Hyper
00:26:551 (26551|0,26551|3,26699|1) - Think you can emphasize these synthssounds if you'd like, just to spice things up. Suggesting the following, I know it breaks some consistency here hence feel free to reject
00:28:927 (28927|3) - Same idea here, just take the idea from ^
00:31:006 (31006|1) - Think you can do a 3-note chord here if you are mapping to cymbals
00:50:016 (50016|2) - Notice that every 2 measures (that means 8 1/1 long), the artist uses a different set of instruments to emphasize the last half a measure, I think you might want to utilize that to make the section here less awkward. I personally think that the 1/4 swings here are rather hard to time and it's really hard to grasp onto the rhythm here since you're doing a
3/4 rhythm on the synth while doing
percussion that lies mainly on 1/2s.
- 00:51:798 (51798|2,52392|2) - Take note of this piano here, I think you can utilize that to get rid off 1 of those awkward rhythms
- 00:54:175 (54175|3,54769|3) - Take note of the 1/2 here, the artist used a 1/2 kick rhythm here, so it gets rid of another 3/4 if you want to map that
- 00:56:551 (56551|0,56551|1,56774|2,56848|3,56848|0) - Think the whole 1/1 here is full of 1/4 piano, not sure why is part of it left blank
01:05:685 (65685|2,65907|1,66056|0) - utilize PR here and do 123 instead of 321
01:10:437 (70437|2,70660|1,70808|0) - ^
01:00:932 (60932|2,61155|1,61303|0) - ^
01:15:190 (75190|2,75412|1,75561|0) - ^ (might want to do 234 though since you already have a 1 before it)
Normal
00:26:551 (26551|3) - Why not switch it up here and map to the synths? think it's plausible to make it easy while making it less of a monotonous 2-1-2-1-2-1-2 note count
00:58:185 (58185|3,58482|1) - is the gap between the LN end and note needed?
01:00:115 (60115|2) - any reason on why you skipped this 1/1 ?
01:54:769 - kind of odd that you started the stream on a 1/2, think it'd be more comfy if it's on 1/1 as it's easier to time
01:09:026 (69026|3) - What i found odd too was that comparing this to beginner, it's far more easier (it's not a problem that it's easier) but I do feel like this pattern can be swapped with Beginner or is the same as Beginner as these notes in Beginner cover very important sounds in the music (or maybe it's intentional as Beginner seems to be more focused on the synth?)
Beginner
01:09:323 (69323|3) - Same comment as Normal
01:15:561 (75561|0) - Suggesting to move to 3 or 4 for PR
01:25:660 (85660|3,85883|1,86254|2,86477|1) - If we're looking at Beginners who are planning to SS this, I feel that this may be a tad bit awkward for them to accuracy on considering the LN release specifically, might want to extend both of them by 1/4
01:31:823 (91823|1,92046|2,92194|3,92417|1,92640|2,92789|3) - Note how the pitch rises a tad bit more on the 2nd 234 pattern, thus you might want to move the first 234 to 123 just to mimic that
Hitsounding
Beginner
01:28:036 (88036|0) - No idea why is this a Kick Kick Snare Snare sequence, it should be a Kick Snare Kick Snare or Kick Kick Kick Snare, I don't hear a snare on the 3rd beat
01:18:531 (78531|3) - While I do believe the hitsounding here is... somewhat fine, I think it'd be better if you hitsounded on what you mapped, so in this case, you focused on the synths, so I think the most appropriate action would be to hitsound the notes with the same hitsound throughout if you don't want to keysound as it allows players to know what they hit. Using storyboarded hitsounds are confusing basically, since hitsound is supposed to give feedback and storyboard hitsounding, while it is giving some sort of feedback, it's rather confusing.
01:45:858 (105858|0) - soft-hitwhistle.wav@40% Think you can omit this sample in the LN here, don't think it's really needed, (remove the sample, not the hitsound)
Hyper
00:26:105 (26105|2) - Why the whistle?
00:26:254 (26254|1) - I think you misplaced that^
00:58:779 (58779|1) - think you're missing a whistle
01:17:343 (77343|3) - I don't think a snare fits, kick would be better imo
Another
00:16:749 (16749|3) - Found it odd that you have a snare sample and didn't use it in this snare stream
White Another
00:32:194 (32194|3) - Sounds like you're missing a kick
00:16:749 (16749|2) - Same comment as Another
For notes
01:44:670 (104670|3) - I... don't see a reason for this specifically, the piano pitch changes quite a lot, I'm not sure about just 3 4 trilling lol