1. For timing, I got offset: 796. the BPM is fine though
2. Your combobursts are too wide. the max size for combobursts are the size of the default one, which is 388x787, which yours are 500x500. Perhaps shrink them down so it fits right?
3. I see what you were trying to do with the difficulty names, but for most people, especially those who don't get the reference, like me, they don't work well as diff names. Maybe you could put an Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane next to each name? (e.g. "Italia (Easy)", or "Nihon (Normal)"?

Doomsday93 wrote:

Such a short map

1. For timing, I got offset: 796. the BPM is fine though Thanks for the offset, fixed ~
2. Your combobursts are too wide. the max size for combobursts are the size of the default one, which is 388x787, which yours are 500x500. Perhaps shrink them down so it fits right? I'm very confused now, I thought the allowed size was 500x500, then someone told me it was 400x400... Anyways fixed ~
3. I see what you were trying to do with the difficulty names, but for most people, especially those who don't get the reference, like me, they don't work well as diff names. Maybe you could put an Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane next to each name? (e.g. "Italia (Easy)", or "Nihon (Normal)"?

Fixed ~

[ITALIA]

Layout is rather bland, lots of straight lines, but I couldn't see anything technically wrong. I know...I'm just too lazy to ehh...remap ?? But anyways I finally did it ~

[NIHON]

Same as Italia, nothing technically wrong, but it laid out in a boring way. too many straight lines and right angles. ^

[DOITSU]

More interesting than Italia/Nihon, but could've use a bit more spice and interesting patterns to liven it up ^ (:

[HERO!]

00:24:477 (1,2) - It's a tiny gripe, but it looks ugly compared to the rest of the map here. Mind closing this gap? Fixed + ^

Overall, There isn't much wrong. Everything is solid and works fine, but it's kinda bland. It is your first map, so I won't bother you about it, but maybe in your next map, you could experiment more with slider shapes and patterns you could put your beats in. An interesting layour can make a map so much more fun without adding any extra beats. It helps making mapping more fun too That said, for your first map, it's nice, so good job Thanks for the advice and everything ~ I'll try to improve my map but not just with the layout but with other stuff ~

Starred

Lesjuh wrote:

I think you overused the soft claps on Hard and Insane. Consider using less of them. Haha, I will check it out xD

[Insane]
00:24:467 (1) - Snap the ending of this slider to the next white tick Done ~

That's all! Thanks !!

chamelepeace710 wrote:

wow, so much starrers

General
remove some hitsounds on all of the diffs (PLEASE!!)

Italia
00:06:421 (1,2) remove combo, new combo after that
00:22:827 (1,2) ^

Nihon
00:13:452 (1) remove combo

Doitsu
00:28:921 start spinner here

kudosu star!!

lovhin456 wrote:

vivere wrote:

Starr~ ^^

Gracias ~ :3

Dusty wrote:

This is hilarious I know :3 ~

[Nihon]
00:22:827 (1,2,3) - (3) needs to go left 1 grid

[Doitsu]
too much clap

[HERO!]
too much clap, usually if there are 5 or more claps in a row, that's bad

TheVileOne wrote:

First queue attempt FTW!!

Italia(Easy)

00:06:421 (2) - Off placed very slightly. Move it down 1 unit (aligns it with the previous slider) and then turn both grid and distance snap off for the next change and move it slightly closer to the previous note so that it is roughly 1 and 2/3rds unit from the previous note. That may be hard to visualize. Another method is to use the vertical axis as a guide. In my alteration the start of this note has 4 and 2/3rds units on the left side and 3 and 1/3rd units on the right side.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21729

Lot of effort put into something you most likely wont even change, but I don't care. I couldn't clarify myself in an easily interpreted way.

I actually did it, looks better, but I will like you to check if I did it okk :3

Nihon(Normal)

Eh it's fine as far as I see.

I have a couple mini suggestions that you may want to look into.

00:14:858 (4,1) - Did you not align these on purpose? If you did, it is perfectly okay. I can't make a determination whether aligning these notes and the notes included in the shift looks better than the altered version or if it makes a difference. I'll just include a fix to realign these notes.

00:15:796 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Move these left 1 unit to fix the alignment. This wont fix it entirely. My next suggestion rquires a deviation of your patterns a tad that might spice up your patterns better regardless if you chose to shift the notes to realign or keep the misalignment. So consider this next suggestion separate but related to the above one.

00:20:014 (5,1,2,1) - I think that the straight implementation of 1,2 is a little bland. I think it would play and look better if this notes were placed in a fancy curving pattern. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21731

I did this by moving 00:21:889 (1) - 2 units to the right of 5 with distance snap on. 00:22:358 (2) - was placed diagonally from it. Exact specs is hard to explain. There is probably multiple positions that would work for note 2. The center right edge of note 2 in the screenshot is 3 units up and 5 units left from the top center edge of note 1. 00:22:827 (1) - in the screenshot is positioned roughly 2 units higher than 00:21:889 (1) - or 5 units lower and 2 units to the left of note 2. After you have those positioned in the pattern, realign 00:23:061 (2,3) - these back with 00:22:827 (1) - .

To complete the look, I suggest that you make 00:23:296 (3,4,1) - more curved to look like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21736
See how note 1 is placed in an adjacent position to note 3 and 4 is right in the middle? Design it to look something like that.

Tell me if your interested in this change and if my instructions have confused you in any way. I'll gladly help you out.

Everything done ~ Check it, so I know if I did it right please ??

Doitsu(Hard)

00:02:436 (4) - I really think this belongs on a 1/8th tick. Try placing it on 00:02:378 -.

00:10:171 (1) - Move down 1 unit

00:28:452 - Add a note here? It doesn't have to be a slider. Just a regular note. I just feel that there is an awkward gap here and it throws off the pace when I go into the spinner.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21738
All done ~

HERO! (Insane)

00:01:733 (3,1) - Stack this better? It's stacking weird.

00:07:358 (1) - Move this back to 00:07:124 -
All done~

Very fun beatmaps. Short but fun to play. Only gets better the harder the difficulty due to the relaxing nature of the maps. I'm looking forward to this getting ranked. Stared.

Krisom wrote:

-General
Si vas a poner los diff names como Italia, Nihon, Dohitsu y HERO!, remueve los (Easy), (Normal), (Hard), (Insane). Se ven raros. Además, Italia en inglés = Italy. Tal vez lo quieras arreglar.
Removi (Easy), etc pero el nombre de las diff tiene que ver con el anime, no es que lo haya escrito mal en ingles :3

-Easy
00:06:421 (2) - Agrega un finish al inicio. Hasta podrías agregar un finish normal.
00:10:171 (1) - ^
00:11:108 (2) - Estos finish están de más imo.
00:12:046 (1) - Agrega un finish al inicio.
00:23:296 (1) - ^
Todo hecho ~

-Normal
00:10:171 (1) - Finish al inicio
00:11:108 (2) - Remueve el finish del final
00:12:046 (1) - Finish al inicio
Todo hecho ~

-Hard
00:08:296 (1) - Finish al inicio
00:11:577 (4) - Remueve este finish
00:10:171 (1) - Finish al inicio
00:12:046 (1) - ^
00:19:546 (3) - ^
Todo hecho ~

-Insane
Esto, ehhh, no es para nada un insane, te aviso de inmediato, es bastante fácil. Para aumentar la dificultad, usa notas en 1/4 y agranda la distancia entre las notas en 1/2. Ehh...he pensado en re-mappear esta diff, porque dicen que es muy facil :/
Ah, lindos sliders~! Gracias :3
00:04:546 (1) - Para aumentar la dificultad, podrías agregar notas en 1/4 (lineas azules) en lugar de este slider. Podrían ser repeat sliders o una stream.
00:05:600 (x) - Agrega una nota
00:05:835 (x) - ^
00:07:124 (1) - Extiende esto hasta 00:08:296 -
00:10:171 (1) - finish
00:12:046 (1) - finish
No hice nada de lo que sugeriste, pero no fue porque no estuviera de acuerdo sino que como que quise re-mappear esta diff :3

Al poner los finish, ponle un poco más de atención a la música de fondo.
Suerte!

Star!

kuyukiP wrote:

I haven't starred this yet? Wtf?

TheVileOne wrote:

Might as well kudosu star this for your awesome hitsound mod.

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Doitsu]
00:02:378 (4) - Snap to the red tick using the 1/4 divisor. (Or just snap to red tick) Done
00:05:952 (7) - Maybe add a finish at the end? Umm, why not :3

[HERO!]
00:07:124 (1) - Ending sounds pretty bad. How about extending it to the white tick? Done
00:15:796 (5) - Add a finish at the start? Done
00:28:452 (1) - Add finish here (like the others) instead of on 00:28:686 (3). Done

Also make the lead-in time 2 seconds on all difficulties. Done

Mafiamaster wrote:

Bubbled

Sakura Hana wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?p=473436#p473436
*runs*

Blazevoir wrote:

lovhin456 wrote:

Ignore what Sakura said.

Okk...I guess...thanks (:

whymeman wrote:

Errr.... NO. Stop with that "Well this map was ranked wi-" NO. Stop using maps that was ranked MONTHS AGO with such a short playtime as an excuse to continue doing the same thing now, even if it is TV Size. It doesn't help and will only make things worse in both sides. Also if someone says something that is REALLY important, especially when it is unrankable, look it up. Ranking standards change over time. Don't be a total jerk about it and then get burned by other BAT's later on.

Extra Note: Also taking out the bubble.

NatsumeRin wrote:

map submitted: Jun 22.
Eph said: Jul 17.

maybe ask Ephemeral to solve this...?

Sakura Hana wrote:

I did tell you sooner

whymeman wrote:

Errr.... NO. Stop with that "Well this map was ranked wi-" NO. Stop using maps that was ranked MONTHS AGO with such a short playtime as an excuse to continue doing the same thing now, even if it is TV Size. It doesn't help and will only make things worse in both sides. Also if someone says something that is REALLY important, especially when it is unrankable, look it up. Ranking standards change over time. Don't be a total jerk about it and then get burned by other BAT's later on.]

Blazevoir wrote:

Anyway, good luck trying to sort things out, lovhin456... I'd hate to see all of this go to complete waste.

Derekku wrote:

If you could somehow find or create a longer mp3, then that would probably be your best option. Some BATs seem to think that the current length is fine, but obviously that won't fare well since other BATs are popping any bubble that your map receives (and could always lead to an unranking even if it DID get ranked).

Please don't get discouraged or give up. ):

PS: I'll gladly give you a re-mod if you make any big changes (i.e., this becomes a longer map).

Derekku wrote:

PS: I'll gladly give you a re-mod if you make any big changes (i.e., this becomes a longer map).

Sallad4ever wrote:

Derekku wrote:

PS: I'll gladly give you a re-mod if you make any big changes (i.e., this becomes a longer map).

Let me re-mod this too, I've just finish watching Hetalia Axis Power and I starting to like this song (especially English version)

Jarby wrote:

SPOILER

Seriously, guys...

Blazevoir wrote:

Oh yay~ I'll definitely have a mod post ASAP (although I'm not exactly sure when that'll be )

lovhin456 wrote:

It doesn't matter when, take your time Blaze and thanks for the support :3

Blazevoir wrote:

lovhin456 wrote:

It doesn't matter when, take your time Blaze and thanks for the support :3

I said that because (as of this post) I'm home internetless Anyway,

[General]
* Offset: 1,405 (make sure to resnap all notes and fix your timing sections afterwards~)
* Ahh, I love the custom skin elements

Note: The following is according to your previous offset.

[Italia]
* 01:01:210 (1) - Shouldn't this (and the 2nd Kiai Time) start on a white tick?
* 01:06:835 (1) - Start on a white tick?
* 01:10:351 (3) - Delete this then make the slider at 01:10:780 (4) start on an earlier red tick?
* 01:31:210 (1) - Start on a white tick?
* 02:04:023 (1) - ^

[Nihon]
* 00:34:726 (1) - Make this longer? If not, add a note at 00:35:663?
* 00:54:648 (2) - Shouldn't this be on a white tick?
* 00:56:523 (2) - ^
* 00:58:398 (2) - ^
* 01:01:210 (1) - Same case as Italia
* 01:03:320 (3) - Delete this note then make 01:03:554 (4) start where (3) was?
* 01:38:007 (2) - Spacing

[Doitsu]
* 00:15:741 (8) - Sounds weird where it ends in my opinion.
* 00:57:695 (1) - Lol, this threw me off. I don't mind it, but I'm not sure what others will say.
* 01:01:210 (1) - Same case as the previous two diffs.

[HERO!]
* 01:01:210 (1) - You guessed it: same as the last diffs.
* 01:12:226 (1,2,3,1) - Kinda empty between these notes. Also, shouldn't the spinner at 01:15:038 start at 01:14:570?
* 01:22:187 (7) - Shouldn't this be on a red tick? (If you do move it, fix the spacing afterwards.)
* 02:14:570 (9) - Add a repeat?

All just opinions (except for the offset), so... yeah And glad to help again

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi lovhin
[Skin]
- the spinner bg is strange, I guess it originally have an aspect ratio above 4:3, can you fix it? or if you can give me the image I can try fix it for you
Pastaaaaaa~~

SPOILER

Sallad4ever wrote:

Finally done~

I try making a Spinner for you, feel free to use it or not
[attachment=0:1d129]Spinner.rar[/attachment:1d129]

Verdisphena wrote:

Estrella por la cancion :3 ~

Astom wrote:

Wenas~
Algunos detalles del skin que llamaron mi atencion.
-BG.png
-fail-background.png
-pause-overlay.png
-spinner-background.png
No es necesario que sean .png, deberias pasarlas a .jpg para reducir un poco su peso.(es como 1 mega lo q baja en peso la carpeta asi que espero que lo consideres).

Bueno aparte de eso no veo problemas, aparte mi estrellita esta entremedio hace tiempo ^^

lovhin456 wrote:

Astom wrote:

Wenas~
Algunos detalles del skin que llamaron mi atencion.
-BG.png
-fail-background.png
-pause-overlay.png
-spinner-background.png
No es necesario que sean .png, deberias pasarlas a .jpg para reducir un poco su peso.(es como 1 mega lo q baja en peso la carpeta asi que espero que lo consideres).

Bueno aparte de eso no veo problemas, aparte mi estrellita esta entremedio hace tiempo ^^

Gracias por el consejo, si voy a pasar algunas a jpg (: y es solo que queria la opinion de alguien para el skin xD

Astom wrote:

Hubieras sido un poco mas especifica xD
En ese caso creo q deberias algregar algunos elementos faltantes al skin como.
-star2.png
-section-pass.png
-section-fail.png

Y eso... esto es complementario al mod de arriba asi q no kudo please xD
Sldos.

Soaprman wrote:

92 stars? What.

Doitsu
Increase approach rate by a notch or two. I'd suggest more normally but having a slower rate does indeed fit the song.

02:10:194 (1) - this spinner appears at about the same time as the notes after it with the current approach rate. If you don't change the AR, probably best to remove this spinner.

HERO!
00:15:936 (9) - align with 8 unless the misalignment is intentional. this just stood out a lot.

That's all. Good maps you have here. Hopefully they get some BAT attention soon with all these stars you've got...

1. 01:53:905 (1) - Suggestion: Silence the end of this spinner or even the whole spinner?

1. 00:55:780 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning?
2. 01:12:655 (1) - Maybe add claps to the other end of the slider?
3. 01:53:905 (1) - Same suggestion as Nihon.
4. 02:04:217 (1) - Add a finish to the spinner?

1. 00:11:951 (x) - Add a note here?
2. 00:51:795 (8) - New combo.
3. 00:55:780 (6) - ^
4. 01:01:405 (1) - Add a finish
5. 02:13:826 (x) - Imo, it would sound and look better if there was a note here.
6. 02:14:530 (10) - Add a clap only to the beginning of this slider.
7. 02:28:123 (x) - Maybe another note here as well?

1. comboburst-0: The width is 650px. The max is 500. Resize!
2. star: Rename "star" to "star2". "star" is only for the difficulty stars on the song select screen.

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Nihon]

1. 01:53:905 (1) - Suggestion: Silence the end of this spinner or even the whole spinner?

All done :3

[Doitsu]

1. 00:55:780 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning?
2. 01:12:655 (1) - Maybe add claps to the other end of the slider?
3. 01:53:905 (1) - Same suggestion as Nihon.
4. 02:04:217 (1) - Add a finish to the spinner?

All done (:

[HERO!]

1. 00:11:951 (x) - Add a note here?
2. 00:51:795 (8) - New combo.
3. 00:55:780 (6) - ^
4. 01:01:405 (1) - Add a finish
5. 02:13:826 (x) - Imo, it would sound and look better if there was a note here.
6. 02:14:530 (10) - Add a clap only to the beginning of this slider.
7. 02:28:123 (x) - Maybe another note here as well?

Done ~

[Other things to point out]

1. comboburst-0: The width is 650px. The max is 500. Resize!
2. star: Rename "star" to "star2". "star" is only for the difficulty stars on the song select screen.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Bubbled!

Jarby wrote:

Excuse me, but your combobursts are all the wrong size and a few of them are just simply bad quality. Preview point should be at 00:23:905 (?). Around +10ms on the offset also, I believe. 01:56:717 - Kiai placement here is inconsistent with the rest of the song. It should start at 02:04:217.

Jarby wrote:

Oh, I just noticed this. Add a new offset at 116,727 to fix the metronome. Don't kudosu this post, by the way.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Italia's notes aren't snapped. Guess you owe me kudosu

Mafiamaster wrote:

Rebubbled

Lesjuh wrote:

Sorry I didn't get to this anymore, I was out for a while. I'll be faster next time you request a mod. ^^

Derekku wrote:

*pop* I promised to remod this after the mp3 change, but never got back. Looks like it's time to, though. :p
Derek ~~ xD
[General]
*Offset is fine.
*Checked to see if any of the combobursts look bad (by horizontally flipping them), but they're a bit ambiguous so they should look fine either way.
*I really don't think that "(Full Ver.)" is needed in the title, but I suppose that's up to your discretion.Probably right ... since I don't think anybody would map the ehh TV size like I did x)
*Why is the audio lead-in so long? 1 second (or even half a second) should be more than enough.Changed to 500
*Difficulty settings should increase throughout the difficulties, but some are even lower than the previous ones (not to mention that they're really low to begin with). Your current settings in order of your difficulties are:
Drain: 3/4/4/7
Overall Difficulty: 2/4/3/6
Approach Rate: 3/3/5/4
*Raise the drain 1-2 ticks on Doitsu, and possibly 1 tick on HERO!.
*Raise the OD 3 ticks on Doitsu and 1-2 ticks on HERO!.
*Raise the AR 1-2 ticks on Nihon, 1-2 ticks on Doitsu, and 3-4 ticks on HERO!.
Done :>

[Italia]
*I'm a bit concerned about the short spinners in here. I'd really like to see two-white-tick-long ones like 01:01:415 (1) lengthened by a white tick (so you'd need to remove the following beat).
Done :>

[Nihon]
*Even though this is "normal", I'm still concerned about the short spinners. You could try something like 02:24:618 (1) where you start them a red tick earlier, but I digress..
Done :>

[Doitsu]
01:07:157 (1) - Can't you just take one repeat off the last slider and start this on the white tick?
01:08:446 (1) - I hate to symmetry/nazi mod, but this slider could look so much better. Move the top left control point to the left two grids, and then move both of the top control points down a grid each.
01:39:032 (1) - finish this please
02:10:204 (1) - Again, could you remove a repeat off the last slider and move this back (and extend)?
Done :>

[HERO!]
01:37:040 (1,2,3) - at least make these jumps or something more exciting...
01:38:446 (4) - Would probably look a bit better/more symmetrical if the second to last control point was moved to the right one grid.
01:53:915 (1) - Where are the inherited sections on this (like the other diffs)?
01:56:258 - expected a note here like in Doitsu.
*I would've liked to have seen more out of this difficulty than streamstreamstream. Don't be afraid to use larger spacing (or jumps); after all, this is an Insane difficulty, and Insane isn't defined by just streams. :p
* 01:12:196 (1,2,3) and 01:29:540 (5,1,2,3,4) are examples of parts where I'd like to see more going on.
Done :> and also I forgot to say that I'm really bad at making insane :I

Call me back after you make changes and I'll gladly rebubble! (:

Derekku wrote:

Looks much better now. Nice job!

CheeseWarlock wrote:

[Italia]
01:11:727 (2,3,4) - Poorly mapped. Would be a lot nicer with slider starts or hitcircles on the TA-LI. I don't like the look of the overlapping sliders, either.

[Nihon]
00:33:055 (2) - This slider doesn't work with the music at all.
01:00:477 (6) - Turn this into a hitcircle.
01:01:415 (1) - Why is this spinner shorter than the rest? It feels like a mistake.
02:28:133 (3,4,5) - The sliders starting on red ticks don't play well.

[Doitsu]
00:44:540 (1) - Make this 1/2 shorter.
01:56:727 (2) - New combo.
02:21:102 (5) - It feels like the slider should start here.

[HERO!]
00:14:305 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing is unexpectedly large. If you want to do this sort of thing, use it more often through the map.
00:53:211 (1,2) - Move the new combo to the next slider.
01:05:868 (3,4,5,6,7) - Doesn't fit the music at all.
02:12:899 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is unexpectedly large here too.
02:26:024 (1) - If you want to use a long slider, move it 1/2 later.

CheeseWarlock wrote:

Looks good.

ztrot wrote:

ranked