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very cool! 
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omg lol
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Timing modded, Offset 27,645 is better for me.
Don't forget resnap all notes and green lines.
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Don't forget resnap all notes and green lines.
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all seem ok for me. star'd
tanosiizo~
Some people don't like gray combo color because of multiplayer thing
Hitsounds sound kind of quiet, raise volume? (to full)
Beginner:
Wow that is pretty slow velocity
No problems I see
Normal:
Why not go through and make sliders like 00:29:529 (3) and 00:58:744 (1) more symmetrical
00:37:697 (6,7,8,9,1) - doesn't really suit a normal
00:50:262 (3,5) - align
00:52:775 (3,4,5,6,7) - try and turn these stacks into something easier
01:02:828 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ (same for the rest of these)
02:20:105 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - stuff like this is kind of hard for a normal
Map isn't bad but it needs some parts made easier to suit a Normal
Hyper:
No major problems
Another:
00:38:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - don't like the spacing here
00:57:802 (2) - kind of hidden by previous notes, I would re-arrange this part
01:38:639 (1,1,1,1) - some people don't like stuff like this,might want to replace one or two, but up to you
Some other spacing that is odd but it "is" an insane so ok
*star*
Hitsounds sound kind of quiet, raise volume? (to full)
Beginner:
Wow that is pretty slow velocity
No problems I see
Normal:
Why not go through and make sliders like 00:29:529 (3) and 00:58:744 (1) more symmetrical
00:37:697 (6,7,8,9,1) - doesn't really suit a normal
00:50:262 (3,5) - align
00:52:775 (3,4,5,6,7) - try and turn these stacks into something easier
01:02:828 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ (same for the rest of these)
02:20:105 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - stuff like this is kind of hard for a normal
Map isn't bad but it needs some parts made easier to suit a Normal
Hyper:
No major problems
Another:
00:38:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - don't like the spacing here
00:57:802 (2) - kind of hidden by previous notes, I would re-arrange this part
01:38:639 (1,1,1,1) - some people don't like stuff like this,might want to replace one or two, but up to you
Some other spacing that is odd but it "is" an insane so ok
*star*
- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
Well done.
- Video is quite big, but i see that if you try and compress it more it will look awful, so it's ok since it suits the limit.
- .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Nothing wrong, but that spacing with big circles is eye-straining.
- .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Slidertick rate 1 seems more "powerful" to me.
Nothing else
- .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
You should reduce stack leniency in order to avoid having 1/1 and 2/1 beats stacked in a weird way (like 02:16:650 (4,6) - 02:12:409 (3,5))
.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
01:02:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this stack looks bad in play mode. Fix it by moving it down-right.
- .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
00:38:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 02:00:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 02:13:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ugly imho.
02:17:121 (6,7,8) - can be confused for a 1/4 stream (not very likely, but it think someone will think that way)
I don't get all those weird changed of spacing that are readable only because the map has AR8.
.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
01:41:152 (1) - make this end at 01:46:179.
00:56:388 (4) - what.
Well done.
OMG, a xi map submitted? D: I love POONwing's taiko maps on xi's songs 
you should ask him to make a taiko diff for this D:
you should ask him to make a taiko diff for this D:
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Please remember some of these errors are suggestions, not directions, but if I point something out it's because I believe it will help your map!
[General]
I think artist should be Xi not xi
Add epilepsy warning since the video has quick flashes.
What is that Lily Allen - Smile folder doing in your song folder?
[Another]
00:56:231 (3,4) - I recommend you put these closer, the way the notes are arranged doesn't hint that this will be a jump.
01:54:346 (6) - New combo.
[Hyper]
I think you could do some variation with the slider crosses like 00:49:791 (4,5,6,7) by making some cross go from the outside to the inside instead.
[Normal+]
01:18:377 - I dont really like how this 1/2 section is generating awkward sliderticks (they appear invisible in gameplay)
[Beginner]
00:35:498 (4) - Awkward slider tick, please shorten by 1/1 then add a note where this slider used to end.
00:48:692 (1) - Shorten by 1/1
00:50:891 (2) - ^
01:00:943 (3) - ^
01:07:226 (5,6) - This is confusing for beginners, please put (6) somewhere else or just add another repeat to (5).
01:18:849 (2) - Shorten by 1/1
01:21:048 (6) - Shorten by 1/1 then add an extra repeat and rearrange the spacing afterwards
01:57:173 (4) - Shorten by 1/1
02:13:194 (1) - ^
02:15:079 (3) - ^
02:16:336 (1) - ^
02:17:592 (2) - ^
Note: All those "Shorten by 1/1" it's to fix the awkward slider ticks at the end, feel free to add a note or something after the slider if you feel it's needed.
[General]
I think artist should be Xi not xi
Add epilepsy warning since the video has quick flashes.
What is that Lily Allen - Smile folder doing in your song folder?
[Another]
00:56:231 (3,4) - I recommend you put these closer, the way the notes are arranged doesn't hint that this will be a jump.
01:54:346 (6) - New combo.
[Hyper]
I think you could do some variation with the slider crosses like 00:49:791 (4,5,6,7) by making some cross go from the outside to the inside instead.
[Normal+]
01:18:377 - I dont really like how this 1/2 section is generating awkward sliderticks (they appear invisible in gameplay)
[Beginner]
00:35:498 (4) - Awkward slider tick, please shorten by 1/1 then add a note where this slider used to end.
00:48:692 (1) - Shorten by 1/1
00:50:891 (2) - ^
01:00:943 (3) - ^
01:07:226 (5,6) - This is confusing for beginners, please put (6) somewhere else or just add another repeat to (5).
01:18:849 (2) - Shorten by 1/1
01:21:048 (6) - Shorten by 1/1 then add an extra repeat and rearrange the spacing afterwards
01:57:173 (4) - Shorten by 1/1
02:13:194 (1) - ^
02:15:079 (3) - ^
02:16:336 (1) - ^
02:17:592 (2) - ^
Note: All those "Shorten by 1/1" it's to fix the awkward slider ticks at the end, feel free to add a note or something after the slider if you feel it's needed.
too much claps xD
I check this tomorrow i am sleepy~
sudooooo
I check this tomorrow i am sleepy~
sudooooo
General;
Offset = 5027
Don't use grey as a combo colour, it is used in multiplayer.
Tickrate = 1 for all difficulties.
01:50:262 - This kiai section should start at 01:49:948.
02:10:367 - This kiai section should start at 02:10:053.
Beginner;
AR +1?
Normal+;
Rename to Normal.
01:49:634 (1,1) - I think this is a little tricky for even a Normal+; perhaps reverse the yellow slider?
02:20:105 (1,2,3,4) - Far too difficult for a Normal.
Hyper;
That 0.5x section is incredibly hard to read; perhaps you should change it to a 0.7x section?
Another;
Same comment about the 0.5x section.
01:49:634 (1) - This is impossible to read. Use maybe a 1.33x section or at the most, 1.5x.
Offset = 5027
Don't use grey as a combo colour, it is used in multiplayer.
Tickrate = 1 for all difficulties.
01:50:262 - This kiai section should start at 01:49:948.
02:10:367 - This kiai section should start at 02:10:053.
Beginner;
AR +1?
Normal+;
Rename to Normal.
01:49:634 (1,1) - I think this is a little tricky for even a Normal+; perhaps reverse the yellow slider?
02:20:105 (1,2,3,4) - Far too difficult for a Normal.
Hyper;
That 0.5x section is incredibly hard to read; perhaps you should change it to a 0.7x section?
Another;
Same comment about the 0.5x section.
01:49:634 (1) - This is impossible to read. Use maybe a 1.33x section or at the most, 1.5x.
nice streams ^^
いまさらですが...
Taikoマップを作ってもいいでしょうか
Taikoマップを作ってもいいでしょうか
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.
[Beginner]
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.
[Beginner]
- 01:37:383 (3-1) - Spacing between these 2 notes is little confusing for me. Idk why. I would increase spacing a little.
- I would remove this kiai section in the beginning.
- Same with kiai.
- Same with kiai.
- 02:16:650 (4-6) - Places like this one. Unwanted stacking i guess. Set Stack Leniency on second bar. It'll look great then imo.
- Same with kiai.