Hello Nowsmart :3
Mod here
Sorry for long delay x.x
[Insane]
00:17:621 (17621|3) - move to col 3 more balance?
00:34:513 - why not add here, you even layer much less prominent sound at 00:34:763 (34763|2) -
00:35:013 - the kick here also prominent, suggest to add here
00:37:326 - you can turn one of the note into LN to cover the long synth sound here.
00:43:263 -
http://puu.sh/qu3RD/39371757c0.png this will fit the PR better.
00:48:076 (48076|1) - move to col 3? this triple different Pitch with the triple before and after this.
00:53:076 - ^ the same
00:58:201 - there's a bit kick sound there, i suggest add to make it consistent.
01:06:826 -
http://puu.sh/qu487/5e1f121af5.png a bit of my suggestion here since the synth sound here actually 2 sound instead of one.
01:19:576 - you can add a 1/2 LN here to cover the buzz sound here, more fun imo
01:33:263 - i don't think you should ignore this, you even map the less audible sound at 01:34:513 -
01:36:076 (96076|2,96201|2,96326|2) - don't understand why this triple jack, try move 01:36:201 (96201|2) - to col 2?
01:37:263 - also add one more note here.
01:44:826 - started from here, make the triple at different column? here a bit different pitch, i think you can make it different.
01:50:826 (110826|3,110951|3,111076|3,111201|3,111326|3,111451|3) - i recommend to just move all of this to column 3, the trill at this section have clearly different pitch with the trill at 01:49:826 - ,you might want to make it different.
01:55:201 - try mapping the buzz here? a bit empty here.
[Extra]
00:27:371 - 0,5x SV here a bit unreadable here, maybe you can try to gradually speed up the sv so it comes out more smoothly?
00:39:451 (39451|1,39513|3) - i expect 1/4 LN here for buzz sound.
00:42:701 (42701|0) - move to col 2 more balance.
00:42:701 - sv 1,5x? 2,0x seems too strong because no special emphasis there.
00:46:076 - 00:46:451 - 00:46:701 - 00:47:076 - 00:47:326 - i suggest add a note here, they are the same kick as 00:46:326 - and 00:46:826 -
00:48:576 (48576|3,48638|0,48701|3,48763|0,48826|3,48826|2,48826|1) - Ctrl+H this? so it would mirror 00:49:576 - , they both are different pitch
00:57:701 - add note here, have same kick as 00:58:701 -
00:59:326 - also add to be consistent with 00:57:826 -
01:10:201 - why not map the LN the same as 01:09:826 - ? you make it the same with the previous LN.
01:18:701 - the sound isn't that strong to warrants 4 notes imo, delete one and add one at 01:18:638 - ?
01:32:451 - just want to say that this pattern is even harder than death diff, due to 01:32:201 (92201|1,92326|1,92451|1,92576|1,92701|1) - 01:32:326 (92326|1,92326|0,92451|1,92451|0,92576|1,92576|0) - .. the anchor at this bpm would be too much even for this kind of SR diff..
01:32:951 (92951|1,93076|1,93201|1,93326|1) - this one that comes after 5 notes anchor before also makes unnecessary spike imo.
01:47:826 - jumptrill here, i notice it's all 12-34 jumptrill, maybe you can make 14-23 jumptrill for drum that have distinctive different pitch there? so it won't be constant same jumptrill.
Sorry not much, running out of time :3
Good luck for nano desu