t+pazolite - Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!! · forum

Speed of Snail

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Speed of Snail 2016-07-10T00:44:27+00:00

Mazzerin wrote:
Insane
00:07:488 (4,5,6,7) - weird snapping, sliders are more safe to use than circles here

Ehh, that's how the song goes, and the OD isn't that high to begin with. This'll only pose a problem to players that memorize speeds, and frankly I see no problem in forcing people to learn the rhythm in a rhythm game.
00:47:654 (4) - nc this, like here 00:44:988 (1) -
00:52:987 (4) - ^

Added NC to both
01:04:322 (8,9,10,1) - should be more spaced compared to how intense it is to 00:51:821 (1) - part for example
Agreed, increased spacing of the triangle at the end.

Sorry it took so long to reply to this, my osu shit itself and deleted all my maps, so was busy restoring my files.

Alheak

910 posts

Joined November 2013

Alheak 2016-07-13T13:59:22+00:00

M4M

god normal is such a shit hitsound set
your BG is the same as rapidity is a justice by sjoy, technically not a problem but it'd be nice to avoid that, plus I feel like the image doesn't really fit the song
preview point is meh, i'd suggest something like 00:43:488 - instead but w/e
don't try to map the little sounds from the instruments because they're not on rhythm
insane has a higher star rating but has less HP than lunatic, also I think there should be a bigger spread between those two
advanced is more dense (170 obj) than hard (147 obj) and technically harder, what

- Yoshimaro -'s Extra

00:43:154 (4) - ctrl+g to increase the spacing and to add momentum with the build-up before the start of the verse. This will also break the flow here which will make 00:43:488 (1) - more impactful
00:51:154 (3,1) - slight overlap, still annoying

Insane

00:02:155 (1,2) - either make the overlap obvious or fix it completely, this doesn't look good like this
00:12:154 - you shouldn't try to map the repeating notes of the stringed instrument (pipa?), the rhythm is mostly inconsistent or at least not precise, and sounds more like 1/3 or even 1/2 than 1/4. I personnaly don't like how this part plays really much.
00:43:988 (2,3,1) - same spacing but different rhythm. Whether this is actually bad for gameplay or not is up to debate, I think this part could be more fun and dynamic than just circles on strong beats, especially since it's the most dynamic part since the start of the song.
This part also strongly lacks flow, and did you just mirrored the first half to map the second?

Ayyri's Lunatic

00:03:488 (2) - I get what you're trying to map here but I don't think a 1/4 repeating slider is appropriate for it. In fact, I don't think anything could fit for this particular sound, so I'd strongly advise you to not bother, a simple kick slider is fine, a circle is even better.
00:07:154 (2,3,4,5) - because of (2)'s repeat, the following sliders start on the wrong beat
00:17:154 (1,2,3) - same distance, different rhythm
00:50:154 (1,2) - too much spacing for the difficulty

Hard

00:06:821 (1,2,3,4) - wrong rhythm
00:12:821 (1) - same thing about the repetition's rhythm, don't try
00:43:488 - the DS is quite huge for a hard, especially at 180bpm
00:54:821 (3,4,5,6) - same rhythm, different spacing, this one being especially confusing for the difficulty
00:55:988 (7,1) - overlap
00:57:488 (3,4,5) - spacing
01:00:155 (3,6) - overlap
01:02:822 (3,4,5) - spacing

Lasse's Advanced

00:07:321 (1,2,3) - wrong rhythm
00:10:488 (3) - what is this mapped to
00:47:155 (4,5,1,2) - this is 4 consecutive 1/2 single tap at 180bpm for an advanced, this is way too much for this difficulty. Keep the density low for an advanced diff
00:55:154 (5,6,1,2) - same, and same the other ones

Normal

00:30:154 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i have déjà vu for some reason (v:
00:53:487 (5,1) - avoid stacking non successive objects in normal, it's confusing to read for beginners

Easy

00:14:821 (1,2,3) - slightly irregular spacing
00:42:154 (1) - ending this on one of the most important beat of the song is really not appropriate
wait the whole section has its sliders ending on big white ticks hoyl
It'd be way more fitting to make the player click on those beat, not releasing. Those beats are the most important yet have no impact whatsoever while playing, not to mention it's quite unnatural and awkward to not click on them

This mod looks quite long but feels quite short for me, there's so much more I feel like I could say.
This should suffice for now I guess, don't hesitate to ring me up if you have any questions

Good luck

Ayyri

Ayyri 2016-07-16T01:00:44+00:00

Alheak wrote:
Ayyri's Lunatic
00:03:488 (2) - I get what you're trying to map here but I don't think a 1/4 repeating slider is appropriate for it. In fact, I don't think anything could fit for this particular sound, so I'd strongly advise you to not bother, a simple kick slider is fine, a circle is even better. I disagree with you, because you can hear the sound being held out, and repeating.
00:07:154 (2,3,4,5) - because of (2)'s repeat, the following sliders start on the wrong beat 00:07:154 - this is the only part that repeats, the others do not. Meaning they start at the correct time.
00:17:154 (1,2,3) - same distance, different rhythm I have increased the spacing a bit.
00:50:154 (1,2) - too much spacing for the difficulty I have decreased the spacing here a bit.

L e o n

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: [C.H.S] 01. Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38154
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 2154,11488,12154,32821,38154,42154,43488,48821,54154,64821,68821,70488,71654,72821,73988,75071,76821
DistanceSpacing: 1.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!
TitleUnicode:Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!
Artist:t+pazolite
ArtistUnicode:t+pazolite
Creator:TheOnlyLeon
Version:Ayyri's Lunatic
Source:
Tags:C.H.S. Beauty Noizy Orient CHS-0015 DJ Pixie Edamame Infinity Lovewn tpa:pbr 最速 tpz Happy Hardcore Lasse Ayyri -Yoshimaro-
BeatmapID:987016
BeatmapSetID:382674

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Dockaaaahhhnnn.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
2155,333.333333333333,4,1,1,50,1,0
34488,-100,4,1,1,10,0,0
35488,-100,4,1,1,20,0,0
36488,-100,4,1,1,30,0,0
37488,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
38154,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
42404,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0
42488,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
42738,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0
42821,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
43071,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0
43154,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
43404,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0
43488,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
54154,-100,4,1,1,80,0,1
64821,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
76821,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 52,173,91
Combo2 : 248,176,90
Combo3 : 38,70,181
Combo4 : 234,197,98

[HitObjects]
101,329,2154,6,0,B|121:273|184:273|184:273|221:233|246:184|246:116|223:53|161:31|161:31|79:93|114:173,1,540,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,257,3488,2,0,L|405:252,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,127,4404,2,0,L|107:132,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,330,5071,6,0,L|307:373,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,54,5571,2,0,L|205:10,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,148,5988,2,0,L|318:191,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,44,6321,2,0,L|399:0,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,204,6654,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,316,6904,6,0,L|312:252,1,45,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,7154,2,0,L|252:76,2,45,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,84,7404,2,0,L|169:126,1,45,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,220,7571,2,0,L|107:237,1,33.75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,336,7696,2,0,L|133:318,1,33.75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,368,7904,2,0,L|261:349,1,45,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,196,8154,6,0,L|255:246,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,294,8488,2,0,L|376:250,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,161,9321,6,0,L|275:170,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,161,10488,6,0,L|275:170,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,339,11488,6,0,B|392:267|448:188|448:188|388:164|388:67,1,270,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,7,12154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
258,132,12488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
175,224,12821,2,0,P|221:251|352:212,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,38,13488,2,0,P|257:7|176:40,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,306,14154,2,0,P|439:228|402:146,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,147,14821,2,0,P|72:227|111:306,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,369,15488,6,0,P|308:362|356:377,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,250,15821,2,0,P|242:243|194:258,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,133,16154,2,0,P|307:126|355:141,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,15,16488,2,0,P|239:8|191:23,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,95,16821,1,8,0:0:0:0:
198,205,17154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
107,329,17488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,205,17654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
165,99,17821,2,0,L|107:51,3,45,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,107,18154,6,0,P|310:152|303:272,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,205,18654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,304,18821,2,0,P|87:259|94:139,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,53,19488,2,0,P|311:63|380:30,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,331,20154,2,0,P|201:321|132:354,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,272,20821,6,0,P|454:231|462:171,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,99,21154,2,0,P|346:138|351:183,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,175,21488,2,0,P|204:146|161:135,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,251,21821,2,0,P|188:279|231:290,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,370,22154,2,0,P|329:321|265:196,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,98,22654,5,2,0:0:0:0:
224,181,22821,2,0,L|112:183,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,98,23154,2,0,L|368:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,24,23488,6,0,P|185:76|235:188,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,98,23988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,175,24154,2,0,P|373:123|323:11,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,258,24821,2,0,L|57:270,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,126,25488,2,0,L|429:116,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,323,26154,6,0,P|425:348|378:348,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,276,26488,2,0,P|369:251|416:251,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
475,175,26821,2,0,P|426:150|379:150,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,74,27154,2,0,P|372:49|419:49,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,81,27488,2,0,P|210:138|329:200,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,276,27988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,74,28154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
373,276,28488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
398,118,28821,2,0,P|421:175|367:281,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,276,29488,2,0,P|91:202|114:118,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,309,30154,2,0,P|266:356|182:334,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,74,30821,2,0,P|245:27|330:50,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
427,26,31488,6,0,P|426:82|389:131,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,31821,2,0,P|360:198|421:207,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,307,32154,2,0,P|421:306|470:269,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,280,32488,2,0,P|255:336|293:385,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,68,32821,6,0,B|143:111|206:48|206:48|273:107|356:45|356:45|379:125|451:133|451:133|396:173|377:217|377:217|443:286|388:370,1,720,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,300,34488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
220,197,34821,2,0,P|261:162|330:153,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,65,35154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,65,35488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
241,174,35821,2,0,P|190:177|143:155,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,48,36154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,48,36488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
336,155,36821,2,0,P|333:205|307:247,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,320,37154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
237,320,37488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
235,173,37821,2,0,P|178:182|145:207,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,282,38154,5,0,0:0:0:0:
75,282,38238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,282,38321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
25,173,38488,2,0,L|25:67,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,199,38821,2,0,P|190:221|234:225,1,90
315,123,39154,2,0,P|277:101|233:97,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,276,39488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
325,276,39571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,276,39654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,350,39821,2,0,L|112:348,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,238,40154,2,0,L|149:239,1,90
177,143,40488,2,0,P|217:165|248:210,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,271,40821,5,0,0:0:0:0:
344,271,40904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,271,40988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
438,186,41154,2,0,P|451:136|442:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,126,41488,2,0,P|295:81|249:48,1,90
205,174,41821,2,0,P|231:218|277:251,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,332,42154,6,0,L|0:320,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,239,42488,2,0,L|134:250,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,177,42821,2,0,L|29:165,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
27,84,43154,2,0,L|161:95,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,23,43488,6,0,P|260:75|261:131,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,123,43738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,139,43821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,247,43988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
262,347,44154,1,2,0:0:0:0:
389,350,44321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,350,44404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,350,44488,2,0,P|413:297|410:249,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,158,44821,5,2,0:0:0:0:
305,94,44988,2,0,L|261:107,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,199,45321,2,0,L|186:212,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,258,45654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
326,258,45737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,258,45821,2,0,P|305:312|269:344,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,134,46154,6,0,P|80:122|13:141,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,251,46488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
87,347,46654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
199,339,46821,2,0,L|206:240,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,240,47071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,231,47154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,126,47321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
243,38,47488,5,2,0:0:0:0:
373,133,47654,2,0,L|431:122,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,234,47988,2,0,L|279:242,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,297,48321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
497,183,48488,2,0,P|486:126|501:78,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,297,48821,6,0,L|329:301,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,302,49071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,303,49154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,200,49321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
163,362,49488,2,0,P|139:320|137:262,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,265,49738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,251,49821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
127,102,49988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
242,15,50154,6,0,L|300:4,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,58,50404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
171,94,50488,2,0,L|126:102,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,146,50821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,265,50987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,296,51071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,325,51154,2,0,P|350:337|301:371,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,236,51488,6,0,P|247:184|244:116,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,128,51738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,109,51821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,2,51988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
339,85,52154,2,0,P|387:79|437:94,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,95,52404,1,2,0:0:0:0:
466,104,52488,2,0,P|459:153|470:209,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,328,52821,6,0,L|431:373,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,303,53071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,268,53154,2,0,L|257:227,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,361,53488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
114,354,53571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
75,332,53654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
46,298,53738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
30,256,53821,2,0,P|44:201|43:131,1,90,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,44,54154,6,0,P|199:40|244:53,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,60,54404,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,86,54488,2,0,P|292:137|316:195,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,351,54821,2,0,P|286:361|228:349,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,353,55071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
221,345,55154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
146,223,55321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
194,87,55488,6,0,L|247:72,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,198,55821,2,0,L|322:210,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,76,56154,2,0,L|468:64,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,291,56488,2,0,L|287:304,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,168,56821,6,0,P|221:120|216:72,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,59,57071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,38,57154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,79,57321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
106,204,57488,2,0,P|96:252|101:300,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,354,57821,2,0,P|282:347|353:365,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
438,247,58154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
452,204,58237,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,159,58320,1,2,0:0:0:0:
367,44,58488,2,0,L|361:-3,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,180,58821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,210,58904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
251,227,58987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
206,230,59071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
163,218,59154,2,0,P|150:170|119:129,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,30,59488,6,0,P|312:20|340:26,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,38,59738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,62,59821,2,0,P|400:118|428:155,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,274,60154,2,0,P|450:313|403:333,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,334,60404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
387,337,60488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,352,60654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
170,181,60821,6,0,L|161:124,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,349,61154,2,0,L|70:358,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,296,61488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
367,239,61654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,256,61738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
442,286,61821,2,0,L|455:189,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,54,62154,6,0,P|430:36|377:34,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,38,62404,1,2,0:0:0:0:
321,51,62488,2,0,P|270:57|221:46,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,180,62821,2,0,P|152:238|125:275,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,277,63071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
118,290,63154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,364,63321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,346,63488,5,2,0:0:0:0:
394,319,63571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,292,63654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
398,265,63738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
371,232,63821,5,2,0:0:0:0:
373,205,63904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
375,178,63987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
377,151,64071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
354,127,64154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
356,100,64237,1,2,0:0:0:0:
358,73,64320,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,46,64404,1,2,0:0:0:0:
363,19,64488,2,0,P|311:22|259:5,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,85,64821,1,4,0:2:0:0:
256,192,64988,12,0,68738,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68821,12,0,70404,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70488,12,0,71571,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71654,12,0,72738,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72821,12,0,73904,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73988,12,0,74988,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75071,12,0,76821,0:0:0:0:

Yoshimaro

539 posts

Joined January 2014

Yoshimaro 2016-07-16T01:24:56+00:00

Hi Alheak
I'm in Russia
I have no internet
Save me plz
Sad bois
~ poem by Yoshimaro
(Check back in 2 more weeks, sry on vacation lmao I'll be back on August 1 Leon~~~ hi Leon hi ayyri hi lasse hi mom cシ

O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-07-16T03:45:48+00:00

Hello !, from your Queue. I guess here's as the M4M I promised XD/

General :
- None -

Easy :
00:15:821 (2,3) - Just when I check AIMod Distance, here's a problem
01:02:154 (1,3) - Doesn't seemed nice their slider touched, lower 01:03:488 (3) - a little or opposite curve. Accordingly, 01:04:154 (4,1) - need to move for solid distance
At other diff, 01:08:821 (1) - this spinner end timing point at 01:16:821 (1) - (Just for perfection xd)

Normal :
I recommend AR 5 and HP 3 if it still won't change your concepts

Lasse's Advance :
00:32:821 (1) - Umm..., quite unpredictable with the rhythm. Why not just a circle ?, like other diffs
01:04:488 (1) - Remove NC ?
01:04:821 (1) - How about position X:11 Y:106 ?

Hard :
00:16:821 (5) - 00:22:154 (5) - I still can hear 5 hit here, like others before
00:49:154 (1,2) - Make them at least stacked with 00:47:988 (5,6) -
00:55:988 (7) - Move 2 grid-step to the left

Ayyri's Lunatic :
01:04:821 (6) - NC as a closing scene ? like other diff
01:08:821 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Offbeat SpinnerEnds !. Equalize it with the creator's diff
01:15:071 (1) - Spinner end audio 5%

Insane :
00:16:821 (9,10) - 00:22:154 (9,10) - Like Hard diff, I can still hear it should be 5 hit

- Yoshimaro -'s Extra :
Excellent !

Nah, that's all ! Good luck ! XD/

Yoshimaro

539 posts

Joined January 2014

Yoshimaro 2016-07-16T04:38:51+00:00

Hi and thank based O-Moei (can you pm me moe girls doing moe things to cheer me up thank)

O-Moei

O-Moei 2016-07-16T04:46:16+00:00

- Yoshimaro - wrote:
Hi and thank based O-Moei (can you pm me moe girls doing moe things to cheer me up thank)

Hi !. Ohaha, I remember u yoshimaro XD/ , and yeah I'm moe for some reasons xd

Btw, Sorry for my mod on your map here didnt get enough fixing ;_; , I'm still too beginner that day tho xd
But now I've quite experienced I guess. Feel free to ask me if need anything in help XD/. Good luck with ur maps !

*O-Moei runs...

Ayyri

Ayyri 2016-07-17T01:08:02+00:00

O-Moei wrote:
Ayyri's Lunatic :
01:04:821 (6) - NC as a closing scene ? like other diff Tbh, doesn't really need a NC since it's at the very end. But I will change it anyways for now.
01:08:821 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Offbeat SpinnerEnds !. Equalize it with the creator's diff Spinners can change throughout the difficulties, and I don't agree with how Leon has his. Also, Lasse has their's the same way. (???)
01:15:071 (1) - Spinner end audio 5% Instead of changing the end to 5%, I made a gradual decrease in volume so it ends at a slightly lower volume than the original 25% that I have.

L e o n

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: [C.H.S] 01. Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38154
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 2154,11488,12154,32821,38154,42154,43488,48821,54154,64821,68821,70488,71654,72821,73988,75071,76821
DistanceSpacing: 1.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!
TitleUnicode:Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!
Artist:t+pazolite
ArtistUnicode:t+pazolite
Creator:TheOnlyLeon
Version:Ayyri's Lunatic
Source:
Tags:C.H.S. Beauty Noizy Orient CHS-0015 DJ Pixie Edamame Infinity Lovewn tpa:pbr 最速 tpz Happy Hardcore Lasse Ayyri -Yoshimaro-
BeatmapID:987016
BeatmapSetID:382674

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Dockaaaahhhnnn.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
2155,333.333333333333,4,1,1,50,1,0
34488,-100,4,1,1,10,0,0
35488,-100,4,1,1,20,0,0
36488,-100,4,1,1,30,0,0
37488,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
38154,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
42404,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0
42488,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
42738,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0
42821,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
43071,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0
43154,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
43404,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0
43488,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
54154,-100,4,1,1,80,0,1
64821,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
68821,-100,4,1,1,45,0,0
70488,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
71654,-100,4,1,1,35,0,0
72821,-100,4,1,1,30,0,0
73988,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
75071,-100,4,1,1,20,0,0
76821,-100,4,1,1,15,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 52,173,91
Combo2 : 248,176,90
Combo3 : 38,70,181
Combo4 : 234,197,98

[HitObjects]
101,329,2154,6,0,B|121:273|184:273|184:273|221:233|246:184|246:116|223:53|161:31|161:31|79:93|114:173,1,540,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,257,3488,2,0,L|405:252,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,127,4404,2,0,L|107:132,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,330,5071,6,0,L|307:373,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,54,5571,2,0,L|205:10,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,148,5988,2,0,L|318:191,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,44,6321,2,0,L|399:0,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,204,6654,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,316,6904,6,0,L|312:252,1,45,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,7154,2,0,L|252:76,2,45,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,84,7404,2,0,L|169:126,1,45,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,220,7571,2,0,L|107:237,1,33.75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,336,7696,2,0,L|133:318,1,33.75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,368,7904,2,0,L|261:349,1,45,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,196,8154,6,0,L|255:246,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,294,8488,2,0,L|376:250,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,161,9321,6,0,L|275:170,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,161,10488,6,0,L|275:170,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,339,11488,6,0,B|392:267|448:188|448:188|388:164|388:67,1,270,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,7,12154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
258,132,12488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
175,224,12821,2,0,P|221:251|352:212,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,38,13488,2,0,P|257:7|176:40,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,306,14154,2,0,P|439:228|402:146,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,147,14821,2,0,P|72:227|111:306,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,369,15488,6,0,P|308:362|356:377,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,250,15821,2,0,P|242:243|194:258,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,133,16154,2,0,P|307:126|355:141,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,15,16488,2,0,P|239:8|191:23,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,95,16821,1,8,0:0:0:0:
198,205,17154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
107,329,17488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,205,17654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
165,99,17821,2,0,L|107:51,3,45,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,107,18154,6,0,P|310:152|303:272,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,205,18654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,304,18821,2,0,P|87:259|94:139,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,53,19488,2,0,P|311:63|380:30,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,331,20154,2,0,P|201:321|132:354,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,272,20821,6,0,P|454:231|462:171,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,99,21154,2,0,P|346:138|351:183,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,175,21488,2,0,P|204:146|161:135,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,251,21821,2,0,P|188:279|231:290,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,370,22154,2,0,P|329:321|265:196,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,98,22654,5,2,0:0:0:0:
224,181,22821,2,0,L|112:183,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,98,23154,2,0,L|368:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,24,23488,6,0,P|185:76|235:188,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,98,23988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,175,24154,2,0,P|373:123|323:11,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,258,24821,2,0,L|57:270,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,126,25488,2,0,L|429:116,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,323,26154,6,0,P|425:348|378:348,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,276,26488,2,0,P|369:251|416:251,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
475,175,26821,2,0,P|426:150|379:150,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,74,27154,2,0,P|372:49|419:49,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,81,27488,2,0,P|210:138|329:200,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,276,27988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,74,28154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
373,276,28488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
398,118,28821,2,0,P|421:175|367:281,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,276,29488,2,0,P|91:202|114:118,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,309,30154,2,0,P|266:356|182:334,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,74,30821,2,0,P|245:27|330:50,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
427,26,31488,6,0,P|426:82|389:131,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,31821,2,0,P|360:198|421:207,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,307,32154,2,0,P|421:306|470:269,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,280,32488,2,0,P|255:336|293:385,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,68,32821,6,0,B|143:111|206:48|206:48|273:107|356:45|356:45|379:125|451:133|451:133|396:173|377:217|377:217|443:286|388:370,1,720,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,300,34488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
220,197,34821,2,0,P|261:162|330:153,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,65,35154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,65,35488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
241,174,35821,2,0,P|190:177|143:155,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,48,36154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,48,36488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
336,155,36821,2,0,P|333:205|307:247,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,320,37154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
237,320,37488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
235,173,37821,2,0,P|178:182|145:207,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,282,38154,5,0,0:0:0:0:
75,282,38238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,282,38321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
25,173,38488,2,0,L|25:67,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,199,38821,2,0,P|190:221|234:225,1,90
315,123,39154,2,0,P|277:101|233:97,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,276,39488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
325,276,39571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,276,39654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,350,39821,2,0,L|112:348,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,238,40154,2,0,L|149:239,1,90
177,143,40488,2,0,P|217:165|248:210,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,271,40821,5,0,0:0:0:0:
344,271,40904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,271,40988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
438,186,41154,2,0,P|451:136|442:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,126,41488,2,0,P|295:81|249:48,1,90
205,174,41821,2,0,P|231:218|277:251,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,332,42154,6,0,L|0:320,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,239,42488,2,0,L|134:250,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,177,42821,2,0,L|29:165,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
27,84,43154,2,0,L|161:95,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,23,43488,6,0,P|260:75|261:131,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,123,43738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,139,43821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,247,43988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
262,347,44154,1,2,0:0:0:0:
389,350,44321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,350,44404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,350,44488,2,0,P|413:297|410:249,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,158,44821,5,2,0:0:0:0:
305,94,44988,2,0,L|261:107,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,199,45321,2,0,L|186:212,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,258,45654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
326,258,45737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,258,45821,2,0,P|305:312|269:344,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,134,46154,6,0,P|80:122|13:141,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,251,46488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
87,347,46654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
199,339,46821,2,0,L|206:240,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,240,47071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,231,47154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,126,47321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
243,38,47488,5,2,0:0:0:0:
373,133,47654,2,0,L|431:122,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,234,47988,2,0,L|279:242,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,297,48321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
497,183,48488,2,0,P|486:126|501:78,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,297,48821,6,0,L|329:301,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,302,49071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,303,49154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,200,49321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
163,362,49488,2,0,P|139:320|137:262,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,265,49738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,251,49821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
127,102,49988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
242,15,50154,6,0,L|300:4,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,58,50404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
171,94,50488,2,0,L|126:102,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,146,50821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,265,50987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,296,51071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,325,51154,2,0,P|350:337|301:371,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,236,51488,6,0,P|247:184|244:116,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,128,51738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,109,51821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,2,51988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
339,85,52154,2,0,P|387:79|437:94,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,95,52404,1,2,0:0:0:0:
466,104,52488,2,0,P|459:153|470:209,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,328,52821,6,0,L|431:373,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,303,53071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,268,53154,2,0,L|257:227,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,361,53488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
114,354,53571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
75,332,53654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
46,298,53738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
30,256,53821,2,0,P|44:201|43:131,1,90,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,44,54154,6,0,P|199:40|244:53,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,60,54404,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,86,54488,2,0,P|292:137|316:195,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,351,54821,2,0,P|286:361|228:349,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,353,55071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
221,345,55154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
146,223,55321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
194,87,55488,6,0,L|247:72,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,198,55821,2,0,L|322:210,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,76,56154,2,0,L|468:64,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,291,56488,2,0,L|287:304,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,168,56821,6,0,P|221:120|216:72,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,59,57071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,38,57154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,79,57321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
106,204,57488,2,0,P|96:252|101:300,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,354,57821,2,0,P|282:347|353:365,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
438,247,58154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
452,204,58237,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,159,58320,1,2,0:0:0:0:
367,44,58488,2,0,L|361:-3,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,180,58821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,210,58904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
251,227,58987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
206,230,59071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
163,218,59154,2,0,P|150:170|119:129,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,30,59488,6,0,P|312:20|340:26,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,38,59738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,62,59821,2,0,P|400:118|428:155,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,274,60154,2,0,P|450:313|403:333,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,334,60404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
387,337,60488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,352,60654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
170,181,60821,6,0,L|161:124,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,349,61154,2,0,L|70:358,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,296,61488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
367,239,61654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,256,61738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
442,286,61821,2,0,L|455:189,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,54,62154,6,0,P|430:36|377:34,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,38,62404,1,2,0:0:0:0:
321,51,62488,2,0,P|270:57|221:46,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,180,62821,2,0,P|152:238|125:275,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,277,63071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
118,290,63154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,364,63321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,346,63488,5,2,0:0:0:0:
394,319,63571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,292,63654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
398,265,63738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
371,232,63821,5,2,0:0:0:0:
373,205,63904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
375,178,63987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
377,151,64071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
354,127,64154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
356,100,64237,1,2,0:0:0:0:
358,73,64320,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,46,64404,1,2,0:0:0:0:
363,19,64488,2,0,P|311:22|259:5,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,85,64821,5,4,0:2:0:0:
256,192,64988,12,0,68738,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68821,12,0,70404,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70488,12,0,71571,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71654,12,0,72738,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72821,12,0,73904,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73988,12,0,74988,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75071,12,0,76821,0:0:0:0:

Speed of Snail

548 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Speed of Snail 2016-07-19T02:15:05+00:00

Alheak wrote:
M4M

god normal is such a shit hitsound set

Yea I'm a terrible hitsounder, idk how to fix it
your BG is the same as rapidity is a justice by sjoy, technically not a problem but it'd be nice to avoid that, plus I feel like the image doesn't really fit the song

In my defense I had this BG before I knew that map existed, but I guess I should find a different one, idk I'll keep it in mind and swap it out if I see a better one.
preview point is meh, i'd suggest something like 00:43:488 - instead but w/e
don't try to map the little sounds from the instruments because they're not on rhythm

Actually, they are on rhythm, it's just a slightly faster rhythm than you're used to. Just because the rhythm has the slightest amount on complexity doesn't mean there isn't one, this shouldn't be that hard.
insane has a higher star rating but has less HP than lunatic, also I think there should be a bigger spread between those two

The Original version of the Lunatic was 4.8 stars which would be fine spread, but then Ayyri changed her mind and decided it should be easier, but being a GD, I don't see this as an issue at all.
advanced is more dense (170 obj) than hard (147 obj) and technically harder, what

I didn't map the Advanced diff, so it was interpreted differently, I don't see how different people having different opinions is such a hard concept for people.

Insane
00:02:155 (1,2) - either make the overlap obvious or fix it completely, this doesn't look good like this

I don't really see this being a problem, but I moved 2 slightly further away so that they're zero overlap at all.
00:12:154 - you shouldn't try to map the repeating notes of the stringed instrument (pipa?), the rhythm is mostly inconsistent or at least not precise, and sounds more like 1/3 or even 1/2 than 1/4. I personnaly don't like how this part plays really much.

IDK about you, but the rhythm is 100% 1/4, maybe you were talking about something else? But I doubt it, just check more carefully.
00:43:988 (2,3,1) - same spacing but different rhythm. Whether this is actually bad for gameplay or not is up to debate, I think this part could be more fun and dynamic than just circles on strong beats, especially since it's the most dynamic part since the start of the song.

Hmm, true, but I feel like copy pasting my previous rhythm which already has a repeat in it would just look lazy, maybe I'll consider remapping this, but not sure.

This part also strongly lacks flow, and did you just mirrored the first half to map the second?

Hard
00:06:821 (1,2,3,4) - wrong rhythm

Huh, IDK how I missed over that, thanks.
00:12:821 (1) - same thing about the repetition's rhythm, don't try

Same as insane, I triple checked the rhythm, it's correct.
00:43:488 - the DS is quite huge for a hard, especially at 180bpm

Yea, but it makes sense with the spread and the rest of the map
00:54:821 (3,4,5,6) - same rhythm, different spacing, this one being especially confusing for the difficulty

Yea, I like having a little bit a variety in my maps sometimes. Also I don't see how this could be confusing to anyone, it's almost entirely linear
00:55:988 (7,1) - overlap

Alright, shifted around a bit to prevent.
00:57:488 (3,4,5) - spacing

Was already changed in changing the last point
01:00:155 (3,6) - overlap
01:02:822 (3,4,5) - spacing
Same thing on both of these points.

Normal
00:30:154 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i have déjà vu for some reason (v:

Yes, I love vague comments that don't actually tell me what they're trying to point out.
00:53:487 (5,1) - avoid stacking non successive objects in normal, it's confusing to read for beginners

Don't see this as an issue, if this was an Easy sure, but it's supposed to be one difficulty up.
Easy
00:14:821 (1,2,3) - slightly irregular spacing

Fixed
00:42:154 (1) - ending this on one of the most important beat of the song is really not appropriate
wait the whole section has its sliders ending on big white ticks hoyl
It'd be way more fitting to make the player click on those beat, not releasing. Those beats are the most important yet have no impact whatsoever while playing, not to mention it's quite unnatural and awkward to not click on them

Fair point, but redoing this segment adding clickable objects on those would really inflate the star rating, and changing the sliders to start on those notes instead would force me to ignore hold notes where they exist, and put sliders where there is no hold, I see that as a worse option.

This mod looks quite long but feels quite short for me, there's so much more I feel like I could say.
This should suffice for now I guess, don't hesitate to ring me up if you have any questions

Good luck

O-Moei wrote:
Hello !, from your Queue. I guess here's as the M4M I promised XD/

General :
- None -

Easy :
00:15:821 (2,3) - Just when I check AIMod Distance, here's a problem

Fixed in previous mod

01:02:154 (1,3) - Doesn't seemed nice their slider touched, lower 01:03:488 (3) - a little or opposite curve. Accordingly, 01:04:154 (4,1) - need to move for solid distance

I'm sorry, I don't really understand what you're saying here. :/

At other diff, 01:08:821 (1) - this spinner end timing point at 01:16:821 (1) - (Just for perfection xd)

Normal :
I recommend AR 5 and HP 3 if it still won't change your concepts

Alright, changed

Hard :
00:16:821 (5) - 00:22:154 (5) - I still can hear 5 hit here, like others before

Ahh, you're right, idk what I was doing there

00:49:154 (1,2) - Make them at least stacked with 00:47:988 (5,6) -

This works surprisingly well, changed.

00:55:988 (7) - Move 2 grid-step to the left

Changed in previous mod

Insane :
00:16:821 (9,10) - 00:22:154 (9,10) - Like Hard diff, I can still hear it should be 5 hit

Changed like above

Nah, that's all ! Good luck ! XD/

thanks for the mods.

Ayyri

Ayyri 2016-07-20T00:03:11+00:00

TheOnlyLeon wrote:
The Original version of the Lunatic was 4.8 stars which would be fine spread, but then Ayyri changed her mind and decided it should be easier, but being a GD, I don't see this as an issue at all.

Yes, because most of the suggestions people were giving me, were to make the map easier. So overall, it became a lot easier.

Yoshimaro

539 posts

Joined January 2014

Yoshimaro 2016-08-02T05:31:36+00:00

Alheak wrote:
M4M

- Yoshimaro -'s Extra
00:43:154 (4) - ctrl+g to increase the spacing and to add momentum with the build-up before the start of the verse. This will also break the flow here which will make 00:43:488 (1) - more impactful mapped it so the flow felt like the cursor was snaking, i see what you mean tho i just prefer it the way it is
00:51:154 (3,1) - slight overlap, still annoying o shit waddap thank

O-Moei wrote:
- Yoshimaro -'s Extra :
Excellent !

I love you thank you for the moe btw

hi and sorry and thank you

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: [C.H.S] 01. Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38154
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 2154,11488,12154,32821,38154,42154,48821,54154,64821,68821,70488,71654,72821,73988,75071,76821
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 3.599998

[Metadata]
Title:Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!
TitleUnicode:Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!
Artist:t+pazolite
ArtistUnicode:t+pazolite
Creator:TheOnlyLeon
Version:- Yoshimaro -'s Extra
Source:
Tags:C.H.S. Beauty Noizy Orient CHS-0015 DJ Pixie Edamame Infinity Lovewn tpa:pbr 最速 tpz Happy Hardcore Lasse Ayyri -Yoshimaro-
BeatmapID:1005383
BeatmapSetID:382674

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:8.5
ApproachRate:9.2
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Dockaaaahhhnnn.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
2155,333.333333333333,4,1,1,50,1,0
12821,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
38154,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
42154,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,50,0,0
42404,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,5,0,0
42488,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,60,0,0
42738,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,5,0,0
42821,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,70,0,0
43071,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,5,0,0
43154,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,80,0,0
43404,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,5,0,0
43488,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,90,0,0
54154,-86.9565217391304,4,2,1,90,0,1
64821,-86.9565217391304,4,2,1,90,0,0
68738,-86.9565217391304,4,2,1,60,0,0
76821,-86.9565217391304,4,2,1,30,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 52,173,91
Combo2 : 248,176,90
Combo3 : 38,70,181
Combo4 : 234,197,98

[HitObjects]
384,320,2154,6,0,B|328:320|328:320|352:272|320:224|320:224|336:176|256:144|256:144|176:176|192:224|192:224|160:272|184:320|184:320|104:320,1,540
256,317,3488,6,0,L|256:272,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,88,4404,2,0,L|309:136,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,289,5071,2,0,L|356:241,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,201,5571,2,0,L|244:216,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,117,5988,2,0,L|302:132,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,298,6321,6,0,L|134:283,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,193,6654,2,0,L|118:204,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,93,6904,2,0,L|142:127,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,24,7154,6,8,L|202:71,1,45,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,87,7321,2,8,L|299:134,1,45
180,183,7488,2,8,L|194:230,1,45
313,279,7634,2,8,L|300:320,1,33.75
491,207,7779,2,8,L|477:254,1,45
300,130,7925,2,8,L|314:177,1,45
491,53,8154,5,8,0:0:0:0:
408,227,8488,2,8,L|415:169,1,45
374,245,9321,2,8,L|381:187,1,45
340,263,10488,2,8,L|347:205,1,45
306,281,11488,6,0,B|313:220|313:220|296:227|258:226|225:209|203:175|208:124|228:94|267:78,1,270
293,148,12154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,81,12488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
137,285,12821,6,0,P|163:212|124:132,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,214,13321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,311,13488,2,0,P|307:332|381:315,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,236,13988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,82,14154,2,0,P|295:150|308:220,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,318,14654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,181,14821,2,0,P|319:148|236:208,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,267,15321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
38,179,15488,6,0,L|104:142,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,25,15821,2,0,L|93:62,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,225,16154,2,0,L|99:188,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,71,16488,2,0,L|88:108,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,271,16821,6,0,L|162:195,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,306,17321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
171,92,17488,2,0,P|210:107|245:145,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,306,17821,2,0,P|96:291|61:253,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,215,18154,6,0,P|305:231|400:207,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,129,18654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
447,309,18821,2,0,P|396:327|305:342,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,324,19321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,139,19488,2,0,P|340:187|286:262,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,324,19988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
185,77,20154,2,0,P|203:128|218:219,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,324,20654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,293,20821,6,0,P|44:274|74:270,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,301,21154,2,0,P|222:320|192:324,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
11,264,21488,2,0,P|55:245|85:241,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,330,21821,2,0,P|211:349|181:353,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
22,235,22154,6,0,P|66:216|166:201,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,251,22654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
258,152,22821,2,0,P|262:188|272:222,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
509,349,23154,2,0,P|504:313|494:278,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,56,23488,6,0,P|390:80|352:139,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
462,171,23988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
378,249,24154,2,0,P|308:241|255:194,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
462,171,24654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,69,24821,2,0,P|179:96|145:137,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,9,25321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,194,25488,2,0,B|264:237|253:266|253:266|238:302|251:340,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,231,25988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
405,320,26154,6,0,L|335:307,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,184,26488,2,0,L|190:197,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,287,26821,2,0,L|353:273,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,217,27155,2,0,L|171:230,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,253,27488,6,0,L|296:221,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,338,27988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,130,28154,2,0,P|280:85|285:47,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,100,28488,2,0,P|505:141|485:179,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,167,28821,6,0,L|187:26,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,248,29321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,216,29488,2,0,L|296:69,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,248,29988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,274,30154,2,0,L|368:161,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,248,30654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,326,30821,2,0,L|385:277,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,248,31321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
78,46,31488,6,0,L|134:96,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,303,31821,2,0,L|16:253,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,50,32154,2,0,L|95:99,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,299,32487,2,0,L|54:249,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,53,32821,6,0,L|113:157,1,144,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,150,33488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,158,33988,1,0,3:0:0:0:
351,129,34071,1,0,3:0:0:0:
346,100,34154,2,0,L|333:26,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,139,34488,1,0,3:0:0:0:
449,148,34654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,224,34821,2,0,P|205:205|178:112,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,363,35488,5,0,3:0:0:0:
328,287,35654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,361,35821,1,0,3:0:0:0:
282,211,36154,1,2,3:0:0:0:
208,353,36821,6,0,L|244:278,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,346,37154,1,0,3:0:0:0:
154,259,37321,1,0,3:0:0:0:
53,257,37488,1,2,3:0:0:0:
216,127,37821,2,0,P|222:162|221:198,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,330,38154,5,0,0:0:0:0:
436,308,38237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,286,38320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,325,38488,2,0,L|345:269,1,80.9999975280763,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,179,38821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
474,347,38988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
450,137,39154,2,0,L|487:216,1,80.9999975280763,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,246,39488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
241,220,39571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,193,39654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,354,39821,2,0,L|141:294,1,80.9999975280763,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,138,40154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,182,40321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,304,40488,2,0,L|265:244,1,80.9999975280763,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,115,40821,5,0,0:0:0:0:
56,97,40904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,79,40988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,290,41154,2,0,L|75:253,1,80.9999975280763,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,10,41488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
234,184,41654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,115,41820,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,376,41988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,253,42154,6,8,B|416:196|416:196|404:239,1,148.50000453186,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
387,301,42488,2,8,B|294:360|294:360|305:309,1,148.50000453186,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
349,183,42821,2,8,B|375:80|375:80|332:112,1,148.50000453186,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
275,160,43154,2,8,L|232:304,1,148.50000453186,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
70,325,43488,6,0,B|86:273|86:273|114:245|114:245|130:189,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
42,197,43821,1,0,3:0:0:0:
158,325,43988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
80,119,44154,6,0,B|133:105|133:105|171:116|171:116|225:104,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,44488,1,0,3:0:0:0:
181,27,44655,1,0,1:0:0:0:
271,288,44821,6,0,L|284:201,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,99,44988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
419,99,45071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,99,45154,2,0,L|432:186,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
498,305,45321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
498,305,45404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
498,305,45488,6,0,L|411:318,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,158,45654,2,0,L|385:171,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,323,45821,2,0,L|286:336,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,140,45988,2,0,L|260:153,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,341,46154,6,0,B|174:347|174:347|117:292,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
268,85,46488,1,0,3:0:0:0:
204,265,46654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
298,168,46821,6,0,B|350:115|350:115|344:41,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
183,60,47154,1,0,3:0:0:0:
429,142,47321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
372,331,47488,6,0,L|307:271,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,268,47654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
69,268,47738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
69,268,47821,2,0,L|153:241,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,38,47988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
275,38,48071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,38,48154,6,0,L|255:124,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,387,48321,2,0,L|222:300,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,93,48488,2,0,L|171:152,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,156,48654,2,0,L|323:182,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,268,48821,6,0,B|109:254|109:254|142:216|142:216|197:198,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
58,186,49154,1,0,3:0:0:0:
194,284,49321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
272,98,49488,6,0,B|264:139|264:139|280:187|280:187|268:243,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
118,326,49821,1,0,3:0:0:0:
348,129,49988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
147,184,50154,6,0,L|195:198,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,282,50321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
379,282,50404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
379,282,50488,2,0,L|331:295,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,115,50654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
190,115,50738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,115,50821,6,0,L|202:58,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,12,50988,2,0,L|389:68,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,232,51154,2,0,L|148:175,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,129,51321,2,0,L|335:185,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,361,51488,6,0,B|94:289|94:289|29:217,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
4,319,51821,1,0,3:0:0:0:
242,180,51988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
273,377,52154,6,0,B|253:307|253:307|296:233,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
342,320,52488,1,0,3:0:0:0:
100,370,52654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
242,180,52821,6,0,L|213:231,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,320,52988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
342,320,53071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,320,53154,2,0,L|371:269,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,301,53321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
175,301,53404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,301,53488,6,0,L|150:257,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,140,53654,2,0,L|49:140,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,27,53821,2,0,L|199:115,1,99.0000030212403,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,198,54154,6,0,B|453:144|453:144|415:113|415:113|398:55,1,155.250002961159,8|0,3:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
473,17,54488,2,0,L|489:70,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,247,54654,2,0,L|375:190,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,17,54821,2,0,L|249:117,1,103.500001974106,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,364,55154,1,0,3:0:0:0:
172,210,55321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
41,369,55488,6,0,P|24:344|19:318,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,292,55654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
146,292,55738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
146,292,55821,2,0,P|121:308|95:314,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,183,55988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
71,183,56071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,183,56154,6,0,P|84:206|88:231,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
9,242,56321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
9,242,56404,1,0,1:0:0:0:
9,242,56488,1,0,3:0:0:0:
59,16,56654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
216,210,56821,6,0,B|290:236|290:236|375:200,1,155.250002961159,8|0,3:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
414,274,57154,2,0,L|355:299,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,128,57321,2,0,L|286:147,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,314,57488,2,0,L|151:277,1,103.500001974106,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,370,57821,1,0,3:0:0:0:
374,108,57988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
467,341,58154,6,0,P|476:314|473:277,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,291,58321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
343,291,58404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,291,58488,2,0,P|370:300|407:297,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,165,58655,1,0,1:0:0:0:
385,165,58738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
385,165,58821,6,0,P|379:190|380:216,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,206,58988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,206,59071,1,0,1:0:0:0:
464,206,59154,1,0,3:0:0:0:
431,27,59321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
255,162,59488,6,0,B|267:109|267:109|297:77|297:77|315:18,1,155.250002961159,8|0,3:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
178,11,59821,2,0,L|224:35,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,180,59988,2,0,L|339:156,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,115,60154,2,0,L|262:165,1,103.500001974106,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,301,60488,1,0,3:0:0:0:
80,50,60654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
114,282,60821,6,0,P|113:309|121:339,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,296,60988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
246,296,61071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,296,61154,2,0,P|221:302|196:301,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,172,61321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
194,172,61404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,172,61488,6,0,B|196:198|215:219,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,304,61654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,304,61738,1,0,1:0:0:0:
343,304,61821,1,0,3:0:0:0:
277,162,61988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
512,205,62154,6,0,L|505:147,3,51.7500009870529,10|0|0|0,3:1|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,12,62488,2,0,L|395:63,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,233,62654,2,0,L|383:175,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,40,62821,2,0,L|272:91,3,51.7500009870529,8|0|0|0,3:1|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,261,63154,2,0,L|260:203,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,68,63321,2,0,L|149:119,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,289,63488,5,8,3:1:0:0:
141,272,63572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,255,63655,1,0,1:0:0:0:
137,238,63738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,226,63821,5,8,3:1:0:0:
111,201,63904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
107,176,63988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
103,151,64071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
73,130,64154,5,8,3:1:0:0:
75,161,64238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
78,191,64321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
81,221,64404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,252,64488,2,0,B|80:271|71:289|71:289|88:283|108:286|108:286|99:272|95:263,1,103.500001974106,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,173,64821,5,14,0:1:0:0:
256,192,64988,12,0,68738,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68821,12,0,70488,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70571,12,0,71654,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71737,12,0,72821,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72904,12,0,73987,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74071,12,0,75071,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75154,12,0,76821,0:0:0:0:

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2016-08-02T12:24:53+00:00

@alheak:
diff is basically hard without jumps and triples, so idk
there are faint drums on the rpeat/end of that slider
rhythm seems k there lol

Weber

1,254 posts

Joined May 2015

Weber 2016-08-27T18:44:25+00:00

mod 4 ayyri

General

Regarding the speed-up between 3 seconds and 12 seconds, someone is going to have to manually time all of the individual hits.

Easy

I would really advise you to copypaste sliders and rotate if necessary to create clean symmetry within combos, like you did here: 00:18:154 (1,2) - in more places like this: 00:26:154 (1,3) - and here: 00:31:488 (1,3) -

Also check DS errors in aimod

00:14:154 (2,1) - Blanket
00:42:154 (1,3) - This would do really well to blanket around each other
00:58:821 (5) - White tick at the end of this slider should be its own note, so players can press on a downbeat

Normal

00:59:488 (1,2) - Copypaste (1) and rotate to create symmetry
00:54:154 (1,2) - ^
01:02:154 (1,2) - These could bare to curve around each other
00:56:821 (1,2) - ^
01:04:821 (1) - Spinner should probably start right after this note

Lasse's Advanced

00:07:821 (3) - Mistimed
00:08:488 (1,2,3) - There aren't really sounds to warrant these sliders/reverse sliders
00:08:488 (1,2,2,3) - Blanket
00:32:821 (1) - This should definitely end on the white tick, the slider isn't necessary

Hard

00:06:821 (1,4) - Mistimed
00:57:321 (2,4,5) - These should probably stack
01:02:822 (3) - Could blanket around (1,2,4)
00:57:488 (3) - ^

Ayyri's Lunatic

00:17:654 (3,4) - Spacing for this should be the same as the spacing for 00:17:488 (2,3) -
00:17:821 (4,1) - Likewise ^
00:27:988 (6,2) - I feel its a little awkward having to jump back to the same space twice here and then AGAIN on the slider right after
00:30:154 (5,6) - Pls straighten
00:50:154 (1,2,3) - Too many sounds here to fit with the music
01:08:821 (1) - Fix Spinner Timings ala other diffs

Insane:

00:12:154 (1,2) - I'm not sure what you intended with this whole double note thing for the first half, but these really don't fit with the music that well at all, I would advise removing the doubles and sticking closer to the music
00:44:488 (1,2,3) - imo these jumps scattered all around the second half feel pretty awkward to play, and the map suffers a lot playability-wise from it, I would advise making them a little easier to pull off, and to try making some other type of jumps, much like the triangle jump you used at the end of your hard diff.

Yoshimaro's Extra

00:41:488 (5,6,7,8,1) - Super awkward jump to pull off, I would make (8) a little easier to hit

Good luck

Yoshimaro

539 posts

Joined January 2014

Yoshimaro 2016-08-27T20:08:44+00:00

Tatsuyu wrote:
Yoshimaro's Extra

00:41:488 (5,6,7,8,1) - Super awkward jump to pull off, I would make (8) a little easier to hit didn't change the placement of 8, but made the pattern a bit more intuitive and less space in between so the gap between 7 and 8 doesn't feel that harsh in comparison now

o shit grats lasse on bn status c:

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: [C.H.S] 01. Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38154
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 2154,11488,12154,32821,38154,42154,48821,54154,64821,68821,70488,71654,72821,73988,75071,76821
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.199999

[Metadata]
Title:Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!
TitleUnicode:Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!
Artist:t+pazolite
ArtistUnicode:t+pazolite
Creator:TheOnlyLeon
Version:- Yoshimaro -'s Extra
Source:
Tags:C.H.S. Beauty Noizy Orient CHS-0015 DJ Pixie Edamame Infinity Lovewn tpa:pbr 最速 tpz Happy Hardcore Lasse Ayyri -Yoshimaro-
BeatmapID:1005383
BeatmapSetID:382674

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:8.5
ApproachRate:9.2
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Dockaaaahhhnnn.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
2155,333.333333333333,4,1,1,50,1,0
12821,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
38154,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
42154,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,50,0,0
42404,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,5,0,0
42488,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,60,0,0
42738,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,5,0,0
42821,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,70,0,0
43071,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,5,0,0
43154,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,80,0,0
43404,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,5,0,0
43488,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,90,0,0
54154,-86.9565217391304,4,2,1,90,0,1
64821,-86.9565217391304,4,2,1,90,0,0
68738,-86.9565217391304,4,2,1,60,0,0
76821,-86.9565217391304,4,2,1,30,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 52,173,91
Combo2 : 248,176,90
Combo3 : 38,70,181
Combo4 : 234,197,98

[HitObjects]
384,320,2154,6,0,B|328:320|328:320|352:272|320:224|320:224|336:176|256:144|256:144|176:176|192:224|192:224|160:272|184:320|184:320|104:320,1,540
256,317,3488,6,0,L|256:272,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,88,4404,2,0,L|309:136,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,289,5071,2,0,L|356:241,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,201,5571,2,0,L|244:216,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,117,5988,2,0,L|302:132,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,298,6321,6,0,L|134:283,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,193,6654,2,0,L|118:204,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,93,6904,2,0,L|142:127,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,24,7154,6,8,L|202:71,1,45,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,87,7321,2,8,L|299:134,1,45
180,183,7488,2,8,L|194:230,1,45
313,279,7634,2,8,L|300:320,1,33.75
491,207,7779,2,8,L|477:254,1,45
300,130,7925,2,8,L|314:177,1,45
491,53,8154,5,8,0:0:0:0:
408,227,8488,2,8,L|415:169,1,45
374,245,9321,2,8,L|381:187,1,45
340,263,10488,2,8,L|347:205,1,45
306,281,11488,6,0,B|313:220|313:220|296:227|258:226|225:209|203:175|208:124|228:94|267:78,1,270
293,148,12154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,81,12488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
137,285,12821,6,0,P|163:212|124:132,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,214,13321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,311,13488,2,0,P|307:332|381:315,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,236,13988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,82,14154,2,0,P|295:150|308:220,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,318,14654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,181,14821,2,0,P|319:148|236:208,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,267,15321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
38,179,15488,6,0,L|104:142,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,25,15821,2,0,L|93:62,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,225,16154,2,0,L|99:188,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,71,16488,2,0,L|88:108,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,271,16821,6,0,L|162:195,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,306,17321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
171,92,17488,2,0,P|210:107|245:145,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,306,17821,2,0,P|96:291|61:253,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,215,18154,6,0,P|305:231|400:207,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,129,18654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
447,309,18821,2,0,P|396:327|305:342,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,324,19321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,139,19488,2,0,P|340:187|286:262,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,324,19988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
185,77,20154,2,0,P|203:128|218:219,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,324,20654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,293,20821,6,0,P|44:274|74:270,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,301,21154,2,0,P|222:320|192:324,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
11,264,21488,2,0,P|55:245|85:241,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,330,21821,2,0,P|211:349|181:353,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
22,235,22154,6,0,P|66:216|166:201,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,251,22654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
258,152,22821,2,0,P|262:188|272:222,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
509,349,23154,2,0,P|504:313|494:278,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,56,23488,6,0,P|390:80|352:139,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
462,171,23988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
378,249,24154,2,0,P|308:241|255:194,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
462,171,24654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,69,24821,2,0,P|179:96|145:137,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,9,25321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,194,25488,2,0,B|264:237|253:266|253:266|238:302|251:340,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,231,25988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
405,320,26154,6,0,L|335:307,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,184,26488,2,0,L|190:197,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,287,26821,2,0,L|353:273,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,217,27155,2,0,L|171:230,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,253,27488,6,0,L|296:221,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,338,27988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,130,28154,2,0,P|280:85|285:47,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,100,28488,2,0,P|505:141|485:179,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,167,28821,6,0,L|187:26,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,248,29321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,216,29488,2,0,L|296:69,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,248,29988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,274,30154,2,0,L|368:161,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,248,30654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,326,30821,2,0,L|385:277,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,248,31321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
78,46,31488,6,0,L|134:96,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,303,31821,2,0,L|16:253,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,50,32154,2,0,L|95:99,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,299,32487,2,0,L|54:249,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,53,32821,6,0,L|113:157,1,144,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,150,33488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,158,33988,1,0,3:0:0:0:
351,129,34071,1,0,3:0:0:0:
346,100,34154,2,0,L|333:26,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,139,34488,1,0,3:0:0:0:
449,148,34654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,224,34821,2,0,P|205:205|178:112,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,363,35488,5,0,3:0:0:0:
328,287,35654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,361,35821,1,0,3:0:0:0:
282,211,36154,1,2,3:0:0:0:
208,353,36821,6,0,L|244:278,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,346,37154,1,0,3:0:0:0:
154,259,37321,1,0,3:0:0:0:
53,257,37488,1,2,3:0:0:0:
216,127,37821,2,0,P|222:162|221:198,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,330,38154,5,0,0:0:0:0:
436,308,38237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,286,38320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,325,38488,2,0,L|345:269,1,80.9999975280763,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,179,38821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
474,347,38988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
450,137,39154,2,0,L|487:216,1,80.9999975280763,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,246,39488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
241,220,39571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,193,39654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,354,39821,2,0,L|141:294,1,80.9999975280763,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,138,40154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,182,40321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,304,40488,2,0,L|265:244,1,80.9999975280763,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,115,40821,5,0,0:0:0:0:
56,97,40904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,79,40988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,290,41154,2,0,L|75:253,1,80.9999975280763,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,74,41488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,264,41654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,115,41820,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,376,41988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,253,42154,6,8,B|416:196|416:196|404:239,1,148.50000453186,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
387,301,42488,2,8,B|294:360|294:360|305:309,1,148.50000453186,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
349,183,42821,2,8,B|375:80|375:80|332:112,1,148.50000453186,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
275,160,43154,2,8,L|232:304,1,148.50000453186,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
70,325,43488,6,0,B|86:273|86:273|114:245|114:245|130:189,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
42,197,43821,1,0,3:0:0:0:
158,325,43988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
80,119,44154,6,0,B|133:105|133:105|171:116|171:116|225:104,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,44488,1,0,3:0:0:0:
181,27,44655,1,0,1:0:0:0:
271,288,44821,6,0,L|284:201,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,99,44988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
419,99,45071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,99,45154,2,0,L|432:186,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
498,305,45321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
498,305,45404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
498,305,45488,6,0,L|411:318,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,158,45654,2,0,L|385:171,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,323,45821,2,0,L|286:336,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,140,45988,2,0,L|260:153,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,341,46154,6,0,B|174:347|174:347|117:292,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
268,85,46488,1,0,3:0:0:0:
204,265,46654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
298,168,46821,6,0,B|350:115|350:115|344:41,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
183,60,47154,1,0,3:0:0:0:
429,142,47321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
372,331,47488,6,0,L|307:271,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,268,47654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
69,268,47738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
69,268,47821,2,0,L|153:241,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,38,47988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
275,38,48071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,38,48154,6,0,L|255:124,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,387,48321,2,0,L|222:300,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,93,48488,2,0,L|171:152,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,156,48654,2,0,L|323:182,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,268,48821,6,0,B|109:254|109:254|142:216|142:216|197:198,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
58,186,49154,1,0,3:0:0:0:
194,284,49321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
272,98,49488,6,0,B|264:139|264:139|280:187|280:187|268:243,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
118,326,49821,1,0,3:0:0:0:
348,129,49988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
147,184,50154,6,0,L|195:198,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,282,50321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
379,282,50404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
379,282,50488,2,0,L|331:295,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,115,50654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
190,115,50738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,115,50821,6,0,L|202:58,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,12,50988,2,0,L|389:68,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,232,51154,2,0,L|148:175,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,129,51321,2,0,L|335:185,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,361,51488,6,0,B|94:289|94:289|29:217,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
4,319,51821,1,0,3:0:0:0:
242,180,51988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
273,377,52154,6,0,B|253:307|253:307|296:233,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
342,320,52488,1,0,3:0:0:0:
100,370,52654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
242,180,52821,6,0,L|213:231,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,320,52988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
342,320,53071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,320,53154,2,0,L|371:269,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,301,53321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
175,301,53404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,301,53488,6,0,L|150:257,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,140,53654,2,0,L|49:140,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,27,53821,2,0,L|199:115,1,99.0000030212403,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,198,54154,6,0,B|453:144|453:144|415:113|415:113|398:55,1,155.250002961159,8|0,3:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
473,17,54488,2,0,L|489:70,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,247,54654,2,0,L|375:190,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,17,54821,2,0,L|249:117,1,103.500001974106,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,364,55154,1,0,3:0:0:0:
172,210,55321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
41,369,55488,6,0,P|24:344|19:318,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,292,55654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
146,292,55738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
146,292,55821,2,0,P|121:308|95:314,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,183,55988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
71,183,56071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,183,56154,6,0,P|84:206|88:231,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
9,242,56321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
9,242,56404,1,0,1:0:0:0:
9,242,56488,1,0,3:0:0:0:
59,16,56654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
216,210,56821,6,0,B|290:236|290:236|375:200,1,155.250002961159,8|0,3:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
414,274,57154,2,0,L|355:299,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,128,57321,2,0,L|286:147,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,314,57488,2,0,L|151:277,1,103.500001974106,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,370,57821,1,0,3:0:0:0:
374,108,57988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
467,341,58154,6,0,P|476:314|473:277,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,291,58321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
343,291,58404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,291,58488,2,0,P|370:300|407:297,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,165,58655,1,0,1:0:0:0:
385,165,58738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
385,165,58821,6,0,P|379:190|380:216,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,206,58988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,206,59071,1,0,1:0:0:0:
464,206,59154,1,0,3:0:0:0:
431,27,59321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
255,162,59488,6,0,B|267:109|267:109|297:77|297:77|315:18,1,155.250002961159,8|0,3:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
178,11,59821,2,0,L|224:35,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,180,59988,2,0,L|339:156,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,115,60154,2,0,L|262:165,1,103.500001974106,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,301,60488,1,0,3:0:0:0:
80,50,60654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
114,282,60821,6,0,P|113:309|121:339,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,296,60988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
246,296,61071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,296,61154,2,0,P|221:302|196:301,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,172,61321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
194,172,61404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,172,61488,6,0,B|196:198|215:219,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,304,61654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,304,61738,1,0,1:0:0:0:
343,304,61821,1,0,3:0:0:0:
277,162,61988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
512,205,62154,6,0,L|505:147,3,51.7500009870529,10|0|0|0,3:1|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,12,62488,2,0,L|395:63,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,233,62654,2,0,L|383:175,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,40,62821,2,0,L|272:91,3,51.7500009870529,8|0|0|0,3:1|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,261,63154,2,0,L|260:203,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,68,63321,2,0,L|149:119,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,289,63488,5,8,3:1:0:0:
141,272,63572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,255,63655,1,0,1:0:0:0:
137,238,63738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,226,63821,5,8,3:1:0:0:
111,201,63904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
107,176,63988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
103,151,64071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
73,130,64154,5,8,3:1:0:0:
75,161,64238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
78,191,64321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
81,221,64404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,252,64488,2,0,B|80:271|71:289|71:289|88:283|108:286|108:286|99:272|95:263,1,103.500001974106,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,173,64821,5,14,0:1:0:0:
256,192,64988,12,0,68738,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68821,12,0,70488,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70571,12,0,71654,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71737,12,0,72821,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72904,12,0,73987,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74071,12,0,75071,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75154,12,0,76821,0:0:0:0:

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2016-08-28T08:24:25+00:00

Mod for tickey by Ayyri's thread.

[Easy]
00:52:821 (1,2) - spacing issue.

[Normal]
i found your kiai part doesn't have 1/2 gap's notes, but you have a lot of 1/2 gap notes in other parts. that's not so good imo. try to make 1/2 gap's notes fewer, such as - 00:19:488 (1,2,3) - 00:18:154 (3,4,5) - , use 1/1 sliders instead. if you do this, you can make some of 1/1 gap's notes in kiai part into two 1/2 sliders, such as - 00:44:821 (3,4,5,6) - these.

[Lasse's Advanced]
nothing.

[Ayyri's Lunatic]
nothing.

[Insane]
hmm... the rhythm you used in kiai part is too simple imo. you can catch the sounds just as Lasse did in Advanced diff and Ayyri did in Lunatic diff. for example,

00:43:488 (1) - http://puu.sh/qRatU/c3a96d0452.jpg
00:51:488 (9) - http://puu.sh/qRawk/3ce6315a78.jpg

you can turn down the playback rate to catch more sounds in music.
http://puu.sh/qRaye/c96dc1a25d.jpg

[- Yoshimaro -'s Extra]
00:46:821 (1,2) - 01:00:154 (4,5) - i can't find the difference between 3/4 slider+ circle and 1/2 slider+circle in this diff.

good luck!

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2016-08-28T08:37:03+00:00

https://0paste.com/9054.txt

fixed the things from tatsuyu's mod, except 00:32:821 - but I removed the repeat there, stays 1/2 slider since there is something on the red tick and the pattern looks nicer, changed end to soft sampleset though
main point of the "overmapped" sliders in the early part was to keep the rhythm gaps between notes eaisier to get, but I think this works fine too
thanks for modding!

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,106 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2016-08-28T08:40:28+00:00

M4M from ayyri's queue

[General]

ill suggest change the AR to 7 on Lasse's Advanced diff so the AR spread would be much better, and change the HP to 6 on Ayyri's Lunatic doff
every diff that have map from 00:02:154 - to 00:12:821 - plz change the sample to soft and fix the hitsound cuz normal sample is just too noisy at the calm part at front, soft might sound a lot nicer, like - Yoshimaro -'s Extra's 00:12:821 - , this sound way better

[Easy]

00:14:154 (2,1) - adjust the spacing a little, cuz the spacing is more like x0.76 instead of x0.8
00:23:488 (1,2) - lol can you fix the node? is more like a 2010 slider =w=
00:46:154 (3,1) - spacing here is more like x0.73 instead of x0.8, should fix the sapcing here
00:54:154 (3) - should NC here instead
00:54:154 - why the ds change to x1.0 here? the spacing should be always constant on easy diff, might want to fix the sapcing problems
00:55:821 (3,2) - ill said just make them the same
01:01:488 (4,1) - and the spacing here is more like x1.05 instead of x1.00

[Normal]

00:27:488 (1,2) - spacing here is more like x0.9 instead of x1.00
00:28:154 (2,3) - same, spacing issue

[Lasse's Advanced]

00:02:154 - 00:12:821 - can you add a soft sampleset at the sliderend lol? sound very very noisy =w= especially it's a calm part, or just used soft sample and fix the hitsound =w=
00:12:821 (1,2,3,4) - not stacking perfectly for intentional?
00:32:821 (1) - a note here would just seems more fit then a reverse slider
00:49:821 (6) - may want to curve more to have a better blanket
01:02:154 (1,2) - shape seems ugly lol, might want to change the slider
01:04:488 (1) - unnecessary NC, like the music doesnt need to NC for emphasis here

[Hard]

00:02:154 - same as Lasse's Advanced. mught just change the sample to soft and fix the hitsound cuz normal sample is just too noisy
lower the volume to 40%, 80was just too loud at the clam part at the beginning
01:02:155 (1,3) - obvious stacking problem
01:04:322 (1,1) - for intentional?
this diff should polish more cuz rn seems kinda messy

[Ayyri's Lunatic]

00:17:821 (4) - lol wat is this following? i dont hear the music got the "stream" sound here tho lol, a notes here just seems better then the current one
00:27:488 (5) - should NC here instead of 00:28:154 (1) -
00:28:821 (3) - NC
00:50:154 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing with other similar part like 00:48:821 (1,2,3) - 00:49:488 (5,6,7) - etc
00:52:821 (1,2,3) - i rly dont see the reason why the spacing should be this big lol, the music isnt that intense to used the big spacing like this tho =w=
01:00:154 (4,5,6) - lol inconsistent spacing xdd
01:04:488 (5) - NC for consistent

[Insane]

00:12:821 (5) - 00:18:154 (5) - 00:24:821 (5) - 00:28:821 (5) - 00:30:154 (9) - NC
00:22:154 (9) - 00:23:488 (5) - same00:27:488 (9) - should NC here instead
00:46:154 (9) - 00:48:821 (10) - 00:51:488 (9) - NC for consistent

[- Yoshimaro -'s Extra]

00:19:488 (5) - 00:30:154 (5) - 01:04:488 (5) - NC for consistent
best diff in this set lol

k GL

Yoshimaro

539 posts

Joined January 2014

Yoshimaro 2016-08-28T20:42:00+00:00

Lily Bread wrote:
[- Yoshimaro -'s Extra]
00:46:821 (1,2) - 01:00:154 (4,5) - i can't find the difference between 3/4 slider+ circle and 1/2 slider+circle in this diff. that's how i had it originally. i changed it there because pre kiai is drum and kiai is synth. currently, its consistent pre kiai with 3/4slider circle and during kiai 1/2 slider circle

Thank based Bread <3 C:

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
[- Yoshimaro -'s Extra]
00:19:488 (5) - 00:30:154 (5) - 01:04:488 (5) - NC for consistent o shit lol k fix
best diff in this set lol i love you
Thank based NiNo that made my day lol...

completely random side note but i was watching sinbads adventure and he dabbed omfg im memeing this

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: [C.H.S] 01. Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38154
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 2154,11488,12154,32821,38154,42154,48821,54154,64821,68821,70488,71654,72821,73988,75071,76821
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.199999

[Metadata]
Title:Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!
TitleUnicode:Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!
Artist:t+pazolite
ArtistUnicode:t+pazolite
Creator:TheOnlyLeon
Version:- Yoshimaro -'s Extra
Source:
Tags:C.H.S. Beauty Noizy Orient CHS-0015 DJ Pixie Edamame Infinity Lovewn tpa:pbr 最速 tpz Happy Hardcore Lasse Ayyri -Yoshimaro-
BeatmapID:1005383
BeatmapSetID:382674

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:8.5
ApproachRate:9.2
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Dockaaaahhhnnn.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
2155,333.333333333333,4,1,1,50,1,0
12821,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
38154,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
42154,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,50,0,0
42404,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,5,0,0
42488,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,60,0,0
42738,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,5,0,0
42821,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,70,0,0
43071,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,5,0,0
43154,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,80,0,0
43404,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,5,0,0
43488,-90.9090909090908,4,2,1,90,0,0
54154,-86.9565217391304,4,2,1,90,0,1
64821,-86.9565217391304,4,2,1,90,0,0
68738,-86.9565217391304,4,2,1,60,0,0
76821,-86.9565217391304,4,2,1,30,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 52,173,91
Combo2 : 248,176,90
Combo3 : 38,70,181
Combo4 : 234,197,98

[HitObjects]
384,320,2154,6,0,B|328:320|328:320|352:272|320:224|320:224|336:176|256:144|256:144|176:176|192:224|192:224|160:272|184:320|184:320|104:320,1,540
256,317,3488,6,0,L|256:272,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,88,4404,2,0,L|309:136,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,289,5071,2,0,L|356:241,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,201,5571,2,0,L|244:216,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,117,5988,2,0,L|302:132,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,298,6321,6,0,L|134:283,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,193,6654,2,0,L|118:204,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,93,6904,2,0,L|142:127,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,24,7154,6,8,L|202:71,1,45,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,87,7321,2,8,L|299:134,1,45
180,183,7488,2,8,L|194:230,1,45
313,279,7634,2,8,L|300:320,1,33.75
491,207,7779,2,8,L|477:254,1,45
300,130,7925,2,8,L|314:177,1,45
491,53,8154,5,8,0:0:0:0:
408,227,8488,2,8,L|415:169,1,45
374,245,9321,2,8,L|381:187,1,45
340,263,10488,2,8,L|347:205,1,45
306,281,11488,6,0,B|313:220|313:220|296:227|258:226|225:209|203:175|208:124|228:94|267:78,1,270
293,148,12154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,81,12488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
137,285,12821,6,0,P|163:212|124:132,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,214,13321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,311,13488,2,0,P|307:332|381:315,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,236,13988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,82,14154,2,0,P|295:150|308:220,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,318,14654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,181,14821,2,0,P|319:148|236:208,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,267,15321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
38,179,15488,6,0,L|104:142,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,25,15821,2,0,L|93:62,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,225,16154,2,0,L|99:188,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,71,16488,2,0,L|88:108,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,271,16821,6,0,L|162:195,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,306,17321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
171,92,17488,2,0,P|210:107|245:145,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,306,17821,2,0,P|96:291|61:253,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,215,18154,6,0,P|305:231|400:207,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,129,18654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
447,309,18821,2,0,P|396:327|305:342,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,324,19321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,139,19488,6,0,P|340:187|286:262,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,324,19988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
185,77,20154,2,0,P|203:128|218:219,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,324,20654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,293,20821,6,0,P|44:274|74:270,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,301,21154,2,0,P|222:320|192:324,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
11,264,21488,2,0,P|55:245|85:241,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,330,21821,2,0,P|211:349|181:353,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
22,235,22154,6,0,P|66:216|166:201,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,251,22654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
258,152,22821,2,0,P|262:188|272:222,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
509,349,23154,2,0,P|504:313|494:278,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,56,23488,6,0,P|390:80|352:139,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
462,171,23988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
378,249,24154,2,0,P|308:241|255:194,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
462,171,24654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,69,24821,2,0,P|179:96|145:137,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,9,25321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,194,25488,2,0,B|264:237|253:266|253:266|238:302|251:340,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,231,25988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
405,320,26154,6,0,L|335:307,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,184,26488,2,0,L|190:197,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,287,26821,2,0,L|353:273,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,217,27155,2,0,L|171:230,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,253,27488,6,0,L|296:221,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,338,27988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,130,28154,2,0,P|280:85|285:47,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,100,28488,2,0,P|505:141|485:179,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,167,28821,6,0,L|187:26,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,248,29321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,216,29488,2,0,L|296:69,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,248,29988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,274,30154,6,0,L|368:161,1,144,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,248,30654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,326,30821,2,0,L|385:277,1,144,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,248,31321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
78,46,31488,6,0,L|134:96,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,303,31821,2,0,L|16:253,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,50,32154,2,0,L|95:99,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,299,32487,2,0,L|54:249,1,72,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,53,32821,6,0,L|113:157,1,144,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,150,33488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,158,33988,1,0,3:0:0:0:
351,129,34071,1,0,3:0:0:0:
346,100,34154,2,0,L|333:26,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,139,34488,1,0,3:0:0:0:
449,148,34654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,224,34821,2,0,P|205:205|178:112,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,363,35488,5,0,3:0:0:0:
328,287,35654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,361,35821,1,0,3:0:0:0:
282,211,36154,1,2,3:0:0:0:
208,353,36821,6,0,L|244:278,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,346,37154,1,0,3:0:0:0:
154,259,37321,1,0,3:0:0:0:
53,257,37488,1,2,3:0:0:0:
216,127,37821,2,0,P|222:162|221:198,1,72,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,330,38154,5,0,0:0:0:0:
436,308,38237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,286,38320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,325,38488,2,0,L|345:269,1,80.9999975280763,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,179,38821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
474,347,38988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
450,137,39154,2,0,L|487:216,1,80.9999975280763,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,246,39488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
241,220,39571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,193,39654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,354,39821,2,0,L|141:294,1,80.9999975280763,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,138,40154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,182,40321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,304,40488,2,0,L|265:244,1,80.9999975280763,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,115,40821,5,0,0:0:0:0:
56,97,40904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,79,40988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,290,41154,2,0,L|75:253,1,80.9999975280763,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,74,41488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,264,41654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,115,41820,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,376,41988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,253,42154,6,8,B|416:196|416:196|404:239,1,148.50000453186,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
387,301,42488,2,8,B|294:360|294:360|305:309,1,148.50000453186,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
349,183,42821,2,8,B|375:80|375:80|332:112,1,148.50000453186,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
275,160,43154,2,8,L|232:304,1,148.50000453186,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:1:0:0:
70,325,43488,6,0,B|86:273|86:273|114:245|114:245|130:189,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
42,197,43821,1,0,3:0:0:0:
158,325,43988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
80,119,44154,6,0,B|133:105|133:105|171:116|171:116|225:104,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
128,192,44488,1,0,3:0:0:0:
181,27,44655,1,0,1:0:0:0:
271,288,44821,6,0,L|284:201,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,99,44988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
419,99,45071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,99,45154,2,0,L|432:186,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
498,305,45321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
498,305,45404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
498,305,45488,6,0,L|411:318,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,158,45654,2,0,L|385:171,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,323,45821,2,0,L|286:336,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,140,45988,2,0,L|260:153,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,341,46154,6,0,B|174:347|174:347|117:292,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
268,85,46488,1,0,3:0:0:0:
204,265,46654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
298,168,46821,6,0,B|350:115|350:115|344:41,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
183,60,47154,1,0,3:0:0:0:
429,142,47321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
372,331,47488,6,0,L|307:271,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,268,47654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
69,268,47738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
69,268,47821,2,0,L|153:241,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,38,47988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
275,38,48071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,38,48154,6,0,L|255:124,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,387,48321,2,0,L|222:300,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,93,48488,2,0,L|171:152,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,156,48654,2,0,L|323:182,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,268,48821,6,0,B|109:254|109:254|142:216|142:216|197:198,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
58,186,49154,1,0,3:0:0:0:
194,284,49321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
272,98,49488,6,0,B|264:139|264:139|280:187|280:187|268:243,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
118,326,49821,1,0,3:0:0:0:
348,129,49988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
147,184,50154,6,0,L|195:198,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,282,50321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
379,282,50404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
379,282,50488,2,0,L|331:295,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,115,50654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
190,115,50738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,115,50821,6,0,L|202:58,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,12,50988,2,0,L|389:68,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,232,51154,2,0,L|148:175,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,129,51321,2,0,L|335:185,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,361,51488,6,0,B|94:289|94:289|29:217,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
4,319,51821,1,0,3:0:0:0:
242,180,51988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
273,377,52154,6,0,B|253:307|253:307|296:233,1,148.50000453186,0|0,3:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
342,320,52488,1,0,3:0:0:0:
100,370,52654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
242,180,52821,6,0,L|213:231,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,320,52988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
342,320,53071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,320,53154,2,0,L|371:269,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,301,53321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
175,301,53404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,301,53488,6,0,L|150:257,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,140,53654,2,0,L|49:140,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,27,53821,2,0,L|199:115,1,99.0000030212403,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,198,54154,6,0,B|453:144|453:144|415:113|415:113|398:55,1,155.250002961159,8|0,3:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
473,17,54488,2,0,L|489:70,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,247,54654,2,0,L|375:190,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,17,54821,2,0,L|249:117,1,103.500001974106,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,364,55154,1,0,3:0:0:0:
172,210,55321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
41,369,55488,6,0,P|24:344|19:318,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,292,55654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
146,292,55738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
146,292,55821,2,0,P|121:308|95:314,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,183,55988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
71,183,56071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,183,56154,6,0,P|84:206|88:231,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
9,242,56321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
9,242,56404,1,0,1:0:0:0:
9,242,56488,1,0,3:0:0:0:
59,16,56654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
216,210,56821,6,0,B|290:236|290:236|375:200,1,155.250002961159,8|0,3:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
414,274,57154,2,0,L|355:299,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,128,57321,2,0,L|286:147,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,314,57488,2,0,L|151:277,1,103.500001974106,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,370,57821,1,0,3:0:0:0:
374,108,57988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
467,341,58154,6,0,P|476:314|473:277,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,291,58321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
343,291,58404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,291,58488,2,0,P|370:300|407:297,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,165,58655,1,0,1:0:0:0:
385,165,58738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
385,165,58821,6,0,P|379:190|380:216,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,206,58988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,206,59071,1,0,1:0:0:0:
464,206,59154,1,0,3:0:0:0:
431,27,59321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
255,162,59488,6,0,B|267:109|267:109|297:77|297:77|315:18,1,155.250002961159,8|0,3:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
178,11,59821,2,0,L|224:35,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,180,59988,2,0,L|339:156,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,115,60154,2,0,L|262:165,1,103.500001974106,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,301,60488,1,0,3:0:0:0:
80,50,60654,1,0,1:0:0:0:
114,282,60821,6,0,P|113:309|121:339,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,296,60988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
246,296,61071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,296,61154,2,0,P|221:302|196:301,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,172,61321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
194,172,61404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,172,61488,6,0,B|196:198|215:219,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,304,61654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,304,61738,1,0,1:0:0:0:
343,304,61821,1,0,3:0:0:0:
277,162,61988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
512,205,62154,6,0,L|505:147,3,51.7500009870529,10|0|0|0,3:1|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,12,62488,2,0,L|395:63,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,233,62654,2,0,L|383:175,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,40,62821,2,0,L|272:91,3,51.7500009870529,8|0|0|0,3:1|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,261,63154,2,0,L|260:203,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,68,63321,2,0,L|149:119,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,289,63488,5,8,3:1:0:0:
141,272,63572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,255,63655,1,0,1:0:0:0:
137,238,63738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,226,63821,5,8,3:1:0:0:
111,201,63904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
107,176,63988,1,0,1:0:0:0:
103,151,64071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
73,130,64154,5,8,3:1:0:0:
75,161,64238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
78,191,64321,1,0,1:0:0:0:
81,221,64404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,252,64488,6,0,B|80:271|71:289|71:289|88:283|108:286|108:286|99:272|95:263,1,103.500001974106,8|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,173,64821,5,14,0:1:0:0:
256,192,64988,12,0,68738,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68821,12,0,70488,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70571,12,0,71654,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71737,12,0,72821,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72904,12,0,73987,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74071,12,0,75071,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75154,12,0,76821,0:0:0:0:

Speed of Snail

548 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Speed of Snail 2016-08-29T07:23:11+00:00

Tatsuyu wrote:
mod 4 ayyri

Easy

I would really advise you to copypaste sliders and rotate if necessary to create clean symmetry within combos, like you did here: 00:18:154 (1,2) - in more places like this: 00:26:154 (1,3) - and here: 00:31:488 (1,3) -

Also check DS errors in aimod

Hmm, think AImod is drunk, the notes that're too far apart are one tick away from notes that have a higher DS and apparently there's no problems with those.

00:14:154 (2,1) - Blanket

Huh, I originally had it like that, dunno how it got pulled down so far.

00:42:154 (1,3) - This would do really well to blanket around each other

Alright, had to move around the slider quite a bit but I think I got a place

00:58:821 (5) - White tick at the end of this slider should be its own note, so players can press on a downbeat

Had to shift around half the map to make something fit here, but done

Normal

00:59:488 (1,2) - Copypaste (1) and rotate to create symmetry
00:54:154 (1,2) - ^

Changed

01:02:154 (1,2) - These could bare to curve around each other
00:56:821 (1,2) - ^

Can't really do that without messing around with the SV, that or I misinterpreted what you meant :/

01:04:821 (1) - Spinner should probably start right after this note

Nah, it starts with the film-grain sound effect and frankly I don't think the spinners should be THAT long

Hard

00:06:821 (1,4) - Mistimed

Hmm, guess it got snapped to the white tick when I changed the timings, should start on blue you're right

00:57:321 (2,4,5) - These should probably stack

Personally I think this makes the motion more awkward, but for aesthetics sake I'll try it

01:02:822 (3) - Could blanket around (1,2,4)
00:57:488 (3) - ^

I don't understand your suggestion

Insane:

00:12:154 (1,2) - I'm not sure what you intended with this whole double note thing for the first half, but these really don't fit with the music that well at all, I would advise removing the doubles and sticking closer to the music

Actually, this is about as close to the music as you can do on osu. it's setup to mimic the extremely loud and constant reverb, which just so happens to time pretty well exactly to 1/4 to the point you can't really distinguish the timings. Maybe this feels weird to only hit two notes, but clearly streams don't belong here, so it's a middle ground from ignoring the music entirely. I guess I could make some changes but certainly not by removing part of the song

00:44:488 (1,2,3) - imo these jumps scattered all around the second half feel pretty awkward to play, and the map suffers a lot playability-wise from it, I would advise making them a little easier to pull off, and to try making some other type of jumps, much like the triangle jump you used at the end of your hard diff.

hmm, IMO acute angle jumps aren't really any less awkward, they just reduce the maps range which makes it easier to play than it otherwise should be. This map is already quite easy compared to what an Insane diff would otherwise be, I don't see any good reason to nerf the most intense section just cause.

Lily Bread wrote:
Mod for tickey by Ayyri's thread.

[Easy]
00:52:821 (1,2) - spacing issue.

Same as before, if you actually look at the map the spacing is actually closer than the following note, yet AImod says it's too far away, don't feel like breaking my map cause AImod isn't perfect

[Normal]
i found your kiai part doesn't have 1/2 gap's notes, but you have a lot of 1/2 gap notes in other parts. that's not so good imo. try to make 1/2 gap's notes fewer, such as - 00:19:488 (1,2,3) - 00:18:154 (3,4,5) - , use 1/1 sliders instead. if you do this, you can make some of 1/1 gap's notes in kiai part into two 1/2 sliders, such as - 00:44:821 (3,4,5,6) - these.

I use them early because they fit the most dominant track in the music, while later on they don't. I don't see merit in mapping the entire song the exact same way unless the music is unchanging, which for most decent music, it is not

[Insane]
hmm... the rhythm you used in kiai part is too simple imo. you can catch the sounds just as Lasse did in Advanced diff and Ayyri did in Lunatic diff. for example,

00:43:488 (1) - http://puu.sh/qRatU/c3a96d0452.jpg
00:51:488 (9) - http://puu.sh/qRawk/3ce6315a78.jpg

you can turn down the playback rate to catch more sounds in music.
http://puu.sh/qRaye/c96dc1a25d.jpg

I can hear sounds there, but in general the rhythms are really toned down on this diff to begin with, since this isn't a terribly hard difficulty I don't want to go overkill and map every little detail, mapping the dominant rhythms does perfectly fine. Not looking to milk the song, I think what's there right now plays much more naturally then adding in several subdominant sounds.

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
M4M from ayyri's queue

[Easy]
00:14:154 (2,1) - adjust the spacing a little, cuz the spacing is more like x0.76 instead of x0.8

fixed in earlier mod
00:23:488 (1,2) - lol can you fix the node? is more like a 2010 slider =w=

Don't understand what you mean here
00:46:154 (3,1) - spacing here is more like x0.73 instead of x0.8, should fix the sapcing here

changed
00:54:154 (3) - should NC here instead

Fixed during previous mod.
00:54:154 - why the ds change to x1.0 here? the spacing should be always constant on easy diff, might want to fix the sapcing problems

Cause the song got more intense, I've done similar things in previous maps that've been ranked, the spacing changes here but the next section is also entirely consistent, doesn't cause any spacing issues.
00:55:821 (3,2) - ill said just make them the same

Originally did this because the lower slider would go offscreen if the angles were the same, but I entirely changed these two and it seemed to fix it
01:01:488 (4,1) - and the spacing here is more like x1.05 instead of x1.00
moved slightly

[Normal]
00:27:488 (1,2) - spacing here is more like x0.9 instead of x1.00

Alright, had to break the pattern somewhat but I made it visually similar
00:28:154 (2,3) - same, spacing issue
No there's not

[Hard]
00:02:154 - same as Lasse's Advanced. mught just change the sample to soft and fix the hitsound cuz normal sample is just too noisy
lower the volume to 40%, 80was just too loud at the clam part at the beginning

Lowered to 60
01:02:155 (1,3) - obvious stacking problem

fixed in previous mod
01:04:322 (1,1) - for intentional?

[Insane]
00:12:821 (5) - 00:18:154 (5) - 00:24:821 (5) - 00:28:821 (5) - 00:30:154 (9) - NC
00:22:154 (9) - 00:23:488 (5) - same00:27:488 (9) - should NC here instead
00:46:154 (9) - 00:48:821 (10) - 00:51:488 (9) - NC for consistent
Alright, I guess people don't like NC patterns other than just big white tick. Played around with them some.

k GL

Ayyri

Ayyri 2016-08-29T21:07:22+00:00

Tatsuyu wrote:
mod 4 ayyri thanks bb

Ayyri's Lunatic

00:17:654 (3,4) - Spacing for this should be the same as the spacing for 00:17:488 (2,3) - Widened the spacing a bit.
00:17:821 (4,1) - Likewise ^ These two notes should be spaced closer, considering they come directly after each other. Unlike 00:17:654 (3,4) - .
00:27:988 (6,2) - I feel its a little awkward having to jump back to the same space twice here and then AGAIN on the slider right after imo, feels fine. But I'll see what other people say.
00:30:154 (5,6) - Pls straighten Not the intention of these sliders.
00:50:154 (1,2,3) - Too many sounds here to fit with the music Doesn't sound cluttered, and the same thing appears at 00:52:821 - .
01:08:821 (1) - Fix Spinner Timings ala other diffs I put back my glorious slider art instead. Thanks frog.

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
M4M from ayyri's queue thanks bb

[Ayyri's Lunatic]
00:17:821 (4) - lol wat is this following? i dont hear the music got the "stream" sound here tho lol, a notes here just seems better then the current one There is a clear sound from 00:17:904 - to 00:18:071 - which would warrant a reverse slider like this.
00:27:488 (5) - should NC here instead of 00:28:154 (1) - This doesn't really fit with the previous NCs.
00:28:821 (3) - NC ^
00:50:154 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing with other similar part like 00:48:821 (1,2,3) - 00:49:488 (5,6,7) - etc These are different patterns.
00:52:821 (1,2,3) - i rly dont see the reason why the spacing should be this big lol, the music isnt that intense to used the big spacing like this tho =w= ^
01:00:154 (4,5,6) - lol inconsistent spacing xdd The spacing is just like 01:02:821 -
01:04:488 (5) - NC for consistent Imo, it's not really good to NC at the end of a stream, since it could be read as being part of a different rhythm.

~

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: [C.H.S] 01. Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38154
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 2154,11488,12154,32821,38154,42154,43488,48821,54154,64821,68821,70488,71654,72821,73988,75071,76904
DistanceSpacing: 1.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!
TitleUnicode:Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!
Artist:t+pazolite
ArtistUnicode:t+pazolite
Creator:TheOnlyLeon
Version:Ayyri's Lunatic
Source:
Tags:C.H.S. Beauty Noizy Orient CHS-0015 DJ Pixie Edamame Infinity Lovewn tpa:pbr 最速 tpz Happy Hardcore Lasse Ayyri -Yoshimaro-
BeatmapID:987016
BeatmapSetID:382674

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Dockaaaahhhnnn.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
2155,333.333333333333,4,1,1,50,1,0
32821,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
33154,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
33488,-100,4,1,1,30,0,0
33821,-100,4,1,1,20,0,0
34154,-100,4,1,1,10,0,0
34488,-100,4,1,1,10,0,0
35488,-100,4,1,1,20,0,0
36488,-100,4,1,1,30,0,0
37488,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
38154,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
42404,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0
42488,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
42738,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0
42821,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
43071,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0
43154,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
43404,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0
43488,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
54154,-100,4,1,1,80,0,1
64821,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
68821,-100,4,1,1,45,0,0
70488,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
71654,-100,4,1,1,35,0,0
72821,-100,4,1,1,30,0,0
73988,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
75071,-100,4,1,1,20,0,0
76904,-100,4,1,1,15,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 52,173,91
Combo2 : 248,176,90
Combo3 : 38,70,181
Combo4 : 234,197,98

[HitObjects]
101,329,2154,6,0,B|121:273|184:273|184:273|221:233|246:184|246:116|223:53|161:31|161:31|79:93|114:173,1,540,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,257,3488,2,0,L|405:252,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,127,4404,2,0,L|107:132,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,330,5071,6,0,L|307:373,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,54,5571,2,0,L|205:10,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,148,5988,2,0,L|318:191,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,44,6321,2,0,L|399:0,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,204,6654,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,316,6904,6,0,L|312:252,1,45,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,140,7154,2,0,L|252:76,2,45,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,84,7404,2,0,L|169:126,1,45,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,220,7571,2,0,L|107:237,1,33.75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,336,7696,2,0,L|133:318,1,33.75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,368,7904,2,0,L|261:349,1,45,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,196,8154,6,0,L|255:246,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,294,8488,2,0,L|376:250,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,161,9321,6,0,L|275:170,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,161,10488,6,0,L|275:170,2,45,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,339,11488,6,0,B|392:267|448:188|448:188|388:164|388:67,1,270,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,7,12154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
258,132,12488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
175,224,12821,2,0,P|221:251|352:212,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,38,13488,2,0,P|257:7|176:40,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,306,14154,2,0,P|439:228|402:146,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,147,14821,2,0,P|72:227|111:306,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,369,15488,6,0,P|308:362|356:377,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,250,15821,2,0,P|242:243|194:258,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,133,16154,2,0,P|307:126|355:141,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,15,16488,2,0,P|239:8|191:23,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,95,16821,1,8,0:0:0:0:
198,205,17154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
107,329,17488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,205,17654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
194,60,17821,2,0,L|208:-7,3,45,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,107,18154,6,0,P|310:152|303:272,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,205,18654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,304,18821,2,0,P|87:259|94:139,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,53,19488,2,0,P|311:63|380:30,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,331,20154,2,0,P|201:321|132:354,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,272,20821,6,0,P|454:231|462:171,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,99,21154,2,0,P|346:138|351:183,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,175,21488,2,0,P|204:146|161:135,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,251,21821,2,0,P|188:279|231:290,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,370,22154,2,0,P|329:321|265:196,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,98,22654,5,2,0:0:0:0:
224,181,22821,2,0,L|112:183,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,98,23154,2,0,L|368:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,24,23488,6,0,P|185:76|235:188,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,98,23988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,175,24154,2,0,P|373:123|323:11,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,258,24821,2,0,L|57:270,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,126,25488,2,0,L|429:116,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,323,26154,6,0,P|425:348|378:348,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,276,26488,2,0,P|369:251|416:251,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
475,175,26821,2,0,P|426:150|379:150,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,74,27154,2,0,P|372:49|419:49,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,81,27488,2,0,P|210:138|329:200,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,276,27988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,74,28154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
373,276,28488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
398,118,28821,2,0,P|421:175|367:281,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,276,29488,2,0,P|91:202|114:118,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,309,30154,2,0,P|266:356|182:334,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,74,30821,2,0,P|245:27|330:50,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
427,26,31488,6,0,P|426:82|389:131,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,31821,2,0,P|360:198|421:207,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,307,32154,2,0,P|421:306|470:269,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,280,32488,2,0,P|255:336|293:385,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,68,32821,6,0,B|143:111|206:48|206:48|273:107|356:45|356:45|379:125|451:133|451:133|396:173|377:217|377:217|443:286|388:370,1,720,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,300,34488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
220,197,34821,2,0,P|261:162|330:153,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,65,35154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,65,35488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
241,174,35821,2,0,P|190:177|143:155,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,48,36154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,48,36488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
336,155,36821,2,0,P|333:205|307:247,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,320,37154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
237,320,37488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
235,173,37821,2,0,P|178:182|145:207,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,282,38154,5,0,0:0:0:0:
75,282,38238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,282,38321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
25,173,38488,2,0,L|25:67,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,199,38821,2,0,P|190:221|234:225,1,90
315,123,39154,2,0,P|277:101|233:97,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,276,39488,5,0,0:0:0:0:
325,276,39571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,276,39654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,350,39821,2,0,L|112:348,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,238,40154,2,0,L|149:239,1,90
177,143,40488,2,0,P|217:165|248:210,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,271,40821,5,0,0:0:0:0:
344,271,40904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,271,40988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
438,186,41154,2,0,P|451:136|442:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,126,41488,2,0,P|295:81|249:48,1,90
205,174,41821,2,0,P|231:218|277:251,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,332,42154,6,0,L|0:320,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,239,42488,2,0,L|134:250,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,177,42821,2,0,L|29:165,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
27,84,43154,2,0,L|161:95,1,135,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,23,43488,6,0,P|260:75|261:131,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,123,43738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,139,43821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,247,43988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
262,347,44154,1,2,0:0:0:0:
389,350,44321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,350,44404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,350,44488,2,0,P|413:297|410:249,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,158,44821,5,2,0:0:0:0:
305,94,44988,2,0,L|261:107,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,199,45321,2,0,L|186:212,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,258,45654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
326,258,45737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,258,45821,2,0,P|305:312|269:344,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,134,46154,6,0,P|80:122|13:141,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,251,46488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
87,347,46654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
199,339,46821,2,0,L|206:240,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,240,47071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,231,47154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,126,47321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
243,38,47488,5,2,0:0:0:0:
373,133,47654,2,0,L|431:122,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,234,47988,2,0,L|279:242,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,297,48321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
497,183,48488,2,0,P|486:126|501:78,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,297,48821,6,0,L|329:301,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,302,49071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,303,49154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,200,49321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
163,362,49488,2,0,P|139:320|137:262,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,265,49738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,251,49821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,123,49988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,9,50154,6,0,L|306:-2,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,67,50404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,123,50488,2,0,L|109:131,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,146,50821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,265,50987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,296,51071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,325,51154,2,0,P|350:337|301:371,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,236,51488,6,0,P|247:184|244:116,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,128,51738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,109,51821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,2,51988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
339,85,52154,2,0,P|387:79|437:94,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,95,52404,1,2,0:0:0:0:
466,104,52488,2,0,P|459:153|470:209,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,328,52821,6,0,L|431:373,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,303,53071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,268,53154,2,0,L|257:227,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,361,53488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
114,354,53571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
75,332,53654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
46,298,53738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
30,256,53821,2,0,P|44:201|43:131,1,90,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,44,54154,6,0,P|199:40|244:53,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,60,54404,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,86,54488,2,0,P|292:137|316:195,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,351,54821,2,0,P|286:361|228:349,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,353,55071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
221,345,55154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
146,223,55321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
194,87,55488,6,0,L|247:72,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,198,55821,2,0,L|322:210,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,76,56154,2,0,L|468:64,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,291,56488,2,0,L|287:304,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,168,56821,6,0,P|221:120|216:72,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,59,57071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,38,57154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,79,57321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
106,204,57488,2,0,P|96:252|101:300,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,354,57821,2,0,P|282:347|353:365,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
438,247,58154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
452,204,58237,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,159,58320,1,2,0:0:0:0:
367,44,58488,2,0,L|361:-3,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,180,58821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,210,58904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
251,227,58987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
206,230,59071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
163,218,59154,2,0,P|150:170|119:129,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,30,59488,6,0,P|312:20|340:26,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,38,59738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,62,59821,2,0,P|400:118|428:155,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,274,60154,2,0,P|450:313|403:333,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,335,60404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,337,60488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,352,60654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
170,181,60821,6,0,L|161:124,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,349,61154,2,0,L|70:358,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,296,61488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
367,239,61654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,256,61738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
442,286,61821,2,0,L|455:189,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,54,62154,6,0,P|430:36|377:34,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,38,62404,1,2,0:0:0:0:
321,51,62488,2,0,P|270:57|221:46,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,180,62821,2,0,P|152:238|125:275,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,277,63071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
118,290,63154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,364,63321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,346,63488,5,2,0:0:0:0:
394,319,63571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,292,63654,1,2,0:0:0:0:
398,265,63738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
371,232,63821,5,2,0:0:0:0:
373,205,63904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
375,178,63987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
377,151,64071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
354,127,64154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
356,100,64237,1,2,0:0:0:0:
358,73,64320,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,46,64404,1,2,0:0:0:0:
363,19,64488,2,0,P|311:22|259:5,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,85,64821,5,4,0:2:0:0:
256,192,64988,12,0,68738,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68821,12,0,70154,0:0:0:0:
341,84,70488,6,0,B|293:89|245:53|245:53|238:121|219:178|219:178|288:160|345:219|358:306|260:360|176:305,1,540
21,96,71654,2,0,B|33:151|33:193|33:193|77:177|135:183|135:183|145:83|145:83|150:189|159:254|200:327,1,540
288,33,72821,2,0,B|332:17|386:30|414:91|402:151|350:176|326:181|326:181|366:185|413:204|425:307|377:342|312:362|251:317,1,540
241,240,73988,2,0,B|193:232|108:259|108:259|158:200|199:156|216:92|206:39|175:11|100:22|80:76,1,495
280,140,75071,2,0,B|347:122|368:75|368:75|391:135|399:245|384:333|384:333|320:304|231:336,2,495

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Lilyanna 2016-09-05T13:53:09+00:00

Hi m4m from my queue reqs from ayyri

General
the preview point could be here 00:42:154 - better imo.
00:43:488 - why this is not a kiai.
could work more with structure.

Easy :

00:23:488 (1,2) - maybe can make them symmetrical
00:43:488 (2) - can nc here to emphasize certain beat change
00:44:821 (1,2,3) - doesnt look aesthaticaly appealing try using symmetrical patterns

example

00:59:488 (1,4) - avoid this overlap
01:00:821 (4,5) - try copy paste same slider and make them symmetrical would look neat

Normal:

the preview point could be here 00:42:154 - better imo
00:43:488 - why this is not a kiai
00:12:154 (1) - not needed nc img
00:28:154 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern doesnt look clean objects overlaps maybe try something like this

example

u dont have to stack the notes because u werent stacking all time

lasse's advanced:

00:12:821 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this sound same as 00:18:154 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - maybe u could have mappes same for rythm consistency
00:32:821 (1) - the 1/2 revers sounds overmapped maybe just one note here 00:32:821 -
00:55:488 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern sounds so off rythm imo try this maybe and if you change u have change rest

i am a box

Hard :

00:02:155 (1) - center the mid node and make it symmetrycal

slider

00:03:488 (2) - can make better slider art u can be more creative
00:05:071 (3,4) - avoid this overlap
00:12:821 (1,2,3,4,5,3,4,5) - etc doesnt sound like 1/4 repeat the sound more like 1/2 repeat one time try it
00:46:154 - 00:48:821 - 00:51:488 - imo its not good idea ending the slider on the downbeat which a pretty strong beat it would flow better if that beat is clickable and nc and a start of new pattern it fits better with the music like that
like u did starting from here feels right 00:54:154 - hope u get what i mean
00:54:821 (3,4,5) - the spacing here compared to 01:00:155 (3,4,5) - is confusing try stay more consistent they both sound same also this jump 01:00:155 (3,4) - is uncomfortable
01:04:821 - maybe reduce the volume for the spinners

I hope i helped, Good luck!

my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/485619

BanchoBot

w00t p00t

34,830 posts

Here since the beginning

BanchoBot 2018-06-14T04:22:25+00:00

This modding thread has been migrated to the new "modding discussions" system. Please make sure to re-post any existing (and unresolved) efforts to the new system as required.

t+pazolite - Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!

Sign In To Proceed

Don't have an account?

t+pazolite - Intro - Dockaaaahhhnnn!!

Mazzerin wrote:

- Yoshimaro -'s Extra

Insane

Ayyri's Lunatic

Hard

Lasse's Advanced

Normal

Easy

Alheak wrote:

Ayyri's Lunatic

- Yoshimaro - wrote:

O-Moei wrote:

Alheak wrote:

Insane

Hard

Normal

Easy

O-Moei wrote:

TheOnlyLeon wrote:

Alheak wrote:

- Yoshimaro -'s Extra

O-Moei wrote:

Tatsuyu wrote:

Lily Bread wrote:

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

Tatsuyu wrote:

Lily Bread wrote:

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

Tatsuyu wrote:

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

New reply