ClariSxGARNiDELiA - clever -TV MIX- · forum

xNyamx

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-10-26T07:06:39+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年11月16日 at 20:00:12

Artist: ClariSxGARNiDELiA
Title: clever -TV MIX-
Source: クオリディア・コード
Tags: QUALIDEA_CODE watanabe sho toku ed 3rd tv size Project QUALIDEA yumemikusa yasaija_714
BPM: 182
Filesize: 15064kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.3 stars, 79 notes)
Extra (5.32 stars, 380 notes)
Hard (3.07 stars, 230 notes)
Yasai's Normal (1.99 stars, 132 notes)
yume's Insane (4.58 stars, 299 notes)

Download: ClariSxGARNiDELiA - clever -TV MIX-
Download: ClariSxGARNiDELiA - clever -TV MIX- (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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For Rank (#2?)

Easy : by me (ready for mod)

Normal : by Yasaija 714 (ready for mod)

hard : by me (ready for mod)

Insane : by yumemikusa (ready for mod)

Extra : by me (ready for mod) 〈For PP Map

〉

Video: _Meep_

Title Sourse http://qualidea.jp/artist/ed3.html

今回は個性潰しました。

Thanks for mod

_Meep_
TwillghtSparkle
_kotachi_
Rizevim
miradzin
Neoskylove
Kondou-Shinichi
tosiki676
-Yuzuriha

Last edited by xNyamx 2016-11-16T11:01:33+00:00, edited 28 times in total.

_Meep_

1,707 posts

Joined April 2014

_Meep_ 2016-10-26T11:10:31+00:00

First mod

ze mods by ze meep

Extra
00:12:264 (1,2,3) - Overmapped
00:00:396 - Why no map first part? I suggest mapping it like how I did in my own diff(You can ask if you want to take my diff, WIP though) http://puu.sh/rTZwd/f2ff0de054.osz
00:16:055 (3,4) - Dont put so many sliders on red tick,sounds bad
00:20:835 (1) - Stream should start 00:20:176 -
00:21:494 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Slow part,why so many notes?
00:24:132 (3) - NC
00:31:385 (4) - NC
00:36:000 - Stream sound but no stream?
00:39:626 - No sound,why is there a stream?
00:39:956 (8) - NC
00:53:308 (7,9) - Blanket better
00:51:824 (4) - NC
00:54:461 (3) - NC
00:56:439 (1) - Remove NC
00:56:769 (1) - NC
01:01:055 (1,2,3,4,5,9) - Stack and blanket with 01:01:714 (7) -
01:03:692 (6) - NC
01:04:681 (1) - Remove NC
01:05:011 (3) - NC
01:06:989 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:319 (3) - NC
01:10:286 - Put note here, then put spinner 01:10:368 -
01:28:665 - Silence spinner

Just a small mod, but I would like to say this
[list=What you need to improve on]
[*]Your beats are very good,though some do not make sense,such as 00:31:385 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - . This part is supposed to be mapped in 1/3,however you simply added a stream,which is ignoring the song. You need to know when to stop putting notes, You dont need to fill up the whole song, you can leave 1/1 spaces as well
[*]These are not all of the errors. I'm highlighting some of them hoping that you would see that some parts of your map have the same errors as the others,therefore the errors I stated above occur all the time in your map,such as NC and no slowing down of song.
[*]Note placement is somehow fine,however there are still errors in overlapping such as 01:21:824 (4,1) - and 01:23:143 (5,1) -
[*]Hitsounds are good,but do not use hitsounds to coverup an empty part of a song 00:39:297 (3,4,5,6,7,1) -
[*]Try not to leave out part of a song that can be mapped, see my version as I posted ontop and you'll know what to do there,hopefully.
[*]I'll take a look at the other diffs later and see the whole map later. You can keep improving,just map more <3 This song is really nice,and it's a good start, though changing from mapping 1/4 to 1/6 or 1/3 may be confusing to you, but you can approach/ask me anytime if you have a problem <3[/list]

xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-10-26T14:46:31+00:00

Im not good at english!!!!!

_Meep_ wrote:
First mod
ze mods by ze meep
Extra
00:12:264 (1,2,3) - Overmapped fixed
00:00:396 - Why no map first part? I suggest mapping it like how I did in my own diff(You can ask if you want to take my diff, WIP though) http://puu.sh/rTZwd/f2ff0de054.osz
start of drum and music (and vocal) is 00:10:945 - I'll change if more suggestion about it
change to your diff's it XD if add these
00:16:055 (3,4) - Dont put so many sliders on red tick,sounds bad
vocal and musicsound follwing. I'll change if more suggestion about it
00:20:835 (1) - Stream should start 00:20:176 -
keeping patarn 00:18:857 (1,2,3) - and 00:19:352 (1,2,3) - 00:19:846 (1,2,3) - 00:20:341 (1,2,3) -
00:21:494 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Slow part,why so many notes?
As you said, using many notes there. but using simple patarn and not put hitsounds to distinguish fluctuation.
should I use 1/1 or 2/1 slider?
00:24:132 (3) - NC fixed
00:31:385 (4) - NC fixed
00:36:000 - Stream sound but no stream? fixed
00:39:626 - No sound,why is there a stream? fixed
00:39:956 (8) - NC fixed
00:53:308 (7,9) - Blanket better fixed
00:51:824 (4) - NC fixed
00:54:461 (3) - NC keep
00:56:439 (1) - Remove NC keep
00:56:769 (1) - NC fixed
01:01:055 (1,2,3,4,5,9) - Stack and blanket with 01:01:714 (7) - fixed
01:03:692 (6) - NC fixed
01:04:681 (1) - Remove NC keep
01:05:011 (3) - NC fixed
01:06:989 (1) - Remove NC keep
01:07:319 (3) - NC fixed
01:10:286 - Put note here, then put spinner 01:10:368 - fixed
01:28:665 - Silence spinner fixed

Just a small mod, but I would like to say this
[list=What you need to improve on]
[*]Your beats are very good,though some do not make sense,such as 00:31:385 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - . This part is supposed to be mapped in 1/3,however you simply added a stream,which is ignoring the song. You need to know when to stop putting notes, You dont need to fill up the whole song, you can leave 1/1 spaces as well

00:31:385 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - . I think 1/4 beat can follow these part cause strong beat is 00:31:385 - and 00:31:632 - and 00:31:879 - .

another part is... I'll check!!

[*]These are not all of the errors. I'm highlighting some of them hoping that you would see that some parts of your map have the same errors as the others,therefore the errors I stated above occur all the time in your map,such as NC and no slowing down of song.
[*]Note placement is somehow fine,however there are still errors in overlapping such as 01:21:824 (4,1) - and 01:23:143 (5,1) -

I did it intentionally. I think no problems as extra diff

[*]Hitsounds are good,but do not use hitsounds to coverup an empty part of a song 00:39:297 (3,4,5,6,7,1) -

fixed

[*]Try not to leave out part of a song that can be mapped, see my version as I posted ontop and you'll know what to do there,hopefully.
[*]I'll take a look at the other diffs later and see the whole map later. You can keep improving,just map more <3 This song is really nice,and it's a good start, though changing from mapping 1/4 to 1/6 or 1/3 may be confusing to you, but you can approach/ask me anytime if you have a problem <3

I'll check~!!

[/list]

Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Alex3i2

397 posts

Joined January 2016

Alex3i2 2016-10-28T08:46:01+00:00

Great map great song , enjoyable . I played 3 times hehe
I can suggest you for Extra:
01:11:604 (1) - Looks better for me in the middle after spinner.
01:11:769 (2) - you can move at x:160 y:112 if you moved 1 in the middle
01:12:099 (3) - ^ x:408 y:48

Good luck

_kotachi_

567 posts

Joined July 2014

_kotachi_ 2016-10-28T10:02:51+00:00

hi from PM!

IRC

18:15 _kotachi_: 00:12:099 (6,1) - ここ全部スライダーでいいと思う
18:16 _kotachi_: 00:17:374 (3,4) - ^
18:18 _kotachi_: 00:25:286 (6,7) - ^
18:21 _kotachi_: 00:43:417 (9) - これ(10)からもうちょい下に離した方がやりやすいと思う
18:21 _kotachi_: 00:49:187 (1,2) - stack
18:22 _kotachi_: 01:01:385 (5,6) - 近くて結構戸惑ったからもっと遠くの方がいいとおもう
18:23 _kotachi_: 00:58:747 (5,4) - stack
18:25 _kotachi_: 01:11:604 (1,2) - もっと大きいジャンプの方がいいと思う
18:27 _kotachi_: 01:15:066 (6) - 
18:27 _kotachi_: これもジャンプの方が
18:28 _kotachi_: 01:20:505 (3,4) - ここ音的に連打かと
18:29 _kotachi_: これくらいかな
18:30 _kotachi_: ｶﾞﾊﾞｶﾞﾊﾞModでごめんなさい

(少)

yume's Insane

00:10:945 (1,2) - スライダーにした方がいいと思います
00:12:099 (5) - ^
00:16:549 (2) - (1)をコピーしてください
00:17:868 (5) - (4)をコピー
00:26:604 (6,2) - blanket
00:30:560 (2,1) - ^
00:30:725 (3) - 00:30:066 (2) - に重ねると自然だと思います
00:32:538 (2,3) - スライダーにした方がいいと思います
00:36:000 - サークル１つ入れたほうがいいと思います
00:49:022 (7,1) - もっと遠くに置いたほうがいいと思います
00:52:154 (1,2) - 普通のスライダーでいいと思います
01:02:209 (9,1) - 遠すぎるのでもっと近づけてください
01:08:967 (7) - NC
01:15:890 (2) - スライダー入れてください
01:16:549 (5) - ^
01:17:374 (4) - ^
01:25:780 (7) - x301 y228辺りが自然だと思います

以上です！

Good luck!!

xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-10-28T10:50:09+00:00

TwillghtSparkle wrote:
Great map great song , enjoyable . I played 3 times hehe
I can suggest you for Extra:
01:11:604 (1) - Looks better for me in the middle after spinner.
01:11:769 (2) - you can move at x:160 y:112 if you moved 1 in the middle
01:12:099 (3) - ^ x:408 y:48

changed~
01:11:604 (1,2,3) - x 272 y 290 x 150 y 155 x 412 y 62

Good luck

Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Last edited by xNyamx 2016-10-28T10:58:27+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-10-28T10:55:42+00:00

_kotachi_ wrote:

hi from PM!

IRC

18:15 _kotachi_: 00:12:099 (6,1) - ここ全部スライダーでいいと思う 
18:16 _kotachi_: 00:17:374 (3,4) - ^　
18:18 _kotachi_: 00:25:286 (6,7) - ^  
18:21 _kotachi_: 00:43:417 (9) - これ(10)からもうちょい下に離した方がやりやすいと思う 
18:21 _kotachi_: 00:49:187 (1,2) - stack
18:22 _kotachi_: 01:01:385 (5,6) - 近くて結構戸惑ったからもっと遠くの方がいいとおもう 
18:23 _kotachi_: 00:58:747 (5,4) - stack 
18:25 _kotachi_: 01:11:604 (1,2) - もっと大きいジャンプの方がいいと思う
18:27 _kotachi_: 01:15:066 (6) -  
18:27 _kotachi_: これもジャンプの方が 
18:28 _kotachi_: 01:20:505 (3,4) - ここ音的に連打かと 
18:29 _kotachi_: これくらいかな
18:30 _kotachi_: ｶﾞﾊﾞｶﾞﾊﾞModでごめんなさい

(少)

00:12:099 (6,1) - 00:12:264 - にHit sound置きたいので　少しkeepさせてください～。
00:25:286 (6,7) - 00:12:099 (6,1) - をkeepしたので、ここも少しkeepさせてください～。

他は全部Fixedです！　ありがとうございます！

Good luck!!

Rizevim

344 posts

Joined December 2014

Rizevim 2016-10-28T13:37:16+00:00

Yasai's Normal

00:23:143 - u can add notes here

00:51:494 - u can add notes here

00:57:099 (1) - add whistle sound here & add finish sound at the end
00:57:428 (2) - add finish sound here?

00:58:088 (3) - add whistle sound here & add finish sound at the end
00:58:417 (4) - add finish sound here?

01:01:055 (3) - add finish sound here?

Hard

00:21:988 (2) - delete this?
00:31:879 (6) - delete this?
00:34:352 - add notes here?

00:36:989 - add notes here?

00:39:626 - add notes here?

00:56:934 (5) - delete this?
01:14:324 (6) - delete this?
01:14:406 (6) - delete this?

Extra

00:34:764 - add notes here?

00:34:928 - add notes here?

00:50:753 - add notes here?

00:52:071 - add notes here?

xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-10-28T14:05:15+00:00

Rizevim wrote:
Hard
00:21:988 (2) - delete this? fixed
00:31:879 (6) - delete this? fixed
00:34:352 - add notes here? good suggestion!!
00:36:989 - add notes here? good suggestion!!
00:39:626 - add notes here? good suggestion!!
00:56:934 (5) - delete this? fixed
01:14:324 (6) - delete this? fixed
01:14:406 (6) - delete this? keep
Extra
00:34:764 - add notes here? keeping patarn
00:34:928 - add notes here? keep
00:50:753 - add notes here? keep
00:52:071 - add notes here? keep

thanks!!!!!!

miradzin

240 posts

Joined April 2015

miradzin 2016-10-28T17:59:14+00:00

Mod

Extra
00:16:055 (3,4) - Try making a circle and then a slider instead of this. Like this: http://puu.sh/rYGJT/681ea64e03.jpg
00:17:374 (3,4) - I prefer a 1/1 slider and one circle here. http://puu.sh/rYGW3/1bb5d5812a.jpg
00:34:516 (5) - I would prefer mapping the voice here, so I think it's better without this circle.
00:36:989 (9) - If you keep the streaming here sounds better.

00:47:868 - A stream starting here should be awesome

01:10:368 (1) - A spinner here doesn't seems like a good idea

, I see so many possibilities here, one example would be three triples http://puu.sh/rYHz7/00edcf6a82.jpg
That's it, map seems awesome man.

xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-10-28T18:06:45+00:00

im not good at english!!

miradzin wrote:
Mod
Extra
00:16:055 (3,4) - Try making a circle and then a slider instead of this. Like this: http://puu.sh/rYGJT/681ea64e03.jpg fixed~
00:17:374 (3,4) - I prefer a 1/1 slider and one circle here. http://puu.sh/rYGW3/1bb5d5812a.jpg　fixed~
00:34:516 (5) - I would prefer mapping the voice here, so I think it's better without this circle. i think it's likable as extra diff. keep~
00:36:989 (9) - If you keep the streaming here sounds better. fixed~
00:47:868 - A stream starting here should be awesome changed!! stream start 00:48:527 -
01:10:368 (1) - A spinner here doesn't seems like a good idea , I see so many possibilities here, one example would be three triples http://puu.sh/rYHz7/00edcf6a82.jpg sorry... keep. i'll fix it if more suggestion!!.
That's it, map seems awesome man.

thanks!!

Last edited by xNyamx 2016-10-29T10:20:39+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

yumemikusa

4 posts

Joined June 2015

yumemikusa 2016-10-28T18:55:42+00:00

_kotachi_ wrote:
hi from PM!
yume's Insane
00:10:945 (1,2) - スライダーにした方がいいと思います
00:12:099 (5) - ^
00:16:549 (2) - (1)をコピーしてください
00:17:868 (5) - (4)をコピー
00:26:604 (6,2) - blanket
00:30:560 (2,1) - ^
00:30:725 (3) - 00:30:066 (2) - に重ねると自然だと思います
00:32:538 (2,3) - スライダーにした方がいいと思います
00:36:000 - サークル１つ入れたほうがいいと思います
00:49:022 (7,1) - もっと遠くに置いたほうがいいと思います
00:52:154 (1,2) - 普通のスライダーでいいと思います
01:02:209 (9,1) - 遠すぎるのでもっと近づけてください
01:08:967 (7) - NC
01:15:890 (2) - スライダー入れてください
01:16:549 (5) - ^
01:17:374 (4) - ^
01:25:780 (7) - x301 y228辺りが自然だと思います
modありがとうございます。全部変更してみました。mapping初心者なのでご指摘道理になってるといいのですが・・・
以上です！

Good luck!!

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:clever -TV Mix-
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Creator:xNyamx
Version:yume's Insane
Source:クオリディア・コード
Tags:
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Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2016-10-29T04:10:36+00:00

Q

[Easy]
00:00:396 - start from here.
totally, You didn't use variety rhythm. so It loos too boring and you only used 1/2 beats,
00:34:352 (3,1) - It looks harder than before, but Its music part should be easier than others,
01:12:923 (1,2) - Check DS

[Hard]
00:15:396 (6,1) - stack error
00:21:494 - ~00:26:769 - reduce 1/2 patterns, It should be easier than other parts.
00:50:835 - add a beat
00:51:824 (4,3) - stack

Good luck

xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-10-29T05:37:05+00:00

im not good at engllish

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[Easy]
00:00:396 - start from here. i want keep start point...
totally, You didn't use variety rhythm. so It loos too boring and you only used 1/2 beats, okay
00:34:352 (3,1) - It looks harder than before, but Its music part should be easier than others, keep
01:12:923 (1,2) - Check DS fixed

[Hard]
00:15:396 (6,1) - stack error fixed
00:21:494 - ~00:26:769 - reduce 1/2 patterns, It should be easier than other parts. fixed
00:50:835 - add a beat i want put easy rhythm cause before kiai part. keep
00:51:824 (4,3) - stack fixed

Good luck

Thanks

xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-10-29T06:26:51+00:00

yume' insane updated

WolfPlayz_old

WolfPlayz_old 2016-10-29T08:38:54+00:00

My name is wolf and I enjoy your map okay goodbye

Kondou-Shinichi

1,030 posts

Joined September 2015

Kondou-Shinichi 2016-10-29T09:05:53+00:00

From queue
Ill only touch insane because others seems fine and you specified this so here we go

idkwho's insane

00:10:945 (1,2,3) - try not to overlap sliderends
00:20:011 (2) - the combo guiding line is overlapping, try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6435847
00:22:154 (2) - extend slider
00:31:220 (2) - use circle instead
00:35:670 (5,1) - increase spacing since thats what you did with the previous stuffs
00:50:670 - map pls
00:56:110 (8) - start new combo here
00:59:077 (4) - ^^^
01:00:396 (3,4) - increase spacing
01:12:099 (3) - consider new combo so the sv change is more visible
01:13:582 (4) - start the sv change in 01:12:923 - instead
01:22:154 (4) - new combo
01:22:813 - add something here
01:23:308 - ^^^
01:23:472 (1,2,3,4) - I know what you want to do but they're not symmetrical

Good Luck

xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-10-29T09:26:29+00:00

WolfPlayz wrote:
My name is wolf and I enjoy your map okay goodbye

Thanks!!! ( *´艸｀)

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2016-10-29T10:43:20+00:00

Rizevim wrote:
Yasai's Normal
00:23:143 - u can add notes here
00:51:494 - u can add notes here
00:57:099 (1) - add whistle sound here & add finish sound at the end
00:57:428 (2) - add finish sound here?
00:58:088 (3) - add whistle sound here & add finish sound at the end
00:58:417 (4) - add finish sound here?
01:01:055 (3) - add finish sound here?

sorry... All no change ;w;

tosiki676

2 posts

Joined February 2016

tosiki676 2016-10-29T12:04:22+00:00

irc yume's insane

19:15 tosiki676: 01:21:824 (3) -
19:16 tosiki676: ひっかかる

20:35 tosiki676: サークル追加系なんですけど
20:38 tosiki676: １：２１.330からの7コンボの小ジャンプのところに2コンボ追加して見たらいいんじゃないかなと
20:39 tosiki676: 01:21:989 - to 01:22:813 -
20:43 tosiki676: 989がx216y36de
20:44 tosiki676: 813がx72y172です

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

-Yuzuriha 2016-10-29T12:30:25+00:00

from pm

General

HardからInsaneの難易度差が1.5starなので、離れすぎです。
もしかしたら注意ををうけるかもです

Easy

無駄な緑線は消しましょう
https://gyazo.com/7fb4b089d1c4df5e06c9338a59d6cda9

01:12:923 (1,2) - 　１の最後がfinishで２のほうをfinish消したほうがいいかと

01:18:198 (1) - 　全体的にこのような長いまっすぐなスライダーが多くて、別に悪くなはいんですが
　　　　　　　　少し考えて曲げたほうが形的にはかっこよく見えますよ

　Yasai's Normal　

00:14:077 (2) - 　このsliderは２つ単発でもいいかもしれませんね

Hard

00:11:934 (4) - こういう短いスライダーを急な角度で曲げるのは僕個人あまり好きではないので、直したほうが良いかと
　　　　　　　　短いスライダーにするなら、きちんとした理由がないとダメだど思います

00:13:582 (1,5,3,3) - 　ＮＣの変える位置はココです
　　　　　　　　　　　基本的には、大きな白い線を目印にするといいでしょう

00:21:494 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 　ここらへんの曲調だけ変わっているので、SVをつけてみてはどうでしょう

00:52:154 (1) - 　ここfinishは変ですね
00:51:824 (4) - 　つけるならココです
00:39:956 (1,1) - 　ここからサビの間のfinishも違和感があります
大きな白棒を目あすにして置きましょう。少しfinishの位置が１テンポおそいかったりはやかったり・・・

00:56:769　ここの位置のfinishもおかしいです
00:57:099 (1) - 　ふつうはココです

01:21:494 (3) - 　remove finish
01:20:835 (1) - add finish

01:22:813 (3) - remove fisnish
01:23:472 (1) - finish

01:26:110 (1) - 難易度によってスピナーの終わる位置が違うようです
　　　　　　　　同じにしましょう

clapはいいのですが、全体的にfinishの入れる位置がおかしいので編集しなおしたほうがいいですね

　Extra　

NCの入れる位置が少し違います

00:17:538 (4) - 　先頭W 後ろClap

00:21:494 (1) -
このあとから曲調変わっているので、SVをつけてみてはどうでしょう

大体のリズム取りや配置はできていると思います
しかし、NCやsoundsがまだできていないので、知り合いとかに一度教えてもらったほうがいいですね

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xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-10-29T13:46:22+00:00

-Yuzuriha wrote:
from pm

General

HardからInsaneの難易度差が1.5starなので、離れすぎです。
もしかしたら注意ををうけるかもです了解です。　どうにかして難易度差1.5未満で収めます。。

Easy

無駄な緑線は消しましょう
https://gyazo.com/7fb4b089d1c4df5e06c9338a59d6cda9 fixed!

01:12:923 (1,2) - 　１の最後がfinishで２のほうをfinish消したほうがいいかと fixed!

01:18:198 (1) - 　全体的にこのような長いまっすぐなスライダーが多くて、別に悪くなはいんですが
　　　　　　　　少し考えて曲げたほうが形的にはかっこよく見えますよ了解しましたー。

Hard

00:11:934 (4) - こういう短いスライダーを急な角度で曲げるのは僕個人あまり好きではないので、直したほうが良いかと
　　　　　　　　短いスライダーにするなら、きちんとした理由がないとダメだど思います了解ですー

00:13:582 (1,5,3,3) - 　ＮＣの変える位置はココです
　　　　　　　　　　　基本的には、大きな白い線を目印にするといいでしょう fixed!

00:21:494 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 　ここらへんの曲調だけ変わっているので、SVをつけてみてはどうでしょう fixed!

00:52:154 (1) - 　ここfinishは変ですね fixed!
00:51:824 (4) - 　つけるならココです fixed!
00:39:956 (1,1) - 　ここからサビの間のfinishも違和感があります fixed!
大きな白棒を目あすにして置きましょう。少しfinishの位置が１テンポおそいかったりはやかったり・・・ fixed!

00:56:769　ここの位置のfinishもおかしいです fixed!
00:57:099 (1) - 　ふつうはココです fixed!

01:21:494 (3) - 　remove finish fixed!
01:20:835 (1) - add finish fixed!

01:22:813 (3) - remove fisnish fixed!
01:23:472 (1) - finish fixed!

01:26:110 (1) - 難易度によってスピナーの終わる位置が違うようです
　　　　　　　　同じにしましょう fixed!

clapはいいのですが、全体的にfinishの入れる位置がおかしいので編集しなおしたほうがいいですね大きい白線基準に変更してみましたー

　Extra　

NCの入れる位置が少し違います一応大きい白線基準で変更してみましたー

00:17:538 (4) - 　先頭W 後ろClap　fixed!

00:21:494 (1) -
このあとから曲調変わっているので、SVをつけてみてはどうでしょう　fixed!

大体のリズム取りや配置はできていると思います
しかし、NCやsoundsがまだできていないので、知り合いとかに一度教えてもらったほうがいいですね　そうみたいですね…わかりました。　ありがとうございます。

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CrestRising

163 posts

Joined October 2012

CrestRising 2016-10-29T19:29:55+00:00

random mod passing through

Easy

01:08:802 (2) I think this circle being on a red tick will be too difficult for an Easy player to hit, and its too late in the difficulty to feel like mapping red ticks all of the sudden.

Yasai's Normal

00:47:868 (1) The vocal at 00:48:363 feels ignored. You could shorten the slider to that tick and add a circle at 00:48:527 to better represent the vocals.

Hard

00:50:670 (1) I don't think there's much of an excuse for under mapping the piano with a one-beat slider in a Hard difficulty. You should try to incorporate the piano hit in 00:50:835 by shortening the slider to the white tick and adding a circle at the red tick, shortening the slider and put a repeat on it, etc.
You stack half-beats way too much in this difficulty and in a way that is not very consistent at times. Stacking half-beats should be something that is used sparsely and at points of emphasis rather then just used whenever imo.

yume's Insane

00:17:044 (2) I think the whistle on the slider-body makes it stand out too much compared to the other hitsounds.
00:19:846 (1,2,3) I don't see why this part of the song warrants a jump more than 00:18:857 (1,2,3) or 00:19:352 (1,2,3)
00:23:802 (3,4) Imo, I think it would look cleaner if it was centered more in between 1 and 2 like this:

00:29:901 (1,2,3) Its kind of odd to have such a small angle for this jump when 00:29:406 (1,2,3) and 00:30:396 (1,2,3) have very wide angles.
00:58:417 (2) You could make this slider straight line like 00:57:428 (2) since they're both mapping the same sounds.
01:16:220 (3) This jump seems a bit too large imo since you don't use that large of a jump in this part of the song until the very end, so you should probably nerf it a bit.

Extra

00:19:352 (1,2,3) You should probably angle this like you did with 00:18:857 (1,2,3) and 00:19:846 (1,2,3)
00:33:939 You seem to be mostly following the instrumentation, so you might want to consider mapping the drum hit on this blue tick.
00:36:082 There's also a drum hit here, and adding a circle here will better represent the drum stream.
00:39:956 (1,2) The spacing between these two circles seems too small when compared to the spacing of the rest of the section. Same thing with 00:40:615 (4,5), except it looks even smaller than this spacing.
00:59:242 (2,3) The spacing here seems too close, especially since 3 sounds like a beat you would want to emphasize more since its on a vocal.
01:07:813 (2,1) This spacing also looks a bit too small.
01:08:802 (4,1) ^
01:10:368 (1,1) Imo, a quarter-beat distance between the spinner end and the circle doesn't allow enough time for a player to react to the circle, so consider shortening the spinner to at least the red tick.
01:18:692 (2,3) Spacing here looks too small.

xNyamx

298 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

xNyamx 2016-10-30T02:01:41+00:00

Im not good at english

CrestRising wrote:
random mod passing through

Easy
01:08:802 (2) I think this circle being on a red tick will be too difficult for an Easy player to hit, and its too late in the difficulty to feel like mapping red ticks all of the sudden. changed

Hard
00:50:670 (1) I don't think there's much of an excuse for under mapping the piano with a one-beat slider in a Hard difficulty. You should try to incorporate the piano hit in 00:50:835 by shortening the slider to the white tick and adding a circle at the red tick, shortening the slider and put a repeat on it, etc. fixed
You stack half-beats way too much in this difficulty and in a way that is not very consistent at times. Stacking half-beats should be something that is used sparsely and at points of emphasis rather then just used whenever imo. littele changed. ~~keep~~

Extra
00:19:352 (1,2,3) You should probably angle this like you did with 00:18:857 (1,2,3) and 00:19:846 (1,2,3) keeping patarn (angel) 00:18:857 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and 00:19:352 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i think no ploblem. keep
00:33:939 You seem to be mostly following the instrumentation, so you might want to consider mapping the drum hit on this blue tick. keep
00:36:082 There's also a drum hit here, and adding a circle here will better represent the drum stream. fixed
00:39:956 (1,2) The spacing between these two circles seems too small when compared to the spacing of the rest of the section. Same thing with 00:40:615 (4,5), except it looks even smaller than this spacing. keep
00:59:242 (2,3) The spacing here seems too close, especially since 3 sounds like a beat you would want to emphasize more since its on a vocal. fixed
01:07:813 (2,1) This spacing also looks a bit too small. keep
01:08:802 (4,1) ^ keep
01:10:368 (1,1) Imo, a quarter-beat distance between the spinner end and the circle doesn't allow enough time for a player to react to the circle, so consider shortening the spinner to at least the red tick. keep
01:18:692 (2,3) Spacing here looks too small.keep

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2016-10-30T03:52:49+00:00

-Yuzuriha wrote:
from pm

General

HardからInsaneの難易度差が1.5starなので、離れすぎです。
もしかしたら注意ををうけるかもです

　Yasai's Normal　

00:14:077 (2) - 　このsliderは２つ単発でもいいかもしれませんね 00:14:077 - 単発 00:14:406 - 1/2sliderにしました！

大体のリズム取りや配置はできていると思います
しかし、NCやsoundsがまだできていないので、知り合いとかに一度教えてもらったほうがいいですね

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CrestRising wrote:
random mod passing through

Yasai's Normal
00:47:868 (1) The vocal at 00:48:363 feels ignored. You could shorten the slider to that tick and add a circle at 00:48:527 to better represent the vocals.this is not vocal follow no change

thank you for mod!

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Xayler

628 posts

Joined November 2013

Xayler 2016-10-30T19:30:12+00:00

Hey, NM from my queue.

Easy
00:39:956 - I feel that this place should end with either sliderend or start with slider, as it's a big white tick also
00:51:824 - same as above
01:01:055 (1) - lower the duration of this slider by half and place a circle 01:02:374 - here

Hard
00:11:934 (4,1) - the flow is a bit harsh here, ctrl+j feels a bit better imo
00:56:439 (4) - emphasis this a bit more, so move it a bit away from (3)

yume's Insane
Overall: try to avoid random overlaps like at start, as it's Insane then you can use varying spacing, so emphasis some things more, also the hitsounds sound too loud
00:16:220 (1,2) - the flow is kinda bad here, ctrl+h (2) can improve a bit
01:19:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for example this one, try to create patterns, as this seems kinda random to me, try to do patterns with all the objects what you place, for example I did fast something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6450716

Extra
00:17:538 (1) - emphasis this a lot more, the spacing from (6) really kills the flow
00:58:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - as you can see then the (3) is a bit out of pattern, space it a bit more
01:07:813 (2,3) - why they have such slow spacing while 01:08:308 (4,5) - this has a lot higher? you better have the same spacing for the 1st one as your 2nd has
01:10:368 (1,1) - the revovery time is really little here, at least lower the spinner to red tick
01:15:231 (7) - move it like this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6450775
01:24:791 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - so what you only changed at this pattern was the 2nd 2 what you spaced a bit more, why not do it with every note? Like this for example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6450800 , or you can also lower the spacing at the 2nd pattern

Kinda small mod, but hopefully this helps! The song has kinda cool start and end, would even GD. Anyways, good luck!

Chihara Minori

1,235 posts

Joined December 2013

Chihara Minori 2016-10-31T08:48:22+00:00

m4m return

ごめなさい遅いです
昨日の晩本当に疲れった
それであなたは英語を練習したいでしょう
じゃ英語で書きますね

Easy

00:15:560 (1,2) - this kind of NC apply is a bit confusing actually. Since the stronger beat is start at slider and you also givee it a hs right? i prefer to move the NC at start of slider insteead
00:26:110 (1,2) - ^ same
00:18:198 (4,1) - blanket
00:32:044 (1) - this slider take a part of changing vocal, that would be better if you add some angle like this https://gyazo.com/6c7dcb9fc9da7015e8b1bff32b3f099e
00:34:681 (1) - like this for this one https://gyazo.com/de50e498a118255028436ac28b9a7b8c
00:36:989 (3,1) - this flow a bit breaking you know? make it simmilar like this 00:34:352 (3,1) - imo
00:40:615 (2,3) - blanket
00:51:494 - i think it will be fine to add a circle here to make clear the rhytm
00:52:154 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - try this kind of rhytm instead https://gyazo.com/1d7f9355b869fbe22a0614a5ce08af71
01:01:055 (1) - this? https://gyazo.com/7764893debf9532cc5c1d5e8381e9f01
01:02:703 (1,2,3) - same as above rhytm suggestion
01:07:648 (1) - add light up curve here
01:07:648 - try this rhytm https://gyazo.com/954455b74d5a9ba2bed4093a559c05e8
01:12:923 (1,2) - blanket

Normal

00:13:582 (1,2) - this this flow breaker really neccesary? i would like proper flow more tbh
00:24:791 (2) - move the end a bit to right
00:33:527 (4) - because you apply mayor beat clicking at this part this actually better if you move it to 00:33:692 - instead
00:41:275 (3,1) - i think you can make this slightly blanket (not actual blanket)
00:51:494 - add note to give start flow for the kiai that will come
00:53:143 (4,1) - blanket?
01:03:033 (3) - move the eng slightly up and add up light curve imo

Hard

00:13:088 (5) - stack at start of slider is wiser choise
00:23:637 (2) - i wwould actually unstack it and make more movement since you make a "slow" flow there. otherwise stack it with (3) instead
00:24:956 (3,4) - ctrl+g for rhytm
00:41:604 (2,3) - blanket
00:49:846 (3,4) - why not use a 1/1 slider and a circle instead to make simillar as 00:49:187 (1,2) - same rhytm there
00:55:945 (2) - dont stack this, this not holding any rhytm properly
00:57:923 (4) - stack with at 1 instead
01:09:297 (2) - same as earlier, dont stack
01:10:286 - theres actually a quite stong beat here which make this ok to map, add circle here and move the spinner after (end the spinner at same time as before)
01:24:626 (5,1) - blanket

Insane
Tbh this a bit difrent with my kind of mapping style (yeah its an excuses lol) the rhytm choosing is a bit overmapped imo. So sorry that i cant make a spesific mod for this diff. All my advice is try to listen the song more carefully to figure the strange rhytm that applied. I believe you can do that. Good luck

Xtra
Idont see any mayor problem here tbh, just some random NC that bother me, but not a big deal

全ていいと思うよ、がんばってねー　ｇｌです！

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-10-31T13:00:35+00:00

Hi
適当にやってみます

Easy

OD=2 HP=2
自分のやり方とはかなり違うのでほとんど言う事はありませんが最初の部分に少し1/1入れるともっと面白く見えます。例えば00:13:253 -
SPOILER
00:15:890 -
SPOILER
00:40:286 (1) - 個人的にdeleteして00:39:956 - から1/1slider入れたいです
00:40:615 (2,3) - Blanket,自分のApproach Circleを見ながらやるといいBlanketができます。この他にもあったので(01:12:923 (1,2) - 01:17:538 (3,1) -
SPOILER
01:08:802 (2,3,4,1) - ここらへんだがもうちょっとオブジェクト入れてみない？Kiaiの中なのに空っぽなのがちょっと寂しい
01:25:450 (3) - これを01:25:945 - までのSliderにしてみたら？
最後に前半のNC (New Combo)のやり方がずれていると思いますので一応張っておきますね(でもこれが正しいとは限りませんw)
00:13:582 - Add NC
00:15:560 - Remove NC
00:16:220 - Add
00:24:132 - Add
00:26:110 - Remove
00:26:769 - Add
00:42:593 - Add

He's not Vegetable

Manko
SD1.99でAR5.5は高いので5に下げようね
00:11:604 (2,3) - か 00:12:923 (5,6) - どっちかに決めておそろいにしよう？ね？
00:19:846 (3) - Circleだけでいいと思うのだが...
00:20:176 (4) - これは見た目的にアウト、シンプルに丸いのでいいんじゃね？
SPOILER
00:25:780 (4,1) - Blanket, 直せばこうなる↓
SPOILER
00:33:857 (5) - 何に合わせてるのかよくわかりません、個人的にこういうリズムの方がプレイヤーにとって分かりやすくなるかもしれません
00:53:143 (4,1) - Blanket
01:01:055 (3,4) - ^
01:25:945 (1) - 個人的に01:25:945 - にcircle置いて01:26:110 - からspinnerの方が音取りのセンス出ると思います

Hard

00:14:736 (4,1) - リズムをCTRL+Gしたほうがボーカルと合うので個人的に変えた方がいいと思います
00:25:285 (4,1) - ^
00:45:231 (9,1) - NC逆?
01:23:472 (1) - 他のと同じみたいに少しDS飛ばしたら？(01:17:868 (4,1) - や 01:20:670 (4,1) - が少し飛んでたので一応言ってみました)
01:25:945 (4) - ^ここは飛ばすの大事かも？

yume

まずはHitsoundから、ClapとWhistleが少し曲に合ってないと思いますので最初の所だけガイドっぽいのやってみますね
00:10:945 - Finish + Whistle, (ここでSliderの頭か尻尾にダブルクリックすればハイライトが赤くなりそこのみの音の設定が出来ます)
00:11:275 - 00:11:934 - 00:12:593 - 00:13:253 - 00:13:912 - 00:14:571 - Clap only
00:11:604 - 00:12:099 - 00:12:428 - 00:12:923 - 00:13:582 - 00:14:242 - 00:14:736 - 00:15:066 - Whistle only, こういう風にこの後もリズムに合わせて置いてみてください
次はSliderの置き方や形、00:21:494 (1,2) - やりたい事は分かりますがこれはいまだとNG(らしい)のでもっとシンプルな置き方にしてみたらどうでしょうか？
SPOILER

これは自分の勝手ですのでやりかたはシンプルなら自由でどうぞ
00:24:132 (1,3) - これだが一度00:24:626 (3) - を消し00:24:132 (1) - をコピペして CTRL + H CTRL + J にした方がもっと丁寧にsliderを置くことができます。(おまけにCTRL + Shift + Rで角度を変える事も可能ですので験してみてください
00:45:560 (3) - flowを考えてやると個人的にこう置きたいです。
SPOILER
01:04:681 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ここらへんに1/1置けそうな所があるのですが一応TLだけ張っておきますね

黄の(1)は01:04:681 - から始まります
00:52:154 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - これも同じくボーカルなどをよく聞いて1/1を入れたりと工夫できると思います
後はこれたちの繰り返しです、頑張ってください！

Extra

00:11:275 (2,3) - 個人的にリズムをCTRL+Gした方が叩きやすいかも？
00:18:198 (3,4) - 個人的にこういうキックはアニソンにしてはOvermapだと思いますので普通にCircleにしたいですね (00:28:747 (4,5) - や00:36:659 (1,2,3,4) - やその他も同じく)
00:25:286 (1,2) - 00:26:769 (1,2) - 00:28:088 (1,2) - 1/1sliderに変えてみない？ここ1/2だらけなのでプレイ中に違和感が出てきます。
01:01:385 (5) - これ01:01:549 (6) - と合わせてキックにしたら面白く見えそう？
BlanketはEasyに言ったがｱﾚに合わせてやってけば大丈夫っしょw
01:23:472 (1,3) - 流石にここは直そうw
SPOILER

多分一目でこれくらいやね
他に分からない事とかあったらin-gameでどうぞ

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