1. Failure's Easy (1,56 stars, 92 notes)
2. Hard (3,45 stars, 260 notes)
3. Insane (4,93 stars, 311 notes)
4. Normal (2,25 stars, 170 notes)
5. Sotarks' Extra (5,78 stars, 348 notes)

CanadianBaka wrote:

[general]

Check! ayyyy


[Normal]

★00:05:625 (4,1) - once again, awkward overlap (I'm guessing it was intentional though yes it was >.<
★00:16:194 (2,3) - it would be better if this was a 1/2 slider sure
★00:19:802 (2) - ctrl + h then resnap I like the current symetry
★00:31:865 (4,5) - 1/2 slider sure
★00:55:829 (1,2) - weird angle, but I guess it's fine ye I do wanna keep that xd


[Hard]

★00:28:116 (4,1) - not perfectly stacked (#nazi) fixed

no problems with this diff to be honest



sadly I can't mod anything harder than a hard, but regardless, good luck with the map!

CanadianBaka wrote:

[general]

Check!

[Failure's easy]


★00:24:529 (1) - please just make it a normal anchor, for a better blanket effect k
★00:39:201 (2,3) - no stack in easy Fixed but I can't find that in RC anywhere
★00:53:221 (1,1) - NC is way too awkward to play for beginner accidental, fixed
★00:54:362 (1,2,3) - players will think (3) is the next note that is too be hit it should be pretty obvious that isn't the case because 1 points to 2, and 2 is first so the approach circle is smaller.
★00:55:829 (3,4) - why overlap these if it gives no aesthetically pleasing look? looks good to me
★00:59:742 (2,4) - make these the same pleasek
★01:20:609 (3,1,2) - ^ what? they're all the same, just different speeds cuz bpm changes
★01:24:558 (1) - slider ticks sound a little too loud, even with your inherited points (lower each one by %5?)




sadly I can't mod anything harder than a hard, but regardless, good luck with the map!

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Deppyforce wrote:

4m

[General]
lol fix source it should be jap
http://puu.sh/rREqe/a7b0d30222.jpg
http://puu.sh/rRElB/8b0604f4b9.png
fix title why are there 2 spaces between 方 and (tv size
k lol


[Easy]
00:04:977 (3) - end at 00:05:625 - fits better with vocal
00:51:917 (3,4) - i would change this to 1/1 + circle to emphasize that they have different sound than 1,2
01:13:762 - i wud map the build up drum here too
01:22:614 (2,3) - fix spacing pls, i know you just used 1x like other parts but look in the reality that its actually different spacing cuz the bpm change

[Normal]
ar is way too fast, its 2x of ez diff's ar, reduce to 5 pls k
00:14:086 (5) - the end is a bit off blanket, i would do this insted for aesthetics http://puu.sh/rREL2/9198f906ca.jpg its not perfect cuz im lazy but u get the idea lol changed blanket
00:20:943 - pls dont ignore this sound Melody/Vocal > everything else
00:48:330 (3,4) - fix blanket ...
01:01:698 (2) - try change to http://puu.sh/rRFHN/a57f0f46d8.jpg instead to map vocals and hihat way too hard imo already at the bondary of the SR

[Hard]
ar 7 pls -_ so spread is 3 +2 +2 +2 would make it look to "cluttered"
00:20:943 - same as normal diff same as normal difficulty
00:26:485 (3,4) - blanket k
00:30:235 (2,1) - stack yesh
00:36:919 (3) - try 1/2 reverse slider instead so something still lands on drum and instrument stuff on 1/2 cuz those sounds prety strong/noticeable melody .... I am a melodic mapper I don't care about drums (especially after my dearest)
00:53:058 (7,4) - stack xd (move 7 yesh
01:18:979 (6,7) - i would change this to 1/2 to emphasize the start of vocals here is differ sound from other notes in the combo 1. I like the hexagon (im not monstrata ....) 2. I want emphasis on the snare because it's the end of the kiai and it gets reaaaaalllly intense imo

[Insane]
almost old monstrata ................................
00:11:492 (1,2) - this almost looks like 1/2 maybe stack slider head under circle Should be acceptable cuz Ar 9 and song really emphasizis that imo
00:20:780 (6) - same as other diffs, try use circle + 1/2 g. same as other diffs
00:29:012 -00:30:969 - missed 1/4 mapping vocals only, as I like 1/2 and 1/1 placements xdddddd
actually theres alot of 1/4 missed thruout the map lol pls map those cuz rn the rhythm is almost same as hard diff just bigger jumps I don't see any problem in it being so

00:36:267 (1,2,3,4) - try this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/rRGwi/f333b2cc04.jpg so stronger sounds can be clickable Changed rhythm a bit
try use more 1/2 reverse slider in kiai since u only used on 00:53:873 (3) - (making reverse on downbeat like 01:07:404 (6) - is bad and imo should be revised and make downbeat clickable I see no point in using many xdd, also the 2nd reverse ignores the downbeat not completly but focuses more on the melody/vocal
01:18:164 (1,1) - stack? d ye

w w

Deppyforce wrote:

4m

[Easy]
00:04:977 (3) - end at 00:05:625 - fits better with vocal k
00:51:917 (3,4) - i would change this to 1/1 + circle to emphasize that they have different sound than 1,2 k
01:13:762 - i wud map the build up drum here too k
01:22:614 (2,3) - fix spacing pls, i know you just used 1x like other parts but look in the reality that its actually different spacing cuz the bpm changefixed dad

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228,154,41810,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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318,91,44418,1,8,0:0:0:0:
365,167,44744,2,0,P|378:211|363:258,1,90,8|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
298,311,45396,6,0,B|269:325|232:309|232:309|202:326|169:311|169:311|158:286|161:261,2,180,0|8|0,3:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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286,212,52569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,122,52895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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90,202,55503,1,10,0:2:0:0:
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JeZag wrote:

heyyo, NM in place of [ Lilu ]'s queue!

easy

00:17:021 (1) - I think this is better on 00:16:681 due to better consistency and covering more "major" beats in the song.
00:19:313 (1,2) - Seems like it may have polarity issues. In general, stay away from 3/2 beats between stuff.
00:36:267 (1,2) - Looks a bit plain straight, try giving 1st bend up and 2nd bend down.
00:59:742 (2,3,4) - Is there anything you could do to make this look better? Its playable and all but sticks out like a sore thumb. 01:01:046 (4,1) not being a blanket especially bothers me.
01:07:404 (2) - polarity issue. i would recommend you just push it back and add a hitcircle inbetween. 01:08:871 (1,2) is different cause i feel that it is obviously that way, but this part not so.
01:20:609 (3,1) - hmm looks not good

normal

00:00:760 (1) - I would change up because 00:01:085 deserves to be clicked, not just a tail. Heck, its the technical start of the piece (the first being the pickup) and all it gets is a fukin weak-ass slider tail
00:04:328 (2) - Tail deserves to be clicked.
00:05:625 (4,1) - No overlap pls, at least not on a normal like this
00:10:822 (6,7) - Hmm i dont get the point of two objects when the tail of 00:10:822 (6) isnt even important. Just make it longer. Or if you want it to be clickable make 00:10:822 (6) shorter. At least 1/1 beats are supported but 1/2 not yet.
00:26:485 (3,4) - To reduce density and better represent the rhythm, delete 00:26:812 (4) and make 00:26:485 (3) a repeating slider. Change the rhythm and feel free not to use mine, but right now the density is too high here i feel.
00:31:050 (3,4) - Make these sliders parallel
00:41:157 (2,2) - Try to avoid overlap as such in normal i'd say
the rest is ok i guess

hard

00:04:977 (3,4) - Slidertails dont map to anything, consider using hitcircles or just one slider
00:37:571 (1) - You can afford to make this less sharp. Put the tail higher a bit
00:52:569 (6) - The fact that this is 5 and not 4 may mess people up.
clean

insane

Your map seems rankable already. These suggestions are all to make it (in my opinion) just a bit better.
00:06:957 (3,4) - I wouldnt say this is overmapped, but the tails don't reflect anything.
00:09:848 (4) - I get you want good geometry, but this is too close to 00:10:170 (5) imo
00:23:225 (6,7,8,9) - As far as this jump patter in concerned, you have your space emphasis on 00:23:551 (8,9,1) where I believe 00:23:388 (7) should be the most "significant".
00:25:018 (6) - (same as above in terms of emphasis)
00:27:464 (2) - If you want artsy, make it so that the TAIL of this slider forms an equilateral triangle with 00:27:790 (3,4) while preserving the blanket.
00:28:279 (4,5) - If you want, you can emphasize this more
00:30:724 (4) - Just for me, could you snap the tail of this onto 00:29:746 (1) tail? (players wont see it, but ahhhhhh)
00:36:267 (1,2,3,4) - The sudden change in rotational flow makes this transition a bit awkward. 00:36:919 (4) was awkward at first play.
I guess it doesnt matter when the player retries a lot tho
00:53:873 (3) - Awkward change in angular flow. When a player hits the head of the slider, they'll want to go counterclockwise, but the slider goes clockwise
00:55:503 (9) - I think this awkward cause the slider brings it away from the next note. Consider this:

Looks pretty!

extra

00:02:869 (5,6,7) - Ive said it and i'll say it again, this is "overmapped" imo.
I'll get it if you wanted to map each vocal note with a click, but then why 00:02:869 (5)?
Same logic applies the rest of the intro
00:07:606 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Don't you think this is a bit overkill for what should be a calm section? Go crazy in the kiai time but now's not the place for that.
This diff overall looks fairly unpolished (as expected), but if you want to make this good looking, dont arbitrarily put things together like 00:30:724 (4,5,6). Sure, it might play ok but it doesnt look good.

good luck ranking!

1. 00:16:032 (4,1) - following the vocal prob but this is the only 3/1 gap in the diff and with how strong the beats your skipping are it doesnt really fit in this part of the song imo, would use a denser rythm here, like maybe useing a 1/1 slider instead of a circle on (4) or a circle on the downbeat
2. 00:39:201 (2,3) - first the slider then the circles fits better here to cath that vocal on the red tick in the slider since your always gonna miss a drum beat anyway
3. 00:41:810 (2,3) - ^ same here since the vocal doesnt extend after 00:42:299 - unlike 00:41:973 - it kinda fits better
4. 00:52:569 (4,5) - first time using 2 circles after eachother in this diff, could maybe introduce them a bit earlier like 00:21:595 - sine it also has that drum buildup like here, just kinda felt out of place atm when its introduced that late and its not even in the kiai
5. 00:57:134 (2,3,1) - really long linear flow here, could place 00:58:112 (3,1) - a bit more the right for a small angle
6. 01:00:720 (3,1) - easily avoidable overlap here
7. 01:06:263 (1,2,1) - really weird rythm to play here could just move 2 towards the next white tick for 2/1 gaps for this it'll still follow that synth and drum that way, it just feels kinda off now
8. 01:12:784 (2,3) - 2 1/1 sliders fit better here imo to make 01:14:088 (1) - stand out more from the rest and and it follows the vocals a bit better aswell

1. 00:05:301 (3,4,1) - bit too much overlap for a normal here make (1) bit more visible, also 00:05:625 (4) - having a new timing point to fix the timing but having the slider still end on the prev timing will prob cause issues for rank might have to change rythm here
2. 00:10:170 (5,6) - just having 1 extended slider for the vocal feels kinda off when (5) is similar intensity could change that into an extended aswell or both 1/1 also fit
3. 00:11:492 (7) - main rythm kicks back in here + timing correction so would NC here instead
4. 00:44:418 (3,4,5) - for a normal diff I'd make the rythm from this and 00:39:201 (3,4,5) - the same since its a pretty hard rythm for newer players so it should be easier to play when its repeated
5. 00:52:895 (5) - moving a bit up for someting less linear flow in to 00:53:221 (1) - would be nice here
6. 01:06:263 (4,3) - avoid overlap
7. 01:14:088 (1,3) - don't hide the return full here, unrankable atm (might be because of you lowered the ar afterwards would go through the map again with this ar and look for overlaps that weren't there before on default skin imo)
8. 01:15:229 (3,2) - check stack
9. seems about it, one point I'd like to point out in case its mentioned again is the sv increase in kiai yeah its allowed in kiai for normals but 1.25 is kinda a lot for a 184 bpm song its really noticable in the sliders that they are much faster then the 1.0 part it might be a bit too much for the kiai. If it gets brought up again I'd change it to somehting like 1.1-1.15ish due to the bpm mainly

1. 00:16:681 (3) - would unNC this so its easier to read that its still the same rythm gap and you already NC'd right after this note and on 00:16:032 (1) - for the timing thingy its a bit too much even though it fits with the finish/downbeat thingy
2. 00:36:104 (5,1,2,3) - kinda long linear flow again, doesnt play that nice compared to the rest of the section could change 00:36:104 (5,1,2,3) - into somehting like this for example
   
3. 00:52:243 (5,6,7) - everyone is gonna misread (7) for a 1/4 prob here due to different rythm gap but same visual distance needs some adjustment, would also keep the number of returns the same for better playability
4. 01:20:609 (1) - bit of a weird lonely NC here in this section, could NC 01:21:913 (3) - and unNC 01:21:261 (1) - for a followpoint and bit more consistent nc pattern
5. cool diff!

1. Nice insane! sometimes it felt a bit awkward to read so throwing some suggestions here
2. 00:10:170 (5) - would NC here for the new istrument getting added in the song and the timing point fix
3. 00:10:170 (5,8) - stack bit off
4. 00:11:492 (1) - would stack on head instead so its easier to read the 1/1 rythm here, felt a bit weird to play this combo since it kinda looks like all 1/2 visually
5. 00:15:708 (5) - could NC for the ds increase, makes it a bit easier to read
6. 00:17:350 (1) - would NC for the shift in rythm here, looks a bit too much like 00:16:356 (3,4) - imo
7. 00:20:780 (6) - aah could maybe represent that piano stroke in the slidershape here kinda a shame its not represented but yeah prob fine now tho
8. 00:36:919 (4,5) - check hitsound on tails here, also for something this powerfull just circles would be better imo since you come from a long combos of slider onlys, would make these stand out more imo
9. 00:53:547 (2,3) - this transition felt really forced and sudden, could make control + h and blanket it with the head of 00:53:058 (4) - or something also that thing about hiding returns even though its prob acceptab since the ar is high enough but still not recommended
10. 01:07:241 (5,6) - ^ same thing that ds and angle shift really feels out of place with the rest of the map imo
11. 01:19:305 (1) - could maybe lower sv from this section onwards since the music is so much more relaxing then the other 1.00sv part since it doenst have the drum and guitar things

JeZag wrote:

heyyo, NM in place of [ Lilu ]'s queue!

easy

00:17:021 (1) - I think this is better on 00:16:681 due to better consistency and covering more "major" beats in the song.
00:19:313 (1,2) - Seems like it may have polarity issues. In general, stay away from 3/2 beats between stuff.
00:36:267 (1,2) - Looks a bit plain straight, try giving 1st bend up and 2nd bend down.
00:59:742 (2,3,4) - Is there anything you could do to make this look better? Its playable and all but sticks out like a sore thumb. 01:01:046 (4,1) not being a blanket especially bothers me.
01:07:404 (2) - polarity issue. i would recommend you just push it back and add a hitcircle inbetween. 01:08:871 (1,2) is different cause i feel that it is obviously that way, but this part not so.
01:20:609 (3,1) - hmm looks not good

normal

00:00:760 (1) - I would change up because 00:01:085 deserves to be clicked, not just a tail. Heck, its the technical start of the piece (the first being the pickup) and all it gets is a fukin weak-ass slider tail sure lol yeah xd
00:04:328 (2) - Tail deserves to be clicked. I honestly think my rhythm choice here is ok, t he part is slow anyways no big emphasis needed imo
00:05:625 (4,1) - No overlap pls, at least not on a normal like this yes
00:10:822 (6,7) - Hmm i dont get the point of two objects when the tail of 00:10:822 (6) isnt even important. Just make it longer. Or if you want it to be clickable make 00:10:822 (6) shorter. At least 1/1 beats are supported but 1/2 not yet. I thought it pretty important, but I guess long slider works as well
00:26:485 (3,4) - To reduce density and better represent the rhythm, delete 00:26:812 (4) and make 00:26:485 (3) a repeating slider. Change the rhythm and feel free not to use mine, but right now the density is too high here i feel. sure fixed
00:31:050 (3,4) - Make these sliders parallel sure thing
00:41:157 (2,2) - Try to avoid overlap as such in normal i'd say Ugh those are kinda my stlye though? I'd really like to keep them
the rest is ok i guess ayyyy

hard

00:04:977 (3,4) - Slidertails dont map to anything, consider using hitcircles or just one slider There are sounds there (guitart) but hoenstly I just want the emphasis coming off of it
00:37:571 (1) - You can afford to make this less sharp. Put the tail higher a bit I honestly feel like sharp is the best way to go here. My understadning of aesthetics in my style doesn't allow some degree in which you described one is one. Also I see no real problem
00:52:569 (6) - The fact that this is 5 and not 4 may mess people up. sure I think I improved it
clean

insane

Your map seems rankable already. These suggestions are all to make it (in my opinion) just a bit better.
00:06:957 (3,4) - I wouldnt say this is overmapped, but the tails don't reflect anything. as in hard
00:09:848 (4) - I get you want good geometry, but this is too close to 00:10:170 (5) imo yes xdddddd
00:23:225 (6,7,8,9) - As far as this jump patter in concerned, you have your space emphasis on 00:23:551 (8,9,1) where I believe 00:23:388 (7) should be the most "significant". fixed
00:25:018 (6) - (same as above in terms of emphasis) Here I am indeed emphasizing the notes I want to already which'd be 00:24:529 (3,5,7,9,1,3,5,7) -
00:27:464 (2) - If you want artsy, make it so that the TAIL of this slider forms an equilateral triangle with 00:27:790 (3,4) while preserving the blanket. That's what I wanted to do, fixed
00:28:279 (4,5) - If you want, you can emphasize this more voice gets more calm > less spacing
00:30:724 (4) - Just for me, could you snap the tail of this onto 00:29:746 (1) tail? (players wont see it, but ahhhhhh) As you said players won't see, I tried doing that cut it messes up all spacing n shits
00:36:267 (1,2,3,4) - The sudden change in rotational flow makes this transition a bit awkward. 00:36:919 (4) was awkward at first play.
I guess it doesnt matter when the player retries a lot tho 00:34:963 (1,2,3) - this imo resets the rotational flow I had build up, because they don't go as smooth and then the jump should be ok *shrug*
00:53:873 (3) - Awkward change in angular flow. When a player hits the head of the slider, they'll want to go counterclockwise, but the slider goes clockwise I redone so the flow completly resets which leads better into the zigzag movement of the next part
00:55:503 (9) - I think this awkward cause the slider brings it away from the next note. Consider this:

I like
Looks pretty!

extra

00:02:869 (5,6,7) - Ive said it and i'll say it again, this is "overmapped" imo. Ugh I accidently uploaded it? I didn't wanna add this anyway sorry gonna be deleted
I'll get it if you wanted to map each vocal note with a click, but then why 00:02:869 (5)?
Same logic applies the rest of the intro
00:07:606 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Don't you think this is a bit overkill for what should be a calm section? Go crazy in the kiai time but now's not the place for that.
This diff overall looks fairly unpolished (as expected), but if you want to make this good looking, dont arbitrarily put things together like 00:30:724 (4,5,6). Sure, it might play ok but it doesnt look good.

good luck ranking!

Wishkey wrote:

Heyo! from my queue

Easy

1. 00:16:032 (4,1) - following the vocal prob but this is the only 3/1 gap in the diff and with how strong the beats your skipping are it doesnt really fit in this part of the song imo, would use a denser rythm here, like maybe useing a 1/1 slider instead of a circle on (4) or a circle on the downbeat
2. 00:39:201 (2,3) - first the slider then the circles fits better here to cath that vocal on the red tick in the slider since your always gonna miss a drum beat anyway
3. 00:41:810 (2,3) - ^ same here since the vocal doesnt extend after 00:42:299 - unlike 00:41:973 - it kinda fits better
4. 00:52:569 (4,5) - first time using 2 circles after eachother in this diff, could maybe introduce them a bit earlier like 00:21:595 - sine it also has that drum buildup like here, just kinda felt out of place atm when its introduced that late and its not even in the kiai
5. 00:57:134 (2,3,1) - really long linear flow here, could place 00:58:112 (3,1) - a bit more the right for a small angle
6. 01:00:720 (3,1) - easily avoidable overlap here
7. 01:06:263 (1,2,1) - really weird rythm to play here could just move 2 towards the next white tick for 2/1 gaps for this it'll still follow that synth and drum that way, it just feels kinda off now
8. 01:12:784 (2,3) - 2 1/1 sliders fit better here imo to make 01:14:088 (1) - stand out more from the rest and and it follows the vocals a bit better aswell

normal

1. 00:05:301 (3,4,1) - bit too much overlap for a normal here make (1) bit more visible, also 00:05:625 (4) - having a new timing point to fix the timing but having the slider still end on the prev timing will prob cause issues for rank might have to change rythm here fix
2. 00:10:170 (5,6) - just having 1 extended slider for the vocal feels kinda off when (5) is similar intensity could change that into an extended aswell or both 1/1 also fit fix
3. 00:11:492 (7) - main rythm kicks back in here + timing correction so would NC here instead sure thing
4. 00:44:418 (3,4,5) - for a normal diff I'd make the rythm from this and 00:39:201 (3,4,5) - the same since its a pretty hard rythm for newer players so it should be easier to play when its repeated nice catch
5. 00:52:895 (5) - moving a bit up for someting less linear flow in to 00:53:221 (1) - would be nice hereI think this is fine
6. 01:06:263 (4,3) - avoid overlap This should be fine :v
7. 01:14:088 (1,3) - don't hide the return full here, unrankable atm (might be because of you lowered the ar afterwards would go through the map again with this ar and look for overlaps that weren't there before on default skin imo) k
8. 01:15:229 (3,2) - check stack fix
9. seems about it, one point I'd like to point out in case its mentioned again is the sv increase in kiai yeah its allowed in kiai for normals but 1.25 is kinda a lot for a 184 bpm song its really noticable in the sliders that they are much faster then the 1.0 part it might be a bit too much for the kiai. If it gets brought up again I'd change it to somehting like 1.1-1.15ish due to the bpm mainly k

hard

1. 00:16:681 (3) - would unNC this so its easier to read that its still the same rythm gap and you already NC'd right after this note and on 00:16:032 (1) - for the timing thingy its a bit too much even though it fits with the finish/downbeat thingy Why was there a downbeat in the first place? looo fixed I think hard players should be able to play this, and it looks nice
2. 00:36:104 (5,1,2,3) - kinda long linear flow again, doesnt play that nice compared to the rest of the section could change 00:36:104 (5,1,2,3) - into somehting like this for example
   
   sry but I honestly quite like it xd
3. 00:52:243 (5,6,7) - everyone is gonna misread (7) for a 1/4 prob here due to different rythm gap but same visual distance needs some adjustment, would also keep the number of returns the same for better playability fixed
4. 01:20:609 (1) - bit of a weird lonely NC here in this section, could NC 01:21:913 (3) - and unNC 01:21:261 (1) - for a followpoint and bit more consistent nc pattern changed
5. cool diff! thanks

Insane

1. Nice insane! sometimes it felt a bit awkward to read so throwing some suggestions here
2. 00:10:170 (5) - would NC here for the new istrument getting added in the song and the timing point fix sure
3. 00:10:170 (5,8) - stack bit off fix
4. 00:11:492 (1) - would stack on head instead so its easier to read the 1/1 rythm here, felt a bit weird to play this combo since it kinda looks like all 1/2 visually changed
5. 00:15:708 (5) - could NC for the ds increase, makes it a bit easier to read not needed
6. 00:17:350 (1) - would NC for the shift in rythm here, looks a bit too much like 00:16:356 (3,4) - imo sure
7. 00:20:780 (6) - aah could maybe represent that piano stroke in the slidershape here kinda a shame its not represented but yeah prob fine now tho but vocals ;_;
8. 00:36:919 (4,5) - check hitsound on tails here, also for something this powerfull just circles would be better imo since you come from a long combos of slider onlys, would make these stand out more imo I don't support that idea
9. 00:53:547 (2,3) - this transition felt really forced and sudden, could make control + h and blanket it with the head of 00:53:058 (4) - or something also that thing about hiding returns even though its prob acceptab since the ar is high enough but still not recommended changed
10. 01:07:241 (5,6) - ^ same thing that ds and angle shift really feels out of place with the rest of the map imo hmmm might consider chaning, I like it as it is so much though
11. 01:19:305 (1) - could maybe lower sv from this section onwards since the music is so much more relaxing then the other 1.00sv part since it doenst have the drum and guitar thingsye

Nice set, gl!

JeZag wrote:

heyyo, NM in place of [ Lilu ]'s queue!

easy

00:17:021 (1) - I think this is better on 00:16:681 due to better consistency and covering more "major" beats in the song. k
00:19:313 (1,2) - Seems like it may have polarity issues. In general, stay away from 3/2 beats between stuff. there's no other way to map this that i see that doesn't have 3/2 but also covers vocals, which is what this is mostly mapped to
00:36:267 (1,2) - Looks a bit plain straight, try giving 1st bend up and 2nd bend down. k
00:59:742 (2,3,4) - Is there anything you could do to make this look better? Its playable and all but sticks out like a sore thumb. 01:01:046 (4,1) not being a blanket especially bothers me. tried smth
01:07:404 (2) - polarity issue. i would recommend you just push it back and add a hitcircle inbetween. 01:08:871 (1,2) is different cause i feel that it is obviously that way, but this part not so. i can't see an isuse with it.
01:20:609 (3,1) - hmm looks not good tried smth

Wishkey wrote:

Heyo! from my queue

Easy

1. 00:16:032 (4,1) - following the vocal prob but this is the only 3/1 gap in the diff and with how strong the beats your skipping are it doesnt really fit in this part of the song imo, would use a denser rythm here, like maybe useing a 1/1 slider instead of a circle on (4) or a circle on the downbeat tried to make rhythm slightly harder
2. 00:39:201 (2,3) - first the slider then the circles fits better here to cath that vocal on the red tick in the slider since your always gonna miss a drum beat anyway k
3. 00:41:810 (2,3) - ^ same here since the vocal doesnt extend after 00:42:299 - unlike 00:41:973 - it kinda fits better k
4. 00:52:569 (4,5) - first time using 2 circles after eachother in this diff, could maybe introduce them a bit earlier like 00:21:595 - sine it also has that drum buildup like here, just kinda felt out of place atm when its introduced that late and its not even in the kiai it's the only instance of 2 circles, and it's due to buildup
5. 00:57:134 (2,3,1) - really long linear flow here, could place 00:58:112 (3,1) - a bit more the right for a small angle same sounds in song, same kinda flow
6. 01:00:720 (3,1) - easily avoidable overlap here
7. 01:06:263 (1,2,1) - really weird rythm to play here could just move 2 towards the next white tick for 2/1 gaps for this it'll still follow that synth and drum that way, it just feels kinda off now it's fine to me. it's also mapped to vocals, like most things in this map
8. 01:12:784 (2,3) - 2 1/1 sliders fit better here imo to make 01:14:088 (1) - stand out more from the rest and and it follows the vocals a bit better aswell okay

Nice set, gl!

will respond to 3rd mod later, tired and pressed for time

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good luck ranking!

Tarrasky wrote:

#modreqs

General

1. I dont know where you find your .mp3 but the quality looks better than the ranked beatmaps (the ranked beatmaps with this song is 128kbps, and your mp3 is 141kbps), anyway make sure the mp3 has not been tampered with to get stronger volume or something
2. Your background must be in resolution 1366x768 to follow the ranking criteria nope new max is 1920x1080
3. You're mapping a Kyoukai no Kanata Opening, so i recommend you add a video of the opening, if you have any troubl with video offset and how to find a good avi, you can ask ezek Do I have to though?
4. You're using the artist name "Chihara Minori (茅原実里)" and the romanised "Minori Chihara", i recommend you change the romanised to: "Chihara Minori" sure
   

   Failure's Easy

5. 00:03:679 (4,6) - this sliders looks a bit out of the screen, you can easy fix moving all this 00:03:679 (4,5,6) - A little below
6. i don't recommend you ignore this moment 00:16:681-, can be added a circle here
7. 00:33:658 (2) - this slider too looks a bit out of the screen, but i'm not sure how to fix without change something :c
8. 01:07:404 (2) - i know you're following the vocal, but this 3/2 transition can be really confuse for a beginner, I recommend you move this slider from 01:07:567 - and fix the spacing (this is different from here 01:08:871 (1,2) - that's the song really helps you to make a 3/2 timing spacing between two objects, in 01:07:404 (2) - we can listen the basic 2/1 drum
   
   

   Normal

9. 01:10:828 (1,2,3) - this overlap looks really confuse, mainly this 01:10:828 (1,3) -, but dont have any problem for rank, is just visually bad I like it though o3o
10. maybe some bn can disagree your NC pattern (and for a Normal, following the vocal for NC can not be a good idea), but i understand what you're following and for me looks ok, nice map hmm we'll see
    
    

    Hard

11. 00:28:116 (4,1) - this stack can be improved actually already perfect
12. 00:36:919 (3) - I think the drum song in 00:37:082 - is relevant enough to be mapped ye xd
13. 01:23:447 (1,2,3) - this spacing can be increased, can be confuse the bpm with circles because there's no way to the player undestand than the bpm change without sliders, the spacing looks like this 01:21:261 (1,2,3) -, a 1/1 0,90x 184 bpm, and is really diferent from 01:23:447 (1,2,3) -(but the spacing looks the same) Hmm AR should be enough here to fix that, if not BN or other will tell me
    
    

    Insane

14. 00:40:179 (1,2) - This stack can be improvedfixed
15. 00:50:939 (2,3,4,5,6) - in editor looks great, but maybe this spacing is short enough for the moment so intense in the song, of course there's nothing unranked here, but i think you increase the spacing can be a good idea ^^Hmm the actually buildup is supposed to be the stream rather than the mini jumps followed them by the kicksliders, I think it's fine

subtitle:
Red: Unrankable
Orange: highly recommended
Blue: Some tips
Green: Nazi stuff
Bold: General

Good luck ^-^

Sonnyc wrote:

feels good

1. 01:14:414 (1) - wowowow, that spinner seems a bit too close from the last circle. Maybe give it some room? (like you did at the end of it)
2. 01:19:305 (1) - Just my opinion: I'd have the sliders slow down a bit here.
   Seems pretty good so far. Keep it up.

1. Opinion: 00:45:070 (5) - A slight curve on this could look nice. Like you did with 00:44:418 (3) -
2. 00:55:829 (1) - Slider seems kinda...weird? I don't see a way to make it play better, but I'd suggest maybe checking it out.

1. 01:24:558 (3) - This circle seems pretty close to the spinner. I looked at the insane diff and it has one tick between the circle and spinner. How about doing the same here?