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Liliana Sisters - Life-Ru is Love-Ru!! (TV Size)

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raririn

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嗨!~

[General]
SPOILER
kiai 不一致,而且我觉得放在白线00:58:816这里加上finish音效会更好
count down 全取消吧,我这里反正是加了也没count

[popner's Insane]
SPOILER
00:23:316 (5,6) -这里的话我觉得改成这样会好点
00:51:483 (5,6,1) - 试试这样?[img]00:51:483%20(5,6,1)%20-[/img]

[Insane]
SPOILER
00:03:650 (5) - 我觉得直的会好点
00:06:316 (4,5,6) - 怎么看都别扭呢。。。我觉得统一spacing吧还是。。。
00:22:649 (1) - 为什么不在白线开始啊。。。还有之前那个4为什么不拉到红线。。。
00:46:566 (5) - 我不明白为什么这个要在这里开始。。。
00:50:816 (1,2) - 这两个各自ctrl+g
00:54:816 (1) - 这个拖拍没必要
00:55:983 (1,2) - 去掉2然后把1拉到2的时间上,听起来好很多
00:58:150 (3,4,5,6,7) - 我觉得没必要连打。。。
01:00:650 (4) - 还有这种拖拍的,我觉得这里没什么必要。。
01:04:816 (3,4) - 不合拍啊。。。
01:12:983 (5) - 这个也是不合拍

然后就是有的地方感觉挺卡的,就是flow不顺。。。比如00:20:316 (1,2,3,4) - 突然就换方向了我就觉得别扭了。。all fixed :D

还有音效是没有加还是怎么。。。我基本上听不到打击声音。。

[Flower's Hard]
SPOILER
hard的话我觉得ar-1会比较好,这个倒不是什么大问题
00:38:983 (3) - 往下面移动点?,如果这个动了那么最好也把2移动下
00:41:649 (1,2) - 我怎么觉得不在拍子上啊。。。
00:44:316 (2,3) - 这个也是
01:02:316 (2) - 不在拍
01:11:816 (2) - 这个我说不上来为什么,感觉拍子有点别扭
01:20:483 (3) - 这个好像也不在拍。。
01:23:149 (2) - 这个也是
同样也是音效声音有点小

[Irie's Normal]
SPOILER
00:07:816 (4,2) - 改不改的无所谓,但是我就是觉得这种遮挡不美观
01:00:483 (3) - 这样好看点

[easy]
SPOILER
00:50:816 (3) - 我觉得反过来弯会好些 ~
00:56:149 (2) - 这个我觉得不再拍子上啊,还不如放在00:55:983 (2) - ,或者直接转圈拉过来
01:06:816 (1,1) - 也是不在拍子 嗯。。。

我很纳闷诶,怎么这么多都不在拍子上呢。。
Gundam
from online request

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15:34 *raririn is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/204506 Liliana Sisters - Life-Ru is Love-Ru!! (TV Size)]
15:35 Gundam: 哇怎么都这么多难度;w;
15:35 raririn: :/
15:49 Gundam: ;w;在线可以不
15:50 raririn: 可以啊
15:50 Gundam: 好w
15:50 Gundam: 那我就直接说了
15:51 raririn: 好 求重喷
15:51 Gundam: Easy这里
15:51 Gundam: 00:29:316(2,3) - 之前一直是压vocal的吧 到这里突然跟歌词了感觉有点违和
15:52 Gundam: 00:30:649(1) - 同理
15:52 Gundam: 咦为什么不带自动链接/w\
15:52 raririn: 不知道诶0.0
15:55 Gundam: E好像没什么了 0 0 感觉压歌词貌似好点
15:56 raririn: 好0.0
15:58 Gundam: Irie's Normal
15:58 Gundam: 00:44:149 -
15:58 Gundam: 这之后加一个短break?
15:59 raririn: 好
16:01 Gundam: 00:54:483 -
16:02 Gundam: 感觉这里加个note应该会好点
16:02 Gundam: 00:57:149 - ^
16:04 Gundam: 00:59:149 (1)- 前面压了歌词这里突然压vocal
16:04 Gundam: 不觉得打起来不舒服嘛/w\
16:04 raririn: 唔 第一个不好改ds就算了 第二个改了
16:04 raririn: 后面都要改了 还是留给影子姥爷/_\
16:05 Gundam: /w\嗯嗯
16:05 Gundam: 01:09:483 (1) - 同理
16:07 raririn: 唔 感觉这个其实不是特别别扭:?
16:08 Gundam: 还好啦 这个没有上一个那么突然
16:08 raririn: 嗯o.o
16:08 Gundam: 花花的看不出问题/w\
16:10 Gundam: 嗯泡泡姥爷的也没啥/w\ 不过貌似比较难HD
16:10 raririn: 好 那最后一个请重喷
16:10 Gundam: Insane是你做的o.o?
16:11 raririn: 感觉巨2
16:11 Gundam: 0.0我看看
16:13 Gundam: 00:05:983 (3,4,5,6) -
16:13 Gundam: 有点略反人类 但还是可以接受
16:14 raririn: orz 这个我打着感觉没问题啊 难道是我打太多
16:14 Gundam: OTZ我打打看
16:15 Gundam: 嗯确实打起来没问题OTZ
16:16 raririn: orz\
16:17 Gundam: 00:20:316 (1,2,3,4)
16:17 Gundam: 没看懂这是个什么形状啦_(:з」∠)_ 有点不美观
16:17 raririn: 会修的。。/_\
16:18 Gundam: 而且建议3和4ctrl+G
16:18 raririn: 唔好
16:19 Gundam: 00:29:149 (5) - 一般来说变速要NC
16:20 raririn: 嗯
16:20 Gundam: 不过你这个变速好像不是很明显嗯……
16:20 Gundam: 自己看啦w
16:20 raririn: .-.好 (其实我都没开我的图
16:20 raririn: (不过不用看也知道你说的是哪(
16:20 Gundam: 233
16:21 Gundam: 嗯后面没啥了/w\
16:21 Gundam: 这图遮挡真多
16:22 raririn: 谢啦
16:22 raririn: post plz
16:22 Gundam: 好w

拉拉铃加油~ :D
popner
http://puu.sh/1Qy3W
更新一下,mod还没看,等准备泡了一起看吧
Sagisawa-Yukari


[General]
(warning!!!必须遵守)Normal难度的Tags怎么是空的?记得补上
某些难度缺少的video请补上,另外没有break time的diff里把letterbox的勾取消



[Easy]
00:03:483 (4) - 我觉得NC应该是从这里开始
00:04:816 (1,2,3) - Easy难度我觉得还是不要放重叠
00:06:816 (4) - NC
00:16:149 (2) - 滑条头finish
00:23:483 (3) - 滑条尾clap
00:25:483 (2) - ^
00:32:149 (2) - 滑条头finish
00:43:483 (3,2) - 3和2的头finish
00:59:149 (1) - finish
01:02:816 (2) - NC
01:04:149 (1) - 滑条头finish
01:07:649 (1) - 这个转盘对easy难度来说开始的太早了
01:16:149 (1) - 滑条尾finish
01:20:149 (2) - 头finish
01:21:483 (1) - clap
01:23:483 (3,5) - NC



[Irie's Normal]
00:12:149 (3) - 滑条尾finish
01:02:483 (3) - clap?
01:06:816 (1) - 滑条头finish
01:09:484 (1) - ^



[Flower's Hard]
00:02:816 (1) - 滑条头finish
00:05:483 (1) - ^
00:48:816 (4) - NC
00:55:983 (1) - 这个转盘感觉在00:57:483 - 结束比较好


[popner's Insane]
00:17:483 (6) - NC
00:29:649 (1,2,3,4,5) - 恩这里建议一个circle一个NC
00:59:649 (8) - NC
01:26:316 (1,2) - 这个建议改成silder


[Insane]
00:03:316 (4,5) - 这两个不放平行么?或许更美观点
00:07:483 (3,4) - 我建议3和4的位置换下
00:18:816 (1,2,3) - 这里试试做成等间距的跳?
00:25:649 (2) - 滑条尾finish?
00:29:149 (5,1,2,3) - 这四个滑条头上全加上finish,效果十分炫酷
00:38:149 (4) - 我觉得就算I也不用勉强填满节奏,配合后面的5做成前面1,2,3的效果更好
01:13:483 (1,2,3,4) - 同00:29:149 (5,1,2,3) -
01:25:816 (7) - NC然后滑条头slider


good luck~
popner
怀疑有2kd
Topic Starter
raririn

popner wrote:

怀疑有2kd
有2kd啊 快mod
Zero__wind

popner wrote:

怀疑有2kd
啊 泡泡可恶

General
offset的关系 导致Kiai起点不在长白线 也意味着重拍不在长白线 这造成了在低难度diff下节奏的时候感觉有点别扭 建议各diff统一修改?
Easy
加NC的方式很不习惯=。= 难道你是以好打FL的方式加的? 总之看着很怪 不过我也不打算挑了
00:38:816 (1) - 做成( 这样吧 和右边有点关联
00:57:316 - 绿线打酱油?
00:59:149 (1) - 明显应该吧时间移到00:59:316 - 别忘记根据DS移位
01:07:649 (1,1,2) - 这3个的节拍我觉得下得也很怪 建议和Kiai刚开始的那里改成类似节奏? Easy最好有一定一致性
01:13:483 (1) - 明显应该再repeat一次的感觉 我觉得这种地方降难度没必要吧……改的话记得根据DS移位

Normal
00:14:816 (3) - 尾巴可以考虑加clap 不一定要那么死板
00:28:149 (3) - 或许包4
00:32:149 (1,3) - 微调让它们别接触吧
00:37:483 (1,2) - 感觉错开的幅度大一些会更好看? imo 2往上再移一些 比如到(384,72)什么的
00:46:816 (1,2) - 和00:50:483 (3) - 这3个clap建议音量略降 10%~15% 而且00:50:483 (3) - 上面为啥还有whistle……当然你要是非不去掉也不会死人……还是说是故意的?
00:59:149 (1,2,3,1,2) - 感觉都应该往前移二分拍 然后到了01:02:483 (3) - 这里怎么处理 个人意见是从这里开始就不动了 如果采纳的话记得改音效和排版 不太麻烦的样子
01:09:484 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 这里也和上面一样 建议往前移二分拍 然后到了01:12:816 (2) - 这里的时候可以把它延长二分拍时长 也可以在它原来结束的时间点加个note 建议拉长
01:14:483 - 不加note?

Hard
00:10:816 (1) - 改成soft finish? 随意
00:17:316 (1,2) - 不是很喜欢这形状 唔……不过我也想不出怎么改 你可以再考虑下
00:28:816 (7) - 把这个移到00:28:983 - ? 位置对应调
01:07:649 (5) - 微调到(124,106)吧 等边
01:26:816 (1,2,3,4) - 比较倾向于不完全重叠 有慢慢水平往左的小间距 比如两两之间的横坐标相差8 这样
01:27:816 (4) - 尾巴加finish吧

死泡泡抢kud
Kiai起点和其他diff不同 因为是GD 可改可不改
00:24:149 (1) - 不倾向于这里也跳 虽然跳得不远
00:58:316 (2) - 或许NC
00:57:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 这么长0.0 你怎么着也在中间再多加一次NC吧 后面有的地方也太长了 最好自己重新统筹一下吧
01:26:816 (4,5,6) - 这个地方或许NC一下
泡泡式简易复制排版神diff!没的挑啊啊啊啊!

本座Insane
00:00:150 (1) - 或许加finish
00:05:149 (6,4,6) - 可考虑等腰
00:10:816 (1,2,3,4) - 比较倾向这样 http://puu.sh/22suq
00:12:150 (7,1) - Insane的NC也要方便FL么 0.0 太恐怖了 还是交换一下吧
00:13:816 (2) - 或许CTRL+G
00:19:650 (5,6,7) - 00:20:316 (1,2,3) - 都不等距跳? 也不是不可以
00:36:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 起点构成正六边形? 其实也可以不弄……反正你两两间是等距的
00:46:483 (5) - 这whistle 不是手抖?
00:50:816 (1,2) - 最好平行? 当然和后面那个也一起
00:55:650 (4) - 可等距
00:58:150 (3) - CTRL+H再摆回原位 纯粹觉得可能好看些
00:58:650 (6,7,1) - 这里的顺序倾向于CTRL+G 也就是让滑条1在6的位置开始 也就是Kiai开始的时候开始 然后原来的6和7扔到滑条1后面构成3连打 其实如果采纳这一条的话 建议把00:58:150 (3,4,5) - 也CTRL+G 总体上就是变成 2下四分拍连打接短reverse 接Kiai开始处的长滑条 后面接2下连打 如果改的话排版就重新调吧 上一条改reverse的方向那个就忽略了
01:06:650 (4,1,2,3) - 的顺序 改成 http://puu.sh/22sVx (位置均不动 只改变顺序)完全仅供参考
01:08:483 - 到 01:13:316 - 这一段的clap感觉不太对? 需要重新规划的样子
01:25:649 (6) - NC
01:27:483 (12) - 尾巴加finish

提前一个多月预定的mod只有这么多了 给个好了 歌还可以 图也算顺手吧
Zero__wind
敢不敢挖了这个
这图不挺好的么
歌也好
Fycho
占位,总感觉要rank了的样子
popner
[General]
AudioLeadIn弄一样吧。
Tags不一致。

[Easy]
00:00:150 (1,3) - 不做对称的话,至少把弧度弄一样
00:29:316 (2,3) - 红线节奏,可以考虑改滑条
00:59:149 (1) - 位置不对吧,应该在00:59:316
01:07:649 (1) - 这个转盘貌似可以在01:07:983开始,这样能跟vocal

[Irie's Normal]
00:19:983 (1) - 尾+clap
00:29:316 (1,2) - ^
00:32:149 (1,3) - 有点overlap到,看起来不好
00:50:483 (3,4) - 这里可以做个blanket
00:57:983 (3) - 滑条尾是Kiai开始的地方(重音),建议改成滑条+圈的形式,圈的打击感能强调Kiai的开始。

[Flower's Hard]
00:17:816 (2) - 这里改成1/2滑条+note比较合曲
00:33:983 (5) - 这种红线开始的滑条相比clap音量太小,感觉很空虚,可以适当增加那个whistle的音量(我觉得主要是这一段的clap太重了,建议整体调到50%,然后whistle调70%)
01:00:149 - 可以填个note和前面一小段节奏对称
01:02:316 (2) - 长滑条中间一个vocal,感觉很奇怪

[Insane]
00:03:316 (4,6) - 这两个滑条的节奏就不一致,00:03:316 (4)放在00:03:150比较好
00:22:649 (1) - 这滑条不知道跟的是什么,完全无视vocal了
00:43:816 (6) - 同Normal的00:57:983 (3),滑条在重音上结尾导致重音没有打击感
00:46:483 (5) - ^
00:58:650 (6) - 连打应该到此为止,这里进Kiai节奏应该有变化
01:27:483 (12) - 这里应该在01:27:816有节奏,而不是折返的位置;另外这个combo太长了
Flower
88888888888888888

[General]
不管怎么说我觉得kiai应该是00:58:316 - 开始。要是接受的话顺便帮我把我的难度也改了。
我的Hard自我吐槽了一遍,链接在这:http://puu.sh/37ulz.osu
看了下后面kiai音效好乱 最好自我吐槽一遍再看mod吧

[Easy]
怎么这么省事 为什么NC1clap下满啊,那为什么不干脆用normal音效
大量无用的白线 自己检查吧 我就不一一说了
重加NC 怀疑有个很脑残的modder给你弄了很多NC mod然后你就信了
00:29:316 (2) - easy不好读 把前一个slder延长到这里
00:34:816 (2) - 改成1/1折返slider看看?比较带感但是可以无视
00:42:149 (2) - 音效反了 最好是头clap尾whistle
00:46:149 (3) - 改成soft音效
00:48:816 - 试着去掉whistle?
00:52:816 - 00:54:149 - 加whistle
00:59:149 (1) - 往后1/2
01:06:816 (1) - 缩短1/2会好得多
01:12:316 (3) - 延长1/2

[Irie]
00:13:149 - 建议这里+note,因为节奏是连上的
00:28:149 (3) - 移动到(300,152)以对称 记得调整后续note
00:33:483 (3) - 最好不要碰到前面的note 尤其是折返箭头
00:38:816 (3) - 还是按照1/1的节奏来比较好,这有点奇怪
00:44:149 - 略空了 尤其是还有这么密集的节奏
00:46:149 - 加whistle
00:54:816 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这个组合不太整洁 最好摆开一些
01:09:316 - 加note
01:17:483 (1,2,3) - 包的更好看些

[popner]
中间有个莫名的break,如果没有懒和标新立异以外的理由建议还是做掉
说实话音效让我不爽……像三腰下的
00:26:649 - 可以+whistle来体现渐进感觉
00:30:649 (4) - NC,如果这么做的话,00:31:316 (1,2) - 交换NC
00:46:816 - 00:50:816 - 不换成soft音效么?感觉太吵了

[Insane]
00:00:150 (1,3) - 没叠好
00:02:816 (1,1) - ^
00:05:483 (6) - NC
00:08:149 (7) - ^
00:10:150 (3,4) - 建议改成两个1/2的滑条,3摆在现在4的位置上,然后4放在右上角
00:11:733 (5) - 感觉放在00:11:566 - 比较好
00:12:150 (7) - 这个NC问题我就不说了
00:14:649 (5) - NC
00:15:650 (8) - 改成单点,然后再00:15:816 - 加一个1/4滑条
00:18:483 (5) - 感觉改成单点会标胶有感觉
00:30:649 (1,2) - 加速!加速!加速!啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊!!!1!
00:38:149 (4) - 没什么梗地横跨vocal让人有些不爽
00:43:483 (4) - 增大spacing
00:46:150 (4,5) - 请解释一下这个奇怪的哨声
00:49:149 (5,5) - 可以叠好
00:58:150 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这个奇葩的连打我就不说了
01:07:316 (4,5) - 可以改成3/4
01:08:483 (3) - 感觉哦雨点奇怪
01:20:316 (2) - 可以NC
01:27:149 (2) - 可以改成3/4

Good luck~
Melt
Mod as request
来迟了好久 抱歉orz

[Easy]
  1. 00:14:816(1)因为2的走向的原因所以感觉改成这样要舒服点
  2. 00:22:816(2)这个note感觉放的位置不好看...要不试试叠在1下面
  3. 00:28:149(1)这个diff唯一一个直线的长slider,不弄弯它么o.o
  4. 00:59:149(1)这个不是应该放在00:59:316么
  5. 01:06:816(1,1)只是个建议
  6. 01:13:483(1)因为vocal很明显所以感觉可以多折一次
[Irie's Normal]
  1. 00:16:149(1)感觉把最后一个锚点向上拉点会好看一些
  2. 00:33:483(1,2,3)可以试试向左移动一点 这样blanket会好一些 也可以避免3和之前的1重叠 如果该了记得调整一下00:35:483(2)的间距
  3. 00:59:149(1,2,3,1)有点没跟上vocal的感觉
[Flower's Hard]
  1. 00:48:483(3,4,5,6,7)虽然这一段是减速段但是我还是倾向于把这种单点的距离弄得跟前面一致
  2. 00:58:816(2)删掉这个note试试呢 感觉稍稍有点多余
  3. 01:26:316(4)x:456 y:144
[popner's Insane]
  1. 00:23:316(5)感觉可以复制4然后对称一下
  2. 01:00:483(6,7,8,9)个人觉得8挡在1上面不好看0.0 感觉6可以往上挪一点给下面空出点空间,然后7,8,9可以放成这样
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:150(1,3)没叠好(?
  2. 00:07:649(4,5)4 x:114 y:156 5 x:25 y:301
  3. 00:22:149(3,4)个人觉得3,4换一下节奏会好点
  4. 00:46:483(5)总感觉这个直着上去不太好看,是不是考虑做个弧
  5. 01:25:149(5)稍微修一下这个slider?
大概就这些了
好歌好图:3
Topic Starter
raririn
改了(?
Jycool
[general]
[easy]
00:30:649 (1) - 去掉nc
00:32:149 (2) - 在这加nc
[Iries‘s normal]
00:13:149 - 加note并加clap
00:15:816 - ^
[hard]
建议ar+1,虽然我可以ss
00:32:149 (1) - 去掉nc
01:07:983 (6) - 建议这个也加nc
01:12:316 (1) - 这个nc感觉没必要
[popner’ insane]
00:02:483 (3,4) - 这个没有stack的感觉啊,4放个跳感觉行,没必要为了排版整齐而stack啊
00:38:483 (4,5) - 这两个感觉stack在00:38:149 (3) - 的尾巴上感觉效果挺好,但是3要调整一下
00:41:483 - 这段开始的break感觉还是不加的好,感觉有点失去连贯,我打的时候就这么感觉
01:01:316 (1) - 这个滑条尾与01:00:983 (8) - stack感觉好看一点
[insane]
00:01:150 (5) - 建议换成折返滑条,像popner的那个开头一样感觉更和曲,或者换成3个单点
00:03:149 (3,4) - 这两个建议stack,和后面的5.6的那组一样
00:09:483 (1,2,3,4) - 这一组中间空1/4拍的滑条简直人性,建议重拜,有点远
00:32:149 (5) - NC
00:46:150 (4) - 单独加这一个哨音感觉没什么意义啊,或者去掉或者组个音轨
00:58:733 (7,1) - 这两个距离稍远啊,影响读图
01:17:149 (6) - ctrl+G感觉好点?


祝rank :)
ts8zs
视频都给我搞起- -!
EZ
除了CS没什么好吐槽的了
NM
00:46:149 (1) - ……拖一下尾部换个姿势……延长1/2
00:55:983 (3) - ……算了
HD
00:02:483 (8) - Ctrl+g
00:05:149 (7) - ^
01:00:149 - note
01:08:316 (1,1) - Remove NC
01:13:483 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817920
PP
AR8
00:20:316 (5) - 改成note
00:23:316 (5) - 后移1/2
00:23:316 - note
00:53:983 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817934
01:05:316 (7) - NC?
01:22:316 (2,4) - 互换?
IS
AR8
00:01:150 (5) - 最少做成角弯ok?
00:31:483 - note
00:32:149 (5) - NC
00:55:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817950 怎么样,wish 厉害吧 你还有的学呢
00:58:816 (1) - 136,72
01:02:816 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:03:483 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:05:399 - note
01:04:150 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817961 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817963 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817964
敢再懒一点么!!!
01:18:816 (1) - Remove NC
01:20:316 (2) - NC
01:26:316 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817967
01:27:816 (6) - 结尾36,204

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/97933 GD什么的要来一发么……是这么说吧
Topic Starter
raririn

jyc-Binggan wrote:

[general]
[easy]
00:30:649 (1) - 去掉nc
00:32:149 (2) - 在这加nc 0.0...
[Iries‘s normal]
00:13:149 - 加note并加clap
00:15:816 - ^
[hard]
建议ar+1,虽然我可以ss 哎AR和acc有关系吗
00:32:149 (1) - 去掉nc
01:07:983 (6) - 建议这个也加nc
01:12:316 (1) - 这个nc感觉没必要
[popner’ insane]
00:02:483 (3,4) - 这个没有stack的感觉啊,4放个跳感觉行,没必要为了排版整齐而stack啊
00:38:483 (4,5) - 这两个感觉stack在00:38:149 (3) - 的尾巴上感觉效果挺好,但是3要调整一下
00:41:483 - 这段开始的break感觉还是不加的好,感觉有点失去连贯,我打的时候就这么感觉
01:01:316 (1) - 这个滑条尾与01:00:983 (8) - stack感觉好看一点
[insane]
00:01:150 (5) - 建议换成折返滑条,像popner的那个开头一样感觉更和曲,或者换成3个单点 哭哭 不想改
00:03:149 (3,4) - 这两个建议stack,和后面的5.6的那组一样 ;;
00:09:483 (1,2,3,4) - 这一组中间空1/4拍的滑条简直人性,建议重拜,有点远 明明很简单;;;
00:32:149 (5) - NC
00:46:150 (4) - 单独加这一个哨音感觉没什么意义啊,或者去掉或者组个音轨 智商捉鸡
00:58:733 (7,1) - 这两个距离稍远啊,影响读图 保留下意见准备改
01:17:149 (6) - ctrl+G感觉好点? 那后面的1太别扭了...


祝rank :)

ts8zs wrote:

视频都给我搞起- -!
EZ
除了CS没什么好吐槽的了
NM
00:46:149 (1) - ……拖一下尾部换个姿势……延长1/2
00:55:983 (3) - ……算了
HD
00:02:483 (8) - Ctrl+g
00:05:149 (7) - ^
01:00:149 - note
01:08:316 (1,1) - Remove NC
01:13:483 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817920
PP
AR8 no
00:20:316 (5) - 改成note
00:23:316 (5) - 后移1/2
00:23:316 - note
00:53:983 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817934
01:05:316 (7) - NC?
01:22:316 (2,4) - 互换?
IS
AR8 no
00:01:150 (5) - 最少做成角弯ok? ...不懂
00:31:483 - note 感觉硬插note不好..
00:32:149 (5) - NC
00:55:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817950 怎么样,wish 厉害吧 你还有的学呢 ball code 有点捉鸡
00:58:816 (1) - 136,72 故意的;;;
01:02:816 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:03:483 (3) - Ctrl+G 别扭啊..
01:05:399 - note ...
01:04:150 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817961 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817963 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817964
敢再懒一点么!!!
01:18:816 (1) - Remove NC
01:20:316 (2) - NC
01:26:316 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817967
01:27:816 (6) - 结尾36,204

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/97933 GD什么的要来一发么……是这么说吧
没回的都是改了 thx :3
wantuol
[General]
开aimod看
里面还有些小问题
offset感觉还不准 我每个难度玩起来都有9~12ms的late
[Easy]
00:46:149 (3) - 口哨去掉
01:09:483 转盘这里结束吧 音乐这里有个finish
后面1 2 3压红线不太好 (就算不用2 4clap 也应该保持 2 4白线上有个tick
01:25:483 (5) - 弄得好看点 后面的弧歪的厉害
[Irie's Normal]
k
00:19:149 (2) - 删了这note如何? 这里节奏有点密了
[Flower's Hard]
00:48:816 (4,5,6,7) -实际距离不跟着slider sv变小会更好 1.4左右
01:11:649 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - nc的有点多 感觉乱
[popner's Insane]
k
[Insane]
00:04:150 (1) - 叠在00:02:816 (1) - 上面
00:46:140 (4) - 去了口哨

就这些 good luck and star
eikkaleyd
怎么又是神图,不mod了啦!

以下全是nazi

[荔荔]
00:29:149 (5) - 00:29:316 开始的这个词明显和后面三个slider是同一句话,所以这里应该是一个圈,然后slider放到后面红线上,NC也和后面三个一组的slider一起(像是风车梗专用的节奏),是这样的:
00:31:983 (x) - 感觉漏拍
00:42:316 (4) - 这个似乎可以也做成弯的,我试了下3水平翻转然后顺时针30度,差不多和3对称又和下一个1对称(反正对称啥的都是人随便看的但总比直条好
00:44:316 (1,2,3) - 让3直的和1对称怎样。。1的头尾和2可以在同一条水平线上
00:52:650 (3) - 这里的唱词密集,估计没有让你放长拖条的余裕,目测1/2拖条带reverse会合适一些
01:04:816 (3,4) - 换一下,4那个红线上根本没有歌声
01:05:399 (x) - 上面那个改了的话,推荐这里加个note
01:08:983 (5,6) - 还是换一下。。mukashi mukashi一样的节奏比较好
01:12:650 (4,5) - ^ 因为01:12:816 上没有字,红线换气,01:13:149 上有字
01:27:816 (4) - 用拖条的话感觉最后一拍没压到,也换两个圈?(发现后面几个难度全都是拖条所以这个你看着办?

[泡泡]
00:52:649 (2) - 似乎是一点+一个1/2拖条
01:05:316 (7,8,9,10) - 有三连的应该是前面那个拖条,感受一下,应该不用我细说?
01:17:983 (7,8) - 这里互换一下,重音压在slider开头上应该比结尾上更好

[花花]
00:06:483 (3) - 放在2包围的地方(380 240)DS可能误读概率低一点
神hard耶

↑飞天小女警的赶脚↑

[艾利]
性别不明那我就用个性别不明的译名吧(你是来mod还是来搞笑的
00:14:816 (3) - 好像再往上两格才能包围2
00:33:483 (3) - 移动到(100 176)既不遮盖1也可以包围2的尾巴,注意移动后面的notes

[Easy]
01:10:149 (1,2,3) - 好像应该往前1/2吧这三个?
应该是歌曲的问题,这难度的整体节奏都有点微妙……不过E难度玩家其实都不会感觉到而且rank标准是没问题,建议一下下次做E的时候全都水平或者垂直放。

好啦快rank去
sammy711
From 复读群
red=unrankable
black=strongly recommend
pink=advice
General
Good!
Easy
00:21:483 (1,2) - 滑条尾遮note在Easy里可能不太好(?
如果要这样的话把2和1的结尾对齐,有一点偏差
00:23:483 (3) - 遵守DS
01:18:149 (3) - 遵守DS
Irie's Normal
tag哪里去了
00:09:483 - 无用的绿线
Flower's Hard
01:16:149 (1) - 滑条的中间出界了
01:08:983 (1,2,1,2) - 最好不要和之前 (00:58:316 (1,3,1,2,1,3) - )用过的节奏一样
已经用过1次的梗用第二次会让人觉得乏味吧。可以试试拆成一个slider+一个circle 或者是三个circle

popner's Insane
00:20:316 (5) - 这个换circle? 感觉音乐是重音
泡泡的diff没啥可说的....
Insane
00:08:149 (7) - 滑条中间出界了0.0
00:37:149 (5) - reverse一次? 感觉节奏断了不太舒服
00:41:483 - 无用的绿线
01:01:816 (2) - 这个ctrl+G? 感觉反过来之后flow好一些
01:07:316 (4,5) - 这两个头尾没完全叠在一起啊。。微调一下

my star 快去rank了吧~!
要是能帮忙看下我的图就更好了>.<
Topic Starter
raririn

huafenshaonv wrote:

[General]
开aimod看
里面还有些小问题
offset感觉还不准 我每个难度玩起来都有9~12ms的late
[Easy]
00:46:149 (3) - 口哨去掉 k
01:09:483 转盘这里结束吧 音乐这里有个finish
后面1 2 3压红线不太好 (就算不用2 4clap 也应该保持 2 4白线上有个tick
01:25:483 (5) - 弄得好看点 后面的弧歪的厉害 k
[Irie's Normal]
k
00:19:149 (2) - 删了这note如何? 这里节奏有点密了
[Flower's Hard]
00:48:816 (4,5,6,7) -实际距离不跟着slider sv变小会更好 1.4左右
01:11:649 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - nc的有点多 感觉乱
[popner's Insane]
k
[Insane]
00:04:150 (1) - 叠在00:02:816 (1) - 上面
00:46:140 (4) - 去了口哨 k

就这些 good luck and star

eikkaleyd wrote:

怎么又是神图,不mod了啦!

以下全是nazi

[荔荔]
00:29:149 (5) - 00:29:316 开始的这个词明显和后面三个slider是同一句话,所以这里应该是一个圈,然后slider放到后面红线上,NC也和后面三个一组的slider一起(像是风车梗专用的节奏),是这样的: k
00:31:983 (x) - 感觉漏拍
00:42:316 (4) - 这个似乎可以也做成弯的,我试了下3水平翻转然后顺时针30度,差不多和3对称又和下一个1对称(反正对称啥的都是人随便看的但总比直条好 k
00:44:316 (1,2,3) - 让3直的和1对称怎样。。1的头尾和2可以在同一条水平线上
00:52:650 (3) - 这里的唱词密集,估计没有让你放长拖条的余裕,目测1/2拖条带reverse会合适一些
01:04:816 (3,4) - 换一下,4那个红线上根本没有歌声 k
01:05:399 (x) - 上面那个改了的话,推荐这里加个note
01:08:983 (5,6) - 还是换一下。。mukashi mukashi一样的节奏比较好 k
01:12:650 (4,5) - ^ 因为01:12:816 上没有字,红线换气,01:13:149 上有字 k
01:27:816 (4) - 用拖条的话感觉最后一拍没压到,也换两个圈?(发现后面几个难度全都是拖条所以这个你看着办?

[泡泡]
00:52:649 (2) - 似乎是一点+一个1/2拖条
01:05:316 (7,8,9,10) - 有三连的应该是前面那个拖条,感受一下,应该不用我细说?
01:17:983 (7,8) - 这里互换一下,重音压在slider开头上应该比结尾上更好

[花花]
00:06:483 (3) - 放在2包围的地方(380 240)DS可能误读概率低一点
神hard耶

↑飞天小女警的赶脚↑

[艾利]
性别不明那我就用个性别不明的译名吧(你是来mod还是来搞笑的
00:14:816 (3) - 好像再往上两格才能包围2
00:33:483 (3) - 移动到(100 176)既不遮盖1也可以包围2的尾巴,注意移动后面的notes

[Easy]
01:10:149 (1,2,3) - 好像应该往前1/2吧这三个?
应该是歌曲的问题,这难度的整体节奏都有点微妙……不过E难度玩家其实都不会感觉到而且rank标准是没问题,建议一下下次做E的时候全都水平或者垂直放。

好啦快rank去

sammy711 wrote:

From 复读群
red=unrankable
black=strongly recommend
pink=advice
General
Good!
Easy
00:21:483 (1,2) - 滑条尾遮note在Easy里可能不太好(?
如果要这样的话把2和1的结尾对齐,有一点偏差
00:23:483 (3) - 遵守DS k
01:18:149 (3) - 遵守DS k
Irie's Normal
tag哪里去了
00:09:483 - 无用的绿线 现在貌似不管了
Flower's Hard
01:16:149 (1) - 滑条的中间出界了 ..改惹
01:08:983 (1,2,1,2) - 最好不要和之前 (00:58:316 (1,3,1,2,1,3) - )用过的节奏一样
已经用过1次的梗用第二次会让人觉得乏味吧。可以试试拆成一个slider+一个circle 或者是三个circle

popner's Insane
00:20:316 (5) - 这个换circle? 感觉音乐是重音
泡泡的diff没啥可说的....
Insane
00:08:149 (7) - 滑条中间出界了0.0 k
00:37:149 (5) - reverse一次? 感觉节奏断了不太舒服
00:41:483 - 无用的绿线
01:01:816 (2) - 这个ctrl+G? 感觉反过来之后flow好一些 k
01:07:316 (4,5) - 这两个头尾没完全叠在一起啊。。微调一下 k

my star 快去rank了吧~!
要是能帮忙看下我的图就更好了>.<
感谢mod > <
axschiming
IRC
内容省略表情无数和部分图片

早日rank,gl :D
>技不如人,甘拜下风 :roll:

SPOILER
Axs 13:57:26 
irc
Axs 13:57:31
先说insane
加利福尼亚白尾熊 13:58:10

Axs 14:00:43

Axs 14:00:54
看不区什么问题啊
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:01:07
你可以每个难度都看看
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:01:09
随便挑一点
Axs 14:02:22
随便给你说几个
Axs 14:03:52
00:41:483 (1,2) -
Axs 14:03:54

加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:04:18

Axs 14:04:41
这一段能搞大招啊
Axs 14:04:43

加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:05:06
不要搞事啊
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:05:11
我还想自己能fc
Axs 14:05:23
这里开始跟之前明显有变化,做的太平缓了
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:05:24
大招怎么搞
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:05:29
摆一个看一下啊
Axs 14:05:43
随便做啊
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:05:49
我菜啊
Axs 14:05:54
简单点的就加速或者加距离
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:05:55
随便搞一个来借鉴一下
Axs 14:06:06
是我会在阿鲁鲁那一句全部单点
Axs 14:06:26
等我换个皮肤
Axs 14:06:33
这皮肤只有两个颜色
Axs 14:06:39
作图跟吃屎一样
Axs 14:24:32

加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:24:44

Axs 14:26:51
52,184,41483,5,0,0:0:0:0:
280,172,41649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,84,41816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,172,41983,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,344,42149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,132,42316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,44,42483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,132,42649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,276,42816,5,0,0:0:0:0:
392,64,42983,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,140,43149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,96,43316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,96,43483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,76,43649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
66,253,43816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,229,43983,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,328,44149,6,0,L|396:240,1,80
448,160,44483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,328,44649,2,0,P|340:348|292:332,1,80
112,148,44983,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,260,45149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,336,45316,2,0,P|44:292|44:260,1,80
112,148,45649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,340,45816,1,8,0:0:0:0:
395,248,45983,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,32,46149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,160,46316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,72,46483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,128,46649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,72,46816,6,0,L|464:64,1,80
436,108,47150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,188,47316,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,160,47483,2,0,P|372:208|392:252,1,80
320,296,47816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,292,47983,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Axs 14:27:05
41483-47983
Axs 14:27:08
你看看
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:27:27

Axs 14:27:32
没有配音效
Axs 14:27:34

加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:29:30
嘛的
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:29:31
这么难
Axs 14:29:41

Axs 14:29:55
后面很简单号码
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:30:10
我看看怎么搞进去
Axs 14:30:24
替换就好了
Axs 14:30:32
你先看看效果
Axs 14:30:33

Axs 14:30:46
看时间轴替换
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:31:23
这边乱了啊
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:31:25
得改一下
Axs 14:32:39

Axs 14:32:51
你随便调调
Axs 14:33:03
我一般都喜欢这样摆
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:33:22
阔以
Axs 14:34:22
00:50:816 (1,2,3,4) -
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:33:22
阔以
Axs 14:34:22
00:50:816 (1,2,3,4) -


Axs 14:34:33
来个渐变加速啊
Axs 14:34:58
00:57:316 (1) - 能拉的美观点
Axs 14:37:08
01:26:816 (1,2,3,4) - 这follow纯一条路不好,23之间弄点变化效果好很多
Axs 14:38:19
还有一些两个滑条贴在一起的梗,有些扭的方向follow也不好看,只是个人意见,可以不改
Axs 14:39:29
00:58:150 (3,4,5,6) - 加上7
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:40:30

加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:40:38
不能点看起来好累
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:41:00
01:26:816 (1,2,3,4) 这个我不知道怎么改啊。。
Axs 14:41:11

Axs 14:42:46
看着音乐改
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:42:57
我研究下
Axs 14:43:10
要是音乐往一个调变化用这样还不错
Axs 14:43:19
但是这个结尾用这个不吼
Axs 14:43:31
就方向变变就好
Axs 14:43:38
绕圈啊什么的都行
Axs 14:43:50
你这四个滑条都往左上角走
Axs 14:43:54
很膈应
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:44:00

Axs 14:45:09
你可以12保持32往右上走
Axs 14:45:12
34
Axs 14:45:26
这样分是因为12/34都是四分拍
Axs 14:45:47
或者改改都做成1/2拍
Axs 14:45:56
那123是往一个调调的
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:46:02
ky
Axs 14:46:20
4换个follow给个一锤定音的效果
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:46:45
follow是啥
Axs 14:47:42
移动轨迹啊
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:48:08

Axs 14:49:27

Axs 14:55:26
这个GD肯定是老油条吧
Axs 14:55:31
怎么那么熟练
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:55:50
哪个啊
Axs 14:56:04
GD的i
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:56:27
毕竟
Axs 14:56:56

Axs 14:57:51
跳过了
Axs 14:58:00
没什么特别膈应的
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:58:00

Axs 14:58:15
反正irc本来也不摸gd
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:58:26
随便搞搞 我觉得只有我的有问题
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:58:36
扶老二那个hard我觉得还挺难的
Axs 14:58:48
hard还是弗劳尔
Axs 14:58:59
我不会摸n/e
加利福尼亚白尾熊 14:59:08

Axs 14:59:54
没什么问题啊
Axs 14:59:56

Axs 15:00:38
你觉得难跟他说降低SV
Axs 15:00:48
不过那就要重做了
加利福尼亚白尾熊 15:02:54
就不说了
加利福尼亚白尾熊 15:03:01
我看现在这个星数挺好的
Axs 15:03:23

加利福尼亚白尾熊 15:03:24
你摸完了post一下啊
Axs 15:03:39
我上不去啊
Axs 15:03:41

加利福尼亚白尾熊 15:03:50

加利福尼亚白尾熊 15:03:52
挂vpn
ChemicalJunky
Coming from my modding queue to mod the insane as requested

Insane

00:08:149 (1) -
The slider is coming out from the star pattern but the beginning circle's placement looks off. Try moving it over to the left so it matches the spacing of these notes 00:07:483 (3,4,5,6) - better

00:15:649 (4) - Try moving this circle so it's a more equal distance from this slider's end 00:15:316 (3) - and this slider's beginning 00:15:816 (5) -

00:30:316 (3) - The placement of this slider seems off compared to the previous two. Try moving it so it matches those better

00:56:983 (6,7) - Put more distance between these two notes so it'll match these notes 00:56:316 (2,3,4,5) - better

It's not much but I hoped this helped ^^
Topic Starter
raririn

Suishohana wrote:

Coming from my modding queue to mod the insane as requested

Insane

00:08:149 (1) -
The slider is coming out from the star pattern but the beginning circle's placement looks off. Try moving it over to the left so it matches the spacing of these notes 00:07:483 (3,4,5,6) - better done

00:15:649 (4) - Try moving this circle so it's a more equal distance from this slider's end 00:15:316 (3) - and this slider's beginning 00:15:816 (5) - done

00:30:316 (3) - The placement of this slider seems off compared to the previous two. Try moving it so it matches those better done

00:56:983 (6,7) - Put more distance between these two notes so it'll match these notes 00:56:316 (2,3,4,5) - better done

It's not much but I hoped this helped ^^ it quite helps :>
also fixed some parts as chatted with axschiming
William K
Hi, NM from my queue :3

[Insane]

  1. 00:01:150 (5) - Making this consistent would be better. Since it would be odd if you pass an instrument here but you don't pass it here 00:00:316 (2) - . Consider making it a reversed 1/2 slider. You may make a curved slider or a horizontal one.
  2. 00:04:150 (1,3) - Why does number 1 has higher spacing than the slider, number 1 should have lower spacing than the one in number 3 since the beat in number 3 feels stronger.
  3. 00:08:149 (1,2) - Making a 1/1 gap is fine, actually. But putting 00:08:816 (2) - is not recommended since people might misread it. Consider making 00:08:816 (2) - farer than number 1, like the one you did with 00:09:483 (1) - :3
  4. 00:09:483 (1,2,3) - This would be hard to press imo. Since it has a 1/4 gap between each object, try making these sliders nearer.
  5. 00:18:483 (5) - How about Ctrl+G-ing this one. It would improve the flow to 00:18:816 (1) - and it would also emphasis the drum there better.
  6. 00:37:483 - How about putting a note here, it would be better imo. Skipping a downbeat isn't a very good choice, exception: patterns, maybe. But here, as long as you put the note at the correct place, it would not break the flow.
  7. 00:58:649 (7) - How about making this a 1/2 slider and put a note 00:58:983 - . This 1/2 gap seems odd, I suppose. And it might cause misread by players.
  8. 01:06:150 (3) - Fix blanket if you meant it xD

That's all from me :3 Hope this helps. Your flow's not bad, but try improving your pattern by mapping more.
Topic Starter
raririn

William K wrote:

Hi, NM from my queue :3

[Insane]

  1. 00:01:150 (5) - Making this consistent would be better. Since it would be odd if you pass an instrument here but you don't pass it here 00:00:316 (2) - . Consider making it a reversed 1/2 slider. You may make a curved slider or a horizontal one. thinking about this :/
  2. 00:04:150 (1,3) - Why does number 1 has higher spacing than the slider, number 1 should have lower spacing than the one in number 3 since the beat in number 3 feels stronger. yes you are right. made some change to let it have the same spacing as 1.6
  3. 00:08:149 (1,2) - Making a 1/1 gap is fine, actually. But putting 00:08:816 (2) - is not recommended since people might misread it. Consider making 00:08:816 (2) - farer than number 1, like the one you did with 00:09:483 (1) - :3 done~
  4. 00:09:483 (1,2,3) - This would be hard to press imo. Since it has a 1/4 gap between each object, try making these sliders nearer. not so hard in my view :/ even i can clear it without difficulty..
  5. 00:18:483 (5) - How about Ctrl+G-ing this one. It would improve the flow to 00:18:816 (1) - and it would also emphasis the drum there better. ye, done
  6. 00:37:483 - How about putting a note here, it would be better imo. Skipping a downbeat isn't a very good choice, exception: patterns, maybe. But here, as long as you put the note at the correct place, it would not break the flow. ye, i'm thinking about where to put the note, added anyway :>
  7. 00:58:649 (7) - How about making this a 1/2 slider and put a note 00:58:983 - . This 1/2 gap seems odd, I suppose. And it might cause misread by players. done
  8. 01:06:150 (3) - Fix blanket if you meant it xD fixed

That's all from me :3 Hope this helps. yes it does
Your flow's not bad, but try improving your pattern by mapping more. i will :>
Azure
M4M as your quest
我覺得大致都可以了.. 應該可以找泡了?

[Irie's Normal]
  1. 00:50:483 (3,4) 再稍微包好一點吧~
[popner's Insane]
  1. 全部的音量下降5%~10% 覺得有點吵..
  2. 01:26:816 NC?
[Insane]
  1. 整體來說我覺得下音效的地方可以再用點心,有些重音的地方沒聲音打起來沒實感很可惜。
    排列的話挺亂的... 雖然能讀也能打,flow也沒有太大的問題,但可以再加強
  2. 00:02:483、00:03:816、00:04:483、00:05:149、00:15:816 +clap
  3. 00:04:816 clap拿掉
  4. 00:29:316 +finish
  5. 00:29:649 - 00:31:149 這段裡的slider head都+clap、00:31:316 這個note也加
    00:31:816 slider tail +clap、 00:32:149 +finish (整段弄好你自己聽聽看差別在哪)
  6. 00:47:816 (5)、00:49:150 (5) +clap
  7. 還有一些小地方24clap應該算是基本,我建議再多聽聽歌來下音效會好一點
Cyc17-
把mod这件事鸽了几万年惹,有些可能比较弱智请酌情处理
毕竟我就是个弱智吖~

[Insane]
整体建议距离稍微拉开一点,虽然爬行感觉不错总觉不够爽orz

  1. 00:08:816 (2) - 这个slider换一下方向(?
  2. 00:22:816 (1) - 这里之后总觉得漏了一拍 打的时候没什么很大的感觉就是了
    四暗刻了一下00:22:983可以加个note填充一下(不加也没啥问题
  3. 00:29:649 (1,2,3) - 只是一个意见3个slider都做变速逐渐拉长啊!不变速不是咸鱼吗!
  4. 01:23:649 (4) - 前面两个短滑条都是方向这个也继续下来怎么样
大概这些了,其他没啥了觉得大概就是整体榜面拉开一点类似00:11:650这类节奏拉开段的连打可以塞一点(塞满它!)
>相当精彩的比赛
祝早日rank
Flask
拉拉鈴兒霸氣回歸

edit: 233祝早日rank啊 4年好快啊

Artist: リリアナシスターズ
Artist Unicode: Liliana Sisters
Title: Lifeる is LOVEる!! (TVサイズ)
Title Unicode: Life-Ru is LOVE-Ru!! (TV Size)
Tags: 姫小路秋子 木戸衣吹 那須原アナスタシア 茅原実里 猿渡銀兵衛春臣 下田麻美 二階堂嵐 喜多村英梨

我來做個gd吧
Topic Starter
raririn

Flask wrote:

拉拉鈴兒霸氣回歸

edit: 233祝早日rank啊 4年好快啊

Artist: リリアナシスターズ
Artist Unicode: Liliana Sisters
Title: Lifeる is LOVEる!! (TVサイズ)
Title Unicode: Life-Ru is LOVE-Ru!! (TV Size)
Tags: 姫小路秋子 木戸衣吹 那須原アナスタシア 茅原実里 猿渡銀兵衛春臣 下田麻美 二階堂嵐 喜多村英梨

我來做個gd吧
诶可以正好不用找人deny了 thx~
可以啊~ 来一个Fchan's Extra
Blitzfrog
Heeey~
From my queue:

Insane
00:04:816 (4,5) - Should be closer together
00:22:649 - A hitcircle here will flow better
00:24:149 (1) - Shorten this to 00:24:649 and add HC after it
00:28:983 (4) - Remove this, due to your distance snap as well, it makes it seem like you're mapping to the background music but you're mapping to the vocals
01:26:649 (1,1) - Stack these or move that hitcircle elsewhere, very confusing!

Easy
00:00:150 (1,2,3) - This looks better imo

00:07:483 (2,3) - Stack these, makes more sense to me
00:08:149 (1) - Shorten this till 00:10:483 and add stuff after it, because the vocal ends here and a new flow starts
01:02:483 - Missing a hitcircle here, breaks flow
01:07:983 (1) - Spinner is too short, replace this with a slider art
01:26:816 (1) - ^ (I can only get 3000 on this, don't think it's suitable for 1 star)
Reillia
[General]
Add video easy, normal and popner's insane diff

[Easy]
00:04:816 (1,2,3) - stack is not good idea on easy diff. i recommend to fix it
00:21:483 (1,2) - ^
00:55:983 (1,1) - Leave plenty of recovery time, especially after spinners
01:07:983 (1,1) - ^

[Irie's Normal]
00:08:816 (2,3) - this flow is too bad. plz fix like this 00:58:983 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - this rhythm is so irregular how about fix like this? 01:09:484 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ^

[Flower's Hard]
00:15:816 (7,8) - why jump this? it's not powerful rhythm in here.

[popner's Insane]
00:10:649 (4,1) - how about increase distance? it's too close
00:59:733 (2) - remove this note. here is no 1/4 rhythm
01:08:733 (8,12,14) - ^
01:17:233 (2,4) - ^
01:27:816 (7,8) - how about change like this?
GL!
KuroNeko1509
Short NM from the queue
It's short because It pretty clean ~ Good luck on ranking o/



[Insane]

  • 00:11:650 (4,5,6) - notes 4 and 5 feel a little awkward and create a sensation of not being 1/4 triple, I think you should move them a bit closer together ~ Otherwise it makes it look like its 1/2 so its confusing ~_~


    00:25:483 (1,2,3) - I think this could be improved~ she starts singing su su meeee at this part ( 00:25:483 (1) - ) so i think thats where your slider should be starting~ make it a reverse slider; delete note 3 and create a new slider here ( 00:25:983 - ) that goes until there ( 00:26:316 - ) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6075040


    00:29:149 (5) - shouldn't this slider be shaped as the following sliders are? It would make it consistent with ( 01:13:483 (1,2,3,4) - )?


    01:20:816 (5) - this feels weird to me, I think making it a triple would be better~


    01:22:983 (2,3) - same here, i think these sliders dont fit so well, I'd suggest making them into jumps, like add a note on white and red lines so that they would be small jumps


    01:28:066 - I think you should add a spinner here, and make it go until here ( 01:28:983 - )
Topic Starter
raririn

Azure wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 整體來說我覺得下音效的地方可以再用點心,有些重音的地方沒聲音打起來沒實感很可惜。
    排列的話挺亂的... 雖然能讀也能打,flow也沒有太大的問題,但可以再加強
  2. 00:02:483、00:03:816、00:04:483、00:05:149、00:15:816 +clap
  3. 00:04:816 clap拿掉
  4. 00:29:316 +finish
  5. 00:29:649 - 00:31:149 這段裡的slider head都+clap、00:31:316 這個note也加
    00:31:816 slider tail +clap、 00:32:149 +finish (整段弄好你自己聽聽看差別在哪)
  6. 00:47:816 (5)、00:49:150 (5) +clap
  7. 還有一些小地方24clap應該算是基本,我建議再多聽聽歌來下音效會好一點
全部改了:<< 我再听一遍自己修一修 感谢公主~

Cyc17- wrote:

[Insane]
整体建议距离稍微拉开一点,虽然爬行感觉不错总觉不够爽orz

  1. 00:08:816 (2) - 这个slider换一下方向(?
  2. 00:22:816 (1) - 这里之后总觉得漏了一拍 打的时候没什么很大的感觉就是了
    四暗刻了一下00:22:983可以加个note填充一下(不加也没啥问题 感觉和后面的3又很奇怪 加了个NC 观望一下
  3. 00:29:649 (1,2,3) - 只是一个意见3个slider都做变速逐渐拉长啊!不变速不是咸鱼吗! .....不知道怎么排啊 need示例
  4. 01:23:649 (4) - 前面两个短滑条都是方向这个也继续下来怎么样
大概这些了,其他没啥了觉得大概就是整体榜面拉开一点类似00:11:650这类节奏拉开段的连打可以塞一点(塞满它!)
>相当精彩的比赛
祝早日rank
没有说的都改了

Flask wrote:

Artist: リリアナシスターズ
Artist Unicode: Liliana Sisters
Title: Lifeる is LOVEる!! (TVサイズ)
Title Unicode: Life-Ru is LOVE-Ru!! (TV Size)
Tags: 姫小路秋子 木戸衣吹 那須原アナスタシア 茅原実里 猿渡銀兵衛春臣 下田麻美 二階堂嵐 喜多村英梨
有一个小问题啊现在还能不能写TV size? 我确认一下

Blitzfrog wrote:

Heeey~
From my queue:

Insane
00:04:816 (4,5) - Should be closer together orz why
00:22:649 - A hitcircle here will flow better
00:24:149 (1) - Shorten this to 00:24:649 and add HC after it
00:28:983 (4) - Remove this, due to your distance snap as well, it makes it seem like you're mapping to the background music but you're mapping to the vocals
01:26:649 (1,1) - Stack these or move that hitcircle elsewhere, very confusing! :<< i meant to be not stacked...

Easy
00:00:150 (1,2,3) - This looks better imo

00:07:483 (2,3) - Stack these, makes more sense to me
00:08:149 (1) - Shorten this till 00:10:483 and add stuff after it, because the vocal ends here and a new flow starts
01:02:483 - Missing a hitcircle here, breaks flow
01:07:983 (1) - Spinner is too short, replace this with a slider art
01:26:816 (1) - ^ (I can only get 3000 on this, don't think it's suitable for 1 star)

mostly fixed

[C u r i] wrote:

[General]
Add video easy, normal and popner's insane diff

[Easy]
00:04:816 (1,2,3) - stack is not good idea on easy diff. i recommend to fix it
00:21:483 (1,2) - ^
00:55:983 (1,1) - Leave plenty of recovery time, especially after spinners
01:07:983 (1,1) - ^
almost all done

KuroNeko1509 wrote:

Short NM from the queue
It's short because It pretty clean ~ Good luck on ranking o/



[Insane]

  • 00:11:650 (4,5,6) - notes 4 and 5 feel a little awkward and create a sensation of not being 1/4 triple, I think you should move them a bit closer together ~ Otherwise it makes it look like its 1/2 so its confusing ~_~


    00:25:483 (1,2,3) - I think this could be improved~ she starts singing su su meeee at this part ( 00:25:483 (1) - ) so i think thats where your slider should be starting~ make it a reverse slider; delete note 3 and create a new slider here ( 00:25:983 - ) that goes until there ( 00:26:316 - ) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6075040


    00:29:149 (5) - shouldn't this slider be shaped as the following sliders are? It would make it consistent with ( 01:13:483 (1,2,3,4) - )?


    01:20:816 (5) - this feels weird to me, I think making it a triple would be better~


    01:22:983 (2,3) - same here, i think these sliders dont fit so well, I'd suggest making them into jumps, like add a note on white and red lines so that they would be small jumps


    01:28:066 - I think you should add a spinner here, and make it go until here ( 01:28:983 - )
fixed most points :>
About Irie Miyuki, Flower and popner's diffs, I will ask if they are still willing to change by themselves :>
Fycho
一转眼就3年了
来射点星星
Topic Starter
raririn

Fycho wrote:

一转眼就3年了
来射点星星
挖 蟹蟹~
-[Hikari]-
啊我来摸图了

[Easy]
  1. 00:04:816 (1,2,3) - Easy就别叠了
  2. 00:11:483 (1) - 转盘后得空一小节,所以这个note得删
  3. 00:14:816 (1) - 别NC,下一个再NC,然后00:17:483 (1) - 别NC
  4. 00:21:483 (1,2) - 别叠
  5. 00:41:483 (1,2) - 感觉可以blanket一个
  6. 00:46:149 (3) - 变速NC提醒下
  7. 00:59:316 (1) - 01:09:983 (1) - 转盘后空4拍
  8. 01:13:483 (1) - 间距小了
  9. 01:24:149 (4) - 可以blanket下
  10. 感觉整个diff的NC都有点乱,要不无脑大白线吧(
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:149 (2) - 可以blanket一下
  2. 00:28:149 (3) - 可以注意下和前两个的间距
  3. 01:17:483 (1,2,3) - 没包好
  4. 感觉难度低了点…和Hard的Gap有点大
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:983 - 感觉漏了不太好?
  2. 01:06:983 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
[popner's Insane]
  1. 00:31:483 (2) - 感觉没摆好?
  2. 01:13:816 (2,3,4) - 可以摆开些
[Insane]
  1. 00:01:150 (5,1) - blanket
  2. 00:15:816 (5,1) - 可以摆开些
  3. 00:18:983 (2,1) - 这俩不好看(
  4. 00:56:316 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 2016了长钝角跳感觉有点不符合时代(
  5. 01:04:150 (1) - 没摆到左右对称
  6. 两个insane难度太靠近而且太低了……
Topic Starter
raririn

-[Hikari]- wrote:

啊我来摸图了

[Easy]
  1. 00:04:816 (1,2,3) - Easy就别叠了 k
  2. 00:11:483 (1) - 转盘后得空一小节,所以这个note得删 k
  3. 00:14:816 (1) - 别NC,下一个再NC,然后00:17:483 (1) - 别NC
  4. 00:21:483 (1,2) - 别叠 k
  5. 00:41:483 (1,2) - 感觉可以blanket一个 k
  6. 00:46:149 (3) - 变速NC提醒下
  7. 00:59:316 (1) - 01:09:983 (1) - 转盘后空4拍 k
  8. 01:13:483 (1) - 间距小了 k
  9. 01:24:149 (4) - 可以blanket下 k
  10. 感觉整个diff的NC都有点乱,要不无脑大白线吧( 回头理一下
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:149 (2) - 可以blanket一下
  2. 00:28:149 (3) - 可以注意下和前两个的间距
  3. 01:17:483 (1,2,3) - 没包好
  4. 感觉难度低了点…和Hard的Gap有点大 显然福老二too guichu
    我先问问美雪姥爷还回不回来改mod
[Hard]
  1. 00:12:983 - 感觉漏了不太好?
  2. 01:06:983 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
[popner's Insane]
  1. 00:31:483 (2) - 感觉没摆好?
  2. 01:13:816 (2,3,4) - 可以摆开些
[Insane]
  1. 00:01:150 (5,1) - blanket k
  2. 00:15:816 (5,1) - 可以摆开些 k
  3. 00:18:983 (2,1) - 这俩不好看( 荣我思考一下
  4. 00:56:316 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 2016了长钝角跳感觉有点不符合时代( ^
  5. 01:04:150 (1) - 没摆到左右对称 k
  6. 两个insane难度太靠近而且太低了……
先意念回一下摸得 去上电路了 槽 今天怎么没电路课的
Atrue
Yohalo~ 可以顺手求个mu么?
[General]
See Flask's post for the correct metadata about the title. Offiicial site for the name of the song Also I prefer using the original Japanese Source. I don't know why but there is no "no vidio" version in beatmap page, but for now let's see if it will affect ranking process.
[Easy]
  1. Minor Picks
    00:33:483 (1) - Blanket issue, you may need to move the next slider for slight adjustment. 01:26:483 - I think you can actually end the slider here at 01:26:649 to cover the vocal better.
[Irie's Normal]
  1. Structrual Issue
    00:58:816 - This place feels off. You are trying to cover the drum in this kiai but just left the first and strongest one uncovered. I would suggest adding a note here to cover the strong beat and make it more consistent.
[Flower's Hard]
  1. Structrual Issue
    AR is quite low and stuffs are showing up together, so I would suggest AR = 7.5.
[popner's Insane]
  1. Minor Picks
    01:25:483 (1) - This place the jump suddenly become closer, personally I would try to keep the distance to make it feel even. You may also want to make some minor adjustments on some other objects accordingly.
[Insane]
  1. Structrual Issue
    Structure is quite random and need some improvement, some of the hitsound is also not reasonable enough.
    00:21:483 - This part you can make the volume lower to make comparison with latter parts. If you do so, you may want to gradually get more valume on 00:29:649 this part.
    00:30:649 - 00:30:983 - 00:31:316 - To keep consistency with previous sliders, you can still apply clap onto the places.
    00:58:233 - This song's one difficulty is that the clap and vocal is not so fit, so when you only covered claps, and you are actually following the singers, it will feel off. The solution is perhaps adding whistles onto the vocal you are following.
  2. Minor Picks
    00:14:150 (3) - Stacking with 00:13:316 (8) - would make it more tidy.
    00:14:650 (1,2,3) - Distance between sliders looks really random. Personally I would suggest making something like this to balance the distance. Tentative solution:00:22:149 (3) - This slider can get a better and balanced shape like this:00:31:649 (1) - Overlapped and random place to put this slider. You can try to put it on 00:32:816 (3) .
    00:44:983 (3) - Blanket is not perfect here.
    00:49:816 (2,3,4) - This flow is pretty strange to get a sudden change of direction of the slider. Personally I would rather see this kind of flow:00:54:150 (3,4) - Need some small adjustments if you want to make a square. But if you are willing to make the flow and overall fitness better, this is what I suggested:00:59:650 (6) - I would perfer doing this rather than clustering the two sliders together:01:02:150 (3,4,5) - You can have a better blanket.
    01:03:483 (3,4,5) - Talking about the flow, I would rather have this: 01:04:150 (1,2,3) - Both blankets are not good here. Try this:01:18:816 - This should not be a clap considering the background sound. You can use normal-hitnormal or just whistle to emphasize it if you want.
    01:26:316 - This part I think it's good to apply normal-hitnormal on for emphasizing the slider heads and circles. Like this part:00:29:649 .
Forum PM for any questions related. Thank you!
kanor
[Normal]
00:11:483 (2) - 这个直接复制前一个ctrl+h j比较舒服,flow也是
00:12:149 (3) - 这种要不要试试3/4滑条折返?或者00:17:483 (3,4) - 这样
01:20:149 (1,2) - 像这种排列最好还是注意下blanket吧,不然挺丑
01:22:816 (1,2,3) - ^
[Hard]
00:06:483 (3,4) - 之前这里都没跳这里怎么跳啦
00:17:316 (1,2) - 丑
01:00:983 (1,2,3) - 这里是不是不够对称啊
01:02:316 (2,3) - blanket
后面连个摸不动,不怎么会摸老图......
主难度的主歌那里建议DS稍微再大点,NOTE之间不要挨着就可以了,lap总觉得怪怪的
easy感觉问题比较多,一个是NC,另一个是节奏,我觉得1/1塞爆可能反而更舒服一点......
扑面而来的老图风格
GL :)
Topic Starter
raririn

Atrue wrote:

Yohalo~ 可以顺手求个mu么? done :>
[General]
See Flask's post for the correct metadata about the title. Offiicial site for the name of the song Also I prefer using the original Japanese Source. I don't know why but there is no "no vidio" version in beatmap page, but for now let's see if it will affect ranking process. gotta change the metadata on weekend otherwise i'd have to redl the map with the poor speed at home ;_;
[Easy]
  1. Minor Picks
    00:33:483 (1) - Blanket issue, you may need to move the next slider for slight adjustment. 01:26:483 - I think you can actually end the slider here at 01:26:649 to cover the vocal better.
[Insane]
  1. Structrual Issue
    Structure is quite random and need some improvement, some of the hitsound is also not reasonable enough.
    00:21:483 - This part you can make the volume lower to make comparison with latter parts. If you do so, you may want to gradually get more valume on 00:29:649 this part. yea done
    00:30:649 - 00:30:983 - 00:31:316 - To keep consistency with previous sliders, you can still apply clap onto the places. k
    00:58:233 - This song's one difficulty is that the clap and vocal is not so fit, so when you only covered claps, and you are actually following the singers, it will feel off. The solution is perhaps adding whistles onto the vocal you are following. done now. considering if normalwhistle fits better?
  2. Minor Picks
    00:14:150 (3) - Stacking with 00:13:316 (8) - would make it more tidy. k
    00:14:650 (1,2,3) - Distance between sliders looks really random. Personally I would suggest making something like this to balance the distance. Tentative solution: k
    00:22:149 (3) - This slider can get a better and balanced shape like this: I didn't mean to let it be like this orz it used to have only 2 ticks... perhaps i accidentally add 1 tick without being aware lol
    00:31:649 (1) - Overlapped and random place to put this slider. You can try to put it on 00:32:816 (3) . k
    00:44:983 (3) - Blanket is not perfect here. k
    00:49:816 (2,3,4) - This flow is pretty strange to get a sudden change of direction of the slider. Personally I would rather see this kind of flow: k
    00:54:150 (3,4) - Need some small adjustments if you want to make a square. But if you are willing to make the flow and overall fitness better, this is what I suggested: k
    00:59:650 (6) - I would perfer doing this rather than clustering the two sliders together:01:02:150 (3,4,5) - You can have a better blanket. k
    01:03:483 (3,4,5) - Talking about the flow, I would rather have this: k
    01:04:150 (1,2,3) - Both blankets are not good here. Try this: k
    01:18:816 - This should not be a clap considering the background sound. You can use normal-hitnormal or just whistle to emphasize it if you want. k
    01:26:316 - This part I think it's good to apply normal-hitnormal on for emphasizing the slider heads and circles. Like this part:00:29:649 . k



Forum PM for any questions related. Thank you!

no actual question but
i didn't mean to have blankets or make squares in some patterns :p
ofc, they might look better so i applied the changes.

About the guest diffs, i'm kinda sure that i can make small changes for flower but i'd ask popner and miyuki if they are still willing to change by themselves orz
福老二根本不理我

Very helpful mod indeed, thanks so much!
@kanor 反正没一个是给我的╮(╯_╰)╭....不quote回复了
NC回家了再理一下
老(烂)图风格



Edit:
Changed the metadata and uploaded~
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