20:28 k3v227: hi
20:28 zigizigiefe: wut
20:28 k3v227: at the beginning you could maybe use lower SV?
20:29 k3v227: so like
20:29 k3v227: so that this part is more impactful
20:29 k3v227: 00:40:955 -
20:30 zigizigiefe: is 1.10 sv good?
20:30 k3v227: maybe .9 lol
20:30 k3v227: wait
20:30 k3v227: at the beginning
20:30 k3v227: 00:00:155 -
20:30 k3v227: have lower SV here
20:31 k3v227: i think
20:31 k3v227: and then x1.0 here 00:40:955 -
20:32 k3v227: 00:11:855 (5) - this should be a k i think
20:32 k3v227: this too 00:13:355 (1) -
20:33 k3v227: 00:16:655 (5) - here too
20:33 k3v227: 00:18:155 (1) - here too
20:34 k3v227: 00:39:380 - add d here?
20:35 zigizigiefe: done
20:35 k3v227: okay
20:36 k3v227: im just gonna keep pointing out some bigger things i notice first
20:36 k3v227: and then i will return to smaller things
20:36 zigizigiefe: okay
20:37 k3v227: 01:13:055 (510,511,512) -
20:37 k3v227: should be dddd 1/4 i think
20:37 k3v227: 1/3 doesn't feel right >_<
20:38 zigizigiefe: nah,its 1/3
20:38 k3v227: yeah it does sound weird
20:39 zigizigiefe: its 1/3 in song,too
20:39 zigizigiefe: listen here carefully
20:40 k3v227: 01:01:355 (396) - finisher?
20:40 zigizigiefe: done
20:41 k3v227: 01:42:455 (821) to 01:44:555 (832)
20:41 k3v227: could maybe use more notes
20:41 k3v227: while still emphasising the vocals
20:44 k3v227: also i think put kats on the vocals
20:45 k3v227: and then add some 1/4 dons to fill?
20:45 k3v227: could work very well
20:45 k3v227: 01:49:355 (1) - finisher i think
20:46 k3v227: 01:53:930 (48,49) - ctrl g i think
20:47 k3v227: 01:51:455 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - this stream feels out of place a little
20:47 k3v227: like overmapped
20:47 k3v227: would be better if you break it up i think
20:48 k3v227: this also happens a few other times
20:49 k3v227: 01:57:755 (78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - here
20:49 k3v227: 02:02:555 (112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) - here
20:50 k3v227: 01:58:955 (94) to 02:02:255 (111) - add 1/4?
20:50 k3v227: feels a little empty compare to a few seconds before
20:50 k3v227: kiai needs enegry
20:51 k3v227: 1/4 can do this and emphasize the vocal too :3
20:52 zigizigiefe: 02:02:555 (979,980,981,982,983,984,985,986,987,988,989,990) - i added triplets
20:52 k3v227: yeah that should be good :)
20:52 k3v227: it makes the stream feel better imo
20:53 k3v227: 02:08:555 (177) - finisher i think
20:55 k3v227: 02:20:180 (270) - this don is a little awkward imo
20:55 k3v227: maybe make 02:20:105 (269) - a don?
20:56 k3v227: 02:27:605 (333) - end this here: 02:28:805
20:56 k3v227: 02:28:955 - add a finisher here
20:57 k3v227: 02:30:155 - add finisher here too
20:57 k3v227: 02:31:355 (1) - and probably make this a finisher too
20:58 k3v227: 02:22:355 (289,290,291,292,293,294) - this doesn't feel right
20:58 k3v227: i think i hear 1/2 in the music and not 1/4 :x
20:59 zigizigiefe: 02:27:605 (1193) - 02:28:905 is better
20:59 zigizigiefe: 02:28:955*
21:00 k3v227: hmmm that's okay
21:00 k3v227: 02:35:855 - add 1/4 to match the drum here i think
21:00 zigizigiefe: 02:22:355 (1149,1150,1151,1152,1153,1154) - i added two triplets
21:01 k3v227: 02:54:605 (237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246) - break this up i think
21:03 k3v227: 03:03:755 (336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347) - this too
21:04 zigizigiefe: done
21:06 k3v227: 03:08:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here again
21:06 k3v227: :P
21:06 k3v227: i think these changes will make the map feel cleaner
21:06 k3v227: ya know?
21:06 zigizigiefe: nah,this is good
21:06 zigizigiefe: :D
21:06 zigizigiefe: yeah
21:08 k3v227: 03:23:855 (47,48,49,50,51) - change to kkkkd?
21:08 k3v227: 03:21:455 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - you could break this up too
21:08 k3v227: seems overmapped a little
21:09 k3v227: 03:27:755 (78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - same here too
21:09 k3v227: a lot of the suggestions for the first kiai apply here too i think
21:09 k3v227: 03:29:105 (95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111) - could use more 1/4
21:09 k3v227: 03:32:555 (112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) - and break this
21:09 k3v227: yeah a lot of the same
21:09 k3v227: and that's okay :3
21:10 k3v227: okay here's a big suggestion
21:10 k3v227: 04:01:355 (1) - starting here
21:10 k3v227: i think it should be mapped like here 00:19:355 (6) -
21:10 zigizigiefe: 03:27:905 (78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - i don't think break this up,because i think this is good :D
21:11 zigizigiefe: maybe.. xd
21:11 k3v227: and then map 04:10:955 (7) like 00:28:955 (81)
21:12 k3v227: they should be conistent imo
21:12 zigizigiefe: oh
21:12 zigizigiefe: wait
21:12 k3v227: 04:13:205 - add 1/6 ddd
21:13 k3v227: 04:18:005 - same here
21:13 k3v227: 04:19:805 (48,49) - change to ddk i think
21:13 k3v227: there should be a note at 04:19:880
21:14 k3v227: 04:35:466 (168,170) - delete i think
21:14 k3v227: no guitar there
21:15 k3v227: 04:45:966 (281,282,283,284,285) - change to slider
21:15 k3v227: like here: 04:48:084 (299) -
21:15 k3v227: 04:46:672 (287,288,289,290,291) - and04:47:378 (293,294,295,296,297) -
21:15 k3v227: i think they should all be the same
21:15 k3v227: notes or sliders
21:16 zigizigiefe: i mapped this according to drum,not guitar
21:16 k3v227: oh
21:16 k3v227: i think the drums are the same for all of them though
21:16 k3v227: <_>
21:16 k3v227: 04:54:437 (1) - finisher after 1/4 is bad
21:17 k3v227: so you could remove the finisher or delete 04:54:349 (356) -
21:17 k3v227: i recommend deleting 04:54:349 (356)
21:18 k3v227: 05:11:837 (133,134,135) - add 1/4 here i think
21:18 k3v227: 04:58:037 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - kdkdkdkdk doesn't fit imo
21:20 zigizigiefe: this is so good :D
21:21 k3v227: 05:00:287 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48) - should be all 1/4 imo
21:21 k3v227: 05:12:437 (137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152) - kdkdkdkd again
21:21 k3v227: D:
21:22 k3v227: 05:15:287 (172,173,174,175) - i don't agree with the 1/6 here
21:22 k3v227: but if you like it then it's fine i guess
21:22 zigizigiefe: 04:58:037 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - can i change to kdddkdddkdddkdd....
21:23 k3v227: that could work
21:23 k3v227: hmmmm
21:24 zigizigiefe: nah,its kdkdkdkdkdkd...
21:25 k3v227: :3
21:25 k3v227: okay
21:25 k3v227: 05:24:737 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) -
21:25 k3v227: 1/6 X_X
21:26 zigizigiefe: OH
21:26 zigizigiefe: thats death
21:26 k3v227: can you remove it?
21:27 zigizigiefe: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6368647
21:27 zigizigiefe: sayaka fc'd my map xd
21:27 k3v227: :O
21:27 k3v227: wooow
21:27 k3v227: that's crazy
21:29 zigizigiefe: removed
21:29 k3v227: okay
21:30 k3v227: you would probably have to remove it eventually
21:30 k3v227: for rank
21:30 k3v227: i think
21:30 k3v227: <_>
21:31 k3v227: 05:44:537 (13,14,15) - add notes here?
21:32 zigizigiefe: done
21:33 k3v227: 06:11:237 (328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343) - this shouldn't be all 1/4 imo
21:33 k3v227: i hear 1/2 patterns
21:34 k3v227: like k ddkkddk k k d k
21:34 k3v227: something like that
21:34 k3v227: 06:12:437 (344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359) - same thing here
21:34 k3v227: i hear the same thing
21:34 k3v227: 06:22:337 (101,102) - add notes here i think
21:35 k3v227: so it's all 1/4 :%
21:35 k3v227: 06:38:612 (270,271) - ctrl + g i think
21:36 k3v227: 06:46:337 (346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,1) - similar to before, add 1/4 i think
21:36 k3v227: 07:01:937 (82,84) - ctrl + g to match the drums
21:37 k3v227: a lof of the previous suggestions apply to the last kiai too
21:37 k3v227: :c
21:38 k3v227: 07:45:179 - are you going to add notes here?
21:38 zigizigiefe: nah,i don't want add note here :D
21:39 k3v227: 07:42:437 (1) - extend this
21:39 k3v227: 07:49:027 - to here?
21:44 k3v227: also
21:44 k3v227: 07:45:179 - you should delete all of these timing points
21:44 k3v227: from 07:45:179 to 07:48:394 -
21:44 k3v227: i think you need to delete them for rank
21:45 zigizigiefe: done
21:46 k3v227: 00:19:355 - same here
21:46 k3v227: 00:28:955 - here
21:46 k3v227: 00:38:555 - and here
21:46 k3v227: 07:42:437 - and change this to 200 bpm i think
21:47 zigizigiefe: dont
21:47 k3v227: oh
21:48 zigizigiefe: oh sorry
21:48 zigizigiefe: i sent accidentally
21:48 k3v227: lol
21:49 k3v227: 01:49:280 - set audio preview to here i think
21:50 zigizigiefe: nah,01:49:355 (868) - is better
21:50 k3v227: okay, not a big deal
21:50 k3v227: :3
21:51 zigizigiefe: :D
21:51 zigizigiefe: is it over?
21:51 zigizigiefe: im so tired lol
21:51 k3v227: D:
21:51 k3v227: oh
21:51 k3v227: um i think i can stop