ProEzreal wrote:

Hello, m4m from Kisses' mod queue

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1. 00:12:721 (3,1) - the flow here is a bit questionable, it's not bad but it can be improved imo. I would rotate the long slider but then again that messes up the flow and the distance to the next note lol just suggestions. Fixed, I did something else there
2. 00:32:630 (3,4) - i really wish these two were blanketed but it seems difficult to
3. 01:10:266 (4,3) - blanket can be improved Also fixed blanket~

Hujan

1. 00:42:175 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - as the notes get higher, it feels like the ds should be increasing also Hmm actually I want to increase the spacing on each (1) but I think that would make the gameplay even harder for a Hard diff, so I decide not to put 00:43:266 (1) - in higher ds
2. 01:27:993 (1) - how about putting this in the middle of the triangle? the music is decreasing, shouldnt the ds be also? Move (1) somewhere else, well I think 1.5x ds is less enough for the jump, because I have around 1.9x on this one 01:10:539 (1) -

Hehe, think of this as a thank you mod for the mod you did for my map Thank you very much ezreal, that was very a good mod xD

Lasse wrote:

short m4m with kisses

[g]
can you try this drum-hitwhistle?
http://puu.sh/pwZJB/456b41545c.wav
it fits well with the open hihat thing you put the sound on, seems nicer than default there to me
http://puu.sh/pwZN7/0443304843.wav Add the hihat

[h]
00:12:721 (3,3,4) - not that noticeable during gameplay, but autostack makes it look a bit off http://i.imgur.com/l0oSDDY.jpg would manually stack 00:14:630 (4) - to fix // also for 01:25:266 (3,2,1) - Actually I'm not aware of that o.o so far they play fine, I'm not good on doing manual stack so I'll leave it as is for now
00:18:175 (1,2,3) - movement feels a bit harsh for this part compared to the song because of how the slider goes. how about ctrlg g on 00:19:266 (3) - and also on 00:19:811 (4) - so you get http://i.imgur.com/naoBmLd.jpg ? Fixed

[n]
00:05:084 (1) - it's not really working on the held sound and covers too much for a normal. would at least use 2 sliders here or maybe even a little more / at least repeats Fixed, use 1/1 slider instead
00:12:721 (3,1) - I get you want to blanket this, but current pattern makes for some pretty awkward transition here http://i.imgur.com/8GtJm0P.jpg
easiest solution would probably be changing the shape of 1, for example http://i.imgur.com/jKE1CO9.jpg or anything else that goes to thet left or down first. or not blanketing and stacking on 00:12:175 (2) - tail instead Fixed, did like above
00:50:630 - strongest sound of this whole part is on a sliderend, would reconsider rhythm for 00:49:539 (3,4) - Fixed, change (4) into two circles instead

not much to say here since it's pretty clean already, cute sb
gl Thank you for comming lasse, I applied most of your mod ><

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Halo kak ~ NM request dari PM :3

Nice SB ~
[General]
Nggk ada masalah ~ Okay!

[Normal]
00:51:721 (3) - entah kenapa slider lurus bukan bentuk yang tepat disini~ *karena setelah circle (2) selalu slidernya berbentuk lain ~ kayak 00:49:266 (2,3) Make it a bit curve
01:27:993 (1) - hmm coba jangan di blanket dengan 01:27:175 (2) Bagus gitu kok, flow sama circle sebelumnya circular jadinya xD

[Hard]
Nggk ada ~ Okay!

maaf banget kak ;_; kalau modnya hanya segini karena mapnya bagus banget ~ *kalau modnya nggk berguna jangan kasih kudos ;w;
sebagai gantinya saya kasih star aja ;w; Makasih kak udah periksa, sampe repot2 tiga stars;;;

Ponoyoshi wrote:

hello, M4M from kisses
All my comments are only suggestions , for you to see if you like it or not

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00:32:630 (3) - Try to fix this blanket Fixed

01:09:175 (2) - There is a possibility to follow the [1] with the begin of the slider ? http://puu.sh/pxxDG/47bec01508.jpg Fixed

01:22:266 (2) - down the red slider point a little bit to blanket the [3] Fixed

Hujan

00:51:721 (2) - Fix the overlap with [4] tail So far they are not overlapping o.o

01:06:993 (2,1,2) - Maybe you can blanket [2] tail with [1] and place [2] circle on [2] tail I think I already did something similliar like that

01:13:539 (2) - Fix the blanket cause of stacking Fixed

01:20:084 (2) - I think the blanket can be a little bit better Fixed

Very good and relaxing beatmap ~ Good luck Thank you very much ponoyoshi

Stjpa wrote:

M4M with Kisses.

[General]
• Is the epilepsy warning really needed when you actually don't have any strobes but just some rain effects? :v Yes we dont :p

[Normal]
• 00:29:902 (2,3,4) - I think making a triangle here would emphasize the piano better since it's a pattern you don't use regularly and has a bit different flow. Fixed

[Hujan]
• 00:05:084 (1,2,3,4) - Since the music pitch goes higher after every circle I don't think that the stack of (3) and (4) is needed. It just takes away the emphasis for the strong sound on the sliderhead. The same goes for the similar pattern later on. Umm actually they are fine so far, the stacking on them feels natural enough to me and give proper emphasize between the guitar, so no chnage on this one~


[]
That was a quite good tutorial on how not to mod. :v Thanks for mod stjpa, why are you saying that lol :p

TheOnlyLeon wrote:

Hey, from my queue.

GENERAL

Since there's less than a second of offset till the song starts, add like 500ms lead-in? Hmm no need to add that, the latest osu is automatically fix the intro into a proper one, incase you intro start too sudden

NORMAL

00:02:902 - (1,2) Do these need to be separate sliders here, at this point the only reason they are is to map to the backing guitar, although just moments later when there is also a quiet section, you don't map to this track. This happens a few times in the map, where you just stop mapping to a track, with no real reason to. 00:11:630 for example, is the exact same thing. Actually I think they are consistent enough, they are plays good so far, so I think no need to change the whole rhythm there

That's it for this diff, just minor inconsistency in the way it's mapped.

HUJAN

Nothing to say about this diff either, already very well put together. Thanks!

Little to say, the maps simple and has already been modded to hell and back. GL Thank you very much leon for mod

Shiirn wrote:

Suggestions
Major suggestions
Unrankable issues

I will be modding the topmost difficulty downwards. Thanks shiirn, didn't expect you check this one

Hujan

1. 00:53:902 (2) - This... doesn't feel curved enough? XD most of the sliders you use here are nearly full blanket curvy or pretty much straight. This is a weird between-the-two that feels out of place. Fixed, slightly make (2) curve and rearrange the placement
2. 01:27:993 (1) - Any particular reason this isn't properly under the previous notes? No particular reason hahaha xD fixed anyway

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1. AR 4 -> 4.5? Just a tad bit too slow as it is right now. Yes
2. 00:51:721 (3) - Just make this straight. Slight curves just look weird. Okay
3. 01:04:539 (1,2) - These don't blanket right. If you want to have proper blankets, you need to have 2-node bends, not 1-nodes. Umm actually I don't feel confident on use 2-nodes to make a blanket things, already tried that back on 2013 when I begin make a map and the result not really good haha xD so I just stick with one node to make the blanket until now
4. 01:09:175 (2,4) - ^
5. 01:19:266 (1,2) - ^ etc you get the idea
6. 01:22:266 (2,3) - blah^ Readjust some of the nodes, hope they'll looks better

Underdogs wrote:

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00:40:811 (3) - straight might be betterPrefer the curent one

Rain in Bahasa Indonesia

Maybe increase SR or add new 3* diff? I think that won't be necesary, I try not to put circle spams to make it 3 stars lol
01:19:266 (1,2) - didnt look like a blanket tbh Done

yay pp map at last Thanks~

Lexis wrote:

My mod is late I know~ Due to holidays :3

Really calm song, I like it but timing is hard to understand :d The timing is fine, so far they are constant with single offset

[Normal]

00:08:902 (3,1) - Move like that for a better flow

Click4Screen

00:32:630 (3,4) - Make blanket or fix blanket

00:49:539 (3,4) - Small blanket problem, I know this kind of blanket is hard to do :d

00:55:266 (1,2) - Small blanket problem

Click4Screen

01:03:448 (3,1) - Same, Small blanket problem (end of the slider 1) Fixed all!

Good diff~ Just some problems with blanketting but that's really minor issues.

[Hujan]

00:02:902 (1) - Curve a bit the slider for a linear flow Not really need to, I think the straight slider have a good flow on that one

I don't found something other. That diff is really good :3

I like the diversity you've given to the map :
Easy : - Overlaps, some stacking
Normal : - Blankets, some overlaps, some stacking
Hujan : -Stacking, some overlaps, some blankets
It's really a good map, and that calm song is soooo cool
I hope that map will get ranked !
Good luck for the next !

• [Kisses' Easy]

1. A lot of the mods I see were mentioned in previous mods, so I won't mention them
   
2. As, Kalibe said, check AImod for a lot of distance issues.
   
   
3. 00:24:721 (1) - You could NC here to give more emphasis on thee piano note, you could also curve this more.
   
4. 01:01:811 (1,2) - These sliders feel out of place compared to the rest of this part. It's kind of hard to explain but you map the piano chords more accurately throughout the rest of the chorus, like so 01:06:175 (1,2) -

• [Normal]

1. 00:28:539 (3) - I think it would look better to have this look like: http://puu.sh/qmRjU/a5be713e72.jpg so it has a more natural lead in to 1

• [Hujan]

1. 00:34:539 (3,4,1) - Seems weird to me that you would have 00:31:130 (5,1) - and 00:33:311 (5,1) - completely overlap but not have 00:35:493 (4,1) - completely overlap as well
   
2. 00:41:630 (4,5,1,2,3) - This part just feels a bit out of place seeing as you have almost every part filled with notes on most beats and following the drums as well as piano but then just switch to piano. A more short explanation would be this feels out of place compared to the rest of the map

Neoskylove wrote:

m4m(your queue)

[Normal]
00:01:539 (2,3) - I think this pattern looks not good. this could be nice(copied 00:02:902 (3) - and rotated)
00:29:084 (3) - I think ctrl hj could be better for flow.
00:38:902 (4) - why you made 1/1 slider? I think 00:39:311 - this part has rhythm . show about 3/4 reverse slider?
00:46:539 (3,4) - avoid overlap please. like this
Umm... Your distance don't have consistency, I think. Did everything and about the spacing that intentional, for rhythm with 1/2 beat apart is on every 1.30x and for rhythm with 1/1 apart is on 1.10x. So far they are consistent enough to play

[Hard]
00:31:130 - I think this part has a rhythm. It has rhythm Yes there is piano sound but if I map that, then the rhythm will be a triplet, that is kind a bit hard to play imo
00:51:721 (3) - this slider looks a little bit weird.my suggestion Done
01:25:811 (1,2) - I think this flow is Hard to play for beginners. How about this? So far they play good, nothing should be change there

[Hujan]
00:42:175 (1,2,3) - Maybe I think this 3/4 circles could be hard to read. I think they should be slider. I try to highlight only the piano and I think by using circles the emphasized could be more clear to hear
00:51:993 (3,1) - Bad overlap... Could you avoid them? Unfortunately I can't, somehow the overlapping doesn't affect much the gameplay so far

Really nice map!! Good luck for rank !! Thank yu very much skylove xD

Kalibe wrote:

m4m~

General*

- Nothing here i guess~ I'm not sure if you wanna use Epilepsy warning in that case. Hmm not really needed, there is no flash or throb so I don't think we need one

[Kisses' Easy]

* There are some problems with distance in AImod, please take a look http://puu.sh/qlITz/516931ea1b.png Ah that's intentional, for rhythm with 1/2 beat apart is on every 1.30x and for rhythm with 1/1 apart is on 1.10x. So far they are consistent enough to play
- 00:24:721 (3) - That slider could be better curved imo http://puu.sh/qlJ0E/9aa23ab322.jpg
- 00:35:630 (1) - vs 00:22:539 (1) - there are the same rhythms and diffirent snaps.. kinda inconsistency here ;w;
* 00:38:902 (4) - Why u didn't map the piano sounds, like u did everywhere?
- 00:46:539 (3,4) - Overlap doesn't look nice imo, try to avoid it?
- 01:06:993 (2) - same as 00:24:721 (3) - this could be better curved.
* Also OD and HP 2 works better if Normal have OD / HP -> 4 tho. Did everything

[Normal]

* 00:09:448 (1,2) - I would change some placements here to get cleaner gameplay stuff, try this i think : http://puu.sh/qlJmt/37ed9db5a9.jpg
- 00:54:721 (3) - How about Ctrl J this slider and then move around 227/347 ?
- 01:15:721 (2,3,4) - I rearranged pattern a bit to make it neater to play imo, take a look : http://puu.sh/qlJDV/3c5ee87340.jpg Fixed all

[Hujan]

- 00:11:630 (1,2) - Nazi blanket, move (2) on 179/76 i guess.
- 00:51:721 (2,4) - Stack is kinda off in my eyes.
- 01:06:993 (2,1) - Really minor, but as you can see it's very not well blanketing with 01:08:357 (1) - rearrange it to get a proper blanket?
- neat diff :3 Fixed all

That's all i think. Great mapset, good luck and have my star cause July!! <3 Thank you kalibe for beautiful mod, also the star <3

FoxyGrandpa wrote:

M4M from your queue~

• [Kisses' Easy]

1. A lot of the mods I see were mentioned in previous mods, so I won't mention them
   
2. As, Kalibe said, check AImod for a lot of distance issues. I already answer it on kalibe's post
   
   
3. 00:24:721 (1) - You could NC here to give more emphasis on thee piano note, you could also curve this more.
   
4. 01:01:811 (1,2) - These sliders feel out of place compared to the rest of this part. It's kind of hard to explain but you map the piano chords more accurately throughout the rest of the chorus, like so 01:06:175 (1,2) - Fixed all, except the new combo

• [Normal]

1. 00:28:539 (3) - I think it would look better to have this look like: http://puu.sh/qmRjU/a5be713e72.jpg so it has a more natural lead in to 1 Fixed

• [Hujan]

1. 00:34:539 (3,4,1) - Seems weird to me that you would have 00:31:130 (5,1) - and 00:33:311 (5,1) - completely overlap but not have 00:35:493 (4,1) - completely overlap as well I can make everything same but that one for diversity on how we should hit the triplet
   
2. 00:41:630 (4,5,1,2,3) - This part just feels a bit out of place seeing as you have almost every part filled with notes on most beats and following the drums as well as piano but then just switch to piano. A more short explanation would be this feels out of place compared to the rest of the map Yes I want to highlight the piano without the violin and the guitar, based on what we hear the music seems a bit diffrent on how the piano play on that part especially

Well that's all, this looks so calming and nice ^^ It was very relaxing to mod. Good luck!!! Thank you very much foxy for mod

1. Shouldn't the rain effect ends where the background has completely faded out? AS I can see it doesn't look bad but I think that could be misleading to the actual purpose of fading out the background here.
2. Speaking from 0 knowledge about storyboards, isn't this morning a bit dark? /u\ I know the song is called Raining Morning but it would be better if this morning could've been more brighter or idk. Overall the whole storyboard is great. >w<
3. Please, consider to add the Epilepsy Warning Option to this beatmap. I think when you're playing the song, at the beginning the change of the background creates slightly a flashy effect when it transits to the second 00:00:000 - Consider trying to check whether is needed or no. :3

1. 00:20:357 (3,4) - This motion was somehow weird to play. I mean, it doesn't flow bad but aesthetically talking, this could be arranged in a way that it would be more approachable for beginners since they're more oriented if the slider-ends redirects intuitively to the next objects. Hence, what about if we put them like this?
   image

   
2. 00:00:721 (1,2) - I'm not sure whether this is intentional or not, but I don't really agree with the way you decided to place the objects here. While it flows well I think at the first sight the pattern itself looked somewhat untidy and clutter due to the slider-shapes. Wouldn't it be better if you tried up something similar as you did in the upcoming objects?

1. 00:31:266 (1,2,3) - This rhythm isn't bad but I don't think is a good idea to highlight this beat 00:32:084 - with a slider-head when the main instrument suggests a reverse here. The way I see things, the main sound that come up here 00:31:811 - is heavily supported by a slider snapped to 1/1 and not with 1/2 which ends over-mapping this section. Hence, I'd recommend you to try out this rhythm instead:
   
   

1. 00:01:539 (3,4) - While the rhythm is quite uniform here, I think it would be better if you did Ctrl + G to these sliders to give more emphasis to the white ticks which belong to the up-beats of the song imo. I find it quite weird to have slider-heads on the red tick when the main instruments reside over the white ticks.
2. 00:31:130 (5,1) - Is this stack intentional? It doesn't look weird but for consistency-sake, I think it would be way better if you could manage the same spacing that you were building yo with the previous-similar patterns like 00:21:448 (3,4,1) - 00:24:175 (4,5,1) - etc. Consider doing the same here 00:32:902 (4,5,1) -
3. 01:14:357 (3,4,1) - Nothing. I just loved the transition you made here. Lovely. >w<
4. 00:42:993 (3,1) - 00:44:084 (3,1) - Variation is important, but this was very tricky to play due to the distance-snap not being wisely oriented to the spacing that each object should have. Hence, this will lead to players hit the note wrongly to the time-stamp it belongs. I do believe managing a shorter spacing here would definitely improve players will react to such as pattern.

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Do you really don't want to add NathanKiss to tags? o:

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Hellow! :3 Placeholder for a mod to pay Rizen's old m4m!

[ General] I love the storyboard. It might be somehow simple but there's always an intention behind it. Good job! Some few things I'd like to get a clarification before nominating:

1. Shouldn't the rain effect ends where the background has completely faded out? AS I can see it doesn't look bad but I think that could be misleading to the actual purpose of fading out the background here. Fixed, did something else
2. Speaking from 0 knowledge about storyboards, isn't this morning a bit dark? /u\ I know the song is called Raining Morning but it would be better if this morning could've been more brighter or idk. Overall the whole storyboard is great. >w< The concept supposed to be a simple sb with dark sky and rain, it doesn't need other effect I guess
3. Please, consider to add the Epilepsy Warning Option to this beatmap. I think when you're playing the song, at the beginning the change of the background creates slightly a flashy effect when it transits to the second 00:00:000 - Consider trying to check whether is needed or no. :3 Changed the bg into the dark one to avoid any flashes, so epilepsy warning not really needed

[ Kisses' Easy] Quite well structured Easy you have done here! Do you really don't want to add NathanKiss to tags? o: He doesn't want to afaik

1. 00:20:357 (3,4) - This motion was somehow weird to play. I mean, it doesn't flow bad but aesthetically talking, this could be arranged in a way that it would be more approachable for beginners since they're more oriented if the slider-ends redirects intuitively to the next objects. Hence, what about if we put them like this? Did something similiar
   image

   
2. 00:00:721 (1,2) - I'm not sure whether this is intentional or not, but I don't really agree with the way you decided to place the objects here. While it flows well I think at the first sight the pattern itself looked somewhat untidy and clutter due to the slider-shapes. Wouldn't it be better if you tried up something similar as you did in the upcoming objects? Fixed

[ Normal] Quite neat difficulty. I don't have much complains regarding this mapset since it is indeed well mapped.

1. 00:31:266 (1,2,3) - This rhythm isn't bad but I don't think is a good idea to highlight this beat 00:32:084 - with a slider-head when the main instrument suggests a reverse here. The way I see things, the main sound that come up here 00:31:811 - is heavily supported by a slider snapped to 1/1 and not with 1/2 which ends over-mapping this section. Hence, I'd recommend you to try out this rhythm instead: Actually I hate moving objects too much, just because of that lol, fixed anyway
   
   

[ Hujan] Yus! This difficulty does show there's no need of over-mapping or over-using jumps to create fancy and decent beatmaps. Congratulations! :3 Few things that were triggering me:

1. 00:01:539 (3,4) - While the rhythm is quite uniform here, I think it would be better if you did Ctrl + G to these sliders to give more emphasis to the white ticks which belong to the up-beats of the song imo. I find it quite weird to have slider-heads on the red tick when the main instruments reside over the white ticks. Hmm not really need to, because I want to emphsize this beat 00:02:630 (6) - with circle for better transition on 00:02:630 (6,1) -
2. 00:31:130 (5,1) - Is this stack intentional? It doesn't look weird but for consistency-sake, I think it would be way better if you could manage the same spacing that you were building yo with the previous-similar patterns like 00:21:448 (3,4,1) - 00:24:175 (4,5,1) - etc. Consider doing the same here 00:32:902 (4,5,1) - I think that won't affect the gameplay that much, on first bookmark we have two not stacked triplet here 00:21:448 (3,4,1) - and 00:24:175 (4,5,1) - and two stacked triplet here 00:30:721 (4,5,1) - and 00:32:902 (4,5,1) - and so on with second bookmark these two 00:34:539 (3,4,1) - and 00:38:902 (3,4,1) - was not stacked and also another two 00:47:630 (3,4,1) - and 00:50:357 (4,5,1) - was stacked, if you talking about consistency I guess they are already consistent enough so far o.o
3. 01:14:357 (3,4,1) - Nothing. I just loved the transition you made here. Lovely. >w< Thanks
4. 00:42:993 (3,1) - 00:44:084 (3,1) - Variation is important, but this was very tricky to play due to the distance-snap not being wisely oriented to the spacing that each object should have. Hence, this will lead to players hit the note wrongly to the time-stamp it belongs. I do believe managing a shorter spacing here would definitely improve players will react to such as pattern. Fixed

Aside from them, I checked all the points risen from the previous modders and I agree with some of them and would like to discuss with you since they were not applied.

00:42:175 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Many people suggest the rhythm became hard to tap because the switch of instruments might confuse the way you emphasizing the beats here. While I do think these work fine, I guess the problem reside on the spacing that could mislead the actual purpose of making further apart from each other seeing that you managed almost the same with these 01:27:175 (1,2,3,1) - 01:09:721 (1,2,3) - For instance, I do think managing 3/4 sliders as Neoskylove suggested would definitely improve the way players will approach to such as pattern. I get the point :p

That should be all! I will come back for a recheck! :3/

Underforest wrote:

why 6 months lol?

diraimur wrote:

ay hey, kinda late (about 2 months) mod, sorry :v
the set looks pretty done so ill just mention smaller things if you dont mind

hujan
-00:11:630 (1,2) - blanket couldve been improved here Already a good one o.o
-00:42:039 - youre missing a sound here No it is not, nothing to emphsize there
-spacings between 00:41:902 (5,1) - and 00:42:993 (3,1) - might be little confusing, but its ok if you want to keep it that way Have you update the map? already fixed lol
-00:48:720 (1,2) - again blanket couldve been improved Already a good one o.o
-maybe reduce stack leniency to 6, so 01:09:175 (2,1) - are completely overlapped with eachother instead of being stacked, i believe 110 bpm 1/1 gap is more than enough readable for this difficulty I don't think that really matter during gameplay, since value 7 is the initial configuration from osu
-01:28:266 - maybe gradually decrease spinner colume OK

normal
-01:28:266 - maybe gradually decrease spinner volume OK

Kisses' Easy
-ive never seen an easy which has this big of differences in ds i think. it shouldnt be a problem though since i think its pretty readable.
-01:28:266 - maybe gradually decrease spinner volume OK

good luck, nice song