Hello! M4M!
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Okok, I'm ending here. Its good map, but i think you must work at aesthetics...
GOOD LUCK!!!
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Generalblack - normal suggest
pink - unrankable
green - strong suggestion[/color]
pink - unrankable
green - strong suggestion[/color]
- I dunno, but in original song, sings by Hatsune Miku the title is "Bokura no Let-it-Be" so add "Hatsune Miku Bokura no" to tags . Source: click!
- Background resolution is 1699x1200. Make it 1920x1080 or 1366x768.
- Make combo colours in diffs
RHYTHM:
Hard- 00:02:280 - Why you didn't put circle here?? You put it every this beat, but no here. Imo it's a little confusing if you aren't have note in first combo and then you're putting them in every next combo.
- 00:40:462 - Same like above. You're puttnig every this beat a note, but here's is empty and it's imo complicated too much.
- 00:44:212 (4) - What do you think about put here 1/4 repeat slider? I think it will be good, so it's only 88 bpm.
- 01:37:394 (2) - This is only one 1/4 repeat slider in this part. My siggestion is put here 1/2 slider for better consistency.
- 03:21:541 (3) - Remove this circle, cause you didn't put it before in this part and it's a little confusing, cause you didn't put note here anytime in this part.
- 00:18:644 (2,3) - Move it to 154/211 for make it more readable for beginners
- 00:35:008 (2,3) - If you are blanketing like this try to blanket with 00:35:008 (2), cause now it looks ugly.
- 01:12:167 (1) - You can put first slidernode at 151/152 for make it symmetrical
- 01:36:712 (1) - Ctrl + H, cause this flow looks bad now.
- 01:42:167 (1) - Ctrl + H too, cause you have a better look with 2 sliders before.
- 01:44:894 (1,3) - This overlap is bad. I think you can try to blanket (1) with (3)
- 02:11:485 (5,1) - Make here a little curve for better transition to next objects
- 02:33:985 (1) - Ctrl + J for better flow and unstack, cause it's much complicated...
- 02:44:894 (1) - Another Ctrl + H. It's sometimes bad if slider is going in clockwise and you have next object counter clockwise. Now it's bad imo
- 04:07:393 (1) - Ctrl + J this for better read for newbies
- 04:22:393 (3,4) - You must move this two objects. First 04:22:393 (3) move to 406/251 for better blanket with 04:21:711 (2) and then move 04:23:415 (4) to 258/45 to fix DS
- All is fine
RHYTHM:
- 00:44:212 (4) - This slider is overmapped. Make here 1/4 repeat slider
- 02:22:394 (6,7) - Another overmapped sliders
- Rest is good!
- 00:06:030 (4,5,1) - Make here the same DS for better look, cause now it's confusing a little
- 00:07:735 (2,3) - This pattern is ok when you're doing more patterns in future. Now it's a little complicated
- 00:25:121 (5) - Make a little down curve here for better transition to next object
- 00:51:030 (2,3,4) - Fix DS here, cause it looks ugly
- 01:12:167 (1,3) - This lis imo the most ugly overlap in this map, you can Ctrl + G second slider and then stack it with (2). This jump is imo fine
- 01:19:496 (6,7) - Stack this two for make it more playable
- 01:21:712 (5,7) - Another bad overlap. You can here Ctrl + G second slider and move it to 243/178
- 01:49:496 (6) - Move it to 271/307 for better look and avoid overlap
- 03:02:962 (2,3) - Stack it, cause you always stack notes on this beats before.
- 03:58:188 (7) - I think you can put Ctrl + G here for make this diff a bit harder
- All is fine!
Okok, I'm ending here. Its good map, but i think you must work at aesthetics...
GOOD LUCK!!!