Hi
[General]
Nice song I like this a lots ><
Good luck <3
[General]
- I see you don't have any SB so uncheck wide screen support maybe
- Maybe you need to remove TV size at title because I think the album of this song is released and the actual song name doesn't has tv size in it
- offset=474 pretty nice for me
- 00:00:480 (1) - I see that you didn't intend to emphasis 2nd white tick but I think it plays a bit awkward because you ending at red tick which is somehow feel emphasized to be maybe you can try these
- 00:08:699 (1) - Finish at the head sound nice for me here
- 00:04:589 (1,2,3,4) - Aesthetic-wise make this curve beautiful like 00:03:767 (1,2,3,4) - and this should flow pretty nicier
- 00:41:575 - I see this part here you try to emphasis vocal here maybe this rhythm might make this play better
- 00:46:301 (1) - Don't know why you skip downbeat here 00:46:507 - but it might sound nice if you map that downbeat this might make this play better
- 01:02:945 (1,2) - Notice that (1) you put emphasis in vocal so why not do the same for (2) too? Overall this maps play pretty well for me some 1/4 notes actually feel a bit weird for me but I guess that fine
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- 00:00:274 (1) - I suggest to delete this it a bit too confusing for Hard since players would be too late to click the next note after this and it pretty overmapped tho
- 00:00:480 (2,3) - Blanket a bit off here
- 00:01:712 (4) - Small inconsistent in spacing here use DS 1.2x
- 00:02:945 (6) - ^ I don't know why you change DS suddenly here but try not to change it a lots in Hard or it may not look like Hard
- 00:05:000 - Don't know why you skip this beat here but it might play better if you add a note here
- 00:09:110 (2,3) - Aesthetic-wise stack properly at tail
- 00:09:521 (3) - I prefer to end this on red tick it play much better
- 00:16:096 (4) - Ctrl+G and this might flow better imo
- 00:21:233 (5) - ^
- 00:27:192 (2) - ^
- 01:01:301 (1,2) - This overlap pretty bad for me since you overlap (2)'s tail make it a bit hard to looks at it
- 01:09:726 (2) - I would delete this note so it play nicier for Hard and also see that you emphasis vocal here make the rhythm much more consistent imo
- 01:12:192 (4) - Small inconsistent in spacing here use DS 1.2x
You probably need to work on rhythm more because I find that some are a bit too complex for Hard if you find some place good to place slider don't hesitate to put it because I find that some part really suit well for slider in Hard but you didn't use sliders there and try to not changing DS too much here too or it might not a Hard diff
- You probably need to nerf this because it exceed Normal star limit a lots http://puu.sh/c9eWz/4c193f6e91.png the way to nerf this is
1.Decrease the number of the notes
2.Extend some sliders
I think you overmapped Normal a bit tho you need to put notes only on the emphasized beat that you think everyone can hear it at 100% speed and I think DS 1.4x is bit too high for Normal I would use only 1.0x DS for Normal I recommend you read the article about Normal here https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal it might help you a lots
- 00:08:699 (4) - I would curve this like this so it will flow better for Normal
You can make flow a bit easier but I guess that fine so overall this diff pretty solid for me
- 00:18:973 (4,5) - Line up this better so it form a basic flow for Easy
- 00:20:206 (1,2) - A bit complex flow for beginners I would make the flow here basic like this
- 00:26:781 (1,2) - I would make the flow basic like this
- 00:40:753 (2,3) - Too complex for beginner imo try this
- 00:54:726 (1,2) -
- 01:02:534 (2,3,4) -
- 01:06:233 (3,4) - Prefer to line up for better flow for beginner
- 01:07:877 (1,2) - Blanket is a bit off also you would need to curve (2)'s tail to the left so it flow with (3) better for beginners
- 01:19:384 (3) - What kind of shape do you intend to make here, I think you try to make it looks like this? Make sure you keep everything basic here as much as possible because the players who play Easy are still new to this game
Nice song I like this a lots ><
Good luck <3