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CrystilonZ

Joined January 2013

CrystilonZ 2016-09-14T19:02:25+00:00

2016-09-15 00:54 CrystilonZ: oh here you are XD
2016-09-15 00:54 CrystilonZ: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1059527 Red Velvet - Ice Cream Cake [Hobbes2's Insane]]
2016-09-15 00:54 Hobbes2: hey
2016-09-15 00:55 CrystilonZ: >w<
2016-09-15 00:55 CrystilonZ: so
2016-09-15 00:55 CrystilonZ: do you want an irc mod?
2016-09-15 00:55 Hobbes2: o sure
2016-09-15 00:55 CrystilonZ: first thing first
2016-09-15 00:55 CrystilonZ: most importantly
2016-09-15 00:56 CrystilonZ: change your diff name X_X
2016-09-15 00:56 CrystilonZ: i want to eat a cheesecake
2016-09-15 00:56 CrystilonZ: please
2016-09-15 00:56 CrystilonZ: okno
2016-09-15 00:56 Hobbes2: :o
2016-09-15 00:56 Hobbes2: lol
2016-09-15 00:56 Hobbes2: lily might do fancy diff names idk
2016-09-15 00:56 CrystilonZ: ok real mod this time lol
2016-09-15 00:56 Hobbes2: ctrl+a remap
2016-09-15 00:57 CrystilonZ: that thing is so cliched :/
2016-09-15 00:57 Hobbes2: often true :(
2016-09-15 00:57 CrystilonZ: lolXD
2016-09-15 00:57 CrystilonZ: 01:37:194 (1,2,3,4) - 
2016-09-15 00:57 CrystilonZ: this somehow feels undermapped
2016-09-15 00:58 CrystilonZ: you went as far as overmapping 00:47:659 (4,5,6,7) - by extending the sliders
2016-09-15 00:58 CrystilonZ: and
2016-09-15 00:58 Hobbes2: you think using 1/4 sliders for the woosh sounds is overmap?
2016-09-15 00:58 Hobbes2: i dont think so :v
2016-09-15 00:58 CrystilonZ: the last kiai isn't very undermapped either
2016-09-15 00:58 CrystilonZ: uhh
2016-09-15 00:59 CrystilonZ: ok overmap is not a good word
2016-09-15 00:59 CrystilonZ: like
2016-09-15 00:59 CrystilonZ: it's
2016-09-15 00:59 CrystilonZ: far more intense than
2016-09-15 00:59 CrystilonZ: 01:37:194 (1,2,3,4) - despite having same sounds and ofc intensity
2016-09-15 01:00 CrystilonZ: you don't need to map all the sounds tho
2016-09-15 01:00 CrystilonZ: just add some
2016-09-15 01:00 Hobbes2: oh good point
2016-09-15 01:00 CrystilonZ: so that it doesn't feel empty
2016-09-15 01:00 Hobbes2: ill fix that then
2016-09-15 01:02 CrystilonZ: 00:42:775 (1,2,3,4,5) - consider reducing the density here
2016-09-15 01:02 CrystilonZ: it is not overmapped
2016-09-15 01:02 CrystilonZ: but it being right beside 00:42:077 (1,2,3,4) - on the timeline kinda make
2016-09-15 01:02 CrystilonZ: the wooshy sounds you tried to emphasize lose their importance
2016-09-15 01:03 CrystilonZ: somehow
2016-09-15 01:03 Hobbes2: good point, fixed
2016-09-15 01:03 Hobbes2: or well, fixing
2016-09-15 01:04 CrystilonZ: this is just me being curious owo
2016-09-15 01:04 CrystilonZ: 00:58:821 (1,2,3,4,1) - what are these extended sliders following?
2016-09-15 01:05 Hobbes2: woosh
2016-09-15 01:05 Hobbes2: sounds
2016-09-15 01:06 CrystilonZ: I don't
2016-09-15 01:06 CrystilonZ: hear any woosh sounds OwO
2016-09-15 01:07 CrystilonZ: can you listen to them properly again?
2016-09-15 01:07 Hobbes2: I hear em :o
2016-09-15 01:07 Hobbes2: they're definitely there
2016-09-15 01:07 CrystilonZ: ok i hear them now
2016-09-15 01:07 CrystilonZ: rip my ears
2016-09-15 01:08 CrystilonZ: 01:13:124 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - this shift of attention is kinda weird actually
2016-09-15 01:08 CrystilonZ: but it follows the vocals properly
2016-09-15 01:08 CrystilonZ: i just want you to reconsider
2016-09-15 01:09 Hobbes2: what exactly about it tho
2016-09-15 01:09 CrystilonZ: it's kinda like
2016-09-15 01:09 Hobbes2: like i shift to map the electronic sounds there
2016-09-15 01:09 CrystilonZ: uh no
2016-09-15 01:09 CrystilonZ: i mean
2016-09-15 01:09 CrystilonZ: the slider that is following the vocall
2016-09-15 01:09 CrystilonZ: rip timestamp & highlight
2016-09-15 01:09 Hobbes2: o rip
2016-09-15 01:09 CrystilonZ: 01:18:705 (8,9,10,11,1) - something like this might be better to play
2016-09-15 01:10 CrystilonZ: but you need to leave the vocal there
2016-09-15 01:10 Hobbes2: oooh
2016-09-15 01:10 Hobbes2: goo dpiont
2016-09-15 01:10 Hobbes2: ill try to come up with something
2016-09-15 01:10 CrystilonZ: or maybe
2016-09-15 01:10 CrystilonZ: use a red slider anchor
2016-09-15 01:11 CrystilonZ: to represent the vocal maybe OwO
2016-09-15 01:11 CrystilonZ: just put a sharp turn
2016-09-15 01:11 CrystilonZ: on that vocal start 
2016-09-15 01:12 Hobbes2: i have an idea ill try out
2016-09-15 01:12 Hobbes2: probably terrible ill screenshot
2016-09-15 01:12 CrystilonZ: I'm horrible at making slider arts lol
2016-09-15 01:13 Hobbes2: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6093579 this rhythm catches the vocal while still focusing on the electronic sounds properly
2016-09-15 01:13 Hobbes2: so its not a weird shift
2016-09-15 01:13 Hobbes2: i think
2016-09-15 01:13 CrystilonZ: oh that's nice OwO
2016-09-15 01:13 CrystilonZ: okay moving on
2016-09-15 01:14 CrystilonZ: 01:21:670 (4) - consider extending this circle into a 1/8 slider
2016-09-15 01:14 CrystilonZ: unlike 01:21:147 (1,2,3) - there's a sound at 01:21:758 -
2016-09-15 01:14 Hobbes2: good point done
2016-09-15 01:15 CrystilonZ: 01:30:217 (1) - not my opinion but
2016-09-15 01:15 CrystilonZ: it touches
2016-09-15 01:15 CrystilonZ: the accuracy bar below
2016-09-15 01:15 CrystilonZ: and people consider this bad :/
2016-09-15 01:15 Hobbes2: o
2016-09-15 01:16 Hobbes2: yea ill move
2016-09-15 01:16 CrystilonZ: same with stacked notes afterwards lol
2016-09-15 01:16 CrystilonZ: also
2016-09-15 01:16 CrystilonZ: some BNs
2016-09-15 01:16 CrystilonZ: will scream "CONSISTENCY" in their mods
2016-09-15 01:17 CrystilonZ: i'm fine with this variations
2016-09-15 01:17 CrystilonZ: but some might find this otherwise
2016-09-15 01:17 CrystilonZ: just saying
2016-09-15 01:18 Hobbes2: yeah im not a fan of nazi consistency
2016-09-15 01:18 Hobbes2: just feels too restrictive
2016-09-15 01:18 Hobbes2: i do try to be consistent at a minimal level tho
2016-09-15 01:19 CrystilonZ: I'm not too :v
2016-09-15 01:19 Hobbes2: so i wont just throw out random rhythm
2016-09-15 01:19 CrystilonZ: but it needs to be said
2016-09-15 01:19 Hobbes2: but i wont be like "exact sound exact same pattern pls!!'
2016-09-15 01:19 CrystilonZ: just leave it there lol
2016-09-15 01:19 Hobbes2: yeah
2016-09-15 01:19 Hobbes2: ill be able to defend myself
2016-09-15 01:19 CrystilonZ: probably
2016-09-15 01:20 CrystilonZ: anyway moving on!
2016-09-15 01:20 Hobbes2: oki
2016-09-15 01:20 CrystilonZ: 02:25:333 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I find this weird somehow
2016-09-15 01:21 CrystilonZ: The whoosh sounds are stronger, yet you leave it as 1/4
2016-09-15 01:21 CrystilonZ: but the... hi-hat?
2016-09-15 01:21 CrystilonZ: whatever
2016-09-15 01:21 CrystilonZ: is weaker and there's a hell 5 notes stream there
2016-09-15 01:22 CrystilonZ: the whooshy sounds feel a bit under-represented right now
2016-09-15 01:22 CrystilonZ: that is a word right? lol
2016-09-15 01:22 Hobbes2: yeah good point lol
2016-09-15 01:22 Hobbes2: ill remap that part
2016-09-15 01:23 Hobbes2: yea
2016-09-15 01:23 Hobbes2: I see what you mean
2016-09-15 01:23 CrystilonZ: 02:48:182 (4) - extend this thing lol
2016-09-15 01:23 CrystilonZ: same reason as
2016-09-15 01:23 CrystilonZ: uh something before
2016-09-15 01:23 Hobbes2: done
2016-09-15 01:23 CrystilonZ: let me find it one sec
2016-09-15 01:23 Hobbes2: ye dw
2016-09-15 01:23 Hobbes2: i got it
2016-09-15 01:23 CrystilonZ: 01:21:670 (4) - 
2016-09-15 01:23 CrystilonZ: thart
2016-09-15 01:23 CrystilonZ: oki
2016-09-15 01:24 CrystilonZ: 00:48:182 (7) - did i mention this one?
2016-09-15 01:25 Hobbes2: fixed
2016-09-15 01:25 CrystilonZ: 03:03:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
2016-09-15 01:25 CrystilonZ: since you're also mapping the vocals
2016-09-15 01:26 Hobbes2: hm
2016-09-15 01:26 CrystilonZ: http://puu.sh/rbdhh/866078c9dc.jpg
2016-09-15 01:26 CrystilonZ: this rhythm
2016-09-15 01:26 Hobbes2: those are like the strongest 1/8 drums in the song
2016-09-15 01:26 CrystilonZ: might be better
2016-09-15 01:26 CrystilonZ: but like
2016-09-15 01:26 Hobbes2: so I think they deserve full circles
2016-09-15 01:26 CrystilonZ: 03:04:403 (1,2) - this
2016-09-15 01:26 CrystilonZ: and 
2016-09-15 01:26 CrystilonZ: these
2016-09-15 01:26 CrystilonZ: 03:02:310 (1,2,3,4) - 
2016-09-15 01:26 Hobbes2: I do see your point tho
2016-09-15 01:27 CrystilonZ: then can you change
2016-09-15 01:27 CrystilonZ: 03:02:310 (1,2,3,4) - into circles?
2016-09-15 01:27 CrystilonZ: they feel very unbalanced right now
2016-09-15 01:28 CrystilonZ: but if you're changing them into 1/4 circles, also consider changing 03:01:961 (3,4,5,6) - to 1/8 slider with reverses
2016-09-15 01:28 CrystilonZ: to give the drums their emphasis they should have
2016-09-15 01:28 Hobbes2: good point
2016-09-15 01:28 Hobbes2: ill do that
2016-09-15 01:29 CrystilonZ: hue that's all >,<
2016-09-15 01:29 CrystilonZ: this is probably the best i could get since I can't play it :/
2016-09-15 01:30 Hobbes2: aye, thanks for the mod :p
2016-09-15 01:30 CrystilonZ: oh wait
2016-09-15 01:30 CrystilonZ: 02:41:554 (2,3,4) - 
2016-09-15 01:30 CrystilonZ: rip
2016-09-15 01:30 CrystilonZ: stack
2016-09-15 01:30 CrystilonZ: don't do manual stack here lol just let the game do it
2016-09-15 01:32 Hobbes2: lmao that wasn't intentional
2016-09-15 01:32 Hobbes2: fixed
2016-09-15 01:32 CrystilonZ: and
2016-09-15 01:32 CrystilonZ: you probably want to see if blankets in Lilyanna's diffs are off or not
2016-09-15 01:33 CrystilonZ: i can detect some but you're far better than me lol
2016-09-15 01:33 Hobbes2: yeah ill probably irc her
2016-09-15 01:33 CrystilonZ: I'll just mod anything besides blankets XD
2016-09-15 01:34 Hobbes2: I used to mod pretty much only blankets, which isn't a good reputation to have lol
2016-09-15 01:34 Hobbes2: I think my general modding is better now at least :v
2016-09-15 01:34 CrystilonZ: lol XD
2016-09-15 01:34 CrystilonZ: best blanket detector

I will leave blankets, stacking, and polishing stuff to Hobbes2 lol. He's a lot better than me. I will just focus on the rhythm and patterns.

[Normal]

00:58:124 (3,4,5) - 01:48:356 (3,4,5) - I suggest you use this rhythm instead. This intensity & density rise is a bit too sudden and doesn't fit with how this diff is mapped.
03:03:705 (3,4,5) - On the other hand, for these, i suggest you use the rhythm below, because "Hobbes2: those are like the strongest 1/8 drums in the song." Thus, the density rise should provide a good emphasis on these.

[Collab Hard]

Drain Sections like 00:16:263 - should not appear in Hard. Just put a break there
00:53:938 (1,2,3,4) - rip sliders lol. Can you polish them?
00:10:508 (4,5,6,7,8) - i don't really agree with copy-pasting this pattern but oh well, this is up to you
00:39:984 (1,2,3) - This applies to all similar patterns. Can you polish them by making them look aesthetically equally apart?
I will just stop here orz. It's 2 am. Nothing much imo, this is pretty good

Good luck!

Jonarwhal

1,222 posts

Joined November 2013

Jonarwhal 2016-09-16T19:01:27+00:00

NM from queue~
[General]

Since you are using a custom skin, you must add the sliderborder color to your colors.
The ranking criteria says, "When skinning gameplay elements, complete sets of elements must be skinned. For instance, if you skin hitcircles, you must include a hitcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png, approachcircle.png, and a slider border color (this can be done by adding the line "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" (using RGB values) under the [Colours] section of each .osu file). The same logic applies to hitbursts, cursors, numbers, and anything else of this nature. If you didn't intend to skin an element in the set, then using the templateskin's version is okay. Setting a SkinPreference is also acceptable (e.g. forcing the default skin)."
Just add the line "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" in each .osu under the combocolors.
Delete the "@2x" files from the folder, they don't work with beatmaps.

[Beginner]

Timing>Resnap All Notes.
00:34:403 (1,1) - A measure of spinner recovery is required in Easy, so naturally there should be even more in beginner. Since the BPM is low, you could get away with just 2 measures, so end the spinner 00:35:798 - here.

[Easy]

00:26:031 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:37:194 (1,2,3) - fix symmetry
00:45:566 (1,2) - ^
01:37:194 (4) - / 01:41:380 (2) - stack these, and blanket it with 01:38:589 (1) - this
01:38:589 (1) - 405|241 for symmetry, and adjust ds 02:09:984 (5) - here

[Normal]

Timing>Resnap All Notes.
00:11:728 (4,1,2,3) - fix symmetry
00:21:845 (3,4,1,2,3) - ^
01:09:984 (4,5,1) - ^ if it is
02:06:496 (1,2,3) - ^
02:21:496 (2,4) - separate these a bit more, and then adjust ds using 02:23:240 (1,2,3,4) - all this

[Hard]

Timing>Resnap All Notes.
00:06:516 - Snap this timing line? Thanks.
01:21:147 (3,4,1) - Don't overlap this.
00:39:810 (8) - stack with the tail of 00:37:891 (3) - this?
01:26:728 (1,2,3) - plz map it the same as the other sections, (00:36:670 (1) -) since the pattern you use here makes it harder for no reason.
02:36:845 (1) - no NC for consistency

[Insane]

Timing>Resnap All Notes.
00:10:682 (5) - / 00:11:380 (1) - consider swapping NC or adding NC 00:10:682 (5) - here, if you want
00:16:263 - ^ etc., only if you want
00:17:484 - NC here plz
00:41:380 - ^
01:09:287 - ^
seems pretty clean

Good Luck with this~!!

Izzywing

osu! Alumni

2,248 posts

Joined March 2016

Izzywing 2016-09-16T19:05:22+00:00

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Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-16T23:43:19+00:00

CrystilonZ wrote:

IRC with Mr.Blanket Nominator

2016-09-15 00:54 CrystilonZ: oh here you are XD
2016-09-15 00:54 CrystilonZ: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1059527 Red Velvet - Ice Cream Cake [Hobbes2's Insane]]
2016-09-15 00:54 Hobbes2: hey
2016-09-15 00:55 CrystilonZ: >w<
2016-09-15 00:55 CrystilonZ: so
2016-09-15 00:55 CrystilonZ: do you want an irc mod?
2016-09-15 00:55 Hobbes2: o sure
2016-09-15 00:55 CrystilonZ: first thing first
2016-09-15 00:55 CrystilonZ: most importantly
2016-09-15 00:56 CrystilonZ: change your diff name X_X
2016-09-15 00:56 CrystilonZ: i want to eat a cheesecake
2016-09-15 00:56 CrystilonZ: please
2016-09-15 00:56 CrystilonZ: okno
2016-09-15 00:56 Hobbes2: :o
2016-09-15 00:56 Hobbes2: lol
2016-09-15 00:56 Hobbes2: lily might do fancy diff names idk
2016-09-15 00:56 CrystilonZ: ok real mod this time lol
2016-09-15 00:56 Hobbes2: ctrl+a remap
2016-09-15 00:57 CrystilonZ: that thing is so cliched :/
2016-09-15 00:57 Hobbes2: often true :(
2016-09-15 00:57 CrystilonZ: lolXD
2016-09-15 00:57 CrystilonZ: 01:37:194 (1,2,3,4) - 
2016-09-15 00:57 CrystilonZ: this somehow feels undermapped
2016-09-15 00:58 CrystilonZ: you went as far as overmapping 00:47:659 (4,5,6,7) - by extending the sliders
2016-09-15 00:58 CrystilonZ: and
2016-09-15 00:58 Hobbes2: you think using 1/4 sliders for the woosh sounds is overmap?
2016-09-15 00:58 Hobbes2: i dont think so :v
2016-09-15 00:58 CrystilonZ: the last kiai isn't very undermapped either
2016-09-15 00:58 CrystilonZ: uhh
2016-09-15 00:59 CrystilonZ: ok overmap is not a good word
2016-09-15 00:59 CrystilonZ: like
2016-09-15 00:59 CrystilonZ: it's
2016-09-15 00:59 CrystilonZ: far more intense than
2016-09-15 00:59 CrystilonZ: 01:37:194 (1,2,3,4) - despite having same sounds and ofc intensity
2016-09-15 01:00 CrystilonZ: you don't need to map all the sounds tho
2016-09-15 01:00 CrystilonZ: just add some
2016-09-15 01:00 Hobbes2: oh good point
2016-09-15 01:00 CrystilonZ: so that it doesn't feel empty
2016-09-15 01:00 Hobbes2: ill fix that then
2016-09-15 01:02 CrystilonZ: 00:42:775 (1,2,3,4,5) - consider reducing the density here
2016-09-15 01:02 CrystilonZ: it is not overmapped
2016-09-15 01:02 CrystilonZ: but it being right beside 00:42:077 (1,2,3,4) - on the timeline kinda make
2016-09-15 01:02 CrystilonZ: the wooshy sounds you tried to emphasize lose their importance
2016-09-15 01:03 CrystilonZ: somehow
2016-09-15 01:03 Hobbes2: good point, fixed
2016-09-15 01:03 Hobbes2: or well, fixing
2016-09-15 01:04 CrystilonZ: this is just me being curious owo
2016-09-15 01:04 CrystilonZ: 00:58:821 (1,2,3,4,1) - what are these extended sliders following?
2016-09-15 01:05 Hobbes2: woosh
2016-09-15 01:05 Hobbes2: sounds
2016-09-15 01:06 CrystilonZ: I don't
2016-09-15 01:06 CrystilonZ: hear any woosh sounds OwO
2016-09-15 01:07 CrystilonZ: can you listen to them properly again?
2016-09-15 01:07 Hobbes2: I hear em :o
2016-09-15 01:07 Hobbes2: they're definitely there
2016-09-15 01:07 CrystilonZ: ok i hear them now
2016-09-15 01:07 CrystilonZ: rip my ears
2016-09-15 01:08 CrystilonZ: 01:13:124 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - this shift of attention is kinda weird actually
2016-09-15 01:08 CrystilonZ: but it follows the vocals properly
2016-09-15 01:08 CrystilonZ: i just want you to reconsider
2016-09-15 01:09 Hobbes2: what exactly about it tho
2016-09-15 01:09 CrystilonZ: it's kinda like
2016-09-15 01:09 Hobbes2: like i shift to map the electronic sounds there
2016-09-15 01:09 CrystilonZ: uh no
2016-09-15 01:09 CrystilonZ: i mean
2016-09-15 01:09 CrystilonZ: the slider that is following the vocall
2016-09-15 01:09 CrystilonZ: rip timestamp & highlight
2016-09-15 01:09 Hobbes2: o rip
2016-09-15 01:09 CrystilonZ: 01:18:705 (8,9,10,11,1) - something like this might be better to play
2016-09-15 01:10 CrystilonZ: but you need to leave the vocal there
2016-09-15 01:10 Hobbes2: oooh
2016-09-15 01:10 Hobbes2: goo dpiont
2016-09-15 01:10 Hobbes2: ill try to come up with something
2016-09-15 01:10 CrystilonZ: or maybe
2016-09-15 01:10 CrystilonZ: use a red slider anchor
2016-09-15 01:11 CrystilonZ: to represent the vocal maybe OwO
2016-09-15 01:11 CrystilonZ: just put a sharp turn
2016-09-15 01:11 CrystilonZ: on that vocal start 
2016-09-15 01:12 Hobbes2: i have an idea ill try out
2016-09-15 01:12 Hobbes2: probably terrible ill screenshot
2016-09-15 01:12 CrystilonZ: I'm horrible at making slider arts lol
2016-09-15 01:13 Hobbes2: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6093579 this rhythm catches the vocal while still focusing on the electronic sounds properly
2016-09-15 01:13 Hobbes2: so its not a weird shift
2016-09-15 01:13 Hobbes2: i think
2016-09-15 01:13 CrystilonZ: oh that's nice OwO
2016-09-15 01:13 CrystilonZ: okay moving on
2016-09-15 01:14 CrystilonZ: 01:21:670 (4) - consider extending this circle into a 1/8 slider
2016-09-15 01:14 CrystilonZ: unlike 01:21:147 (1,2,3) - there's a sound at 01:21:758 -
2016-09-15 01:14 Hobbes2: good point done
2016-09-15 01:15 CrystilonZ: 01:30:217 (1) - not my opinion but
2016-09-15 01:15 CrystilonZ: it touches
2016-09-15 01:15 CrystilonZ: the accuracy bar below
2016-09-15 01:15 CrystilonZ: and people consider this bad :/
2016-09-15 01:15 Hobbes2: o
2016-09-15 01:16 Hobbes2: yea ill move
2016-09-15 01:16 CrystilonZ: same with stacked notes afterwards lol
2016-09-15 01:16 CrystilonZ: also
2016-09-15 01:16 CrystilonZ: some BNs
2016-09-15 01:16 CrystilonZ: will scream "CONSISTENCY" in their mods
2016-09-15 01:17 CrystilonZ: i'm fine with this variations
2016-09-15 01:17 CrystilonZ: but some might find this otherwise
2016-09-15 01:17 CrystilonZ: just saying
2016-09-15 01:18 Hobbes2: yeah im not a fan of nazi consistency
2016-09-15 01:18 Hobbes2: just feels too restrictive
2016-09-15 01:18 Hobbes2: i do try to be consistent at a minimal level tho
2016-09-15 01:19 CrystilonZ: I'm not too :v
2016-09-15 01:19 Hobbes2: so i wont just throw out random rhythm
2016-09-15 01:19 CrystilonZ: but it needs to be said
2016-09-15 01:19 Hobbes2: but i wont be like "exact sound exact same pattern pls!!'
2016-09-15 01:19 CrystilonZ: just leave it there lol
2016-09-15 01:19 Hobbes2: yeah
2016-09-15 01:19 Hobbes2: ill be able to defend myself
2016-09-15 01:19 CrystilonZ: probably
2016-09-15 01:20 CrystilonZ: anyway moving on!
2016-09-15 01:20 Hobbes2: oki
2016-09-15 01:20 CrystilonZ: 02:25:333 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I find this weird somehow
2016-09-15 01:21 CrystilonZ: The whoosh sounds are stronger, yet you leave it as 1/4
2016-09-15 01:21 CrystilonZ: but the... hi-hat?
2016-09-15 01:21 CrystilonZ: whatever
2016-09-15 01:21 CrystilonZ: is weaker and there's a hell 5 notes stream there
2016-09-15 01:22 CrystilonZ: the whooshy sounds feel a bit under-represented right now
2016-09-15 01:22 CrystilonZ: that is a word right? lol
2016-09-15 01:22 Hobbes2: yeah good point lol
2016-09-15 01:22 Hobbes2: ill remap that part
2016-09-15 01:23 Hobbes2: yea
2016-09-15 01:23 Hobbes2: I see what you mean
2016-09-15 01:23 CrystilonZ: 02:48:182 (4) - extend this thing lol
2016-09-15 01:23 CrystilonZ: same reason as
2016-09-15 01:23 CrystilonZ: uh something before
2016-09-15 01:23 Hobbes2: done
2016-09-15 01:23 CrystilonZ: let me find it one sec
2016-09-15 01:23 Hobbes2: ye dw
2016-09-15 01:23 Hobbes2: i got it
2016-09-15 01:23 CrystilonZ: 01:21:670 (4) - 
2016-09-15 01:23 CrystilonZ: thart
2016-09-15 01:23 CrystilonZ: oki
2016-09-15 01:24 CrystilonZ: 00:48:182 (7) - did i mention this one?
2016-09-15 01:25 Hobbes2: fixed
2016-09-15 01:25 CrystilonZ: 03:03:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
2016-09-15 01:25 CrystilonZ: since you're also mapping the vocals
2016-09-15 01:26 Hobbes2: hm
2016-09-15 01:26 CrystilonZ: http://puu.sh/rbdhh/866078c9dc.jpg
2016-09-15 01:26 CrystilonZ: this rhythm
2016-09-15 01:26 Hobbes2: those are like the strongest 1/8 drums in the song
2016-09-15 01:26 CrystilonZ: might be better
2016-09-15 01:26 CrystilonZ: but like
2016-09-15 01:26 Hobbes2: so I think they deserve full circles
2016-09-15 01:26 CrystilonZ: 03:04:403 (1,2) - this
2016-09-15 01:26 CrystilonZ: and 
2016-09-15 01:26 CrystilonZ: these
2016-09-15 01:26 CrystilonZ: 03:02:310 (1,2,3,4) - 
2016-09-15 01:26 Hobbes2: I do see your point tho
2016-09-15 01:27 CrystilonZ: then can you change
2016-09-15 01:27 CrystilonZ: 03:02:310 (1,2,3,4) - into circles?
2016-09-15 01:27 CrystilonZ: they feel very unbalanced right now
2016-09-15 01:28 CrystilonZ: but if you're changing them into 1/4 circles, also consider changing 03:01:961 (3,4,5,6) - to 1/8 slider with reverses
2016-09-15 01:28 CrystilonZ: to give the drums their emphasis they should have
2016-09-15 01:28 Hobbes2: good point
2016-09-15 01:28 Hobbes2: ill do that
2016-09-15 01:29 CrystilonZ: hue that's all >,<
2016-09-15 01:29 CrystilonZ: this is probably the best i could get since I can't play it :/
2016-09-15 01:30 Hobbes2: aye, thanks for the mod :p
2016-09-15 01:30 CrystilonZ: oh wait
2016-09-15 01:30 CrystilonZ: 02:41:554 (2,3,4) - 
2016-09-15 01:30 CrystilonZ: rip
2016-09-15 01:30 CrystilonZ: stack
2016-09-15 01:30 CrystilonZ: don't do manual stack here lol just let the game do it
2016-09-15 01:32 Hobbes2: lmao that wasn't intentional
2016-09-15 01:32 Hobbes2: fixed
2016-09-15 01:32 CrystilonZ: and
2016-09-15 01:32 CrystilonZ: you probably want to see if blankets in Lilyanna's diffs are off or not
2016-09-15 01:33 CrystilonZ: i can detect some but you're far better than me lol
2016-09-15 01:33 Hobbes2: yeah ill probably irc her
2016-09-15 01:33 CrystilonZ: I'll just mod anything besides blankets XD
2016-09-15 01:34 Hobbes2: I used to mod pretty much only blankets, which isn't a good reputation to have lol
2016-09-15 01:34 Hobbes2: I think my general modding is better now at least :v
2016-09-15 01:34 CrystilonZ: lol XD
2016-09-15 01:34 CrystilonZ: best blanket detector

I will leave blankets, stacking, and polishing stuff to Hobbes2 lol. He's a lot better than me. I will just focus on the rhythm and patterns.

[Normal]

00:58:124 (3,4,5) - 01:48:356 (3,4,5) - I suggest you use this rhythm instead. This intensity & density rise is a bit too sudden and doesn't fit with how this diff is mapped. okay fixed
03:03:705 (3,4,5) - On the other hand, for these, i suggest you use the rhythm below, because "Hobbes2: those are like the strongest 1/8 drums in the song." Thus, the density rise should provide a good emphasis on these. idk i still think u were right about doesnt fit with how the diff is mapped but i will see

[Collab Hard]

Drain Sections like 00:16:263 - should not appear in Hard. Just put a break there fixed
00:53:938 (1,2,3,4) - rip sliders lol. Can you polish them? i think i did
00:10:508 (4,5,6,7,8) - i don't really agree with copy-pasting this pattern but oh well, this is up to you remapped
00:39:984 (1,2,3) - This applies to all similar patterns. Can you polish them by making them look aesthetically equally apart? polished all my section ;w; im lazy !
I will just stop here orz. It's 2 am. Nothing much imo, this is pretty good

Good luck!

thank you for mod meow<3

[quote="Jonawaga"]NM from queue~
[General]

Since you are using a custom skin, you must add the sliderborder color to your colors.
The ranking criteria says, "When skinning gameplay elements, complete sets of elements must be skinned. For instance, if you skin hitcircles, you must include a hitcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png, approachcircle.png, and a slider border color (this can be done by adding the line "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" (using RGB values) under the [Colours] section of each .osu file). The same logic applies to hitbursts, cursors, numbers, and anything else of this nature. If you didn't intend to skin an element in the set, then using the templateskin's version is okay. Setting a SkinPreference is also acceptable (e.g. forcing the default skin)."
Just add the line "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" in each .osu under the combocolors.
Delete the "@2x" files from the folder, they don't work with beatmaps.

i have no idea what im reading lol ill ask about this xd
[Beginner]

Timing>Resnap All Notes. everything seem snapped >/<
00:34:403 (1,1) - A measure of spinner recovery is required in Easy, so naturally there should be even more in beginner. Since the BPM is low, you could get away with just 2 measures, so end the spinner 00:35:798 - here. oups fixed

[Easy]

00:26:031 (1,2) - fix blanket fixed
00:37:194 (1,2,3) - fix symmetry it wasnt meant to be symmetry they are 3 different objects
00:45:566 (1,2) - ^ seem fine
01:37:194 (4) - / 01:41:380 (2) - stack these, and blanket it with 01:38:589 (1) - this oh done
01:38:589 (1) - 405|241 for symmetry, didnt look goodand adjust ds 02:09:984 (5) - here fixed

[Normal]

Timing>Resnap All Notes.
00:11:728 (4,1,2,3) - fix symmetry symmetry fine just little ds difference
00:21:845 (3,4,1,2,3) - ^ fixed
01:09:984 (4,5,1) - ^ if it is its not omg im bad haha
02:06:496 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed more
02:21:496 (2,4) - separate these a bit more, and then adjust ds using 02:23:240 (1,2,3,4) - all this fixed

[Hard]

Timing>Resnap All Notes.
00:06:516 - Snap this timing line? Thanks.fixed
01:21:147 (3,4,1) - Don't overlap this.
00:39:810 (8) - stack with the tail of 00:37:891 (3) - this? done idk how u notice these lol
01:26:728 (1,2,3) - plz map it the same as the other sections, (00:36:670 (1) -) since the pattern you use here makes it harder for no reason.
02:36:845 (1) - no NC for consistency oups fixed

thx alot for mod x)

Kanye

159 posts

Joined November 2013

Kanye 2016-09-17T12:39:54+00:00

~~Hey, I know you said you mod first but I decided to be proactive. Even if you don't mod my map it's okay~~
Turns out in the time I've taken to do this you already modded mine

I'm not super experienced with modding and this set seems really good so don't be too upset if I don't write much, I'll try my best.

[General]

Even though it's not a big issue, the combo colours are a bit light, and in some parts it's hard to notice some circles. Obviously it's not a major problem but just thought I'd point it out.
There was something else I was gonna mention but in my old age I forgot

[Beginner]
00:17:659 (1) - It's not a good idea to place notes out of the grid in a beginner difficulty. Try moving this over slightly.
00:20:449 (2,1) - Try curve the end more and placing (1) at the end, it's hard to explain but this is what I mean http://puu.sh/re9Kj.jpg I just feel this has a better flow.
00:25:333 (2,3) - You'll have to change the angle for these as a result too.
00:46:961 (3) - Again, it's not a good idea to place notes off the grid in low difficulty maps.
00:56:728 (2) - Try moving this to blanket the (1) slider that was before it, this looks a bit nicer and isn't in an awkward spot. Something like this http://puu.sh/re9Uv.jpg
02:16:263 (2,3,1) - Try making these more linear relative to the (1) slider. Like this http://puu.sh/re9ZO.jpg
02:17:659 (1) - Remove NC
02:32:194 (2,4) - These sliders are placed where there is no beat, or just slightly out of time. Something like this http://puu.sh/rea8L.jpg fits better but it still sounds awkward ><
02:53:938 (1) - Maybe use this rhythm for the part that I noted ^ it fits really well.
02:51:147 (2) - Maybe move this to here http://puu.sh/readH.jpg

[Easy]
00:26:031 (1,2) - I don't think this overlap is good for an easy.
00:44:170 (3) - Placing notes off the grid in easy is probably not a good idea.
01:10:682 (1,3,1) - Place these notes slightly higher, to possibly y:288.

I struggled to find much wrong with this

[Normal]
01:38:589 (1,2) - Curve these towards each other, like this http://puu.sh/ree0i.jpg
01:41:380 (1,2) - Same here
01:44:170 (1,2) - ^
01:46:961 (1,2) - Try make these fit together, like this http://puu.sh/ree4i.jpg or something similar
02:17:659 (1) - Nice
02:21:496 (2,4) - Stack on (4) on (2) maybe?

Another good diff

[Hard Collab]
00:56:729 (1,2,3,4) - make these parallel?
00:58:124 (1,2) - ^?
01:06:670 (1) - Slider doesn't fit this. Generally sliders off of white ticks never work unless in some situations, I think this fits better http://puu.sh/reejc.jpg
01:12:426 (2) - ^
01:15:042 (1) - Same thing, kinda pops up over again. These things are generally hard to play. A good rule of thumb is to only use sliders on white ticks unless it can be justified, especially on blue ticks it's probably never a good idea.
01:24:635 (1,1) - This might be too close to react?
01:26:728 (1,2) - Starting with a slider instead of two singles might be better, especially after a spinner.

Another great diff

[Hobbes2's Insane]
00:45:391 (4,5,1,2,3) - I think you should spread this burst out evenly, or maybe replace the first two notes with a slider instead. But this type of burstcan be really confusing to read and play. Possibly you could also shorten 00:44:868 (3) - to the blue tick and begin a burst off the end of that to continue into the 5 note burst.
00:46:438 (7) - This slider does not fit. Replace it with two circles like so http://puu.sh/reeFa.jpg. I explained my reasoning in the previous difficulty. It also just feels better to play.
00:48:356 (1,2,3,4) - Make these all parallel? Or just make every second slider parallel to each other. I.e. (1)+(3) & (2)+(4).
01:32:310 (1,2,3,4) - Make these parallel?
02:17:659 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Oh boy
02:46:961 (9) - NC
02:47:659 (1) - Remove NC

I really like this diff overall. Very similar to how I want to map, and I love your use of kick sliders. I'll be looking to see this ranked someday

I hope I helped in some way, as I said I'm not good at finding things wrong, and it's late so I'm kinda tired, so I hope I didn't sound too rude, it really wasn't intentional. Anyway good luck with getting this ranked, it seems like a really solid set and I'm extremely surprised you haven't had a ranked map yet Any questions feel free to message me in game or through the site

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

missa1912 2016-09-17T15:45:17+00:00

Jonawaga wrote:
NM from queue~
[Hard]
Timing>Resnap All Notes.
00:06:516 - Snap this timing line? Thanks.
01:21:147 (3,4,1) - Don't overlap this. - fixed
00:39:810 (8) - stack with the tail of 00:37:891 (3) - this?
01:26:728 (1,2,3) - plz map it the same as the other sections, (00:36:670 (1) -) since the pattern you use here makes it harder for no reason. - changed~
02:36:845 (1) - no NC for consistency
Good Luck with this~!!

Thanks for the mod! :3

Kanye wrote:
[Hard Collab]
00:56:729 (1,2,3,4) - make these parallel?
00:58:124 (1,2) - ^?
01:06:670 (1) - Slider doesn't fit this. Generally sliders off of white ticks never work unless in some situations, I think this fits better http://puu.sh/reejc.jpg - fix
01:12:426 (2) - ^ - ^
01:15:042 (1) - Same thing, kinda pops up over again. These things are generally hard to play. A good rule of thumb is to only use sliders on white ticks unless it can be justified, especially on blue ticks it's probably never a good idea. - yeah, fixed
01:24:635 (1,1) - This might be too close to react?
01:26:728 (1,2) - Starting with a slider instead of two singles might be better, especially after a spinner.
Another great diff

Thankd for modding!~

updatee

osu file format v14

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Ryuusei Aika

Elite Mapper

1,086 posts

Joined January 2016

Ryuusei Aika 2016-09-18T09:48:24+00:00

Hi from m4m~
quite interesting song and nice skin xd

Beginner

why 1/6 lol
01:02:310 (1,2) - i think this blanket isnt quite well, u can move 1 to 129|72 then adjust the shape of 2 to fix it
01:07:891 (1) - seems there is a ds inconsistence problem, try to fix it and btw fix the blanket here
01:07:891 (1) - remove nc
01:10:682 (2) - add nc
01:13:473 (1) - remove nc
01:16:263 (3) - add nc
02:16:263 (2,3,1) - why not make a regular triangle here?

Easy

00:14:868 (1) - remove nc
00:17:659 (2) - add nc
00:20:449 (1) - remove nc
00:23:240 (4) - add nc
00:26:031 (1) - remove nc
00:48:356 (3,1,2) - remove nc at 1 and add nc to 3 and 2(as the arrangement in those same kiai parts after)
03:05:101 (6) - remove nc etc...... try to set nc regularly in easy diff i will not mention it again cuz it seems a little bit too many this problems
00:39:984 (3) - reverse here doesnt fix the song quite well..... imo u can just arrange 2 1/1 sliders here just like 00:45:566 (1,2) -
02:59:519 (1,2) - blanket?

Normal

seems u have used so many pattern like 00:45:566 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:48:356 (1,2,3,4) - , try to give more variety to ur map by using different rhythm or just adjust the shape of sliders
00:14:868 - 00:17:659 - its so weird to not map this part as some of ur other diffs do so, imo those beats are not ignorable
01:27:426 (1,2,3,4) - why not make them symmetry?
01:35:798 (1,2,3,4) - although the ds is ~1.20 but the space between each 2 sliders seems quite different visually
02:28:821 (1,2,3,4) - this shape looks a bit weird, u can use just 1 point to make a smooth wavy slider or just keep them straight

Collab Hard

again why 1/8....
00:14:868 - 0:17:659 - the same question with normal
00:26:728 (1) - remove nc
02:00:740 (1) - ^
02:54:984 (3) - stack with 02:53:763 (8) - ?
02:56:380 (7) - stack its middle to ^ ?

Hobbes2's Insane

00:45:391 (4,5,1,2,3) - i think this kind of stack is not good with 5 notes stream since they seems crowd together. just seperate them would look better imo
00:57:775 (5,6,1,2,3) - ^
01:02:659 (2) - make this parallel with 01:02:310 (1) - would get a better flow
01:12:775 (6) - add nc
01:18:705 (8) - ^
02:03:356 (6) - ^
02:48:182 (4) - why u dont use a 1/8 here to make a pattern?

thats all! gl for rank~

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-18T16:11:33+00:00

Kanye wrote:
~~Hey, I know you said you mod first but I decided to be proactive. Even if you don't mod my map it's okay~~
Turns out in the time I've taken to do this you already modded mine
I'm not super experienced with modding and this set seems really good so don't be too upset if I don't write much, I'll try my best.

[General]
Even though it's not a big issue, the combo colours are a bit light, and in some parts it's hard to notice some circles. Obviously it's not a major problem but just thought I'd point it out. i think its because the skin with the bg ;w;
There was something else I was gonna mention but in my old age I forgot o.o xD

[Beginner]
00:17:659 (1) - It's not a good idea to place notes out of the grid in a beginner difficulty. Try moving this over slightly. fixed
00:20:449 (2,1) - Try curve the end more and placing (1) at the end, it's hard to explain but this is what I mean http://puu.sh/re9Kj.jpg I just feel this has a better flow. i think its fine
00:25:333 (2,3) - You'll have to change the angle for these as a result too.
00:46:961 (3) - Again, it's not a good idea to place notes off the grid in low difficulty maps.im just trying to use the whole area lol but fixed little
00:56:728 (2) - Try moving this to blanket the (1) slider that was before it, this looks a bit nicer and isn't in an awkward spot. Something like this http://puu.sh/re9Uv.jpg ok fixed
02:16:263 (2,3,1) - Try making these more linear relative to the (1) slider. Like this http://puu.sh/re9ZO.jpg done
02:17:659 (1) - Remove NC that will break the nc consistency i nc on every downbeat
02:32:194 (2,4) - These sliders are placed where there is no beat, or just slightly out of time. Something like this http://puu.sh/rea8L.jpg fits better but it still sounds awkward >< i think its fine since its a beginner diff and i m alowed to skip some beats
02:53:938 (1) - Maybe use this rhythm for the part that I noted ^ it fits really well. i think they both work i just wanted to variate maybe ill fix it
02:51:147 (2) - Maybe move this to here http://puu.sh/readH.jpgbut it will overlap the slider body a little i want avoid that

[Easy]
00:26:031 (1,2) - I don't think this overlap is good for an easy. its clean and fine if someone else mention it all change
00:44:170 (3) - Placing notes off the grid in easy is probably not a good idea. not rly big problem fixed a little
01:10:682 (1,3,1) - Place these notes slightly higher, to possibly y:288. fixed

I struggled to find much wrong with this

[Normal]
01:38:589 (1,2) - Curve these towards each other, like this http://puu.sh/ree0i.jpg i inted to break the flow in slider one
01:41:380 (1,2) - Same here
01:44:170 (1,2) - ^ i like them better this way
01:46:961 (1,2) - Try make these fit together, like this http://puu.sh/ree4i.jpg or something similar fixed
02:17:659 (1) - Nice >///< thx
02:21:496 (2,4) - Stack on (4) on (2) maybe? ye better fixed

Another good diff

[Hard Collab]
00:56:729 (1,2,3,4) - make these parallel? idk what u mean but they seem fine
00:58:124 (1,2) - ^? fixed that part
01:06:670 (1) - Slider doesn't fit this. Generally sliders off of white ticks never work unless in some situations, I think this fits better http://puu.sh/reejc.jpg
01:12:426 (2) - ^
01:15:042 (1) - Same thing, kinda pops up over again. These things are generally hard to play. A good rule of thumb is to only use sliders on white ticks unless it can be justified, especially on blue ticks it's probably never a good idea.
01:24:635 (1,1) - This might be too close to react?
01:26:728 (1,2) - Starting with a slider instead of two singles might be better, especially after a spinner. missa fixed

Another great diff

I really like this diff overall. Very similar to how I want to map, and I love your use of kick sliders. I'll be looking to see this ranked someday

I hope I helped in some way, as I said I'm not good at finding things wrong, and it's late so I'm kinda tired, so I hope I didn't sound too rude, it really wasn't intentional. Anyway good luck with getting this ranked, it seems like a really solid set and I'm extremely surprised you haven't had a ranked map yet Any questions feel free to message me in game or through the site

thx alot for mod

Neanmoins wrote:
Hi from m4m~
quite interesting song and nice skin xd

Beginner

why 1/6 lol cant help when some beats are 1/6
01:02:310 (1,2) - i think this blanket isnt quite well, u can move 1 to 129|72 then adjust the shape of 2 to fix it i think i fixed
01:07:891 (1) - seems there is a ds inconsistence problem, try to fix it and btw fix the blanket herefixed
01:07:891 (1) - remove nc
01:10:682 (2) - add nc
01:13:473 (1) - remove nc
01:16:263 (3) - add nc i add nc on every 2 downbeats
02:16:263 (2,3,1) - why not make a regular triangle here?i made it almost linear
Easy
00:14:868 (1) - remove nc fixed
00:17:659 (2) - add nc ^
00:20:449 (1) - remove nc
00:23:240 (4) - add nc
00:26:031 (1) - remove nc fixed all nc
00:48:356 (3,1,2) - remove nc at 1 and add nc to 3 and 2(as the arrangement in those same kiai parts after) i think its fine here
03:05:101 (6) - remove nc etc...... try to set nc regularly in easy diff i will not mention it again cuz it seems a little bit too many this problems trying to stay consistent about it
00:39:984 (3) - reverse here doesnt fix the song quite well..... imo u can just arrange 2 1/1 sliders here just like 00:45:566 (1,2) - if someone else metion ill change
02:59:519 (1,2) - blanket? fixed
Normal

seems u have used so many pattern like 00:45:566 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:48:356 (1,2,3,4) - , try to give more variety to ur map by using different rhythm or just adjust the shape of sliders i personaly dont think its abig problem i did used a different shapes
00:14:868 - 00:17:659 - its so weird to not map this part as some of ur other diffs do so, imo those beats are not ignorable since its normal and easy its fine imo if someone mentioned more ill map
01:27:426 (1,2,3,4) - why not make them symmetry? fixed
01:35:798 (1,2,3,4) - although the ds is ~1.20 but the space between each 2 sliders seems quite different visually fixed
02:28:821 (1,2,3,4) - this shape looks a bit weird, u can use just 1 point to make a smooth wavy slider or just keep them straight i think they r fine for now
Collab Hard
again why 1/8....
00:14:868 - 0:17:659 - the same question with normal
00:26:728 (1) - remove nc
02:00:740 (1) - ^ fixed
02:54:984 (3) - stack with 02:53:763 (8) - ?
02:56:380 (7) - stack its middle to ^ ?
thats all! gl for rank~

thank you for mod x) Updated!

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-18T16:24:36+00:00

idk why the korean letters/names in the tags is not korean anymore.

Izzywing

osu! Alumni

2,248 posts

Joined March 2016

Izzywing 2016-09-19T08:36:09+00:00

00:57:775 (5,6,1,2,3) - awkward stream for an insane (not the only one in this style but yeah they're fine just a little hard to read for an insane level player)

But it follows the music so well ;-; keeping for now ~

00:16:961 (1,2,3) - you decided to follow the 'LaLaLa' sound here, but you stop halfway 00:17:484 (4) - better you map till the end of the 'Lalala" sound Im not actually following the la here im following the drums
00:28:821 - pretty strong beat the be ignored Fixed
00:45:391 (4,5) - pretty big spacing you put here, consider nerfing them i think you linked the wrong thing lol
00:58:037 (6,1) - for readability, better dont stack them I think its readable, testplayers were fine with this
01:18:356 (7) - NC fixed all ncs xd
01:36:670 (4,5,6) - inconsistent jump Fixed
01:39:112 (2,3) - not sure why you break the flow here flow breaks but its fine cos its emphasis and stuff
01:54:723 - spinner start here yeah thats where the sound starts but this spinner is short as it is might as well make i tas long as possible
02:03:356 (6,7,1,2) - you made a 1/8 spacing here, pretty sure they should be 1/4 spacing, also notice that this spacing broke the gameplay nah its fine its on purpose
02:41:554 (2,3,4) - at least make them tidier, for readability, would prefer stack fixed lol[/b

ty!!

next mod is all NCs but I fixed em

00:45:391 (4,5,1,2,3) - I think you should spread this burst out evenly, or maybe replace the first two notes with a slider instead. But this type of burstcan be really confusing to read and play. Possibly you could also shorten 00:44:868 (3) - to the blue tick and begin a burst off the end of that to continue into the 5 note burst. [b]i guess it COULD be confusing but this is an insane after all, I do expect that the player could read this, also they happen throughout the diff so they're not like random or anything, and they all fit to the music
00:46:438 (7) - This slider does not fit. Replace it with two circles like so http://puu.sh/reeFa.jpg . I explained my reasoning in the previous difficulty. It also just feels better to play. fixed, just stacked em
00:48:356 (1,2,3,4) - Make these all parallel? Or just make every second slider parallel to each other. I.e. (1)+(3) & (2)+(4). nah they're rotated like 5 degrees or something each
01:32:310 (1,2,3,4) - Make these parallel? some rotation mathematics i forgot the specific numbers
02:17:659 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Oh boy hehehe
02:46:961 (9) - NC
02:47:659 (1) - Remove NC

01:02:659 (2) - make this parallel with 01:02:310 (1) - would get a better flow not really

^rest of this mod is stuff i rejected already or combos

Regarding the stacked 5plet thingies: I don't these are so hard to read that they don't belong in this difficulty; I think an insane player is capable of reading them, and each one fits the song well. I don't really want to change them because I like them a lot, but I guess if it's like super controversial down the line or whatever I'll probably change them. Just not yet

Thanks for the mods guys!

ua

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Firetruck

1,011 posts

Joined July 2015

Firetruck 2016-09-19T10:01:21+00:00

hype

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-19T10:23:56+00:00

Jonawaga wrote:
NM from queue~
[General]
Since you are using a custom skin, you must add the sliderborder color to your colors.
The ranking criteria says, "When skinning gameplay elements, complete sets of elements must be skinned. For instance, if you skin hitcircles, you must include a hitcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png, approachcircle.png, and a slider border color (this can be done by adding the line "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" (using RGB values) under the [Colours] section of each .osu file). The same logic applies to hitbursts, cursors, numbers, and anything else of this nature. If you didn't intend to skin an element in the set, then using the templateskin's version is okay. Setting a SkinPreference is also acceptable (e.g. forcing the default skin)."
Just add the line "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" in each .osu under the combocolors.
Delete the "@2x" files from the folder, they don't work with beatmaps.
fixed these deleted the @2x files and adde "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" to each .osu file

Good Luck with this~!!

updated beatmap with also hobbes's insane update.

Firetruck wrote:
hype

hype :s !!

Chocobo

104 posts

Joined June 2013

Chocobo 2016-09-23T02:45:50+00:00

Hi there~, come from my queue;
Insane diff had been modded;
I have to say it is a cute song but a tough map, blankets and flows are very good, but too many consecutive hits make the map hard to read, especially some of them do not fit the music well;
But since I'm not a expert on rhythm, more modding may be needed. I just give some advises on placements and a few hit-sounds;

Hobbes2's Insane

1. Tags conflict with neonat's Hyper diff.
2. 00:08:414 (2,3) - I suggest to use a slider to replace this two notes;
3. 00:12:426 (2,3,4) - Insane diff does not have a strict requirement of equal spacing, but since here is not kiai time, try to move note3 a little;
4. 00:17:484 (1) - a hit-sound applied to slider1 will emphasize the music;
5. 00:24:810 (2,4) - Try to make these two be symmetrical like this:

, position of note3 is also slightly adjusted;(dont forget blanket(00:24:461 (6,7,1,4) - ) of course)
6. 00:28:037 (3) - This note is hard to read, I suggest you to delete it;
7. 00:35:101 (2,3,1,2) - To make a shape like this:

7. 00:46:263 - 00:46:438 - 00:46:438 - It seems that two consecutive notes and a slider will fit the music better, like this:

8. 00:51:147 (1,2,3) - Try to make the placement of these three more beautiful, currently not a very good triangle;
9. 00:58:473 (4,5,6) - Slightly adjust the spacing;
10. 00:59:519 (1) - A finish hit-sound may be added;
11. 01:07:542 (5) - A hit-sound added will be better;
12. 01:15:914 (3,1) - Partly overlapping of sliders like this is very dangerous, maybe adjust a tad;
13. 01:27:426 (1,2) - Same as above;
PS：similar placements like this: 02:20:449 (1,2) - 02:26:380 (5,6) - 02:42:775 (1,2) - 02:45:914 (5,6) -
14. 01:32:659 (3) - Crooked~
15. 02:51:845 (4) - Change the position to (492, 240) to make a diamond;
16. 03:02:310 (7) - NC;
17. 03:02:659 (1) - Not a NC;
18. 03:02:310 (7,8,1,2) - Change the placement to make them a diamond;
19. 03:05:101 (1) - Finish hit-sound;

PS: GREAT SKIN INDEED;
Good luck~

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2016-09-24T11:36:37+00:00

On CBH's diff, is it really supposed to be a break in 00:48:356 - till 00:59:519 - ? It looks like a mistake

Or it's WIP? Oh yeah, didn't read that

Lumario

245 posts

Joined March 2016

Lumario 2016-09-27T19:20:24+00:00

Hobbes2's Insane:
00:06:321 (1) - Minor question, why is this circle its own combo

?
01:30:566 (2,3,4,5) - This part feels a bit odd to play because the single circles are pretty far down under (pun intended :3) [maybe try to move them up a bit]

neonat's Insane:
01:21:845 (1) - I think you forgot a pause there
02:06:321 (6) - This circle is a bit hard to see
03:09:984 (7) - Not sure if the ending is timed correct (if it is timed with the vocals)

Collab Hard:
03:09:984 (5) - Again not sure if the ending is timed correct

Sry that my mod took so long

I liked the map and maybe I add more mods for the other difficulties; meanwhile have 2 stars (one because it took me a while to start to mod this map and the other one because I liked the map :3)
Luma

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2016-10-01T00:46:28+00:00

Insane

00:19:577 (2,3) - since you've been emphasizing a lot of the vocals it feels weird that 2 has much smaller spacing than 3. It feels like it should be the other way round as switching from emphasizing vocals to instruments too often can feel a bit weird sometimes. Like at 00:26:728 (4,5) you've used more spacing for the vocal note than the drum snare
00:28:821 (1) - it would look structured a lot better to space this out a bit instead of having it close to the slider as all the previous sliders aren't
00:28:647 (7) - also space this slider out a bit more, it's closer to 6 than 6 is to 5 and 5 is to 4
00:30:042 (3) - how about this rhythm? flows better imo http://puu.sh/rtsr2/4823358719.jpg
00:32:833 (3) - ^
00:35:798 (1,2) - recommend to replace these with a 1/1 slider. It would break up the monotony of the amount of circles + 1/2 sliders also because you've followed the vocals before yet 00:35:624 (3,1) are circles and you completely neglect the vocals at 00:35:798 (1) which is a bit of an issue imo.
00:38:240 (4) - Really recommend to change these 2 into circles. ok so you've chosen to map the vocals, good choice, but it doesn't follow it properly. 00:37:194 (1,2,3) map the the vocals on the white ticks which is good but there are clearly 2 distinct vocals at 00:38:240 and 00:38:414 . I also recommend you to delete 00:38:502 (5) as this forced rhythm and I imagine you only put this here because of the slider before.
TL;DR - I think you should use this rhythm http://puu.sh/rtsTr/69adf87918.jpg
00:39:723 (4) - deleting this would be good. so that the triplet 00:39:810 (5,6,1) can have it's own emphasis. I'm also not sure if I can hear a sound at 00:39:723 .
00:43:821 (7) - 2 circles like I stated earlier
00:58:037 (6) - delete this. It's sort of hard to read rhythmically and it takes a lot of emphasis away from the triplet at 00:58:124 (1,2,3) that maps the vocals which is very important imo.
01:12:077 (1) - you mapped this weird sound with a stream here but didn't do it at 01:14:694 . How come?
01:31:089 (4) - I don't feel like this vocal is strong enough to justify this much spacing
01:37:891 (3) - 2 circles would be better imo, the vocals this is mapping is a lot different than the 2 sliders earlier so it makes sense to map it differently
01:49:054 (7,8) - I feel like if you're gonna map the first chorus with 1/8 sliders you might as well do it here too
01:54:548 (1) - move to the white tick because reasons related to reaction time
some of the stuff I said for the first chorus can be applied to the last, that's if you choose to apply them of course
03:02:048 (4) - playing this does feel like a ghost note and it also takes a lot of emphasis from the triplet at 03:02:135 (5,6,7) which is not what you want imo
03:03:008 (1,2,3,4) - you can use higher spacings for stacked 1/2 notes in jump patterns. It feels more natural and the jump is a lot easier to play when it's a 1/2 stack too. Also it adds to structure

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ok so I just wanted to mod the Insane for now, might mod some others later. ciao ~

[ D Myung ]

142 posts

Joined April 2014

[ D Myung ] 2016-10-01T23:25:57+00:00

Yohoo! o/ M4M From My Modding Queue

Collab Hard

00:09:112 Instead this single note it's better to change it to a slider which ends at 00:09:461
00:09:984 End this slider at 00:10:159 and repeat it once
00:11:205 (6) Same as 00:09:112 and end it at 00:11:554
00:11:903 (7) Remove this note and move 00:12:077 to that place
00:12:426 Add a new note
00:17:484 (1) Remove this note and move 00:17:659 to that place
00:18:356 End this slider at 00:18:531 and repeat it once
00:19:228 Why you ignore this beat? I don't know if you are doing it on purpose or not bc I have been seeing a lot of this type
00:20:449 I don't hear sound here. Could be better move this slider to 00:20:275 imo
00:21:321 Same as 00:19:228
00:22:019 ^
00:22:368 Instead this note change it to a slider ending it at 00:22:717
00:23:066 the slider (00:23:240) starts here
00:23:589 Add new note

I'm so sorry for the late reply!

I hope that my mod has been helpful

[ D Myung ]

142 posts

Joined April 2014

[ D Myung ] 2016-10-01T23:26:24+00:00

Yohoo! o/ M4M From My Modding Queue

Collab Hard

00:09:112 Instead this single note it's better to change it to a slider which ends at 00:09:461
00:09:984 End this slider at 00:10:159 and repeat it once
00:11:205 (6) Same as 00:09:112 and end it at 00:11:554
00:11:903 (7) Remove this note and move 00:12:077 to that place
00:12:426 Add a new note
00:17:484 (1) Remove this note and move 00:17:659 to that place
00:18:356 End this slider at 00:18:531 and repeat it once
00:19:228 Why you ignore this beat? I don't know if you are doing it on purpose or not bc I have been seeing a lot of this type
00:20:449 I don't hear sound here. Could be better move this slider to 00:20:275 imo
00:21:321 Same as 00:19:228
00:22:019 ^
00:22:368 Instead this note change it to a slider ending it at 00:22:717
00:23:066 the slider (00:23:240) starts here
00:23:589 Add new note

I'm so sorry for the late reply!

I hope that my mod has been helpful

[ D Myung ]

142 posts

Joined April 2014

[ D Myung ] 2016-10-01T23:39:31+00:00

I don't know what i did... D: I cant edit my post

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-10-02T00:52:14+00:00

MyAngelHye wrote:
I don't know what i did... D: I cant edit my post

its ok double post happens xD i guess

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,528 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2016-10-02T18:19:16+00:00

I tried to end the slider at the end as close as possible to the vocals, and I think I added the break this time round, hopefully.

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Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-10-02T19:34:22+00:00

KawaiiLuma wrote:
Collab Hard:
03:09:984 (5) - Again not sure if the ending is timed correct ill ask HB24 it his part xD

Sry that my mod took so long
I liked the map and maybe I add more mods for the other difficulties; meanwhile have 2 stars (one because it took me a while to start to mod this map and the other one because I liked the map :3)
Luma thank u and np

thx for mod

update neonat map also CBH diff is finished woahuu

- Angelia

118 posts

Joined August 2013

- Angelia 2016-10-05T03:07:01+00:00

NM

英语渣得扶不起

[insane]

00:14:519 (4) - 旋转-35° 与00:13:647 (2,3) - 形成一个三角形 triangle

00:15:566 (4,5,1) - 4:white line - red line 5 blue line 1 white line - red line ~~没有这么急的~~

00:17:659 (2) - leaky

01:10:769 (2) - add circle

01:23:066 (2) - 不需要回转 Don't back and forth

~~02:17:659 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 可以三连+一个回旋这样来的这样太累了~~

[collab]

00:07:019 (2,3) - 包好（B....B那啥来着）

01:49:752 (1) - x:384 y:256

Ice Cream

Izzywing

osu! Alumni

2,248 posts

Joined March 2016

Izzywing 2016-10-14T09:43:05+00:00

I'm so sorry for late, placeholder for response :v

BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 2016-10-14T16:37:41+00:00

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Includes a suggestion / Suggestion:
I recommend that you fix this:
Unrankable, so you have to fix this:
Not unrankable but I strongly disagree with this:
I'm not sure why you used this. Explain it to me please:

General
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01:55:333 - to 02:00:914 - Should have soft hitsounds sampleset. It will suit this part better and emphasise it properly. Reduce volume too. Hitsounds should be somewhat similar chosen throughout the mapset. Don't let it vary too much.
Im confused. The difficulties still need to be fully hitsounded, otherwise it won't be rankable. Add them asap.
00:15:042 - and all other pause parts like this. You should consider adding a break here so the player doesn't get confused because no elements are coming and to signalise the upcoming part. It will also prevent the game from draining more HP. Do this for all difficulties accordingly.
02:53:938 - Your KIAI time is 1/3. Consider ending the KIAI on all choruses half way earlier on all difficulties to reduce the amount and because the second part of the chorus isn't as intense and exciting as the first one. End here 00:48:356 - 01:38:589 - 02:31:612 - 02:53:938 -
You didn't add the sliderborder for the skin on all difficulties. http://puu.sh/rFynp/193336cbd1.png Check it and add where necessary. I also recommend adding a reverse arrow for the sliders. Would make some patterns on some harder difficulties easier to read.
The difficulty settings for Beginner and Easy don't vary much, whereas Easy and Normal do a lot http://puu.sh/rFyLK/77ba79e65c.png Consider adjusting this a bit to make it more balanced. Hyper and Hard don't vary much either http://puu.sh/rFyR6/54c463a6fc.png This could be adjusted as well.

Beginner
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Appearance, Flow & Transition:

00:37:194 (1,2,3) - 02:51:147 (2,3,1) - etc The gap between sliders sometimes varies a bit in size. This could be polished. Adjust where necessary. http://puu.sh/rFw1d/35ab8d081c.jpg http://puu.sh/rFw24/95ca7c6a20.jpg
00:45:566 (2,3) - Are not 100% symmetrical straight sliders. If you overlap them, you can clearly see it. http://puu.sh/rFw5N/ac3fb94adc.jpg
00:57:426 (3,4) - 01:02:310 (1,2) - 01:30:217 (2,3) - 01:33:008 (1,2) - 01:35:799 (2,3) - 01:55:333 (1,2) - 02:56:728 (2,1,2) - You could improve the blanket on these. This difficulty is full with blanket sliders so it's only reasonable to make them looks clean.
Combo Pattern:
01:41:380 (4) - 02:12:077 (3) - I'd say NC for consistency.
Other Issues:
01:07:891 (1) - 01:14:170 (2) - 02:42:775 (1) - Ends on a 1/6 beat and thus is unrankable. It doesn't match the rhythm nor does it end on a 1/1 or 1/2 beats like the rest of your patterns. It's clearly an accident tho. Easy to fix. http://puu.sh/rFwbF/69b7f2a2d8.jpg
00:34:403 (1) - This spinner is really short. Even though the auto mode plays more than 1000 points, for new players it can be difficult to finish because by the time they realise that a spinner appears, the spinner will already have half finished. Especially on a beginner difficulty it should be longer. Consider making it 1 beat longer starting at 00:33:705 - .

Easy
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Appearance, Flow & Transition:

00:51:147 (1,2) - These could have a better blanket http://puu.sh/rFx4x/f6a158e97d.jpg Same here 01:07:891 (1,2) - this slider composition looks a bit odd atm try horizontally flipping it maybe, 01:37:194 (4,1,2) - http://puu.sh/rFxao/a925efd906.jpg
Spacing:
03:02:310 (2,3) - Here is a big spacing inconsistency of 1,07. Fix this please.
Combo Pattern:
03:05:101 (6) - Add NC for consistency and the combo number is getting too long.

Normal
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Spacing:

02:17:659 (1,2) - Clearly visible spacing change. Fix this, it's 1,5 and not suitable for this difficulty level.

Hard
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Appearance, Flow & Transition:

00:38:938 (6,7) - 00:45:914 (2) - Slight spacing inconsistency that should be adjusted for aesthetics. Try to find any other by yourself and adjust them as well.
01:07:542 (9,1) - 01:10:333 (9,1) - 01:15:914 (8,1) - 01:32:833 (5,1) - should have consistent spacing. They vary a bit too much. Two of them are 1,9ish. Try making this consistent for all downbeat jumps. Also, first downbeat jump is here 01:07:542 (9,1) - but why is there none at 01:02:310 (1) - and 01:05:101 (1) - ? It would be reasonable to add them.
Rhythm & Pattern:
01:55:333 - 02:17:310 - Rhythmically, I think this should be a circle instead of the slider. It would fit a lot better since you mapped to vocal. That word that sounds like "pop" is 1 syllable. Not sure if English or Korean.
00:39:984 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rhythmically, you mapped to the vocals here. It would make more sense and be more accurate to your mapping if the 5 circle was removed on these patterns 00:41:031 (4,5) - and then maybe stack 00:41:031 (4,1) - to create an effect pause and a stop and go motion. The drums here that is mapped 00:41:205 - is for transition but musically and how you mapped this, without circle it would fit the song more.
Spacing:
02:05:449 (4,5) - 02:13:821 (6,7) - Don't understand this small jump. Music stays the same. Nothing to emphasise imo.
Hitsounds:
00:51:845 - You'll have problems hitsounding a clap on these beats because there is no playable note and the slider skips this important clap. You could increase the STR so you can hitsound these since you skipped them a lot throughout the difficulty.
Other Issues:
00:09:984 (3,5) - 02:57:252 (2,4) - Not 100% stacked as intended. Adjust on all similar stacks throughout the difficulty.

Hyper
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That's the smoothest Hyper I've seen in a while. So smooth like the icing on cakes =3= No complaints. Flows perfectly, not overmapped. Good job ~ Only a suggestion that could improve it a bit rhythmically.

Rhythm & Pattern: 00:39:287 (3,4,5) - 00:39:287 (3) - would follow the vocals more if it'd be longer by 1/4 so it's a 1/2 slider. You mapped to the vocals and drums and these should be emphasised properly. This would work better like you did here 00:44:868 (4,5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/rILIF/634d4b2b7a.jpg Same for 01:29:519 (3,4) - 02:22:542 (3,4) - . The only time when you did this rhythm on the first "cake" of the chorus is here 02:44:868 (4,5,6) -

Insane
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Rhythm & Pattern:

You mostly mapped to vocal or drums and then swapped to indistinct sounds for streams that don't match your other patterns. The snares should only be mapped when they are in that part of the song. These are okay 02:45:566 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:17:659 - You left out a really strong beat here, the 1/2 slider also doesn't go with anything in the song. Try to find smth that suits more.
00:28:037 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - 00:42:077 (1,2,3,4) - That's a really difficult pattern to play for Insane. It would be more appropriate for Extras due to the large spacing and because it's a stream. Feel like it's a bit too gameplay overmapped for this kind of song. Try to simplify it a bit.
00:42:775 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too overmapped. Doesn't work so well with the song. 2 streams in a row that musically don't match so good doesn't work either. I always dramatically add hitsounds to hear if the rhythm of the patterns matches with the song.
Click me - Watch me
02:17:659 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Bit too many circle triples in a row for Insane. Add a reverse triple slider in between to reduce the hardness a little so it's more appropriate for this level. 02:18:443 (2,3) - This one for example as 02:18:356 (1) - has a clap. Would work good.
02:26:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - purely overmapped. This stream pattern doesn't match the music. The previous ones matched the drums or synths at least but this one doesn't.
02:34:141 (4) - 02:39:723 (4) - 02:56:467 (4) - ^ not in the song
Spacing:
00:30:914 (5,1) - 00:32:833 (3,4) - 00:33:705 (5,1) - Same rhythm but different spacing. Why? Also compare with 01:21:670 (4,1) - 01:23:938 (4,1) -
01:49:752 (1,2,1) - ^ plus 01:51:670 (6,7) - should have a jump too as it would follow 01:51:321 (3,4) - better and emphasise the vocals more
Combo Pattern:
01:26:728 (4) - This should have a NC since the previous spacing 01:23:938 (4,1) - looks the same so the spacing change should be indicated.
Other Issues:
00:45:391 (4,5,1,2,3) - 00:57:775 (5,6,1,2,3) - That stacking and line stream combination is hard to read due to the skin. Do either but not both. I don't want to get a reply from you saying "but ppl will play without or use other skin" so I'm telling you right away. The map should be playable without individual gameplay or mod preferences.
00:52:194 (3) - Too close to the HP bar. Slightly move it lower. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6320361
01:31:612 (1,2,3) - 02:01:961 (4,5,1) - 02:52:194 (5,6,1) - Looks confusing and makes it a bit unreadable. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6320398 Try to manually stack it.
01:54:548 (1) - That's like 2k score auto can play. That's tough as hell to play if you're not prepared and know the map beforehand. Rules say 1k is okay but for playability - humans are not that reactive. It also doesn't go so well as conclusion for this part. A slower SV slider would work better imo.
02:03:356 (6,7,1,2) - These could be doubles. I'd read them as such because by the looks of your mapping, streams have similar arrangement. Space them out a bit more or stack them to make them more readable. For example: 02:07:194 (3,4) -
02:24:810 (2,2,2) - Really difficult to read again due to the skin. http://puu.sh/rINkV/82d7328375.jpg

Overall
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Modding Time: 3-4 hours
Add hitsounds and it's a good set. I like it. Imma keep it. ~ Sorry again for the late mod. Really busy the last 2 weeks. I'll leave a star for support. GL!

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neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,528 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2016-10-16T18:09:24+00:00

For better consistency I removed one of the 1/4 sliders and changed it to 1/2 in the 2nd kiai time, making it such that every 2nd on in the kiai is held longer, except for the final section in the last kiai. Thanks

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missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

missa1912 2016-10-16T21:43:46+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
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01:07:542 (9,1) - 01:10:333 (9,1) - 01:15:914 (8,1) - 01:32:833 (5,1) - should have consistent spacing. They vary a bit too much. Two of them are 1,9ish. Try making this consistent for all downbeat jumps. Also, first downbeat jump is here 01:07:542 (9,1) - but why is there none at 01:02:310 (1) - and 01:05:101 (1) - ? It would be reasonable to add them. - after hearing carefully all of the mentioned downbeats i remove some of the jumps on them, keeping just the ones on 01:05:101 (1) - (there was no jump in here before) 01:10:682 (1) - 01:16:263 (1) - , also fixed some ds problem at the beginnig

thanks for the mod! :3

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Izzywing

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Izzywing 2016-10-20T06:48:04+00:00

wo fuck accidentally posted this early lol, ill keep editing it z-z

Hobbes2's Insane:
00:06:321 (1) - Minor question, why is this circle its own combo ? cos its before the downbeat
01:30:566 (2,3,4,5) - This part feels a bit odd to play because the single circles are pretty far down under (pun intended :3) [maybe try to move them up a bit] Well it being down or up or whatever shouldn't affect how odd it is to play I wouldn't think :v

Kisses wrote:
Insane
00:19:577 (2,3) - since you've been emphasizing a lot of the vocals it feels weird that 2 has much smaller spacing than 3. It feels like it should be the other way round as switching from emphasizing vocals to instruments too often can feel a bit weird sometimes. Like at 00:26:728 (4,5) you've used more spacing for the vocal note than the drum snare Kinda confused here, even where you linked I used more spacing for the drum snare.
00:28:821 (1) - it would look structured a lot better to space this out a bit instead of having it close to the slider as all the previous sliders aren't right
00:28:647 (7) - also space this slider out a bit more, it's closer to 6 than 6 is to 5 and 5 is to 4 Yeah
00:30:042 (3) - how about this rhythm? flows better imo http://puu.sh/rtsr2/4823358719.jpg I prefer what I have now, to be honest. Tried yours and I didn't like it as much.
00:32:833 (3) - ^
00:35:798 (1,2) - recommend to replace these with a 1/1 slider. It would break up the monotony of the amount of circles + 1/2 sliders also because you've followed the vocals before yet 00:35:624 (3,1) are circles and you completely neglect the vocals at 00:35:798 (1) which is a bit of an issue imo. Hm, I like this better as it's kinda like a build-up for the player, preparing them for the jumps right after. It would be weird to go straight from 1/1 rhythm to one half jumps, at least in my experience.
00:38:240 (4) - Really recommend to change these 2 into circles. ok so you've chosen to map the vocals, good choice, but it doesn't follow it properly. 00:37:194 (1,2,3) map the the vocals on the white ticks which is good but there are clearly 2 distinct vocals at 00:38:240 and 00:38:414 . I also recommend you to delete 00:38:502 (5) as this forced rhythm and I imagine you only put this here because of the slider before.
TL;DR - I think you should use this rhythm http://puu.sh/rtsTr/69adf87918.jpg Agreed with this entire point.
00:39:723 (4) - deleting this would be good. so that the triplet 00:39:810 (5,6,1) can have it's own emphasis. I'm also not sure if I can hear a sound at 00:39:723 . Good point, fixed
00:43:821 (7) - 2 circles like I stated earlier Yes.
00:58:037 (6) - delete this. It's sort of hard to read rhythmically and it takes a lot of emphasis away from the triplet at 00:58:124 (1,2,3) that maps the vocals which is very important imo. Yeah, agreed.
01:12:077 (1) - you mapped this weird sound with a stream here but didn't do it at 01:14:694 . How come? I think I did this because I wanted the player to have some downtime from the streaming, which I think is good justification for now. I might actually change this later though.
01:31:089 (4) - I don't feel like this vocal is strong enough to justify this much spacing I think it does.
01:37:891 (3) - 2 circles would be better imo, the vocals this is mapping is a lot different than the 2 sliders earlier so it makes sense to map it differently Agreed
01:49:054 (7,8) - I feel like if you're gonna map the first chorus with 1/8 sliders you might as well do it here too Yes
01:54:548 (1) - move to the white tick because reasons related to reaction time Short spinner, I went ahead and made it a slow slider
some of the stuff I said for the first chorus can be applied to the last, that's if you choose to apply them of course Right, I'll apply them.
03:02:048 (4) - playing this does feel like a ghost note and it also takes a lot of emphasis from the triplet at 03:02:135 (5,6,7) which is not what you want imo I think this is actually fine.
03:03:008 (1,2,3,4) - you can use higher spacings for stacked 1/2 notes in jump patterns. It feels more natural and the jump is a lot easier to play when it's a 1/2 stack too. Also it adds to structure Tried something lol
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ok so I just wanted to mod the Insane for now, might mod some others later. ciao ~

super helpful mod thanks a lot!

@ -Angelia I'll need a translation I can't speak Chinese :v EDIT - Got one from neonat, will respond soon.

I'll respond to BounceBabe a bit later kinda sleepy atm

Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2016-10-21T14:49:17+00:00

im waiting for hitsounds to be done and then ill get back working on this also it may be slow i have studies ;w;

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BounceBabe wrote:

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Appearance, Flow & Transition:
00:38:938 (6,7) - 00:45:914 (2) - Slight spacing inconsistency that should be adjusted for aesthetics. Try to find any other by yourself and adjust them as well. fixed
01:07:542 (9,1) - 01:10:333 (9,1) - 01:15:914 (8,1) - 01:32:833 (5,1) - should have consistent spacing. They vary a bit too much. Two of them are 1,9ish. Try making this consistent for all downbeat jumps. Also, first downbeat jump is here 01:07:542 (9,1) - but why is there none at 01:02:310 (1) - and 01:05:101 (1) - ? It would be reasonable to add them.
Rhythm & Pattern:
01:55:333 - 02:17:310 - Rhythmically, I think this should be a circle instead of the slider. It would fit a lot better since you mapped to vocal. That word that sounds like "pop" is 1 syllable. Not sure if English or Korean. I tthink it flows fine >w<
00:39:984 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rhythmically, you mapped to the vocals here. It would make more sense and be more accurate to your mapping if the 5 circle was removed on these patterns 00:41:031 (4,5) - and then maybe stack 00:41:031 (4,1) - to create an effect pause and a stop and go motion. The drums here that is mapped 00:41:205 - is for transition but musically and how you mapped this, without circle it would fit the song more. i m not just mapping vocals there is mix of strong drum beats that i dont want miss and mapping them wont be problem so thats why i dont want remove anything if i got what u mean xd
Spacing:
02:05:449 (4,5) - 02:13:821 (6,7) - Don't understand this small jump. Music stays the same. Nothing to emphasise imo. maybe to emphasize that clap sound
Hitsounds:
00:51:845 - You'll have problems hitsounding a clap on these beats because there is no playable note and the slider skips this important clap. You could increase the STR so you can hitsound these since you skipped them a lot throughout the difficulty.
Other Issues:
00:09:984 (3,5) - 02:57:252 (2,4) - Not 100% stacked as intended. Adjust on all similar stacks throughout the difficulty. fixedd

reply will be continue on the other difficulties ! thx for mod

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BounceBabe wrote:

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I recommend that you fix this:
Unrankable, so you have to fix this:
Not unrankable but I strongly disagree with this:
I'm not sure why you used this. Explain it to me please:
General
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01:55:333 - to 02:00:914 - Should have soft hitsounds sampleset. It will suit this part better and emphasise it properly. Reduce volume too. Hitsounds should be somewhat similar chosen throughout the mapset. Don't let it vary too much. yess took care of hitsounds also added soft sliderslide and stuff :p
Im confused. The difficulties still need to be fully hitsounded, otherwise it won't be rankable. Add them asap. DONE
00:15:042 - and all other pause parts like this. You should consider adding a break here so the player doesn't get confused because no elements are coming and to signalise the upcoming part. It will also prevent the game from draining more HP. Do this for all difficulties accordingly. fixed
02:53:938 - Your KIAI time is 1/3. Consider ending the KIAI on all choruses half way earlier on all difficulties to reduce the amount and because the second part of the chorus isn't as intense and exciting as the first one. End here 00:48:356 - 01:38:589 - 02:31:612 - 02:53:938 - Oh, I see ! i think its fine since its the chorus >w< ill think about it !!!
You didn't add the sliderborder for the skin on all difficulties. http://puu.sh/rFynp/193336cbd1.png Check it and add where necessary. I also recommend adding a reverse arrow for the sliders. Would make some patterns on some harder difficulties easier to read. ill ask firetruck for this
The difficulty settings for Beginner and Easy don't vary much, whereas Easy and Normal do a lot http://puu.sh/rFyLK/77ba79e65c.png Consider adjusting this a bit to make it more balanced. Hyper and Hard don't vary much either http://puu.sh/rFyR6/54c463a6fc.png This could be adjusted as well.confused nothing changed in the pictures ;w;
Beginner
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Appearance, Flow & Transition:
00:37:194 (1,2,3) - 02:51:147 (2,3,1) - etc The gap between sliders sometimes varies a bit in size. This could be polished. Adjust where necessary. http://puu.sh/rFw1d/35ab8d081c.jpg http://puu.sh/rFw24/95ca7c6a20.jpg fixed
00:45:566 (2,3) - Are not 100% symmetrical straight sliders. If you overlap them, you can clearly see it. http://puu.sh/rFw5N/ac3fb94adc.jpg idk what u mean there but fixed a stack
00:57:426 (3,4) - 01:02:310 (1,2) - 01:30:217 (2,3) - 01:33:008 (1,2) - 01:35:799 (2,3) - 01:55:333 (1,2) - 02:56:728 (2,1,2) - You could improve the blanket on these. This difficulty is full with blanket sliders so it's only reasonable to make them looks clean. cleaned everything
Combo Pattern:
01:41:380 (4) - 02:12:077 (3) - I'd say NC for consistency. but i nc every 2 downbeats the whole map that sould be consistent enough
Other Issues:
01:07:891 (1) - 01:14:170 (2) - 02:42:775 (1) - Ends on a 1/6 beat and thus is unrankable. It doesn't match the rhythm nor does it end on a 1/1 or 1/2 beats like the rest of your patterns. It's clearly an accident tho. Easy to fix. http://puu.sh/rFwbF/69b7f2a2d8.jpg OMG yess its an accident >w< fixedd
00:34:403 (1) - This spinner is really short. Even though the auto mode plays more than 1000 points, for new players it can be difficult to finish because by the time they realise that a spinner appears, the spinner will already have half finished. Especially on a beginner difficulty it should be longer. Consider making it 1 beat longer starting at 00:33:705 - .done
Easy
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Appearance, Flow & Transition:
00:51:147 (1,2) - These could have a better blanket http://puu.sh/rFx4x/f6a158e97d.jpg Same here 01:07:891 (1,2) - this slider composition looks a bit odd atm try horizontally flipping it maybe,ill keep the sliders xd 01:37:194 (4,1,2) - http://puu.sh/rFxao/a925efd906.jpg omg fixed
Spacing:
03:02:310 (2,3) - Here is a big spacing inconsistency of 1,07. Fix this please. fixed
Combo Pattern:
03:05:101 (6) - Add NC for consistency and the combo number is getting too long.okay done
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Spacing:
02:17:659 (1,2) - Clearly visible spacing change. Fix this, it's 1,5 and not suitable for this difficulty level.oups fixed

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BounceBabe

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BounceBabe 2016-10-23T12:26:19+00:00

Lilyanna wrote:
The difficulty settings for Beginner and Easy don't vary much, whereas Easy and Normal do a lot http://puu.sh/rFyLK/77ba79e65c.png Consider adjusting this a bit to make it more balanced. Hyper and Hard don't vary much either http://puu.sh/rFyR6/54c463a6fc.png This could be adjusted as well.confused nothing changed in the pictures ;w;

It's just screens of the difficulty settings ^^ There are some gaps that should be adjusted a bit.
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What I liked: everything specialy ur General mod <3
What I disliked: Nothing
What you could improve: its perfect when bn ?

i love ur mods <3 thank u !!!

Thanks

I'm working on it haha

Izzywing

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Izzywing 2016-10-30T03:40:49+00:00

placeholder for hitsounds, im workin on it xd

edit - Done, I guess - http://pastebin.com/QCv9Lm6e

Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2016-11-03T08:05:34+00:00

ty Updated. rdy for bn?

Wishkey

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Wishkey 2017-02-22T14:40:54+00:00

Heyo!

Beginner
-Can prob drop OD and HP to 1 since its a beginner diff and to differentiate from easy
-00:15:566 - would manually delete the break here since its really short, like you did at 01:00:217 - similar
-00:26:728 (3) - would be cool if the visual space from the blanket was the same as all your other visual spacings like between 00:23:240 (1,2,3) -

Easy
Pretty long section of 1/1 single notes towards the end, could maybe add some cool sliders there like at 03:03:705 (4,5) - for the drum catches, and 03:09:287 (3,4) - for the vocals since its pretty intense for an easy diff compared to the rest of the map

Normal
-00:59:519 - really short break here again, I'd manually delete it
-01:40:682 (3,4,1) - visual even triangle here would look good

glgl!

Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2017-02-22T18:42:57+00:00

Wishkey wrote:
Heyo!

Beginner
-Can prob drop OD and HP to 1 since its a beginner diff and to differentiate from easy
-00:15:566 - would manually delete the break here since its really short, like you did at 01:00:217 - similar
-00:26:728 (3) - would be cool if the visual space from the blanket was the same as all your other visual spacings like between 00:23:240 (1,2,3) -

Easy
Pretty long section of 1/1 single notes towards the end, could maybe add some cool sliders there like at 03:03:705 (4,5) - for the drum catches, and 03:09:287 (3,4) - for the vocals since its pretty intense for an easy diff compared to the rest of the map

Normal
-00:59:519 - really short break here again, I'd manually delete it
-01:40:682 (3,4,1) - visual even triangle here would look good

glgl!

fixed everything thank u ^^

Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2017-03-19T14:34:22+00:00

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Firetruck 2017-04-01T13:02:49+00:00

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CrystilonZ wrote:

Jonawaga wrote:

Kanye wrote:

Kanye wrote:

Neanmoins wrote:

Jonawaga wrote:

Firetruck wrote:

Insane

MyAngelHye wrote:

KawaiiLuma wrote:

BounceBabe wrote:

Kisses wrote:

Insane

BounceBabe wrote:

BounceBabe wrote:

Lilyanna wrote:

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