Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
eggpain timing...
section-pass.png should be 650*650 if i don't remember it wrong... though i love your creative SB for section pass/fail

[Easy+]
00:15:390 (3,4,1) - any reason for 1 not exactly on the line of 3&4?
00:21:859 (4) - add whistle to the beginning? (since you did at 00:19:702 (4) )
01:00:526 (1,1,1) - remove claps at the end... then the next clap start from 01:06:630 (2) could get a better effect.
01:08:508 (2,2,1) - same.
01:26:821 (1) - remove clap at the end.
01:38:100 (8) - finish?

[Roddie's Normal]
AR+1
00:03:862 (1,2,3,4) - spacing at this part is farther than other parts...? if not on purpose make them the same.
00:09:361 (5) - prefer you to make it 1 grid down+ 1 grid right (at the line of 1&3)
00:30:452 (1) - finish at the beginning?
00:36:105 (1) - remove clap at the 2nd reverse.
00:41:734 (1) - why change the clap pace here..?
01:06:864 (1,4) - remove clap at 1's end and 4
01:13:678 (10,1,2) - another spacing changing part.
01:30:107 (5) - remove clap

[Insane]
00:12:635 (1) - add whistle to the slider (include sliderslide)
00:31:172 (4,5,6) - = =....nazi.
00:39:389 (5,1) - better not to change spacing though there's a new combo.
00:41:030 (4) - 1 grid up i guess.
01:04:987 (1,2,3) - consider the hitsounds you choose, better to use circle-slider-slider.
01:18:957 (5) - clap?
01:24:591 (8) - ^
01:26:469 (8) - ^

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Roddie's Normal]
AR+1 First time that I did that. Fixed.
00:03:862 (1,2,3,4) - spacing at this part is farther than other parts...? if not on purpose make them the same. My bad. u_u;
00:09:361 (5) - prefer you to make it 1 grid down+ 1 grid right (at the line of 1&3) I'll just fix the slider.
00:30:452 (1) - finish at the beginning? Fixed.
00:36:105 (1) - remove clap at the 2nd reverse. Fixed.
00:41:734 (1) - why change the clap pace here..? Oh wow. That's fixed.
01:06:864 (1,4) - remove clap at 1's end and 4 Nah.
01:13:678 (10,1,2) - another spacing changing part. Fixed.
01:30:107 (5) - remove clap Nah, Its fine.

Thanks for the mod, Rin.

Download: David Wise - Gang-Plank Galleon (James2250) [Roddie's Normal].osu

section-pass.png should be 650*650

That is the max size, it is allowed to be less than that
Everything else fixed

Osu! does not detect a background image!

Timing (Replace with [TimingPoints] in all .osu files!)
Insane
01:24:004 (5,6) - This really got me confused, perhaps you could make a little more space between them.

That's it!

yeah I know AIMod doesn't see the sb'ed backgrounds, but people do, so will ignore AIMod on that one

Hi!~

Remember these are just suggestions you can always ignore

~All Diffs~
- AIMod says you don't have any background image, but you actually have a thumbnail, how did you do it? I'm curious =D

~Storyboard~
- "DK-dying.png" has a lot of blank space around the real image, could you crop it?
- I think you should make the section fail sound storyboarded and not as the fail sound, the music sounds before donkey gets hitted by the cannonball xD

~Easy~
No problems here!

~Roddie's Normal~
No problems here, though this feels more like a Hard, there are a lot of long 1/2 chains >:

~Insane~
00:50:411 (6) - NAZI!! - Move this a little bit to the right, it isn't aligned correctly =x
01:23:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Woah this pattern is so cool!

Cool map~ Good luck with this!
*star*

ps. don't kudosu this, it's not worth it xD

You get kudosu because I did follow everything you said

I have no idea why it shows that thumbnail (as that isn't even the background that is in my folder anymore, it is the old one that I used), and AIMod still says I don't have one....oh well?

(also changed everything to JPEG and made total file size go down by 4mb~~~~)

:3?

Download: David Wise - Gang-Plank Galleon (James2250) [31's Taiko].osu

Added thanks~

(I added kiai to it, hope you don't mind)
Everything else left the same

[taiko] fairly ok...still overmapped

[insane]
0:06:462 (3) down 1 grid
0:08:799 (4) ^
0:37:503 (13,14) spacing
0:44:775 (8,9) spacing

other seems ok, star~

Ohai

Thank for mod my map ^^

[General]
Your SB Elements for BG is unrankable, maximum is 640x480 (current for BG-0, BG-1, BG-2, BG-3, BG-4, BG-5 is 800x600)

[Easy]
00:37:972 (1,1) - No jump at easy diff please
00:43:602 (5) - Should new combo, because the combo is too long for easy diff
01:00:520 (1) - Please get rid of 1/4 repeating slider, because it's not good for easy diff
01:36:213 (4) - New combo? Since the pattern changed?
01:36:683 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern are......weird

[Roddie's Normal]
00:26:490 (B) - This break are too short, remove it?
00:39:849 (3) - New combo?
01:02:397 (2) - ^
01:04:275 (3) - ^
01:06:153 (4) - ^
01:09:909 (4) - ^
01:11:787 (7) - ^
01:13:665 (10) - ^
01:32:457 (2,3,4) - ^

[Insane]
00:23:168 (5) - New combo? Since the pattern changed?
00:36:800 (7) - ^

Ugh, scary
Not bad
STAR

I like the 1/4 sliders on easy and I disagree with a few combo changes but everything else fixed~

This is so cool and I dont find anything wrong. Also, glad you are back, James >_<

DKC <3!!

[General]
*Even if you have the storyboarded backgrounds, you should still have something under the //backgrounds line of the .osu files (for the song selection background and web thumbnail). Although, right now there's a bug with storyboards and backgrounds, so I'm not sure what to do about that.
*Perhaps add "Super" to the tags? (for Super Nintendo )
*SB sprites are fine, but the combo bursts and section-pass are badly cropped. Remind me later or tomorrow on irc and I'll see if I can get you some better images.

[Easy]
*The 1/2 note streams in here were too far apart spacing-wise for my liking. Places like 00:19:174 (3,4,5,1) are going to be a bit too tough for new players. ):
*Where are the finishes? D: Places like 01:28:695 (3) and 01:38:091 (5) could really use them. x_x
*I found it odd that this map used 1/4 sliders (01:00:520 (1) for example) while Normal used 1/2 sliders. =/ Even if it's a guest difficulty...

[Roddie's Normal]
01:08:031 (1,2,3) - Move these down a couple grids. They're already a jump from the last stream of 1/2 notes, but since stacking starts from the top-left, (1) gets pushed up even higher.
01:38:091 - Expected the map to end with a note here (with a finish). Ending 1/2 a beat early sounds awkward...

[31's Taiko]
01:43:725 (567) - Expected this to end on the next white tick.
*Also, perhaps try using some inherited sections to lower the volume gradually at the end.

[Insane]
00:21:713 (4,1) - I highly suggest that you don't have gaps in the middle of streams like this. :s
01:38:091 - Expected the map to end with a note here (with a finish), so perhaps increase the last stream by two notes?

*Difficulty jump from Normal to Insane is a bit high. I really suggest adding a Hard to the set so that more players will be able to enjoy this song. :/

*I'm not going to nazi the timings, since they should be accurate to around 5ms. A couple of places felt a tiny bit early, but I think that the current approximation is close enough. =x

OK all fixed, will upload when images can be fixed D:

Derekku wrote:

[Roddie's Normal]
01:08:031 (1,2,3) - Move these down a couple grids. They're already a jump from the last stream of 1/2 notes, but since stacking starts from the top-left, (1) gets pushed up even higher. Fixed.
01:38:091 - Expected the map to end with a note here (with a finish). Ending 1/2 a beat early sounds awkward... Fixed.

Thanks, Derekku.

Download: David Wise - Gang-Plank Galleon (James2250) [Roddie's Normal].osu

Yo

It says you have no Background, but it's all Storyboarded, and there is a thumbnail, so no need for one.

1. Timing looks pretty close. Seems fine

[EASY]

I'd say this was a fairly difficult Easy. It isn't too tough, so I won't bother you too much about it. It's cleanly mapped anyway.

[RODDIE'S NORMAL]

...and this is a really hard Normal. This is almost certainly a Hard.

Start - 00:20:230 - I don't like how you've stuck to constant 1/4 streams of beats here. Sure, the melody is pretty quick, but you could still map to that melody more, instead of putting down 1/4 streams. Perhaps use some short repeating sliders to follow the melody? If you understand what I mean.
01:16:019 - 01:28:226 - Same as above. You've chosen to use 1/4 streams here while it could have stuck to the melody more, which would've worked better I think. Again, some short repeating slider patterns might work well (as in, 1/4 short repeating sliders). If you're not sure what I'm going on about, let me know.

[31'S TAIKO]

Resnap all notes. I think you've changed timing but forgot to resnap everything.

00:04:136 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - The rest of the intro follows the main melody but this doesn't. That, and it doesn't feel great to play. Make this bit like the rest of the intro? (well, same beat pattern as 00:06:336 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23))

The rest of it was pretty nice though. Makes more sense than some custom taiko maps I've seen.

[INSANE]

It's jumpy, and a little overmapped, but I can take that. It's not as overmapped as other Insane's I've modded, thankfully.

00:37:738 (15) - Remove this beat? It confused me at first since I knew how the song went, but the extra beat made me miss. That, and the circle/diamond thing works just fine without it.
01:23:061 (1,2,3,4) - I found your other jumps fine, but this one irks me. feels pretty much random and feels pretty awkward to play. It's also all one combo, which was unrankable last time I heard (even though i've seen a ton of maps which still do it ). so if you are keeping them, remember to add a combo to (2) and (4)

Heh. A definate step up from the last map of yours I seen. Much more adventurous now, but then again the last time I modded a map of yours was when dinosaurs ruled the earth.

Starred

Doomsday wrote:

[RODDIE'S NORMAL]

...and this is a really hard Normal. This is almost certainly a Hard.

Start - 00:20:230 - I don't like how you've stuck to constant 1/4 streams of beats here. Sure, the melody is pretty quick, but you could still map to that melody more, instead of putting down 1/4 streams. Perhaps use some short repeating sliders to follow the melody? If you understand what I mean. All fixed.
01:16:019 - 01:28:226 - Same as above. You've chosen to use 1/4 streams here while it could have stuck to the melody more, which would've worked better I think. Again, some short repeating slider patterns might work well (as in, 1/4 short repeating sliders). If you're not sure what I'm going on about, let me know. All fixed.

Thanks, Dooms.

Download: David Wise - Gang-Plank Galleon (James2250) [Roddie's Normal].osu

Woot! 400th Post.

New skin stuff~

DK-dying: http://puu.sh/diA

Remember to full upload!

ooook all fixed, thanks for the improved skin stuff Derekku, and I don't feel like making a Hard at the moment >_> but I will if I have to

Memories ... Sweet Memories .. =w=
Lucky Star* =w=

Hi~~~

[Roddie's Normal]
00:24:458 (5) - add finish the end?
00:25:748 (6) - remove clap?

[Insane]
01:38:091 (13) - add finish?

Very Nice map.. I don't find enought problem.
Star!

[easy]
00:15:380 (3) - it's not in the perfect line with (4) and (1).


00:35:158 (1) - move it to the same level as 00:34:220 (2) was or move it to other place since this placing looks little random.
01:36:213 (1) - check placing of this combo


[normal]
00:50:176 (3,4,5) - don't stuck it; make it like previous: 00:48:297 (3,4,5)

[insane]
nothing



and a star

1 or 2 things fixed~

Didn't find anything, excellent set.

Is this just me?


Will mod after this problem is dealt with.

Seems to only be happening to you (based on myself and Beuchi)
Did full submit so might want to try downloading again (not sure why it is doing that)
Anyway getting off comp, will message tomorrow and see if it worked

I wasn't really sure how nazi I should be with this map. I wanted this map to be the best it could be, but I don't want you to make tedious changes that don't really do anything. As a result, I only noted the lighter nazi things, but there are a few morenazi things I want changed that I am not going to mention.

Easy:
Normal mod:
00:31:400 (1) - vertically align the start and end
00:49:237 (1) - the ends of the slider are very close to linear lines, which are aesthtically unappealing to me, so I suggest adding more anchor points
01:11:787 (1) - make this slider symmetrical

Combo mod:
00:39:849 (1) - remove new combo to be similar to all the combos that are 2 measures long around it

Roddie's Normal:
Normal mod:
00:12:630 (1) - are you intentionally making the ends unaligned?
00:15:910 (4) - ^
00:44:071 (3) - it looks better if this ends exactly on 2 (turn off grid snap and adjust)
01:36:918 (2) - it would probably look better if this directly aligned with the line slider 1 creates or if one was folling the curve slider 2 creates

Combo mod:
00:39:849 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 00:36:096 (1) and 00:47:358 (1)
00:44:071 (3) - ^?
01:28:226 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 to be consistent with 01:19:305 (1)

31's Taiko: fine

Insane:
Normal mod:
00:45:480 (1,2,3,4) - turn down stack leniency to the second to last notch to make these notes align with 00:45:244 (11)

Combo mod:
00:18:903 (1) - remove this new combo to stay consistent with your pattern of a having a new combo every measure?

Nice mapset. I couldn't find too many things to complain about. Star.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Roddie's Normal:
Normal mod:
00:12:630 (1) - are you intentionally making the ends unaligned? Fixed.
00:15:910 (4) - ^ Fixed.
00:44:071 (3) - it looks better if this ends exactly on 2 (turn off grid snap and adjust) Or I can remove the note and stack it again lol. Fixed.
01:36:918 (2) - it would probably look better if this directly aligned with the line slider 1 creates or if one was folling the curve slider 2 creates Fixed.

Combo mod:
00:39:849 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 00:36:096 (1) and 00:47:358 (1) Fixed.
00:44:071 (3) - ^? Its fine.
01:28:226 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 to be consistent with 01:19:305 (1) Fixed.

Thank you.

Download: David Wise - Gang-Plank Galleon (James2250) [Roddie's Normal].osu

Guess so.

Thanks mafia~

What's this black space?
It's at the very top as well.

I think just because I resized my backgrounds to 640x480, will wait to see if BAT says I need to change~

Charles445 wrote:

What's this black space?

SPOILER

It's at the very top as well.

Fix it. FIX IT!

[Roddie's Normal]
01:28:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - Kinda dislike how this is offbeat for no reason. :/

Would also be nice with a proper hard but it's no must.

Popped due to the storyboard error.

Also star~

nice map

you might use custom hitsounds, especially for the clap which sounds pretty bad

[Normal] :
00:44:071 (3) - this shape is horrible *.*

seems good otherwise

ok will wait for Roddie to update

Claps sound fine to me
Everything else fixed that needs to be (Roddie disagreed with first comment0

Re-bubble plz?

James2250 wrote:

ok will wait for Roddie to update

Claps sound fine to me
Everything else fixed that needs to be (Roddie disagreed with first comment0

Re-bubble plz?

Yes I disagree with the post from Xgor. And I also disagree with the post from Eirene. Sorry. ._.

And yes, please re-bubble.

I fixed that slider on yours to make it more symmetrical Roddie (runs)

Thanks I suppose.