Hey, here's my mod
The hitsounds are pretty nice :p
Good luck!
- 01:08:467 (3,4,5) - It's weird how you make such spacing changes on a slow part, try keeping the spacing here and save those for more intense parts of the song.
- 01:10:811 (5,6,1) - Yep, this is overdone for such a calm part, especially compared to the sv
- 01:34:483 (5,6,7,8) - These look kinda messy, make the slider shapes identical to have a more clean look (copy paste one slider and rotate and stuff https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5165426)
- 01:39:405 (7,5) - Stack these guys
- 02:00:967 (1,2) - Why suddenly break the rhythm you where creating? it was going nice with the slider + 2 circles pattern 02:00:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , i suggest to keep that rhythm until you get to the spinner since starting sliders on blue ticks play weird rhythmically a lot of times
- 02:10:694 (3,4,5) - This triple is meh since this note 02:10:811 (4) - is left unemphasized, and it's and important beat. Try using a slider there like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5165481 to give it more emphasis
- 02:11:045 (5) - Reduce the length of the slider by 1/8 and add a circle here 02:11:280 - to make the downbeat (the large white tick) clickable.
- 02:26:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - The way you made the rhythm here with the sliders and circles seems a bit random, try to use a more consistent rhythm
- 02:37:998 (3,4) - This would work better if the 1/4 slider was first and then the 1/2 one, mainly because it would make this 02:38:233 - synth sound thing clickable, like you're doing on the whole kiai, making it more consistent
- 02:51:709 (6,7) - Hmmm it would be cool if the synth sounds were always slider heads, it would eliminate the randomness creating a more easy and enjoyable rhythm to play https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5165533 try fixing this on the whole map, since it's a consistent problem.
- 02:53:584 (1,2,3) - Ok, this was confusing to play, the spacing you use here is too inconsistent try to avoid doing it please :p. Here's a placing suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5165544
- 02:55:225 (2,3,4) - Hmmm these break the rhythm in a bad way and there was no change in the music to justify it, it was going great with the sliders and stuff you had previously.
- 02:55:459 (4,5) - Make this 2 sliders instead of just circle + repeat for the same reasons i mentioned before.
- 03:01:905 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think it would be best if you began the stream with a repeat slider, it's the first time you use this kind of rhythm on the map so... just to not catch the players off guard. :v
- 03:12:686 - Same things about rhythm, make this clickable since it's an important beat (synth sound + clap) it's as easy as doing this :p https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5165593
- 03:24:522 (1,2,3) - aaaa don't ignore the song's rhythm
- 04:11:514 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These look messy, try to give them more order and make them more "flowy"
- 04:25:576 (6,1) - Make this a triple, this 04:25:811 - should be clickable. Ah again about rhythm :p
- 04:43:155 (1) - 04:46:905 (1) - Nice sliders!
- 04:58:389 (4,5) - Make these two be a circle + a slider to map the synth soundsdasd https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5165679
- 05:05:537 (1) - You know, don't map downbeats with slider ends, downbeats are important beats :p.
The hitsounds are pretty nice :p
Good luck!