Hello, here's the m4m we agreed in-game
Okay that's all! Good luck
[Rebutton]
- 00:02:188 (1,1) - blanket better?
- 00:05:979 (7,8,1) - stack them properly, it seems to be a double instead of a triplet lol
- 00:08:452 (3,4) - huh, the distance here is too low compared from the previous jumps so the transition feels a bit weird imo. Maybe try something like this: http://puu.sh/q8RtG/aa12e633f3.jpg
- 00:13:727 - Add a note here? The sound is very low, but you did it 00:12:408 (2) - here, i guess to follow vocals.
- 00:19:001 - ^
- 00:28:562 (1,2) - Since the music still emphasizes this part, I suggest you do increase the distance a bit, maybe stack 00:28:067 (4,2) - where the 4 is.
- 00:54:111 (3,4) - I suggest you to ctrl+g the rhythm so it flows better with the music and vocals.
- 00:54:771 (2,3) - same as before, would fit better imo.
- 00:58:232 (1,2,3) - Well, this part, at least for me seems totally unnatural, I mean the distance for this triplet is completely random and sudden. Consider stacking it. If not at least add a NC, however I insist in changing it.
- 01:21:968 (1) - Consider reducing a bit and add another slider 01:22:628 - here so it doesn't feel so empty.
- 01:28:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ? There's not even music there. I guess you should delete it if you want to get this set ranked.
[Shizuku's] - 00:24:111 (1) - Add NC? So the distance between 00:23:782 (4,1) - & 00:24:276 (2,1) - don't feel so weird.
- 00:43:232 (2,1) - Maybe convert these to into a 1/2 slider? would fit better the drum and the vocals imo.
- 01:17:188 (7,8,1) - Why not copying 01:16:859 (4,5,6) - these and then ctrl+h? So it's symmetrical and also because the actual triplets seems a bit "unstraight".
- 01:22:545 - maybe end the previous slider earlier and add a note here? I guess u're missing a beat there.
My main concern about this diff is that from 00:45:705 - here u're all the time playing on the right side and I don't know if it's just me but I really noticed it when playing and felt a bit weird/boring. I highly suggest you to play more with the left side here.
[Insane] - 00:13:727 - Add a note?
- 00:55:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't know what happened here, but 00:55:677 (2,3,4) - this is supposed to be a triplet right? Idk if it's a bug or missed it lol
- 01:03:837 (4,5) - Imo the distance between those is too low compared to the emphasis of the music and all the pattern u were doing after/before this. Consider increasing the ds a bit.
- 01:11:419 (3,4) - ^ Maybe stack 4 where the 2 is?
- 01:21:144 (1) - Maybe move this down a bit so it flows better to the stream? Right now it feels like a big jump.
- 01:25:265 (1,2) - The distance here is way too high since 01:24:606 (6,1) - you use low distance here. I'd reduce this a bit.
[Hazu's] - 00:41:749 (1) - Este slider lo curvaría un poco hacia abajo para que fluyera mejor a (2)
Buena diff~
[Normal] - 00:15:705 (4) - This note is to close to (3), consider stacking it where the 2 is.
- 00:16:034 (5,6) - Make this into a 1/1 slider? Would fit better the music and also the diff
- 01:22:628 (1,2) - Maybe try to avoid the overlap?
[Easy] - 00:50:650 - I guess this is a strong beat so I suggest you to map it with a circle
- 01:21:968 - Why is this with x0,5 SV? Recommend you to delete it and then use the normal DS for 01:21:968 (1) - since it's too close with 01:20:979 (3) - right now.
- 01:27:902 (4) - This note here might be a bit hard for newbies to recognize since there's not clearly sound there for such a note. Recommend you to delete it.
Also the notes are too close to each other, maybe try to snap with 1,2x. It would be more clear for new players to follow I guess. (I know it might be hard to readjust the distance so it's ok if don't do this lol).
Okay that's all! Good luck