Hello~ NM from my queue
Good luck.
General
- Please toggle widescreen support off for all difficulties.
- All of the background images used are not 4:3, try finding one with the appropriate dimensions. (1366x768 is highly recommended.)
- Slider velocity on the normal difficulty should be higher than the one used on the easy difficulty.
- Please add a Hard difficulty asap lol thx
Easy
- AR difference with normal is by 1. I suggest you reduce AR by 1
- 00:03:978 (5,1) - Flow breaks here as slider (5) is pointing downwards but the incoming slider is above where the previous slider is pointing and not only that, 00:05:228 (1,2) - these two flow pretty bad too so pulling (1) downwards would be a good solution to this.
- 00:11:478 (2,3) - Huge blanket miss.
- 00:16:478 (2,3) - This doesn't look pretty to me especially (2), 00:05:228 (1) - this looks much better so I think you should make (2) similar to that. 00:18:978 (4) - make sure that this isn't where (2) used to be also.
- 00:19:394 (5,1) - This also has horrible flow, the player has to transit downwards to hit the next note
- 00:22:728 (1) - I don't think the NC here is necessary because the instrumentals connect from 00:22:103 -
- 00:28:978 (5,1) - Another flow problem
- 00:37:728 (4,5) - Slight blanket error.
- 00:38:978 (5,1) - Fix the nodes on the slider so the blanket doesn't look awkward.
- 00:46:478 (2,1) - Overlap x.x
- 01:02:311 (2,3) - Another bad overlap
- 01:17:311 (8,1) - These are just about to touch, just rotate (1) a bit so they are nowhere near touching
- 01:18:978 (1,1,1) - I really don't think all these NC's are needed, your choice to fix them or not but they are really meh to me
Normal
- 00:05:228 (1,2) - Very slight, but this blanket can be fixed.
- 00:10:228 (1,2) - Fix blanket please
- 00:12:728 (3,4) - ^
- 00:26:061 (3,4) - Fix distance
- 00:32:728 (4) - This should be NC'ed because you have been NCing every 6 white lines. basically 2 measures. 00:33:978 (1) - Disable NC here while you're at it.
- 00:35:228 (5) - NC
- 00:42:728 - Okay so starting from here, I would really like for you do NC every 2 measures as you have been doing before because on this kiai section, all of your NC's are inconsistent and NCing every 2 measures seem to fit well in my opinion.
- 00:43:978 (3,4) - Vocals eh? What about the vocals in between 00:44:394 (4,5) - and 00:45:228 (5,6,1) - ?
- 01:00:228 (1) - This doesn't seem to follow vocals well. Map it as a 1/1 repeat?
- 01:18:978 (2,3,4) - The way you didn't NC here shows proof that you don't have to NC these on the Easy difficulty as well.
- 01:22:728 (1) - I'd rather not NC this because you didn't NC it for the Easy difficulty either.
Insane
- I would just make the AR 8 instead of 8.1 cause like really? xD
- 00:05:853 (2) - These repeats don't really seem to fit in, they sound awkward and empty. 00:09:603 (2,3) - I think this rhythm fits better
- 00:36:061 (5,1) - Very misleading, stack or do something so players can tell whether if there is a break or not in between
- 00:36:894 (2,4) - Overlap looks bad here, pull (2) down and to the right a little?
- 01:22:728 (1) - This placed near the center of the map plays better http://puu.sh/quiOc/d2d5bb421c.jpg
- Make sure you end on the same time as the other difficulties.
Well made.
Review
- Honestly, I don't think the AR should be high as 8.5, 8 seems reasonable to me and just because the other insane has 8.1 doesn't mean that this has to be higher.
- Any particular reason for the difficulty name? (I have no aspect of what this anime is about so yeah.. I'm clueless.)
- 00:05:019 (5,1) - really awkward flow here, if the cursor is coming back from (5) the flow should be in the direction where the cursor is headed next..
- 00:14:811 (3,4) - This distance doesn't really fit at the moment, this is the calmer part of the song so the distance should be nice and small, not big
- 00:40:644 (1,1,1) - This pattern is a bit iffy to me, I would have the ends all stacked together as they are all rotated by 120 degrees. http://puu.sh/qujAy/5c02fa4a96.jpg It looks awkward because the velocity changes..
- 00:43:769 (4,2) - slight overlap
- 01:02:519 (5,1) - The finish is on (1) but the distance is too small to emphasize this correctly
- 01:12:519 (6,1) - ^
Good luck.