these synthssounds if you'd like, just to spice things up. Suggesting the following, I know it breaks some consistency here hence feel free to reject | nice idea, but i'm not gonna use double on synth, just like you said, it will break the consistency. put jack to emphasize the synth is enough i think

01:05:685 (65685|2,65907|1,66056|0) - utilize PR here and do 123 instead of 321 | uh sorry? i think the PR is already correct. 01:03:086 - the pitch in here is increasing, while the one in 01:00:709 - is decreasing. and so on
01:10:437 (70437|2,70660|1,70808|0) - ^ | ^
01:00:932 (60932|2,61155|1,61303|0) - ^ | ^
01:15:190 (75190|2,75412|1,75561|0) - ^ | ^

Normal

01:00:115 (60115|2) - any reason on why you skipped this 1/1 ? | i'm following the background piano obviously, to match up with the density in 01:09:026

01:09:026 (69026|3) - What i found odd too was that comparing this to beginner, it's far more easier (it's not a problem that it's easier) but I do feel like this pattern can be swapped with Beginner or is the same as Beginner as these notes in Beginner cover very important sounds in the music (or maybe it's intentional as Beginner seems to be more focused on the synth?) | yes it's intentional as you said, if i'm following the synth, the layer at 01:16:155 - will be clashed each other.

Beginner

01:09:323 (69323|3) - Same comment as Normal | if you do notice the kiai part, they have the same layering (synth), i'm using the same layer at 01:09:026 - to familiarize the pattern so when it came to kiai, the feel when playing wouldn't be kind of sudden

01:15:561 (75561|0) - Suggesting to move to 3 or 4 for PR | i already mention it in Hyper diff

Valentrixe wrote:

Evening wrote:

Hyper

01:05:685 (65685|2,65907|1,66056|0) - utilize PR here and do 123 instead of 321 | uh sorry? i think the PR is already correct. 01:03:086 - the pitch in here is increasing, while the one in 01:00:709 - is decreasing. and so on
01:10:437 (70437|2,70660|1,70808|0) - ^ | ^
01:00:932 (60932|2,61155|1,61303|0) - ^ | ^
01:15:190 (75190|2,75412|1,75561|0) - ^ | ^

Evening wrote:

are you sure? I'm quite sure you've got it the other way around, higher pitch to the right and lower to the left, I asked Valedict to confirm it and he thinks it's reversed too

xtrem3x wrote:

Same BG as this mapset -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/42247

xtrem3x wrote:

Same BG as this mapset -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/42247

Surono wrote:

15ppl like 2how mathematics fothermucker ayy kwkwkw

btw grats.. `L_`

Rivals_7 wrote:

I think I forgot to tell that this song is also in Deemo (Update 2.4) (iirc)

late to fix tags lol, maybe call someone to add "deemo" to online tags :v

DixonBlackwing wrote:

Wah my mod still there on the first page...
so embarassed xd
anyway, congrats for your first quali! really well deserved one.

Leonita wrote:

akhirnya quali jg yaa:'D
eh first page anjir

Alsty- wrote:

Wadoo, gg, grats ͡(° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Aras25 wrote:

GRATZ Valen!!!
remixed version of PUPA by me soon owo!

erlinadewi- wrote:

koepoe - koepoe

ajeemaniz wrote:

awas aja lu valen, kalau ada lagi pattern yg sama di 2 diff nanti jadi space time 3.0
:'V

Ilham wrote:

gratz o/~

hikikuman wrote:

first ever qualified map.. gratz :v

Frostcage wrote:

\:D/

Syadow- wrote:

Gratz valen >w<)b

[Aldebaran] wrote:

My Love SONG IN BMS is qualified,Yeahhhh Gratz

Raediaufar wrote:

Really good stuff =w=

REUSE-ABLE wrote:

MOD MAP REOL GUA >:v

dentek wrote:

Congratz!

Valentrixe wrote:

btw if anyone can give me a pattern suggestion for Kagii's White Another on 00:21:501 ~ 00:35:165
i will really appreciate it

Feerum wrote:

I couldn't reach you ingame so here is my feedback since your words are kinda unclear and i/we don't know how to handle it.

Overall the Part is okay but my suggestion would be to follow only the really clear sounds with LN's what means following LN's should get removed:

00:21:501 (21501|3) -
00:22:690 (22690|0) -
00:23:878 (23878|3) -
00:25:066 (25066|0) -

00:28:779 (28779|2) - <- No LN sound
00:29:224 (29224|2) - <- No LN sound
00:29:521 (29521|0) - <- No LN sound

00:31:600 (31600|3) -
00:32:194 (32194|0) -
00:33:383 (33383|3) -
00:34:571 (34571|0) -

These you could remove. I know there is a LN sound BUT while playing this sound is absolute not noticeable because you follow with your LNs here a clearly different sound. The main melody, what is cool and you should keep it.
If yes, following LN's should be 1/4 LN's

00:26:551 (26551|0) -
00:26:699 (26699|2) -
00:26:996 (26996|1) -
00:27:293 (27293|2) - (Optional]

00:28:927 (28927|1,29076|3,29373|1,29670|1) - and these here to 1/4 LN's

Following the main melody only with LN's make it way more clear what actually get's played and the 1/4 LN's give it a little piece of variety which is pretty cool.
But anyways, i just give the feedback you asked for.
The part is overall okay for me, just 00:28:779 - to 00:31:006 - is very confusing for me that you follow suddenly the pretty inaudible piano with your LN's. At the first two plays i didn't noticed what you have mapped there with your LN's until i looked into the editor on 25% speed. After i noticed once it's not longer to overhear but still, when you don't know what is mapped it's reaaaally hard to notice.

That's all from my side! Hope this feedback helps you

Valentrixe wrote:

you can DQ this map now

Rivals_7 wrote:

now both of our M4M map got DQ by request :v
tapi masalah DQnya beda si wkwkwk

(tambahin tag Deemo tuh)

SpectorDG wrote:

last Another should be "White Another" "Black Another" ?

Nivrad00 wrote:

Valentrixe edited those LNs in White Another and asked for a rebubble. I think the new stuff look good

Evening wrote:

found this while looking through again i guess

White Another

00:36:353 (36353|1,36427|0,36501|1,36576|0,36650|1,36724|0,36873|0,36873|1,36947|0) - quite an odd emphasis on the left hand | i stack them on to balance with 00:36:650 (36650|2,36798|2,36798|3,36947|3,36947|2,37095|2,37095|3,37244|3) -
00:37:690 (37690|1,37764|0,37838|1,37912|0,37987|1,38061|0) - ^ | actually the pattern when it got qualified was like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6614811 , i noticed that there are quite a lot amount of notes in col. 3, that's why i move 00:37:838 (37838|1) - to be more balanced

Evening wrote:

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Evening wrote:

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Valentrixe wrote:

Evening wrote:

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i love you too eve

Rido wrote:

wow baru tau harus ada jangka 24 jam antara bubble sm quali. inb4 my ginkiha only took 12 minutes from bubble to qualify:^). gratz btw