[General]
- Jesus man, the note:LN ratio is 11:1 and you're using OD 7.1 XD Please raise it to 8.3 at least so that getting a good accuracy isn't a matter of mashing.
Please delete normal-hitnormal-old.wav from the song folder since it isn't used in the map at all. - This is more my personal opinion, but Vociferous in the diff name doesn't really flow that well to me. Like, the song's intense and all, but I think just Armageddon is fine. That's just my opinion though ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
[Vociferous Armageddon]00:20:739 (20739|2,22110|0) - Can I suggest swapping the LN and short note here? this is more of a trivial thing, but 00:20:568 (20568|2,20739|2) may feel a little out of place since there have been no accidental 1/2 jacks throughout this entire section.
00:25:368 (25368|5,25539|6) - I'd also suggest switching columns here too so that the longer LN is in 7 and the shorter in 6. I think it just feels a bit nicer when LNs move towards the center column, but that's my preference.
00:25:539 (25539|0) - You might also consider moving this to 3 to avoid a 1/2 jack with 00:25:368 (25368|0,25539|0)
00:28:110 (28110|6,28453|6,28796|6,29139|6) - This 4 note stack. It might not be that big of a playability issue, but it'd be better to try and balance out the hands since you already have a 1/2 trill at 00:28:110 (28110|6,28282|5,28453|6,28625|5) Maybe try this?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/632364700:31:968 (31968|1,31968|5,32053|0,32053|6) - For consistency, shouldn't you remove one note from each of these jumps since 00:29:225 (29225|5,29310|2) is the same sound as the above, but are single notes.
00:29:825 - I also might suggest adding a note here in 2 since the sound is much louder than the surrounding ones.
00:30:339 (30339|0) - Also, this makes a 3 note stack with the previous two notes, so move this to 6 instead?
00:32:825 (32825|4) - For a little symmetry, move this to 6 so that it's a reflection of 00:32:910 (32910|1)
00:35:310 (35310|0) - Note sure if this 1/2 minijack was intentional, but considering you don't use them at all in this diff, I'd move this to 5 or 7.
00:38:225 (38225|2,38310|0,38396|1) - The lack of symmetry here makes me cri. Try moving 00:38:225 (38225|2) to 1, then shifting 00:38:310 (38310|0,38396|1) once to the right.
00:54:168 (54168|0) - move to 3 and 00:54:253 (54253|6) move to 1 for a simple 7 - 5 - 3 - 1 roll?
01:07:282 (67282|3,67453|3,67625|3) - Oh. As I've been saying, you don't use jacks like these in this section, so I'd recommend moving the notes around like so
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/632371201:08:568 (68568|4,68739|4,68910|4,69082|4) - This stack too. Try this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/632372801:25:710 (85710|3,85882|3,86053|3) - At this point in the song, I can't keep up in the editor, so I'm looking for stacks now. Anyways, try moving 01:25:882 (85882|3) to 6.
01:26:910 (86910|3,87082|3,87253|3) - same for this. I'm not sure if it's being done intentionally. Maybe move 01:27:082 (87082|3) to 3.
01:29:310 - Calm down there Satan x_x Might consider reducing the .1 SV to .2 I get it's a teleport SV or whatever, but still, that's ridiculously brutal in the middle of a jumpstream.
01:32:139 (92139|3,92310|3) - Not a stack, but I do think the pattern could be made into a roll like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/632378601:40:196 - 01:40:539 - 01:40:882 - 01:41:053 - Since these hihats are way louder than the synths here, I'd consider making them doubles. What about this?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/632380701:53:653 (113653|4,113996|5) - Swap columns with the LN and short note since the LN is right after 01:53:396 (113396|4,113482|4) and I'd consider giving the player a moment of rest to recover from a jack.
02:23:482 (143482|4,143653|4,143825|4,143996|4,144168|4,144339|4,144510|4,144682|4) and 02:23:653 (143653|2,143825|2,143996|2,144168|2,144339|2,144510|2,144682|2) - We gotta figure these stacks out man Q_Q Currently, the only solution I see to it is removing the LN 02:22:796 (142796|6) as it's constricting your columns to 6. I think it's fine to ignore the synth in favor of the intense kicks here.
02:42:939 (162939|3) - Move this to 2 to make a right -> left roll which I think plays better than the spaceship pattern at 02:42:682 (162682|4,162768|3,162853|2,162939|3,163025|4) which is pretty right hand heavy.
03:12:125 (192125|3,192168|1,192168|0,192168|2) - I'd prefer making this pattern flow in the same direction as 03:11:910 (191910|3,191996|4,192082|5,192168|6) so move 03:12:125 (192125|3) to 1 and shift 03:12:168 (192168|2,192168|0,192168|1) one column to the right.
03:33:168 (213168|3) - Move to 3 and move 03:33:253 (213253|5) to 4 to make a roll with 03:33:168 (213168|3,213253|5,213339|4,213425|5,213510|6)
03:39:082 (219082|3,219253|3,219253|2) - I'd consider control H and putting the trill onto both hands rather than the thumb.
03:49:068 (229068|3,229068|4) - Remove one note from this jump? It's the same sound as 03:41:825 (221825|6,221868|5,221910|4,221953|3) which is only mapped with singles.
04:40:025 (280025|1,280196|1,280368|1) - Stack. Maybe shift 04:40:453 (280453|2,280453|3) once to the right and move 04:40:368 (280368|1) to 3.
04:58:282 (298282|2,298368|2,298625|4,298710|4) - Why not make the jacks consistent in this measure? Cause 04:58:282 (298282|2,298368|2) are different pitches, so it'd be surprising to only use jacks without a clear pattern in this measure. I'd recommend something like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/632761605:08:953 (308953|1,308953|2,308996|4,308996|3) - Why are these doubles when the louder sound at 05:09:939 (309939|0,309982|1,310025|2,310068|3) are single? For consistency, I'd recommend making the first burst single notes only.
05:14:739 (314739|6,314782|5,314825|4,314868|3) - Going off the above, this burst is single too when it's the same sound as the one I mentioned above. So either make the first burst single notes or this burst have doubles.
05:26:010 (326010|1,326182|5) - Uh, I think these are ghost notes. There are no synth sounds like there are at 05:26:053 (326053|2,326096|3,326139|4)
05:34:453 (334453|0) - I'd consider making this a 1/1 LN for the held synth.
05:36:896 (336896|1,336982|3,337153|3) - Again, I do believe these are ghost notes. If this were a dump chart, I think it'd be fine but I'd try not putting notes that don't have musical support for them cause a lot of players play by sound and intuition.
06:00:168 (360168|3) - Why not make this a 1/2 LN and have 06:00:425 (360425|3) shield it?
06:32:910 (392910|5,393082|6) and 06:27:425 (387425|5,387596|6) - Why not swap columns and have them be a mirror of 06:30:168 (390168|0,390339|1) ? So instead of the longer LN being in 6, it's in 7.
Also, regarding the final SVs at the end, maybe you might consider toning down the speed to start at the LN 06:46:796 instead :<