okay, updated

Recheck Aika's Normal+
no kds

[Aika's Normal+]

1. 00:47:329 (3) - Maybe Ctrl+J so this will flow better with (1)
2. 00:53:082 (1) - Not sure. Is this blue tick will make the player confuse?
3. 00:56:370 (5,6) - Aesthetic-wise line up better maybe
4. 00:57:192 (7,8) - ^
5. 01:02:945 (5,6) - Blanket is a bit off
6. 01:03:562 (6,1) - ^
7. 01:11:164 (1,2) - Blanket is a bit off
8. 01:15:069 (3) - Maybe Ctrl+J to avoid overlap with (4)
   A little bit problems in blanket but the others seems to be fine for me

Good luck

General

Add 2000 to AudioLeadIn for all difficulties, do so in the .osu in Notepad

Easy

00:21:027 (2,3) - spacing error, you have to keep a constant spacing throughout the difficulty
00:32:945 (4,1) - I have been told before, so I shall advice now, that stacking in Easy or any of the simpler difficulties is not good and unless there is really a very special feeling in that section of the song, you should not stack
00:49:795 (1) - finish
00:53:904 - you don't need this green inheriting section
01:13:630 (2,1) - could you blanket better here
01:17:329 (4,1) - avoid stacking these

Normal

00:18:973 (4) - slider touches the health bar, you have to fix this
00:51:438 (1) - spinner should start at 00:51:233 with the vocals
01:02:740 (4,5) - 3/4 rhythm in Normal that people require to click, it's quite tough considering the diffculty that this map should be
01:19:384 (4,5) - blanket them

A i k a's Normal+

00:00:480 (1,2) - you immediately immerse players in 3/4 rhythm, you should at least use a 3/4 repeat slider of some sort instead to allow player to familiarise with the rhythm, same with 00:02:123 (1,2)
00:09:932 (1) - touches the health bar, please fix this
00:13:425 (3,1,2) - let the end of 00:14:452 (2) be equal spacing away from the other 2 objects to look better
00:49:384 (3) - finish on start of slider
00:53:082 (1,2) - such rhythms in the song would be expressed better with just 1 3/4 repeat slider
01:02:945 (5,6) - blanket them
01:11:164 (1) - finish on start of slider

It would be better if this difficulty ended at the same time as the others, which is 01:24:390

Hard

00:09:110 (2,3) - unstack, a stack doesn't fit the music here
00:22:466 (4,5,6) - make the triplet look better, use constant spacing, so either 0.3 or 0.4x
00:31:301 (5) - you overlook the beat at 00:31:507 which is very crucial, the rhythm of the song here is lost
00:57:603 (4,5,1) - equal spacing to look better
01:02:945 (1,2) - use just 1 repeat slider here instead of 2 objects, this pattern just looks and feels weird
01:12:603 (5,2) - stack them
01:15:685 (4,5,1) - a straight line looks better, don't curve the triplet

Appearance of the map can be much better than what it is now


Just modding these difficulties
Good luck

neonat wrote:

General

Add 2000 to AudioLeadIn for all difficulties, do so in the .osu in Notepad ok

Easy

00:21:027 (2,3) - spacing error, you have to keep a constant spacing throughout the difficulty probably happened when i was fixing and didn't notice, fixed
00:32:945 (4,1) - I have been told before, so I shall advice now, that stacking in Easy or any of the simpler difficulties is not good and unless there is really a very special feeling in that section of the song, you should not stack ok
00:49:795 (1) - finish ok
00:53:904 - you don't need this green inheriting section forgot to delete, fixed
01:13:630 (2,1) - could you blanket better here should be better
01:17:329 (4,1) - avoid stacking these ok

Normal

00:18:973 (4) - slider touches the health bar, you have to fix this didn't notice, fixed
00:51:438 (1) - spinner should start at 00:51:233 with the vocals ok
01:02:740 (4,5) - 3/4 rhythm in Normal that people require to click, it's quite tough considering the diffculty that this map should be fixed
01:19:384 (4,5) - blanket them i did blanket them, fixed it a bit

Hard

00:09:110 (2,3) - unstack, a stack doesn't fit the music here k
00:22:466 (4,5,6) - make the triplet look better, use constant spacing, so either 0.3 or 0.4x ok
00:31:301 (5) - you overlook the beat at 00:31:507 which is very crucial, the rhythm of the song here is lost did consider it, changed
00:57:603 (4,5,1) - equal spacing to look better ok
01:02:945 (1,2) - use just 1 repeat slider here instead of 2 objects, this pattern just looks and feels weird changed
01:12:603 (5,2) - stack them didn't realize, fixed
01:15:685 (4,5,1) - a straight line looks better, don't curve the triplet ok

Appearance of the map can be much better than what it is now


Just modding these difficulties
Good luck

thankyou

due to some reasons, aika can't reply to this topic.. I'm requested to do this for her


here is the update:

updated

I love this song q.q

I just think AR should be 6.5 or something on A i k a's normal

it's impossible for me to read

pls rank :>

will be trying

wish my mapping skill's better than this *cries*

Hi from my mod queue (sorry for late mod!!! )
Easy:
00:03:767 (1,2) - Curve combo 2 a little more for better blanket(makes it flow better too)
00:09:932 (1,2) - same as above

Normal:
00:14:452 (2) - curve the first tick a bit for better blanket
00:54:315 (3) - Hm.. I think it would sound good if you took this out, and then fix 00:54:726 (1,2) position so there wont be a DS problem, just my preference though

Sorry for short mod ; ~ ; I liked your mapset thought, best of luck to you!

trammiexo wrote:

Hi from my mod queue (sorry for late mod!!! )
Easy:
00:03:767 (1,2) - Curve combo 2 a little more for better blanket(makes it flow better too) should be better now
00:09:932 (1,2) - same as above ^

Normal:
00:14:452 (2) - curve the first tick a bit for better blanket fixed
00:54:315 (3) - Hm.. I think it would sound good if you took this out, and then fix 00:54:726 (1,2) position so there wont be a DS problem, just my preference though

Sorry for short mod ; ~ ; I liked your mapset thought, best of luck to you!

thanks for the mods~

Hi! modder came from: p/3583378#p3583378

General

1. im sorry that i have to say this, but i don't have much time left to mod everything.
   instead, i will mod everything that 'the maker' has made.

Easy

1. couldn't find something here. the hitsound don't work by me, but that could be my fault.
   I think it's just a great map!

normal

1. 00:59:658 (1,2,3) - maybe you can line this a bit better up for a better flow.
   for instance, place the first slider a bit higher to the right and the third a bot lower to the right.
2. 01:07:055 (5) - try placing this note a bit higher for a better flow.
3. 01:11:781 (2) - try to angle the end of this slider a bit more upwards for a better flow.

Aika's normal+

1. I know it has been said before, but the star rating doesn't match with the proper difficulty.
   either you change the name of the diff or you 'nerf' the map.

Hard

1. 00:39:932 (1,2,3,4) - try moving the 2 and 4 a bit higher and the 3 a bit lower to the left.
   the 3 doesn't have to be on line with the 1, but a bit closer should be fine.
2. 00:48:973 (4) - try moving this note a bit more down to the left. for better flow.
3. 00:47:945 (1) - personally, i dont like to wait on this note(overlap) it isn't particulary bad,
   but i don't like it for some reason (I can't say how). you don't have to change it, just wanted to point that out.

I really think you are a good mapper! all three diffs seems to be fine. hope it will get ranked soon!

Fryz3 wrote:

Hi! modder came from: p/3583378#p3583378

General

1. im sorry that i have to say this, but i don't have much time left to mod everything.
   instead, i will mod everything that 'the maker' has made.

Easy

1. couldn't find something here. the hitsound don't work by me, but that could be my fault.
   I think it's just a great map!

normal

1. 00:59:658 (1,2,3) - maybe you can line this a bit better up for a better flow.
   for instance, place the first slider a bit higher to the right and the third a bot lower to the right. tweaked a bit
2. 01:07:055 (5) - try placing this note a bit higher for a better flow. ok
3. 01:11:781 (2) - try to angle the end of this slider a bit more upwards for a better flow. ^

Hard

1. 00:39:932 (1,2,3,4) - try moving the 2 and 4 a bit higher and the 3 a bit lower to the left.
   the 3 doesn't have to be on line with the 1, but a bit closer should be fine. modified
2. 00:48:973 (4) - try moving this note a bit more down to the left. for better flow. k
3. 00:47:945 (1) - personally, i dont like to wait on this note(overlap) it isn't particulary bad,
   but i don't like it for some reason (I can't say how). you don't have to change it, just wanted to point that out. I'll keep it in the meantime

I really think you are a good mapper! all three diffs seems to be fine. hope it will get ranked soon!

thankies

removed A i k a's normal+ due to some circumstances

From Lordraika's modding Party

[Easy]
00:03:767 (1,2) - Blanket needs a little more improvement
00:05:411 (3,4) - Improve blanket, move the end of (3) 1 grid to the right
00:05:411 (3,1) - Stack please
00:16:918 (1,2) - Flows kinda bad, because of 'sudden' movement to the right
00:18:562 (3) - Too high (Hits HP bar, which is unrankable afaik)
00:21:027 (2,3) - Needs a lot of improvement, the blanket is pretty bad
00:21:849 (3,4) - Improve blanket, look at 00:22:774 to make it perfect
00:29:247 (3) - Feels kinda weird. You go down from (2), and then go up for (4) and then go down with the slider. IMO it's better to have (3) above the (2), so it flow better (Ctrl J the slider, and move to 292:68 (Just a example, do do this, as this looks ugly (Blanket)))
00:41:575 (3,4) - Blanket, move end of (3) down a little
01:02:534 (2,3) - Improve blanket
01:04:589 (1,3) - Ugly overlap
01:17:740 (1,3) - ^^

[Normal]
00:13:630 (1,2) - Can't really see, but blanket feels a little off
00:25:343 (4) - NC
00:39:932 (1) - This is 1/2, not 3/4
00:41:164 (3,5) - Ugly overlap, you can make them stack
00:47:945 (3,4,6) - Ugly overlap
00:53:082 (1) - Too fast after a spinner, keep at least 2 beat between it
00:57:603 (6,7,1) - Try not to stack in normal difficulty
01:02:534 (3,4) - Ugly overlap, and it doesn't flow well, change this, (3) can stay, but change location&shape of (4)
01:13:630 (3) - To high - HpBar
01:19:384 (4) - NC
01:19:384 (4,5) - Blanket can be improved (a lot)

[Hard]
00:01:712 (3,4,5) - They are all terrible blankets, please look carefully when applying
00:04:589 (3,4,5,6) - Improve blanket
00:07:055 (3,4) - Improve blanket
00:13:014 (6,2) - Ugly overlap
00:14:041 (2) - Looks ugly, copy 00:13:630 (1) - and rotate it 180 degrees (and ctrl G and move to correct place)
00:15:480 (2) - Too high (Hpbar)
00:20:616 (3,4,5) - Improve blanket
00:39:932 (1) - It's 1/2, not 3/4
00:43:219 (1) - ^^
01:22:099 (2,3,4,5) - NC (ALL due to BPM change)

[Kibbleru's Insane]
All move to xxx:yyy are suggestions, choose something near there, I'm not saying this is correct, but x+1 is not.
00:02:123 (1) - Looks kinda ugly, becuase it's so curvy
00:07:055 (4) - NC
00:13:014 (7) - NC
00:13:527 (8) - Move to 172:260, it feels like 1/2, and due to making it like this, it feels like 1/4
00:26:267 (6) - Move to 136:152, reason above
00:28:014 (5,1) - Ugly overlap
00:33:253 (6) - Move to 200:180, reason above
00:53:904 (1,2,3,4) - Looks kinda ugly, due to low distance
01:00:788 (2) - Move to 116:180
01:01:199 (4) - Move to 248:240
01:06:541 (2) - Move to 92:180
01:11:062 (5) - Move to 248:176
01:17:637 (4) - Move to 400:112
01:22:030 (4) - Delete. I don't hear any 1/8 here
01:23:307 (1,1) - Unnecessary, circles would be good (Just 1), Also, is 1/16 rankable?

Good luck

baraatje123 wrote:

From Lordraika's modding Party

[Easy]
00:03:767 (1,2) - Blanket needs a little more improvement adjusted
00:05:411 (3,4) - Improve blanket, move the end of (3) 1 grid to the right ^
00:05:411 (3,1) - Stack please thought I already did, re stacked back though due to ^
00:16:918 (1,2) - Flows kinda bad, because of 'sudden' movement to the right changed
00:18:562 (3) - Too high (Hits HP bar, which is unrankable afaik) didn't noticed. moved
00:21:027 (2,3) - Needs a lot of improvement, the blanket is pretty bad modified
00:21:849 (3,4) - Improve blanket, look at 00:22:774 to make it perfect
00:29:247 (3) - Feels kinda weird. You go down from (2), and then go up for (4) and then go down with the slider. IMO it's better to have (3) above the (2), so it flow better (Ctrl J the slider, and move to 292:68 (Just a example, do do this, as this looks ugly (Blanket))) modified
00:41:575 (3,4) - Blanket, move end of (3) down a little ok
01:02:534 (2,3) - Improve blanket ^
01:04:589 (1,3) - Ugly overlap didn't noticed, moved
01:17:740 (1,3) - ^^ changed

[Normal]
00:13:630 (1,2) - Can't really see, but blanket feels a little off should be better
00:25:343 (4) - NC ok
00:39:932 (1) - This is 1/2, not 3/4 emphasizing the music
00:41:164 (3,5) - Ugly overlap, you can make them stack okay
00:47:945 (3,4,6) - Ugly overlap moved
00:53:082 (1) - Too fast after a spinner, keep at least 2 beat between it shortened
00:57:603 (6,7,1) - Try not to stack in normal difficultyok
01:02:534 (3,4) - Ugly overlap, and it doesn't flow well, change this, (3) can stay, but change location&shape of (4) changed
01:13:630 (3) - To high - HpBar didn't noticed, fixed
01:19:384 (4) - NC k
01:19:384 (4,5) - Blanket can be improved (a lot)

[Hard]
00:01:712 (3,4,5) - They are all terrible blankets, please look carefully when applying fixed
00:04:589 (3,4,5,6) - Improve blanket ^
00:07:055 (3,4) - Improve blanket ^
00:13:014 (6,2) - Ugly overlap ^
00:14:041 (2) - Looks ugly, copy 00:13:630 (1) - and rotate it 180 degrees (and ctrl G and move to correct place) ^
00:15:480 (2) - Too high (Hpbar) fixed
00:20:616 (3,4,5) - Improve blanket ok
00:39:932 (1) - It's 1/2, not 3/4
00:43:219 (1) - ^^
01:22:099 (2,3,4,5) - NC (ALL due to BPM change) forgot about that, fixed

Good luck

thanks for the mods

just fyi

00:42:808 - ~ 00:43:014 - is 1/6

No Dap wrote:

just fyi

00:42:808 - ~ 00:43:014 - is 1/6

oh okay, didn't notice, thx

Hi !, 🌀NM request

✨ = Suggestion (Common opinion. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something feels wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know wat tu du xD )

Here we go...


Oke that's all from me. All e best C:

kaga nyadar ada mod OwO maap telat balesnya

O-Moei wrote:

Hi !, 🌀NM request

✨ = Suggestion (Common opinion. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something feels wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know wat tu du xD )

Here we go...

General

💧Beberapa Clap ga ada pada tempatnya uwu coba periksa sendiri ya XDXD oke entar akan diperiksa kalau ga males bcos hitsounding takes a lot of energy orz

Easy

✨00:10:343 - Point ini penting banget kak, dengerin deh. Harus kena klik nih XDXD Soalnya 00:09:932 - beda banget ritmenya sama yang tadi. Harusnya di map mirip kayak gini 00:19:795 (5,1) - sebenarnya saya bikin 2 slider karena nada nya sama, tapi dipikir lagi karena nada pertama itu awalan dan kalo pake slider jadi weak, oke saya ganti jadi circle

✨01:10:753 (2) - ^ . Ini salah banget deh kyknya uwu . Kalo aku sih bakal ngebuat 01:09:932 (1) - jadi reverse slider, trus ada NC'ed circle disini 01:11:164 - . Trus jadi ada NC yg salah, 01:12:808 (1) - ini harusnya remove NC ups, emang salah banget keanya XD ga kepikiran (males) buat recheck easy sama normal, beatmapnya uda lama haha, oke

✨00:33:356 (1,2) - Bagus nya ini (1) slidertail ngarah pas ke (2) tadi miring dikit haha oke

✨Coba deh kaka bikin sliderend yg ngarah ke downbeat disini 00:38:082 - vokalnya tinggi banget soalnya. Bisa dengan manjangin ini 00:36:644 (1) - sampai 00:37:671 - atau cara lain juga boleh. Masih expectable kok buat newbies diubah buat ngikutin vokal

✨01:24:389 (1) - Punya ending circle buat Easy diff kyknya ga perlu deh XDXD. Mending panjangin aja 01:21:027 (1) - spinner nya hmm oke

Normal

✨00:29:247 (5) - ini kalo bisa angkat dikit, kliatan kyk yg offscreen disini jadinya ok

✨00:49:795 (1,2) - Pola yang ga enak dimainkan pemula-berpengalaman :V ups

✨00:51:233 (1) - ga kecepetan ni spinner ? ;w; . klo aku sih 00:53:082 (1,2,3) - ini didelete trus spinnernya sampe 00:53:082 - oke

✨00:59:658 (1) - Remove NC, karna kaka dari awalnya juga bikin NC setiap 2 measure okie
01:12:808 (1) - ^ ^
01:19:384 (1) - ^ ^

✨01:01:301 (1,2) - Ritmenya kurang enak. Paling enggak kyk gini 00:54:726 (1,2) - lebih pas okai

Hard

✨00:09:932 (1,3) - Swap NC oke
00:38:082 (4,1) - ^ karna ada downbeat 4 mengakhiri vocal, 1 mulai drum beat, NC buat misahin 2 hal ini jadi keep

✨01:00:685 (1) - Unnecessary NC hm oke
01:04:178 (1) - ^ ^

Oke that's all from me. All e best C:

thankies really appreciate it
saya tau ini map uda lama jadi mungkin agak kacau ;-;

updated for now, will check the hitsound again tmr bcos It's already late now and my eyes are almost giving up lol
checked HS and fixed it a bit, updated

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