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Didn't accept your map yet in my queue, so you didn't read the rules and modded before I accepted you. Can't promise I'll mod your map.CyberX wrote:
for M4M request
[box=Chirality]00:27:553 (2,3) - nefr the gap here why
00:32:282 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:43:366 (1,2,3,4) - make it more closer why
00:44:548 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Imo you emphasize too much here i dont think i do. emphasizing percussion and rising intensity
01:36:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - they are all the same sound, make it consistent no they dont, building intensity
01:49:942 - Spinner start here why
02:10:558 (5) - i believe you can make this slider mote attractive i dont think i can. it adds variety.
02:31:247 (1,2,3,4) - Imo the flow is kidda broken here it flows fine
03:16:765 (4) - its not symmetry if you look right side is slightly longer then left im aware. looks better that way imo
03:46:173 (2,3) - neft the gap why
04:49:572 (3) - well, i just dont really like this shape , imo you better fix[ what about it bothers you/box]
Thanks~
Didn't accept your map yet in my queue, so you didn't read the rules and modded before I accepted you. Can't promise I'll mod your map.Oh my, i do read it, but i forgot the "Check the spreadsheet to see if you were accepted" part due looking for other ModQ, feel free to ignore if its bother you, my mod isnt that helpfull tho
2016-08-15 00:28 Ascendance: u have
2016-08-15 00:28 Ascendance: 4 unused hs
2016-08-15 00:28 Ascendance: -_
2016-08-15 00:29 Smoothie World: ik
2016-08-15 00:29 Smoothie World: gna remove em
2016-08-15 00:29 Ascendance: remove that shi
2016-08-15 00:29 Ascendance: ok
2016-08-15 00:30 Smoothie World: done
2016-08-15 00:30 Ascendance: 00:08:193 (1,2) - succ
2016-08-15 00:30 Smoothie World: ?
2016-08-15 00:30 Ascendance: the overlap is kinda meh cuz you didnt do any overlaps on the other ones
2016-08-15 00:30 Ascendance: its stylistic
2016-08-15 00:31 Ascendance: nothing wrong with playability
2016-08-15 00:31 Smoothie World: looks clean tho
2016-08-15 00:31 Smoothie World: its not a messy overlap
2016-08-15 00:31 Ascendance: yeah but its making me ocd
2016-08-15 00:31 Ascendance: doesnt matter anyways
2016-08-15 00:31 Ascendance: are you 100% on these snaps 00:11:050 (2,3,4,5) -
2016-08-15 00:32 Smoothie World: yes
2016-08-15 00:32 Smoothie World: ive checked with over 10 people
2016-08-15 00:32 Smoothie World: and slowed it down
2016-08-15 00:32 Ascendance: alright
2016-08-15 00:35 Ascendance: 00:24:154 (1,2,1,2) - im not a big fan of this, more specifically the angle of 00:24:597 (2) - since the flow into 00:24:745 (1) - seems too sharp
2016-08-15 00:35 Smoothie World: i think bancho died for a sec
2016-08-15 00:35 Ascendance: I did this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5849524 but im not a standard mapper so
2016-08-15 00:35 Smoothie World: but i think its good now
2016-08-15 00:35 Smoothie World: nah i like how that pattern plays currently
2016-08-15 00:35 Smoothie World: probably not going to change
2016-08-15 00:36 Ascendance: ehh
2016-08-15 00:36 Ascendance: would you consider adjusting the angle on 2 slightly
2016-08-15 00:36 Ascendance: so its not such an abrupt upward motion into 1
2016-08-15 00:36 Smoothie World: i just moved it left
2016-08-15 00:36 Smoothie World: so its not as upward
2016-08-15 00:36 Smoothie World: but i wanna keep it an abrupt motion
2016-08-15 00:36 Ascendance: alright
2016-08-15 00:36 Smoothie World: cause its not a pretty sound
2016-08-15 00:36 Smoothie World: it shouldnt flow pretty
2016-08-15 00:37 Ascendance: 00:32:503 (3,4) - in comparison to 00:27:774 (3,4) - the emphasis is definitely not as high (in the whole pattern of 00:32:282 (2,3,4) - actually you use much less emphasis than before)
2016-08-15 00:37 Ascendance: if there's a reason would you mind explaining it?
2016-08-15 00:38 Smoothie World: its because theres a massive break in flow to make up for the lack of spacing
2016-08-15 00:38 Smoothie World: its REALLY sharp flow
2016-08-15 00:38 Smoothie World: while the other pattern, not nearly as much
2016-08-15 00:39 Ascendance: alright
2016-08-15 00:41 Ascendance: its probably just me but 00:41:592 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - feels really harsh, so I won't make you change it unless you feel the same way
2016-08-15 00:42 Smoothie World: yea i agree fixed
2016-08-15 00:43 Ascendance: 00:43:366 (1,2,3,4) - I see your intention there, and it's fine the way it is, but maybe instead you wanted to try something more horizontal for more antiflow emphasis into 00:43:661 (1) - ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5849545
2016-08-15 00:45 Smoothie World: nah i think what i have looks and plays better
2016-08-15 00:45 Ascendance: kk
2016-08-15 00:46 Ascendance: 00:45:361 (4,1) - imo you could add some increased spacing for additional emphasis on 1. deserves a lot more than what's given, but some sort of spacing increase would be beneficial
2016-08-15 00:47 Smoothie World: the flow break is enough
2016-08-15 00:48 Ascendance: you sure? the power on that note is really strong
2016-08-15 00:50 Smoothie World: pretty sure yea
2016-08-15 00:50 Ascendance: kk
2016-08-15 00:50 Smoothie World: ill think about it
2016-08-15 00:50 Ascendance: alright
2016-08-15 00:52 Ascendance: 00:47:799 (1) - why not do the same thing you did for 00:47:356 (3,4,1) - ? A change in pattern for similar sounds may be off-putting and could potentially confuse
2016-08-15 00:53 Smoothie World: i think it plays really well
2016-08-15 00:53 Smoothie World: and i dont want it to be too repetitive
2016-08-15 00:54 Ascendance: alright
2016-08-15 00:55 Ascendance: 00:54:154 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I see the intention here, but imo it's incredibly hard to read with how dense it is, especially with overlaps like 00:54:449 (3,4,2,3) -
2016-08-15 00:55 Ascendance: maybe you could curve 00:54:597 (1,2,3,4) - down so that way the pattern is more clear to read?
2016-08-15 00:55 Smoothie World: ar 9.7 makes it not that hard to read
2016-08-15 00:56 Smoothie World: ive never seen anyone misread it
2016-08-15 00:57 Ascendance: well maybe still it can be polished a bit
2016-08-15 00:57 Ascendance: for example 00:54:597 (1,2,3,4) - isn't structured to be straight
2016-08-15 00:57 Smoothie World: ill take a look at it in a sec
2016-08-15 00:57 Smoothie World: making some cereal but
2016-08-15 00:57 Smoothie World: im going to look at everything when im back so keep saying stuff
2016-08-15 00:58 Ascendance: alright
2016-08-15 00:59 Ascendance: 00:57:553 (3) - you're emphasizing the vocal here, but you're missing a note on 00:57:700 - , so why not shorten 00:57:553 (3) - to 1/2 and add a note at 00:57:774 - ?
2016-08-15 01:01 Ascendance: flow between 01:05:829 (3,4) - is kind of bad imo, considering 01:05:976 (4,5) - is also left-facing. Imo, you could change the section to something a bit more smooth-flowing, like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5849598
2016-08-15 01:02 Smoothie World: well theres nothing on that tick plus im not emphasizing the vocal
2016-08-15 01:02 Smoothie World: im emphasizing the bass
2016-08-15 01:03 Ascendance: 01:07:011 (6,7) - stack could easily trip someone up with the 1/2 rhythm here in the middle of a lot of 1/4.
2016-08-15 01:03 Ascendance: im garbage at placing notes but d https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5849610
2016-08-15 01:04 Ascendance: tl;dr similar to 01:08:489 (1,2) -
2016-08-15 01:04 Smoothie World: ya but its the same sound so idk
2016-08-15 01:05 Ascendance: so maybe dont do as big of a jump as i made but at least give them some space so its not stacked
2016-08-15 01:06 Ascendance: 01:12:922 (3,4,5,6,1) - maybe you wanna invert this so the stack goes downward instead? would be a less abrupt jump between 01:12:774 (2,3) -
2016-08-15 01:07 Ascendance: 01:16:173 (1,2,3) - 1/4 -> 1/2 :(
2016-08-15 01:07 Smoothie World: ok changed
2016-08-15 01:07 Ascendance: which one
2016-08-15 01:07 Smoothie World: theres nothing wrong with the rhythm in the last one tho
2016-08-15 01:08 Ascendance: yeah but it's a 1/4 stack on the slider followed by a 1/2 stack on the same place
2016-08-15 01:09 Ascendance: I just think it could be misread
2016-08-15 01:09 Ascendance: if you don't wanna change it thats cool but I'd heavily suggest it
2016-08-15 01:10 Smoothie World: nah changed youre right
2016-08-15 01:10 Ascendance: did you reply to the thing about 01:05:829 (3,4) - ? or did i miss it
2016-08-15 01:12 Smoothie World: o ok changed it up a bit
2016-08-15 01:12 Ascendance: 02:10:558 (5) - meme but you wanna remove the pointy slider xddd
2016-08-15 01:12 Smoothie World: no i like
2016-08-15 01:12 Ascendance: fuk
2016-08-15 01:13 Ascendance: im triggered
2016-08-15 01:13 Ascendance: 02:34:794 (1,2) - idk if you should leave that 1/8 gap between them
2016-08-15 01:13 Ascendance: it sounds weird to me
2016-08-15 01:13 Ascendance: i'd just increase 1 by 1/8 and then move them slightly closer together to compensate
2016-08-15 01:13 Smoothie World: nah
2016-08-15 01:13 Smoothie World: there needs to be a buffer
2016-08-15 01:14 Smoothie World: you dont notice it while youre playing in terms of audio
2016-08-15 01:14 Smoothie World: but in terms of playing theres gonna be a lot of stupid breaks there if i extend it
2016-08-15 01:14 Smoothie World: i think to a point its unrankable
2016-08-15 01:14 Smoothie World: idk how many ms the gap is though
2016-08-15 01:15 Ascendance: i can ask someone about it but it's not necessary to change anyways
2016-08-15 01:15 Ascendance: the stack underneath 02:35:385 (2) - is annoying as hell though
2016-08-15 01:15 Smoothie World: ok
2016-08-15 01:15 Ascendance: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5849640 instead?
2016-08-15 01:15 Smoothie World: WHY IS THAT STACKED
2016-08-15 01:15 Ascendance: rofl
2016-08-15 01:15 Smoothie World: the fuck
2016-08-15 01:16 Smoothie World: thats not supposed to be stacked
2016-08-15 01:16 Ascendance: ok good
2016-08-15 01:16 Smoothie World: fixed
2016-08-15 01:16 Ascendance: if you dont use my suggestion, would you mind screenshotting what you changed it to
2016-08-15 01:16 Smoothie World: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/gQt3sGG.jpg
2016-08-15 01:17 Ascendance: 02:43:587 (2) - uhhh
2016-08-15 01:17 Smoothie World: ?
2016-08-15 01:18 Ascendance: sound wrong unless im retarded
2016-08-15 01:18 Ascendance: sounds like 02:43:513 -
2016-08-15 01:18 Ascendance: at 25%
2016-08-15 01:19 Ascendance: same with 03:02:479 (2) -
2016-08-15 01:20 Smoothie World: not mapping to the kick
2016-08-15 01:20 Smoothie World: mapping to the doooo sound
2016-08-15 01:21 Ascendance: i dont even hear a beat for the doooo sound so I'm just gonna fucking yolo and trust you 100%
2016-08-15 01:22 Ascendance: 03:06:715 (1) - has a really funky sound but a boring slider :<
2016-08-15 01:22 Ascendance: even 03:09:671 (1) - is cooler
2016-08-15 01:23 Smoothie World: k i made it funky
2016-08-15 01:24 Ascendance: 03:59:400 (2) - idk about this slider cause you miss the red tick sound
2016-08-15 01:26 Ascendance: 04:04:499 (8,1) - plz blanket :^
2016-08-15 01:27 Ascendance: 04:13:661 (1,2,3) - v a r i e t y https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5849677
2016-08-15 01:28 Smoothie World: fixed the first one
2016-08-15 01:28 Smoothie World: fixed blanket
2016-08-15 01:29 Smoothie World: ok fixed
2016-08-15 01:29 Ascendance: 04:35:976 (4) - idk if there's anything this repeat lands on
2016-08-15 01:29 Ascendance: its not a bad slider im just worried it might cause some issues for you
2016-08-15 01:29 Ascendance: like when you listen closely, it lands on nothing
2016-08-15 01:30 Ascendance: is it possible for you to do similar to what you did at 04:37:159 - ?
2016-08-15 01:31 Smoothie World: i think it should be fine
2016-08-15 01:32 Smoothie World: theres not really any way to do that correct
2016-08-15 01:32 Ascendance: k did you remove allt he unused stuff
2016-08-15 01:32 Smoothie World: the hitsounds?
2016-08-15 01:32 Ascendance: yea
2016-08-15 01:32 Smoothie World: yeah
2016-08-15 01:32 Ascendance: k update
2016-08-15 01:32 Smoothie World: just double check stuff when i update
2016-08-15 01:32 Ascendance: ye
2016-08-15 01:33 Ascendance: redownloading it
2016-08-15 01:33 Smoothie World: ok submitted
The first 2 snappings seem fine as there are veeeery faint noises on the 1/3. Although the sound he's complimenting is much weaker than the percussion, it makes much more sense playability-wise to compliment it so.Ascendance wrote:
To the next Nominator: Please take a look at the following snappings (and similar sounds/snaps to those I point out), since they were kind of edge for me.
02:43:563 (2) -
03:02:479 (2) -
04:35:976 (4) -
No note = ChangedSpaghetti wrote:
The first 2 snappings seem fine as there are veeeery faint noises on the 1/3. Although the sound he's complimenting is much weaker than the percussion, it makes much more sense playability-wise to compliment it so.Ascendance wrote:
To the next Nominator: Please take a look at the following snappings (and similar sounds/snaps to those I point out), since they were kind of edge for me.
02:43:563 (2) -
03:02:479 (2) -
04:35:976 (4) -
BUT
I feel like it'd make the rhythm a hell of a lot easier to read if you even out the spacing between the circle and the 2 sliders. nah spacing is increased for emphasis on the synth, plus im really surprised but not a single person has misread this in testplaysExample:
The last point I'm on edge, since I can't hear what the 1/3 is hitting. I highly recommend that you use some kind of double pattern, to get as accurate of a rhythm on the wubs as possible, like so: tried something but tell me if its ok
the kickslider is there cuz without it the pause between the doubles in this section would be rlly awkward
anyways mo vi ng on
[General]
The following hitsounds are unused:[Chirality]
- normal-hitclap
- normal-hitnormal
- normal-hitwhistle
- normal-sliderslide
call me back
- 01:02:282 (3) - missing clap?
- 01:43:661 (5,6) - I feel like this movement is rlly forced for kickslider jumps, given its slower sv and has sharp angles. maybe try moving 01:43:809 (6) - to around 261|171? didnt quite do that but i changed it
- 01:59:031 (6) - missing clap?
- 02:10:558 (5) - this slider is so bland compared to the rest, maybe try a different slider pattern? idk im so picky with this kind of stuff aaa
- 03:01:986 (1,2,1) - the spacing on this one seems waaay too large for the rhythms given. it creates that huge extra jolt from 2 to 1 thats rlly
uncomfterable im o its supposed to play like a burst in movement. this section has many jolts like this.- 03:12:035 (1) - this slider would look much better if you polished the curves on the top for it, here's a screenshot of a fix i did along with the code for the slider for u
- 04:37:356 (5) - missing clap on sliderend?