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[General]
aaaaa what is this http://puu.sh/ruFHt/caa98214e0.png try resize ur bg to 1366x768
[Beom's Easy]
00:18:478 - theres a kick drum here too if you want to add whistle
00:20:737 (2) - i dont really know what this is trying to follow. originally u followed sounds like on 00:18:156 (2,3) - but in this case u ignore the sound on 00:21:220 . maybe use a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/ruGEj/9696acbc38.jpg
00:27:188 - can u drag the break back to how it would normally play
00:36:704 - 00:39:607 - 00:42:188 - whistle. u might want to check the rest of these urself
00:50:575 (1) - imo this plays better if you use the same rhythm as 00:47:995 (1,2,3) - and disregard the vocals and then u can make 00:53:156 - clickable by doing this
01:25:253 (2) - same as what i said earlier
[Normal]
00:36:704 (2,3) - would probably play better as two 1/2 sliders because of clap on 00:37:027
[Hard]
01:20:253 - no circle here?
[sahuang's Insane]
00:20:737 (1,2) - this is pretty random tbh. there's nothing that reallly stands out to deserve 3/4
00:42:349 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i would maybe try a different method to represent this trill of notes instead of a direct stream. since this is the lowest insane, i'd reserve streams for drums and do something else here like http://puu.sh/ruIf9/0fb37c918f.jpg
00:42:107 - also i reckon you should map this triplet and get rid of the overmapped kick slider 00:42:188 (1) - since theres not rly a sound on 00:42:269
01:01:866 (4,2) - stack?
01:04:124 (1,2,3,4,1) - might be a bit too confusing to read because of overlaps on low AR. i expected 01:04:769 (1) - to be stacked with 01:04:124 (1,3) - to continue that back and forth pattern
01:10:575 (1) - probably dont need nc
01:25:253 (1,2) - again i think this plays just fine as 1/1
[Oread's Insane]
00:26:704 (5) - nc and more spacing here 00:26:704 (5,6) - for emphasis?
00:29:285 (3,4) - i'd use the same slider for structure
00:31:220 - i wouldn't map vocals over the piano downbeat here
00:41:382 (1,3,4,5) - try avoid this overlap
00:42:430 - stream starts at 00:42:349 - so u kinda missed the note on the blue tick
00:54:446 - really loud piano sound here that u shouldnt ignore
01:04:124 (1,2) - mm i would use sliders first then switch to circles for a better build up. right now 01:03:478 (1,2,3,4) - is harder to play than 01:04:124 (1,2)
01:16:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these are like bigger spacing than 01:13:801 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - when the music is quieter here which doesn't really reflect the music that well
01:30:414 (1,2) - map these as circles? like how u did 00:25:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and then u can have more spacing at 01:31:220 (3,4) - with nc
[VINXIS' Extra]
00:15:978 (2,3) - i honestly dont feel u've built enough momentum to have a jump like this already. http://puu.sh/ruJr0/542da7ff29.jpg would be more appropriate
00:40:253 (1,1) - idk this feels so random. if this is following piano y didnt u do this anywhere else
00:56:382 (3) - could nc this for consistency
[Hatsukoi]
00:40:575 (2,3,4) - sometimes u overlap, sometimes you dont. i'd try make this consistent based on section
00:47:349 (5,1) - could avoid this overlap i guess
00:54:527 - drag break back to normal
01:06:543 (3) - this needs more distance to play consistently with everything else. x84 y48 works for a nice triangle with 01:06:059 (1,2)
01:09:607 (6,7) - try separate these from overlapping
01:20:253 - i rly think you should map this. the centre of the playfield might be a good spot to put this
01:30:736 (2,3,4) - try use less distance to make the effect of 01:31:220 (1,2) - stronger. you did this really nicely at the start 00:26:220 (2,3,4)
good luck!!
[General]
aaaaa what is this http://puu.sh/ruFHt/caa98214e0.png try resize ur bg to 1366x768
[Beom's Easy]
00:18:478 - theres a kick drum here too if you want to add whistle
00:20:737 (2) - i dont really know what this is trying to follow. originally u followed sounds like on 00:18:156 (2,3) - but in this case u ignore the sound on 00:21:220 . maybe use a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/ruGEj/9696acbc38.jpg
00:27:188 - can u drag the break back to how it would normally play
00:36:704 - 00:39:607 - 00:42:188 - whistle. u might want to check the rest of these urself
00:50:575 (1) - imo this plays better if you use the same rhythm as 00:47:995 (1,2,3) - and disregard the vocals and then u can make 00:53:156 - clickable by doing this
01:25:253 (2) - same as what i said earlier
[Normal]
00:36:704 (2,3) - would probably play better as two 1/2 sliders because of clap on 00:37:027
[Hard]
01:20:253 - no circle here?
[sahuang's Insane]
00:20:737 (1,2) - this is pretty random tbh. there's nothing that reallly stands out to deserve 3/4
00:42:349 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i would maybe try a different method to represent this trill of notes instead of a direct stream. since this is the lowest insane, i'd reserve streams for drums and do something else here like http://puu.sh/ruIf9/0fb37c918f.jpg
00:42:107 - also i reckon you should map this triplet and get rid of the overmapped kick slider 00:42:188 (1) - since theres not rly a sound on 00:42:269
01:01:866 (4,2) - stack?
01:04:124 (1,2,3,4,1) - might be a bit too confusing to read because of overlaps on low AR. i expected 01:04:769 (1) - to be stacked with 01:04:124 (1,3) - to continue that back and forth pattern
01:10:575 (1) - probably dont need nc
01:25:253 (1,2) - again i think this plays just fine as 1/1
[Oread's Insane]
00:26:704 (5) - nc and more spacing here 00:26:704 (5,6) - for emphasis?
00:29:285 (3,4) - i'd use the same slider for structure
00:31:220 - i wouldn't map vocals over the piano downbeat here
00:41:382 (1,3,4,5) - try avoid this overlap
00:42:430 - stream starts at 00:42:349 - so u kinda missed the note on the blue tick
00:54:446 - really loud piano sound here that u shouldnt ignore
01:04:124 (1,2) - mm i would use sliders first then switch to circles for a better build up. right now 01:03:478 (1,2,3,4) - is harder to play than 01:04:124 (1,2)
01:16:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these are like bigger spacing than 01:13:801 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - when the music is quieter here which doesn't really reflect the music that well
01:30:414 (1,2) - map these as circles? like how u did 00:25:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and then u can have more spacing at 01:31:220 (3,4) - with nc
[VINXIS' Extra]
00:15:978 (2,3) - i honestly dont feel u've built enough momentum to have a jump like this already. http://puu.sh/ruJr0/542da7ff29.jpg would be more appropriate
00:40:253 (1,1) - idk this feels so random. if this is following piano y didnt u do this anywhere else
00:56:382 (3) - could nc this for consistency
[Hatsukoi]
00:40:575 (2,3,4) - sometimes u overlap, sometimes you dont. i'd try make this consistent based on section
00:47:349 (5,1) - could avoid this overlap i guess
00:54:527 - drag break back to normal
01:06:543 (3) - this needs more distance to play consistently with everything else. x84 y48 works for a nice triangle with 01:06:059 (1,2)
01:09:607 (6,7) - try separate these from overlapping
01:20:253 - i rly think you should map this. the centre of the playfield might be a good spot to put this
01:30:736 (2,3,4) - try use less distance to make the effect of 01:31:220 (1,2) - stronger. you did this really nicely at the start 00:26:220 (2,3,4)
good luck!!