/late sorry
timing is a bit suspicious, might be some ms too late (maybe look for a timing check?)
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Charlotte
* - 00:12:397 (59,60,61,62,63,64,65) - try kkdkddk or kddkddk instead of kdddkkk ? fits a bit more melody/other patterns.
* - 00:21:055 - add d and change - 00:21:226 (129) - to k ? first add d because this sound like full stream with no break, then change to k for playability?
* 02:38:970 (1144,1145,1146,1147,1148,1149,1150) - kdkkddk => change to kkddk d ? suggested the same to Nardo. - 02:39:655 (1148) - sounds better as k / - 02:39:998 (1150) - better as d imo. + break to emphasize.
* - 02:50:798 (1196) - move to - 02:51:414 - ? to follow instrumental as Nardo did at - 01:21:998 (526) -.
* - 03:53:284 (1747,1748) - swap colors and remove finisher ? last note sounds better as d like for - 03:47:884 (1700) - / - 03:42:398 (1653) - etc (where there is no finisher).
* - 04:03:141 (1828,1829,1830,1831,1832) - ddk d k => kkk d d then add k at - 04:03:998 - ? i dont think you should dodge this sound.
* - 04:17:198 (1908,1909) - swap colors ? - 04:17:369 (1909) - sounds better as k i think.
* - 04:19:598 (1926,1927,1928,1929,1930) - kkddk => d kkd ? consistency with previous patterns, - 04:19:598 (1926) - should be d / - 04:19:769 (1928) - should be k.
* - 04:28:855 (2006,2007) - could be kkkd 1/6 but with no finisher, as you pref.
* - 04:37:855 (2083,2084) - swap colors if applied for other kiais + second suggestion.
Nardo
* 01:03:141 (438) - remove and change - 01:03:312 (439) - to d ? second note sounds better as d like on other spot - 01:00:569 (421) - / - 00:57:827 (403) - etc. also this break emphasize it and show the change in the music with the following part.
* - 01:09:827 (472,473,474,475,476,477,478) - kdddkdk => kkddk d ? first kkddk instead of kdddk because the first 2 d are on same vocal sound. then break because melody sounds like it.
* - 01:20:798 (520,521,522,523,524) - change to kkddk if ^ applied ? i would also change - 01:21:827 (525) - to d but then 2 ddk in a row.. so idk.
* - 01:28:855 (587,588,589,590,591,592,593,594,595) - x.U. xd
* - 01:39:398 (674) - change to k ? suggested the same to Charlotte for -00:21:226 (129) -.
* - 03:08:541 (1352,1353) - swap colors ? as suggested in first kiai.
* - 03:17:284 (1423) - change to k ? makes the pattern a bit more challenging and this k fits more the melody imo.
* - 03:21:055 - i think so you should avoid those break as Charlotte did. so i suggest you to add k at those spot and maybe add d at - 03:20:712 - / - 03:23:455 - etc as Charlotte did not use those beat so you can still get different patterns with the same duplets/quad. (Else ask Charlotte to make break? cant tell what is best here). same for your last part.
* - 03:41:284 (1640) - id delete this one, nothing to follow here. same for - 05:10:598 (2372) -.
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good luck'