hi
also nice sliderart
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- 00:20:312 (1,2,3,4) - omfg i like this idea, but i think (1) and (2) are too far. though it's obviously for emphasizing the drums, the distance is even longer than some notes in kiai. around 1.6x DS is enough imo.
- 00:24:533 (1) - ending on a blue tick feels really, really strange. First, there's no 1/4 notes in its context. of course you did decrease the volume, but it doesn't mean that spinner end is not there. it still exists. Second, if a spinner is too close to the note after itself, that note will become harder to read as usual. That's also why we usually set longer recovering time after a spinner in lower diffs.
- 00:28:227 (4,1) - honestly, i can't understand what is this long distance for. nothing intense here. maybe try this if you're interested.
- 00:37:989 - I feel like you can extend the slider to here. umm 3/2 long sliders is not that common, I think it can provide some calm feelings before the vocal starts. Also, for the consistency's sake (00:28:755 (1) - ), it can be good to extend that imo.
- 01:41:049 (3,4) - some little suggestion, you can Ctrl+G on this. the flow on 01:40:521 (1,2,3) - can be smooth, and can also drop a longer distance on 01:41:313 (4,5) - , similar as 01:47:381 (2,3) - . it can probably make a difference before the next vocal, too.
- 01:58:991 (7) - umm move it down for the flow maybe?
- 02:03:212 (6,7,8,1) - i've played this part for several times and I think this 1/6 is too hard to read. There are only two 1/6 streams in this map, they have similar spacing to 1/4 ones (because your SV is quite low), and it's quite rare so people are hard to notice that at the first sight. maybe you should reduce the spacing, and replace 02:03:476 - with a circle (4 notes can make it clearer).
- 02:48:066 (1,2,3,4) - maybe do something like this, which contains a direction change on (2), so the drums can be better specified.
- 02:50:045 - reduce volume?
- 03:21:839 (1) - im wondering why you didn't put it above the previous note. your move goes up on 03:20:520 (4,1) - , i think it can do the same thing here.
- 05:01:573 (2) - flip it with Ctrl+H? parallel feels not really good to me, I would like to change the angle if I was you xd
also nice sliderart
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