1. Kasha Grip (6,38 stars, 1387 notes)

murutattack wrote:

ok now for the real deal :>

#modreqs

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Kasha Grip

00:01:687 (2) - I think better just spinner instead as it fits it better. Keeping slider.
00:34:977 (10) - Make this one H-dash, by moving both (9,10) a bit left. Moved to X148
01:01:106 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I remember this note, but I remember this one is a *Nuked* pattern, which is not recommended. I suggest if you still wish to pattern this, at least slope each of the notes like left, or right, especially (2,4,6).Re Done this. Need recheck
01:51:526 (5) - Really wish if this one was a bit climax one, like ctrl+H this whole slider. Looks Better. Good idea
02:13:203 (2) - The ending slider is too hard to catch, a little bit nerf might well so, like moving the end slider to x:52 y:384 I don't see difference but ok.
02:24:042 (2) - Stronger voice emphasize, really fit for h-dash one, try move to x:312. Aright
03:17:848 (4) - No. Don`t just shorten the length on 03:16:687 (3) to 03:17:655 and move the 03:17:945 (5) to 03:18:042 and end the slider to 03:19:397. Ehh ok..
03:21:332 (1,2,3) - The beat seems off. Like the (2) suppose to be on 03:21:816 (2), (1) should be end on 03:21:719, and (3) was on 03:21:913 (3) and end on 03:22:493. I'll see what other will have to say. Keeping it
03:44:558 (1) - Move the 4th point slider to x:276 y:8 as i think its kinda sharp to catch even through its beginning of the kiai time. I see no difference but ok
03:47:655 (1) - Move a bit left, just making a bit smooth to the flow. Moved
03:50:558 (6) - Seems better if make a bit distance between (6) and 03:50:752 (1) like moving to x:376. Moved Circle to X:376 if its what you mean.
03:52:300 (1) 03:53:074 (2)- Ctrl+H seems fits with the beat and vocal. But the 03:53:074 (2), maybe need to shorten the slider to 03:53:655. Good idea. And looks better.
04:03:139 (5) - Move a bit right nearer to previous notes since kinda hard when catching note after h-dash. Moved circle closer a bit and Slider.
04:43:106 (2) - Looks clean if move this note to x:352. This part still will need fixes but ok
04:57:332 (1) - Straight slider after H-dash hmm... really questionable pattern but i suggest do slope slider, while the next one will be straight slider. Tilted 1st slider. 2nd untouched
05:01:784 (5) - H-dash seems like a nice idea through. Idk if i did it correct

Overall, I`m not really sure with the slider through, with the beats, especially 04:58:881 (1,2,3,4,5), which ends on white tick, which can be confusing to play, so i suggest end the slider to the blue tick, then start new slider on white tick. Might wanted to revise most of the sliders in whole map.
But i see the idea of the map already, might need a lot of modding/fixing through. Didn't wanted to do reverse one. So i did something WEIRD.
Wanted to do slider hell map similar to HW one but ctb version as convert is impossible to SS

Good luck for ranking
(Sorry about late, keyboard broken since yesterday )

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

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I feel like hp4 is really low for this map btw. even if you wanted to make it more accessible/easier i feel like hp4 is overdoing it for overdose. i would choose 5.5 or 6 but thats me. I'll change it while i think map is ready to rank and bother bn. Placeholder for testplays. That's why its 4. You can guess what i mean

00:19:977 (10,11,1) - unexpected jump here tbh. there are times im fine with this but in a stream im not. What i should do here? Recheck needed if now its better. Replaced one hdash

00:43:397 (1,2,3,4,5) - for me, its really hard to catch all of the droplets here. i would curve them or something so that its slightly easier. You are right. Curved them

01:03:526 (1) - make this a hyper? Needed to replace with two circles to make hyper to this and not miss next circle from slider.. ok

01:16:106 (2) - ^ Right.. Pixel jump

01:35:752 (3,1) - spacing between these guys feels like pixel jump. i would either make hyper or nerf. 1st option

01:40:493 (8,1) - this trasnsition seems like a nice place to put a hyper. Did a little redid. On next impossible.. need to redo pattern

03:01:687 (6,1) - shoudnt 6 be a hyper? Let it do

03:56:171 (4,5) - distance between 4 and 5 feel like pixel jump. make it a hyper. Forgot about this tiny fix. Done

gaaraati wrote:

RE:M4M

general

Not enough curved-patterns
Only the middle of the map is used.
Monotonous patterns

note placements

00:39:139 x:416 OK
00:39:913 x:64 Not sure. Feels like pixel jump
00:43:397 - 00:45:719 Put them closer to each other so they won't be a pain to acc and this pattern feels like a star rating booster here. I know about this. I wait for centrain person to help me with it.. but.. stuff only delays it
00:51:139 - 01:03:526 Please make patterns and jumps on 1 side of the map not only the middle. It feels bad to play. Like above
01:51:526 - 01:53:074 NO NO NO. Just no. If this was a convert map I'd be okay to play a pattern like this... but since this is a ctb map please make it not so steep. Every player have it own style to play.

Make some back and forth non-hyper jumps in 1/4th if possible.

You made these mistakes quite a few times in the map please check them all then fix them. These are just little things but they make the map monotonous, unpalatable and just gives it a bad feeling. Although I like maps that differ from the average this map should resemble the average just a bit more.

There i don't know why people faved this map. And.. no one said me this before.... i try to see what i can do but can't promise.

summary

I really want to like this map but it feels too monotonous for me right now for its length. The music and the stile of mapping is okay since it is very similar to the original map in terms of complex design. In other words. I have no big problem with it other than those little things that make it feel bad.
If you fix them get some more mods and I'm sure it'll be an easy ranked . Good luck m8!

SYAHME wrote:

I want 2 kudosu xD

BoberOfDarkness wrote:

Proponowałbym przerobinie tych streamów

00:26:752 (1,2,3,4) -

00:29:461 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -

00:32:558 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -

00:33:719 (1,2,3,4) -


Randomowy hyperdash, totalnie nie pasuje 00:35:268 (3,4) -

00:51:816 (1,2) - ^

00:57:913 (3,4) - ^

01:00:623 (3,4) - ^

Dodawaj hyperdashe tylko do mocnych dźwięków, bo do tych one po prostu nie pasują

Popraw wygląd pls: 01:46:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,1) -


Totalnie randomowy pattern, nie pasuje zbytnio: 01:51:526 (1,2,3,4) -

Proszę Cię nie rób takich płaskich streamów jak te: 01:53:461 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - proponuje re:work

Slidery tutaj to UNDERMAP zastąp streamami pls: 02:27:139 (1,2) -

Ogółem w skrócie to tyle. Propunuje zmiany zastosować na całej długości mapy.

1. 00:24:816 (1) - unnecessary NC?
2. 00:25:203 (1,2,3,4) - I'm sure you can do this better, by replacing it with a nice flow stream?
3. 00:25:590 (1) 00:25:977 (1) - unnecessary NCs?
4. 00:40:687 (5) - doesn't fit the melody and vocal and all. try to replace it with this maybe?
   screen

   
5. 00:57:719 (1,2,3) - nuu, this anti flow is too bad, try to remove this ;c
6. 01:19:784 (2,3) - decrease the distance a little bit
7. 02:00:623 (4,1) - ^
8. 02:37:203 (3,4) - hell no ^
9. 02:59:461 (5,1) - ^
10. 02:59:655 (1,2,3,4) - actually pretty bad decision for anti flow breaking, maybe you could think of something more fun and catchable?
11. 03:43:010 (1,2) - ^
12. 03:59:848 (4,1) - reduce the distance here
13. 04:18:332 (2) =>x316, so there won't be any pixels
14. 04:42:139 (4,1) - reduce the distance here, or make a HD, like you did in the same pattern 1 sec ago
15. 04:52:977 (4,5) - enough pixels! ^

Myle wrote:

hi I'm here to deal with it ((((:
[Kasha Grip]

1. 00:24:816 (1) - unnecessary NC? Fix
2. 00:25:203 (1,2,3,4) - I'm sure you can do this better, by replacing it with a nice flow stream? Must be few anty flow
3. 00:25:590 (1) 00:25:977 (1) - unnecessary NCs? Fix
4. 00:40:687 (5) - doesn't fit the melody and vocal and all. try to replace it with this maybe?This follows more vocal. On red tick hears strong D
   screen

   
5. 00:57:719 (1,2,3) - nuu, this anti flow is too bad, try to remove this ;cI tried to did something but idk if right.
6. 01:19:784 (2,3) - decrease the distance a little bit moved to x360 (nerfed by 0.30x)
7. 02:00:623 (4,1) - ^ Difficult to do something there but... ok i guess x200 will be ok
8. 02:37:203 (3,4) - hell no ^ Idk what you mean there..
9. 02:59:461 (5,1) - ^ Same.. This hdash is for strong sound from vocal
10. 02:59:655 (1,2,3,4) - actually pretty bad decision for anti flow breaking, maybe you could think of something more fun and catchable? Didn't wanted to do repeatable patterns. I nerfed it a bit to allow catch all droplets
11. 03:43:010 (1,2) - ^ 3rd request to change this one.. Aright. Gonna do it..
12. 03:59:848 (4,1) - reduce the distance here Right
13. 04:18:332 (2) =>x316, so there won't be any pixels Aright. No more pixels
14. 04:42:139 (4,1) - reduce the distance here, or make a HD, like you did in the same pattern 1 sec ago Finally a fix to this pattern
15. 04:52:977 (4,5) - enough pixels! ^ Added there missing Hdash

welp that's it

FastYoshi wrote:

Hello
From modding queue request

Hell Mod

00:01:590 (1) - Delete this circle. Useless.. 00:01:687 (2) - then just move this slider to the white tick. (Where the circle has been deleted) Ok

00:25:203 (1) - Move to x:152 Ok

00:39:139 (1) - Just a recommendation, move this slider to x:120 to add a mouvement to the left instead of a small mouvement to the right. Nah

01:32:268 - Reduce this slider and then add another, like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6385542, it follows the vocal voice better. Ok. Looks better.

01:55:784 (2) - Move this slider to x:0 Let it be

02:06:719 (4) - Move this slider to x:112, we need a hdash between (3) and (4). Aright. Removed after pixel jump too

02:08:558 (6) - Shorten the beginning of the slider a little bit to the right, then since the slider will shorten too from the ticks, extend the end of the slider to the left, to make it back to original ticks. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6385651 then move it to x:68. Why this? It's too simplify catching the droplets at beginning.
I don't see difference but ok
02:20:558 (4) - Move this slider to x:284, then ctrl+g. I were used to this short anti flow method but ok

03:00:526 (3) - Rotate this slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6385781 Ok but keeped hdash to 4

03:12:913 - Add a circle here, missing beat. I just expaded slider 4


04:39:623 (2) - Move to x:440, easy shit miss lol Looks like something you messed with editor. It is on x420

04:40:300 - 04:41:752 Is there another way to make this thing slightly easier. And try make them perfectly snap distance.
04:41:848 - 04:42:913 Same here. Try shorten their distance between each. ^ and here fixed distances and slight nerfed. Still. Maked it visible on editor too ;s

05:04:687 (3) - This is way too far, try x:424 Ok

05:19:010 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6387277 Make slider ending shorter. Unsure about this but ok

05:48:429 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6387294
Make a final hell slider like this (x:88). Look at bookmarks on top: it's for every `cat meows` and the direction change of the slider. I think this is way more better than what you did. Good idea but a bit did on own way

Those hell sliders you called are pretty fine to me, it is possible to SS.......... Hollow wings one is SSable only with EZHT. I make it SSable to get this ranked

Good luck hell slider maker. xd

Sypro2000 wrote:

Jak dla mnie mapa spoko ale jest coś co myślę że powinieneś zmienić.

SPOILER

02:14:752 (1) - Całkowicie przemienić te slidery. Ogólnie są spk ale jak dla mnie to wgl nie pasuje do gry a szczególnie do takiej piosenki. Zamiast śpiewu masz jeszcze rytm którego można by się trzymać np zamiast slidera poustawiaj circle i wszystko inne ale w szybszy sposób :

https://megawrzuta.pl/download/1a0e54f5 ... 133ff.html
Nie. Mapa ma byc slider hellem

02:13:203 (2) - te też są mozolne. Nie. Mapa ma byc slider hellem. Na dodatek musial bym zielone linie usunac

00:48:526 (2) - skoro tu masz circla w środku czyli taki jakby stream to czemu nie zrobiłbyś tego samego ale wcześniej Nuta tu pasuje. Odziwo zaden z poprzednich moderow nic nie mial do tego.. procz tego zeby lekko znerfic slidera ;s
00:40:687 (5,6) - Wiem. Zirox mi to wypatrzyl.

00:51:526 (1,2,3,1) - takie wzmianki potrójnych streamów są niepotrzebne. Trzymaj się taktu 1/4 nie ma po co kombinować bo to nie pasuje. Poczekam co Qat o tym pomysli

01:05:461 (1,2) - Robione do śpiewu. Tak jak trzymasz się tych klocków co są za tymi co pokazałem jest dobre tylko momentami brakuje mi czasem lekkich streamów ale to moja koncepcja ;_). Przesunalem drugi slider do czerwonej linii. to Ma BYC Slider hell ;s nie onoken lub stream hell

01:19:397 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ten moment pokażę w moim wykonaniu jak mógłby lecieć. https://megawrzuta.pl/download/c9e54cf1 ... 91010.html Ten moment jest robiony pod vocal

01:54:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - brakuje dokończenia streama. Jest jeszcze ten takt i będzie lepiej jak tam wstawisz circla i we wszystkich innych podobnych do tego momentach A moze zmienie je w slidery? Nie ruszone

01:56:171 (1,2,3,4,5) - Jak już robisz takt 1/4 to się go trzymaj. A nawet jeżeli to ustaw te slidery trochę inaczej bo to nie pasuje Naprawione

W twojej mapie jest dużo momentów gdzie słychać beat 1/4 a stawiasz klocki pod śpiew. Oczywiście nie zawsze to jest złe ale na tym poziome trudności i jeżeli wgl chodzi o tą mapkę to jest to złe. 03:26:364 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I ogólnie to co chciałem przekazać aby trzymać się jednego rytmu i abyś zmienił takie długe slidery bo to szczególnie psuje mapkę i nie wstawianie nie potrzebnych taktów w środku a będzie oki. Opis mapy mowi za siebie. Znajdz druga mape podonba mape. Nie liczac.. dinozaura lub pupa ;s Bo te to sa raki czystej masci speedrankedowane

Mapa jest dobra. Dużo pracy na pewno w nią włożyłeś. Mam nadzieję że posłużyłem pomocą. Pozdrawiam powodzenia

FastYoshi wrote:

Heyhey

My play of this map

Lol holy god. I think i only miss 3-4 droplets and one miss?




If this was ranked right now...... I want 'em pp!!! xd

Krfawy wrote:

~ LOL ~

Kasha Grip

1. 01:13:300 (3) - tak trochę mniej pasuje tutaj moim zdaniem ten obiekt z powodu wokalu, nawet jeżeli to podkreśla basy które są dokładnie takie same tutaj: 01:10:397 (7) - Vocal
2. 01:14:461 (1,2) - Tutaj dziwnie się to gra/dziwnie to brzmi bo najpierw: pierwszy dźwięk kończy się tutaj: 01:14:461 - a dalej kontynuujesz dźwięki kolejną jedną czwartą. Następnie są czwórki tutaj: 01:14:655 (5,6) - ale dźwięki, których nie ma, lub nie są aż tak wyraziste, też są zmapowane tam: 01:14:848 - ;Dalej jest okej, ale wcześniej radzę usunąć/zmodyfikować aby nie brzmiało aż tak sztucznie. XD Nic innego nie pasuje
3. 01:17:461 (5) - finisz na końcu proszę Fix
4. 01:18:526 (2) - będzie brzmiało lepiej jak slajder zaczynać się będzie tam: 01:18:623 - (i jak wcześniej dowalisz dwa kółka przed tym xd) lub tutaj: 01:18:429 - Fix. Przesuniete do czerwonego
5. 01:19:977 (3) - finisz na końcu proszę Fix
6. 01:27:139 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Fix
7. 02:14:752 (1) - ALE FAJNY
8. 02:21:332 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Fix
9. 02:22:106 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Fix
10. 02:22:881 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3Tick jest na niebieskiej lini. Nic ni da sie
11. 02:24:429 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Fix
12. 02:27:526 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3Fix
13. 02:28:300 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3Fix
14. 02:28:687 - Odtąd bez przerwy daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 (dla tego slajdera) Fix
15. 02:30:235 (1) - A tutaj już bez S:C3
16. 02:57:719 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Brak ticka
17. 03:02:364 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Brak ticka
18. 03:05:461 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Fix
19. 03:07:784 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Brak ticka
20. 03:10:106 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Tick na czerwonycm SC2
21. 03:18:623 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Tick na czerwonycm SC2. Ktore juz sa
22. 03:24:816 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Fix
23. 03:27:913 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Fix
24. 03:28:687 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Fix
25. 03:29:171 (3) - Odtąd bez przerwy daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 (dla tego slajdera) To jest kolko
26. 03:53:461 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Fix
27. 04:09:332 (1) - Odtąd bez przerwy daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 (dla tego slajdera) Fix
28. 04:12:429 (1) - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Fix
29. 04:13:300 (2) - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Tick jest na niebieskiej lini. Nic ni da sie
30. 04:14:074 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Tick jest na niebieskiej lini. Nic ni da sie
31. 04:15:913 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Tick jest na niebieskiej lini. Nic ni da sie
32. 04:18:623 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Fix
33. 04:20:171 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Fix
34. 05:09:332 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Fix
35. 05:20:171 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Fix
36. 05:20:945 - 05:21:332 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Fix
37. 05:24:042 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Fix
38. 05:27:139 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 Fix
39. 05:27:623 (2) - finisz na końcu proszę
40. 05:28:300 (6) - finisz na końcu proszę; 05:28:687 - daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3
41. 05:32:945 (5) - Odtąd bez przerwy daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 (dla tego slajdera)
42. 05:34:493 (6) - Odtąd bez przerwy daj tutaj zieloną linię S:C3 (dla tego slajdera)

~ LOL ~

1. I don't know if you chose the right SV, but if you want to make a "slider hell" you can just use the SV multiplier at a certain part.

1. 00:13:203 (3,1) - I suggest you add more distance between these notes because the next note possessed a strong sound. Consider make the tail of note 3 left a little bit like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:13:977 (1) - make this note completely horizontal, 00:14:364 (2) - move this note at x:312, 00:14:655 (3) - move this note at x:404 & 00:15:139 (4,5) - consider make these into reverse slider because the sound is same.
3. 00:16:106 (3,4,5,6,7) - make like this to create a little movement:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:17:461 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is very awkward to play because of the notes going RRR, 00:17:655 (3,4,5,6) - maybe you can create new pattern here and make sure to change the direction into RLR.
5. 00:19:687 (7,8,9) - maybe you can start HD hereby make it a reverse slider, then 00:19:977 (10,11) - combine these two.
6. 00:20:171 (1) - start to make a HD here because of strong sound.
7. 00:20:268 - add a note here?
8. 00:20:364 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these streams is so boring, maybe you can make more movement. There is so many pattern or shape of streams you can make, be creative.
9. 00:25:010 - I'm pretty sure there is same sound here with the next one.
10. 00:27:913 (1,2,3,4) - maybe this too cruel for me, it easy drop.
11. 00:38:752 - the streams part until here is okay but sometimes you have to experience yourself to see what is off or wrong.
12. 00:38:752 (10) - make this note center?
13. 00:39:139 (1) - why not Ctrl+G this?
14. 00:40:687 (5,6) - why not add more distance between these notes by move note 5 to x:128? it will create a HD on note 5 same as 00:40:881 (6,7) - these notes because of the strong vocal.
15. 00:47:461 (1,2) - this stack kinda breaks the movement, it very disturbing. I suggest you move note 2 to x:232 & 00:47:848 (3) - move this note to x:120.
16. 00:51:139 - until 01:03:429 - these streams part is kinda repetitive but it is okay to me and playable.
17. 01:03:042 (9,10) - this anti-flow is kinda sudden, maybe you can change the direction of this notes or change into a different pattern.
18. 01:05:074 (6) - Ctrl+G this?
19. 01:10:106 (6) - make this note completely horizontal & Ctrl+G to create a little movement.
20. 01:12:235 (1) - same as above.
21. 01:15:913 (1,2) - this is hard to catch after HD please reduce some distance.
22. 01:24:913 (6) - move this note to x:172 because the stack is not good for this flow.
23. 01:31:397 (1) - Ctrl+G this?
24. 01:58:493 (2,3) - please reduce some distance, there's no need to make HD here because you do not make other notes that have the same sound.
25. 01:59:074 (5) - move this to x:228?
26. 02:19:010 (2,3) - please reduce some distance by move note 3 left a little bit.
27. 02:25:397 (4,1) - this is hard to catch without HD, consider make one or reduce the distance.
28. 02:59:655 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe this is too hard & repetitive, consider make 03:00:816 (4,1) - these notes into different pattern.
29. 03:46:881 (4) - I think you don't need HD here, maybe move this note to x:216 & 03:47:268 (6) - move this note to x:224.
30. 03:53:074 (2,1) - this anti-flow is quite sudden, reduce some distance.
31. 04:34:106 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe you can make this streams more neat because some part easily drop & hard to catch.
32. 04:58:881 - this kiai part is kinda hard, maybe you can make the slider become easier to catch.
33. That all from me, I think this map need more mod. This is not my best mod because I can't FC this map, so sorry.

Kurokami wrote:

Hey

[uifdbgur]

01:56:558 (2,3,4,5) - Do not end sliders on strong beat and start the next on the weaker one after. It should be the other way around. Arriving on a strong beat is must more pleasant than jumping from one. Fixed. Moved slider ends to blue not counting 5. Which ends vocal
01:59:268 (1,2) - Same here. 1 Ended on Blue and 2 on red. Changed CS for tick
02:00:816 (1,2,3) - During this, more element from the music is mixed into creating the timeline. This throws players off easily as its hard to focus on it. Try something like this: http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/Lr1jOhU4 I had other idea for it. Removed 2 and made 1 repeat
02:04:493 (1) - Might be better dividing this into two circle. Just as you did at 05:10:106 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . It sounds that way much better because the stronger beat is under the end of the slider at the moment. Replaced but kinda feels difficult than were.
02:12:429 (3) - End this one 1/4 earlier on blue and add a circle to the white tick with a possible Dash? I really want to dash there. Possible.
02:13:203 (2,3,4) - You contradicting yourself with 04:04:687 (2,3,4) - and the second one sounds much better. You are right. Redo
02:14:752 (1) - Use the same rhythm as you did at 04:06:235 (1,2) - please. Uhh.. I If i put it on red tick. It would be difficult to do hdash to long vocal
02:19:397 (1,2,3) - I suggest something like this instead: http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/P4TCq74t The two circle can remain as a slider but this sounds much better, its your call. I'll keep it as it is.
02:20:945 (1,2) - Instead of these I suggest 3 slider http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/eFzaHO2x Some easy patterns are need to. Keeping
02:24:816 (3,4) - Again a little different suggestion: http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/wdhtAc6c Can't make hdash here. Keeping as it were. Might redo because during trying it i screwed pattern ;s
02:25:590 (1,2,3) - http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/P884IHMB Accepted
02:37:010 (2,3,4,5) - To be honest at this point the same sound repeats 3 times and it would be really nice to have a jump on them but you ignored them completely while they are really strong. Something like this would be nice to have: http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/NUqOdTB8 And if you apply this you should change the next two as well into some similar one to follow the beat on the blue ticks. Made small stream like on song start in different way
02:41:752 (4,1) - Make this into a repeat slider which starts and ends on blue tick to follow the same sound pointed out previously. Ok
02:54:235 (2) - There is no need for this note at all. I could accept 02:54:429 (4) - since there is at least something to follow but here you can hear nothing at all. But to be rhythmically correct, both should be removed. It sounds much better that way anyways. Both removed and re do a bit pattern because it was a bit overmapping ;s
03:01:203 (1,2) - Move the end of this slider and the circle 1/4 earlier. There is nothing to follow with it currently. I'll need recheck here if its done right.
03:03:913 (3) - I would divide this to make it more interesting. Ctrl g next slider
03:07:397 (7,1) - Two 1/2 slider might sounds much better due the fact that the vocal starts in the middle of the slider. ReDo
03:08:945 (1) - If something, than this slider should end 1/4 earlier and a circle should be added there instead. Circle on blue tick is here to somewhat follow vocal.
03:14:558 (2) - Divide this one into two circle. Done
03:15:719 (1,2) - You probably know what I want to say here already but I still write a few word. http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/XusBtnW2 Fixed it
03:26:364 (1,2) - And again. Fixed
03:34:300 (1) - Remove NC Removed
03:43:010 (1,2,3,4) - Make this the same as 01:51:526 (1,2,3,4) - Didn't noticed one was on white. Fixed
04:11:268 (4,5) - Why you stopped with the 1/2 sliders? They do sounds much better than the current one. Did one 1/2 and putted one circle as in different way i couldn't made it better. Repeat slider is keep
04:12:429 (1,2,3) - I would go with this instead: http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/AKGMoMjZ Like usuall.. again the same fix
04:15:526 (2,1,2) - http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/QCOweIHv Uhh. Nah. Keeping as it is. For my guess better follows vocal
04:17:848 (1,2) - http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/ReRezxls Same reason

I took a look at the first and second kiai and the part between them only to correct some rhythm (Yea, I'm lazy pls). I do not know your style yet so it might be inaccurate at some point but if its okay for your then try to follow the same idea for the rest of your map as well. If anything, bad rhythm can piss me off. lol
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I can't promise you an icon just now. Pattern wise the map is not bad but needs some cleaning. I know many player comes and say its okay but shitmisses and even misses are not always the fault of the player but instead they means that something might be bad with the map. This not means it needs serious reworking to make it easier, but instead it means, we need to be sure that every pattern is easy to read (hope its understandable enough). Anyway, good luck for now.

SYAHME wrote:

Requested mod, not from my modding queue.
[General]

1. I don't know if you choosed the right SV, but if you want make a "slider hell" you can just use the SV multiplier at certain part.If too high it would be barely impossible to SS this map. This one was enough good

[Kasha Grip]

1. 00:13:203 (3,1) - I suggest you to add more distance between these notes because the next note possessed a strong sound. Consider make the tail of note 3 left a little bit like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Good idea
2. 00:13:977 (1) - make this note completely horizontal, 00:14:364 (2) - move this note at x:312, 00:14:655 (3) - move this note at x:404 & 00:15:139 (4,5) - consider make these into reverse slider because the sound is same. Nah Nah. Too small movement
3. 00:16:106 (3,4,5,6,7) - make like this to create a little movement: Aright
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:17:461 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is very awkward to play because the notes going RRR, 00:17:655 (3,4,5,6) - maybe you can create new pattern here and make sure to change the direction into RLR. Little redo. RLR
5. 00:19:687 (7,8,9) - maybe you can start HD here by make it a reverse slider, then 00:19:977 (10,11) - combine these two. Redo in other way
6. 00:20:171 (1) - start make a HD here because of strong sound. Moved 11 elsewhere. Make Hdash to 1
7. 00:20:268 - add note here? Better not to prevent possible miss from antiflow
8. 00:20:364 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these streams is so boring, maybe you can make more movement. There is so many pattern or shape of streams you can make, be creative. Those streams are supposed to be easy
9. 00:25:010 - I'm pretty sure there is same sound here with the next one. Added note and shorted slider into 1/2
10. 00:27:913 (1,2,3,4) - maybe this too cruel for me, its easily drop. Sometimes i'm dropping it too. Redo
11. 00:38:752 - the streams part until here is okay but sometime you have to experience yourself to see what is off or wrong.
12. 00:38:752 (10) - make this note center? Unsure but moved
13. 00:39:139 (1) - why not Ctrl+G this? This will be a bit antiflow. And its too early for it
14. 00:40:687 (5,6) - why not add more distance between these notes by move note 5 to x:128? it will create a HD on note 5 same as 00:40:881 (6,7) - these notes because of the strong vocal. Good idea
15. 00:47:461 (1,2) - these stack is kinda break the movement, its very disturbing. I suggest you to move note 2 to x:232 & 00:47:848 (3) - move this note to x:120. Good idea
16. 00:51:139 - until 01:03:429 - these streams part is kinda repetitive but it is okay to me and playable.
17. 01:03:042 (9,10) - this anti-flow is kinda sudden, maybe you can change the direction of this notes or change into different pattern. I'll see other ideas. Not touching this one
18. 01:05:074 (6) - Ctrl+G this? I see no difference but ok
19. 01:10:106 (6) - make this note completely horizontal & Ctrl+G to create a little movement. I got other idea.
20. 01:12:235 (1) - same as above. Same
21. 01:15:913 (1,2) - this is hard to catch after HD please reduce some distance. Tried to but difficult to keep hdash to 2
22. 01:24:913 (6) - move this note to x:172 because the stack is not good for this flow. x176
23. 01:31:397 (1) - Ctrl+G this? This pattern must be anti flow
24. 01:58:493 (2,3) - please reduce some distance, there's no need to make HD here, because you're not make at other notes that have same sound. Redo
25. 01:59:074 (5) - move this to x:228? After redo nah
26. 02:19:010 (2,3) - please reduce some distance by move note 3 left a little bit.Fix
27. 02:25:397 (4,1) - this is hard to catch without HD, consider make one or reduce the distance. Fixed this pixel jump
28. 02:59:655 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe this is too hard & repetitive, consider make 03:00:816 (4,1) - these notes into different pattern. Its supposed to be like that
29. 03:46:881 (4) - I think you don't need HD here, maybe move this note to x:216 & 03:47:268 (6) - move this note to x:224. Ugh.. aright.. destroying fun
30. 03:53:074 (2,1) - this anti-flow is quite sudden, reduce some distance. For me looks ok
31. 04:34:106 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe you can make this streams more neat because some part easily drop & hard to catch. This part was difficult to map
32. 04:58:881 - this kiai part is kinda hard, maybe you can make the slider become more easy to catch. I changed few things
33. That all from me, I think this map need more mod. This is not my best mod because I can't FC this map, so sorry.

Good luck on ranking this.