GAMI wrote:

"butuh" ulun uwu

GAMI wrote:

"butuh" ulun uwu

Exaria-sama wrote:

Butuh Kajung

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Here I am

Pretty similar with my 7K mapset

[Raedi's NOVICE]

00:39:280 (39280|2,39442|1) - It would be great if you make it to jack for kick // okay

01:41:550 (101550|2,101713|0) - ^ // okay

01:56:145 (116145|2,116145|3,116307|1,116469|0,116631|2,116794|1,116956|0,117118|2) - it should be finish on 01:57:361 - here, just give something different on clap part // I make different pattern on that which I think is more fit, what do you think?

Fresh Chicken wrote:

00:01:983 - timing point apa ngini, asaku baik hapus ja

01:57:442 - timing point nyawa te double, hapus sebuting

01:57:523 - asaku sv nya ni kada nyaman dibaca, coba pakai sv ini:

01:57:523 - 1.5

01:57:645 - 0.5

01:57:767 - 1.5

01:57:888 - 0.5

01:58:010 - 1.5

01:58:131 - 0.5

01:58:253 - 2.0

01:58:334 - 0.5

[GRAVITY]

00:09:118 - 00:10:415 - asaku jaka add note lagi di setiap timing tu nah, mirip soalnya

00:12:199 (12199|2,12199|3) - bagusnya diulah 4-3 mini stair, 00:12:280 - disini nyata banar ada suara

00:27:442 - 00:28:091 - add satu not lagi di setiap timing, asa aneh disitu

00:36:604 (36604|3) - Ghost note

00:48:361 - kyapa munnya diulah LN disini sampai 00:48:523 - ? nyaman dimaini

01:08:469 - kada usah dua note, kayanya ikam memberi penekanan ke suara snare, tapi snare nang lain ikam ulah satu note + satu LN ja

01:20:226 - add note sebuting

01:21:199 - ^

01:41:713 - bagusnya add sebuting lagi not

01:52:334 - disengaja kah ini?

[Linde::BANGKE's EXHAUST]

01:15:929 - ~01:16:253 - I think making small trill is more fit to this part

Pretty good, just make sure SV with that I suggested on above

[ADVANCED]

01:15:929 - kdpp mun ikam meulah 1/4 disini

asaku ada masalah pang secara umum, hubungi nda minggu ne. Munnya aku kd on osu hubungi di line, munnya ikam kdd line pm ja gksguswhd12

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Here I am

Pretty similar with my 7K mapset

00:01:983 - What is this timing point? I think better to remove. Deleted

01:57:442 - Double timing point, remove one ^

01:57:523 - imo this is pretty unreadable SV, let me suggest for it Yes, i change the SV

01:57:523 - 1.5

01:57:645 - 0.5

01:57:767 - 1.5

01:57:888 - 0.5

01:58:010 - 1.5

01:58:131 - 0.5

01:58:253 - 2.0

01:58:334 - 0.5

Thanks for this section.

[GRAVITY]

00:09:118 - 00:10:415 - I think you should add one more note each timings, here's same part Added

00:12:199 (12199|2,12199|3) - Better to be 4-3 mini stairs, Changed 00:12:280 - definitely has a sound Yeah, and i hear that, *why i can't hear this sound before it ahahah sorry

00:27:442 - 00:28:091 - Better to add a one more note each others, feels awkward. Yup, added

00:36:604 (36604|3) - Ghost note Deleted

00:48:361 - How about to make LN? and finish that on 00:48:523 - here, feels good to play Yes, i change the double note to LN and Add hitsound there

01:08:469 - Doesn't need two normal notes, seems you've emphasis'd snare sound but other snare has only one note + one LN Okay

01:20:226 - Add a note Added

01:21:199 - ^

01:41:713 - Better to add a one more note, Added

01:52:334 - Is this intended? I Think no

[ADVANCED]

01:15:929 - It's fine even if you add 1/4 in here Yes, i added one more note, thanks


I think it should have some problem in general, please contect me in this week. Please contect on line if I'm not in osu. I may go out tomorrow. Or if you don't have line ID, just leave forum PM. gksguswhd12 Done

Fresh Chicken wrote:

no kds for this

[GRAVITY]

01:57:442 - Still double timing points, remove one Fixed

Also SVs, 0.5x should 1/8 that I posted above.

[Raedi's NOVICE]

00:01:983 - remove this timing point, it's for nothing also start offset has 30% volume which different with other difficulties. please adjust it to 50% Fixed

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

GG petarunxx
congratz !

Surono wrote:

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erlinadewi- wrote:

gratz ya wan! first ranked

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

GGWP dude uwu)b