Chocola_2287 wrote:

Testplay and short mod from me

mods

19:56 zigizigiefe: hey
19:56 Chocola_2287: hi
19:57 zigizigiefe: can you try my map?
19:57 Chocola_2287: link
19:57 *zigizigiefe is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1053892 DragonForce - My Spirit Will Go On]
19:57 zigizigiefe: there is a few mistakes
19:57 zigizigiefe: but i will fix them
20:06 zigizigiefe: noice play
20:06 Chocola_2287: nice
20:06 Chocola_2287: map
20:06 zigizigiefe: xd
20:06 zigizigiefe: i love df
20:06 Chocola_2287: but tricky, that would make ppl hate your map
20:07 zigizigiefe: lol
20:07 Chocola_2287: most of dragonforce maps do not have tricky patterns
20:07 Chocola_2287: btw
20:07 Chocola_2287: there is a thing i want to point out
20:07 zigizigiefe: oh okay
20:07 Chocola_2287: let me find that part again
20:08 zigizigiefe: which part
20:08 zigizigiefe: guitar solo?
20:08 Chocola_2287: 06:24:437 (125) - 
20:08 Chocola_2287: I think you can make it as streamy kiai
20:08 zigizigiefe: i think this will be better
20:08 Chocola_2287: I think it is weird to have easy part and streamy part mixed in kiai
20:09 zigizigiefe: ok
20:09 zigizigiefe: you're right
20:09 zigizigiefe: oh*
20:09 Chocola_2287: plus, the 3plets uses are questionable
20:09 Chocola_2287: They don't have a particular pattern( in a bar)
20:10 Chocola_2287: I mean ddd k ddd k ddk / repeat 
20:10 zigizigiefe: 06:14:837 (1) -  i deleted kiai
20:10 zigizigiefe: 06:24:437 (125) -  i added kiai
20:10 Chocola_2287: No no, you don't need to delete kiai
20:10 Chocola_2287: I am just suggesting
20:10 Chocola_2287: but 06:24:437 (125) - you have to reorganize the d/k uses for 3plets
20:11 Chocola_2287: they are really messy
20:11 Chocola_2287: not really pleasant to play
20:11 Chocola_2287: overall structure is good, but that's the particular part I think it is weird
20:12 zigizigiefe: idk
20:12 zigizigiefe: i think this is good
20:12 Chocola_2287: Oh, last snipe isn't really good as well
20:12 Chocola_2287: better delete that SVx3
20:12 Chocola_2287: It is unforgiveable that you FC until that part and you got sniped
20:13 zigizigiefe: :D
20:13 zigizigiefe: yeah
20:13 Chocola_2287: if you want to keep the ninjas, make the SV slower
20:14 zigizigiefe: example:_yu68 dt choke xd
20:14 Chocola_2287: some of the green lines are unnecessery, delete them
20:15 Chocola_2287: 00:19:355 00:28:955 and 00:38:555

One more point: idk if the red lines at the last of the song are necessary or not, none of the notes had to use those red lines to calibrate.

Nepuri wrote:

Heyo! Mod from M4M!

The Hitsounds in the silent parts are way too loud, please make green lines with volume adjusted to fit the volume of the song.

Before i nitpick further, please decide what you want to map to, and what you dont want to map to in your streams.
Your map here is very inconsistent with its hitsounding,

00:40:955 (165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229) - this is a massive stream focusing its k's and sometimes even kk's on an even spread pattern on the hihat.i dont want this part is uniform

00:44:105 - what happens from here on out is inexplainable for me, since i dont know that there was a hi hat on 00:44:255 - , because there simply is none.
Please rectify these inconsistent streams, to which i will give a list of the streams that need fixing.
The number of small mistakes in meta are just way too high for me to list up...

So heres again generally some advice.
02:30:155 - to 03:14:555 -
It seems in this part your mapping style is not uniform and doesnt make sense at most partsnope
02:31:355 - here it seems the k placement is almost irrelevant, and i would suggest you tune the k's to the instruments in the background, as seen in most other dragonforce maps (yes even in the streams)i dont want to this part is uniform

03:30:155 (100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108) - why are these finishers for no appearant reason? Please stay consistent with your mapping...done

04:10:955 - to 04:19:355 -
Please emphasize all notes equally, and not leave out notes such as 04:15:455 (18) - and other...yeah,you're right

05:05:237 (412,413,414,415,416,417,418,419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426) - That finisher spam is just way too out of place and even the sharp pitch of the guitar could justify that, please do something else with them, its ok on single notes like 05:09:587 (443) - but dont spam them...yeah,i know this part is bad.fixed

06:14:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) - This stream again is very inconsistent about where you put your kk's in the stream, it seems almost random, please develop a structure for that!

06:47:537 (359) - unfinish? I cant hear anything special about that note.you're right

I sadly didnt point out all the issues because i would kill me doing that, please improve the maps structure, which is important in songs especially for dragonforce (see all ranked dragonforce maps, they have lots of good structure).

Good luck Ranking this!

Ppus wrote:

M4M mod

Tatsujin
00:21:755 (24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - wait... this is copy paste right??? don't be lazy :^) copypasted is fine if the sound is "same"/"Similar"

00:42:905 (191,192,193,194,195,196,197) - maybe kkdkddk here done

00:50:030 (272) - i think d is better here done

00:52:355 (302) - ^ nope

01:13:055 (511,512,513,514) - i can't hear 1/3 sound here... maybe change this to ddddd (1/4)? oh sorry,you're right.done,but i think it should be ddddk
01:23:166 - maybe kkddk here done

01:27:680 (672,673) - Ctrl+Gyeah

01:53:930 (911,912) - change to dd done

02:10:955 (1074,1093) - i can't hear sound here, delete? oh sorry,i forgot this.done

02:52:655 (221,222,223,224,225) - maybe kkkkd? done

03:40:955 (206,225) - same as 02:10:955 (1074,1093) i added d note

03:50:180 03:52:580 and 03:54:980 - maybe add a note.... done
04:50:907 (297) - i think you don't need a slider here, change this by d or k nope

06:00:212 (208,209) - Ctrl+G? done

06:42:437 (308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324) - maybe kkkkddkdkkkkddddk done

07:40:937 (946,947,948,949) - Ctrl+G done

07:42:437 - maybe a note here, also move spinner to 07:42:522 nope.if i do this,i have to add finisher note.and adding finisher after stream is bad

Sorry for short mod because i'm lazy xD
Anyway gl with rank

Oui wrote:

mod

00:01:055 (6) - k
00:02:255 (6) - k
00:07:055 (6) - k
00:25:205 (52) - k
00:26:405 - add k
00:44:555 (214) - k
00:46:130 - add d
00:46:280 (235) - delete
00:48:530 - add d
00:48:680 (259) - delete
00:58:205 (372) - k
00:58:805 (379) - delete
01:07:355 (454) - k
01:07:505 (455) - d
01:07:580 - add d
01:20:855 (595) - k
01:21:830 (608,609) - ctrl g
01:25:505 (646,647) - dd
01:25:655 (648) - k
01:25:805 (650) - d
01:25:955 (652) - k
01:26:105 (654,655) - dd
01:26:255 (656) - k
01:26:555 (660,661) - kk
01:26:705 (662,663) - dd
01:26:855 (664) - d
01:27:680 (675,676) - ctrl g
02:31:355 (1,2) - ctrl g
02:31:805 (5) - k
02:31:955 (7) - d
02:34:655 (33) - k
02:34:955 (35) - k
02:35:105 (37) - d
02:35:255 (39) - k
02:36:155 (47) - k
02:47:405 (160) - k
02:48:980 - add d
03:00:155 (307) - d
03:28:055 (80) - k
01:30:905 (708,709,710,711,712) - ddkdk
01:31:505 (715) - d
01:31:655 (717) - k
01:31:955 (721) - d
01:33:380 - add d
01:37:355 (774) - k
01:37:505 (776) - d
01:37:655 (778) - k
01:50:555 (883) - k
01:51:005 (886) - k
01:51:305 (888) - d
01:53:255 (906) - k
01:58:055 (952) - k
01:59:255 (966,967,968) - kkk
02:08:930 (1060,1061) - ctrl g
03:50:330 (278) - d
03:55:130 (322) - d
06:05:387 (267) - k
06:06:587 (283) - k

Iyi şanslar rank için idk if i'm right lol

yassu- wrote:

hi m4m

I think that is better tailored to voice（Except where the drum is noticeable）

Tatsujin

・change to HP=4?
・00:39:605 - change to d
・00:41:855 - 00:43:055 - k?　00:44:255 pattern
・01:02:255 (405,406,407) - Ctrl+G and 01:02:555 (408,409,410) - change to k d k (1/2)
・01:03:530 - move to 01:03:380 and 01:03:305 - d
・01:04:280 - add k
・01:04:580 - 01:04:730 - delete and 01:04:880 - add k
・01:09:005 (470,471,472) - change to ddk (1/4)
・01:09:380 - move to 01:09:680 and 01:09:755 - change to k
・01:10:655 - change to k
・01:11:855 (499,500,501) - Ctrl+G
・01:12:155 (502,503,504) - change to k d k (1/2)
・01:12:980 - add k
・01:13:355 - delete finish?
・01:13:880 - add k
・01:14:180 - 01:14:330 - delete
・01:14:480 - add k
・01:20:780 - change to k
・01:22:730 (619,620) - Ctrl+G
・01:25:955 - change to k
・01:37:355 (771,772,773) - Ctrl+G and 01:37:655 - change to k
・01:50:555 (880,881,882,883,884) - Ctrl+G
・01:51:980 - add k
・01:54:455 - change to d　01:49:655 pattern
・01:55:655 (928,929) - change to d and 01:55:580 - add k
・01:56:405 - change to d　01:51:605 pattern
・02:07:130 (1052,1053) - Ctrl+G
・02:20:105 - change to k , 02:20:180 - add d and 02:20:330 - change to d
・02:22:505 - change to d and 02:22:580 - add k
・02:24:980 - add d
・02:32:105 - change to k
・02:33:380 - add d
・02:34:880 - add k
・02:40:580 - change to d
・02:40:955 - change to k and 02:41:105 - change to d
・02:41:255 - change to k and 02:41:480 - change to d
・02:42:305 - change to d and 02:42:605 - change to k
・02:43:355 - change to k and 02:43:430 - change to k
・02:44:405 - change to d and 02:44:555 - change to k
・02:46:055 - change to k
・02:47:180 - add k
・03:13:655 - change to k
・03:19:355 - change to d
・03:20:555 (11,12) - Ctrl+G
・03:24:305 - change to d and 03:24:605 - change to d
・03:25:655 (58,59) - change to d
・03:26:405 - change to d
・03:37:130 (181,182) - Ctrl+G
・03:57:080 - add d
・04:26:202 ~ 04:26:202 - You'll be able to fit more sound
　・04:26:466 - 04:26:907 (74,75) - 04:27:613 (82,83) - change to k
　・04:27:790 (84,85) - Ctrl+G
　・04:28:760 - 04:28:937 - change to k
　・04:28:937 (97) - change to d
　・04:32:113 - 04:32:555 (123,124) - 04:33:349 - 04:33:525 - 04:34:319 - change to k
　・04:34:937 - 04:35:378 - change to k
　・04:35:643 - change to d
　・04:36:084 - 04:36:437 - 04:37:143 - change to k
　・04:37:407 - add k
　・04:38:907 - 04:40:319 - change to k
　・04:43:584 - 04:44:466 - 04:44:819 - change to k
　・04:49:055 - change to k
　・04:51:966 - 04:52:055 - change to k
　・04:52:143 - change to d
　・04:52:231 - change to k
・05:02:462 - change to k
・05:08:612 - change to d and change to k
・05:10:112 - change to k and 05:10:712 - change to k
・05:11:612 - add d
・05:11:912 - 05:12:062 - add k
・05:12:212 - add d
・05:14:612 - change to k and 05:14:687 - change to d
・05:15:212 - add d and 05:15:512 - change to k
・05:18:587 - change to k
・05:21:437 ~ 05:21:887 - change to slider?　05:16:637 pattern
・05:22:037 ~ 05:36:437 - You'll be able to fit more sound
　・05:22:037 - change to d
　・05:22:187 - 05:22:412 - change to k
　・05:23:012 - change to d
　・05:23:087 - 05:23:162 - change to k
　・05:23:237 - 05:23:312 - change to d
　・05:23:462 - 05:23:612 - 05:24:212 - 05:24:587 - 05:24:662 - change to k
　・05:24:737 - change to d
　・05:24:887 - 05:25:412 - change to k
　・05:27:587 - 05:27:962 - 05:29:162 - 05:29:987 - 05:30:362 - 05:32:387 - change to k
　・05:33:887 - change to d and 05:33:962 - change to k
　・05:34:787 - 05:35:162 - 05:36:287 - change to k
・05:37:862 - 05:38:087 - change to k and 05:37:937 - 05:38:012 - change to d
・05:42:962 - delete and 05:43:037 - change to d
・05:47:162 - 05:49:562 - change to k
・05:50:687 - change to d and 05:50:762 - change to k
・05:51:962 - change to k
・06:04:187 - 06:05:387 - 06:06:587 - change to k
・06:06:587 - 06:08:912 - change to d and 06:08:987 - change to d
・06:09:587 - 06:10:187 - 06:10:787 - change to k
・06:13:112 - change to d and 06:13:187 - change to k
・06:15:287 - change to k
・06:16:412 - change to d and 06:16:487 - change to k
・06:17:312 - 06:17:912 - 06:17:687 - change to k and 06:17:612 - 06:18:212 - change to d
・06:21:287 - 06:22:112 - 06:22:712 - change to k
・06:28:337 - change to k
・06:32:087 - 06:32:837 - change to k
・06:35:987 - 06:36:287 - change to d and 06:36:062 - add k
・06:52:037 - change to k
・06:54:437 - change to k and 06:54:587 - change to d
・06:55:862 - add k
・06:56:987 - change to k
・06:58:187 - 06:58:487 - change to d
・07:15:812 - change to k and 07:15:887 - change to d
・07:42:437 - timing point is overlapping
・07:48:951 - spiner end point move to 07:48:399 ?

Please call me if you do not understand
good lack !

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Bazı yerlerde birkaç eksik fark ettim, onları buraya yazayım.

01:06:155 (444) - buraya bir finisher gider, d kalsın.
01:15:755 (540) - finisher
02:00:155 (964) - finisher
02:36:155 (48) - finisher, ama d yap.
02:45:755 (147) - finisher, ama d yap.
03:30:155 (103) - finisher
04:13:205 - 04:15:605 - 04:18:005 - bu kısımlarda bateride 1/6'lık kısımlar var. Sadece finisher da kalabilir, ama 1/6 daha güzel duyulabilir. orasını ben de düşündüm,hatta ilk öyleydi ama 1/6 streamin sonunda bir finisherın yakışacağını sanmıyorum
04:54:437 (32) - finisher, ama k yap.
04:55:637 (34) - finisher, ama d yap.
05:02:837 - eğer amacın guitar soloyu yazmaksa, burası tamamen 1/4 stream. Her boşluğa bir adet d ekle 05:05:087 - buraya kadar.
05:24:737 (82,83,84,85) - kdkd
05:42:587 (298) - d
06:08:537 (301) - bu nota diğer finishere göre daha kalın ama k yapman daha iyi olabilir çünkü hala ince
06:34:037 (225) - finisher, ayrıca oradaki red timing point i yeşil yapabilirsin
06:59:237 (477) - finisher, ama d yap.
06:59:387 (478) - k
07:04:037 (523) - finisher

Benim fark ettiklerim bu kadar, kolay gelsin

UnderminE wrote:

Valla başlarda çok keyifliydi, bazı kısımlarda mavi finishlerin eksikliği çoktu. Özellikle şu tarz boşluklar: 02:10:955 - (İlk kiai sonrası olmasa bile ikinci kiai sonrasında olmalıydı)

Lakin sonlara doğru şu "oooo" kısımlarında gereksiz stream var. Yani izlerken sıkıldım :/ Deathstream yapacağım diye çok uğraşmışsın, gitar soloların heps taikoda stream olmak zorunda değildir her zaman. Yani kimse 2 dakika boyunca aralıksız deathstream yapmak istemez özellikle taikoda. Arada nefes aldırman gerek, farklı ritimler olmalı. Deathstreamler bir yerden sonra sadece kkddkkddkkddkkdd olarak gidiyor. Bu şekilde olacaksa araya başka patternler koyman daha mantıklı. Yine de bilemiyorum şimdiki oyuncular böyle şeyleri oynamaktan keyif alıyorsa sıkıntı yok, benim kişisel zevkim.

Onun haricinde eline emeğine sağlık çok güzel olmuş yolun açık olsun ^^

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

• 
  
  00:00:155 - 00:19:355 - why voloume is 100%? This part is calm part.so I think 65% is good.
  
  00:19:355 - Kiai Time vol is 80%.but,This part is 100%.hmm...I prefer this part vol is 85% & Kiai Time is 100%.
  
  overlapping ;e; http://puu.sh/s6V3D/8b17d881b2.png & You can reference http://osu.ppy.sh/s/348808 (Ranked ver)
  
  no need "marathon" tag.

• 
  
  07:48:962 - Spinner End is 07:49:037 - here.

Charlotte wrote:

your req.

[ about]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

[ General]

• 
  
  00:00:155 - 00:19:355 - why voloume is 100%? This part is calm part.so I think 65% is good.
  
  00:19:355 - Kiai Time vol is 80%.but,This part is 100%.hmm...I prefer this part vol is 85% & Kiai Time is 100%.
  
  overlapping ;e; http://puu.sh/s6V3D/8b17d881b2.png & You can reference http://osu.ppy.sh/s/348808 (Ranked ver)
  
  no need "marathon" tag.

[ Inner Oni]

• 
  
  07:48:962 - Spinner End is 07:49:037 - here.

If you got more mod.call me.If have time,I'll second mod

Vulkin wrote:

To reinagurate (did i write that right) the queue revived, ill mod this 7 min map <3
also insert obligatory meme of dragonforce and the colorchanging backgrounds

00:11:105 (2) - make k?
00:13:355 (1) - make d?
00:15:905 (2) - make k?
00:18:155 (1) - make d?
00:38:555 - make this stream kdkkdkkkddddkdk to add some challenge >:3
00:53:180 (314) - make it k?
00:57:755 - kkddddkkddddk to follow better the guitar and drums
00:58:880 (380) - make d?
00:59:405 (387) - ^
00:59:555 (389,390) - Ctrl+G
01:09:005 (471,472) - Ctrl+G
01:10:655 (489,490) - Ctrl+G
01:11:480 (497) - make k?
01:38:555 - make this stream kkkkddkkkkddkdddk to follow the drums better i guess.
01:44:105 - 01:44:405 - add a d on both
02:34:805 - Make this stream start at 02:34:955 - , the note that gets stacked umm, move it where the stream used to start
02:49:580 (185) - make it a d
03:14:105 - add a d
03:45:605 (243) - make it a D
03:52:805 (301) - ^
04:50:907 (1) - move spinner to 04:50:996 - (but spinner end should be still at the same place (04:51:437 - ))
06:02:837 - to 06:05:162 - Something feels off here, can you remap this section? ;A;
06:07:562 (296) - make k?
06:14:837 - put a kiai start here and kiai end here 06:24:137 -
06:47:987 - & 06:48:287 - pls add d on both
07:29:837 (825,826) - make k
07:29:987 (827) - make d
07:30:137 (829,831) - Ctrl+G
07:30:437 (833,834) - make them into k
07:30:887 (839) - make d

Hope this mod helps ;w;

Surono wrote:

no kd

* 00:45:005 - change to d, then 00:45:230 (222) - this k, more easier
* 00:54:605 (333) - and 00:54:830 (336) - like above
* 01:13:055 (511,512,513,514,515) - is not 1/4, delete these. change it to dddk 1/3
* 05:08:237 (151,152,153,154,155,156) - ctrl g, 05:08:237 (151,152,153) - had similar sound like previous kkd. then 05:08:537 - here is dkd
* 05:09:737 (168,169) - change these to k, dont hear had alter drum sound
* 05:12:437 - oh.. I just realised from here, I recommend you do this.. puu.sh/s96Og/d85d63089b.jpg, then from 05:13:637 - here kkddkkddkkkdkkddk. and you will see a magical, loool
* 05:15:512 - change k, dont you hear that guitar?
* 05:18:212 - ^ change this to d
* 05:24:662 - k, guitar
* 05:37:637 (247,248,249,250,251,252,253) - kddkddk, herman li is cool!
* 05:38:087 - kkd 1/4
* 05:42:587 - don ^
* 05:45:662 (28,29) - swap
* 05:57:812 - k, high guitar
* 06:04:487 (255,256) - k these, I still hear that snare drum
* 06:07:637 - from here, I recommend you do this..[2] http://puu.sh/s97kS/f320cdb130.jpg
* 07:20:837 (719,720,721) - kkd, 07:21:512 (728,729,730,731) - dddk
* 07:35:762 (894) - d
* 07:40:862 (949) - why?.................. swap with 07:41:012 (951) - this
* 07:42:062 (965) - ^ d

really fuckin... rank this, Efe!

Kazaze wrote:

Hey from your modding queue, here for my M4M request.
I requested it 14 days ago, wow the delay I've been really busy ~~

Tatsujin

• 00:00:155 to 00:19:355 - The volume on this part should be reduced, the offset sets the volume to 65% which I think is a great choice but there's a timing point overlapping it and changing the volume back to 100% so I think this should be fixed
• For this first part, I think that notes could be added in all these blank spaces : 00:00:905 ; 00:02:105 ; 00:03:305 etc.
Because there's definitely a string sound on these spots. If you decide not to fill these, you could actually add notes in those spaces in the 2nd part : from 04:01:355 to 04:10:955 to differenciate these two parts
• I would remove the finisher on that note : 02:08:555 (1047) because the sound isn't that loud and the next similar note 02:11:105 (1068) isn't a finisher
• 02:16:355 (1108,1109,1110) - The 3 guitar sounds you're mapping are at the same pitch, so change 02:16:505 (1110) to a k
• 02:26:030 - Add a k here just like 02:16:355 (1108,1109,1110) and change 02:26:105 (1188) to a k if you did previously
• 03:06:155 (354) - There's a cymbal sound and I think it should be emphasized, add a finisher on that note
• 03:46:505 (249) - Same suggestion as previously - k
• 03:56:030 - Same suggestion, add a k and change to a k
• 04:20:255 (34,35,36) - This could be a 1/4 pattern, I would suggest adding a d on both 04:20:330 and 04:20:480 because it sounds similar to 04:20:405 (36)
• 05:08:237 (151,152,153,154,155,156) - I think you should invert these two using Ctrl + g, 05:08:237 (151,152,153) sounds identical to 05:07:937 (148,149,150) so I think it should be mapped the same and the pitch actually varies on 05:08:537 (154,155,156) so it should be mapped differently
• 05:55:787 (160) - Just a little suggestion here, I would change to a k and change 05:55:937 (161) to a d, I just think it works a bit better that way
• For 06:07:637 (296,297,298,299,300,301,302) and 06:08:237 (303,304,305,306,307,308,309)
I think that 06:08:012 (301) and should be removed. The guitar sound from the previous notes are held on these spots so I think that adding some breaks emphasizes this
• 07:01:862 - There's a loud drum sound here, it's the continuation of the drums in 07:01:712 (500) for exemple so I think you should a note a d, or at least fill in the gap because I don't think that there's need of one
• 07:31:787 (850,851,852,853,854,855) - I actually think that this part would works better if you moved 07:32:162 (853) to 07:32:012
And added a note here : 07:32:312
• I checked back : Same suggestion for 07:22:187 (736,737,738,739,740,741)

I really hope that my mod helped!
Good luck for the future!

Chromoxx wrote:

streams are fun, map doesn't get boring after 7minutes...
i must say this really surprised me, good luck!

`L_`

2016-08-26 14:19 zigizigiefe: heyo
2016-08-26 14:19 Chromoxx: hi
2016-08-26 14:20 zigizigiefe: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1053892 DragonForce - My Spirit Will Go On]
2016-08-26 14:20 zigizigiefe: can you mod my map pls
2016-08-26 14:20 zigizigiefe: i want to rank this
2016-08-26 14:20 Chromoxx: sorry, i arleady have too many mod requests atm
2016-08-26 14:20 zigizigiefe: :/
2016-08-26 14:20 zigizigiefe: later?
2016-08-26 14:20 Chromoxx: idk, i'll see
2016-08-26 14:21 zigizigiefe: ty for answer
2016-08-26 14:21 Chromoxx: np
2016-11-08 19:24 zigizigiefe: hey
2016-11-08 19:24 Chromoxx: hi
2016-11-08 19:25 zigizigiefe: i have a request :/
2016-11-08 19:25 zigizigiefe: if you have time,can you check my map?
2016-11-08 19:25 zigizigiefe: i need BN check
2016-11-08 19:25 zigizigiefe: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1053892 DragonForce - My Spirit Will Go On]
2016-11-08 19:25 Chromoxx: read userpage, i don't take check requests
2016-11-08 19:26 zigizigiefe: ah
2016-11-08 19:26 zigizigiefe: testplay?
2016-11-08 19:26 Chromoxx: sure
2016-11-08 19:26 zigizigiefe: thanks xd
2016-11-08 19:35 zigizigiefe: lol nice
2016-11-08 19:36 Chromoxx: lol nice
2016-11-08 19:36 zigizigiefe: thanks
2016-11-08 19:36 Chromoxx: tbh this was very fun
2016-11-08 19:36 zigizigiefe:
2016-11-08 19:36 zigizigiefe: thx
2016-11-08 19:37 Chromoxx: i'll check this i guess xD
2016-11-08 19:37 zigizigiefe: oh
2016-11-08 19:37 zigizigiefe: are you serious?
2016-11-08 19:37 zigizigiefe: THANKS A LOT
2016-11-08 19:37 zigizigiefe: I LOVE U <3
2016-11-08 19:37 Chromoxx: lmao
2016-11-08 19:37 zigizigiefe: i think this will be my first ranked map
2016-11-08 19:37 Chromoxx: well you let me testplay a nearly 8min map without getting bored xD
2016-11-08 19:38 zigizigiefe:
2016-11-08 19:38 zigizigiefe: taiko needs more dragonforce
2016-11-08 19:38 Chromoxx: "mapping inspired by surono"
2016-11-08 19:38 Chromoxx: ayyy
2016-11-08 19:39 zigizigiefe: inspirited*
2016-11-08 19:39 zigizigiefe: he helped me too much
2016-11-08 19:39 Chromoxx: i'm not sure if "inspirited" is even a word lol
2016-11-08 19:40 zigizigiefe: lol
2016-11-08 19:42 zigizigiefe: i think that's misspelling
2016-11-08 19:42 Chromoxx: lel
2016-11-08 19:44 zigizigiefe: TEAM DRAGONFORCE
2016-11-08 19:44 Chromoxx: ayy
2016-11-08 19:52 zigizigiefe: YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
2016-11-09 21:06 zigizigiefe: TEAM DRAGONFORCE
2016-11-09 21:06 zigizigiefe: YEAAAAHHHHHHHHHH
2016-11-09 21:07 Chromoxx: lmao
2016-11-09 21:07 Chromoxx: prolly gonna mod it today
2016-11-09 21:07 zigizigiefe: probably*
2016-11-09 21:07 zigizigiefe: thanks~
2016-11-09 21:07 Chromoxx: np
2016-11-09 21:11 zigizigiefe: i expected bubble ;_; whatever...
2016-11-09 21:12 Chromoxx: mod, then after you apply the mod recheck and bubble lol
2016-11-09 21:12 Chromoxx: that's how it works xD
2016-11-09 21:13 zigizigiefe: OH
2016-11-09 21:13 zigizigiefe: BUBBLE
2016-11-09 21:13 zigizigiefe: THANKS
2016-11-09 21:13 zigizigiefe: A
2016-11-09 21:13 zigizigiefe: LOT
2016-11-09 21:19 zigizigiefe: CHROMO
2016-11-09 21:19 zigizigiefe: <3
2016-11-09 21:19 Chromoxx: i won't wast time on modding anything i don't intend to bubble
2016-11-09 21:22 zigizigiefe: SAD
2016-11-09 21:32 Chromoxx: if you want we can irc mod in a minute when i finished what i'm doing atm
2016-11-09 21:32 zigizigiefe: yeah
2016-11-09 21:33 zigizigiefe: i want
2016-11-09 21:33 zigizigiefe: but
2016-11-09 21:33 zigizigiefe: im going to smoking,i will message to you
2016-11-09 21:33 Chromoxx: lmao ok xD
2016-11-09 21:33 zigizigiefe: xD
2016-11-09 21:33 zigizigiefe: thanks
2016-11-09 21:48 zigizigiefe: i am back
2016-11-09 21:48 Chromoxx: okay, let me just update a GD on my set and then we're good to go
2016-11-09 21:49 zigizigiefe: okey
2016-11-09 21:53 Chromoxx: okay, i should be ready now
2016-11-09 21:55 Chromoxx: 00:03:155 (5) - change this to d since there's still a deeper sound here and the kk at the start of this 5plet emphasizes the general higher pitch enough already
2016-11-09 21:55 Chromoxx: 00:07:955 (5) - ^
2016-11-09 21:56 zigizigiefe: 04:04:355 (17) - same?
2016-11-09 21:56 Chromoxx: no
2016-11-09 21:57 Chromoxx: there's a sound there that supports the K more
2016-11-09 21:57 zigizigiefe: okey
2016-11-09 21:57 zigizigiefe: should i add finisher?
2016-11-09 21:57 Chromoxx: nah, it's ok without
2016-11-09 21:58 zigizigiefe: okey
2016-11-09 21:59 Chromoxx: 01:13:055 (512,513,514,515) - you can't really hear the 1/3 here clearly in the music so i'd just suggest a normal ddddk instead
2016-11-09 22:00 zigizigiefe: i hear 1/4 sound
2016-11-09 22:00 zigizigiefe: but surono and nwolf said "there is 1/3"
2016-11-09 22:00 zigizigiefe:
2016-11-09 22:01 Chromoxx: well it's there in the music, but you can't hear it that clearly when playing
2016-11-09 22:01 Chromoxx: it's up to you though... both would be fine
2016-11-09 22:01 zigizigiefe: 1/4 is better
2016-11-09 22:01 zigizigiefe: i guess
2016-11-09 22:02 Chromoxx: well, 1/3 follows the music better tbh, i just feel like 1/4 would play better there and continue the flow
2016-11-09 22:02 zigizigiefe: okey
2016-11-09 22:05 Chromoxx: 02:18:755 - i feel like you could do something more interesting with these triplets
2016-11-09 22:05 Chromoxx: it works ok the way they are, but the guitar notes have different pitches so i think you could emphasize that by using different types of triplets instead of only the same ones
2016-11-09 22:06 zigizigiefe: what's your suggestion
2016-11-09 22:06 zigizigiefe: im aware of this triplets are bad
2016-11-09 22:07 Chromoxx: kdk ddd kkd kdd kkddk
2016-11-09 22:07 Chromoxx: or something like that
2016-11-09 22:08 zigizigiefe: done
2016-11-09 22:08 Chromoxx: 02:21:155 - same pattern here
2016-11-09 22:09 Chromoxx: 02:23:555 - and here too
2016-11-09 22:09 zigizigiefe:
2016-11-09 22:09 zigizigiefe: okey
2016-11-09 22:10 zigizigiefe: 03:48:305 - same?
2016-11-09 22:10 Chromoxx: oh yes
2016-11-09 22:12 zigizigiefe: done
2016-11-09 22:13 Chromoxx: 05:12:437 - thx for the pp XD
2016-11-09 22:13 zigizigiefe: xdxdxdx
2016-11-09 22:14 zigizigiefe: np
2016-11-09 22:14 zigizigiefe: thats surono's idea
2016-11-09 22:14 Chromoxx: xD
2016-11-09 22:14 Chromoxx: surono my boi...
2016-11-09 22:14 zigizigiefe: is that good?
2016-11-09 22:14 zigizigiefe: becuz im not sure..
2016-11-09 22:15 Chromoxx: yeah it's ok
2016-11-09 22:15 zigizigiefe: oh
2016-11-09 22:15 zigizigiefe: noice
2016-11-09 22:17 Chromoxx: uhm ok i think we are good
2016-11-09 22:17 Chromoxx: update the map pls so that i can do a last check for any minor issues before bubbling
2016-11-09 22:18 zigizigiefe: is that enough?
2016-11-09 22:18 zigizigiefe: oh okay
2016-11-09 22:18 zigizigiefe: updated

Raiden wrote:

I did not expect a bubble here yet.

00:00:155 - why is this section 100% volume but then 00:19:355 - 85%? First one is notoriously less loud.done
00:28:955 - The sudden density drop makes it somewhat awkward. The music goes louder, and kicks start to get potent. So correct interpretation would be to make the second part more intense.done
02:06:155 (1030,1031,1032,1033,1034,1035,1036,1037,1038,1039,1040,1041,1042,1043,1044,1045,1046) - what is this following...? I can't hear a clear structure here. Correct percussion following would be something like this http://puu.sh/scozd.jpg (some notes were modified for flow purposes)done
02:07:280 - There is no note heredone
02:38:930 - why ignore this note?done
02:40:880 - ^okey
02:48:230 (171) - this should be a don and 02:48:680 (177,178) - ctrl+g for proper snare emphasisdone
02:49:205 (182) - kat ^done
04:01:355 - should have less volume, and some variation wouldn't hurt, like changing 04:02:705 (8) - to kat and some following notesdone
04:10:955 - add 1/2s when there is melody. Density drop does not fit here.done
04:20:555 - This SV transition looks quite poor and not worked on. Use a transition SV to smooth it out.alright
05:02:837 - guitar is still going full 1/4 until 05:05:237 - , why did you stop?ok
05:05:837 - this pattern is not full 1/4, it has stops at 05:05:912 (123) - 05:06:362 (129) - 05:06:662 (133) - done
05:12:437 (202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216,217) - totally unacceptable. While guitar may seem like having a weird snap, simplifying the rhythm to 1/4 is the best choice here, as the number of notes played do work with 1/4 snap.rip free pp
05:21:437 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45) - why is this all 1/4 if you were following guitar?i fixed
05:22:037 - I don't understand the structure of this stream... what is it following? To me it seems like a random mixture of kdddk and dkkkd with some kdk in the middle.fixed
05:26:768 - why is this empty if the song is still full nuts 1/4?okey
06:34:037 - red line is not neccessary, lands exactly on the 4th measure you're right
07:17:237 - this certainly is NOT full 1/4
in fact full 1/4 starts HERE 07:22:037 - and ends on 07:24:437 - okey
07:26:837 - again, full 1/4 doesnt start until 07:28:037 - and ends on 07:29:237 -
then starts again at 07:31:637 - and ends 07:34:037 - ok
07:36:437 - starts again and ends 07:39:137 - yes

OD6,5 is probably better okey

I probably missed many other points where you ignored/added notes, so probably better if you get some more mods (from experienced modders) before pushing this forward again

UnderminE wrote:

Bubble için çok acele etme bence, amacın mapi en güzel şekilde sunmak olsun. Hemen oldu bittiye ranked olursa böyle daha çok şurası şöyle olmuş böyle olmuş diyen çıkar :/ Biraz daha mod topla bence.

Surono wrote:

=L_=

>General
* Raiden said 06:34:037 - here is unnecessary with red lines, but with evens metronome is fit lol *play with NC* but no problem, 06:33:887 - move this end of kiai to 06:34:037 - here
* 07:42:437 - this really unnecessary red lines

>Mod
* 01:19:655 (579,580,581,582) - change these to kat, follow the snare drum. 01:19:505 (578) - if you want change it to don for transition sound
* 02:01:505 (976,977,978,979) - make d kkd. there is no drum sound 02:01:580 -
* 02:02:555 (986,987,988) - I feels this forced and inconsistent with previous similar spot like this, 02:02:630 - delete this and 02:02:555 - fill finisher, like you did 02:00:155 - 02:01:355 -
* 02:09:455 (1052,1053,1054) - why this different with those kkd, even the sound is same? change it to kkd. you already have variation at 02:12:305 (1075,1076,1077) - and 02:14:105 (1089,1090,1091,1094,1095,1096) - these
* 02:15:230 - add don, consistent with previous 5plet structure and follow the guitar.
* I hear full drum in here 02:15:905 -, fill don on 02:15:980 - and 02:16:280 - as ddkkddkkd
* 02:20:105 - change kat? the guitar shrill works better with kkkdk
* 02:22:580 - change kat, it sounds not monotone, that wave guitar
* 02:24:830 - change don, 02:15:230 - it sounds similar and if you applied there
* 02:48:455 (176,177,178,179,180) - ddkdk, bcus 02:48:605 (178,180) - those snare drum
* 02:54:680 - change don if you hear that guitar flows
* 02:58:730 - I hear this drum is clear, add don
* 03:31:505 (115,116,117,118) - like previous 02:01:580 - same spot, change to d kkd
* 02:01:505 (976,977,978,979) - ^ change to K d
* 03:45:230 - my previous point for similar spot is don. you need variation here, change don
* 03:45:905 - like previous previous, ddkkddkkd
* 03:54:830 - don, like previous. kdddk
* 04:24:702 - do you want it kat for wave of guitar?
* 04:45:966 (316) - 04:46:672 (318) - 04:47:378 (320) - 04:48:084 (322) - unsnapd slider end
* 05:21:587 - change kat, high guitar
* 05:27:287 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120) - this is pain but nvm, because rarely to hit like these pattern. oh well, at least it was innovation!
* 05:36:362 - I think here is monotone and the drum as well, change don as ddd
* 05:37:262 - kat this as transition of guitar
* 05:41:087 (285,286,287,288,289) - between here is awkward to hear and play, 05:41:612 - move to 05:41:462 - here and change kat
* 05:46:487 - me nub
* 06:07:637 (296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309) - same reason 2nd above, change these as kdkdkkk kdkdkkd
* 06:11:387 (343,344) - ctrl g as dkkdkkd, the transition of guitar works better right?
* 06:33:062 (213,219) - I think on this stream you could change don as layering random cymbal sound
* 06:52:037 (408,409,410,411,412,413,414,415,416,417,418,419,420,421,422) - if you want change like this http://puu.sh/scJXJ/b3ce48e456.jpg because the tom drum it sounds like repeating and I dont hear the transition with your current pattern. fine but awkward if you keep those
* 07:01:637 (500,501) - change kat as kkk, all drum is high right?
* 07:05:387 (537,538,539,540) - like previous, d kkd
* 07:06:437 (547,548,549) - ^ K d
* 07:12:887 (629) - don and 07:12:737 (627,631) - change kat bcus the snare drum start can be listen here.
* 07:13:637 (639,640,641,642,643,644,645,646,647,648,649) - kkddkdkdkkd, reason same above
* 07:14:837 (655,656,657,658,659,660,661,662,663,664,665,666,667,668,669) - http://puu.sh/scKAp/6a33ef67ee.jpg reason same above
* 07:36:887 - don, 07:37:487 (892,893) - don, 07:37:637 (894) - and kat. transition should be like this

transition pattern for drum sound just like making new transition as layering vocal or guitar mostly. Inconsistent just at chorus and a bit awkward pattern on guitar but seems overall well mapped at guitar.

dont kudos, I have 1 on top post. this last I help you because many times I did it again in-game lol. find modders more, Good Luck!

02:59 zigizigiefe: MY SOOOOL AND MY ZIGIRIT WILL GO OOON
03:03 zigizigiefe: will you post on forum or is that irc mod?
03:04 zigizigiefe: :D
03:04 Surono: ye
03:05 zigizigiefe: im going to sleeping
03:05 zigizigiefe: thats why now i am lazy to edit this :D
03:05 Surono: thats good.
03:05 Surono: wait mods then selfmod.
03:05 zigizigiefe: wat
03:05 Surono: dont change anything before modders looks ur map.
03:06 Surono: .... do you need mods, if you afraid with ur hands *lol
03:06 zigizigiefe: or now i don't sleep
03:06 zigizigiefe: i'll sleep 1 hour later xD
03:07 Surono: haha
03:07 zigizigiefe: :D
03:07 zigizigiefe: im waiting for your modding :D
03:50 Surono: done
03:50 Surono: good luck
03:50 zigizigiefe: lol
03:50 zigizigiefe: okey :D
03:50 Surono: really you wont 1/8 it back?
04:18 zigizigiefe: sur
04:18 zigizigiefe: i have a question
04:18 Surono: yes
04:18 zigizigiefe: oh
04:18 zigizigiefe: nothing
04:18 zigizigiefe: my bad lol
04:18 Surono: there is my bad suggestion u disagree?
04:18 zigizigiefe: nope
04:18 zigizigiefe: i got it wrong
04:19 zigizigiefe: oh there is a thunder
04:19 zigizigiefe: oh
04:19 zigizigiefe: im dead lol
04:19 zigizigiefe: whatever..
04:19 Surono: XD
04:19 zigizigiefe: i will edit map till the powercut lol
04:26 zigizigiefe: oh wait
04:27 Surono: huh
04:27 zigizigiefe: http://puu.sh/scOpu/c3894e7c75.png i didnt understand this part
04:27 Surono: finisher kat, then don
04:27 Surono: 1/2
04:27 Surono: kkd > K d
04:27 Surono: delete kat in middle
04:28 zigizigiefe: oh okay :D
04:28 zigizigiefe: http://puu.sh/scOti/49528883eb.jpg like this?
04:28 Surono: previously u have 2 finisher on Vocal. so there is too
04:28 zigizigiefe: consecutive two finishers lol
04:28 zigizigiefe: :D
04:28 Surono: yes
04:28 zigizigiefe: okey
04:29 Surono: wait.
04:29 Surono: where is there
04:29 Surono: link me that spot.
04:29 zigizigiefe: 02:01:355 (975,976) -
04:29 Surono: wat...
04:29 Surono: 02:01:505 - d kkd
04:29 Surono: 02:02:555 - K d is here
04:29 zigizigiefe: oh lol
04:30 Surono: my link is wrong?
04:30 Surono: on thread?
04:30 zigizigiefe: i guess
04:30 Surono: uh
04:30 Surono: I check it...
04:30 zigizigiefe: :D
04:30 Surono: noice surno..
04:31 zigizigiefe: :D:D
04:31 Surono: why?
04:31 zigizigiefe: oh,i forgot fixing sliders
04:31 Surono: are u laugh to me =_=
04:32 Surono: 02:01:505 - every like this... change to d kkd
04:32 Surono: 02:02:555 - then this K d
04:32 zigizigiefe: nope
04:32 Surono: well. I forget to copypaste mostly.. just focusing on wording.. so yeah sorry
04:33 zigizigiefe: 05:21:437 (38,39,40,41,42,43) - can i change to kkkdkkd?
04:33 zigizigiefe: http://puu.sh/scOPI/48852fb94e.jpg like this
04:33 Surono: ikr.
04:33 Surono: yes., with guitar is ok
04:33 zigizigiefe: [http://puu.sh/scOPI/48852fb94e.jpg lol]
04:34 Surono: ikr [2]
04:34 zigizigiefe: :D
04:35 Surono: =_= i feel ur is like cold but forced to be hype person.....
04:35 Surono: stop with ":D :D D D D "
04:35 Surono: with out eyes.. is better
04:35 Surono: D
04:35 zigizigiefe: i am eyeless cat
04:35 Surono: `_L`
04:35 zigizigiefe: thats why im sp00ky
04:35 Surono: too spooky
04:41 zigizigiefe: 07:12:437 (622,623,624,625,626,627,628,629,630,631) -  if there will be kddddkdddk,it looks bad
04:41 zigizigiefe: maybe kddddkkddk?
04:41 Surono: did you see my suggestion?
04:41 Surono: to follow snare drum?
04:42 zigizigiefe: yeag
04:42 zigizigiefe: yeah*
04:42 Surono: yes
04:42 zigizigiefe: maybe kddddkkdk
04:42 Surono: 07:12:887 - this don
04:42 zigizigiefe: i think this will be better
04:42 Surono: 07:12:737 (627,631) - these cat
04:42 zigizigiefe: yeah
04:42 zigizigiefe: done
04:43 Surono: ok
04:43 Surono: just ok...
04:43 zigizigiefe: im surprised
04:43 Surono: ....
04:43 zigizigiefe: okey
04:43 zigizigiefe: done
04:43 zigizigiefe: i will update
04:43 Surono: surprised..
04:43 Surono: then u talkin with ur current pattern
04:44 Surono: thats weird ~_~
04:44 zigizigiefe: :d
04:44 Surono: ye
04:44 zigizigiefe: yeah
04:44 zigizigiefe: but..idk
04:44 Surono: yeah
04:44 Surono: u just confused with my english
04:44 Surono: thats simple really english rip
04:44 zigizigiefe: nope
04:44 zigizigiefe: i can understand you
04:44 Surono: same
04:44 Surono: just update it, then I play it
04:44 zigizigiefe: updated
04:46 zigizigiefe: ah,i forgot
04:46 zigizigiefe: THANKS FOR MODDING SENPAI <3
04:46 Surono: fuq lag
04:47 zigizigiefe: sad
04:47 Surono: np, .,
04:53 zigizigiefe: LOL
04:53 zigizigiefe: i am spooky kat xd
04:54 Surono: 02:25:580 - 
04:54 Surono: 02:25:880 - 
04:54 zigizigiefe: sorry
04:54 zigizigiefe: my bad
04:55 zigizigiefe: can i add don?
04:55 Surono: yes, both
04:55 Surono: consistent with previous ddkkddkkd
04:55 Surono: 02:42:380 - i dont hear guitar, just vocal.. kkdkd overdone... change don
04:55 zigizigiefe: 03:55:580 -
04:56 Surono: 02:41:255 (104,105,106,107,108,109) - then ddkkk d
04:56 zigizigiefe: should i add don ? xd
04:56 Surono: as variation
04:56 Surono: yes efe.. both of that
04:56 Surono: u now looks like a baby =_=
04:56 zigizigiefe: okey
04:56 zigizigiefe: sorry
04:56 Surono: :3
04:57 Surono: 02:45:080 - kat this
04:58 zigizigiefe: done
04:58 Surono: 03:50:180 - kat this, thrill gita
04:58 Surono: r
04:59 zigizigiefe: DONe
04:59 Surono: 03:55:505 (325,326,327,328,329,330,331) - u forget here too..
04:59 Surono: next time when mapping.. check every similar/same part...
04:59 zigizigiefe: i added
04:59 zigizigiefe: :D
04:59 zigizigiefe: or fixed
04:59 Surono: thats same
04:59 Surono: lol
05:02 Surono: 04:20:555 (71) - finisher
05:02 Surono: 04:20:330 - add kat
05:03 zigizigiefe: okey
05:03 Surono: how u looks me, I like BN? when modding and help u? lol
05:03 zigizigiefe: you're like a BN xd
05:03 Surono: haha, but not this time..
05:08 Surono: 05:02:237 (90,91,92) - anyway, change it to dkd
05:08 Surono: kdk seems over, except if its drum
05:08 Surono: *high drum
05:11 zigizigiefe: can you continue modding tomorrow? becuz i am sleepy
05:12 Surono: wait
05:12 Surono: a bit
05:12 zigizigiefe: okey
05:12 Surono: 05:06:737 (146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156) - kkkdkkddkkd
05:12 zigizigiefe: DONe
05:12 Surono: 05:37:262 - this? u keep it? ok
05:13 Surono: 05:41:612 - too over. delete
05:13 zigizigiefe: i fixed this
05:13 Surono: 05:41:462 (289,290) - swap if u applied 05:37:187 (243,244,245) - here as dkd
05:14 zigizigiefe: okey
05:14 Surono: 06:07:637 (296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309) - ........
05:14 zigizigiefe: :D okey
05:15 Surono: back to previous :^)
05:15 Surono: kk kk ddd dd dd kkk
05:15 zigizigiefe: done
05:15 zigizigiefe: DONe
05:15 zigizigiefe: KATe
05:15 Surono: really?? noice
05:15 zigizigiefe: :D
05:16 zigizigiefe: i love 1/8s
05:16 Surono: done ^L_^
05:16 Surono: hmm lel
05:16 Surono: you can save this as rechec/help more on thread..
05:16 zigizigiefe: can i update this?
05:17 Surono: yes
05:17 Surono: then u can sleep haha
05:18 Surono: wow I guess u want sleep
05:18 Surono: u forget update lol
05:18 zigizigiefe: nope
05:18 zigizigiefe: i restarted osu!

Skull Kid wrote:

[General]
00:00:155 - Change volume to 60% or lower (timing point and inherited point)
00:19:280 - Add a inherited point with 80% volume
00:19:355 - Change volume to 80%
00:19:355 - Try to increase the slider velocity from the previous notes
01:49:280 - Add a inherited point with 90% volume
01:49:355 - Change volume to 90%
02:07:280 - Add a inherited point with 80% volume
03:19:280 - Add a inherited point with 90% volume
03:19:355 - Change volume to 90%
03:37:280 - Add a inherited point with 80% volume
04:01:355 - Delete this inherited point (its useless if you apply my mod)
04:20:555 - Change volume to 80%
04:54:349 - Add a inherited point with 100% volume
04:54:437 - Change volume to 100%
04:57:962 - Add a inherited point with 80% volume
04:58:037 - to 06:34:037 - Delete all inherited points
06:53:162 - Add a inherited point with 90% volume
06:53:237 - Change volume to 90%
07:15:962 - Add a inherited point with 80% volume
07:49:187 - Add a inherited point with 100% volume
07:49:239 - Change volume to 100%

i'll mod the map in another day

Firce777 wrote:

irc volume check~

SPOILER

22:02 zigizigiefe: hey
22:02 Firce777: hi :3/
22:03 zigizigiefe: have you time?
22:03 zigizigiefe: because i need volume check on my map
22:04 Firce777: ok :3
22:04 *zigizigiefe is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1053892 DragonForce - My Spirit Will Go On]
22:05 zigizigiefe: can you check volume,thanks :3
22:05 zigizigiefe: <3
22:08 Firce777: 00:00:155 - 40% is better
22:09 zigizigiefe: done
22:09 zigizigiefe: i have a question
22:09 Firce777: :3?
22:09 zigizigiefe: 01:49:355 - should i move to 01:49:280 -
22:09 Firce777: you mean preview?
22:09 zigizigiefe: skull kid said "01:49:355 - move to 01:49:280 -"
22:10 zigizigiefe: nope
22:10 zigizigiefe: timing point
22:10 Firce777: no
22:10 zigizigiefe: okey
22:10 Firce777: 01:49:355 - is fine
22:12 zigizigiefe: will you post on forum?
22:12 Firce777: if you want to
22:13 zigizigiefe: i want
22:13 Firce777: ok
22:13 Firce777: 04:01:355 - 60% here, and turn to 80% 04:10:955 -
22:14 Firce777: i think that's all
22:18 zigizigiefe: thanks

nice map blah

Doyak wrote:

* 00:40:955 (166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230) - 00:50:555 (280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343,344) - These two are musically repeating parts. But seeing how you used kats, you used them to mainly represent the snares for the first part and the guitars for the second part. Why are they inconsistent? Also for the second part, the stream pattern looks really random except for those guitars, like 00:50:555 (280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287) - is just twisting the rhythm with no reason. Also 00:54:755 - 00:55:055 - why are these two different? They should be used as same notes since it's a repeating drum pattern.
* 01:01:355 - On this part, the main beats here are the white ticks' / red ticks' drums. And they were being represented pretty well with d and k for each until 01:02:105 - . But since 01:02:255 - , it suddenly got reversed. And it suddenly got back on 01:03:755 - , and gets reversed again on 01:07:355 - . It seems that you wanted to express some vocals on the reversed part, but sadly most of the patterns are based on the drums even inside that part. So rather than representing the vocal properly, they kinda 'ruins' the expression of the drums, by changing d k d k d k d k to k d k d k d k d.
* 01:10:505 (487,488,489,490,491) - Why is the end is k? Rather 01:10:655 - sounds special with the vocal, if anything needs to be a k.
* 01:29:555 - 01:29:855 - There are big drum sounds here, which I think should be represented as both d.
* 01:39:155 - There starts a 'real' 1/4 drums, but it's poorly represented because you just continued the previous kk notes.
* 02:39:305 - You used to represent vocals inside trains as a k, so why not k here?
* 02:41:555 (108,109) - can be swapped to represent the drum better
* 02:58:880 (283) - imo deleting this note can emphasize 02:58:955 (284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298) - this long train better.
* 03:09:155 - Same as 01:39:155 -
* 04:43:849 (296,297) - 04:44:378 (302,303) - This sounds like 1/6.
* 05:12:437 (214,215,216,217,218,219,220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246) - I hear many 1/6 guitars too... not sure how exactly they are though.
* 05:37:037 (243,244) - Yeah why is this k d, usually you put d for white ticks and k for red ticks. But you seem to swap it like when there's a k d pattern nearby.
* 05:44:837 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - The guitar sound is on 05:44:987 - , not 05:45:062 - so using 3/4-based pattern doesn't make sense.
* 05:48:287 (62) - 05:50:687 (94) - 05:53:087 (126) - Why not use k, since the guitar is like EEEEEE so you may need a pattern diversity, not just ddkdkdkdkddkkddkdkdkd spam.
* 06:31:637 - Why does the stream start here, since nothing has changed yet? It should rather start at 06:32:837 -
* 07:25:637 (758,759,760,761,762,763,764,765) - I don't get this, there's nothing different than 07:24:437 (747,748,749,750,751,752,753,754,755,756,757) - so why a sudden stream? A significant change occurs on 07:26:237 -
* 07:36:137 (875,876,877) - The music has stopped at 875, so why do you continue the stream?
* 07:36:437 (878,879,880,881,882,883,884,885,886,887,888,889,890,891,892,893,894,895,896,897,898,899,900,901,902,903,904,905,906,907,908,909,910,911,912,913,914) - There should be a proper emphasis on the white ticks, you can hear the significant drums there. There's no consistency on this stream atm.

Good luck~

Mew104 wrote:

Hey o/
m4m as requested
[Tatsujin]
00:41:705 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182) - kkddkdd fits the music better and feels more natural while playingdone
00:42:905 (192,193,194,195,196,197,198) - ^done
00:50:330 (278) - delete? the short break would allow the player to prepare for the long stream coming upokey
00:50:555 (280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300) - mapping this long stream in a completely different way than the one starting 00:40:955 - doesn't make sense to me, the song sounds exactly the same and the patterns don't really go with the music. Try remapping this part to be more like the first long stream for the sake of consistencyit will be too looooooooong stream,it will be bad.thats better
01:25:055 (305,306,307) - Ctrl+G; kkd makes for a nicer sounding transition into the next partokey
01:33:755 (394,395,396,397,398,399,400,401,402) - if you want to represent the vocals here, I'd suggest using a slider instead of a long don stream, since this is a rather calm part of the songi mapped here according to drum
01:34:430 (403) - ^ if you apply this suggestion, delte this notenope
01:38:555 (445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453) - same goes for this streamthis two part isn't same
02:07:280 - I don't see the point in raising the volume from 80% to 100% for just one note, you should delete this timing point, changenope 02:07:355 - to 80% volume and delete the timing point at 02:07:430 - as wellnö
02:15:605 (778) - D sounds better to me since the guitar pitch is quite low here compared to where you used Koh,you're right.done
02:17:555 (793,794,795) - move this kkd triplet to 02:17:405 - done
02:25:205 (860) - D (same reason as above) okey
02:38:555 (72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - there is no reason for this first half of the stream to be here, either remap this part to be more consistent with the rest of the verse or change it to a slider if you want to represent the vocalsyeah,looks bad
03:03:755 (336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343,344) - same suggestion as before, a slider would make more sense here imonope
03:37:280 - delete this timing point, change 03:37:355 - to 80% volume and delete 03:37:430 - no
03:47:555 (258,259,260) - move to 03:47:405 - okey
04:32:643 (174) - since you're trying to follow the guitar, you should delete this, as there's a short guitar break herenope
04:35:996 (209) - ^^
04:36:790 (218) - change to k to follow the guitar more closelydone
04:50:907 (1) - using a spinner here seems out of place, try using a slider and deleting 04:50:819 (346) - instead for the sake of consistency with the sliders right before this partdone
04:54:349 - this timing point has no use, delete itno
04:56:837 (36) - extend this slider by 1/16, as the last tick is missingno,sry
05:05:237 (129) - this stream should end here, since the guitar slows down. If you want to follow it accurately, try using some 1/2 notes here, just like you did at 05:14:837 - i deleted 05:05:162 -
05:08:837 (169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177) - this short stream also seems overmapped as the guitar is quite slow here as wellokey
05:16:637 (262) - extend by 1/16nah
05:26:612 (108) - delete; this section is very hard as it is, players should get a short break to catch their breathokey
05:46:037 - instead of this being a huge stream, you should add short breaks whenever the guitar spikes, such as at 05:48:137 - and 05:50:537 - since a long stream like this isn't really appealing to play when the same pattern is repeated over and over againnope,its DEATH PART huehuehue xd
06:05:162 (264) - delete to make the crazy guitar part after this stand out moredone
06:37:637 (255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263) - same as beforenah
06:42:437 (306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314) - ^no
07:15:962 - same as before^
07:40:037 - I don't know about this timing point, 195 seems right for the guitar, however the spinner is way early. The spinner should be on 07:42:437 - which lines up with just keeping it at 200 BPM, so my suggestion is to just leave it at 200 BPM for the sake of consistency and accept the fact that the guitar is a bit behind hereoh,i think thats better

That's about it, hope this was helpful
Good luck with your map!

Mew104 wrote:

07:40:037 - I don't know about this timing point, 195 seems right for the guitar, however the spinner is way early. The spinner should be on 07:42:437 - which lines up with just keeping it at 200 BPM, so my suggestion is to just leave it at 200 BPM for the sake of consistency and accept the fact that the guitar is a bit behind here