lovhin456 wrote:

It doesn't matter when, take your time Blaze and thanks for the support :3

Blazevoir wrote:

lovhin456 wrote:

It doesn't matter when, take your time Blaze and thanks for the support :3

I said that because (as of this post) I'm home internetless Anyway,

[General]
* Offset: 1,405 (make sure to resnap all notes and fix your timing sections afterwards~)
* Ahh, I love the custom skin elements

Note: The following is according to your previous offset.

[Italia]
* 01:01:210 (1) - Shouldn't this (and the 2nd Kiai Time) start on a white tick?
* 01:06:835 (1) - Start on a white tick?
* 01:10:351 (3) - Delete this then make the slider at 01:10:780 (4) start on an earlier red tick?
* 01:31:210 (1) - Start on a white tick?
* 02:04:023 (1) - ^

[Nihon]
* 00:34:726 (1) - Make this longer? If not, add a note at 00:35:663?
* 00:54:648 (2) - Shouldn't this be on a white tick?
* 00:56:523 (2) - ^
* 00:58:398 (2) - ^
* 01:01:210 (1) - Same case as Italia
* 01:03:320 (3) - Delete this note then make 01:03:554 (4) start where (3) was?
* 01:38:007 (2) - Spacing

[Doitsu]
* 00:15:741 (8) - Sounds weird where it ends in my opinion.
* 00:57:695 (1) - Lol, this threw me off. I don't mind it, but I'm not sure what others will say.
* 01:01:210 (1) - Same case as the previous two diffs.

[HERO!]
* 01:01:210 (1) - You guessed it: same as the last diffs.
* 01:12:226 (1,2,3,1) - Kinda empty between these notes. Also, shouldn't the spinner at 01:15:038 start at 01:14:570?
* 01:22:187 (7) - Shouldn't this be on a red tick? (If you do move it, fix the spacing afterwards.)
* 02:14:570 (9) - Add a repeat?

All just opinions (except for the offset), so... yeah And glad to help again

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi lovhin
[Skin]
- the spinner bg is strange, I guess it originally have an aspect ratio above 4:3, can you fix it? or if you can give me the image I can try fix it for you
Pastaaaaaa~~

SPOILER

Sallad4ever wrote:

Finally done~

I try making a Spinner for you, feel free to use it or not
[attachment=0:1d129]Spinner.rar[/attachment:1d129]

Verdisphena wrote:

Estrella por la cancion :3 ~

Astom wrote:

Wenas~
Algunos detalles del skin que llamaron mi atencion.
-BG.png
-fail-background.png
-pause-overlay.png
-spinner-background.png
No es necesario que sean .png, deberias pasarlas a .jpg para reducir un poco su peso.(es como 1 mega lo q baja en peso la carpeta asi que espero que lo consideres).

Bueno aparte de eso no veo problemas, aparte mi estrellita esta entremedio hace tiempo ^^

lovhin456 wrote:

Astom wrote:

Wenas~
Algunos detalles del skin que llamaron mi atencion.
-BG.png
-fail-background.png
-pause-overlay.png
-spinner-background.png
No es necesario que sean .png, deberias pasarlas a .jpg para reducir un poco su peso.(es como 1 mega lo q baja en peso la carpeta asi que espero que lo consideres).

Bueno aparte de eso no veo problemas, aparte mi estrellita esta entremedio hace tiempo ^^

Gracias por el consejo, si voy a pasar algunas a jpg (: y es solo que queria la opinion de alguien para el skin xD

Astom wrote:

Hubieras sido un poco mas especifica xD
En ese caso creo q deberias algregar algunos elementos faltantes al skin como.
-star2.png
-section-pass.png
-section-fail.png

Y eso... esto es complementario al mod de arriba asi q no kudo please xD
Sldos.

Soaprman wrote:

92 stars? What.

Doitsu
Increase approach rate by a notch or two. I'd suggest more normally but having a slower rate does indeed fit the song.

02:10:194 (1) - this spinner appears at about the same time as the notes after it with the current approach rate. If you don't change the AR, probably best to remove this spinner.

HERO!
00:15:936 (9) - align with 8 unless the misalignment is intentional. this just stood out a lot.

That's all. Good maps you have here. Hopefully they get some BAT attention soon with all these stars you've got...

1. 01:53:905 (1) - Suggestion: Silence the end of this spinner or even the whole spinner?

1. 00:55:780 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning?
2. 01:12:655 (1) - Maybe add claps to the other end of the slider?
3. 01:53:905 (1) - Same suggestion as Nihon.
4. 02:04:217 (1) - Add a finish to the spinner?

1. 00:11:951 (x) - Add a note here?
2. 00:51:795 (8) - New combo.
3. 00:55:780 (6) - ^
4. 01:01:405 (1) - Add a finish
5. 02:13:826 (x) - Imo, it would sound and look better if there was a note here.
6. 02:14:530 (10) - Add a clap only to the beginning of this slider.
7. 02:28:123 (x) - Maybe another note here as well?

1. comboburst-0: The width is 650px. The max is 500. Resize!
2. star: Rename "star" to "star2". "star" is only for the difficulty stars on the song select screen.

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Nihon]

1. 01:53:905 (1) - Suggestion: Silence the end of this spinner or even the whole spinner?

All done :3

[Doitsu]

1. 00:55:780 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning?
2. 01:12:655 (1) - Maybe add claps to the other end of the slider?
3. 01:53:905 (1) - Same suggestion as Nihon.
4. 02:04:217 (1) - Add a finish to the spinner?

All done (:

[HERO!]

1. 00:11:951 (x) - Add a note here?
2. 00:51:795 (8) - New combo.
3. 00:55:780 (6) - ^
4. 01:01:405 (1) - Add a finish
5. 02:13:826 (x) - Imo, it would sound and look better if there was a note here.
6. 02:14:530 (10) - Add a clap only to the beginning of this slider.
7. 02:28:123 (x) - Maybe another note here as well?

Done ~

[Other things to point out]

1. comboburst-0: The width is 650px. The max is 500. Resize!
2. star: Rename "star" to "star2". "star" is only for the difficulty stars on the song select screen.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Bubbled!

Jarby wrote:

Excuse me, but your combobursts are all the wrong size and a few of them are just simply bad quality. Preview point should be at 00:23:905 (?). Around +10ms on the offset also, I believe. 01:56:717 - Kiai placement here is inconsistent with the rest of the song. It should start at 02:04:217.

Jarby wrote:

Oh, I just noticed this. Add a new offset at 116,727 to fix the metronome. Don't kudosu this post, by the way.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Italia's notes aren't snapped. Guess you owe me kudosu

Mafiamaster wrote:

Rebubbled

Lesjuh wrote:

Sorry I didn't get to this anymore, I was out for a while. I'll be faster next time you request a mod. ^^

Derekku wrote:

*pop* I promised to remod this after the mp3 change, but never got back. Looks like it's time to, though. :p
Derek ~~ xD
[General]
*Offset is fine.
*Checked to see if any of the combobursts look bad (by horizontally flipping them), but they're a bit ambiguous so they should look fine either way.
*I really don't think that "(Full Ver.)" is needed in the title, but I suppose that's up to your discretion.Probably right ... since I don't think anybody would map the ehh TV size like I did x)
*Why is the audio lead-in so long? 1 second (or even half a second) should be more than enough.Changed to 500
*Difficulty settings should increase throughout the difficulties, but some are even lower than the previous ones (not to mention that they're really low to begin with). Your current settings in order of your difficulties are:
Drain: 3/4/4/7
Overall Difficulty: 2/4/3/6
Approach Rate: 3/3/5/4
*Raise the drain 1-2 ticks on Doitsu, and possibly 1 tick on HERO!.
*Raise the OD 3 ticks on Doitsu and 1-2 ticks on HERO!.
*Raise the AR 1-2 ticks on Nihon, 1-2 ticks on Doitsu, and 3-4 ticks on HERO!.
Done :>

[Italia]
*I'm a bit concerned about the short spinners in here. I'd really like to see two-white-tick-long ones like 01:01:415 (1) lengthened by a white tick (so you'd need to remove the following beat).
Done :>

[Nihon]
*Even though this is "normal", I'm still concerned about the short spinners. You could try something like 02:24:618 (1) where you start them a red tick earlier, but I digress..
Done :>

[Doitsu]
01:07:157 (1) - Can't you just take one repeat off the last slider and start this on the white tick?
01:08:446 (1) - I hate to symmetry/nazi mod, but this slider could look so much better. Move the top left control point to the left two grids, and then move both of the top control points down a grid each.
01:39:032 (1) - finish this please
02:10:204 (1) - Again, could you remove a repeat off the last slider and move this back (and extend)?
Done :>

[HERO!]
01:37:040 (1,2,3) - at least make these jumps or something more exciting...
01:38:446 (4) - Would probably look a bit better/more symmetrical if the second to last control point was moved to the right one grid.
01:53:915 (1) - Where are the inherited sections on this (like the other diffs)?
01:56:258 - expected a note here like in Doitsu.
*I would've liked to have seen more out of this difficulty than streamstreamstream. Don't be afraid to use larger spacing (or jumps); after all, this is an Insane difficulty, and Insane isn't defined by just streams. :p
* 01:12:196 (1,2,3) and 01:29:540 (5,1,2,3,4) are examples of parts where I'd like to see more going on.
Done :> and also I forgot to say that I'm really bad at making insane :I

Call me back after you make changes and I'll gladly rebubble! (:

Derekku wrote:

Looks much better now. Nice job!

CheeseWarlock wrote:

[Italia]
01:11:727 (2,3,4) - Poorly mapped. Would be a lot nicer with slider starts or hitcircles on the TA-LI. I don't like the look of the overlapping sliders, either.

[Nihon]
00:33:055 (2) - This slider doesn't work with the music at all.
01:00:477 (6) - Turn this into a hitcircle.
01:01:415 (1) - Why is this spinner shorter than the rest? It feels like a mistake.
02:28:133 (3,4,5) - The sliders starting on red ticks don't play well.

[Doitsu]
00:44:540 (1) - Make this 1/2 shorter.
01:56:727 (2) - New combo.
02:21:102 (5) - It feels like the slider should start here.

[HERO!]
00:14:305 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing is unexpectedly large. If you want to do this sort of thing, use it more often through the map.
00:53:211 (1,2) - Move the new combo to the next slider.
01:05:868 (3,4,5,6,7) - Doesn't fit the music at all.
02:12:899 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is unexpectedly large here too.
02:26:024 (1) - If you want to use a long slider, move it 1/2 later.

CheeseWarlock wrote:

Looks good.

ztrot wrote:

ranked